dex-entries-discussion

[rich goblet]

In what context? I’d just post the whole entry so we can help 🙂

[muted wraith]

Wild POKENAME sneak into nightclubs to practice their cheering sessions for their fellow Pokémon. They leave trails of red static cotton that will shock anybody after the session is over.

[rich goblet]

I like this, nightclub is fine

[summer saffron]

this pokemon absolutely dresses in drag

[young herald]

Does it matter whether we use UK or US spellings of words? e.g. rumor vs rumour.

[rich goblet]

Addressed in pinned messages

[young herald]

whoops, I looked through that but missed the correct paragraph. ty.

[rich goblet]

You’re fine

[regal cedar]

Nightclubs I think would be fine. There's literally a bar in-game.

[dapper cedar]

Kantovember - Day 29: Dragon Type
#115.426
Many attempts have been made to keep POKENAME as an attraction at zoos or Safari Zones. However, as soon as Kangasrunt gets into any perceived danger, POKENAME goes on an unstoppable rampage that absolutely wrecks the place beyond repair.

[hexed fog]

Avoid slang

"Absolutely wrecks the place"

Goes into a rage that destroys the nearby area

[lunar zealot]

Or maybe "Goes into an unstopable rage"

[hollow nimbus]

I think the only 'slang' part of 'absolutely wrecks the place' is 'the place'

It's fair to say that things are wrecked, and the wreckage is absolute

Absolutely wrecks (something other than 'the place')
It depends on what place you mean by the place

Calling a zoo a place makes a little bit more sense than a safari zone since the latter is just outside

[narrow cosmos]

Oh darn, there must have been some rearranging of sprites or something, I'm seeing a lot of sprite previews on the pending that aren't matching what I was writing for, gonna be a number of rectifications needed in the future.

[hexed fog]

I'd love to see some entries about pokemon that lurk in cattails

or pokemon that pounce out of hollowed logs

or pokemon that sleep in chamomile

or pokemon that sleep in beds made of daisy petals

[rich goblet]

Ooo I like the hollowed log idea

Ima yoink that one

[hoary totem]

Hmmmm

[hoary totem]

(not in the game yet this one )

[hexed fog]

please only do entries for pokemon ingame 🙂

can someone quick run through those demo mons?

I'd do it myself but I cant approve my own

[rich goblet]

On it, slowly but surely

I'm babysitting so give me a second

[hexed fog]

lol dont push yourself too hard

[keen kestrel]

Abandon that baby

[hexed fog]

We need some pokemon that howl to control their electrical abilities

[storm light]

We also need pokemon that tuck you into bed and read you bedtime stories /j

[rich goblet]

@hexed fog It is done

For now

Also can we get a sprite thumbnail for the provisional list?

[rich goblet]

Scratch that, I just now realized the provisional list is all existing pokemon

EDIT: I dunno what the status of the pokemon are but it looks like I can work on them now, woohoo

[hollow nimbus]

Depends on what you mean by do
Please only submit entries for sprites in the game

You can write entries for mons not in the game as long as you hold on to what you wrote and wait until after it's in the game to submit it

[dapper cedar]

safari zones always struck me as very large enclosures for rare pokemon, like a walk-in zoo exhibit
which only works in the pokemon world for obvious reasons
but if that isn't satisfactory, could reword it to "wrecks its enclosure" or "exhibit"?

[hoary totem]

yeah (also i don't have any ideas for an entry for that, just thought it could fit sleeping in a bed of daisy petals or smth )

oh yeah i NEED to do a wholesome entry for this bro (and hold onto it until it's in the game 👍)

[hollow nimbus]

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[hollow nimbus]

Using Alt Codes
To type é instead of e, you may have to use an alt code. To use an alt code, turn num lock on by pressing the button once. Then, while you hold down alt, press the code on your number pad quickly.

The code for é is 0233 or 130 depending on your system. Other codes can create other characters. Don't use your power for evil; only a few extra characters are supported by PIF's spritefont. I don't want to start finding ♥ and ‽ in the entries.

[hollow nimbus]

<@&306953740651462656>, I have sort of a complicated request for you 😅

I need you to pin the message I'm replying to. After you pin it, please make sure that the message each of those links lead to is unpinned. In the case of the second-from-the-last one, please unpin this message: #dex-entries-discussion message (For the last one in the list, it isn't pinned, so you don't have to worry about that)
After you've done that, please unpin and repin this message: #dex-entries-discussion message so that it is still at the top.

I know that's a lot of work. Thank you so much for helping!

[radiant dirge]

so basically

[hollow nimbus]

This is to reduce pin bloat

[radiant dirge]

this

pin
unpin
repin

[hollow nimbus]

Yeah

[radiant dirge]

done then

[hearty sun]

Speedy milky

[hollow nimbus]

It should end up with all our writing tips condensed into one message

[radiant dirge]

There are 2 scenarios in which I dont respond to a mod ping immediately

Im not there
I cant be bothered

its your call which one it is

[hollow nimbus]

Just making sure I understand this right:

pin the directory
unpin the messages that the links in the directory lead to
repin the errors link

[radiant dirge]

check pins

and tell me if I did it right

I just went by what your ping said

pin this message
unpin this message
repin so its on top

[hollow nimbus]

By scrolling down a bit, I can see that the post about that and which is still pinned

[radiant dirge]

if I was supposed to unpin something that you didnt link

thats on you

[hollow nimbus]

I can state it in an easier-to-understand way

Please unpin this: #dex-entries-discussion message
Please unpin this: #dex-entries-discussion message
Please unpin this: #dex-entries-discussion message
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Thank you

[radiant dirge]

oh god fuck

[hollow nimbus]

I had originally thought you would have preferred not to be greeted by a repeated block of text, so I just said, "please unpin what the links in the replied-to post lead to"

[radiant dirge]

which is what had me confused

Please figure out which ones to unpin after, thanks :D

smh smh

done

[hollow nimbus]

I have asked for Unowns to have pin perms here before, but I believe I was told, "No, you can just ping moderators whenever you need that"

[radiant dirge]

by whom

[hollow nimbus]

I don't remember
This was like a year ago

[hollow nimbus]

I missed one; that's on me

Let me grab the link

[radiant dirge]

oh yeah, I know why

coz pinning was under "manage messages"

[hollow nimbus]

Please unpin this one too #dex-entries-discussion message

[radiant dirge]

now it has its own perm

[radiant dirge]

I'd ask again now that message pins are its own perm

[hollow nimbus]

Thank you for all the hard work

I'll do that

[radiant dirge]

You wanted me to do even more hard work

[hollow nimbus]

Thank you even more

[radiant dirge]

/j /j

all good

[vocal quiver]

Hey, how do you know if your entry was accepted?

[hollow nimbus]

Find it on the pinned spreadsheet and see if the box next to it says Approved or not

[hearty sun]

-# Mil momentarily regretting being the fastest mod

[radiant dirge]

I work in IT, once you accept a ticket, you commit

and I've had some tickets I regret till this day

[hearty sun]

Yea, that tracks

[radiant dirge]

What annoys me still, is that despite being there for a year

Im still the go to "I cant be bothered, go do this" person 😭 🙏

You dont even know how satisfying it is to say "I'm busy now"

[hearty sun]

-# me in #tech-support

[radiant dirge]

you have porygons

ping them and leave

[hearty sun]

I don’t think I can actually ping porygons in tech

I could just @nimble sage

[radiant dirge]

I have no idea how or why that perm works

Piss mans have been able to ping all roles indiscriminately, mods couldnt even ping the piss role 😭

[hearty sun]

I can ping porys in #porygon-questions and that’s it I think

[radiant dirge]

even better, ping the porys with a message link

like a certain watchog tends to do (good)

[hearty sun]

Then I can claim ignorance to the general public

[radiant dirge]

the less you know, the better you sleep

[hoary totem]

hmm mod stuff

[radiant dirge]

hllo

we've invaded your channel

[hearty sun]

This is mod-general now

[radiant dirge]

thats #spriter-general

besides, you're not even a mod currently

[hoary totem]

#1389037691353694291 🤫

[radiant dirge]

you're on h-h-🤮-hiatus

[storm light]

Kantovember Day 29 - Dragon Type

Dragotini #149.147
POKENAME spends excess energy built up in its body by flying long distances. Scales shed during molts are used in herbal medications and are thought to help restore energy.

[storm light]

No access

[hoary totem]

secret mod base where they discuss secret mod secrets

[radiant dirge]

delve into the depths of #tech-support and #gameplay-help and you might just be given access

[storm light]

Surely you can give access to a lowly dex writer like me

I'm nosy

[short jasper]

I have 81 accepted dex entries, wooo!

[rugged socket]

Anyone want to help me on my quest to fill in all Wooper entries and do a cheeky one? Most bodies after 200 are open and waiting

[simple lynx]

wdym by cheeky

[rugged socket]

Sorry that might be UK slang haha, just means like a quick one

[simple lynx]

So a relatively short entry

[thorn ingot]

No I think they mean quickly write one

[proper anchor]

In the sandier areas, POKENAME is a common sight in stadiums battling against other strong Pokemon, often to the delight of the wealthy trainer POKENAME hates the color red, it will attack anyone who has it in that color with a powerful Horn Attack.

[hoary totem]

does it attack anyone who is dressed in red or anyone who dresses the pokemon in red?

[simple lynx]

@thorn ingot that makes more sense

[storm light]

I'm slightly confused as the sprite itself has red on it, does it attack itself too?

[dense isle]

He dreams of being the last guy on earth wearing red, like in the movie "Deerskin"

[proper anchor]

He won't attack himself, but he will attack others of the same kind, I wanted to mention it but I couldn't fit it in the number of characters

[dapper cedar]

Kantovember - Day 29: Dragon Type
-# for real this time
#115.446
In far-away regions, wild Drampa and POKENAME will often raise families together and live on snowy mountaintops. This is for the best, as their combined parental rage could level a perceived bully's entire neighborhood.

i realized i already did a tyrantrum fusion for kantovember earlier, and i'm personally challenging myself to both do non-kanto pokemon on one half of each fusion and use no repeat species, so replacement entry

[simple lynx]

#275.137
This POKENAME is a digital mess of Porygon and Porygon-Z adhered by corrupted data. POKENAME is very erratic and transient as a result, and it can often be seen in cyberspace, corrupting data around it.

How is it?

[simple lynx]

Anyone here?

[rich goblet]

It’s a holiday weekend so you should expect some waiting

[simple lynx]

makes sense

[rich goblet]

I’m going to make a few changes and post them in one post, mostly some rearranging

[simple lynx]

Thanks, I am new to this stuff and I want to make sure I am doing things mostly correctly

[rich goblet]

#275.137
POKENAME is a digital mess of parts of Porygon and Porygon-Z adhered together by corrupted data. POKENAME is very erratic and can be found in cyberspace where it corrupts data around it.

@simple lynx I did my best to minimize errors with your entry, feel free to submit under your username, you did most of the work 🙂

[simple lynx]

thank you

I noticed the changes you made were similar to my early drafts

I feel like I made a good one

Thank you Rubber Duck

[rich goblet]

A lot of it was just removing some fluff words that don’t add much.

[lunar zealot]

It has a rigid dorsal structure that stores nutrients to help it recover after long escape bursts; when its energy becomes unstable, it vibrates intensely and releases a salty odor that drives predators away.

What y'all think?

[simple lynx]

What is the Pokemon other than magikarp in the fusion

@lunar zealot

[hoary totem]

Wimpod

[simple lynx]

Thanks

I don’t know much about Wimpod, but it looks good

[thorn ingot]

I would put a period instead of a semicolon and use POKENAME in place of the first it.

[simple lynx]

It will make it 2 sentences

[thorn ingot]

Yeah

[simple lynx]

They want it in 2 sentances

Wait

How is this related to magikarp?

[thorn ingot]

It will make it 2 sentences and they want it in 2 sentences, so what’s the problem?

[simple lynx]

It needs to have attributes from both Pokemon

Take Dungon for example

It digs like Dunsparce and can be found in virtual places like Porygon

[lunar zealot]

Wimpod Indeed srry i was playing fear and hunger

[simple lynx]

Wait up

[lunar zealot]

Waiting

[simple lynx]

Let me teach you something

[lunar zealot]

Teach me

[simple lynx]

For your entries you need to mention attributes from both Pokemon that are being fused

[lunar zealot]

WHUT

So all i have learned from the other ppl are lies?

[simple lynx]

What did they say

[hoary totem]

I don't think it's THAT rigid as you implied

But there's not much magikarp true

[lunar zealot]

POKENAME has a rigid dorsal structure that stores nutrients to help it recover after long escape bursts. when its energy becomes unstable, it vibrates intensely and releases a salty odor that drives predators away.

[simple lynx]

It’s a rule of thumb I use

[thorn ingot]

Make sure to capitalize when

[simple lynx]

What fusion should I write an entry for *must have Dunsparce or Porygon or Porygon2 or Porygon-Z in it. If it doesn’t then denied

[lunar zealot]

I mean ppl told me that the fusions aren't fusions, instead they are a completely new specs SO i should not mentioned either the fused pokemons or any pre-evo nor evo

[simple lynx]

Entries should not rely on other entries to make sense

[lunar zealot]

.

[narrow cosmos]

Always kinda funny to come back after a bit and see a splurge of entries that took me several days all judged up in the span of an afternoon.

[lunar zealot]

U told me that

[narrow cosmos]

Though now I gotta wait for the site to update so I can get those errors I spotted taken care of.

[simple lynx]

Context

None

I meant the dex entries as a whole

The pre evo and the evo must make sense without each other

[thorn ingot]

Fusions ARE fusions lol. You should generally have traits from both Pokémon in them, however you can totally create new traits that you deem fit with them as well.

[lunar zealot]

Then whats the problem with this one? Plss feedback

[thorn ingot]

I don’t see the Magikarp in the entry

[lunar zealot]

Hmm

[simple lynx]

You could say it splashes in water or smth

[lunar zealot]

I don't like that... But it's the only memorable stuff about magikarp

Lemme think how to add something about the fish

[thorn ingot]

Magikarp is also known for being weak and pathetic

[lunar zealot]

Maybe "its meat its good"

U know bc of this

[simple lynx]

lol

Wimpod and magikarp combined must be the worst Pokemon ever

[narrow cosmos]

Instead of vibrate intensely you could say it splashes or flails desperately, if that still fits the character count.

[lunar zealot]

Cannon btw

[simple lynx]

It will run away and it is weak and slow

[lunar zealot]

Ohhh i like that

[narrow cosmos]

What about Magikarp/Feebas? Weak and ugly.

[simple lynx]

But Magikarp/Wimpod is cowardly

[narrow cosmos]

Pretty sure I actually made an entry for that fusion that said they were pretty pathetic, to the point they don't even taste good.

[lunar zealot]

Ye... I think im seeing something

[lunar zealot]

SO i can say it can be eaten

[thorn ingot]

I wrote a Smeargle/Magikarp dex entry saying it is more useful being drawn on by children than it is in the ecosystem before

[simple lynx]

Dang

That’s savage

[thorn ingot]

Well the sprite was literally a paper with a drawing of Magikarp lol

[simple lynx]

Let me cook

Paper is made from trees

[thorn ingot]

Here it is

[simple lynx]

So it should be grass water type

[lunar zealot]

“POKENAME has a rigid dorsal structure that stores nutrients to recover after long escape. When threatened, it thrashes in muddy water like a frantic Splash, blinding foes as its unstable energy makes it vibrate and release a salty odor.”

---

What about that

I thought what i can do with the spanish so i made it a defensive method

Using mud or salty water so it can blind its enemies

[rich goblet]

Tf is an escape burst

[narrow cosmos]

A burst of energy/speed to escape, presumably.

[rich goblet]

The ideas don’t flow well with each other so I’m going to let other people give input, plus it’s also late for me

[lunar zealot]

I mean i can change it or just take it of "to recover after a long escape"

Looks good too

[rich goblet]

I’m also confused how splashing makes a blinding reaction(?)

[lunar zealot]

Bc it splashes mud or salty water

That can reach the enemies eyes

Or just when it splashes emits the odor

[thorn ingot]

That part seems a little loose/disconnected then

[rich goblet]

That isn’t clear based on the entry

[thorn ingot]

The connection needs to be more clear on that

[lunar zealot]

Hmm

[rich goblet]

What you see in your head needs to be clearer when you type it out, even if it means you say less

Assuming the reader knows what you mean will make an entry less clear

[lunar zealot]

Oh

Ok i see i see

Time to make My brain brain

[simple lynx]

So you don’t assume what the reader knows

[lunar zealot]

So... The Main idea is to make that Pokémon look weak, coward and maybe a little dumb

[lunar zealot]

Im going to base most on what the reader can see in the Sprite

[simple lynx]

I got distracted

I was going to make a new entry

It was a good idea too

https://tenor.com/view/bruh-gif-15192042615659618819

[lunar zealot]

Maybe a use for its antennas

[lunar zealot]

F

Hmmm

Now that is just magikarp

I need to add wimpod stuff

[rich goblet]

Magikarp doesn’t splash in muddy water

[lunar zealot]

I Mena wimpod neither

[thorn ingot]

Hey at least you didn’t try to make a dex entry today for a fusion that you thought was sprited 2 whole years ago but was actually completely forgotten about.

[rich goblet]

Okay wimpod stuff got it

[simple lynx]

What are you talking about?

[lunar zealot]

BUT Wimpod its like a roach it can also be found in the sewer

[thorn ingot]

I’m saying forgetting an idea isn’t as bad as that so you don’t feel as bad but whatever

[lunar zealot]

[simple lynx]

I will just do it tomorrow

[rich goblet]

When threatened, POKENAME splashes in muddy water to blind other Pokémon. It is capable of leaping a long distance to flee from danger.

@lunar zealot what you think

[lunar zealot]

Hmm

I like it

When threatened, POKENAME begins to thrash violently, splashing muddy water into a predator’s eyes to create an opening for escape.

[rich goblet]

Remove the parentheses part, it was better without it

[lunar zealot]

So it has the splashing AND the escaping

[lunar zealot]

It means it can be either sand or muddy water which sounds better?

[simple lynx]

Muddy water

[lunar zealot]

K

[simple lynx]

It lives in water

[rich goblet]

Sorry, I meant remove the parentheses, you can just say water or sand

[lunar zealot]

Nah both its a lot

Muddy water sounds nice by its own

When threatened, POKENAME begins to thrash violently, splashing muddy water into a predator’s eyes to create an opening for escape.

Perfecto

[rich goblet]

Lot better, now a second sentence

[lunar zealot]

Now... it's time to make its first evo

Yay

[rich goblet]

This is only one sentence, so I don’t think it would be approved yet

[lunar zealot]

Hmm

True

Time to make it edible

[simple lynx]

I know how to make a entry for this

[lunar zealot]

Just make it still a coward with anger problems

So it attacks sometimes

Instead of always running

[storm light]

Altawile #443.300
The large cloud trailing POKENAME hides a mouth of sharp teeth. It hums a calming tune to lull foes into a false sense of security before clamping its jaws around them.

[lunar zealot]

lull?

[storm light]

i love the word tbh

[lunar zealot]

Oh well thats new

For me

So... U lull me

It lulls you

Lulling?

[lunar zealot]

I have been lulled

[simple lynx]

You can just say it destroys everything in its path but when faced with the smallest of resistance it retreats because it is a coward or smth

[lunar zealot]

I LOVE that idea make it a high school bully

[simple lynx]

That’s actually diabolical

[lunar zealot]

Yeee i love it

[simple lynx]

I will write that one

Can we agree on that

[lunar zealot]

Well of course

[simple lynx]

Or you write it and you give me credit

[lunar zealot]

No no go on!!

[simple lynx]

Ok

[lunar zealot]

Ill do this

Nah i think this one has an entry

Nope it doesnt

Yay

[storm light]

Sandinch #27.392
POKENAME create sand pits in their desert homes, waiting for unwary prey to fall into their open mouth. Desert-goers often get stuck in these pits as POKENAME don't bother filling in the pits when they move on.

[simple lynx]

Gyarados hydregion

[lunar zealot]

Nope

Gyarados and golisopod

The last evo

[simple lynx]

Lies

Jk

[lunar zealot]

Hehe

I hate the mouths BUT the have its thing

[lunar zealot]

I like it

[lunar zealot]

Now i have 2 ideas 1. is to turn it the devil itself or 2. make it a gentle beats who often gets lonely bc of its appearance

[simple lynx]

?

[rich goblet]

I have no idea what yall are talking about sometimes

[storm light]

[simple lynx]

Good night, Authors

[lunar zealot]

Let us be mate

Let it grow

May be too much

Time to sleep goodnight y'all

[storm light]

Duspix #311.37
POKENAME creates orbs of ghostly energy that were once believed to be the restless spirits of those who passed away. It is more active at night, stalking in the darkness with only its single scarlet eye being visible.

[hexed fog]

514 Provisional Mon entries remain

how many can you guys do before tomorrow when I gobble

[simple lynx]

Morning

Duntrio #206.51
POKENAME always stays in the ground, even when its tails are pulled. When fully underground, POKENAME uses its three tails to dig a nest deep in the earth.

[simple lynx]

Any Feedback?

[keen kestrel]

I think using the word “underground” twice in the same sentence can probably be avoided somehow

[simple lynx]

thanks

I didn't think of that

I changed it a little bit

submitting

[hexed fog]

**The 30NOV2025 Dex Update has been sent. Please allow it some time to activate. You don't need to manually update it will happen automatically as you open the game. **

[simple lynx]

#233.233
POKENAME is the best Pokémon for cybersecurity as it has immense power. It has been seen resting then, at a moment's notice, it will launch a Hyper Beam that is amplified in power by its tails.

Feedback?

@keen kestrel

[keen kestrel]

im not really an expert i just saw something obvious in your last post haha

[simple lynx]

oh

[keen kestrel]

on this one, I think something about the grammar of your second sentence is a little odd. but i don't really know how to explain why, maybe someone else can explain it better

[simple lynx]

yeah

where

I will fix it

I have made adjustments

[chilly bloom]

pulled in another 618 approved dex entries by the by

[storm light]

bumped me all the way to #18

[simple lynx]

My entries are in

I am #361

[storm light]

i got a long wayt o go to #17 though

[thorn ingot]

Over 700 entries now

I am also eternally stuck at #10 now apparently

[terse pawn]

I'm just gonna stop at 150

[simple lynx]

#137.92
POKENAME has a body made of computer code. POKENAME goes into abandoned websites, waiting for someone to enter them. Then, it will then scare them by appearing on their screen when not expecting it.

[hoary totem]

I think i have 2 now

[simple lynx]

I want feedback

[small nest]

Feel free to ping an Unown or two if you want feedback right away. The role itself is also pingable if you don't know our usernames.

[simple lynx]

oh

ok

[small nest]

The second sentence is a bit too long. I would break it up. Something like "POKENAME haunts abandoned websites, waiting for people to visit them. It will then scare them by appearing on their screen unexpectedly."

[simple lynx]

Doesn’t it have to be 2 sentences only?

Or can it be 3

[small nest]

There are no hard rules about that. As long as your sentences flow well, you can have however many you like.

[simple lynx]

Oh ok

[small nest]

Generally entries will be two sentences, just based on how long the average sentence is and how many characters entries can be. Having three sentences (or even a single well-constructed one) are fine though.

[simple lynx]

Is something like this good?

[small nest]

The second sentence should be laid out a little differently. Perhaps "At a moment's notice, it can switch from resting to launching a Hyper Beam (...)"

[simple lynx]

ok

that one was already submitted

I had recieved feedback from someone else

[worthy lance]

Megalosion #154.157
The leaves extending from its body capture sunlight to create powerful flame blasts. Oftentimes, the fragrances it creates are smoky and pleasant.

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/C7lRa_vbQ0NYmqxCzYlP6hK3/dn/pif/154.157.png

[regal cedar]

smoky

[small nest]

Better! You should change "enter it" to "enter them" in the second sentence (otherwise it seems as if people enter POKENAME instead of the websites). You should also remove one of the instances of "then" in the third sentence.

[small nest]

No problem. When the entry is reviewed, we will generally contact the author if any major fixes need to be made.

[simple lynx]

ok

[simple lynx]

I am just wondering, why do we need to change this?

[simple lynx]

Ok, I think this is good for submitting

[small nest]

The way it is currently written, there are two ideas with no punctuation in between.
#1: "It has been seen resting." #2: "Then, at a moment's notice,"
Generally we want to either combine these two ideas (like in my suggested revision) or split the ideas up with proper punctuation.

[acoustic scarab]

looking for advice on re-working this entry;

POKENAME are created using DNA taken from multiple fossil specimens of Dragon-Type Pokémon on a remote tropical island. They are dangerous and wily, the containment systems on their island compounds constantly being tested for weakness.

for this fusion, which I'm 90% sure is a Jurassic World reference art. Was denied for referencing creation of the Pokémon, so trying to work out how to be a bit more oblique with it

(375.425a, Deino/Tyrunt for reference)

[small nest]

I'm sure there's a technical term for it, but most of my grammar knowledge is just from reading a ton of books and getting a sense of what's proper

[worthy lance]

Fixed, thank you 🙂

[simple lynx]

I see

[keen kestrel]

oh i finally figure out the other thing wrong with the grammar, you switched tenses.
from "resting" to "will launch"
so it would have to be "it has been seen resting, then suddenly launching a hyper beam" or something

[simple lynx]

so we keep the same tense all the way through

[keen kestrel]

that's not a pokedex rule that's just how english grammar works

[regal cedar]

At the very least, in the same sentence.

[keen kestrel]

but im like joost, I don't know the exact names of rules of grammar, i just have a good sense of it from lots of reading etc

[small nest]

To remove the creation angle, you could just state that its DNA matches the fossil specimens (without directly saying that it's created that way). For instance, you could rework the first sentence to "Tests on POKENAME's DNA reveal close matches to fossils of ancient Dragon-Type Pokémon (...)"
I would also switch the second sentence around so that POKENAME is the focus throughout: "(...) wily, constantly testing the containment systems (...)"

[worthy lance]

How does my entry look? If I may ask.

[simple lynx]

I see

Well, it will needs to be edited because it had been submitted already

[regal cedar]

As an aside, if you're worried about it/they and plurality at any point, trying substituting POKENAME with It or They, and vice-versa, and see how it sounds/comes off as. It should be consistent, typically.

[simple lynx]

Ok

[acoustic scarab]

Testing the DNA of POKENAME reveals a match for multiple different fossil species of Pokémon. They are dangerous and wily, constantly testing the containment systems they are housed in for weaknesses.

How does that read?

[small nest]

"leaves from its body" should probably be "leaves on its body" or perhaps "leaves extending from its body." Also, I believe "oftentimes" is a single word. Nothing else stands out.

[small nest]

Looking great!

[acoustic scarab]

feel like we're losing the link to the tropics a bit, but maybe that's ok?

[simple lynx]

I will submit the gastly porygon one

[acoustic scarab]

I think the art will do the heavy lifting for it

cool, appreciate the check in!

[simple lynx]

ok

submitted

[worthy lance]

Fixed! I think that's solid to submit then 🙂

[simple lynx]

Very Helpful

Time to eat lunch

[acoustic scarab]

unrelated, noticed on the submissions sheet I accidentally submitted an entry for 357.405a as 357.45a (I submitted the same one for 357.405c as the two arts are near identical), should I just resubmit the one for 357.405a? Or just call attention to it here? (It got denied)

[rich goblet]

Since it was denied resubmitting is fair game IMO

[acoustic scarab]

to be clear as well, it was accepted for 357.405c 😛

I'm not just resubmitting an entry that was denied for both

[rich goblet]

The pins have changed under #custom-dex-errors if you ever want to make a change but if it’s denied then there’s no good reason to not resubmit

[icy canopy]

what do i do if i notice a spelling error in a dex entry that i submitted

I missed an s in aggressive

[azure wagon]

my last few entries for kantovember heres to hoping my december is a lot less busy!

[icy canopy]

POKENAME leave a trail of sand wherever they go. Whenever they run out, they are no longer able to levitate. To prevent this from happening, they refill by eating sand from the ground.

I'm struggling to not say the word ''sand'' 4 times in this dex entry

[icy canopy]

whta's kantovember?

[simple lynx]

You make a entry each day

Each day you have to make someone from a certain category

[small nest]

One of us Unowns will catch it when the entry gets reviewed, or you can ping someone to have it changed.

[azure wagon]

A little daily dex-writing prompt event I (now) run monthly, if you're interested tomorrow is the start of Dexcember ft. winter theme: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/15eN05B7FUgJUyCbtXuGnw47YFWlFRyJyVX7JLTs7YWY/edit?usp=sharing

[storm light]

Kantovember Day 30 - "Victory"

Nineizard #38.6
POKENAME searches for fights with opponents stronger than itself. It will not stop searching even if it takes decades to find the perfect foe to test its skills. When it attains victory, it begins the search once more.

And with that, my Kantovember calendar is complete, plus the extra challenge of only Kanto pokemon :)

[hollow nimbus]

But please only ping to have it changed if the entry has already been reviewed on the sheet

[jagged ledge]

Hey everyone, quick reminder that you have until Wednesday to join Dexdoku! see #1210021946105004052 for more info!

[dapper cedar]

my kantovember is complete! challenged myself to only use pokemon from other gens for each half of a kanto fusion, and to have no repeat species/families. worth noting i started from day 16 and worked backwards, but days 17 onwards were all done day-of.

[hoary totem]

can i submit entries for the sprites in the spritepack that is out rn even if they aren't in fusiondex? i have the pack downloaded so i have the filenames

[rugged socket]

Yep

[hoary totem]

(mimikyu/carbink joke)
POKENAME adorns rocks to make them appealing to humans as an attempt to gain affection, while hiding in boxes. It is unclear whether the human is requested to pet the rock or the box.

(sent in the reversed text version )

[storm light]

Welcome to Dexember!

Dexember Day 1 - "Chill"

Glaceceon #272.272
A bitter chill cold enough to supercool water follows POKENAME as it walks. It's popular during summertime events, allowing people and Pokemon to cool off quickly.

[hexed fog]

God how is it dec already

[hoary totem]

i accidentally just sent a dex entry for 373.478.png by mistake (i meant to send it to 373.478a.png, i already did that now)

[regal cedar]

next year is closed to 2050 than 2000

[hoary totem]

Who do i ping for this :/

[regal cedar]

I've got it.

[hoary totem]

Thanks

(to be clear it was supposed to go to 373.478b.png as well as it's the flipped text alt)

[soft flicker]

hmm this entry was not accepted because the "on earth" makes it sound like the pokemon is from space. But i cant really think of an alternative? "on the ground"? "on the surface"??? that sounds even more strange (and exceeds the character limit)

POKENAME grows leaf-like appendages to gain energy from photosynthesis. Compared to plants on earth its leafs have to withstand the conditions of the ozone layer where they live. Scientists study it to see how plants could stay alive in outer space.

[rugged socket]

Compared to rooted plants?

Plants in the biosphere?

[soft flicker]

rooted does fit the characters

POKENAME grows leaf-like appendages to gain energy from photosynthesis. Compared to plants on earth, its leaves have to withstand the conditions of the ozone layer where they live. Scientists study it to see how plants could stay alive in outer space.

now with less spelling mistakes !

[rich goblet]

I can see where the unown team is coming from, but also IMO the comparsion isn't as necessary as you may think.

Maybe like "their leaves are capable of enduring the conditions of the ozone layer" etcetc would be more likely to be accepted

[hexed fog]

Earth is against FAQ

"The world"

[soft flicker]

other idea, thanks Duck:

POKENAME grows leaf-like appendages to gain energy from photosynthesis. Their leaves are capable of enduring the conditions of the ozone layer. Due to this, many scientists study this Pokémon to see how other plants could stay alive in outer space.

[ebon warren]

You could also start that sentence with Unlike surface plants, this Pokémon's leaves... instead of how it currently reads

[narrow cosmos]

Hmm, looks like I will be having to make some fixes after all, judging by infinite dex updating with the new sprite database showing that some I applied for on Daena were outdated and being moved out. Darn. 😔

[main mulch]

I just wanna say thank you to fiordaliso for writing a bunch of dex entries for my sprites!! They're really good and seeing them all made my day

[worthy lance]

If I was to submit an entry for the Hoenn fushions, how would that work?

The sprites aren't up on the fushion dex Edit: I typed in my search incorrectly

[dapper cedar]

Dexember - Day 1: "Chill"
#92.555
Those not properly dressed for cold weather feel a constant chill going down their spine in the presence of a POKENAME. POKENAME's hazy body can become a localized snowstorm, trapping an opponent until they pass out from exhaustion.

[worthy lance]

Batone #395.544

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/n2z3gwRLj3NwAU6GCws3QjN_/dn/pif/395.544.png

Legends are spoken about a land filled with dragons under the night sky. A dragon is rumored to have flown so close to the moon, it become one with it.

Alt: Under a full moon POKENAME shines brightest. Eyewitness reports claim a blue glow surrounds them at night.

[rich wolf]

Hi all, im new here and want to try my hand at making dex entries. I made this one, and would love some feedback.

Magnesaur #81.3

When POKENAME is amped up in battle its magnetic field becomes incredibly strong. Trainers who use them avoid wearing metal so they will not be pulled into battles.

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/9wPCkgTUB14sCsah1DHKBsQT/dn/pif/81.3a.png

Should I include something more with Venusaur’s attributes?

[hoary totem]

maybe something sun related if you want

not sure if it fits actualy

hmm

[rich wolf]

Maybe instead of “in battle” it’s something to do with lots of sunlight the magnetic field gets strong?

[storm light]

You may want to chenge it to they or vice versa, when referring to the pokemon we only use one of the two

[rich wolf]

Ahh ya I used they and its

[storm light]

Maybe you could tie in Venusaur by saying it gathers sunlight to convert to electricity?

Not like i know how that works, but we have flaming horses spewing fire so maybe it's not too outside the realm of possibility

[rich wolf]

Can I format like POKENAME’s?

So it would make “Magnesaur’s”

[storm light]

Yes, the game will automatically change POKENAME to the pokemon's name ingame and on the website

[rich wolf]

Ver. 2

On very sunny days, POKENAME’s magnetic field becomes incredibly strong. Trainers who use them avoid wearing metal so they will not be pulled into battles.

[hoary totem]

funny that when i used POKENAME's since the name of the pokemon ended with 's' it ended up weird

[storm light]

In this case, i'd personally just put an apostrophe after lol

[rich wolf]

Wait now I don’t like the they and them being used in the second sentence. I feel like it makes it a little difficult to understand which one is referring to pokemon/trainer

[storm light]

Could put POKENAME again

[hoary totem]

yea

[rich wolf]

Ya I think that would fix it

On very sunny days, POKENAME’s magnetic field becomes incredibly strong. Trainers who use POKENAME avoid wearing metal so they will not be pulled into battles.

Thanks for the help!

[worthy lance]

Sorry for the delay, but feedback welcome of course! 🙂

[rich wolf]

Submitted my first dex entry

[rich wolf]

Legends are spoken… dragon is rumored… I feel like this could all be too “heresay” to be a Pokédex entry about a pokemon you just caught

Could just be reworded to more directly reference the pokemon

[worthy lance]

Hmm. sure why not

[rich wolf]

But as you can see I’m new to this so maybe I’m wrong lol

[rich wolf]

Trying another from the Hoenn Priority list

Koffchop #109.66

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/5pwZKaUgzejTiIY-FvkueEoN/dn/pif/109.66.png

When POKENAME flexes its muscles, it releases toxic gas. The stronger its muscles are, the more toxic the gas becomes.

[lapis cosmos]

Hello! It's been a little bit. This year has been a doozy, but I'm trying to get back into adding more entries. Is the Wild Provisional Hoenn Fusions basically like the old Wild Entries list or are there other rules I need to check?

[worthy lance]

What about: Under a full moon POKENAME shines brightest. Eyewitness reports claim a blue glow surrounds them at night.

[rich wolf]

I really like it!

[rich wolf]

This got flagged with the color peach, meaning there is a character that doesn’t display properly in game. Did I use the wrong apostrophe?

[storm light]

Most likely, but the unowns will catch and fix it

Don't sweat the small mistakes, as long as they know what you're going for, usually they'll just fix any issues and move on

This is coming from experience bc i was the same way lol

[rich wolf]

That’s nice, but i’d like to figure out which apostrophe is the correct one on my iPhone so I don’t keep submitting ones with an issue 😂

[lapis cosmos]

Sableye/Altaria 421.443
POKENAME searches caverns for beautiful gemstones to decorate its puffy plumage in hopes to attract a mate. The more gems it collects, the less capable POKENAME is at sustained flight, forcing it to become more adept at defensive combat.

[rich goblet]

For both new and returning writers, please see the pinned posts for resources and advice!

[rich goblet]

The wild provisional list is the current hot list while sprites make more for the demo list

Also welcome back!

[lapis cosmos]

Thanks! It's a good way to reset the brain to write a few entries.

And a ton of my favorites are from Hoenn, so I need to write for them (Sableye, Mawile, Seviper) or are just common wild fusions (Koffing, Tentacool/cruel, Zubat line)

[hoary totem]

<@&1210701164426039366> yeah the sprites were actually 373.468.png and 373.468a.png so the first and second one

[rich goblet]

Be careful about mentioning the source of a fusion. This should be fine since it’s “in legend” but it skirts the line close enough that I mention it

[worthy lance]

Yep! I made an alternate text version that doesn't mention that and submitted it 🙂 Very much appreciated

[hollow nimbus]

Go to #custom-dex-errors, read the pins, then make your report

[lapis cosmos]

Zubat/Tentacool 41.72
POKENAME is a common sight in water sources found in caverns, but is much less aggressive towards humans than many Trainers believe. The webbing of its fins are covered in a toxic film that leaves an irritating, glowing rash.

[rich goblet]

That one is very cool

[hoary totem]

k

[rich goblet]

This kiwiarms person looks promising, I wonder if they’ll shoot up in the leaderboards

It looks like they’re a sprinter too

[worthy lance]

Baltoy/Trapinch 550.392
POKENAME has a fantastic sense of balance when on all fours, however this quickly changes if it ever gets flipped on its back. The spike on its forehead is capable of crushing boulders many times its size.

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/8DbwOTRuAHg1mHmjdtdFPwdJ/dn/pif/550.392.png

[rich goblet]

Small nitpick, changes, not changed

[worthy lance]

Fixed, is that better?

[rich goblet]

Period at the end and I think it passes

Wait no

It’s only one sentence, you should include two or three

Usually two

[worthy lance]

One moment 🫡

I think that is enough words too

[rich goblet]

Space after period and it looks good to go

[worthy lance]

After the first sentence?

[rich goblet]

Yeah, in general after a sentence you should include a period. Some programs like word will remind you but it’s good to do

[worthy lance]

Awesome, appreciate ya, gonna submit that now

[rich goblet]

Cool

[lapis cosmos]

Loudred/Hariyama 521.524
Before combat, POKENAME performs a series of intimidation displays which consist of claps, stomps, and shouts that can be heard for miles around. Young Fighting-type Pokémon gather to watch this for inspiration at hyping themselves up.

[worthy lance]

I love the idea of that one, very cool

[rich goblet]

If you’re describing intimidation it should be intimidating I think?

[lapis cosmos]

Well, intimidating for the opponent, but young fighters see it as looking tough and want to imitate it.

[rich goblet]

Good point!

[lapis cosmos]

I get what you meant though! Might do some revision before submitting for clarity

[rich goblet]

Maybe “a display of intimidation” might work better

[worthy lance]

So, I think I read something that one person is allowed 3 submissions total for Pokemon. Correct me if I'm wrong, but if that's not the case, can I just keep working on the Priority list for Hoenn?

[rich goblet]

Where did you read that? I don’t think that’s true

Otherwise I would always be in violation of that rule since I try to have 50 in queue at all times

[worthy lance]

I thought I saw it somewhere pinned, but if that's not true, I'm happy to try at least do one a day, gen 3 is my favorite region.

[lapis cosmos]

I believe that's for a competition. You are welcome to write as much as you want.

[kind dawn]

I think it was something in pins but it was about a competition

[worthy lance]

sweet! I'll keep chipping away then

[rich goblet]

Oh right, me and my short memory

[lapis cosmos]

Feel free to pick ones from the full dex as well if you have favorites or inspiration!

[rich goblet]

Yeah just because it’s priority doesn’t mean you have to do them first

[worthy lance]

Clampcanth #562.565

The pearl inside POKENAME has been growing for over 1000 years. The scratches on its shell are proof of the battles it won to keep the pearl safe.

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/B5MqGbYaWgKaEW_hSiGpLI6H/dn/pif/562.565.png

[rich goblet]

First sentence fine

Second sentence feels a little off. Maybe you could rephrase it to demonstrate what the damage it takes on? Like bite marks or claw marks. Damage is like… vague?

[worthy lance]

Let me see here

How about that? Scratches and gashes are more specific?

[lapis cosmos]

"it won to keep the pearl safe." I'd recommend specifying there since you have a lot of "it" being used in the second sentence.

[worthy lance]

Sure, I can fix that

I was also thinking maybe/possibly adding in like missing bits of shell and gashes... are proof

[rich goblet]

Just scratches works fine, gashes is like repeating it

[worthy lance]

Gotcha, fixed.

[lapis cosmos]

Last one for today.

Solrock/Golbat 545.42
The light within POKENAME’s core intensifies as it ages, but dims near the end of its lifecycle. To hide its approach, it can use its wings to eclipse the internal light before exposing the flare in a blinding surprise attack.

The use of "eclipse" might be a bit heavy-handed...

[rich goblet]

I feel like “its eternal light” would work better for some reason, since the light comes from it

[rich wolf]

Winglord #516.314

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/XcLREHwL2ZtXCrWvkzWMRKqw/dn/pif/516.314.png

With hollow bones, POKENAME is always able to stay on the surface of the water. Its back serves as a giant nest for many aquatic flying Pokémon.

Would like feedback on this one. Was kind of difficult to come up with one that wasn’t memey lol

[rich goblet]

I see the vision, and it’s technically correct I think. Might want to wait for the experts to comment but I like it

[worthy lance]

I think the first sentence is really interesting, I feel like the word hide is more appropriate for the way it tries to do a surprise attack though, just a thought though

[simple lynx]

where is the december entry thing

[worthy lance]

I like this, but I'm curious if bird Pokemon would be more specific or less so.

[rich goblet]

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/15eN05B7FUgJUyCbtXuGnw47YFWlFRyJyVX7JLTs7YWY/edit?usp=drivesdk

@simple lynx

[simple lynx]

Thank You

[hexed fog]

@worthy lance please do not include ` on either side of your entries when submitting them

[worthy lance]

Sorry! 😅

[hexed fog]

it's not a big deal but i wanted to address it now lol

[lapis cosmos]

Similar idea I was having for this one! I like it!

[rich goblet]

Damn that was quick Izik

[hexed fog]

I was already in there

[lapis cosmos]

"Hide" is def more appropriate for the action, I just wanted to be extra clever with the whole sun element

[hexed fog]

I was getting in bed and went "I didnt do any entries tonight"

[rich wolf]

Oh just saw this one’s already been submitted

[hexed fog]

I will probably shovel a bunch out tomorrow

[storm light]

[rich wolf]

Got working on the Winglord one and took a break, when I finally posted it here like 30 minutes later someone else submitted a dex entey.

Are there alternate Pokédex entries like there are sprites?

Am I encouraged to submit it knowing there’s already one there, or not?

[thorn ingot]

Sprites can have multiple dex entries yes

[worthy lance]

Dusnoone #311.505
One must be careful when playing fetch with POKENAME. Once it sets its sights on something, it will try to chase it through walls.
https://cdn.fusiondex.org/q8bgqHXu4QSvzMASTK5jxF2x/dn/pif/311.505.png

[chilly bloom]

people make different sprites for the same fusion, different entries for the same sprite isn't that weird

[rich wolf]

Is the phrase sight or sights in this case?

[thorn ingot]

In fact it’s been done multiple times before too

[chilly bloom]

the official stance is that you're encouraged to avoid writing entries for sprites that already have an entry, and with spriting a fusion that already has a sprite, but if you have a sufficiently different idea you're free to contribute what you want

[worthy lance]

I think sights actually is correct.

[rich wolf]

Okay, cool. Thanks! I’ll submit it cause I already had it wrote up, in the future I’ll be sure to refresh the sheet if I take a break so I don’t do too many of those. Especially pulling off the priority sheet cause I know many people are looking through those mons

[narrow cosmos]

Sorry about that, that was me that wound up finding the Winglord entry and an idea popped into my head. 😅

[rich wolf]

Haha it’s all good! It’s a very fun sprite so I’m not surprised someone else wanted to write an entry

[narrow cosmos]

I'm just nabbing anything I can on a mission to dethrone Izik in entries.

[hexed fog]

The only time it's an issue is if the sprite artist made an entry.

The artist always has priority

[storm light]

You got about 4k sprites to write dexes for, get goin

[rich wolf]

That totally makes sense

[hexed fog]

Honestly please feel free

I just want it all done lol

I want to see more entries about pokemon napping habits, snacking habits and fears

[narrow cosmos]

Believe me, I know the struggle.
Doesn't help Izik will still dump a couple dozen on a whim at any given time to extend the lead.

[simple lynx]

Dexember Day 1 - "Chill"
Artisparce #144.206
Mountain climbers are often chilled and snowed on by POKENAME flying overhead. When it needs sleep, POKENAME wishes for no disturbances. To achieve this, it uses its drill tail to dig a hole.

[rich wolf]

Hounkern #228.191

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/eMffqzdygBU7ftbMK4Ou6FnB/dn/pif/228.191.png

POKENAME buries itself near water, and seems to grow the most at night. If it senses danger, it will communicate with howls only other POKENAME can understand.

[rich wolf]

The end of that last sentence feels clunky

[simple lynx]

I guess so

I am not sure what to put there, but I want to say something about getting the best sleep or lack of noise

[rich wolf]

Maybe something like,

“When tired, POKENAME wants no disturbances, so it will dig a deep hole with its drill tail”

Actually maybe,

“When it needs sleep, POKENAME wants no disturbances, so it will dig a deep hole with its drill tail”

Idk just some thoughts

[simple lynx]

Ok

I will keep that in mind

I split it up

[rich wolf]

I like it

[simple lynx]

Thanks

I will be back later

In about 45 mins

So just ping me with your feedback

[rich goblet]

Drill-like is a word that can be made

[simple lynx]

Ok

[rich wolf]

If I reference a move used by Pokemon, is it capitalized?

Magnebish #82.434

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/rnpMd48-eisoHHXLIuqXsm_c/dn/pif/82.434.png

POKENAME have consumed so much thrown out electronics, their wiring is faulty. If their trainer doesn’t feed them a special diet, they can unexpectedly let loose a Thunder Wave.

[storm light]

Yes, it should be written as the games have it as well

so in this case Thunder Wave would be capitalized

[rich wolf]

Thanks!

[hoary totem]

https://www.fusiondex.org/spiritomb+mareanie/

The multiple spirits that compose POKENAME are said to be divided in organized groups, making its tentacles. Whoever is touched by POKENAME's spikes is paralyzed, pulled in and assimilated into it.

[hoary totem]

@thorny crescent

[deep portal]

assimilate...

[hoary totem]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/311.557/

POKENAME appear at midnight surrounding abandoned temples. Those who hear its ear-piercing cries may never hear again.

[rugged socket]

Is good as is, but it could be twice as long and still fit character count, maybe expand on the ideas a bit?

[hoary totem]

hmmm

POKENAME appear at midnight surrounding abandoned temples, hovering silently. When POKENAME spot humans, they emit an ear-piercing cry, and those who hear it may never hear again.

[limber mango]

Is it silly of me to want to immediately make a dex entry for my first post as a spriter?

[hoary totem]

No it's completely reasonable do it now

You just can't submit it since only sprites that are in the spritepack can have dex entries submitted

[limber mango]

Good to know

Trying to think of something that would fit it without jumping straight to a single behavior

[hoary totem]

You can still throw them here for feedback of course

[limber mango]

for Slurpuff/Infernape:

Naturally mischevious and wily, POKENAME will steal food from people and other Pokémon when their backs are turned. The only trace of its presence is bits of cotton candy from its ever-flowing mane.

I think I just described it as Abu from Aladdin...

but with cotton candy.

[narrow cosmos]

Averse to violence, POKENAME warns foes by clicking its small claw to produce sparks. If this warning is ignored, it clicks the larger claw to create shots of lightning. There will be no third warning.

[rugged socket]

Is the tone of the last sentence a bit off?

Love the concept though

[narrow cosmos]

Could be. Was kind of basing it off a similar entry, Slaking/Snorlax that had a similar ominous tone for the last sentence.

[rich goblet]

From the people that brought you number go up, it's number go down!

Can we get the provisional list down by the end of the week? Write if yes, recite the bible in japanese if no

[hollow nimbus]

Stop baiting people to break server rules

[storm light]

If i didnt have the curse of my adhd i probably would

[rich goblet]

Aw crud my hand slipped and I left an exclamation mark in one of my entries

Super cringe of me

[feral schooner]

check the list of dex submissions to see why one of mine wasn't added
"faq 9, far too specific"
dawg i don't think it's much more specific than the regular dex entry for spiritomb tbh

(my submission: Legend says it is the reincarnation of 108 clowns who perished when a single clown car tragically drove off a cliff as part of an extreme circus act.)

agony

[rich goblet]

That does sound specific, like it came from that specific clown car

It needs to be general enough to apply to the whole species

you should check the pinned messages before continuing, there’s even a poke page on spiritomb

[storm light]

Dexember Day 2 - Fluffy

Mafarig #179.203
POKENAME's thick wool keeps it warm during winter and naturally sheds in the spring. The secondary head on its tail glows brightly when channeling Psychic-type attacks.

[feral schooner]

no yeah i know i know

i just figured "well it's a legend, it's not necessarily TRUE"

[rich goblet]

It’s okay, I promise

[regal cedar]

It's too specific, yeah. 108 malevolent spirits of a distant past is one thing, but even if it's 'thought to be', it's still quite a lot of clown car accidents. :p

There's ways to incorporate that still, it'd just need to put a different way. Like, have it be an urban legend that one formed from that.

[keen kestrel]

do 108 clowns have to die in the same clown car accident for each one to be born 🤔 lol

shame that got rejected that's really funny

What about
Urban legends claim the first of this species was born when [circus disaster], but this is unproven.
?

surely that works

dex entry: "here's a lie about the pokemon that probably isn't true. you're welcome"
not too different from some canon dex entries 😂

[azure wagon]

Dexcember Day 1: "Chill"

Dusyena #311.502
Around dusk, POKENAME gather in packs consisting of three to five members. The chilling howls they make can be heard up to a mile away.

why not knock out some of the hoenn entries while also doing dexcember

[azure wagon]

Dexcember Day 2: Fluffy Fusion

Swabre #442.496
The feathers on POKENAME's head make it seem like it's wearing a cotton-fluff hat. It is known to be a very friendly Pokémon, often sharing these soft feathers with people it particularly likes.

[rich goblet]

Do you submit your entry on the day of when doing these? Asking because I might accidentally do them first since I'm just randomly picking from the list

[azure wagon]

I usually do, sometimes i forget and have a backlog tho lol

[rich goblet]

I'll do my best to keep track of what others are making

[azure wagon]

I think the list automatically removes the mon when an entry is submitted

[rich goblet]

Don't forget to submit this entry!

[azure wagon]

but regardless no worries if you submit something first I won't get mad

[rich goblet]

Correct! Which is very helpful for me

[worthy lance]

I did, I think, didn't I?

let me check 🙂

[rich goblet]

It's still on the Hoenn list so I know there's no entry for it 😄

[worthy lance]

weird, coulda sworn I did

alas, let me get it in there

[rich goblet]

Let me check the entry list

[worthy lance]

oh it got denied, the # is wrong, lemme fix it

[rich goblet]

It happens, yer fine

[worthy lance]

Should be fixed 🫡

[worthy lance]

Clefbuff #173.174
POKENAME loves to bounce around at night, and will find others to do it with. It can roll around for miles and not get tired.
https://cdn.fusiondex.org/nlw0KImb2LNomt-kVGPmDfW0/dn/pif/173.174.png

Clefbuff #35.174
POKENAME bounces so high that it tries to reach for the stars. If you listen closely, you can hear it trying to sing to the Moon.
https://cdn.fusiondex.org/f12YNlcToWkvPHO0gKCJcydF/dn/pif/35.174.png

(These are both similar, but one is cleffa, one is Clefairy)

Duszagoon #311.504
POKENAME loves to hoard items they are curious about. It makes a strong effort to return lost items to children.
https://cdn.fusiondex.org/Q2DzIjuxkiZutlBA4l571YtC/dn/pif/311.504.png

Dustyena #311.503
POKENAME roam in packs and are often mistaken for a dust cloud. Trainers often rely on their glowing red eyes to tell the difference.
https://cdn.fusiondex.org/_eqQdbOuFrPJ5CAE74EmhPGZ/dn/pif/311.503.png

[rich goblet]

I'm not sure on this one grammatically

Maybe we could remove the filler words

POKENAME bounces so high that it tries to reach for the stars

[worthy lance]

Sure, I fixed it 🙂

[rich goblet]

The grammar on this one is clunky

Maybe it would be best to change the first sentence?

POKENAME take items from children to satisfy their natural curiosity... so on and so forth

[rich goblet]

travel and packs? Like a lunch? Did you mean in packs?

[worthy lance]

Good catch, I meant travel in packs

[rich goblet]

The grammar on that one is tricky, let me try to make it make sense

[worthy lance]

Edited, how about that new first sentence?

[rich goblet]

"... hoard items that they are curious about ..." etc etc sounds better while retaining the original meaning

[worthy lance]

Gotcha, edited!

[rich goblet]

POKENAME travel in packs and are often mistaken for a dust cloud. Trainers often rely on their glowing red eyes to tell the difference.

That is the best way I can paraphrase it while retainin the original meaning

[worthy lance]

oh yeah, thats fair, I was trying to be a little silly/sarcastic with the second sentence but that one reads better.

[rich goblet]

If you're looking for sarcasm the last place you'd expect is the Pokedex

In games and media it is borderline encyclopedic

Like documentary like

[worthy lance]

Totally fair, yeah

[rich goblet]

Anyway all four look good today, and if I end up missing a grammar thing the Unown team will fix it

[worthy lance]

Can I change travels to roams though? I was thinking that helps sell the wandering ghost idea a little better.

(This is unironically making my writing better, since now I'm seeing how I should adapt my writing)

[rich goblet]

Roam, singular

When you're in third person singular (he/she and in this case it) there is usually an S at the end of the verb

It cuts vines, It sleeps, etc

When you're in third person plural (they/their/them), the words lack the S

They cut, they slep, etc

That's a shortcut I use when I have trouble deciding if it works out

[worthy lance]

That would be a helpful pin, tbh

Let me get those submitted.

[rich goblet]

It probably is pinned and I've forgotten to check

[storm light]

Prompt for yall if you want it. ✏️
Could we get some Pokemon that help in construction? What do they do to help?

[hollow nimbus]

We don't have rules on plurality agreement pinned at the moment, mostly because it's something that native speakers get a feel for without thinking about it

[storm light]

To be fair, even as a native speaker, I still get that shit wrong

[hollow nimbus]

I more commonly see the problem of people forgetting that they haven't switched to the other plurality yet

It's sort of like a mid-sentence amnesia

[rich goblet]

Consistency is something I’m particularly bad at

[hollow nimbus]

The best way to prevent plurality disagreement is to just carefully read your work to yourself after you write it

[rich goblet]

Like I have to stop writing to help a client so when I pick back up I have like amnesia for the past 30 seconds

It’s funny is all

[hollow nimbus]

I will take someone's order at work, type it in the system, ring it up, and then completely forget what I just typed in

Luckily it prints out the order afterwards >:D

[storm light]

The worst part is when i do read it back to myself but still don't notice my mistake because

1. My brain added a word mis-sentence that wasn't actually there
   or
2. I totally forget what vibe i was going for

[hollow nimbus]

1. is caused by moving too quickly

[storm light]

brain go nyoom

[hollow nimbus]

That's where you get advice like "read it out loud" or "use a funny voice" coming in

2. is vague enough that it could mean anything

[storm light]

adhd my beloavthed

Gloozagoon #44.504
POKENAME can be trailed by the foul-smelling honey dripping from its mouth. The honey sticks to POKENAME's fur, making it smell awful until scrubbed away.

[hollow nimbus]

I would omit often, since can be trailed is general enough for your purposes

foul smelling honey should be hyphenated to foul-smelling honey because it's a compound adjective

[storm light]

I knew it

[hollow nimbus]

Looks good otherwise

[storm light]

I knew it but I was unsure lmfao

[hollow nimbus]

I often have the opposite compulsion
I try to hyphenate adverbs with adjectives when I should just leave them be

Then I look at it and go, "That's wrong, isn't it?" and go back and fix it

[hollow nimbus]

Foul-smelling honey = the honey has a bad smell to it
Foully smelling honey = sniffing honey in a gross way
Foul, smelling honey = honey that is both foul and having a smell

[azure wagon]

alright lets knock off some more hoenn fusions (not ft. dexember)

[lapis cosmos]

Banette/Claydol #357.551
POKENAME is believed to be an old, heavily modified doll possessed by its original owner’s spirit of imagination. It is prone to becoming waterlogged and moldy, so Trainers that help it remain clean and in fair condition earn its eternal loyalty.

[rich goblet]

This falls firmly under FAQ 9, since the entry implies that POKENAME are heavily modified because of a previous trainer. Which is a lot of trainers. I think I’d make it more vague so it fits the game more

I hope that made sense, I’m almost certain it’d get dinged

[lapis cosmos]

That's what I was worried about. I just submitted it so I suppose I'll have to see or ping an unown with a revision.

[rich goblet]

I’ll leave the decision to you, it’s not the end of the world

[lapis cosmos]

Nope, I appreciate it. And I think my revision is probably safer.

Resembling a heavily modified doll from ancient Hoenn, POKENAME is an imaginative spirit. It is prone to becoming waterlogged and moldy, so Trainers that help it remain clean and in fair condition earn its eternal loyalty.

[simple lynx]

Dexember Day 2 - Fluffy
Masparce #179.206
POKENAME congregate inside of clouds to gather static electricity. When their fluffy fur is touched, they release static electricity, then run away.

What do I do now?

[thorn ingot]

The dex entry is contradicting itself. You say when it’s touched it releases its static electricity, but it also builds static electricity when it’s rubbed against something?

[simple lynx]

ok

I didn't think of that

well I adjusted it

[thorn ingot]

You can shorten your first sentence since it’s repeating most of the information (inside of clouds: from clouds, with electricity: gathering static electricity)

[simple lynx]

Ok, shortened.

[thorn ingot]

Oh yeah change the second sentence to be plural since you already made POKENAME plural in the first sentence already

[dusty turret]

I've never gotten around to reading the dex entries of my sprites until now - some of these have me CACKLING. thank you guys ❤️

love this one for the garfield alt

[simple lynx]

@thorn ingot how do I make it plural

wait I got it

[storm light]

@azure wagon Did you mean for the first and fifteenth to be the same word?

[azure wagon]

No i did not lol

Hot fix patch notes incoming

Alright changed it to "Wrap" and updated the sheet

[storm light]

Dexember Day 3 - Blue Color

Amadash #461.78
The flames making up POKENAME's mane change color depending on their mood. When an aurora blankets the night sky, herds of these Pokémon gather together in tundra plains to pair off.

[thorn ingot]

“When their fluffy fur is touched, they release static electricity, then run away.”
Every word needs to change to become plural (its -> their)

[rugged socket]

<@&1210701164426039366> Can someone update the entry I just posted from 194.303 -> 303.194

[rich goblet]

Please see pinned messages in #custom-dex-errors and submit a request there.

[rugged socket]

My bad, I thought that was for approved

[rich goblet]

If you read the pinned messages there’s a list of exempted requests that don’t need to be approved, like content or file names

There’s also a format to the request that needs to be followed

[regal cedar]

I mean, the file name would still need to be shifted at one point, but...

[rich goblet]

I was just making sure things follow the right process, did I do it wrong?

[scenic badge]

oh wow a sprite of mine I made 2 month ago already got an entry , well thank you kindstranger

[hexed fog]

Youre fine lol

We want it in errors so it doesn't get missed

[lunar zealot]

Well

Now im HAPPY

They added my entry to the game

Yay

[thorn ingot]

Your welcome

[hollow nimbus]

-# You do this just to hurt us /j

[thorn ingot]

smh my head I’m helping not hurting

[storm light]

Question for the unowns since it's one i've had for a bit, how into detail can we go with fusions finding partners?(nothing explicit of course) I had an entry at one point that mentioned breeding season, but can we say that groups come together to find mates or mention rituals that fusions do to impress potential mates?
I know the usual 'If you have to ask...' but at the same time, it seems like a good question since I usually like going for the nature documentary aspdct for my entries

[storm light]

Mostly asking for this entry

[rich goblet]

That's a very good question, keep me looped in if you can

[hollow nimbus]

Mostly, just keep it rule 2

It's known that reproduction between pokemon results in an egg, so I'm not too worried about mating rituals existing

The funni dances that birds do or various gifts and whatnot are all fair game

[rich goblet]

I would steer clear from describing the act of making pokemon, but describing what attracts others is fine

[storm light]

Absolutely, I had no intention of doing that at all lol

PG-13 at most

[hollow nimbus]

Just keep in mind that all fusions have the possibility of being gender unknown, and most can be female or male, so you can't assume that any species are solely restricted to one or two of those options

Even a female-only species can be gender unknown (due to fusion/unfusing funkiness)

And gender balls are also a thing that exist in PIF

[storm light]

Wonder if it might be a good idea to add this as an addendum to the egg faq

[thorn ingot]

Oh yeah you can just change a Pokémon’s gender by throwing that ball at it

[storm light]

Just in case anyone else has the same question

[hollow nimbus]

Let me know if you find a way to make a gender-unknown-only species into a male or female, though

[hollow nimbus]

The only other place I've had this question come up so far is from other Unowns, and they've already gotten the answers by now

[storm light]

Fair

[hollow nimbus]

The requirement to follow server rules follows most of it
Any other problems are just a result of not being familiar with the game

I am working on a unified place to find worldbuilding information and lore, so you can count on information about fusions to be put in there

[rich goblet]

@hollow nimbus Got a question about the Wild Provisional sheet, if the image is blank it means it probs doesn't have a sprite right?

[hollow nimbus]

I currently don't know about that
I am not the one who programmed that part of the sheet

You can double-check by looking on a fusion calc site, though

[rich goblet]

Good point

[hollow nimbus]

Many of the requirements for the pg-13 rating are more than what server rules allow

[frank silo]

Sorry for bothering but could you tell me how can you make that type of texts?

[rich goblet]

Some keyboards may not have the ````Key``` but three on each side

[frank silo]

The entry must have that type of text or?

[rich goblet]

Now I'm not sure what you're asking,

You place the key around what you want to turn into copyable text

```Like this```

[hollow nimbus]

One on each side makes it like this and prohibits **any** other discord markdown from being applied
Three on each side makes it like this and brings up an instant copy button on the side when you hover over it

[rich goblet]

Better than I did it

[frank silo]

Ok let me test

[rich goblet]

Please test in a personal server or #off-topic

[frank silo]

Ok

I see it, thank you so much

Now I would try to make an entry finally

[rich goblet]

You don't have to use the special text to make an entry though? Did you see the fun stuff in the pinned messages? Very helpful things in there

[hexed fog]

oh look at all these undone wild fusions

itd be a shame if someone

did them

[rich goblet]

I've been doing my best to whittle it down, I'm at like 100 entries and we're sub 300

It'll get done

Unless you have a deadline

Then it'll be done faster

[thorn ingot]

The deadline is izik doing them first

[rich goblet]

I'm actually sitting here with a snack watching them come in live

@hexed fog You're using the wrong `

[hexed fog]

oh yeah

I just change them all at once

[rich goblet]

Oh the Unown magic

[hexed fog]

tbf I usually do that before I judge anything anyway because I know people use Microsoft Word and stuff to write so they use the wrong ' all the time

(thats what I do to avoid easy spelling/grammer issues)

[storm light]

[frank silo]

Trubin #434.535

ion on shoes. its capable to make space inside the bag expelling rubbish from its mouth like projectiles.```

Here

My first try

[rich goblet]

Do you want me to explain each fix I make or just the final product?

[frank silo]

Please murder me with feedback

I need to learn

[rich goblet]

Knowed is not a word as far as I know, but I inferred what you meant.

A period is usually the best punctuation so that things end neatly.

Other small fixes were made

[frank silo]

Thak you so much, English is not my first lenguage so...

[rich goblet]

Oh! Yeah English is a hard language to learn because it isn't consistent.

[frank silo]

Also the pojectil part is unnecessary or?

[rich goblet]

I'm not sure how it relates to the rest of entry, did you mean to specify that they expel trash with projectiles?

[frank silo]

Oh I see

[rich goblet]

POKENAME is known for its hyper-fixation on shoes. It is capable of making space inside its body by expelling projectile rubbish from its mouth.

I made a fix to include it

projectile in this case is a descriptor, so putting it before rubbish is the best way to include it

[frank silo]

Thanks

So I guess I should edit the message

[rich goblet]

You submit by using the Google form in #dex-entries-submissions

[small nest]

Should be "inside its body" but otherwise a great fix.

[azure wagon]

Dex-ember day 3: Blue Color

Medpix #527.37
From sunrise to sunset, POKENAME trains by intensely meditating. This training strengthens the power of its flames.

[frank silo]

That was my final edit

[frank silo]

Trubot #434.536
In moments of tension, a wild POKENAME can easily took out its own nose and throw it at predators like an distraction. Taking only hours for the Pokémon to find a new shoe to use.

[rich goblet]

I’m confused, what does the nose exactly do?

[frank silo]

Is just an shoe

[keen kestrel]

“an” is only for before a word starting with a vowel

[frank silo]

Yes, Im an dummy in this area

Sorry again, bad English

[rich goblet]

POKENAME is known for its hyper-fixation on shoes. It is capable of making space inside its body by expelling projectile rubbish from its mouth.

@frank silo You never submitted this one. I don’t see it in the logs. You have to submit the entry in https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfyy6tk0zBAVaVga6uZGp1oER-TeA35G1pYB29v2CzkaLtBLA/viewform

[frank silo]

Sorry, I forgot to mention that I usually post or submit my work all togheter in the last days of the month

[rich goblet]

You wait a month before submitting entries?

That’s like 30 days

[frank silo]

Well yes

[rich goblet]

That’s a long time, why would you do that?

[frank silo]

Yes, Im asking to myself the same thing, I usually do it for my sprite, but I can just do something different for the entries

Please have patient with me, Im kinda slow

Also about the nose

I can add something to make sense

[azure wagon]

Arcgrowth #315.266
Ancient texts recently discovered in Sinnoh describe a lost culture who regarded POKENAME as a powerful deity. In recent times, POKENAME are better recognized by their appearances in the “Flying Spaghetti Monster” movies.

[frank silo]

In moments of tension, a wild POKENAME can easily took out its own nose and throw it at predators like an distraction by its repellent smell. Taking only hours for the Pokémon to find a new shoe to use.

[rich goblet]

Pastafarians don’t exist in Pokémon and making them exist probably goes against some lore, maybe vaguely gesturing to cults is better

[rich goblet]

In moments of tension, a wild POKENAME can easily take off its nose and throw it at predators to distract them with its repellent smell. It only takes a few hours for the Pokémon to find a new shoe to use as a nose.

[frank silo]

Ok yes thats better

Thank you again

I would try to make better entries

[rich wolf]

Anyone done a run of only Pokemon they’ve made a dex entry for?

[azure wagon]

alright adjusted 🍝 mon's entry

[azure wagon]

I know some people submit dex entries to mons they catch in their playthroughs

Dexember Day 4- "Kind"

Sunsey #191.113
POKENAME is known for its kind nature. It is often seen placing struggling sprouts into its pouch, tending to them until they become strong and healthy.

[main void]

Yo fellow Brit here- generally speaking pokemon games use American English (*sigh) so I think “trash” is a better word here

[hoary totem]

Well the pokemon is Trubbish

[rich goblet]

#dex-entries-discussion message

Both British and Amercican spelling/words are allowed

[azure wagon]

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/15eN05B7FUgJUyCbtXuGnw47YFWlFRyJyVX7JLTs7YWY/edit?usp=sharing

If you're looking for a fun prompt-based dex event for the month of December, come take a look at "Dexember"!

Today's prompt needs you to include the word "Kind" into your entry. This is the month of giving after all.

[frank silo]

Garbin #435.535
The tube on top of its head acts like another mouth. By this, POKENAME is able to absorb any type of food and expel huge amounts of projectile garbage backwards.

Ok tell me whats wrong with it please

[rich goblet]

"By this" doesn't really add anything

Instead of backwards, did you mean behind it? Which way is the garbage heading?

[frank silo]

Ok I knew I should not use backwards, but yes

Is shooting to opposite way

[rich goblet]

Okay so it should say...

The tube on top of its head acts like another mouth. POKENAME is able to absorb any type of food and expel huge amounts of projectile garbage behind it.

[frank silo]

Only that two mistakes?

[rich goblet]

Yeah as far as I know

Also I really do recommend submitting them as they get done, it takes like 2 weeks to get approved in the first place, you don't need to add a month to it

Do you know how to use the google form?

[frank silo]

Oh I see

Ok, let me first make the entry for Garbodor/Swalot and I would submit all the line entries

[regal cedar]

With Relicanth's rarity and recent discovery, the theory that its DNA is not typically prone to fusing in the wild has emerged; the even more elusive POKENAME is the result of two deep sea Pokémon in similar habitats fusing.

https://www.fusiondex.org/clamperl+relicanth/

Hmm, I think I'll have to scrap this... I want to convey the idea of Relicanth's rarity and how its DNA may be unique, and POKENAME is even more rare. And, you know, both deep sea. But I think it's just a lot of lip service and not saying anything very new, and it's not focused on POKENAME very much.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME has unique DNA that come from Relicnath, which is an already rare species of Pokémon. By fusing together with a deep-sea Clamperl, it

I gave you space to include another fun fact

ALSO we are sub 200 on the Hoenn Provisional List

I demand we make this a new holiday.

just kidding of course

POKENAME have complex DNA from two of the most elusive creatures known to scientists.

Something

[regal cedar]

Ah, here's an idea.

POKENAME is partially composed of an elusive deep sea creature, which has brought Relicanth's natural resistance to fusion and evolution into question. An abyssal Pokémon, the color of POKENAME's pearl-shaped organ fades the longer it is in light.

[rich goblet]

I like it!

[storm light]

Dexember Day 4 - "Kind"

Bliskiss #242.269
POKENAME are popular among large hospitals for their kindhearted nature. When they sense negative emotions, they sing and even offer their egg to patients to make their stay a little less gloomy. The egg itself radiates an aura of happiness.

[frank silo]

Garbot #435.536
This pokémon have a bad reputation amoung other garbage mons. POKENAME has a terrible temper and huge tube in its mouth that use to steal any food from others, extending it 3 meters or more.

I was busy before, sorry

[rich goblet]

I am busy too, so you'll need to wait for feedback

[frank silo]

No problem

[rich goblet]

@hollow nimbus @regal cedar I'm calling upon you two to maybe help me teach some syntax to a non-native speaker. I would but a lot of what I run on is just intuition

EDIT: dinner8480 has said prior that they are a non-native speaker, not just an assumption

[hollow nimbus]

Is the entry in the box at the bottom what you need me to go over?

[rich goblet]

It's a little complicated, but this post here preferably #dex-entries-discussion message

I've talked with dinner all day but also didn't want to leave them hanging

[hollow nimbus]

Okay, I'll go over it and give my critiques and explanations 👌

[frank silo]

Please murder me with your feedback

[hollow nimbus]

First off, pokémon needs to be capitalized as Pokémon. The Pokémon Company typically capitalizes terms unique to the franchise, so we try to follow the same formatting.
In English the word have has multiple forms based on the plurality (number) of the subject and the tense (timing) of the sentence. When the subject is singular (and I am assuming Pokémon is singular because you used the singular form This instead of the plural form These) and the sentence is in the present tense, the form we use is has: This Pokémon has
amoung is simply misspelled. It should be among.
Garbage is a word frequently used in English as an insult, so using it as a qualifier here can confuse readers into wondering if you mean Pokémon made of trash or Pokémon that are vaguely horrible. In this case, you would need to elaborate a bit, such as This Pokémon has a bad reputation among other Pokémon formed of garbage.
You'll notice I changed mons to Pokémon. Mons is a fan-made abbreviation of Pokémon that does not exist in the PIF setting. People will rarely use the term 'mon in speaking, but that always starts with an apostrophe and is considered a casual way of speaking, which isn't fit for an academic tone like what the Pokédex uses.
tube is a countable and not uncountable noun. All nouns are countable and/or uncountable. Countable nouns must have an article, and uncountable nouns can go without. Because tube is countable, you have to add an article before its adjective: POKENAME has a terrible temper and a huge tube in its mouth
(1/2)

[muted wraith]

Pokémon

[hollow nimbus]

that use will be very disorienting for English-native speakers because you haven't given a subject for this predicate (a who or what for this action). Give a subject, even if you do so by using a pronoun such as it: POKENAME has a terrible temper that it uses to steal any food
use to steal food was changed to uses to steal food to match the plurality of the subject. When the subject is singular, many verbs are inflected with an s at the end to match: from use to steal to uses to steal.
You can remove the word any from the sentence for a cleaner sound to the sentence; without any adjectives, it's implied that any food it meets counts as that. That change is not strictly required, though.
When you say extending it, you use the pronoun it. Pronouns stand in place for the last applicable subject mentioned. In this case, the last subject was POKENAME (a huge tube was the object of the sentence, which the subject POKENAME was using.) You have accidentally said that the fusion extends the fusion, which doesn't seem to be your intention. In this case, just replace the pronoun with what you actually want it to stand for: POKENAME has a huge tube in its mouth that it uses to steal food from others, extending the tube (I used the instead of a for the article the second time because the tube had already been previously mentioned.)
When writing numbers, if the number is ten or below, you write the word for the number rather than the numeral.
This Pokémon has a bad reputation among other Pokémon formed of garbage. POKENAME has a terrible temper and a huge tube in its mouth that it uses to steal food from others, extending the tube three meters or more.
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I've been working on the lorebook that I mentioned the other day, but I'm realizing it's going to be a long project

I'll let you guys see a sneak peek, though

[rich goblet]

Woo!

I'm excited to hear if there is a space race or not

Or if we've been in outer space

Would make Minior so much easier to write for

[hollow nimbus]

Based off my research, it seems like space travel has been achieved (unless Frog doesn't want that fsr), but I don't expect that space travel will be very common

The base of PIF is FireRed/LeafGreen, and that game is set in the year 1996

Then again, there's all kinds of crazy technology in the world, so it's one of those things where we'll see what Frog thinks

[frank silo]

Thank you for crushing me, lad

Thank you so much

I would fix my entry and submit all

And write an list of rules about this

[frank silo]

Ok I submitted all

Now I hope there wasnt any mistake while submitting

[rich goblet]

You did great, you even put your username properly (some people fail to do that)

[frank silo]

Im decent

[rich wolf]

Smearmite #235.81

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/pS5yN03a2isXt7NM4eQoiueE/dn/pif/235.81.png

POKENAME paints walls with a special paint as it lazily floats by. The paint changes color when exposed to electricity.

Should I make this longer?

Idk what else to add though if I do

Maybe I’ll just add some more flavor

POKENAME drifts through the air and leaves streaks of special paint on any surface it passes. The paint changes to bright new colors when exposed to electricity.

[rich goblet]

This is a great entry! I'd submit it wholesale

[rich wolf]

I’m really enjoying working on these magnemite fusions

Slugmite #218.81

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/ZFkabMsmu87DZ9LDlUDctOGJ/dn/pif/218.81.png

POKENAME controls the flow of molten metal using its strong magnetic abilities. It drifts through lava streams with only its top bolt visible above the surface.

[storm light]

Stanpardos #234.306 It's Banbaro time!
POKENAME have been found in many places around the world, leading researchers to believe this species is nomadic. Despite its intimidating appearance, it only attacks when provoked. It sweeps its large tail to bat away foes.

[storm light]

Throwing ideas together for future dexember entries, are we able to mention a single member of the species if they were particularly notable? If not, that's alright, I got time to throw more ideas together lol

Kind of like a "yeah, they can get that long, it's weird"

[rugged socket]

Yeah I think that's fine, it's describing something generic to the species then a notable example of that generic thing

[calm storm]

real quick question;

Are we allowed to mention a PRE-evo fusion

[calm storm]

yo unowns

i think i gave dialgas entry one dot too many

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/muk+sharpedo/

POKENAME is most commonly sighted as a weapon of war. It is capable of chewing through the iron hull of a ship and expelling toxic, dissolving gunk within.

[regal cedar]

This is one we'll see and know to fix.

I'd completely change the first sentence.

[rich goblet]

I think the first sentence is problematic because they are a Pokemon, and not just some weapon

[frank silo]

Good day lads

[rich goblet]

Hello!

[frank silo]

How is going?

[rich goblet]

It’s pretty good right now, writing some entries as usual

[frank silo]

In my case... Same actually

[storm light]

Dexember Day 5 - Fire Type

Ninereon #38.136
When POKENAME is close to overheating, it releases excess heat from its tails and collar. When taken care of properly, POKENAME's golden fur is incredibly soft.

[dense meteor]

hmmm you're right, I'll edit the wording to give them a little more agency

[tacit sage]

Hi, I want to mention a group of Metapod in my description, should I put an 's' at the end of Metapod?

[grizzled hawk]

Nope. Pokémon names are generally not pluralized with an s.

[hexed fog]

keep the entries coming yall

I'd love to hear about Pokemon napping locations

or Pokemon that assist in agriculture

or Pokemon used in popcorn flavoring

[frank silo]

Ok

[hexed fog]

faq 9 is definitely our biggest issue

cman guys