dex-entries-discussion

[storm light]

but also if it's fine as is then idm sending it off

[rich goblet]

Ooooh I see

One sec while I tinker with it, it is a little ambiguous

[pastel depot]

Ah, yea i thought it was the reverse for a sec lol

[storm light]

This one's a little less ambiguous by directly stating it, but it's over the limit by 11 characters

POKENAME's body is similar in consistency and smell to honey. They squeeze into Beedrill hives and disguise themselves as part of the comb so they will be fed. Beedrill that grow suspicious of the new addition in the hive are eaten by POKENAME during the night.

[rich goblet]

@storm light
Plurality changed to help differentiate between subject and Beedrill

POKENAME's body is similar in consistency and smell to honey. It squeezes into Beedrill hives and disguises itself as part of the comb so it will be fed honey. POKENAME consumes Beedrill that are suspicious of its presence at night.

[storm light]

yeeeeeee

Duck your the best

[rich goblet]

Honestly super easy to miss so glad you pointed it out

[rich goblet]

AM NOT

[storm light]

*Yur'oe

[rigid finch]

https://tenor.com/view/youre-your-gif-22328611

[raven wave]

https://fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/135.373a/
Becoming a real electric type has not cured Mimikyu of its insecurity. Fused with Jolteon, POKENAME now dreams of being as cute and beloved as an unevolved Eevee.

[rich goblet]

This one is hard for me to explain so I might need someone to tag in…

… but this is a Pokémon separate from Mimikyu and Jolteon. It is not just a Mimikyu with Jolteon traits or vice versa, it should be treated like a stand alone Pokemon

[raven wave]

Well yeah

If Mimikyu simply gained Jolteon traits, it would be extremely pleased about being closer to Pikachu

But it is a new pokemon with a new set of insecurities

[rich goblet]

The entry leans heavily on the components of the fusion is what I’m trying to say.

For instance

“Becoming a real electric type” implies it was not one, which would not apply to the Pokemon if it was jolteon

[raven wave]

Yes indeed, it is a jolteon that became part mimikyu just as it is a mimikyu that became part jolteon

I suppose this entry does distantly imply it wasn't born as a fusion?

But the lore already says natural-born fusions are very rare

[rich goblet]

That is correct, I’m having a hard time explaining this.

[keen kestrel]

I like this type of entry personally, but I do want to know how staff would prefer us to word them

[rich goblet]

<@&1210701164426039366> I’m having a hard time explaining why this entry wouldn’t work, Help!

#dex-entries-discussion message

[keen kestrel]

for example there's the trainer in-game with an elecbro that has funny problems based on the fusion of its personalities, i checked and it turns out someone wrote an entry that matches that in-game lore, which i love haha

[hexed fog]

You're speaking of the pokemon as if it is still a mimikyu

[keen kestrel]

Nine's entry does imply mimikyu's jealousy of pikachu is genetic but... it kinda is, right? idk haha

[rich goblet]

There it is! Thank you Izik

[jagged ledge]

Yeah, that's a Joltkyu, not a Mimikyu

[raven wave]

It is a pokemon that has inherited some of Mimikyu's traits, in this case its insecurity and jealousy

[jagged ledge]

You can't say that a Joltkyu is just a type of Mimikyu though

[raven wave]

I don't believe I did

[jagged ledge]

"Has not cured Mimikyu of its insecurity." Mimikyu is being referred to as the primary individual focus of the fusion as opposed to one component or one whole fusion, Joltkyu, implying it is still just a Mimikyu.

[raven wave]

If you want to say like "has not relieved jotkyu of Mimikyu's insecurity" or something

[rich goblet]

I had a severe case of “tip of my tongue” syndrome, thanks team

[jagged ledge]

You could say "Despite being an electric type, POKENAME still experience jealousy of cuter and more popular Pokémon like other Mimkyu. They fashion their disguises to resemble Jolteon to try and be popular among fans of Eevee."

[jagged ledge]

Also the way it was before either implies that it was an electric type before it was fused due to being in an earlier unrelated sentence AND it's referring to the unfused Pokémon individually instead of the fusion itself to the point where it borders on the origin/process of the fusion. It was a bit of a layered issue when you lay it out in full, so I don't blame you for struggling on how to approach it.

[rich goblet]

Thank you, I do my best

[jagged ledge]

You're doing great

[severe scroll]

Torchtata (279.19a)
Skittish by nature, POKENAME find security in their large groups. When the group is attacked, the bravest of the POKENAME will create a protective wall around their scared friends and spit fireballs at attackers to drive them away.

Torchtata (279.19)
The keratin that makes up POKENAME's beak grows quickly. Due to this, POKENAME will rub its beak against rocks and tree bark to hwittle down the excess material. If it goes too long without maintaining its beak, POKENAME will struggle to eat.

[rich goblet]

bravest probably works better here

[rich goblet]

The keratin that makes up POKENAME's beak grows quickly. Due to this, POKENAME will rub its beak against rocks and tree bark to whittle down the excess material. If it goes too long without maintaining its beak, POKENAME will struggle to eat.

whittle, and removed an unnecessary even

[severe scroll]

How are you today?

I saw all the 'Not Approved' in the list. Must have been rough.

[rich goblet]

Eh, I'm groggy but that's because I'm trying to quit energy drinks

[rich goblet]

Nah, it just happens sometimes. Someone doesn't read the guidelines and jumps straight in, its actually faster than approving them

When I approve something, I have check the grammar and syntax, whether or not its a duplicate, among other things

The other day I had to hunt down someone because they submitted twice for the same sprite and had to fix it to the sprite they intended

[severe scroll]

Dang

Sounds like my job as a teacher.

[rich goblet]

I am blessed as a part time caregiver, lots of time on my hands

[severe scroll]

Oh nice! ❤️

Well, thank you for what you do

[rich goblet]

I don't like giving many rejections, I try to give each entry a fair shake

I just assume people would rather have part of an entry changed a bit than outright rejected, and I haven't been proven wrong

[severe scroll]

Spearchic (21.279)
POKENAME make their nest in tall dry grass where they can hide themselves. These Pokémon are aggressive hunters, stalking bug Pokémon in the grass before rushing forward and attacking when their prey isn't looking.

[rich goblet]

better hide themselves? Better than what (I'd just get rid of the better)

[severe scroll]

Thank you. Didn't catch that

Fearchic (22.279)
POKENAME make their nest on the ground where they can better hunt for food. When these Pokémon spot a potential meal, they will lower their stance and wait for the prey to get close before attacking with their long and heated beaks.

I caught that!

Spearbusken (21.280)
POKENAME's ear-piercing cry can be heard over half a mile away and is used to keep foes at bay. If a potential threat continues to encroach on its territory, POKENAME will rush forward and attack with the sharp talons on its hands and feet.

Fearziken (22.281)
POKENAME have large wings help keep these powerful Pokémon airborne with only a few flaps. POKENAME avoid fighting when they can, but will protect themselves using martial arts if a fight is unavoidable.

😅

[severe scroll]

Is this a reference I'm not getting?

[rancid sun]

Looks like Digimon

[severe scroll]

Found it

Yep, Digimon

[fading shale]

POKENAME has a glowing nose that constantly sends electric signals into the ground. The spike on its head is able to receive those signals from others of its kind, enabling them to communicate over large distances.

[rich goblet]

In the second sentence, you swap from singular to plural, you will need to change how you say that

[fading shale]

wdym
them?
but its others of its kind
i still keep it on "it " ?

or those signals

[rich goblet]

POKENAME has a glowing nose that constantly sends electric signals into the ground. The spike on its head is able to receive those signals from others of its kind, enabling groups of POKENAME to communicate over large distances.

I'll just give you that for now, I need to grab lunch, almost forgot to eat

[fading shale]

where did i swap into plural

[rich goblet]

Yes, them was the word that switches plurality

I fixed it though, no problem

[fading shale]

so "enabeling it to communicate" etc would be right ?

[rich goblet]

neither would be correct because it would be ambiguous, you would need to clarify that it is coming from groups of the fusion

[fading shale]

well not groups, just in general others of its kind

[rich goblet]

One sec, I need to check

[fading shale]

one, two, six hundret, dont matter xd

its just their way of communication

[rich goblet]

enabling it to communicate over large distances

I had to check and that would be correct.

[fading shale]

can i use my original one and just swap it ?

[rich goblet]

Yeah

I now have ice cream so feel free to hit me with some more stuff

[fading shale]

say less

POKENAME is able to electrify its fur, generating a layer of insulation, keeping its body warm and sending an electric shock to those landing a direct hit on it.

[rich goblet]

This is a very long sentence and I can't tell what is supposed to be the focus.

It can electrify its fur for insulation and shock those who attack it?

[fading shale]

yea idk if insulation is the right word here

its basically able to electrify its fur to keep it warm but since the fur is now loaded with electricity it also shocks any physical attacker

like a barrier

shield

idk

[rich goblet]

I split some ice cream

But also if you want to you can try splitting that into two sentences for me? It is currently confusing to read because it is so long

[fading shale]

uh yea hold on

[jagged ledge]

Insulate can be used to describe keeping something warm, but it also describes blocking the flow of electricity, so not exactly the best word for this context considering it is using electricity to do so.

[rich goblet]

I forgot about the double meaning, good point!

[fading shale]

cant u specify it like warmth insulation

to like work around it

or which word would suit it in genral better cause i cant think of one

[rich goblet]

That's the issue with words of multiple meaning, you can't really do that without making it clunky

[jagged ledge]

Start with focusing the ideas into two different sentences, we can worry about word choice from there.

[fading shale]

POKENAME is able to electrify its fur, keeping its body warm. The electrified fur acts as a defense mechanism, sending a shock to anyone landing a direct hit on it.

[jagged ledge]

Immediately better

[rich goblet]

Much better

[fading shale]

is it application ready tho

[rich goblet]

Not quite, the phrase direct hit isn't the most common phrase, we could simplify and say 'landing a strike' or take out direct and say 'landing a hit'

I imagine if its super powerful that even grazing it would cause a shock

[fading shale]

its just to say any physical attack will get a shock

like poison point who piosons anyone who touches nidoran directly

[rich goblet]

You know what, as long as it is grammatically correct it works

Send it

[fading shale]

https://klipy.com/gifs/bugs-bunny-strong-2--k01KS69PFVH0SW5YG1237GAFWGW

or should i specify to "anyone landing a physical hit"

no that sounds shit

[rich goblet]

Don't second guess yourself now, direct hit is fine

[fading shale]

alr

[onyx cape]

Am I allowed to say something like “POKENAME often causes some people to think this way” but worded better

[rich goblet]

I have no idea what you would be trying to say so more context would be needed

[fading shale]

The black fur of POKENAME is stripped with electric patterns, glowing bright blue. The heat produced in its body due to the constant electric charge of its fur helps POKENAME to power up its fire type moves, delivering fast, scorching attacks.

[onyx cape]

POKENAME is often the source of theories of a simulated earth. However, in truth, POKENAME is simply the advanced code of a dubious disc fused with Jolteon.

[fading shale]

ok the idea is pretty cool ngl

[jagged ledge]

Unless you have an additional description or context, I would advise against simply restating the Pokémon's appearance in an entry. Like "The bulb on Bulbasaur's back is green" vs "The bulb on Bulbasaur's back absorbs sunlight."

[fading shale]

its important for the context that the patterns are constantly charged , generating heat -> powering up

[jagged ledge]

How is it the source of those theories? What perpetuates the theories? What in the Sprite represents a simulated earth? Also you're describing it as a fusion of a Pokémon and an item, which isn't how fusions work, and if it was, is just restating that it's a fusion.

[jagged ledge]

But you say the charge of its fur generates the heat, not the patterns. Nor do you state that the patterns glow because of electricity or produce electricity. The second sentence could stand on its own.

[onyx cape]

Well I can workshop it, but my logic at the end was that porygon Z is essentially just code. I think I know how to fix it. Also, popups. In the air. Thats the reason people are so freaked out

[jagged ledge]

Hence me advising to build on the description.

[jagged ledge]

Then maybe talk about the effects that the pop-ups have. Maybe you could bring in an advertising angle due to Jolteon's speed.

[onyx cape]

I don’t really know how to address the popups. Really drove myself into a wall with that one.

[fading shale]

The heat produced in POKENAME´s body due to the constant electric charge of its fur helps it to power up its fire type moves, delivering fast, scorching attacks. The patterns glow brighter the more heat is stored up.

?

[onyx cape]

POKENAME is often the source of theories of a simulated earth, with its unreal speed and odd imagery. For many people, it’s disturbing to see something normally exclusive to their home computer, standing in front of them.

[onyx cape]

Ehhh not really helping is it

[rich goblet]

I'm reading to catch up, finally cleaned up the spill from earlier

[jagged ledge]

"When POKENAME generate electricity, the stripes along their body glow bright blue. The heat trapped in their fur from the process helps amplify their Fire-Type moves, allowing for faster and stronger attacks."

[jagged ledge]

https://tenor.com/view/star-wars-yoda-patience-sw3-gif-21070142

[rich goblet]

Where are you getting this whole simulated earth business? It looks like it would make pop ups come up so fast that it would force you to click one without you knowing

[onyx cape]

It’s computer stuff in front of them. Ever seen a pop up in real life? Sorry thats too sarcastic but still

Idk how else to say that

[jagged ledge]

But like... it's Pokémon

Ever seen a mouse catch a lightning bolt?

[onyx cape]

The Pokédex writer cant be aware hes In a simulation thats a bit what Im going for

Or she

[fading shale]

gonna watch a movie be back later

[rich goblet]

Maybe you could have POKENAME use pop ups as platforms to hop between at lightning speed before pouncing on foes

[jagged ledge]

That... isn't the point though

[onyx cape]

Thats cool.

[onyx cape]

Eh

[rich goblet]

Make it happen

[onyx cape]

I ain’t ever done this before I was bored

[jagged ledge]

You could also say it was a corrupted advertising program made to deliver a bunch of pop-ups to people before they had the chance to click away.

[jagged ledge]

Well by all means, welcome, we're happy to have you, it's just also that I don't think something floating in the sky is that odd for a Pokémon.

[rich goblet]

https://tenor.com/btMMd.gif

[jagged ledge]

Like people can walk down the street and see a flying whale

[onyx cape]

The odd part is a mouse and a 2d box but I see what you mean

[onyx cape]

COMPUTER mouse

[jagged ledge]

Yes, but Porygon should be common knowledge in the lore, right?

Also the issue is more the jump from "Surprise at computer screen" to "Source of conspiracy theories", you need to explain the context within your entry so everyone reading can see your logic.

[onyx cape]

My idea was to make it seem obvious the theorists were overdramatic, I think I’ll take the easy way atp idk how to phrase it

[storm light]

Do I spot a new dex writer? 👀

[rich goblet]

Yup

[storm light]

Hey do you mind if i throw a wall of informative text at you

it's not bad, i promise

[jagged ledge]

Well by all means, you can talk about overdramatic theories and meta references, but again, you need to create a proper setting/context and then deliver the punchline.

"Strange text boxes appear in rapid-fire around POKENAME whenever they encounter people. Some online theorists believe this to be proof that the Earth is inside of a simulation."

[jagged ledge]

If you don't, it's kinda my unpaid job to do so

[storm light]

I'm waiting for their response first lol

[onyx cape]

POKENAME was originally intended to be an advertisement algorithm that was too quick for a user to click away from, leaving them no choice but to look at the ad. It can use the advertisement boxes to block opponents the same way it used to block users’ cursors.

Wait who

WHO response

[storm light]

You

[jagged ledge]

Valid lol

[onyx cape]

Sure

[storm light]

bet

[storm light]

Welcome to dex writing! Always love seeing new writers!

Remember to check out the pins for helpful writing tips and some of the more common FAQ questions as well as the lorebook! A full list of the FAQ can be found in in the spreadsheet you can find in #dex-entries-submissions (The big HERE link, will crash on mobile)

Until you get a good grasp on what we're looking for here, I would suggest posting your entries here so we can make sure they're in tip-top shape before being submitted! Dex updates are done ~every 2 weeks by .Izik and you can find the last update time in the pins as well! You will not be notified if your entry is accepted or rejected; it is up to you to check by searching for your Discord username within the spreadsheet after the update.

If you need help with an entry or are confused on how something should be written, then post what you have and ask about it! You could also ping either the Unown role or someone with the Unown role like Ducky, RealThree, or WildheartRazorfangs, though I would suggest doing that only if your question isn't answered by the FAQ or Lorebook. More often than not, other dex writers (like myself) will also be lurking around the channel, so someone should get back to you at some point, just be patient. <3

Don't let the larger number of entries some of us have intimidate you, every entry helps! Even if it's just 1 or 100!

Hope you have fun writing and remember, don't be afraid to ask for help!

[jagged ledge]

Looks great! 👍

[onyx cape]

Holy shmoly

Good to know

[jagged ledge]

Any chance you've considered applying to be an Unown?

[storm light]

I did, once

[rich goblet]

While I have your attention, @onyx cape - Your discord username is slimninja55. Please use that instead of your display name so we can properly give you credit

[onyx cape]

Ahhh thats my bad.

[rich goblet]

No problem, happens all the time

[jagged ledge]

You're always welcome to try again We offer unlimited chances.

[rich goblet]

Just like with entries

[storm light]

I didn't really understand the first portion of what they asked me to do, but tbh I find it more relaxing to take on a more 'diet' unown role. Not approving or denying entries, but still providing help and information if needed

[rich goblet]

Speaking of @onyx cape I have denied the Pory Jolteon so if you want to try again (after fixing it up) you can

[storm light]

I still police the fuck out of my entries anyway and still end up with errors, idk how i'd do with other people

[onyx cape]

Soo do I go to the form, put the png, and put the new one? I know now to use Slimninja55

[jagged ledge]

(I haven't touched the approval segment of the sheet for the better part of the month, reviewing and just helping the vibes/process still helps us a lot )

[jagged ledge]

Funny enough, getting into the Unown routine like... reawakened the grammar notes that were locked away in my brain lol.

The huge tapestries I weave breaking down clause structure and tenses? Couldn't do that until I was put in a position of reading and going "Ok, why is this wrong? OH RIGHT, GRAMMAR EXISTS."

[rich goblet]

Ever since I took over most of the approvals I have been waking up at like 6AM with a coffee and a morning person spirit to read every morning. Thankfully I work part time so I can come in whenever

For me it's like reading the news, what happened yesterday sorta deal

[jagged ledge]

Dang, impressive lol

[onyx cape]

Hopefully it should be done and shortened

[rich goblet]

@onyx cape Please do not capitalize the username next time, small but important detail

[storm light]

Me omw to make the most error ridden entries to make ducky mad

[jagged ledge]

I wish I could get into that kind of efficient routine.

[onyx cape]

Thanks for the tips

[storm light]

I was here when Duck wasn't an Unown

[jagged ledge]

(Play Dexdoku, then you can make me that mad 9 times over )

[rich goblet]

The ones I hate are the one sentence run on sentences since the grammar tool I use just dies whenever it tries to parse it

[storm light]

oh shit fr

[storm light]

👀

I still need to catch up on the MerMay challenge

[jagged ledge]

Understandable lol

[storm light]

motivation is a bitch

[jagged ledge]

Same, but the grammar tool I use is my brain lol

[jagged ledge]

Indeed

[rich goblet]

I mean it isn't really different than microsoft word, it's basically that but also has extra functions for synonyms so I can swap parts in and out if its too long after fixes

Anyway

We are slowly closing in on the Chewfish list, I'm so excited

[jagged ledge]

Chewfish?

Carvanha?

[onyx cape]

I didn’t see anything in the rules against making another entry as long as it isn’t spamming, but just to make sure?

[jagged ledge]

For different sprites or the same one?

[onyx cape]

Diff

[jagged ledge]

Oh yeah, then by all means

(If you think your spam is bad, wait until you meet izik )

[onyx cape]

Im concerned.

[thorn ingot]

The izik pile lives rent free in your head

[jagged ledge]

I was in the trenches... valleys? Cliffs? Canyons? What's a trench for a mountain?

[rich goblet]

You were in the mines

Carving away at Mount Izik

[jagged ledge]

Sure

[dapper patio]

izik be cranking out entries nonstop

[thorn ingot]

And now mt izik is flattened

[jagged ledge]

Ducky did wonderful work to our backlog

[rich goblet]

Nah he's just got a head start on everyone

I have like a few thousand and I've been doing this for roughly a year

[dapper patio]

That's still a lot

[rich goblet]

https://www.fusiondex.org/

You can check the leaderboard and the filenames of pokemon here

[jagged ledge]

I have... less than a thousand

[dapper patio]

I think I just broke through 100
It's been a month or two

[jagged ledge]

I'm hoping to get to at least 800 by the next update

[onyx cape]

Im pretty sure that it said no out of universe references but this is vague enough to make sense in universe right?. “POKENAME wants to be the most free Pokemon. Though it’s quite strong, it cares for its friends as much or more as itself.

Definitely needs tweaking

[thorn ingot]

Maybe if you did your dex requests you could get there

[jagged ledge]

[rich goblet]

Are there levels of freedom? Free, freer, freest?

[jagged ledge]

I will try... Hopefully Sunday/Monday the latest?

[rich goblet]

Joking aside I think all wild Pokémon are equally free so conceptually it doesn't make sense @onyx cape

[jagged ledge]

Tomorrow is Doku updates, Saturday is a family birthday, I might be going out Sunday.

[dapper patio]

So you have 4816 entries according to fusiondex.
If you have been doing this for a year, that's ~13 per day
Huh. Suddenly that number seems much more achievable now

[onyx cape]

You ever watched one piece? Pretty sure Luffy, the sprite inspo, wants to be free to do as he wishes, including being strong enough to do so and protect his friends while doing it. Idk

[jagged ledge]

It's a One Piece reference, but I agree that it grammatically needs work.

[onyx cape]

For sure

[rich goblet]

The trick is conveying the sense of freedom for a bub like me who doesn't get the reference

[jagged ledge]

Also just a heads up: There are quite a few Luffy reference Sprites, I would try to zero-in on the Gear 4 aspect to make this one stand out.

[onyx cape]

Well I’ve seen “iykyk” stuff in the game, I’ll try and make it more obvious.

[onyx cape]

Ooh good idea.

[jagged ledge]

One sec, I have a good reference sprite rule example

This

[dapper patio]

You can reference the source material pretty closely as long as you don't actually talk about the source material if that makes sense.

[jagged ledge]

(Should we pin this maybe? Do we have Reference Sprites covered in the pins?)

[thorn ingot]

Also fun fact to at least me
All my necrozma entries have finally been pushed to the second page.

[onyx cape]

Now that I think about it shroomish+chimchar makes them have a rubber body due to odd fruit. So yeah that makes sense

[rich goblet]

You can't say Gum Gum Cherries or The Grand Wine or whatever but you can say sailors or ships and stuff

I should google this before I make a fool of myself

[onyx cape]

Too late

[dapper patio]

We do not seem to have reference sprites covered in pinned

[jagged ledge]

When a popular One Piece fan theory doesn't come true: The Grand Whine

[dapper patio]

I also know nothing about One Piece so I'm a little lost rn

[jagged ledge]

Oh, there's a place called the Grand Line lol

I was riffing on Ducky calling it Wine

[rich goblet]

I don't remember the conversation very well so I legitimately told you what I remembered

[jagged ledge]

That's totally fine lol

[rich goblet]

Oh, right, when Chibi gets approved for Unown we should have her on bot command duty

We need tags

[jagged ledge]

I am probably one of the most casual caught-up One Piece fans that you'll meet

[rich goblet]

I heard it is a long series

[jagged ledge]

It is. But I just read the manga at my own pace over the course of the year with other things in between.

[rich goblet]

Ooooh I see

[jagged ledge]

Tldr: Use your time how you want lol

Anyway, back to the entry itself

[onyx cape]

Im going mad that entry about odd fruit doesnt exist?

I swear I saw it

Well more for me

POKENAME’s body has rubber features due to a diet of odd fruit. POKENAME has a cherished mushroom cap passed down by Brenape.

First idk if I can mention other Pokemon and second it has grammar stuff I know

[rich goblet]

I highly recommend reading the lore book, it answers a lot of those questions

[jagged ledge]

I swear I wrote an entry for something in this evolution line before

Did it get denied at one point?

[rich goblet]

I don't think so, searching for the word odd and your username shows all approved

319.404a.png

[onyx cape]

Am I allowed to mention Brenape, it’s evolution?

[rich goblet]

You are allowed to yes, though I would mention it is POKENAME's final evolution somehow.

[onyx cape]

POKENAME’s body has rubber features due to a diet of odd fruit. POKENAME has a cherished mushroom cap passed down by Brenape, POKENAME’s evolved form.

[rich goblet]

Last thing, I'm pretty sure its rubbery, not rubber

Otherwise send it and if I come across a grammar issue I'll fix it

[thorn ingot]

How does one get the cap if the parent isn’t a brenape?

[rich goblet]

I'd just say "a" brenape, it doesn't have to be a specific one

[onyx cape]

Shhh. Kanghaskan are born with babies let me have this

[rich goblet]

Whoops wrong person

Yeah just make it a generic Brenape @onyx cape

[thorn ingot]

I’m not the author

[onyx cape]

Yeah in the show it’s a regualr dude thats close to them

[jagged ledge]

Sorry, I was going for a walk and my wifi cut out

[rich goblet]

Yer fine

[jagged ledge]

I think what might have happened is that the sprite was changed/swapped at one point, so the entry was removed since it didn't fit?

Sorry, I'm trying to figure out the reason why mine isn't there before approving this one because I swear I wrote something similar, so I don't want this one to end up rejected too.

[onyx cape]

Maybe that’s where I saw the entry?

[rich goblet]

319.404a was the sprite by the way, let me know if you need help to find it

Maybe the artist retracted it or something

[thorn ingot]

There is no 319.404a sprite anymore

There’s 319.404 letterless

[jagged ledge]

I'm heading out to dinner in a bit, so while I'll still be around on mobile, I won't be able to access the sheet. Probably a good idea to get that sorted at some point though.

Out of curiosity, check the denied entries for 404.319 as well though.

[rich goblet]

Alrighty!

[rich goblet]

Surprisingly, Coltronimus' entry is the only entry for this, and it is on the alt sprite

[thorn ingot]

It’s the only sprite (it just has a letter)

[rich goblet]

The only sprite is the alt sprite

I see the word sprite so often I forget its a soda too

[thorn ingot]

https://tenor.com/view/sprite-stay-cool-gif-9853524742889538943

[jagged ledge]

Oh wait, that's the current number. Yeah, check for 319.404 like you were before then lol

I keep forgetting how late Shroomish is in the Dex

[thorn ingot]

It was added way after Breloom as well

[jagged ledge]

Yeah, some Pokémon used to be added based on rule of cool instead of the full lines

[rich goblet]

Yeah these sprites that get pulled are an interesting case... that I will NOT deal with, I have my hands full

[jagged ledge]

Oh yeah, straight up a whole different conversation

[onyx cape]

POKENAME has developed a technique where it stretches and compresses its blood vessels to increase flow of blood and oxygen and up performance. This gives its skin a red tint and heats it further than before.

[thorn ingot]

I think what happened is that the fusion was reversed

[onyx cape]

Another reference entry

[jagged ledge]

Probably. I still instinctively look up "Chimish" when I try to find it on FusionDex

[thorn ingot]

Since it’s way more as a chimchar body, not a head

[jagged ledge]

Anyway, I'm going to shelve this issue until later and try to focus on reviews now lol

[rich goblet]

So the first sentence should say something like:

POKENAME has developed a technique where it stretches and compresses its blood vessels to increase the flow of blood and oxygen to improve performance.

The second sentence is a bit confusing, further than before? before what?

[onyx cape]

POKENAME has developed a technique where it stretches and compresses its blood vessels to increase flow of blood and oxygen and up performance. This gives its skin a red tint and causes steam.

[jagged ledge]

"POKENAME has developed a technique of stretching and compressing its limbs to accelerate the flow of its blood vessels, multiplying its physical performance. The process causes its temperature to rise rapidly, producing steam from the excess heat."

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/3.63b/
POKENAME converts sunlight into psychic power, making it no longer need sleep. These POKENAME teleport around and trim plants to release their own energy.

[onyx cape]

Thats WAY better.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/3.65a/
POKENAME's umbrella-shaped tree is grown with time and care, so it is almost never let go. It likes to stay in the sunlight to think, and sometimes it also discusses with humans or other highly intelligent Pokémon.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/3.68/
POKENAME actively seeks out opponents to battle. It only uses its wooden arm from behind when facing opponents it recognizes or when countering a surprise attack from behind.

[jagged ledge]

I do my best, always happy to help

But also I have a lot of practice, you'll figure it out with time. Already off to a great start. 👍

[hexed fog]

Snek List is up

[onyx cape]

The imfamous Izik. I’ve heard about you

Infamous?

[jagged ledge]

(Quick, while they're not looking, finish the Zangoose entries before Seviper )

[onyx cape]

Idk

[hexed fog]

lol all bad I hope

[rich goblet]

POKENAME converts sunlight into psychic power to fuel its body. Because it no longer needs to sleep, it teleports around to trim plants and release psychic energy.

[jagged ledge]

I was recounting my time in the mines

[onyx cape]

Yup

[rich goblet]

POKENAME actively seeks out sparring partners to battle. It only uses its wooden arms when facing well-known opponents or when countering a surprise attack from behind.

[onyx cape]

POKENAME has developed a technique where it bites into its arm to inflate it. Surprisingly, POKENAME’s destructive power is much larger, although the method is similar to a simple balloon.

Once again it’s iykyk

[rich goblet]

POKENAME's umbrella-shaped tree is grown with utmost care and rarely leaves its side. POKENAME enjoy basking in the sunlight to chat with people or other highly intelligent Pokémon.

[jagged ledge]

"During battle, POKENAME blows air into its scrapes to inflate its limbs, multiplying their power. The rubbery recoil from the impact often launches the opponent back as if they bounced off of a balloon."

[onyx cape]

Never been humbled so hard and been happy abt it

[jagged ledge]

Hey man, you lob, I'll spike, together we'll clear these references

[onyx cape]

Yeah well I only just witnessed ace be a donut and have only seen gear 4/5 w friends

Excuse me if I seem like a Karp

Karp

Larp

[jagged ledge]

Hey, I think all levels of fans are valid. (Except gatekeeping agenda people, let people have fun)

[rich goblet]

402.543.png

POKENAME's uniquely rubbery skin produces a high-pitched squeaking whenever it rubs against itself. A particularly skilled POKENAME can twist itself into various shapes, though it will ignore its Trainer’s orders to chase nearby Zangoose.

I'm trying to make the Zangoose bit less... overt

RIght now its kind of shoe-horned in

[onyx cape]

A skilled POKENAME can twist into shapes. And make it a whole other short sentence? I think maybe -ly is unneeded but im not sure

[onyx cape]

It will often ignore its trainers orders to chase nearby zangoose.

?

[rich goblet]

Hrm

POKENAME's uniquely rubbery skin produces a high-pitched squeaking whenever it rubs against itself. In the presence of Zangoose, POKENAME wraps its body into the shape of balloon Pokémon to set up an ambush, uncurling when they are in range.

[onyx cape]

Im just gon listen and learn for a bit.

[rich goblet]

I mean its just us as of right now

[onyx cape]

Yeah Im reading your entries

[rich goblet]

Oh wait there's Wildheart

[jagged ledge]

If you want to study a bit, I'll be reviewing Ducky's Dexdoku

[rich goblet]

#1210021946105004052 This channel here

Stay tuned 📻

[onyx cape]

We can’t be direct referencing but gear 4th is similar to 3rd the difference being haki

More only haki mb

POKENAME coats its limbs in spiritual energy to draw out its superhuman abilities. It has the spirit of a conqueror, and its voice alone can often stop weaker enemies dead in their tracks.

The last part is mostly reference

[rich goblet]

If you would, can I have the context for the spiritual energy? Is it like fire or something?

[onyx cape]

It can also learn snarl and uproar

[onyx cape]

Called haki, armament to be specific, allowing the user to draw out superhuman abilities as stated in the entry. Cant say direct things like haki, however.

Can be used on weapons and body

The reason why infernape is even here besides fiery passion is because it’s monkey D. Luffy

Just realized that lol

[rich goblet]

POKENAME envelop its body with crimson flames to draw out its fighting prowess. Its voice sends chills down the spines of weaker Pokémon to stop them dead in their tracks.

I'm not sure how to fit the conquerer part yet, can you clarify that bit?

[jagged ledge]

Luffy and Infernape (and Goku) are all based on Sun Wukong, yes

[onyx cape]

It’s called conquerors haki in the show so I thought make it a different kind of “spirit “

From spiritual energy on the arms

Wouldnt call it fire but what do I know Im not far enough yet

[onyx cape]

Ahhh

[rich goblet]

I don't have a lot to go off of

[onyx cape]

Yeah the energy is just the red skin when I first saw i though sleeve but definitely haki

[jagged ledge]

"POKENAME's raw determination has hardened its limbs while still keeping the rubbery flexibility of its muscles. A single glare from a POKENAME is enough to stop weaker or less confident Pokémon in their tracks."

[onyx cape]

Dam it’s GREAT

[onyx cape]

Im learning

[jagged ledge]

Hey, it's your first day. We appreciate your cooperation and dedication

[onyx cape]

I wanna keep going if I stop next session will be next month

While Im motivated

[storm light]

The entries arent going anywhere do them at your own pace

or else

[thorn ingot]

Say that to Porygon

[storm light]

the admin?

no ty

[thorn ingot]

No the role

-# I meant Porygon the pokemon

[jagged ledge]

(I will say if you want a Pokémon on the Snek list to work quickly, Izik WILL sweep them up if they go unclaimed)

[storm light]

look i'm a lil stupid ok

[jagged ledge]

Speaking of lists, I'm proud of this one I did for the Oceanbirb List

The visuals of a seagull stanced up and smackin' people is too funny to me

[onyx cape]

List?

Groups of similar fusions needing entries I assume

[jagged ledge]

In #dex-entries-submissions You can see the spreadsheet of Approved Entries and a Grid Layout of the Dex Entries by Pokémon. One of the tabs is an updating "List" where we fill in Entries for different Hoenn Pokémon

[onyx cape]

POKENAME is a master of a sort of three sword style. It has strengthened its blades using a physical form of pure fighting spirit, allowing its already immense skill to flourish.

[rich goblet]

Otherwise? Send it, I'll fix it up tomorrow

[jagged ledge]

Scyther and who else?

[rich goblet]

What fusion is this?

[jagged ledge]

One dinner later and it's done

@thorn ingot Your turn. 🫵

[onyx cape]

My bad had to go it’s scyther aegislash

[rich goblet]

Ooooh that makes sense

[jagged ledge]

Ah ok lol

[thorn ingot]

I parry

[jagged ledge]

But I already reviewed my own Dexdoku Grid

[rancid sun]

How's this for a sentence? (Noibat + Carvanha)

[dapper patio]

Perhaps consider "POKENAME's ears allow it to hear its prey from miles away, and based on those sounds it carefully selects a target"

[rancid sun]

Yeah that works better

[jagged ledge]

It is too late, it has been done. ✍️

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/venusaur+slowbro/
POKENAME provides water and shelter to the wood snail on its tail in exchange for nutrients. When they encounter danger, the wood snail provides toxins to assist POKENAME in battle.

[quaint turret]

i found a couple dexless spritse that i think are cool and deserve entries if anyone likes them >>
https://fusiondex.org/bisharp+aerodactyl/
https://fusiondex.org/pawniard+aerodactyl/

[storm light]

Croin #169.535a (Batty Slime - Slime Rancher)
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/169.535a/
POKENAME prefer to live in pitch dark caverns where light cannot irritate their eyes. Their squishy bodies allow them to harmlessly bounce off obstacles, leaving behind a poisonous ooze.

Rain #243.535a (Saber Slime - Slime Rancher)
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/243.535a/
POKENAME were initially thought to be extinct until a group was found living on an unexplored mountain range. They are incredibly agile and can leap several feet in a single bound, latching onto prey with venomous fangs.

[upbeat slate]

I have a pokedex entry idea for swireon as it doesnt have one yet please let me know what you guys think of this. I combined the entries for Umbreon and swirlix as that is what the fusion is.

Swireon (99188): Swireon evolved from exposure to the moon's energy pulses. It extrudes white threads as sweet and sticky as cotten candy. It attaches these threads to bushes, rocks or the ground as bait to lure in its opponent and trap them. After setting their trap they lurk in the darkness in wait until its opponent gets trapped and attacks.

[storm light]

Is this your first dex entry? /gen

[upbeat slate]

Yes

[storm light]

I'm on my way to bed, so I wont be around long, but please give this message a read and check out the pins in the channel. It has a lot of useful info for getting into writing

[upbeat slate]

Thank you

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/venusaur+magnemite/
POKENAME changes or shields its magnetism by adjusting the orientation of its leaf cells. It actively competes for electricity and sunlight, making it almost the strongest in the same ecological niche.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/3.82/
The sphere above POKENAME has sacrificed visual and magnetic abilities in exchange for efficient light absorption. Its two sighted spheres are very active to ensure the surrounding safety.

[onyx cape]

POKENAME has mastered a fighting technique using three swords at once. It has strengthened its blades with pure fighting spirit to increase its already immense power.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME provides water and shelter to the wooden shell on its tail in exchange for nutrients. When they encounter danger, the shell clamps down to give a burst of toxins and psychic energy.

[rich goblet]

This is fine I think, I’ll make minor adjustments as needed

[rich goblet]

This is also fine

[onyx cape]

POKENAME has made a balloon-like disguise to look and feel like the kind, huggable dragonite. The disguise also allows POKENAME to help people and Pokemon reach high places

[rich goblet]

This is a fine entry, go ahead and post it

[rich goblet]

Same with this one

[storm light]

I like the imagery of this one, super cute

[rich goblet]

This is fine, I’ll fix it on the back end if anything comes up

[rich goblet]

I like this one, go ahead and submit this

[onyx cape]

YES

Dam I forgot the names

Scyslash and Miminite

[rich goblet]

I’m confused?

[onyx cape]

Ive been using the fusion dex site and going to the form from there cos the png number is already typed so I wrote so I don’t forget

[rich goblet]

Oh

[onyx cape]

POKENAME, although it has grown tough, is bitter for the wrongful death of its mother. In battle, it harnesses its anger and savagely slashes through foes.

[rich goblet]

Please read the Poke Page on Cubone/Marowak in the lore book. Thank you.

[onyx cape]

Lore book?

[thorn ingot]

Check pins

[rich goblet]

It is in the pinned posts, it goes through a lot of topics that are and are not allowed in entries

A very useful read

[onyx cape]

I’ve begun reading it. If you are referring to the violence, snorlax has an entry where it starves ppl and others but I’ll continue reading

[rich goblet]

Sorry, the way I presented isn't helpful, let me just point this out

@onyx cape The way you are describing the entry applies only to one member of the species, rather than the entire species

The way we do things around here are a lot more strict than Pokemon

I don't see how to make the entry work without scrapping big parts of it unfortunately

[onyx cape]

My bad. Also i can’t find anything cubone specific or marowak specific like this. I’ll start changing it.

[rich goblet]

One sec, got handed a drink

[onyx cape]

In Pokemon lore, there are cases where a Pokemon evolves through emotion other than love or friendship, so I don’t think it’s too too far off

[rich goblet]

It is under the Specific Information page

[thorn ingot]

The poke pages link in pins also has the Cubone/marowak info

[rich goblet]

The way this is written applies only to one specific cubone, unless we want to entertain that they all came from the same mother (which they don't)

[rich goblet]

Oooh, good to know thank you

[onyx cape]

The image is so crunchy on my screen, it has become illegible. But I believe I understand.

[thorn ingot]

Here’s non-crunched

[onyx cape]

Thank you. This helps.

Banette is literally animated by resentment.
Mimikyu is driven by loneliness and desire for affection.
Frillish and Jellicent have entries involving grudges and emotions of drowned souls.
I plan on using info like this to justify my entry before I make it plural.

[onyx cape]

Took a long time to get it

[timid sky]

I don’t get it

[rich goblet]

@summer acorn Please remember to only use your uncapitalized discord username when submitting entries, thank you.

[drifting cloak]

guys what is the word for "give off an aura" 😭 I cannot think rn

[onyx cape]

Emanate?

[drifting cloak]

I've said secrete but that is not right

[summer acorn]

Can you add that to the instructions on the form?

[rich goblet]

Your discord username is also by default uncapitalized

[onyx cape]

The mom has no skull because since the egg is new she’s still alive

[rich goblet]

It's no biggie, I just fix it this time is all

[drifting cloak]

omg I was looking for radiate thx

[summer acorn]

Yeah no worries I will remember this in future. Is everyone's username uncapitalised though? You could call toLower() on the form output or put a warning about capitalisation on the form, might save you some headaches!

Appreciate the work you do checking over the entries! 😀

[rich goblet]

I wish the Google Form was robust enough to do that, sadly not

[onyx cape]

Although POKENAME evolve after growing much more emotionally mature, they still hold on to the bitter feelings from the skulls upon their heads. POKENAME harness these emotions in battle and savagely cut at foes.

[drifting cloak]

POKENAME are usually seen during meteor showers, where they zoom through the night at extreme speeds, casting beautiful illusions in the sky. Should a POKENAME land during one of these showers, it will radiate a soothing aura.

[onyx cape]

Is this better or does it need a whole new idea

I can think of ways to make it clearer as well

[rich goblet]

While POKENAME may be emotionally mature Pokémon, they hold bitter feelings in the skull on their heads. POKENAME harnesses these emotions when striking foes.

I think that should be correct and allowed

[onyx cape]

Okay then, thanks for telling me. Ive made some good progress in that pin I’ll finish that before I keep writing.

[rich goblet]

This should be fine!

[rich goblet]

Yeah yeah, the lore book is the standard that the Unown use to make sure everything is good for the game

[storm light]

Zigin #504.535a&b (Hunter Slime - Slime Rancher)
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/504.535a/
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/504.535b/
POKENAME are nocturnal hunters, using the darkness to seem nearly invisible save for their eyes and mouth. When the moment is right, they pounce onto their prey with their mouth wide open, swallowing the target whole.

Castin #553.535a (Fire Slime - Slime Rancher)
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/553.535a/
The slime covering POKENAME's body is constantly ablaze, but burns quickly and rarely spreads to their surroundings. They prefer to eat food that has been burnt to ashes, absorbing it through their skin.

Castin #554.535a (Puddle Slime - Slime Rancher)
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/554.535a/
POKENAME's body is covered in a slime that allows it to move across the surface of water without breaking the surface tension. They are most commonly found after rainstorms, playing with one another in the puddles left behind.

and that's the last of the slime rancher refs for now :>

[rich goblet]

Thanks for sharing, they are very cute!

[storm light]

Unless @clear hollow or @ripe finch, you got more for me

I love slime rancher, it's such a nice relaxing game

[thorn ingot]

It is

I have Slime Rancher 2

[clear hollow]

I plan to make more after Mergemay

[thorn ingot]

I did not like when a tarpocalypse happened on one island tho

[clear hollow]

But so far I gave you all me and Lily have currently with Yolky coming to the game in June 30th - July 1st, and Glitch coming uhhh whenever Lily posts it

[storm light]

I shall be waiting

[clear hollow]

Thanks for giving them such amazing entries I had lots of fun reading through them

[storm light]

Well thank you and Lily for making them in the first place! Honestly I'm thinking about doing a Slime Rancher run when PIF Hoenn fully releases!

[onyx cape]

POKENAME are usually omnivorous. They use echolocation to locate both fruit and small Pokemon, before scorching them to their liking as if they were cooking.

Im pretty sure in case of hunting Im supposed to prefer cut down or strike over kill right?

[storm light]

Usually omnivorous? Are there times they become herbivorous or carnivorous? If so, then you may want to make mention of that to make the usually make sense. Otherwise, I'd say remove usually and just say they are omnivorous

[onyx cape]

POKENAME are usually omnivorous, but in rare cases they prefer one food source over the other. They use echolocation to locate either fruit or small Pokemon, before scorching them to their liking as if they were cooking.

[rich goblet]

Are they sometimes not omnivorous?

[rich goblet]

I think omnivorous literally means it can prefer one food source or another depending on the condition

[onyx cape]

POKENAME are usually omnivorous, but in rare cases they prefer fruit over small Pokemon and vice versa. They use echolocation to locate either source of food before scorching them to their liking as if they were cooking.

[onyx cape]

Really? I thought it was it could do that with biological capabilities

Like a lion cant eat a salad

[rich goblet]

I'm confused, sometimes herbivorous and sometimes carnivorous? That's literally an omnivore

Well yes but omnivores can eat both

[storm light]

See the thing is, a lion could eat a salad. but the salad doesn't provide as much nutritional value to the lion as a zebra or antelope would

[onyx cape]

Yeah I don’t know. Omnivores i though was can, but not anything to do with preference.

[storm light]

therefore, lions prefer eating meat, which gives them more nutritional value for their needs and thus makes them carnivorous

Oh

well

[onyx cape]

But yeah I’ll stick to just “omnivorous

[rich goblet]

It is equally confusing to say "usually carnivorous" because you're adding information that implies that can change

Does that make sense?

Most Pokemon and animal analogues have a set feeding style

[onyx cape]

POKENAME are omnivorous. They use echolocation to locate fruit or small Pokemon before scorching them to their liking as if they were cooking.

[rich goblet]

Better!

[onyx cape]

It’s cos charizard is dragon and noivern Im 90% sure likes fruit.

Ever heard of a fruit dragon? Maybe. Not me though

[rich goblet]

Fruit dragons sound like lizards, and yeah the fruits wasn't the issue here, it was the "usually" bit

[onyx cape]

Noivern is a dragon TYPE. I just said they liked fruit without realizing that. But it’s a big fruitbat.

[onyx cape]

Yeah this is more vague works better

[storm light]

I was just showing that you were correct in reference to it liking fruit

[onyx cape]

Oh okay i thought it had to do with me acting like it wasnt a dragon lol

[rich goblet]

I'm curious what "as if they were cooking" means in this context, since we already mention that we scorch the fruit/Pokémon to its preference

[onyx cape]

Because animals dont normally do that.

idk

[rich goblet]

What makes sense in Pokémon and what makes sense in reality can differ wildly.

I would say a lot of Pokémon have unique preferences, so it is a bit redundant is all

Maybe you can mention how it prefers its food, like a crunchy layer on the outside with a juicy inside

[onyx cape]

I mean yeah but only so many Pokemon do it especially with precision, scorching just because and precisely cooking would be a bit different . Plus the point is they can prefer it completely different.

One can want it crisp the other just wants it warm

[rich goblet]

Ooooh, let me try something

[onyx cape]

Shoot I didn’t hit submit on the form did I?

I hope not

[rich goblet]

POKENAME are omnivorous creatures that use echolocation to locate fruit or small Pokémon. Once securing their meal, many unleash fiery flames to cook their food to their liking, ranging from slightly warm to completely charred.

[onyx cape]

Ooh thats good

Mb had to leave baby wanted yogurt

But that’s great

Fiery flames? Are there non fiery flames?

[rich goblet]

I will replace it this once, remember to wait for feedback next time you submit entries

I mean there's embers and smoldering flames etc

[onyx cape]

I was planning on leaving the tab open but I got into a loop of doing the same thing over and over

[drifting cloak]

POKENAME are highly favoured by coastal photographers, since they can surf waves and look surprisingly elegant whilst doing so. After intense physical activity, POKENAME like to rest near tide pools where they can hydrate.

[onyx cape]

It looks like it has no idea what’s happening

[drifting cloak]

it looks so pathetic I cry

[rich goblet]

What does highly favoured mean here?

[drifting cloak]

Like photographers like to photogtaph them

bc they surf

[rich goblet]

POKENAME are popular subjects for coastal photographers because they appear elegant while surfing. After intense physical activity, POKENAME enjoy resting and hydrating in tide pools.

Try that

[drifting cloak]

Thxxxcx

[onyx cape]

POKENAME’s cannons each have a separate purpose. While one cannon is used to shoot pressurized water, the other shoots a dangerous toxin that takes effect shortly after touching an opponents skin.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME's cannons each serve a different purpose. While one cannon shoots pressurized water, the other sprays a caustic toxin that slowly melts through skin, fur, and scales.

[dapper patio]

Fine how it is although yeah the toxin's effects would be nice to elaborate on

[onyx cape]

Wanted to avoid corrosive since nidoking only ever has venom that I know of, which needs to enter blood like a bite or a horn and I couldn’t find an instance of acid. I didn’t look that hard though.

[dapper patio]

Doesn't have to be corrosive but just say what it does yeah

Unrelated but
Perfectly aligned.
As all things should be.

[onyx cape]

POKENAME’s cannons each have a separate purpose. While one cannon is used to shoot pressurized water, the other shoots a dangerous toxin that takes effect shortly after touching an opponents skin, causing fatigue and burning or itching sensations .

[rich goblet]

Why doesn't it take effect right away?

[dapper patio]

Poison needs to seep into the skin to start doing stuff which it can't do instantly if we're going by real-world phsyics

[thorn ingot]

I have a question about my Rayquaza/necrozma dex entry that was denied. It states the deny reason is that alternate dimensions don’t exist, yet on Necrozma’s Poke Page, it directly states about alternate dimensions existing.

[dapper patio]

What exactly did the entry say?

[onyx cape]

Did it mention any specific dimensions not stated in Pokemon already or just “dimensions”

[thorn ingot]

It states “the realm unseen” (also talked about in the Necrozma Poke Page as an actual thing) and then the alternate dimensions in general

[rich goblet]

Make a post in #custom-dex-errors for me

[thorn ingot]

Done

[onyx cape]

So this is good? Ready?

[rich goblet]

Give me a second

[onyx cape]

Ok didnt want to submit early by accident

Again

[rich goblet]

POKENAME’s cannons each have a separate purpose. While one cannon is used to shoot pressurized water, the other shoots a dangerous toxin that takes effect shortly after seeping into its opponent's skin, causing fatigue and a burning itch.

@onyx cape What do you think?

[onyx cape]

Thats good. Now realizing it’s not common knowledge poison isnt instant and it’s stated to elaborate on uncommon knowledge.

Who didn’t know that, im not sure. Never seen anyone. Not even today. Nope. No one.

[rich goblet]

A lot of children admitted get their hands on this game, and most people don't know the distinction between poison and venom

Assume little of those who read entries

[onyx cape]

You have compared yourself to a child?

But yeah all jokes aside not a lot of ppl care abt poison

[dapper patio]

In canon dex entries are basically suposed to be a way of introducing children to a given Pokemon in a quick and efficient way while also being made by professional researchers so they should be written to reflect that

[onyx cape]

Yeah most people DO get them as children.

[rich goblet]

The lorebook has a section on that

[onyx cape]

POKENAME can sleep for days or weeks on end, because the mushrooms on their backs collect nutrients as they rest. When these Pokemon are awake, although they don’t move much, they have an abundance of energy they’ll likely use finding roots to eat.

[onyx cape]

Slipped my mind

[rich goblet]

You need to include the Pokémon é when writing entries, just so you know.

[onyx cape]

Dam really? Im so sorry. I’ll try and find it.

[rich goblet]

I've come across it multiple times so I figure this is the best time to mention it

[onyx cape]

i only know how to do it on phone so lucky Im on it rn

[thorn ingot]

Copy and paste it from the form

[rich goblet]

That is perfectly valid yeah

[onyx cape]

POKENAME can sleep for days or weeks on end, because the mushrooms on their backs collect nutrients as they rest. When these Pokémon are awake, although they don’t move much, they have an abundance of energy they’ll likely use finding roots to eat.

[onyx cape]

Like that or POKENAME as well?

[rich goblet]

Just Pokémon

<@&1210701164426039366>

Can someone help me fix the grammar on this entry?

#dex-entries-discussion message

[ebon warren]

So many dependent clauses...
Ok first of all, I'm on my phone, that appears to be over the character limit

[onyx cape]

I checked it is just barely allowed

[onyx cape]

It flags the entry otherwise in the form and it doesn’t seem to be

Also finding roots can be changed to “to find roots”

[hollow nimbus]

For the first correction, just remove the comma from the first sentence.
The clause that begins with because is a dependent clause, which makes that first sentence complex, not compound. When the dependent clause in a complex sentence is at the end, you do not need a comma separating it.

For the next correction, replace although with though. For whatever reason, the word although is only typically used at the starts and ends of sentences. The word though is able to interrupt a sentence like that.

This is not a required change, but I suggest removing the word likely. It's not a stretch to imagine a Pokémon searching for roots, so you don't need to hedge your bet.

[onyx cape]

I say likely like that because it’s supposed to be “you have so much energy and THAT is what it does with it”

[hollow nimbus]

I also suggest changing they'll use finding roots to they'll use for finding roots or they'll use to find roots to avoid any ambiguity around the tense

[onyx cape]

Does that make any sense?

[onyx cape]

Yeah I did “to find”

[hollow nimbus]

In that case, you would want a word that expresses that sort of astonishment. Using likely means that there's a chance it won't use the energy for that, so there is some uncertainty about what action it will take.

I do have one small question about the content. If the Pokémon don't move much, how is it that they energetically search?

[onyx cape]

You can’t ever be certain about what a conscious creature will do

[onyx cape]

And I mean they do it and that’s all they do for a long time

[hollow nimbus]

No, but you don't need to state your uncertainty all the time

[onyx cape]

Fair.

[hollow nimbus]

People don't say, "That bird might migrate this year. Maybe other birds will want to migrate with it. They might travel together."

[onyx cape]

Yes another of these species can choose different or they can do different that day

[hollow nimbus]

The Pokédex is a field guide that describes behaviors, not individual actions, anyways

[onyx cape]

Whereas migration is an instinct

But I’ll change it. Done.

[hollow nimbus]

Make sure you state that in the entry, or people won't know that

[onyx cape]

POKENAME have large amounts of energy because they gather nutrients with the fungi on their backs. However, they only use this energy to eat for days at a time, before sleeping just as long.

[hollow nimbus]

Looks good; the only change I'd suggest is to move however to the start of your sentence so you don't have to interrupt yourself like that

[hexed fog]

I am going in

[hexed fog]

Noise List is up

[hexed fog]

Negativity List is up

[ebon warren]

Apologies, had a small emergency at home and ended up working from home today to manage it, so I got pulled away

[onyx cape]

All gud

[jagged ledge]

What happened to the Noise List?

[hexed fog]

[dapper patio]

What's the Noise List?

[jagged ledge]

https://tenor.com/view/otter-gaslight-caption-cute-animal-gif-2304850838163988974

[hexed fog]

It was Whismur

It isnt anymore

[jagged ledge]

Pain

[wispy swan]

someone please help me find better sprites for these triple fusions

caus these are ugly

[storm light]

1. This is not the channel for that
2. I understand these sprites are not to your liking, but calling them ugly is disrespectful to the artist that drew them in the first place, completely for free and our enjoyment may i add. You can absolutely give constructive criticism, but simply calling them 'ugly' is not helpful

[hearty sun]

3. The triple doesn't even exist in the game

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/venusaur+grimer/
Although the tree-like structure on POKENAME's back sometimes cannot maintain its shape, its light-absorbing ability always works. POKENAME's foul-smelling odor is only temporarily alleviated in sunlight.

[hexed fog]

God this thing looks like it's constantly in pain and I love it

Reminds me of me at work

[fading shale]

POKENAME can use its wings like paddles to navigate the ocean. The spiral on its belly absorbs energy from the ocean currents and turns it into electricity, strengthening the tail which it uses to propel itself.

The spiral on POKENAME´s belly can absorb the kinetic energy of waves and store it in its fists. If it reaches the maximum charge, a single blow can get as strong as a small tsunami.

The belly of POKENAME can sense even the slightest change in a water current. It uses those senses to line up its attacks with the flow of water, enhancing its speed and strength.

[hexed fog]

@winter horizon before submitting future entries please get your submissions reviewed here first 🙂 Just so you're aware of what we are looking for

**The 23MAY2026 Dex Update has been sent. Please allow it some time to activate. You don't need to manually update it will happen automatically as you open the game.

As a reminder, we have a current 'Focus List' that we are prioritizing. These Pokémon can be found in the following tab:

Negativity List**

[quaint turret]

not me always checking my sprites for entries knowing the chance is infinantly small

[rich goblet]

https://www.infinitedummies.fr/pages/entries_spriter.html

@quaint turret insert your username under artist

Should show up

[storm light]

Also have to wait for the fusiondex website to update

[fading shale]

are u using my dex entries as community votes???

[rich goblet]

Perhaps

[fading shale]

so mean

im doing my best xd

[quaint turret]

i dont need to do that i just go to my artist page on the fusion dex. i meant i check every izik update for new ones knowing the chance is tiny

[rich goblet]

Oooooh

Okay my bad

[winter horizon]

i probably should have read that earlier because i just just just submitted another one #oops #myapologiesoriginalgangster

[quaint turret]

is ok

i need a channel for "beg for dex entries"

[fading shale]

why

[hexed fog]

Post your sprite and a link to the fusiondex page and people will def do it

[quaint turret]

https://fusiondex.org/artists/qinshanu/
id take any of them XD except 154.441a cause i put in a delete request
it just makes me so excited to see people making them for things i made
its crazy

[storm light]

You can also write an entry yourself and it will be prioritized

[hexed fog]

oh i mean like the image of the sprite

hmm like this:

[quaint turret]

im not posting 10 sprites to the channel XD

[quaint turret]

im an awful writer id have to constantly have things reqritten to make sense

[fading shale]

i still need feefback to mine btw

[hexed fog]

Can you guys write an entry for this one?
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/126.87/

Then all they have to do is click

[quaint turret]

i guess i can pick one that i really want

[hexed fog]

if you see an emote under it from an unown just post 🙂

we can fix minor issues

[fading shale]

u posted yes no under it

im unsure XD

wait no

wildheart u bingus

[quaint turret]

https://fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/295.147/ i love my little ghost creature

[hexed fog]

Wildheart y

[fading shale]

u said yes so imma post

XD

[hexed fog]

done

POKENAME slithers between kelp growing off sunken vessels in the ocean depths. Should it be spotted, it releases a ghastly wail that many claim are the cries of those who perished during the ship's sinking.

[quaint turret]

beatifuel

ill spell that right one day

[hexed fog]

feel free to do this whenever you want. just try to do one at a time to avoid the chat spamming

[severe scroll]

Magong (126.87)
POKENAME are found living in and around magma pools surrounding northern volcanos. These Pokémon have thick, fire resistant fat that allows them to swim in the boiling lava lakes as well as the ice bound waters of the north.

I tried. lol

[dapper patio]

Perhaps substitute the or for as well as to make it totally clear that it is capable of both things
Otherwise, great entry

[severe scroll]

Torchans (279.23)
POKENAME keeps their eggs warm by gently breathing fire over the shells. When a predator approaches their nest, POKENAME will hiss as a warning before attacking if the foe does not leave.

Archic (24.279)
POKENAME uses tall grass to hide, then pops out to scare their targets. When in danger, these Pokémon attack by spitting heated poison and biting with their sharp fangs.

⤴️

These are two more entries. I wrote them during my friend's graduation while I was waiting for it to start.

[dapper patio]

Using your time wisely I see

[severe scroll]

Always!

[dapper patio]

A perfect accident

[severe scroll]

Warbusken (8.280)
The feathers that make up POKENAME's tail are super soft and well maintained, so they are highly sought after by craftsmen. Pillows and clothes that use POKENAME's feathers are extremely popular online.

[dapper patio]

Consider "...maintained, so they are highly sought after..."

[narrow spear]

Why do people say POKENAME??

[severe scroll]

It's a placeholder

[narrow spear]

Oh

[severe scroll]

The game auto changes it to match the actual name

[strong flame]

everyone is really uncreative with nicknames

[winter horizon]

this was character-checked so it should be fine on that end

Golduck (55.55, self-fusion)
POKENAME's psychic prowess is a true sight to behold, even if their lack of eyes prevents them from seeing that for themselves. They use their psychically strengthened face-gem to adapt, sense, and navigate a world without vision.

[narrow spear]

Cool

[severe scroll]

I would take out the Two Golducks fused, part.

[dapper patio]

Themself should be themselves

[winter horizon]

i did think about that since it doesn't seem like anyone else mentions who's part of them

[winter horizon]

had that too and then thought "yeaaah but what if they're just talking about an individual?" but that makes sense

edited

[dapper patio]

I've referred to components of the fusion before so it's not wrong but in this case I think that info is a tad redundant

[severe scroll]

It needs to keep the same plurl.

Singular (it, this) and Many (they, these)

[winter horizon]

they can be both

plural they makes more sense in this context though

[severe scroll]

I don't think this is the same as what freezerburnz did. You mentioned the appearance resembling Kirlia and woven with Silcoon's silk. This isn't an explicit "these two Pokémon are fused" wording, it's a comparison.

[dapper patio]

fair enough

[severe scroll]

@winter horizon One more thing, don't forget, if you use the word "Pokémon", you will need to include the é with the accent mark.

[winter horizon]

oh yeah

[dapper patio]

Smearizard 235.6
POKENAME uses the insides of its wings as paint palettes and its tail as a brush. This Pokémon typically prefers illustrating action-focused pieces, usually depictions of the more spectacular battles it has witnessed or participated in.

[severe scroll]

Comrow (280.21a)
POKENAME is confident, yet polite, and enjoys sparring with those of greater strength. This Pokémon uses its beak and the talons on its wings to attack. In a pinch, POKENAME can remove the feather on its head and throw it like a dagger.

[dapper patio]

*sparring
Also consider "...uses its beak and the talons on its wings to attack."

[severe scroll]

Thank you. That wording was getting to me.

[dapper patio]

You're welcome

[severe scroll]

Comrow (280.21)
This confident Pokémon is up for any challenge. While POKENAME cannot fly for long periods of time, that amount of airtime gives its maneuverability a large boost in combat. The claws on its wings can be heated to cut through foes with ease.

[dapper patio]

Consider "This confident Pokémon is up for any challenge. While POKENAME cannot fly for long periods of time, that amount of airtime gives its maneuverability a large boost in combat. The claws on its wings can be heat to cut through foes with ease."
You may have to shorten this but I the phrasing needed some work

[severe scroll]

Yeah. I'm fairly creative, but the structure is my weakness

[dapper patio]

All good

[severe scroll]

Blarow (281.22)
After jumping into the air with its powerful legs, the wings on POKENAME's arms and the back of its head help it position and glide itself to a designated point. When badly injured, its feathers will ignite and its fiery attacks become boosted.

[dapper patio]

k I gtg bye

[severe scroll]

[severe scroll]

Loun (496.532)
POKENAME emit electric currents to sense nearby allies while swimming. When two approach each other too closely, the negative charges in their bodies repel one another automatically. Thankfully, these Pokémon can control this ability.

I wish I could call this Pokémon "Dividun"

[severe scroll]

POKENAME has the unique ability to divide an opponent's electrical levels in half, weaking that Pokémon's attacks. However, because of this ability, POKENAME has a hard time making friends with other Electric-type Pokémon.

[severe scroll]

@hollow quartz I created the opposite of your Plusle entry!

Multisle

Torchun (279.532)
When POKENAME ruffles its feathers together, static electricity builds up and stores itself inside this Pokémon's warm body. When a person touches POKENAME and gets shocked by the static, it will jump and cry out in surprise.

[rich goblet]

cute

[dapper patio]

Say "static electricity" instead of "an electrical static"

[muted wraith]

there's another self fusion for plusle and minun and they are mains.

[severe scroll]

Mawun (300.532)
POKENAME's cute appearance draws in foes before tilting its head down, letting its two ears snap together, biting down on the opponent. POKENAME loves cheering on its friends, but will hold a grudge if that friendship is betrayed.

[muted wraith]

These guys.

[severe scroll]

Indeed! They are very well done! But Plusle's scares me...

Amazing work!

Plusle (531.531a)
The overwhelming positive electricity stored within POKENAME has driven it feral. It reacts violently toward any friend that fails to acknowledge its enthusiastic cheering.

Minun (532.532a)
The overwhelming negative electricity stored within POKENAME has made it surprisingly optimistic. It attempts to comfort upset Pokémon by rubbing against them, though this often results in an electric shock.

[severe scroll]

How are these entries?

[winter horizon]

redoing this one too

Hawlucha (456.456a, self-fusion)

Though they wrestle a more heavyweight style, these Hawlucha's high flying moves are just as effective as the rest of their species, if not more-so. Their aerial skills, despite their bulk, earn them much respect from other Hawlucha.

[finite salmon]

Self fusion?

[winter horizon]

i know "wrestle a more heavyweight style" is a little reliant on knowing wrestling weight classes but when you have a luchador pokemon it's not that crazy to lean into that to some extent

[winter horizon]

oh yeah i forgot to include the number mb

edited to include number and components

[muted wraith]

The line "make no mistake;" is so off-tone for a dex entry.

So probably is "If not more-so"

[rich goblet]

As a reminder, the Pokédex is like an academic tool, so treat entries professionally

[winter horizon]

i was having a hard time trying to actually figure out how to end that part of it without having it sound awkward

i'll axe part of the first line cause i'm realizing it's redundant

[winter horizon]

i was really hurting for character space while making the entry and then it's just like wow it's almost like there's 3 words in there that don't really add a whole lot and could be removed while still making sense

[winter horizon]

trimmed up.. how about:
"Though they wrestle a heavyweight style, these POKENAME's high-flying moves can prove even more effective than the rest of their species. Their aerial skills, in spite of their bulk, earn them great admiration from other Hawlucha."

[storm light]

Replace the first Hawlucha with POKENAME, the game will automatically replace it with the fusion name

[winter horizon]

🫡

[frosty snow]

Entry for Gooraid, 444.223.png (goomy/remoraid)

POKENAME makes excellent use of its natural elasticity by being able to expand its mouth to truly ridiculous proportions. This allows them to not only swallow exceptionally large prey but also as fire extremely large and forceful blasts of water.

[valid hazel]

You know; for a combination of two dex entires this is a surprisingly scary entry

[unborn notch]

What mon even is that?

[valid hazel]

Empoleon+Bewear

[Surprisingly good fusion, Empoleon gets to be the bulky physical attacker gamefreak always wanted to be with it's access to Swords Dance and surprisingly physical movepool; while also having access to both Fluffy for bulk and Defiant. Normal/Steel and Water/Fighting are both good types too]

[hexed fog]

You may be in the wrong chat 🙂 this is for writing dex entries

[quaint turret]

was answering mr persons question about which fusion was in that dex description

[hexed fog]

OHHHHHHHHHH

please forgive, my brain is so scattered today

[severe scroll]

Back to the Minun list

[hexed fog]

@frosty snow please dont caps your name on your entries 🙂

[severe scroll]

Zigun (504.532)
POKENAME's electricity can only shoot out in zig-zag patterns. Using its impressive nose, it can sniff out positively charged energy in objects and Pokémon.

[rich goblet]

I think positively charged energy is the correct term

I'm confused, it marks its territory and helps itself find it way back home?

[severe scroll]

Yeah, for when it gets lost, it's like "Oh! This is my smell so my home is nearby!"

Let me change it a bit.

Okay, how does that sound?

.... wait...

I'm dumb...

I'm writing an entry for the wrong dang fusion...

f...

[rich goblet]

Hey if you caught it means that you got to it before I did

Which means you're able to learn on your own

[severe scroll]

I was thinking of Zigzagoon/Surskit... -w-

Zanun (542.532)
POKENAME has a negative attitude towards most people and Pokémon, only cheering on those it considers its closest friends. POKENAME will not hesitate to turn its cheers into violence, especially towards those who resemble a Seviper.

[rich goblet]

Perhaps you could say something like

"POKENAME will not hesitate to turn its cheers into violence, especially towards those who resemble a Seviper."

The resemblance bit removes the redunancy of fused/unfused and it also allows room for illusions

[severe scroll]

Thank you! I'll probably utilize this in the future as well.

Surun (518.532)
Finding a partner with a positive charge, POKENAME will skate on the water with them in perfect synchronicity. The antenna on its head will discharge electricity when it is on the water to avoid harming those in close proximity.

[rich goblet]

Does the Pokémon already have a partner or is it finding one? I'm confused

[severe scroll]

It's finding one. Kind of like dancing. You might not always have the same dance partner, but you both still move together.

[rich goblet]

Maybe you could say something like

"To find a partner with a positive charge, POKENAME engages in a dance with potential partners by skating across water, hoping to achieve perfect synchronicity."

Something like that?

[severe scroll]

Ooo! That's nice!

However, I now have too many characters for the second line, even after trimming it down.

To find a partner with a positive charge, POKENAME engages in a dance with potential partners by skating across water, hoping to achieve perfect synchronicity. POKENAME sparks across the water while skating to discharge excess energy.

I might just remove it.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME sparks across the water while skating to discharge excess energy.

Try that

[severe scroll]

Better

[severe scroll]

@fading shale https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/350.532/
This guy needs some entries!

[fading shale]

So many zekroms...
So little time...

[fading shale]

Many shall know my blessing

Il write some after my movie

[severe scroll]

omg, i just found this sprite...

[fading shale]

Lmao ok thats cool

[severe scroll]

This has to be a reference to something

[fading shale]

It looks the cube from gravity falls

[severe scroll]

Phantun (438.532)
This shy Pokémon quietly watches other Pokémon from a distance, silently cheering them on with electrical flashes from its hands. POKENAME considers these Pokémon their friends and will follow them around, wordlessly encouraging them.

Oriun (432.532)
When POKENAME dances, the ruffling of its leaf-like outfit generates static electricity and creates sparks. These sparks add a dazzling effect to POKENAME's performance that draws in onlookers.

@hexed fog How many more lists of Pokémon do you have that need to be done for this 'mysterious reason'?

[jagged ledge]

Yes