dex-entries-discussion

[halcyon yacht]

More than likely something with it's kicks

But the mushroom isnt highlighted any less here than in mines

[dull folio]

I meant kicks lol

[halcyon yacht]

Hitmonlee gets removed by name and it flows better

Still talks about the control of the parasite in the fusion primarily

I do like that part though

[dull folio]

True

Maybe put that as the second sentence, have the primary subject be it's fighting style with it's pinsir kicks

Just restructure a little

[halcyon yacht]

POKENAME uses its sharp pinsirs along with lightning fast kicks to overwhelm most targets. Due to its reckless nature the parasite often takes over influencing its actions to avoid threats.

[dull folio]

I like that

[halcyon yacht]

This has the parasite in a forced compliance to stop the hitmonlee from killing itself while being reckless so it can still spread spores

[dull folio]

Makes sense to me smart parasite

References all aspects and the parasite is secondary, good job

Actually just take the however out altogether, the comma links the nature to parasite

[halcyon yacht]

Bump

[dull folio]

Just take the however out, and also put a comma before influenceing

Then it's perfect

[halcyon yacht]

Thought I did whoops

[dull folio]

All good

[halcyon yacht]

I did in the bumped post

[dull folio]

Must be slow loading ig

[halcyon yacht]

POKENAME uses its sharp pincers along with lightning fast kicks to overwhelm most targets. Due to its reckless nature the parasite often takes over, influencing its actions to avoid threats.

Resent it here to make sure

Now for the one I really didnt want to do. Clefable-Forretress

[dull folio]

Pincers

You spelt it like the pokemon lmao

[halcyon yacht]

Did I really spell out the fking pokemon's name

Oml

The lack of sleep is getting to me

[dull folio]

Apart from that it looks good to me

[dull folio]

Bro it's half 1 in the morning for me rn I'm submitting my entry then I'll be off

[midnight siren]

same

[dull folio]

Where'd you come from I thought you were gone

[midnight siren]

I was just in a different channel

[floral crow]

wait what the heck Dragon Hunter's entry is being used as an example for the class

that ALSO puts pressure on this one

I can't win lol

[midnight siren]

I forgot that was pinned there

[midnight siren]

genuinely don’t stress too much about it, no pressure

[dull folio]

Is this dexdoku or a different event lmao

[midnight siren]

personally I really like having the Tochukaso mentioned by name where possible, so I’d swap that in for “parasite”

def personal preference tho

[midnight siren]

a trade from a different event

[dull folio]

?

[halcyon yacht]

36.205 - Cleftress

During the day it's shell closes shut, impossible to open or damage. At night POKENAME emerges to feast on sleeping prey. If spotted it will violently spin while spraying metal shards that tear through steel and concrete.

[midnight siren]

I gave them event info, they make 2 dex requests

[dull folio]

Ahhh

[halcyon yacht]

Not sure if many people would understand that the parasite itself is the Tochukaso

[dull folio]

I certainly would not lol

[midnight siren]

the parasitic part is the mushroom

[dull folio]

Closes shut, being impossible to break or open

Makes more sense

[midnight siren]

so I just like referring to it by name

[dull folio]

The rest of the entry looks good to me

[halcyon yacht]

Well with that my team is donezo and semi-approved lol

[midnight siren]

yea, no stress on adding it in, its just a personally preference

[halcyon yacht]

I'll submit them all and hope they get in

[floral crow]

203.462 Girarorus
POKENAME uses its twin heads to improve its vision in harsh blizzards. During calmer weather, the veil along its neck will react to strong emotions nearby.

thoughts on entry 1

[halcyon yacht]

What does it do when it senses strong emotions?

Someone give me a fusion to make an entry for

[dull folio]

But if you wanted to shorten it you could change 3 sentences into 2, putting the 2nd sentence followed by, spinning wildly and firing off metal shards if spotted

[floral crow]

whatever veils do i suppose?

[dull folio]

I like it

[floral crow]

flutter? wave?

might depend on the emotion

[halcyon yacht]

I was just asking to know lol

[floral crow]

or the girarorus

oh okay

[dull folio]

Okay I really need to get going I need sleep

[midnight siren]

uhhhh this lad https://www.fusiondex.org/289.214/

[dull folio]

What a lad

[midnight siren]

gn!

I’ve just got a bit of feedback then I’ll be doing the same

[halcyon yacht]

"They gather in forests seeking the sweet sap of trees. A peculiar Pokémon that floats in air even though its wings remain completely still."

Is this not it already?

[midnight siren]

na, that’s the auto spliced one

[halcyon yacht]

Ah alright

Hmm

[midnight siren]

personally I would use “frill” over “veil”. instead of saying “react” maybe lean into the aurora part? e.g. “the frill along its neck will change colour in response to strong emotions it senses nearby”

oh also frill/veil (whichever you wanna use) should be plural, aurorus has two separate frills

and with that I shall take my leave, gn y’all

[floral crow]

wait before you go how's this for Magpius
Though they appear similar to the magma its body is composed of, the peppers on POKENAME's chin are indeed edible: but they are far too spicy for most Trainer's palettes.

[halcyon yacht]

289.214 - Shedcross

POKENAME tends not to fight but instead flee by using the crack on the back of it's shell as a deterrent. Nobody knows why it does this or why predators stop chasing when it does, though.

Aye that's a bit too long

Removed that first sentence

[midnight siren]

I’d just use a comma over a colon tbh. I’d also suggest adding a second sentence, but that’s not 100% necessary

[floral crow]

would a comma not creat a run-on there

I think I can fit a second sentence under the character count

[halcyon yacht]

Who's next?

This is fun

[vivid spire]

Here’s a fun one… Gasroc!

#92.465: Some say if anyone touches POKENAME's ectoplasmic mane, they will be tormented by restless spirits. Worse yet any who touch it will endure a crushing Shadow Claw.

[halcyon yacht]

Gastly?

[vivid spire]

Side note, why does this sprite go SO HARD! Indeed Gastly and midnight Lycanroc

[halcyon yacht]

Lycan has good ones

[midnight siren]

maybe, I’ll have another look in the morning if no one else has, I may just be tired lol

[halcyon yacht]

Lycan and minior have some of the cleanest sprites

[floral crow]

no need, I have circumvented the issue

Despite appearances, the peppers on POKENAME's chin are indeed edible. However, they are much too spicy for most trainer's palettes. Its fluid-like nature allows POKENAME's neck to stretch out over twice its body length.

well actually

Despite appearances, the peppers on POKENAME's chin are indeed edible. However, they are much too spicy for most trainer's palettes. The fluid-like nature of POKENAME's neck allows it to stretch out over twice its body length.

better phrasing

the T in trainers should also be capitalized looking back over things

[halcyon yacht]

Might do a solo run of some of one of these mons

[floral crow]

what accounts for a solo run like literally 1 pokemon or all fusions include 1 pokemon

[halcyon yacht]

Probably just 1 fusion

Like Absol/Porygon I really like

[floral crow]

you should do a dhelmise/absol run and I'm not biased at all

[halcyon yacht]

I hate when the custom sprites have the objectively worse stats than the reverse fusion making it so bad to use

[floral crow]

at least we can choose more abilities now

makes those ones more viable

[halcyon yacht]

Ghost dark with steelworker sounds niceee

[floral crow]

that's the whole plan yeeep

[halcyon yacht]

453.310 - Dhelsol

This Pokémon is often seen accompanying sailors to help track storms. POKENAME's cries alert the crew of bad storms brewing and the direction they will start.

[vivid spire]

That’s good

One more for the beautiful Staroc Sprite:

#121.465: Often found protecting coral reefs, POKENAME are only visible due to their glowing gems. On clear nights, they swim to the surface, challenging any who cross their path.

[halcyon yacht]

I feel there should be some mons that reference others in their dex entries

[vivid spire]

There are some entries that mention, for example, Pokemon others hunt or protect. But the general rule is each entry has to stand alone. Someone might
catch the evolution in the wild and won’t have the original Dex entry for extra information

[halcyon yacht]

I meant for fusion-dex moreso

[vivid spire]

As in mentioning other fusions in the dex entries or mentioning the rest of the evolutionary line?

[floral crow]

wait epic

[halcyon yacht]

222.140 - Corto

POKENAME has a hard shell that seves to protect it from most predators. Against the biggest predators they are seen huddled under a Staroc who defends them from remaining threats.

Stuff like this which ties together the universe more

If staroc is the guardian of the coral reefs then corsola and fusions being seen with them makes sense

[vivid spire]

I personally like it, however the bigger problem we run into is the fusion names. Staroc is both Staryu/Lycanroc and Starmie/Lycanroc.

[halcyon yacht]

Then starmie could be a rising staroc who protects smaller critters from smaller threats

[vivid spire]

Again, I agree tying the world together as you suggested in the Dex makes sense, however a Unown would need to make a ruling on if it could be included

[halcyon yacht]

That makes sense

[hollow nimbus]

There's no problem with saying that different fusion species work together. If this entry was submitted, the 'Staroc' part would be left in. However, we like to encourage people to use unfused Pokémon in their entries because players are unlikely to know what every fusion is by the name. As mentioned above, in this case, there are two different species by that name.

Given that the same person is unlikely to read both entries, I wouldn't say that this 'ties the world together more', just that this ties these two species together.

I am curious what tie a Lycanroc fusion has with a Corsola/Kabuto fusion, though. The species seem unrelated, so what is your reasoning for this choice?

-# Lastly, you misspelled serves as 'seves'

[vivid spire]

Okay one late night entry, Ninephox:

#39.484: POKENAME focuses its powerful flame attacks through branches. When one burns down, it uses its sensitive tails to pick up a set. What follows is a test of each until the perfect focus is found.

[halcyon yacht]

The choice comes from the exmaple pokemon Ghost Scythe made. Staroc's pokedex entry, says they're the guardian of the coral reef and corsola being the coral pokemon makes sense to include them. As for Kabuto I was just thinking of small rock types that would probably also be in the area and it was the 2nd thing to come to mind right after shuckle

Ah myb ping

[hollow nimbus]

Well, players won't know that Staroc is a guardian of coral reefs, so my advice is to pick a fusion with a more intuitive connection.

[halcyon yacht]

Who do you suggest?

[hexed socket]

Sylreon:
#197.339: POKENAME is said to appear only during lunar eclipses, when love and shadow align. Its ribbon-like feelers soothe allies while its piercing gaze wards off even the bravest foes.

[hexed fog]

Can you describe what you mean by love and shadow aligning?

Like it sounds edge but what does that actually mean

[vivid spire]

Weekend ideas, Nidoeon:

#31.134: Spending its days by riversides, POKENAME stalks Water types from the shore. When its prey is spotted it uses its powerful hind legs to dive, and finishes them with Quick Attacks as powerful as a waterfall.

One more for Nidotwo:

#31.150 Nidotwo: POKENAME flies with its psychic powers in the daylight, its coloration providing camouflage against sightings. It seeks out toxic spills, absorbing the poison into itself and bringing nature back into equilibrium.

Thoughts?

[vivid spire]

Decided the previous entry I planned just doesn’t sound great. Here is the overhaul for Nidoeon:

Usually found in rivers, POKENAME keeps its body submerged, while keeping its eyes and ears above the surface. Due to its coloration, most will not see it. When prey is spotted it lunges surprisingly fast, landing a venomous bite.

[regal cedar]

442.501

https://cdn.fusiondex.org/cOSP6U9b_4SWjDWhGyJ7Q3sI/dn/pif/442.501.png

"Many birdwatchers love POKENAME, as they fly in the sky in the shape of a heart and chirp lovely, heart-warming melodies. Scientists believe they emit a pheromone that eases those around them."

I'm looking for a word that has a similar meaning to "pheromone" but includes affecting other species.

[vivid spire]

The closest I can think of is either “Scent”, “Aroma”, or “Musk”… but musk is generally unpleasant

Pheromone is probably the best word, pheromones can affect outside the species

[regal cedar]

Can they?

[vivid spire]

Yes, generally speaking the effect is for communication within species, but can cause responses outside the species

For example, human sweat pheromones attract mosquitoes

[last ice]

How does this sound? POKENAME wears a large gear on its back as a shell, heating the inside at high temperatures, making it hollow. It's body is made from past molten gears.

Want to make sure before I post it to gallery

[vivid spire]

I like the creativity, a couple of things;

The first sentence is a run on, one way to fix it would be to make it:

“POKENAME wears a large gear on its back as a shell, heating the inside at high temperatures to make it hollow.”

For the second sentence one improvement I could think of would be instead:

“Its body is made from previous gears that melted through.”

[last ice]

Ah ok

POKENAME wears a large gear on its back as a shell, heating the inside at high temperatures to make it hollow. Its body is made from previous gears that melted through.

Sounds better. Thank you!

[vivid spire]

You’re welcome!

[vivid spire]

Looking for feedback on this third entry, today, Fearcario:

#22.296: Depictions of POKENAME were found in ancient tombs of kings. Due to their ability to read intentions, they were kept close to prevent assassinations. In modern times, they walk forests digging through soil with their staves to control pest populations.

Also thoughts welcomed for Nidoeon and Nidotwo

[meager jetty]

Shikin:
#241.870: POKENAME Sometimes he does not correctly control the thermoelectric energy within his body, causing small clouds of ash loaded with highly electrically conductive particles to emerge.

[hollow tapir]

You gotta use it, can’t do he or anything like that

Also I’m confused why the sometimes is capitalized since you started with POKENAME

[low plume]

Mismagius/Aegislash

I am not sure if I have to wait to be a spriter to ask for dex feedback

#255.329: It is said that the gems surrounding POKENAME are the souls of those who tried to wield it mistaking it for a sword.

[vivid spire]

Good day, @low plume, this thread is for anyone to ask for feedback.

For your entry I like how well the fusion is presented, though be sure it is at least 100 characters.

Requesting feedback as well for Nidocario…. I’m on a Nidoqueen roll today!

#31.296: The auras around POKENAME's horns, and claws are aerosolized poison. Though its movements seem ponderous, one breath is enough to drop a Snorlax.

[low plume]

I wouldn't get too close to one of those

I think the comma between horns and claws is not necessary.

[vivid spire]

Indeed, you caught me using the Oxford comma! It has been eliminated. It just wants a hug

[low plume]

Her first hug and my last one

[midnight siren]

woah, those are some high point words right there

same comment about the comma, other than that i don’t see anything

[vivid spire]

Thank you, I will submit it:

The auras around POKENAME's horns and claws are aerosolized poison. Though its movements seem ponderous, one breath is enough to drop a Snorlax.

Any thoughts you have on Fearcario by chance?

[midnight siren]

hi! welcome to the dex zone

[midnight siren]

mebbe, couldja ping it so I don’t have to search

searching on mobile sucks

[vivid spire]

Bump

[midnight siren]

first thing: I’d change “read intentions” to “read auras”. in luc’ entries aura generally allows for reading of intentions, so it just uses more poke specific language. second thing is a quick rework of the final sentence. I’d change it to be smth like “In modern time, they dig through forest soil with their staves in order to control pest populations”.

[vivid spire]

Perfect, that does sound better than what I currently had

[midnight siren]

why the alert react lol

[vivid spire]

Depictions of POKENAME were found in ancient tombs of kings. Due to their ability to read auras, they were kept close to prevent assassinations. In modern times, they dig through forest soil with their staves in order to control pest populations.

[viscid light]

@midnight siren Thoughts on these? (From this one all the way to the "Knightgambit")
#dex-entries-discussion message

[vivid spire]

Lol it might be my second favorite group emoji

[midnight siren]

I’d remove the “-“ and just make it a full stop tbh. then start sentence 2 w/ “This creates”

as is I think you need to swap the comma before “all apt” into a full stop. I’d then add “These are”

oh also remove the apostrophe after “its”

[vivid spire]

Here’s one I cooked up for Jynphox:

#124.484: Hyper intelligent, POKENAME walk wintery streets, blending in with the crowd with their staves hidden in a poket dimension. When threatened the staff reappears instantaneously and they use Blizzard to cover their escape.

The real question is…. Is it good enough without a Warcraft reference?

[midnight siren]

unfortunately the “____gambit” entries don’t really work as is for approvable dex entries.
this is for a few reasons:

1. the big one: they just aren’t standalone. especially rook/knight. they reference “the chessboard” which is not a pre-established thing in the Pokémon universe: you have to have read other entries to know about ‘em.
2. “Pokémon fans” is ambiguous as to who you mean - us as the players? trainers? scientists?
3. they don’t use any imagery of the fusion material. all of these entries are written as bisharp entries, with very few if any details from the other half.

as much as I would love to try and help you get these entries into an approvable state, that isn’t really possible without cutting out most of the writing done here. unfortunately if you want dex entries for these guys in game, I think you’re going to need to start over. I want to make it clear that the creativity and writing here isn’t inherently bad, just not suitable within the guidelines set out for dex entries.

I’d be happy to help you workshop new ideas for these sprites if you would like

[viscid light]

1. You are indeed correct - they aren't standalone. And with "The Chessboard", it was something I established as a force under the command of Kingambit akin to that of a chessboard
2. Trainers more or less. I was portraying this as "in universe", that various trainers have seen results of these fusions, with those in clubs of other trainers/fans giving them their titles (I tend to write these as a scientist on-field with both studying the fusions' actions within the wild, and from other trainers whom have hands-on experiences)
3. That was the interesting thing - whenever I do fusions with certain Pokemon, I tend to include various behaviors more associated with them. From Mr. Mime/Mime Jr. Fusions (#1201260356182483134 message) actively messing around with the dex entries, Snorunt fusions in a 50/50 chance in a state of sadness, or in Bisharps' case, actively suppressing the other fusion's influences and treating the fusion as a promotion

[midnight siren]

while clarification is useful, as you yourself have agreed they are not standalone and as such cannot be approved into the game as they are

[dull folio]

As a rule of thumb I usually do 1 sentence on 1 part of the pokemon and another sentence on another, I agree with dragon that it is just you talking about bisharp slightly differently in every entry

[viscid light]

Very true

[dull folio]

Also kingambit isn't in this game, so it has to be treated like it doesn't exist. They are cool entries in concept but these won't work sorry

Also yeah just say trainer instead of pokemon fans it's way easier to know what's being talked about lmao

[vivid spire]

Unless if you want to talk of a specific category of Trainers like Poké Maniacs

[dull folio]

You can keep to the themes of chess pieces, like you talk about your sturdy took pokemon as being protective or something to link it to the chess aspect but don't go overboard with it if you're leaning into the chess aspect

[dull folio]

Exactly mention either pokemon trainer or the type of trainer like beauty or rich kids

[midnight siren]

are Pokefans a class in game

[viscid light]

#1201260356182483134 message - #1201260356182483134 message

#fusions message

...I'd say when hasn't that stopped me from including things IF hasn't included yet

[midnight siren]

or is it just pokemaniac

[viscid light]

Yeah, I was not sure at all either

[vivid spire]

Also, it would make more sense to talk about how they interact as the Chess Pieces in a Bisharp colony, because fans are more likely to know that versus the fusions

[vivid spire]

I believe just Pokémamiac though there is a Pokémon fan club in game

[dull folio]

That's an off handed reference to a region, this is a direct reference to a not included pokemon

[midnight siren]

fair enough

[viscid light]

That makes sense...given how'd I made these dex entries in a brief moment of being awake before crashing back to bed.

[dull folio]

No there's definitely pokefans I remember them, like that kid in the sword and shield battle tower wearing the Pikachu onesie

[viscid light]

This is what I was worried about

[midnight siren]

I haven’t played SWSH in years, I can’t remember any of it

[vivid spire]

Might’ve changed in newer generations…. I believe Pokéfans replaced Pokémaniacs because the OG sprite was creepy

[midnight siren]

I live in Galar, so I don’t need to play a game based around it

[dull folio]

I just remember it because the kid said something crazy like I've not eaten or slept in days training for this battle I saw some memes about it recently

[dull folio]

Also live in galar

It's 1:20 we need to sleep lmao

[regal cedar]

will ask one more time to see if anyone else has opinions

[midnight siren]

either way, I hope that you can see what the issues are with them and why we wouldn’t be able to approve them without major edits.

[vivid spire]

To reiterate what @midnight siren said, for being at the fatigued state the writing is great

[midnight siren]

I’ll give it a quick looksy

[dull folio]

Honestly instead of pheromone you could just say scent, it's basically what a pheromone is

Apart from that the entry looks good to me I like it

[midnight siren]

personally I’d go “calms” or “relaxes” over “eases”, but that’s just personal preference. I don’t see any issues with it

[vivid spire]

Asking for feedback once more…. Does it sound good?

[midnight siren]

I meant to respond to that

I’ll look at it again and remind myself of what I was going to say

[dull folio]

Spelt pocket wrong

[vivid spire]

Dang it!

[dull folio]

Lol

[vivid spire]

Never write while waiting at a drive thru, lol

[midnight siren]

stave /= staff

[dull folio]

I'd say blending into the crowd, then your not repeating with twice in a row

[midnight siren]

I would switch “staff” to “stave” for consistency

[dull folio]

Then put a comma after when threatened

After that it looks good

[midnight siren]

as stave is more inherently magical

[dull folio]

Yeah the crystal gives it vibes

That is a cool sprite though props to whoever made that

[midnight siren]

I do love bringing out the word stave tho, it aids in the mystical vibe

[dull folio]

Stave is just a cool word

[vivid spire]

Hyper intelligent, POKENAME walk wintery streets, blending into the crowd with their stave hidden in a pocket dimension. When threatened, the stave reappears instantaneously and they use Blizzard to cover their escape.

Seriously, 90% of my entries are I saw a sprite and thought, dannng I have to write something about that

[dull folio]

That should be in iziks next diction dex give us stave

[midnight siren]

well if the entry gets approved it doesnt need to be

[dull folio]

Id put using blizzard to cover their escape

[regal cedar]

Hmm, Pokémon that are in PIF that can manipulate memory..

[vivid spire]

Hyper intelligent, POKENAME walk wintery streets, blending into the crowd with their stave hidden in a pocket dimension. When threatened, the stave reappears instantaneously and using Blizzard to cover their escape.

Thank you both for your help! From someone who wishes he was in Galar

[dull folio]

At this point I just scroll through the fusion dex and pick the first pokemon i see

And just pray it's not porygon

[midnight siren]

np!

[dull folio]

Any time bro

[midnight siren]

tbh I mostly write dex entries for events/as trades to other people/event prizes

[dull folio]

Tha remind me wildheart still owes me a dex entry for ther dexdoku I won ages ago lmao

[vivid spire]

I love writing, used to dabble in WH40k Fanfiction. Using these to reignite my passion for writing

[midnight siren]

WAIT THERES A PRIZE FOR DEXDOKU????

[dull folio]

I'll make him do a porygon one

[midnight siren]

???????

I genuinely never noticed

[dull folio]

Yeah wildheart writes an entry for a fusion of you choice

[dull folio]

Im a high school student using this to develop my writing and it's weirdly kinda working

[midnight siren]

similar to me tbh, used to love it, had a really bad teacher yr 2, hated it till like y11 and then started writing short stories/fanfic, wrote a couple pantos w/ my mum lol and am now working on my book and a game script

[midnight siren]

I mean it makes sense - you’re looking over peoples work for how to improve it and that helps your work improve cause you know what to improve!

[vivid spire]

I lost my passion writing scripts for a YouTuber, so these short almost scientific blurbs really help me to get out of narrator mode

[midnight siren]

I have no idea what counts as high school

I work on Primary, Secondary, 6th form/college, uni

[dull folio]

Im 15, starting GCSEs next year I've just left year 10

[dull folio]

Secondary

[midnight siren]

ahhhhhh, fun times ahead for you then

[dull folio]

I work on the same I just call secondary high school

[midnight siren]

I don’t gotta learn anymore

[dull folio]

Lucky guy

[midnight siren]

I teach now

[dull folio]

Oh damn you an english teacher is that where you got all the grammar from?

[midnight siren]

nope, I’m a computer scientist

[dull folio]

Ahhh

Fair enough

[midnight siren]

the wrong kind of grammar completely

semicolons my love

[dull folio]

I mean computer grammar is close enough

[vivid spire]

Programming grammar 😅

Think that’d make you a shoe in to write Porygon entries

[dull folio]

I've never been massiv on computer science I took media studies instead, other side of computing

[midnight siren]

Console.WriteLine(“True”);

[midnight siren]

don’t make me write for porygon

[vivid spire]

I won’t curse you with that

[midnight siren]

fair enough, I know a few media people

[dull folio]

Just write a bunch of lines of code and call it a day for porygon

[midnight siren]

I’m already cursed with being English

[dull folio]

I just took it to get into film later on, I'm not too interested in half the course lmao

[dull folio]

Classic galar mindset

[vivid spire]

On the other side of Unova here… yes English is a curse

[midnight siren]

anyways, its late and I need to be up early tomorrow, imma bounce now

[vivid spire]

Have a good night! Thanks for the help

[dull folio]

Was just about to say the same lol

[midnight siren]

gn

[dull folio]

Night everyone

[vivid spire]

Good Night!

[midnight siren]

no stress lad, that’s what I’m here for

[dull folio]

Yeah he's the teacher

[craggy beacon]

nerrddd

[hollow tapir]

Lemme fix that for you
nerrddd /pos

[craggy beacon]

No

Im a taunting figure

I determine my tone through my brainwaves

[vivid spire]

Feedback needed on Gardephox:

#287.484: The globe on POKENAME's stave is pure psychic energy, that if unleashed would warp reality. It maintains constant focus, only unleashing the power in spurts of Psywaves or channeling fire from thin air.

[craggy beacon]

is stave the right word here? i'd use "staff"

[vivid spire]

Staff is equally as valid, stave sounds more magical. I think I agree that Staff fits better with this description

[viscid light]

Thanks - Given that my sleeping patterns' still fucked, I at least tried my best

[vivid spire]

One late night idea for Porycario:

#275.296: When POKENAME passes by electronics, it leeches the electricity to add to its aura. If it builds this charge too long, it releases a localized Electric Magnetic Pulse which phases the Pokémon into cyberspace.

[regal cedar]

why is Electric Magnetic Pulse capitalized?

[halcyon yacht]

EM-

[halcyon yacht]

Someone give me a random fusion to write about

[vivid spire]

Always thought it needed to be due to being an acronym (EMP)

Oh my, looking it up, electromagnetic is one word, and you’re right, it should not be capitalized

[vivid spire]

Try one for Arcanine/Lurantis… the sprite looks so cool, but I couldn’t think of how to incorporate it together

[vivid spire]

Early morning entry, Doubxen:

#328.483: POKENAME weaves complex attack patterns with its blades. One is used as a flame focus burning at over five thousand degrees. The other stays sheathed and is used to defend against counter attacks.

[vivid spire]

Correction on Porycario’s entry:

When POKENAME passes by electronics, it leeches the electricity to add to its aura. If it builds this charge too long, it releases a localized electromagnetic pulse which phases the Pokémon into cyberspace.

[halcyon yacht]

477.59 - Luranine

POKENAME is renowned for its great mane, which is notoriously difficult to maintain. It is said that brushing it blesses you with increased cultivation and floral growth.

Lurantis and Arcanine are both stated to be proud of their looks and beauty so tying that into the fusion of the two makes sense

I have an entire story on this mon already but keeping it short is the hard part

[vivid spire]

That makes sense.

I do like the way you have fused that in the entry, but the first sentence would be considered a fragment.

Consider changing it to “POKENAME is renowned for its great mane, which is notoriously difficult to maintain”

[hollow tapir]

The wording on that entry is really confusing ngl

Like it’s all out of order

I don’t mean you ghost btw

[halcyon yacht]

Re-worded it

[hollow tapir]

Yeah now it’s nice, fun entry

[vivid spire]

I like it, for the second sentence maybe consider changing “plant-life” to “plant growing ability”

Otherwise, I give it 5 stars

[halcyon yacht]

Idk about anyone else but it kinda feels like the use of "leech" implies it absorbs the electricity voluntarily which I don't get the vibe of.

[hollow tapir]

Maybe plant growth?

[halcyon yacht]

Cultivation?

[vivid spire]

Would changing it to “the leeched electricity is added to its aura” fix the meaning, or more along the lines of “it inadvertently adds the electricity to its aura”

[halcyon yacht]

"it unknowingly absorbs electricity from nearby electronics"
But purely personal feel

Anywho whos next

Actually there's a random option in infdex

Persian/Infernape

[vivid spire]

I agree is wounds better with this:

When POKENAME passes by electronics, it unknowingly absorbs the electricity which is added to its aura. If it builds this charge too long, it releases a localized electromagnetic pulse which phases the Pokémon into cyberspace.

[halcyon yacht]

53.321 - Pernape

A ruthless, shrewd and mean Pokémon. It stalks prey relentlessly but carefully, awaiting the perfect opportunity to pounce. The jewel on its head shines brighter when chasing.

Bruh Persian is mean

No wonder Giovanni loves it

[vivid spire]

Oh my heck, that Wukong sprite looks so awesome!

Get rid of the comma before “and”, it is an Oxford comma and is not needed.

Change start of second sentence to “Relentlessly yet carefully”

The second half of the second sentence with that change may become a fragment, I’ll think more on how to edit it.

“It hunts relentlessly yet carefully stalking prey, waiting for the perfect opportunity to pounce”

[halcyon yacht]

Pretty much the same I changed it to

[vivid spire]

I just realized the entry doesn’t have POKENAME anywhere

[halcyon yacht]

One of those entries that feel like a pokemon whos name shall not be named

Idk if every fusion entry has POKENAME in it but I do know not every pokedex entry doesn't mention the mon by name

Often going by "This Pokémon"

[summer saffron]

The second sentence is a bit wordy and would be better phrased as “It stalks prey relentlessly but carefully, awaiting the perfect opportunity to pounce.”

[halcyon yacht]

Heard

166.40 - Ledtuff

During the night this Pokémon can been seen slowly floating high in the sky. The more stars visible in the night sky, the higher the Pokémon go. During the day POKENAME curls up in a dark corner awaiting sunset.

(The mental image of a pack of Ledtuffs at night floating high in the sky humors me)

[vivid spire]

“We all float down here Charlie.”

Honestly a solid and fun entry. I would suggest putting a period between “sky” and “the”.

Then only slightly modify the second sentence to “The more stars visible in the night sky, the higher the Pokémon go”

I have one for Nidozor:

#31.212: Despite its fragile appearance, POKENAME's chitin is tough as diamonds. When threatened, it uses spurs built into its claws to deploy venom, incapacitating its foes.

[halcyon yacht]

What type is this one?

Steel/Poison?

[vivid spire]

Steel/Poison indeed

Perfect Fairy type killer

[halcyon yacht]

I like it

[vivid spire]

Thank you, been on a Nidoqueen entry kick since yesterday

[halcyon yacht]

51.28 - Dugslash

Also known as the ferryman of Digletts, POKENAME is exceptional at digging tunnels. These tunnels are used by it as well as other Pokémon for clear and safe passage throughout caves.

[vivid spire]

Awww. It’s cute. The second sentence I believe is a run on. Maybe, splice together “Digletts, POKENAME is exceptional at digging tunnels.”

Then as a new subject “These tunnels are used by it as well as other Pokémon for clear and safe passage throughout the caves”

[halcyon yacht]

Heard

[vivid spire]

One for Nidosel:

#31.215 Nisosel: Roving bands of POKENAME inhabit mountain passes, using their claws to scale rock faces. When humans pass underneath the Pokémon drop, using paralyzing poison on their axe to steal what they can.

[halcyon yacht]

Haunt isn't the right word imo. Maybe try inhabit

[vivid spire]

Fixed

[halcyon yacht]

337.151 - Klingkew

Said to appear rarely on computers afflicted with viruses. POKENAME appears, flies around the screen, then disappears seemingly taking the virus with it.

Ultimate tech support they're just inconsistent

[vivid spire]

I like it, and the creativity, but it leaves the question of how one catches it? It only appears inside the computer?

[halcyon yacht]

Entries became easier to write when I tried to make them their own pokemon rather than a fusion perse and incorporating parts of both pokemon into the new one

[halcyon yacht]

That makes it the mystery. It is also never really explained how we catch mew while looking through a telescope on Mt. Moon yet we do. Just the mystery of mew

[vivid spire]

I agree completely, though there are
Some the fusions it’s easier to talk about the interplay between the parts

[halcyon yacht]

Yeah

I don't like this one

You take it lol

362.9

[vivid spire]

Cofatois:

#362.9: Haunting shipwrecks of ages past, POKENAME at first appear as bejeweled empty shells. Once a diver turns their back the disembodied hands shoot forward, dragging their victim to its dagger-toothed maw.

[halcyon yacht]

227.446a - Skardra

Despite its tough as steel hide, POKENAME is surprisingly light. When it wants to fly it unfurls its large tail which acts as a rudder, guiding its flight.

"The first thing you'll ask yourself is 'THIS THING CAN FLY?!'"

[vivid spire]

The first sentence sounds a little out of order, I suggest “Despite its tough as steel hide, POKENAME is surprisingly light”

[halcyon yacht]

Thank you I couldn't figure out what to put there

[vivid spire]

Any suggestions for the creepy Blastois

[halcyon yacht]

364.45 - Ferroplume

The bloom on POKENAME's head is actually a hat which it uses to attack flying Pokémon. It also serves to protect itself from harsh weather conditions.

[halcyon yacht]

Nope, that's why I passed it off lol. I have no idea what to do with a lot of cofagrigus fusions

[vivid spire]

I used to write mainly horror fanfictions. For me it’s easier to think of them as and SCP, or Mythological creature than an animal

[halcyon yacht]

I don't write at all I just kinda get a feel for how things look and roll with that

475.212 - Golizor

Despite being equipped to, POKENAME is terrified of fighting and prefers to cower in dark caves. Most Pokémon don't know this and leave it alone out of fear anyways.

Despite getting actual armor it is still scared for its life

If I had a quad weakness to fire I would be too tbf

[vivid spire]

The first sentence would make more sense as “despite being equipped with armor“,

Or

“Despite having skin like armor”

Otherwise no notes!

[halcyon yacht]

It was meant to be "Despite being equipped to fight"

Also when a note is made on one of your submissions how do I respond

This one got the comment
"Is it dead? It could be fused"

In my head it was dead because Lapras dex entries said it was almost hunted to extinction.

[vivid spire]

You have to edit and resubmit

Do not just resubmit it outright, or it will be denied again

[halcyon yacht]

What do I change though?

I thought it made sense to assume it was dead since it "carries spirits across the afterlife"

[vivid spire]

Usually the notes they leave will tell you specifically what the Unowns think needs to be clarified for a Player..

For this note specifically, I believe the intent was:

The entry is more specific to the Lapras side of the fusion. From the wording of ferrying people to the afterlife it sounds like the Pokémon could be a dead Lapras.

[halcyon yacht]

So, what do I change?

It is a dead lapras

[vivid spire]

What were the traits from the Oricoco that were added to the entry?

(Note: I do not know a lot about oricoco)

[halcyon yacht]

The song in the wind, it is said both Lapras and Oricorio have a song attached to them. Ori dances more sure but song and dance go hand-in-hand

But looking at Oriras and assuming it's the size of a Lapras capable of ferrying loads of people its dances would be more destructive than good

[vivid spire]

Hmmm…. Then what you may need to change is the attitude.

The Ghost Type Oricoco dances somberly I’m assuming. Perhaps include outside of ferrying people it swims somberly above places Lapras were hunted?

Singing of memories long past

[halcyon yacht]

"This form of Oricorio has sipped purple nectar. It uses ethereal dance steps to call forth the spirits of the dead." - Scarlet

Singing a song to call upon the spirits of the departed to ferry them across he afterlife sounds right

[vivid spire]

This might be one you’d need a Unown staffer to help with

My mind is drawing just as much of a blank for how to adjust the entry

[halcyon yacht]

I wish it said who added the tag so I could message them about it

[vivid spire]

I would say if you have the time to wait, ask @midnight siren for help. They generally get on in the evening, and are great at reviewing and seeing what rules the other Unowns used when making decisions.

One more entry for the morning Maroziken:

#105.281: Despite being a master of unarmed combat, POKENAME insists on fighting with a set of bone tonfa. Waiting until night, they ignite the tips confounding other Pokémon’s night vision.

[vivid spire]

One more for Kabuziken:

#141.281: Agile fighters who use their shed rock like skin as shields, POKENAME are found defending desert Oases from Ground type meddling. Honorable to a fault, before the battle begins it salutes with its bone sword.

[midnight siren]

i have been summoned

what seems to be the problem

[vivid spire]

Good morning! Well for @halcyon yacht, he had a entry that was not approved, for Oricoco/Lapras. Let me reply to the entry fast so you can see it

This is the post

[halcyon yacht]

Not sure if it wasnt accepted, didn't have a mark saying not accepted just had that note attached to it and was confused what it meant on my end

[midnight siren]

ah, i think i see it. as it says during it's life it implies that every instance of this fusion is dead, and it can be read as a dead lapras due to the similarities between lapras and the oricorio fusions mentioned. currently no decision has been made either way, but the issue is probably describing this fusion as always being dead

[vivid spire]

For future reference for myself and others, should we avoid saying a species is dead unless it’s in reference to a ghost type?

Or rather implying it?

[halcyon yacht]

The thing is Oriras is a ghost type

[midnight siren]

i personally would avoid saying any fusion is dead - things like phantump get around it by saying that it is inhabited by a spirit, but the pokemon isn't inherently dead

[midnight siren]

ghost types aren't inherently dead pokemon - see oricorio being a dancer who can see spirits, mimikyu being a small creature with ghostly properties etc. therefore describing them as such just isn't accurate

[halcyon yacht]

Not inherently but in the case of Lapras fusions where its stated in the series they've been hunted to near extinction it seems fair to assume that some ghost fusions including Lapras are dead. Not like the concept is new to the series either

[grim matrix]

Dex entries around Gen… 7 I think? Mention that Lapras populations have actually begun to recover

[midnight siren]

the first key thing to note is that although we are of course based upon the mainline pokemon games, we do not follow their lore 1f1 - notable examples being Cubone not all being orphaned.

[halcyon yacht]

Games arent up to that point yet which is why I didnt take from it. The dex entry I've been referencing comes from Red/Blue and Gold

[halcyon yacht]

That's fair and understandable I just wanted to know what was needing to be changed for the dex entry and how to go about it

Oricorio's dance can call spirits from beyond and Lapras is the ferry pokemon combine the two it feels natural that a fusion would have them ferry souls they call

[midnight siren]

I would advise writing a new opening sentence. the second sentence is fine as is - I really like the imagery of it - but its the implication that every version of this fusion is dead that is the issue

I would suggest leaning into a sort of pied piper style to relate back to the song making spirits follow it

[halcyon yacht]

What do you suggest for mons like froslass or yamask?

[midnight siren]

describe them as spirits/ghosts, just don’t say that the pokemon is dead

that’s the main thing - whether or not a Pokémon used to be a living creature (yamask, phantump) crucially the Pokémon itself is not dead, just in a different state of existence

I’m happy for other unown to weigh in, but that is my understanding of the issue that was noted in the dex notes. as I didn’t write that note, I need to make it clear that I may have misinterpreted it, but that is the issue as I see it

hope this helps

[vivid spire]

Thank you for the quick reply!

[halcyon yacht]

433.131 - Oriras
It loved to ferry people on its back across the sea during its life. Some say POKENAME now carries spirits across the afterlife, its song sometimes being heard in the wind.

Okay back to this

Its cry is capable of drawing spirits to them. POKENAME loves to ferry people and spirits alike to and from their destinations.

[midnight siren]

tbh id keep the second sentence - just remove the word “now” and you’re good to go. it’s lovely imagery and I think it fits the fusion

[midnight siren]

np

[halcyon yacht]

Well the entire point of the 2nd sentence is that mystery surrounding the ferry who now carries spirits. As this is the pokedex we aren't entirely sure. The feel of it is off to me and I'd rather rewrite it. Even removing the now it is implying its still alive and there's no reason for its song to be heard in the wind it'll just be singing wherever it is.

A pokemon in death that isn't dead itself like a dusknoir or litwick

That was the idea behind Oriras

[frozen onyx]

POKENAME often transform into other species of birds, to infiltrate their flocks during migration. they wait until a member of the flock falls behind to consume it and take its place, before repeating the process until the flock is empty.
(ditgeot)

[midnight siren]

fair enough, its up to you

[frozen onyx]

i wrote this at 1 40 am last night so i cannot judge this in good faith

[vivid spire]

Some grammar issues, take away the comma between birds and to infiltrate, Capitalize They, then put a period after “its place”

Then I think it should be good!

[frozen onyx]

POKENAME often transform into other species of birds to infiltrate their flocks during migration. They wait until a member of the flock falls behind to consume it and take its place.

like so?

it did seem a little long you are right

[vivid spire]

You can still include that it repeats the process until the flock is empty, it would just need to be a separate sentence

[frozen onyx]

i think it would be better to leave it out because it drags on and adds little context, this could be wrong though

[vivid spire]

Sounds good to me, honestly it is a solid entry with or without it

[frozen onyx]

ty

[halcyon yacht]

309.273 - Slakscor

It's often stepped on by adventurers out in the desert. Sometimes it responds swiftly and brutally. Other times it barely puts up an effort to get the person off of them.

[vivid spire]

On a Kabutops kick this morning. Startops:

#121.141 Startops: At first sight many Trainers believe POKENAME is from outer space. Unbeknownst to most, it survives in the deepest portions of the ocean, its armor protecting it from the crushing depths and its diamond hard scythes lighting the darkness.

[halcyon yacht]

336.53 - Salasian

It is said making friends with POKENAME is one of the hardest tasks to accomplish. However, if you manage to achieve it you'll have a Pokémon that will protect your family line until it ceases to exist.

[vivid spire]

Awww! Good Dragon Cat

[halcyon yacht]

310.356 - Abjask

Often called the Safest Predator due to its speed it can track and hunt prey with ease. POKENAME can sense incoming dangers and dodge them thus giving it its name.

[vivid spire]

Absol is one of my favorites to write for. There’s just so much it’s extra sensory abilities can do!

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Garbodor/previous dex entry:

POKENAME are often found in filthy rivers and lakes, eating the trash that has polluted the water. The trash it eats mixes into the water it shoots out of its canons.

My previous Blastiose entry for reference

Also, I'm not sure "infected" is the right word here, so if anyone has a better word, I'm all ears

[vivid spire]

“Infested” might fit better or “Piled up”

[timid sky]

Infested does work better. I like piled up, but I'm not sure it fits since I picture the trash floating in the water rather then being in piles

[vivid spire]

Thoughts and Feedback on Starther?

#121.123: Late at night, POKENAME races above the ocean waves, patrolling for something unknown. It often fights off territorial Tentacruel that mistake the light off its wings and blades as rivaling Pokémon.

[willow skiff]

This will be the start of me making dex entries for all quagsire fusions...

"POKENAME is usually found in dense tropical areas, typically in swamps. the reason for this is it's hunting method in which they sink their heads low enough for their bulbs to be exposed and eat whatever mistakes it for a lily pad."

is this too long?

[vivid spire]

I wouldn’t say too long, a couple of grammatical things to fix.

“POKENAME is typically found in Tropical swamps due to its hunting method. It sinks its head low enough in the water leaving only the bulb exposed. It eats whatever mistakes it for a lily pad.”

The reason I reworded it thus, the “Usually” and “Typically” are almost contradictory in nature it’s either a tropical setting or a swamp. I placed a period because the first and second sentences were almost run ons

Some of the wording seemed a bit out of order, this is just an example of how I would reorder what you have without losing your creativity or meaning

[rugged socket]

If you still want one, what about Farfetch'd/Wooper

[rugged socket]

Yo my brother in arms, I'm doing all Wooper fusions, would be awesome to have the whole line dexxed up

[terse tide]

Wooooooo, finally I'm back! Glad to see that y'all finished the Wild Entries

[urban drum]

Carbink/Grimer (478.88) - Wild POKENAME tunnel from cave to cave, searching for crystals to consume. These crystals empower POKENAME, and it is said that they evolve after consuming large amounts.

Carbink/Muk (478.89) - POKENAME are gluttonous creatures that consume crystals and rocks. After consuming too many, POKENAME spit out these rocks and crystals for offspring to consume.

[vivid spire]

Just unlocked this fusion in game and thought I should write an entry on it. Dragovoir:

#148.287a: Elegance incarnate, POKENAME commands any room it enters. With its ability to read minds, it bonds easily with its Trainer. In contests it is known to take flight using the wings on its head to show off its strength.

One more for Garderoc, another unlock from my current randomized play:

#287.465: Known to gather together in packs to howl at the full moon, POKENAME refuses to back down from challengers. They have been seen throwing boulders with their psychic might, and it is hypothesized they could pull the moon from the sky to protect bonded Trainers.

[urban drum]

just checking: does this mean i have to resubmit the dex entries?

also thanks for the heads up 👍

[regal cedar]

No, you're ok!

[urban drum]

alright, thanks

[hollow tapir]

No why is there a person who has in their thing hates wooper

How can you hate wooper

[balmy comet]

To be fair, they have bidoof in their name

[halcyon yacht]

Random mons lesgetit

242.201 - Blisown

In ancient times POKENAME was often regarded as a deity with its egg that seemingly held the cure to all physical ailments. Scientists have POKENAME to thank for today's modern medicine technology.

[brazen flicker]

Not an unown but cut the "often" and "seemingly", there's a pin explaining more about filler words and why dex entries dont need em. Be absolute!

[hexed fog]

Faq says no describing pokemon as gods

[vivid spire]

Good Early Morning all, here is my idea for Dewphox:

#87.484: Often referred to as the Ice Regent of the North, POKENAME is found predominantly in freezing mountain lakes. Wherever it points its staff the temperature drops noticeably, though many think it uses its psychic powers to trick the mind.

[vivid spire]

One more on the morning, Vulxen:

#37.483: Trainers lost in the woods have reported being led from their predicament by paths of Wil-o’-Wisps laid by POKENAME. Caring in nature, they are known to light their wand to entertain newly-hatched Pokémon.

Only question for this entry, should Wil-o’-Wisps be capitalized as it’s a move?

[boreal canyon]

kinda weird when official games do it

[boreal canyon]

i think it'll depend on if it's a path of the move or a path of wil'o'wisp

[vivid spire]

Fair point, it is a path of the move

[midnight siren]

the rules for PIF entries don’t 100% follow main game lore, this is just one of those changes

[fleet oracle]

Thoughts on this as a Luvcario dex entry?
"Children look up to POKENAME as heroes of love and justice. POKENAME manipulate blasts of aura to bring love into even the most wicked hearts."

[hexed fog]

PIF does things differently than the games. Considering real entries also say all cubones have dead moms and magcargo is hot as the sun

[vivid spire]

I love this entry!

[fleet oracle]

Yippee!

[fleet oracle]

Is this entry grammatically correct? I'm also happy for any other suggestions:
"Without strict obedience training, POKENAME are prone to throwing tremendously destructive tantrums. As such, they are highly sought after by amateur trainers attempting to prove themselves."

[vivid spire]

For the second sentence replace “POKENAME” with they. Otherwise it’s another solid entry

Opinions wanted for Scitile:

#212.278: Registering only as a red blur of motion, POKENAME runs treetop to treetop at over eighty miles per hour. If a threat is spotted below, it drops steel tipped tail first, hitting with the force of a freight train.

[hollow nimbus]

If you say 'registering as', you should make it clear who is registering the motion, or it may seem like the fusion only can see a red blur when it runs.

Registering only as a red blur of motion to onlookers, or something like that

Similarly. If it spots a threat below is better than If a threat is spotted below because it could be misinterpreted as 'If a Trainer spots a threat below, the Pokémon drops'

steel tipped tail should be steel-tipped tail because 'steel' and 'tipped' make up the same adjective together

[vivid spire]

Corrected with your feedback:

Registering only as a red blur of motion to onlookers, POKENAME runs treetop to treetop at over eighty miles per hour. If it spots a threat below, it drops steel-tipped tail first, hitting with the force of a freight train.

Thank you for your help!

[hollow nimbus]

Add a comma after Without strict obedience training, and it's good to go.
Make sure not to include the quotation marks when you submit.

[hexed fog]

Thanks again @rugged socket for finishing the DictionDex

https://discord.com/channels/302153478556352513/1399454010016006206

[terse tide]

Wooooo another DictionDex down!!!!

[rugged socket]

Love ittttt!

[shy portal]

sliding in here again to let u all know that i dont plan to write dex entries for my fusions so feel free to write for any of them : >
if you do write a dex for one of my fusions, feel free to ping me cuz id love to read them

[vivid spire]

Feedback requested for, Marovile:

#105.262: POKENAME often act as shamans to Weavile packs, providing healing to injured members and acting as a guide to the group. While hunting with its pack mates, it calls forth icy winds from its staff distracting prey.

[fleet oracle]

Already submitted, do I need to submit a new one or can they fix it in post?

[hollow nimbus]

We will fix it

Comma errors are the most common mistake we have to fix, but it's better and less work for us if people use the correct punctuation when submitting

[hexed fog]

Team Wild is just about done with the Hoenn Demo

prepare yourselves for my return O_O

[midnight siren]

the izik pile grows while team Sisyphus works

[narrow cosmos]

Back, back you beast! Let the Unown rest!

POKENAME's fur coat is made of sweets; it creates so much candy fluff that it will not notice or care if clumps are taken and eaten by others. Its candy tusks are brittle and regenerate, so they too can be eaten by its friends.

[vivid spire]

I thought @shy portal Would enjoy this entry for their sprite of Larvikyu:

#246.373a: Often mistaken as a Pokédoll, POKENAME has become especially popular with children. When alone, this Pokémon digs under yards, popping up to appear as a lost toy elsewhere.

[shy portal]

haunted pokedoll

[narrow cosmos]

Said in some legends to harvest the souls of the malevolent, POKENAME swings a massive scythe wielded by the skeletal arms jutting from its body. It lets out a distinctive cackling shriek as it reaps its target.

[vivid spire]

One more @shy portal Entry I couldn’t resist…. Mists:

#255.285: POKENAME is quite proud of its hat, to the point that any thoughts insulting it send it into a rage. It often stands in front of the moon to make itself look larger, but most Trainers find it endearing.

[vivid spire]

Another @shy portal Classic design, Blapunny:

#281.354a: One of few Pokémon adapted to living in the city, POKENAME under the street lights get mistaken for Cosplayers. If noticed, they expel a Smokescreen before jumping over buildings.

[hollow tapir]

He looks so goofy

[vivid spire]

One more @shy portal That really spoke to me, Dragoray:

Pokémon Breeders agree POKENAME's fur is the most difficult to tame due to the high voltage stored in its body. Many are bred for contests involving aerial obstacle courses, which their compact shoulder mounted wings are perfect to squeeze through.

[hollow tapir]

Aw cute

[jagged ledge]

[vivid spire]

One random entry for their sprite night, Weavth:

#262.52: Afraid of the Rattata infestation in big cities, many officials released POKENAME as a predator. Unfortunately, these Pokémon are drawn to anything shiny, thus have infested back alleyways in gangs that steal from Trainers.

[bold panther]

If i want to submit a dex entry to go with a sprite I'm submitting, do I have to put it in the google form or can I just put it with my sprite in #sprite-gallery?

[hexed fog]

#spriter-announcements message

[bold panther]

Sprite by me, #1397670598045466785:

POKENAMEs use their buoyant shells, large fins, and thick fat deposits to aid in their long winter migrations. Trainers who let their POKENAMEs go on these journey are delighted to see them fly back upon evolution.

[bold panther]

thanks

[bold panther]

#1395081067379167422

On every night with a full moon, groups of POKENAME gather and dance through the night. Their movements channel celestial energy which has a rejuvenating effect on any nearby plants and Pokémon.

[bold panther]

I think it should start with something more definitive like "legends say POKENAME..."

[bold panther]

#1397671443478614145

When navigating the open ocean, POKENAME only travel when the moon is visible. Otherwise, they try to stick closely to floating objects like boats and icebergs.

[vivid spire]

Early morning @shy portal entry for Chardra:

#6.446: Its body covered in non flammable oil, POKENAME makes any water it passes by greasy. The tail tip burns due to a second chemical reacting to the oil and when threatened it brings the tail in front of its mouth to spit Flamethrowers.

[main void]

I think u could pick between notice or care instead of having both: it creates so much candy fluff that it will not care if clumps are taken and eaten by others
alternatiely u could have does not / doesn't mind if...?

[main void]

then maybe take out the its before its friends

otherwise its rly cool

is it ur sprite?

[main void]

😆 thats cool

maybe add a could in front of sending it into a rage?

[vivid spire]

Unfortunately, I have submitted all the entries from yesterday, but will keep that in mind for future entries

[vivid spire]

Another Pokémon I lucked out catching on my Randomized run, Gabther has become one of my favorites:

#298.123: Often POKENAME stakes a claim on caves, kicking out most other Pokémon. When it viciously attacks, this Pokémon whirls about, its wings just as sharp as the scythes attached to its arms.

[vivid spire]

One for the expected evolution, Garther:

#299.123: Jumping from high cliffs, POKENAME glides over what it has marked as its territory. If a threat is spotted, it dives into an Aerial Ace. Its target won't realize what hit it at the speed of sound.

[vivid spire]

Another addition to my Randomized Roster, not sure if this entry is too broad for a Dex Entry. Honqueen:

#327.31: A discarded set of Pokémon armor given life by supernatural means, POKENAME are often employed in Kalos as guardians to foreign dignitaries. They have been known to survive attack that melt Steel types completely unscathed.

[vivid spire]

One more for the morning, Paraxen:

#47.483: When forced to walk in the daylight, POKENAME plucks the largest mushroom nearby. Its spores are highly combustible, thus it must keep its body constantly shaded.

[vivid spire]

Couldn’t resist writing for Paraphox either:

#47.484: Usually mistaken for a sapling in its native rain forests, POKENAME is content to stay still during daylight hours. At sundown, it comes to life, using a flammable mushroom as a torch to attract unsuspecting Bug types.

[narrow cosmos]

Nah, just a sprite I found hitting random on Infinite Dex. I have no art skills, so I'm just contributing by writing dex entries for sprites when the ideas hit me. It's fun stuff.

If I get 21 more entries approved, I'll have officially gotten 2000 entries written up.

[vivid spire]

Someday I hope to get up to that amount. Between what I have waiting to be approved and approved I have about 90

[narrow cosmos]

Just keep at it. I felt the same starting out, but if you just keep peppering away at sprites and ideas you have, you'll reach a high number without even realizing.

[regal cedar]

POG but also please wait at least 3 days so we can do it

[hexed fog]

The list is still there

Yall have had all month lol

[scarlet fiber]

Is it normal to get nervous about writing entries for sprites that I haven't made? Like... idk, I just feel like "what if the person who made the sprite hates my entry" or smth idk

Also what's the Izik pile

[midnight siren]

the izik pile is the list of izik entries that the unown haven’t had a chance to approve all of yet

last time I checked it was ~600, but I think it’s down to more like 550 now

[midnight siren]

and yeah, I get that from time to time

they way I assuage those feelings is basically the team wild motto: better than autogen

anything I write will be better to have in game than an auto spliced mess - and as each sprite can have multiple entries other people can make their versions of the entry if they want

it ain’t a theory that works for everyone, but it works for me :p

[vivid spire]

Idea for Lapxen:

#131.483: The oar POKENAME carries has been passed down through generations of the Pokémon. They often sing beautiful yet tragic dirges while focusing fire energies on the face of it, before unleashing scalding water on foes.

[main void]

Done- sorry took a while

[main void]

I reckon u could get rid of “of the Pokémon” bit- just have “for generations”.

[midnight siren]

two suggestions:

1. fire -> firey. same imagery, just flows a bit nicer.
2. “generations of the Pokémon” feels weird - especially since you’re referring to a specific family branch. I would either say “through the generations” or “from its ancestors”

acc if you change to “firey”, energies would also need changing to “energy” - still would recommend it as a change tho :p

[vivid spire]

Definitely! Done! And @midnight siren edited fire to Fiery cause it sounds more poetic as you say!

The oar POKENAME carries has been passed down through generations. They often sing beautiful yet tragic dirges while focusing fiery energy on the face of it, before unleashing scalding water on foes.

[midnight siren]

nice

[hexed fog]

Try to remember this is pokemon and that it ain't that deep. You are fine.

[main void]

What about “they often sing beautiful yet tragic dirges before unleashing blends of firery energy and scalding water on foes”?

The blends of bit can be subbed out for smth better- its all I could think of rn

[narrow cosmos]

You never know, sometimes artist's will end up loving something made for their sprite, one directly pinged me and said they loved the entry I made for their fusion. Won't know until one tries!

[main void]

I wrote a few about a mudkip/diglett evo line and I decided I might as well do one for the opposite fusion (dugtrio.mudkip) but it looked so weird I had to mention it in the thing

Hope the spriter doesnt mind

[regal cedar]

for hoenn? news to me, last i checked it was empty

[vivid spire]

While I like it, I almost feel like this fits better:

The oar POKENAME carries has been passed down through generations. They often sing beautiful yet tragic dirges while pouring fiery energy into the focus, before unleashing scalding water on foes.

[main void]

It sucks that the max is 2 sentences

I’ve had to just scrap some ideas entirely cuz it made my entries into big blurbs

[vivid spire]

I have seen entries accepted with three, just hard to keep three under 250 characters

[vivid spire]

Time for a more buggy entry, Lapdrill:

#131.15: When it’s not in flight, POKENAME floats on the water's surface. Due to its short temper, any who swim within four feet suffer multiple painful stings.

[bold panther]

#1394575503112933447

On nights with many shooting stars, POKENAME can be seen dancing in circles on and around floating sea ice.

[hexed fog]

when was the last time you checked lol

[regal cedar]

like last week i thought

dang

[hexed fog]

theres only 141 so it isnt going to take long

[regal cedar]

:(

[hexed fog]

63.382.png will have a sprite soon, still dont understand why people submit sprites with an a if theres no alt

actually gimme a sec I will put something in

that way noone has issues

there we go

[regal cedar]

I know sometimes I do it because I have an idea and I know I will forget it even if I write it down because then I'll forget I have written it down

[dull folio]

I mean my logic is if the artist isn't a writer, they probably couldnt do any better, so they'll be happy either way

[dull folio]

Oh has the hoenn dex been added to wildlist

[hexed fog]

nope

it's a seperate list

but this is our current high prio list

[vivid spire]

Idea for Scywak:

#123.105: POKENAME spends all day practicing with its twin blades. Eventually, it clears an entire section of forest down to the dust, causing dust storms.

One more for Kabuther, kinda thought about the British museum with this one…

#141.123: Scientists originally believed POKENAME's fossil was a mix of two separate fossils. To their shock, the Pokémon revived with bony wings that could support its weight, as well as slice through steel.

[clear hollow]

The rusty spots are the weak points in this Pokémon's otherwise impenetrable armor. POKENAME flies dizzily in unpredictable, uncontrollable patterns, which makes it hard to hit or dodge, but also does poor job in moving it wherever it wants to go.

Please lemme know if I should rephraze anything about the second sentence, I'm not sure if it sounds that good

[vivid spire]

Its a solid entry, but I would suggest flipping the sentences.

[clear hollow]

makes sense, okay!

POKENAME flies dizzily in unpredictable, uncontrollable patterns, which makes it hard to hit or dodge, but also does poor job in moving it wherever it wants to go. The rusty spots are the weak points in its otherwise impenetrable armor.
Does it look alright if I change "this Pokemon's" for "its" then?

[vivid spire]

Yes that change is fine. I would also suggest putting a period after “Dodge” and replace “but” with “However it”

“However it also does a poor job going where it wants to go”

[clear hollow]

hm... I'm afraid then "it" will refer to "flying", not "POKENAME", so I'd have to make more changes

I'm not a native speaker and not as good at it but Wildheart really advises to avoid such situations where stuff like "it" or "they" can refer to more than one thing at a time

[vivid spire]

Could be fixed by using a saying like, “However it can't fly in a straight line”

[clear hollow]

it's kinda already implied heavily by the first part of the sentense

[vivid spire]

True it could be cut completely as well

[clear hollow]

I think I'm good with keeping it one sentence for now, unless more peoples otherwise. But thanks a lot for the suggestion still!

[vivid spire]

Not a problem!

Had an idea for an alternative sprite of Kabuvoir:

#141.287b: POKENAME in ancient times protected villages with their rock hard armor and skull splitting scythes. Resurrected by science, they have taken to defending walking paths against predatory Pokémon.

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Garbodor/Recycle:

POKENAME feasts on computer viruses and old junk files. As it consumes more malware, POKENAME becomes better at intercepting hackers, and even gains the ability to fight back with viruses of its own.

[vivid spire]

Going through the fusion dex, Scipunny stood out to me. Feedback is welcome:

#212.354: POKENAME's chitin is weaker compared to other Bug types, but its ears each have their own mind. While the main body scavenges for food, each ear stands watch, reacting faster than a blink of an eye to threats.

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Weezing/Endeavor:

Each of POKENAME's heads can stretch out over long distances, allowing it to spread its poison gases farther and faster. It slams its heads into opponents to inflict massive damage.

[opaque condor]

wait but arent fusions a recent invention
or am i missing something with the guy who rambled about natural fusions in some city

also (unrelated) for the litwick line - gardevoir line, something about the fusion having more enhanced methods of luring prey could work

(also for litwick lines - fairy types in general, also for mawile lines)

if i were to actually write it
it'd suck tho

[clear hollow]

When it comes to dex entries, Frog asked us to treat fusions as if they were their own Pokémon species, not fusions. So saying that a certain POKENAME existed in ancient times is more than allowed

[opaque condor]

oh ok

[summer saffron]

ooh, turning the dots into rusty patches was a great design choice

[vivid spire]

Early morning idea for Skarpunny:

#227.354 Skarpunny: POKENAME have become the biggest pests at metal recycling plants. As they grow they add layers to their armor, hardening the already dense steel. When confronted, they run incredibly fast, bounding over any obstacles.

[vivid spire]

One more Lopunny idea for the morning, Milopunny:

#335.354: Highly sought after for beauty contests, POKENAME are rare to find in the wild. Their scales sparkle like gems, and have been used more frequently in jewelry.

[vivid spire]

Last one for the morning, and it will be my 100th submission. Kabutwo:

#141.150: Using its genetically enhanced psychic powers, POKENAME crushes boulders around its body for armor. Despite its extra weight, this Pokémon can close distances faster than a plane to crush opposition with its claws.

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Weezing/Previous dex entry:
POKENAME makes an eerie hissing noise as it expels gases. Recent studies have found a correlation between the differing patterns on the left head and the toxicity of the gases they emit.

Here's my previous Arbok dex entry for reference

[vivid spire]

Okay, I lied, because a Yandere Nidoqueen changed my mind. Umbqueen:

#197.31: POKENAME melt into the shadows, perfectly hidden by their dark scales. They have taken to stalking specific Trainers, completely destroying threats with powerful slams, then hiding before being noticed.

Perhaps I should trade Trainers for Pokémon in the entry, or simply “creatures” to cover both?

[narrow cosmos]

Creatures could work if you want them to be attached to more than just trainers, yeah. If it fits, I think making it "destroying threats to them" would help clarify they're stalking trainers and "helping" them in secret.

[vivid spire]

POKENAME melt into the shadows, perfectly hidden by their dark scales. They have taken to stalking specific creatures, completely destroying threats to them with powerful slams, then hiding before being noticed.

Really made it come together

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Koffing/Recycle:

Eating rotted matter increases the potency of the poison gas that POKENAME emits. Because of this, POKENAME try to wait until their stockpiles of food rot, but they often can't control themselves and end up eating the food while it's still fresh.

[brave gulch]

What’s the policy on short/humorous dex entries? For this guy I wanted to put Sounds like EDM.

[regal cedar]

Will not be accepted.

Joke entries are in general not allowed.

Should be over 100 characters.

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Sandygast/Endeavor:

If the skull on its head is stolen, it will attempt to chase after the thief, but this is often in vain since it is incredibly slow. Once the thief is gone, POKENAME will begin bawling uncontrollably, and it cannot be consoled unless the skull is returned.

[hexed fog]

Alright Update 30JUL2025 with all of the currently approved entries has been submitted. Please allow a couple days to reflect in the game.

[vivid spire]

I saw this sprite and immediately thought… ZERGLING! Say hello to Kabueon:

#141.196: Long believed to be part of a hive mind, POKENAME were recently discovered to have psychic abilities. Groups of between twelve to twenty would wait burrowed into rocks and coordinate perfectly to attack their natural enemy Golem.

[vivid spire]

Just to verify, are we allowed to write triple fusions entries?

Understood

[fresh gazelle]

Wild POKÉNAME feed on dying trees and plants, as well as things they steal from humans and other Pokémon. It likes to chase things that are faster than it for diversion.

[fresh gazelle]

POKENAME is born from the souls of those burried under the trees. It likes to scare people that cause damage to the forest it lives in.

help pls?

which any of the two entries

[hexed fog]

Instead of saying this pokemon say POKENAME

Both are fine entries

[fresh gazelle]

oh, okie

I think I'll leave them like that then

and post

those are the final Chikoritas I needed for the Pokéfan role btw

altho I might do one more today

[hexed fog]

Grats

[unborn rock]

Trying out my first submission
#167.21
POKENAME respond to potential threats or prey by dive-bombing them and spitting webs to incapacitate the target. While not dangerous, this makes them a severe nuisance.

[vivid spire]

Very good, only one grammatical error, which is “Responds”

[unborn rock]

I was intending for the POKENAME to be plural in this case

Also I already submitted the form, if I resubmit it will it update my original submission?

[vivid spire]

If you already submitted the Unowns will edit it if needed. You can verify someone is checking it by following the reporting submission pinned comment in #custom-dex-errors

[shrewd barn]

#1400187644029440080 should anything be changed for these entries?

303.108 :
POKENAME masters the exceptional hunting techniques of ancestral pokémon from a past long gone. In modern times, however, these tactics are outdated by many millions of years.

303.264 :
Wielding its large serpentine appendage, POKENAME reaches far to catch unsuspecting prey. Contrary to popular belief, its mimicry face is actually used to grind the food that is then brought to the real mouth instead of swallowing.

[vivid spire]

Saw Lopark’s sprite and thought this sounded good:

#354.338: POKENAME always disguises itself as a trusted Pokémon, integrating with a Trainer's team. When found out, it delivers an earth shattering kick knocking out the Trainer, before stealing from their gear.

[vivid spire]

I like the creativity on both entries. First, I think for 303.108 you could change “from a past long gone” to “from antiquity”, and drop the “however” from the end. If you want to use it, it can still go at the start of the second sentence

For the second, “Contrary to popular saying” should be changed to contrary to popular belief

Otherwise both sound solid and like they’re from an encyclopedia

[shrewd barn]

OHH so that was the word I was looking for

[vivid spire]

One more for Nidoizard:

#31.6: Ancient drawings in Kalos depict POKENAME barreling through armies of knights. When faced in the modern age most assume it will use flaming attacks, only to be shocked with poisonous breath.

[unborn rock]

One for Ariarow:

#168.21: Trained POKENAME are highly valued in construction. They use their wings, webs, and sticky claws to access hard-to-reach locations and perform structural repairs.

[vivid spire]

Annnd one for Venupunny:

#3.354: Inhabitants of forest clearings, POKENAME stand in the middle of a giant flower, releasing pheromones to attract Bug types. When one steps onto the petals, the flower snaps shut providing the Pokémon with a meal.

Not sure if I should replace “pheromones” with “pollen”

Also, Lopdrill is flying in:

#354.15: Considered to be an invasive species, POKENAME only hunts down Ariados. When spotted, it swoops in to paralyze its prey in a flurry of stings, and dragging it back to its nest.

[dull folio]

Put to before paralyze

It swoops in to paralyse its prey

[dull folio]

This is more of a optional thing, just to reduce word count, you could change it to giant flower, releasing phermomes

[dull folio]

Pheremones is fine your referenceing bug types

[vivid spire]

Updated and thank you for your help

[still cave]

#1,000,004; Zekyushiram

The product of Team Rocket's fusion technology. Though it is powerful, the original fusion of the three dragons was said to be able to break the laws of thermodynamics with its power.

[timid sky]

There are no dex entries for triple fusions

[still cave]

oops

[vivid spire]

Want some feedback/advice for writing Spiritomb entries. I have this idea for Spiripunny:

#295.394: Said to be formed from aggrieved Lopunny spirits trapped in clay from their burrows, POKENAME stand menacing vigil over the plains. It constantly mutters curses that only activate when threats are nearby.

Just not sure how to get more creative for future Spiritomb entries

[cedar heart]

I think the only thing that could be fixed in my view is the changing mutter to mutters

[willow venture]

Yoooo FusionDex got dex entries now that's awesome

[vivid spire]

One more for Loplass:

#354.429: Believed by many to be a hallucination, POKENAME appears in sub zero foggy conditions. If blocked, it phases through the Pokémon or Trainer, allowing the sheer cold to scare them off.

[hexed fog]

I would love to see some entries for the Hoenn demo mons. Preferably ones that help farmers with watering and planting crops. Maybe pesticides?

10 would be good. Get cracking.

[hollow nimbus]

When proofreading, make sure you keep an eye out for filler words. These words take up unnecessary space, and they cause the information in your entry to seem less certain. For example:

POKENAME seems to like eating things like some rocks or maybe even dirt. It starts to do a kind of dance if someone feeds it.

Don't hedge your bet if you don't need to! It's fair to say that things are true. POKENAME likes eating rocks and dirt. It does a dance if someone feeds it. These aren't things that we're guessing about. Adding a margin of error for easily-observable facts can change the tone to be less professional and academic.

Also, make sure you're talking about the behaviors from a perspective that already knows what happens. The Pokémon doesn't just start to use a move. You know that it actually uses the move, so there's no reason to only mention the start of the action.

It's fair to be uncertain about something that's harder to prove, such as "POKENAME seems to disappear when night falls", and it's still proper to be more specific if the meaning of the sentence would be different or confusing otherwise: "POKENAME usually eats rocks. It eats berries when it can find them."

[hollow nimbus]

<@&306953740651462656>, can you please pin this replied-to message and unpin this one: #dex-entries-discussion message

[clever plume]

is it allowed to mention pokemon that aren't in the game? such as falinks? I'm trying to create a entry where a species is known for an infamous story of it trying to blend in with a line of falinks but im not sure if I should mention a pokemon species not in the game...

i could phrase it as if it was a bedtime story that was very popular or such

[jagged ledge]

We ask you try to avoid it if possible

[jagged ledge]

You are allowed to describe/mention a bedtime story, but please make sure that the entry itself still reads as Pokedex Tone

[clever plume]

yes of course thank you

[vivid spire]

Early morning idea, Changon:

#113.334: Respected by all species of Pokémon, POKENAME has a sixth sense detecting injuries. When one is sensed, it takes to the skies and treats the wound without delay.

One more morning idea for Flyther:

#334.123: Native to deserts, POKENAME spends its daylight hours burrowed in cool sands. At night its goggle eyelids protect it sight while it hunts at over one hundred miles per hour.

[sharp cloud]

https://discord.com/channels/302153478556352513/1400462592287309834
POKENAMEs are incredibly loyal to their trainer, especially when raised from a young age. However, trainers are also warned to be careful around them as their spiky coat can easily scratch and poison anyone by accident.

[midnight siren]

change “its” to “their” -> rest of the entry is plural

[midnight siren]

“it sight” should be “its sight”

[vivid spire]

Oops, just submitted

I’ll submit the correction for dex errors

[midnight siren]

[midnight siren]

I’ve done that way to often myself

[vivid spire]

The only one I’m not sure if I submitted or not was my last from yesterday, 354.429

[midnight siren]

I’d check for ya, but I only have access to it on mobile atm and its not great with the dex sheet

[vivid spire]

Same issue with me, besides the fact my work is a dead zone to everything besides discord, Fusiondex and my notes app

[midnight siren]

It do be like that

[vivid spire]

What do you think of this entry for Flyzor?:

#334.212: POKENAME is an ambush hunter, leaving only its claws visible above the dunes. When one is disturbed, it launches a swift surprise attack from below, using its wings to begin a sandstorm and crunching prey with its claws.

[midnight siren]

I would change crunching to crushing tbh

the claws of scizor aren’t heads, as such don’t have teeth so technically can’t crunch things

[vivid spire]

That is a fair assessment

Really on a Flygon trip today, and here’s Kabugon:

#141.334: Nesting above active volcanoes, POKENAME dives with its young into the lava. When they emerge, their rocky scales are toughened to diamond hardness.

[jagged ledge]

Sorry, only just seeing this now. I swear I told you that when you won a previous round.

[jagged ledge]

Bring it on.

[jagged ledge]

Add a comma before "eating", and I would actually recommend against the word "infested" in this context, as it directly implies a form of sentience or pattern of swarming, so it wouldn't apply to trash. Maybe tweak the second sentence a little to say something like "It mixes trash into water it has collected to shoot it out of its cannons." But otherwise looks good.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes!

[jagged ledge]

I would shorten "It can also slam" to just "It slams", because they're two different thoughts/tactics for how it uses the heads.

[jagged ledge]

Typo in "Expells". The second sentence is an interesting concept, but could be a little more specific.

[timid sky]

As much as I’d love to expand on the second sentence, it’s kind of hard to without knowing what the other Pokémon’s (or rather, Arbok’s) different face patterns look like

[midnight siren]

probably, I think I wasn’t paying too much attention cause I wasn’t anticipating it

[jagged ledge]

I would typically recommend using POKENAME in the first sentence so that pronouns or descriptive nouns have an immediate subject to refer back to.

I think the second sentence could be fixed by tweaking slightly to say "POKENAME try to wait until their stockpiles of food rot, but (etc)"

[timid sky]

How do you feel about "the trash that has polluted the water"?

[jagged ledge]

Looks good to me!

[jagged ledge]

I would say "but unfortunately, its slow speed usually prevents it from catching them. If the thief escapes, (etc)."

Also just keep in mind that you're describing an occurrence that would likely happen multiple times to be recorded. It could help to shift to plural. The second sentence could flow better with "uncontrollably, unable to be consoled unless (etc)".

[hexed fog]

Just FYI in a couple hours I am going to review everything and do the final July dex push

Get your entries in scrubs

https://tenor.com/view/scrub-i-dont-want-no-scrub-tlc-no-scrubs-gif-5379037

[hollow tapir]

I did all my entries so I just hope they’re okay (for dexdoku)

[hollow tapir]

I remember you winning

[jagged ledge]

I can review them some more if there's any you're uncertain of.

[hollow tapir]

The kang is the one I’m worried about. I can’t remember it getting a proper look over

[jagged ledge]

I don't see anything wrong with it, but perhaps you could flesh it out to something like "basking in the sunlight until it is time to help its baby sleep." Or something like that to better communicate the "as long as it can" bit.

[vivid spire]

Last entry for the month, Auropunny:

#462.354: Ancestors of the modern Lopunny, POKENAME used their enhanced hearing to track underground rivers. Once found, they scavenged for their main source of nutrition, geodes.

[hollow tapir]

Just added a bit extra, maybe that’ll help

[jagged ledge]

I'm sorry, but this one will need to be revised again. You are describing an isolated incident based on a timed condition "has started hallucinating" that wouldn't affect the player seeing the fusion, then you simply added my last revision suggestion at the very end.

I would suggest shifting it to be more active and widespread, with the smog being visibly shaped like berries or giving the image of berries for both us and the POKENAME.

I think that just feels a little tacked on? It's good to use ending clauses to clarify, functionally, you did it correctly. But if you're going to clarify, why contradict "as long as it can" with a defined stop?

[hollow tapir]

Okay yeah true it was worded weirdly, I just like the concept roo much (berries one)

[jagged ledge]

It's a fun concept, it is. But there's a way for it to fit better.

I don't want to give you all of the answers just yet because it is a competition, but I will say that you can still have the same effect/comedy with POKENAME being so hungry their smoke forms clouds shaped like berries. The original concept itself still works you just need to get a little more creative with it.

[hollow tapir]

Just tried to fix it

For kang could I add smth like it often won’t stop sunbathing until sunset?

Would that fix the issue?

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Palossand/Recycle:

POKENAME will scatter its sand around itself, then camouflage itself as a sandcastle knocked over by an Electrode. When an unsuspecting victim steps on the sand, POKENAME causes the grains of sand to explode, then drains its prey of their vitality.

[jagged ledge]

Why add the word "often" in there is my question? When doesn't it stop sunbathing at sunset?

[hollow tapir]

Often mostly as a it either stops at sunset or when its young falls asleep (which I can fix into one sentence)

[jagged ledge]

If you are going to say that it stops sleeping when its young falls asleep as I suggested, I would recommend taking the simple approach I suggested in my first reply.

[hollow tapir]

Ah gotchu gotchu

Sorry for all the trouble

[jagged ledge]

No worries, I'm here to help. Sorry for being a bit firm, it's just sometimes a hard thing to communicate the full explanations for, but I'm more than happy to work with you on this.

[hollow tapir]

I always feel bad- am I allowed to just. Take that description and use it?

Nah you’re good, you know what you’re doing I don’t lol, I appreciate you being firm if you think it’s needed

[jagged ledge]

Yes, I am an editor. It is my job to give edits. I would not give suggestions if I didn't want them to be used. You're all good. 👍

[hollow tapir]

Just wanted to make sure it’s not like I’m stealing

[jagged ledge]

And if it makes you feel any better, I am holding myself back from fully rewriting the Weezing entry for you.

[hollow tapir]

Sometimes I’m okay at this and then other times my braincells don’t kick in fr I just try to get smth out

[hollow tapir]

Lmao fair

I’m now Imagining after this competition is over you frantically writing a new entry for it

[jagged ledge]

I mean hey I get the same way. Especially when I try to draw. Just some of the struggles of being a passionate creative. It comes and goes and you learn with time.

[hollow tapir]

The kang especially I was just happy to get smth down cause it was stumping me

[jagged ledge]

Maybe. But I'm trying to help you first lol

[hollow tapir]

I hope the revised again entry of it is better now

[hexed fog]

Hey @thorn ingot sorry it somehow slipped through in the past so I went back and denied. saying something awakened part of their 'mega evolution' genes is against FAQ 36. You can say it's a state 'similiar' to that but expressly stating it would be against the FAQ itself ❤️

plus these are suuuuuper similiar entries 😉 I think these pokemon deserve different entries dont you?

[jagged ledge]

I shall go check after I help DarkWeavile lol

[hollow tapir]

Fair

In the meantime I will be a janitor cat (crypt custodian)

[hexed fog]

Also

Rapid growth in its genes have caused its muscles to become even more swole. POKENAME could tow up to 4 cruise ships at once without much effort.

made me audibly laugh but would be against dex tone

[vivid spire]

Dang, now I want to find an entry to use Swole or “gains” on

Unironically

[jagged ledge]

I would say "scatter sand around itself to camoflauge as a sandcastle." I do question the "Knocked over by an Electrode" part a little, that is a very specific disguise and seems like something people would try to avoid. Maybe it could be disguised as a Beach Ball? Also maybe drain the vitality to build up energy for the explosion? Because what is there left to drain after an explosion?

I would personally say constantly instead of often, but otherwise looks good.

[hollow tapir]

Can do

[hollow tapir]

Meant to say, thanks for saying this, makes me feel better that even as someone who wants writing to be my job- it’s okay to not always get it right :3

[timid sky]

The sand scattering is solely used as an explosive trap. I do agree that the disguise is specific, but that's just how the sprite looks. It didn't give me much to work with

[hexed fog]

it will get denied

[vivid spire]

Fair enough

[vivid spire]

Just for my curiosity, any entries marked “no Sprites yet”, are the sprites on Fusiondex.org for them temporary or not approved yet?

[hexed fog]

weird it shouldnt be on fusiondex

[hexed fog]

this is not on fusiondex

[vivid spire]

For example: 246.373a by @shy portal Was entered by me, and is on Fusiondex.org, but was marked as non existent

[lapis cosmos]

Hoenn wilddex on the sheet are good to submit for, yes?

[vivid spire]

Maybe I misnamed that one that one

Let me check

[thorn ingot]

So I can’t use the word swole in a Dex entry?

[hexed fog]

lol not in the slang way

If you are saying 'its foot swole a size too big'

then yes.

if you are saying 'he is swole' then no

[vivid spire]

I’ll enter the ticket, but was supposed to be for 334.212, Flyzor

[jagged ledge]

I mean you can get creative with the wording. I don't think someone would specifically walk into a sandcastle with an Electrode.

[timid sky]

The camouflage is more so to make it look inconspicuous (or less conspicuous than a predator anyway) rather than to attract the prey

I know it’s kind of a silly concept, but the sprite itself is silly, so I’m taking what I can get

[hexed fog]

Ok the dex has been updated

give it a few days to show up in game pleaseeeee

[jagged ledge]

How is an Electrode on the beach inconspicuous?

[dull folio]

Nothing inconspicuous to me, you've got the sandcastles over there, volleyball tournament going on. Oh and that's the giant bomb creature rolling around

[thorn ingot]

Giant bomb creature rolling around is just a typical monday

[dull folio]

I mean when there's giant sharks and balloons snatching children I wouldn't be surprised at a walking bomb in all honesty

At least its upfront about what it is

[regal cedar]

https://www.fusiondex.org/27.232/

Hello everyone! For today's warm-up, please try to write an entry for the Ground-type Sandphan.

[untold parcel]

someone send to me the most op team😭

[urban drum]

Wingull/Mareanie (516.454)
It is recommended to stay away from POKENAME due to their violent behavior. When startled, they let out a screech capable of destroying glass.

[craggy beacon]

wrong chat?

[vivid spire]

Thought I would try my hand at this early morning warmup for Sandphan:

Warm-up #27.232: The only time POKENAME is out of its ball form is to eat and drink. While curled up, it travels over desert dunes at speeds exceeding seventy miles per hour. Anything it accidentally hits is sent flying.

[hollow tapir]

Angry bird

[vivid spire]

Another idea for the morning, Sneagon:

#215.334: Often called the Nightmare, POKENAME is infamous for choosing villages to terrorize. It only attacks at night and will scare off guard Pokémon. Trainers report their hordes are filled with loose change.

[vivid spire]

Couldn’t leave the line unfinished with these fire sprites! Here’s Weavgon:

#262.334: In the darkness of the night, the only sign POKNAME are around is the bass thrum of their wings. They are known to play with their prey, buzzing above their heads unseen, before blotting out the moon on their final dive.

[vivid spire]

Then this idea wouldn’t leave my head for Nidovile:

#31.262: Every winter, POKNAME descends from their mountain homes to fish for Polywag on frozen lakes. Using razor sharp claws they drag their favorite treats from the depths, then impale them on venom laced horns.

[vivid spire]

Had a random idea for Dianbone:

#500.104: Born deep underground, the heat and pressure from magma flows harden POKENAME's rock helmet into pink diamonds. Due to the rarity of their birth, they are treated by their tribe as royalty.

[vivid spire]

One more idea for the morning, Dianwak:

#500.105: As they grow, POKENAME wander further from their tribe, and are known to be friendly to most other species. If attacked, they allow the foe to close the distance, watch as their attacks bounce off armor and retaliate with a heavy axe strike.

[untold parcel]

sorry what i supposed to send that?

[hollow tapir]

#playthrough-talk

[hexed fog]

so

200+ wild mons have been uncovered without sprites

which means even more are going to need entries

[narrow cosmos]

The work continues

[vivid spire]

Yesss, more inspiration!

Decided to write for a pair of Pokémon I’ve never done entries for. Thoughts on Rapininja?

#78.487: Some say POKENAME is the avatar of flame itself. It appears in the middle of forest fires, controlling the flame away from Pokémon nests before vanishing in a rain of cinders.

[unborn rock]

Decided to fuse the gift Luvdisc to a Pidgey and ran with it.

16.501: POKENAME swims through the air as if it were water, instead of flying. It's extremely shy, and there have been no recorded sightings of a wild POKENAME at rest.

17.501: POKENAME is known to "adopt" romantic couples within its territory, and patrols for their safety. If one of its people is in danger, it will swiftly come to their rescue, pecking the threat until it retreats.

18.501: On three known occasions, a POKENAME used its head feathers to restrain a quarelling couple until they made up. It is unknown whether the same individual is responsible for these events.

[vivid spire]

All of these entries are pretty solid, for 17.501 I believe you can drop the quotes around adopt.

18.501 might be considered as an entry talking about one individual instead of the species as a whole, but I also like the narrative from it

[unborn rock]

To be fair, the ambiguity of "is this a species trait or just one individual" is kind of the point. That said I could increase the number of recorded occurrences to make it more ambiguous, or indicate that it happened over a wide region.

[vivid spire]

Perfect, and again love the entries!

[unborn rock]

Here's a second draft, any better?
18.501: On eleven recorded occasions throughout the Kanto region, a POKENAME used its head feathers to restrain a quarelling couple until they made up. It is unknown whether one individual is responsible for these events, or multiple.

[vivid spire]

Sounds great, honestly

[unborn rock]

Thanks for the feedback, into the form it goes

[craggy beacon]

you might get nipped at for writing about a specific thing a specific member of the species did

[jagged ledge]

Odd choice of words, but not an incorrect prediction lol

[jagged ledge]

Why eleven specifically? Also your phrasing makes it sound like it's the same couple every time.

[unborn rock]

Eleven seemed small enough that it could be just one individual, but large enough that it could be multiple (which could be learning from each other?)

I kind of see what you're saying about the same couple every time, though I'm not sure how to better phrase it.

[jagged ledge]

Well we ask that you don't describe it as an individual at all, as you are recording data about a species. You could still frame it the same way of what they do and just phrase it as "Incidents have been reported of POKENAME using their head feathers to restrain quarreling couples (etc)."

[unborn rock]

Got it. I still want to hint that this started with a single individual, so how about:
Incidents have been reported throughout Kanto of POKENAME using their head feathers to restrain quarreling couples. The spread of these incidents suggest this is learned behavior.

[jagged ledge]

FAQ 9: "Dex entries should describe the entire species rather than specific individual members of the species."

Also while your addition isn't inherently a bad loophole, the question then becomes where and when did these incidents spread? To what degree? Remember that you're constructing a narrative not just for yourself, but for an audience playing the game. While you might have your own reference, it needs to still communicate and make sense within the lore.

[unborn rock]

Fair question, although I kind of tried to answer that with the other tweak to your suggestion: this is a Kanto-specific phenomenon. I guess that leads me to a follow-up question: does describing the behavior of a sub-population violate the spirit of rule 9?

[jagged ledge]

It's fine to say that Pokémon live in Kanto or describe groups of Pokémon working together or having different practices.

[twin vapor]

POKENAME channel celestial forces through their fists to protect those in danger. By the light of the stars, evildoers shall be punished!

[unborn rock]

So what about:
Incidents have been reported of POKENAME using their head feathers to restrain quarreling couples. Though historically limited to Kanto, this behavior has begun spreading to neighboring Johto.

[twin vapor]

that's definitely better!

[jagged ledge]

You could say something like "The domestication of the species has made these occasions more common" or something like that if you want to keep the imagery/story of it spreading.

[unborn rock]

How about habitat disruption instead of domestication!

[dull folio]

POKENAME resides in the calderas of active volcanoes, with its movements inside causing major earthquakes in the surrounding area. Its body is perpetually coated in a thick layer of magma, forming a near impenetrable defensive armour.

2nd part of the 1st sentence seems a bit cluttered but I can't think of how to fix it

[vivid spire]

Thoughts on Diantwo:

#500.150: POKENAME attunes its psychic energies through Pink Quartz crystals. It is said any who gaze into its crown become entranced to follow its commands unquestionably.

[round cave]

Why is "Pink Quartz" capitalized?

[violet ermine]

there’s a few other minor things too

• adding “that” between “it is said any” improves the clarity imo (it is said that any)

• “entranced to follow its commands” doesn’t exactly work, as being entranced in this case is a state of being rather than an action being taken

POKENAME attunes its psychic energies through pink quartz crystals. It is said that any who gaze into its crown become compelled to follow its commands unquestionably.

This is my suggested fix, though feel free to make any changes you see fit

[vivid spire]

POKENAME attunes its psychic energies through pink quartz crystals. It is said that any who gaze into its crown become compelled to follow its commands unquestionably.

[jagged ledge]

You accidentally hit space twice after compelled

[vivid spire]

Agreed on all counts, thought Pink Quartz needed to be capitalized due to being a type of rock

[vivid spire]

Thank you, it is fixed

[violet ermine]

Tbf I also had to look it up so no worries. It’s a common mineral so no need to capitalize it

[jagged ledge]

If we were making a Steven Universe Dex, you better capitalize it.

[violet ermine]

In that case it would be Rose Quartz

[jagged ledge]

Even worse.

[vivid spire]

One more, that I truly couldn’t resist, my favorite Pokemon with one of my favorite Kalos starters, Scyninja:

#123.487: Observed to use Ariados silk as a scarf, POKENAME pushes it over its mouth to protect against poisons. Its special hooked scythes allow this Pokémon to ambush targets around obstacles.

[violet ermine]

this works fine, it'd probably get accepted. there's changes that could be made to the first sentence to make it flow a bit more naturally, though that would really just be a stylistic preference

[vivid spire]

Stylistically would you suggest changing the first sentence more to, “POKENAME has been observed using Ariados silk as a scarf to protect against poisonous assaults”?

[violet ermine]

yeah that flows better imo. though that's just a minor nitpick at that point, you can roll with whatever you prefer

[vivid spire]

I think I will change it, the flow is much better

POKENAME has been observed using Ariados silk as a scarf to protect against poisonous assaults. Its special hooked scythes allow this Pokémon to ambush targets around obstacles.

And dang Greninja has too many good sprites… gonna go on a spree tomorrow probably

[jagged ledge]

The next round of Dexdoku is up! Results for the previous round will be posted tomorrow!

[stark finch]

I know I typed up these entries roughly two months ago, but actually seeing them in the game feels so unreal...

[narrow cosmos]

I felt the same way the first time, it's really something, isn't it?

[stark finch]

it really is

[jagged ledge]

And we're doing everything in our power to get your names next to them asap 👍

[ebon warren]

These are good too! They match the sprites quite well and they're very compelling and informative.

[stark finch]

I just went with descriptions I felt would do justice to both components of said fusion. One that recalls the amount of care it takes to evolve a Feebas to a Milotic, and how a Gardevoir's strength reflects their bond with their Trainer, while the other applies bits of their Lore in a creative amalgamation to suggest what activities a wild Milovoir might engage in.

[nocturne sapphire]

Guys can we add a charizard and lucario entry

I’m thinking like

[regal cedar]

Hi guys! Today's warmup prompt is "sleep". How does a fusion rest, if at all? There's a whole game about Pokémon Sleeping nowadays, so you can look to feel inspired!

[regal cedar]

in a legend...defeated a legend
sounds redundant. Perhaps "One story depicts..." or "in myth"...?

what is "a legend" anyways? A Legendary?

[regal cedar]

I would probably use POKENAME at some point. Is it always radiating when it finds that Trainer?

Trainer should generally be capitalized if referring to a Pokémon Trainer.

[vivid spire]

I’m gonna take these challenges every day! Meet Sandra:

#28.63: It is currently unknown when POKENAME wakes up. Despite its unconsciousness, it hovers a foot above the ground. If threatened, it throws rocks with enough force to break bricks and sways itself to remain calm.

[vivid spire]

After the warmup I’m starting the Greninja fest with Gardeninja:

#287.487: Some say POKENAME has the ability to erase its psychic signature making it invisible even to mind readers. What is known is any target stalked by this Pokémon disappears without a trace.

[vivid spire]

Second up is Skarninja:

#227.487: POKENAME spends most its days sharpening its feathers on the sandstone of its native desert. If attacked, it employs hit and run tactics, needling the foe's health with well placed feather kunai.

Not gonna lie of all the Greninja Sprites, it think Grezor’s my favorite:

#487.212: Using rough waters as cover, POKENAME sneaks toward its prey walking along the river's bottom. When it is unsuspecting, this Pokémon breaks the surface with a mighty jump, throwing Water Shuriken before landing an armor piercing kick.

[charred dust]

Ooo, my dex entry made it in! Though, uhh, it doesn't look correctly in game.
Oh well, I'm still happy that it is in either way.

[craggy beacon]

hey, btw

the dex/calc site in that screenshot is wildly outdated

it wont have new sprites, mons, type updates, etc.

?tag calcs || these are the regularly updated ones

deino 👀

[upper loom]

Something went wrong.

Something went wrong.

[craggy beacon]

deino >:(

https://infinitefusiondex.com

https://www.fusiondex.org

calcs

[vivid spire]

Next Greninja fusion, Weavninja:

#262.487: Groups of POKENAME claim lakeside shores as their territory. They soften their footsteps to a whisper by collecting water into their paws allowing them to sneak up on any would-be intruders.

Misninja:

#255.487: Generally considered a nuisance, POKENAME lives in the walls of older houses. It sabotages electronic devices and taunts the owners face to face before phasing through the floor.

[lapis cosmos]

Possible revision: It is said that when POKENAME's flames grow, it is because it has a strong bond with its Trainer and senses potential within them.

I'd recommend a second sentence, maybe something about its behavior in the wild?

[lapis cosmos]

"legend" appears twice in the second sentence and sounds a bit like a single instance of the Pokemon.

Possible revision: POKENAME's punch is incredibly strong, rumored to be able to send opponent's to space. Legends tell of battles between POKENAME and [insert appropriate Legendary Pokemon].

[lapis cosmos]

I like the idea, but it reads a smidge awkward to me. Take or leave the following revisions.

Possible revisions: POKENAME has never been witnessed awake, instead sleeping while hovering a foot off the ground. Despite being unconscious, its psychic powers let it detect threats and throw rocks with enough force to break bricks.

[lapis cosmos]

Again, great idea (psychic masking for a ninja Pokemon is choice). I'd like to know why it stalks targets (is it a predator, is it vindictive, etc?). You can also cut "What is known is" if you need extra characters.

[vivid spire]

Edited, I agreed with your changes for the entry, just changed the second sentence a smidge:

#28.63 Sandra: Never before witnessed awake, POKENAME sleeps while hovering a foot above the ground. In spite of unconsciousness, it senses threats with its psychic might and responds by throwing rocks hard enough to break bricks.

[lapis cosmos]

Great, just some grammar stuff making it sound like Grezor is the unsuspecting one (possible revision):
Sneaking beneath rough river water, POKENAME readies to attack unsuspecting prey. It breaks the surface with a mighty jump, throwing a Water Shuriken before landing an armor-piercing kick.

[lapis cosmos]

Great! Comma after "paws". While not needed, any biome for the lakes? (arctic, tropical, etc) I just love adding those details when I can!

[vivid spire]

Rough draft change because I think the added detail does help:

#287.487 Gardeninja: Some say POKENAME has the ability to erase its psychic signature making it invisible even to mind readers. Any sensed Psychic types cause a natural hunting instinct to awaken, driving this Pokémon to stalk them and make them disappear.

[vivid spire]

Agreed with the awkwardness of the Unsuspecting, so I’ve added some detail including some of your changes to Grezor’s entry:

#487.212 Grezor: Using rough river rapids as cover, POKENAME tracks unsuspecting prey while gathering energy for an ambush. It breaks the surface with a mighty jump, throwing a Water Shuriken before landing an armor-piercing kick.

[lapis cosmos]

@vivid spire Awesome revisions! You create vivid images with these!

[vivid spire]

Indeed it seemed empty without a location for the Lakeside shores!

#262.487 Weavninja: Groups of POKENAME claim mountainous lakeside shores as their territory. They soften their footsteps to a whisper by collecting water into their paws, allowing them to sneak up on any would-be intruders.

Also thank you for your kind words. Writing is a passion of mine, and I like the challenge of trying to contain it within 250 characters.

Last stop on my Greninja tour today, Grechomp:

#487.299: Nicknamed the Sand Sharpedo of the desert, POKENAME circles shallowly underground, feeding off the water from cactus roots. When its dorsal fin above ground hits a Trainer or Pokémon, it explodes from the sand, prepared to confront foes with solid water scythes.

[round cave]

#1401271207361253447
POKENAME helps out pastry chefs by distinguishing scents of ingredients and providing eggs for use as ingredients. Those who eat even one bite of a dish made using its eggs will become calm and kind.
Feedback?

[vivid spire]

Really like the entry, the only detail I think you could add are what scents the Pokémon is distinguishing? Ingredients? Or whether the dish is done?

[lapis cosmos]

Agreed on the scent comment. You'd be able to change the second "POKENAME" to "its" and remove "to everyone" if you need space.

[regal cedar]

IIRC you have to hit one of the buttons to go to the next page

[fair thicket]

Hello. I just want to say

Mawile’s horns

~~no i will not let that go ~~

[charred dust]

Yeah, I know. But that wasn't what I was referring to.
I think this part of the first page of the entry should be moved to the second page.

Just wanted to point it out. It's nothing too big, so I'm fine with leaving it as is for now.

[vivid spire]

Random idea for Aegiwile, because I was reminded of Mawile:

#329.300: Honorable combatants, POKENAME use their twin jaws as lookouts which weigh the abilities of potential opponents. They allow their foes to strike first, gauging their abilities before counterattacking with furious slashes.

[jagged ledge]

Unfortunately, that is an issue with all entries.

[charred dust]

Ahhh, I see.

[regal cedar]

Yeah, we'd have to manually do it for all entries or come up with some sort of algorithm (and I'm not sure if doing that would even allow the 250 characters).

[mental steppe]

THIS IS AMAZING UGHHHHH My two favorite pokémon in one!! If this gets accepted It will be my main.

[vivid spire]

The sprite has been accepted, it was made by @gaunt crater . This was me making an entry based off their awesome work

[unborn rock]

Continuing the trends of "random fusions from my playthrough", I have Charshrew:
4.27
If startled, it will curl into a ball, unintentionally igniting its surroundings. It's important to train it on non-flammable surfaces such as concrete.

[unborn rock]

And Clefchu:
173.172
It is sensitive to electromagnetic changes in the atmosphere. If an aurora is visible in the night sky, POKENAME are especially prone to accidental electric shocks.

[jagged ledge]

Congratulations to @narrow cosmos for winning the 3 R's Dexdoku!

[vivid spire]

Idea for Tyranchoke:

#248.67: Some say POKENAME makes its armor out of crashed meteorites. If its armor was ever removed it would be able to punch at full power and level a mountain range.

Am I the only one who sees Cooler from DBZ? I wish I could think of a way to reference him in this entry

[hollow tapir]

YAY I GOT MENTIONED IN THE THING

Also I need to double check since I haven’t played games in forever. Is the first icon on the left for Pokémon like. What can be found with the radar?

I just read that cubone entry sk did

I love and hate it WHY IS IT SO SAD

[jagged ledge]

Yup yup! DarkWeavile was nice enough to provide a link to the catalogue of Radar 'mon in #1210021946105004052 so just check the pins there

[jagged ledge]

Of course! It was a good entry! You deserved the honor of an honorable mention

[hollow tapir]

Oh yay I’m glad there’s a catalogue for it

I still love my munchlax entry even if it needed a lot of work

[vivid spire]

Had this random random idea for Kabuitar (is it pronounced like guitar or kaboo-itar?):

#141.248: Researchers found POKENAME was the apex predator of Kanto pre-history. While it is heavily armored with impressive four-foot razor claws, what most don’t expect is how well this Pokémon can swim.

[wanton ember]

@clever loom you need to correct the grammar and punctuation a bit on your dex entry

"When they are happy, POKENAME release a light green smoke whose smell is a mix between Colbur and Kelpsy berries."

could work?

[clever loom]

I forgot the last . but for grammar plase tell me-

[hexed fog]

This occurs just because of how the game imports the text (unfortunately)

It isn't something we can fix here

[clever loom]

(Tak still typing so fast..)

[wanton ember]

https://tenor.com/view/speed-i-am-speed-lightning-mcqueen-cars-meme-gif-14031708

[hexed fog]

When you say halfway between the two berries... am I being stupid on not understanding what that means?

[clever loom]

what is the different between which and whose ?

[hexed fog]

Like halfway between lemon and apple

do you mean it smells like both?

[clever loom]

yeah, like halfway between apple and lemon's smells

[hexed fog]

am I just being very stupid

I am googling this

not me relying on Google AI to make my brain function this morning

[clever loom]

I first thought about some flowers but there aren't non-pokemon flowers named in pokemon universe that i could think of

[hexed fog]

I get it now

no youre good my head is just being le dumb

[clever loom]

genouily scoffed (dk if that it the right word) when reading "le dumb"

[hexed fog]

there have been some really great instances of my brain going brrrrrrrrrrr

omg everyone

be calm

noone submitted a non-username entry today

this is huge

we still have @dull folio capsing a username though 😉

[dull folio]

?

[hexed fog]

stahp capsing your username on entries you booger head

[dull folio]

Can I not use caps?

[hexed fog]

I mean you can but then we have to fix it lol

[clever loom]

By the way : Is that why my name was in light green on excel ?!

[dull folio]

I thought my username was EvilGammon do the caps not come through?

[hexed fog]

you used caps

yeah lol

it's to notify us

[dull folio]

@dull folio

[hexed fog]

when it imports it needs to be lowercase

[dull folio]

Ohhh I never knew that I'm so sorry lmao

[hexed fog]

it's hardly the biggest deal

[dull folio]

At least I know now I'll stop doing that

[hexed fog]

btw 'unserspecting' SENT ME

[dull folio]

They was another late night submit at 2 am that looked right at the time

[hexed fog]

reminds me of my 'uv' instead of 'of'

[dull folio]

Cut me some slack im trying my best

And if I do put uv please ban me from ever writing entries again

[hexed fog]

I am always grateful for your entries