📝project-feedback

[novel comet]

coming never (nice 🙂 )

[sleek marten]

thoughts ???

before

[flint compass]

The trees trying to blend into the sky looks a bit unnatural

[sleek marten]

hmmm

left one ?

[flint compass]

kind of

[sleek marten]

yea its been 3 days since i started PS

dont know much

[flint compass]

Ok

U changed the sky by just inserting another image or the Sky changing tool

[sleek marten]

channel mask

[flint compass]

oh ok

[sleek marten]

anything else which can be done better

[flint compass]

hmmm

let me see

[sleek marten]

or new tricks to make it better

the moon needs to be repositioned i think

to match the shadow

[flint compass]

Ok there's a small problem in the pic,

The grass and the trees in the first pic look more clear and natural, however in the edited one those grass and trees are blurred(Idk u did in purpose or it;s coz the discord's limited photo res)

[flint compass]

true and the Moon doesn't seem blended in to the sky, the moon looks it suddenly appeared

[sleek marten]

yepp

[sleek marten]

definitely me

i used the brighten tool

i forgot the name

[flint compass]

ohhh ok

[sleek marten]

the opposite of burn

[flint compass]

ok

[sleek marten]

it kinda blurred it i think

[flint compass]

yep

[sleek marten]

the moonlight filter darkened

it

[flint compass]

AH, found a detail

[sleek marten]

so it was an effort from my side to get a shadow

[flint compass]

after editing, y is there still a light at the grass area

[flint compass]

ok

[sleek marten]

yea i noticed that 💀

[flint compass]

u can darken that area

[flint compass]

ok

[sleek marten]

ill get better

[flint compass]

ok

[sleek marten]

just been 3 days

😅

[flint compass]

yea ik that, once experienced those times

oh and btw, where is that place? The view is quite good ngl

[sleek marten]

its in india

shes my mom

[flint compass]

Ohhh ok

[sleek marten]

i took the pic

[flint compass]

ok

[sleek marten]

thanks for your time man

[flint compass]

And I think u created that shadow for ur mum purposly right?

[flint compass]

np

[sleek marten]

yea

needs to be sharper i think

[flint compass]

how u did that? By brushing that area using black color?

[sleek marten]

burn

[flint compass]

ok

If I didn't forget, I think u can copy ur mum into a transparent image, and turn the brightness to darkest. Then rotate and use that darken image as shadow

[sleek marten]

ooo

and i can warp according to my need and angles then right ?

thanks man

[flint compass]

i havent been editing "Humans" for a while. I usually edit objects more than humans

[sleek marten]

with a bit of transparency

[flint compass]

yes

[sleek marten]

aha

[flint compass]

Maybe decrease the fill and opacity

[sleek marten]

hmmm thanks, will take in consideration next times

[flint compass]

and the outline of the mountain could be a bit darker and thiner, the attractions went to the mountains more than ur mum or the sky

[sleek marten]

ooooo okayyy

i seee

@flint compasshey one more thing

after using quick selection and masking

the left tool bar doesnt show the other options

like edge refining tool

[flint compass]

oh yes, u can see more functions by clicking at sth everyone is different. Screencap ur photoshop toolbar and I'll know where to view more. And coz I am using 2021 so I am different, just screencap

[sleek marten]

k

it froze because i chose select all subjects

oof

[flint compass]

oh, ummm how good is ur PC?

[sleek marten]

i5 4th gen

[flint compass]

ok

[novel comet]

It looks like you struggled with her shadow. - try something like this: #❓ask-a-question message

[sleek marten]

how about now ? @novel comet@flint compass

[sleek marten]

thnx

[distant cave]

Hello everyone, Haven’t do any DCC projects for long time.

Here’s what I do recently https://www.behance.net/gallery/147840053/365-Days-of-Creativity-1

[fallen anchor]

Third Attempt of Sam's July 19 Character drawing @vivid dragon I kind of went free style here.

[onyx elm]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/148779569/Louis-Vuitton-poster-by-Hex

[lament girder]

https://www.instagram.com/p/CgWU59JvSkv/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

Feedback please!

hexcoder13

People are noisy.

Instagram

[neon wren]

what is it for

[grizzled parrot]

right i found an issue

[sleek marten]

From this to that

[quick pawn]

feedback?

[whole hedge]

Both of them look great my favourite has to be the speed one.

[upbeat nova]

me personally would probably place the text above or below the car, which I think would also increase readability

[novel comet]

I disagree - I think the word over the middle is the right way to go. - You're picking aesthetics over accessibility - which for a graphic/visual is fine 🙂

[toxic dome]

I feel like the bottom picture is too dark. Given the vibrant colours of the product, there needs be more lighting.

[sand furnace]

Thanks for the feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @olive dawn

[eager marten]

any ideas on how I can make this better/pop more?

[sleek marten]

Change the gradient to something appetizing

Like the middle of the gradient could be better maybe. ??

That's just my opinion

The brownish middle of the two colours make it a bit dead imo

[sleek marten]

Yeah I think the same

At this moments they feel more like cutouts from another picture maybe

[sand furnace]

before

after

[sleek marten]

Old packets were better imo

[sand furnace]

Thanks for your opinion

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @sleek marten

[sleek marten]

👍👍

[sand furnace]

I didn’t cancel the old packets

[sleek marten]

Noicee

[sand furnace]

https://tenor.com/view/noice-nice-click-gif-8843762

[sleek marten]

Exactly

[flint dew]

that would be great for an ad

it looks nice

[novel comet]

I've seen so many of these images on this discord, I'm starting to think they ARE an ad. - @sand furnace works for the company and trying subvertly trying to get the branding seen my as many people as possible....

🙂

[sand furnace]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @flint dew

[sand furnace]

Sorry for posting so many designs

[distant geyser]

any ideas on how to help this be better {its college football graphic}

[sacred sundial]

any tips on how to make this look more realistic?

i am removing my friend from the original image

[frigid lodge]

It looks pretty realistic already. I don’t think the average person would ever question that you removed someone from the photo.

You can see some artifacts from using probably the clone tool to remove him

Maybe select those areas and add a slight Gaussian blur to soften them?

[whole hedge]

That looks awesome. But currently the whale shark is going straight towards rocks maybe you could flip him horizontally to make his trajectory go out of frame, or make the rocks look like they are lower than the whale shark.

woah didn't notice the skeleton thats dope.

I'm just saying this as constructive criticism I could never make anything this awesome.

[frigid lodge]

The idea was that the rocks are at the bottom of the water but the water is so clear that you can see them.

[whole hedge]

i can see that it's just that the whale shark looks less clear than the rocks do

[spring fiber]

i need alot of honest feedbacks

[frigid lodge]

I see what you’re saying about the shark looking less clear than the rocks. Thanks!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @whole hedge

[turbid bloom]

I started following along with Paul Trani's livestream on Behance, then got creative and end up with something whole different.
There wasn't a plan for this, just some fun.

I would love to hear your thought on it! 😄

[upbeat sandal]

Looks nice

[nocturne apex]

No idea what I am doing, photo manipulated, Pexels was my sources for the photos

[granite tapir]

B4 edit

[frigid lodge]

I’m surprised this place isn’t filled with these edits with the challenge going on. Haha great job! Here’s mine!

[upbeat sandal]

Well, because I kinda started a little late

So, I am not going to join the challenge. Maybe the next one, when there is one.

[thin falcon]

I wanted to create an iPhone wallpaper from 'remastered assets' of my favourite game. (Beyond Good & Evil)
Something feels off, any feedback is appreciated 😄

[toxic dome]

any tips on how to improve the neon to look more realistic? or improve the image itself? DM me if you want also. thanks

[granite tapir]

Happened to me last time, so I did it just for myself

[granite tapir]

Neons have white inner glow and coloe outer glow, try to play with those in blend if menu

[toxic dome]

thanks i have been got some tips earlier

[granite tapir]

Looks better now

[toxic dome]

ty

I wonder if there are any further adjustments i could make to this image.. should i re-add a slight poster effect? or are there better filters i could try

[turbid bloom]

I would play around with light and shadows.
The bottom of the cassette player could be 'blend' into the whole image by adding some darkness and shadow. Also adding a bit more colour lights on the top of the player (shiny reflections of the neon letters) might do a lot. Good luck with this project!

[toxic dome]

@turbid bloom

just saw your message but i added some purple to the floor which makes more sense

"The bottom of the cassette player could be 'blend' into the whole image by adding some darkness and shadow."
do you mean something different than whats already there?

not sure what u mean

and thanks 🙂

[patent glade]

Before and after
I'm pretty new to photoshop and I would appreciate a bit of feedback.

[rustic solar]

Here's my attempt at the spray paint effect on a person

[viral scaffold]

Made a Logo for my Fictional Private jet Company

[sonic junco]

Editied it in a diff mood

[turbid bloom]

What I mean is: left bottom side of the casette player, there's a sharp edge between the gray casette player and the dark floor. If you add more shaddow on the player (so this edge is less sharp) the casette player will blend in better in the whole image.

[turbid bloom]

That definitely does a lot.
Also: here's a nice tutorial on what I meant by 'colour lights/shiny reflections' (didn't know how to describe that good enough)
https://youtu.be/yUPIChL7_x8

I think the example at 6:50 will apply to your work best.

[patent glade]

Any feedback on how to make this better? I'm kinda new to Photoshop

[wide coyote]

Hi hope @everyone is doing well. I am a professional UX UI Designer looking for work. If you are interested DM. Plus if you need any kind of help or suggestion I'm happy to help, Also here is the link to my portfolio, check it out and let me know what you think.

Peace!

https://www.behance.net/gallery/148498663/Portfolio-2022-Sultan-Mehmood

[novel comet]

Is it me or is that wrist bent around the wrong way? Looks painful!

Also, I think the nose here should be covering some of the goggles, apply a bit of a layer mask on the left edge:

[novel comet]

I'm not a huge fan, simply because I don't know what the big curve is meant to be. - It takes up a lot of real estate on the canvas.

[novel comet]

A spraypaint effect I don't think would usually be that detailed would it? Maybe check out the posterization effects to simplify the photo of soldier boy.

Or drybrush, or cutout?

[viral scaffold]

Like some sort of Jet Trails

I could change it later

[novel comet]

This what I meant - This used the 'cutout' filter with the sliders nudged around a bit...

[rustic solar]

Omg that looks so good thank you

[toxic dome]

I will check out that tutorial thanks

[upbeat nova]

first impulse is colors and brightness of the butterfly dont match the environment

[arctic ivy]

ok bro

[frigid lodge]

I’m trying to get better and building an atmosphere and depth in my work. To blend the mountains I used Color Balance, Exposure, and Curves adjustments as well and a color fill layer set to screen. My goal was to make some of the mountains appear distant and hazy. I somewhat achieved that but not as much as I wanted to. Any tips?

[patent glade]

Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @upbeat nova

[rustic solar]

Was it only the cutout filter you used? And what were your slider settings just trying to get reference

Wait I think I got it, I had my displacement map still on that's why

[upbeat sandal]

I tried something different. So, here is my first 2D artwork.

[fallow bough]

CHIKEN

[spring fiber]

cute chicken, how did you do that i may ask?

[manic sleet]

I’m not entirely sure if this is the correct channel, however my ‘challenge’ for someone would be to add a belt in the red square.

A similar/same belt as the others.

[fallow bough]

For the record, you should never wear a belt with a vest

Suspenders is the way to go incase you have to use a vest

That guy is the only correctly dressed one

[lavish ingot]

Logo I made for a friend.

[manic sleet]

Absolutely perfect, can I send you the whole photo?

[novel comet]

Yeah go for it. If you're the wedding photographer though, I assume you'd want it redoing PROPERLY on a much higher resolution image?

[manic sleet]

I didn't realise that you could make it a higher resolution.

[novel comet]

my quick little 2 minute attempt was done on a crappy low res image. - it's going to look awful if you somehow take that low res image and whack it over the top of your proper image?

If you want it done properly, you'd need to supply me with the high res image. If you're the photographer, I'm expecting you to have one at least 20+ mb?

[manic sleet]

Yeah I should have a better image, I’ll DM it to you.

@novel comet It's too powerful for discord, can I email you it?

[novel comet]

I'd suggest you send a wetransfer.com LINK

that's faster than email anyway

[manic sleet]

I'll have a look

@novel comet I sent you the link.

[granite tapir]

b4 edit

[wide ginkgo]

I made update to my masterpiece!

Hard critisim only!

[astral sandal]

i feel like its rlly messy though

im open to opinions

[upbeat sandal]

This is not a submission, but I still wanted to do something with the terraforming robot stock. What do you think?

[grave vale]

I need to make an independence day post for my club. Now, we both know this looks ugly; how do I make it better lol

TYIA

[slim hare]

A novelty typeface I've been working on, I'd love some input on some changes I could make, Specifically looking for some input on how I might change the S, the Z is a lot more clean, but it doesnt quite workout with the S to reverse the direction. I believe I'll make changes currently to the j and t, (removing the extra 'dot' on the j and extending the stem of the t

I realize its not the most legible typeface, it is strictly novelty

[tawdry falcon]

WIP

[knotty marlin]

Can i get the plp flie if u finished?

[rancid arrow]

trying to make animated pixel art..

[knotty marlin]

It takes years

[rancid arrow]

almost done btw..

[upbeat sandal]

What about this one?

[ashen dirge]

Hey I need to conduct a research for my new app and website, Please help me to conduct this survey to be a part of this. Your participation will be appreciated👏 link of the survey - https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfRWNcoPAcqkvFzkCTY0a935jrI7CJd55ZtRitaI-6Vl8wWow/viewform?usp=sf_link

[novel comet]

Hows it looking?

[novel comet]

In all honesty, - I know you said it's more a novelty font, but I genuinely cannot read it. - I only know what it says because it's the usual 'Quick brown fox...' quote...

[arctic ivy]

One Piece

[upper steeple]

what should i do to make the sky popup more ?

[rancid arrow]

idk man.. it looks kinda flat since i dont have any idea how to animated the guy on the project..

[novel comet]

Personally, I think it's maybe It's a tad too dark?

[rancid arrow]

orite.. ill try it on different tone..

[rancid arrow]

w8 lemme send u something..

[novel comet]

nice though. I wouldn't have a clue how to draw something like that.

[rancid arrow]

which one do you prefer?

[novel comet]

ummm

I kinda like the more natural friendly earth tones of the top one. - bottom one feels a bit stark/miserable...

[rancid arrow]

oh okok.. maybe ill try to make it a lil bit lighter.. thx for the feedeback..

[astral sandal]

personally i like the bottom

[arctic ivy]

my cosplay and work,Like it

[wide coyote]

My UX UI Design Portfolio, will update frequently.
https://www.behance.net/gallery/149716113/Mobile-App-UI-UX-Designs

Feedback is highly appreciated.

[ember flare]

Hey guys! How can I imrpove this poster? (I know that the statue has watermark)

[toxic dome]

Hey i added a new collection in my portfolio click the link if u want to see it tomorrow teddy gamer logo will be added
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1oWgN9Na4ZJK8UCSvyKrpZORqTgYWVdzF

[upbeat nova]

better leading align text properly, black on red is a terrible color choice

[magic compass]

@upbeat novau r right he should change the color

[grizzled parrot]

make the text a darker white and the statue black n white

[grizzled parrot]

bottom

[grizzled parrot]

boost the contrast, maybe add a sun lens effect

[grizzled parrot]

lovely i just hate the watermark text on the bottom

[grizzled parrot]

literally cant read anything

[grizzled parrot]

i can count the pixels

[upbeat sandal]

thanks, the watermark is my instagram name

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @grizzled parrot

[wide ginkgo]

How about this one?

[upbeat sandal]

Its looks really awesome

[peak delta]

created a banner for a friends social medias

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/902141669078626335/1005215369289539655/finn_banner.png

[peak delta]

looks good, but looks like it was rendered in a low quality. maybe try exporting it with bigger dimensions?

[peak delta]

OH nevermind haha nice

[wise condor]

Was bored so decided to make a new profile picture for Discord. This works when the picture is so small, but I wondered if anyone had a good way to make cleaner cuts?

[wise condor]

Love everything about this! The neon colours energetic and the balance of the banner is good. The only thing is, depending on where this banner is placed, the social media handles can be hard to read but thats really the only thing 😄

[wise condor]

This is a great recreation of acid paintings! At first glance it seems rather simple, but the more you look at it the more interesting it gets. The colour combination is well done and the noice is a nice touch. The only thing I would change is the burnt (white) area in the bottom left corner as I think it demands too much attention. It could be a nice contrast to the purpleish tree 😄

[wise condor]

I like the speed of the design 🏃 , and that you've made the fighter go "through" the S. I would look a little more at the space around the title, fex. theres very much space on the sides of the &, and very little between the lines and the fighters

[tawdry falcon]

Thanks 🙂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wise condor

[viral scaffold]

Thanks !

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wise condor

[prisma pasture]

Hey! Hello, ok, I'm a beginner editing images and I tried to do this, I don't know, I see it well, but something doesn't convince me. If you have some to tell me or advice me, I will be so grateful, even if it's criticism, be rude :D

[astral sandal]

maybe the purple/pink clouds don't match with the rest of the environment?

so maybe make the colors match with the clouds 🤷‍♂️

[prisma pasture]

mh... okay, I will keep it in mind, thank youuu :D

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @astral sandal

[astral sandal]

np!!

[astral sandal]

looks very clean

[granite tapir]

Thx

[quiet lintel]

not done but people want to buy it the orginal picture will be out soon

how much would you buy it if it was you just asking

[arctic ivy]

Like?

[toxic dome]

cool i wana turn me into obito or itachi

but i am noob in PS

[toxic dome]

can you help me @arctic ivy

[soft pollen]

I need some feedback on this. This is a ticket design for an event.

[rancid arrow]

idk sir.. personally i think the background is kinda too flat

[timber hound]

Made something in photoshop today I want to improve tell me what I can improve on in this and Iam learning photoshop

[upbeat sandal]

looks pretty good

[grizzled harness]

Try to blur and mosh tge edges between ur head and the clouds maybe add some effects and shafows

[arctic ivy]

Moriah

[rustic solar]

I've used this image before for some other edit. Anyways. My goal here was to brighten things up and add some vibrance. This is in Lightroom my first attempt

[toxic dome]

How did you make those backgrounds in fact how are backgrounds made in photoshop

thoughts?

[upbeat nova]

pretty cool, I dont like the blurred bottom half and the blue dots and it seems a bit weird that the doggo is so bright compared to the rest

also the reddish part at the top doesnt fit the green/blue of the rest

[toxic dome]

i tried to make little gaps of light to make the blur look far away

[upbeat nova]

maybe overlay everything with some color

[toxic dome]

this is the og pic

[upbeat nova]

thats not the original is it?

it wouldnt make sense that the foreground is blurry but the rest not I think?

[toxic dome]

hmmm you make a point there

[upbeat nova]

not sure if its correct what I say obviously you could take a foto where something obstructing the lens is blurry

I guess

xD

[toxic dome]

yeah the grass wasnt focused so thats why

[storm comet]

I am struggling to find a way to bring this logo to life and actually look like it's good for a business any feedback appreciated

not sure if I wanna go for a hybrid type logo or a purely text one

[magic jewel]

https://twitter.com/VelocityCreates/status/1556916084988600321?s=20&t=B15zxuJt30THHgFLrIAAAA

Vove Nate🇮🇪 (@VelocityCreates)

POSTER FOR @danielricciardo @McLarenF1 @F1
#danielricciardo #F1

https://t.co/Qlg1NTYmGT

Twitter · Aug 9, 2022, 8:11 AM

[timber hound]

Youtube There Are actually pretty easy to learn and recommended for beginners

[upbeat sandal]

What do you think?

[storm comet]

could I get some feedback here please?

[round current]

What does this design make you think of?

(ping me)

[upbeat sandal]

Its hard to get a feedback here, but I will say that the logo looks pretty standard, in other words....good

[storm comet]

reptile eye

[upbeat nova]

makes me think of an eye of a cat

or yeah reptile eye didnt see that xD

[visual swallow]

could I use this on a personal t shirt design?

[wooden oak]

Logos are generally a lot more simple in design. Thus, the version with the hand looks more like an illustration than a logo. The text-only version is a very plain, sans-serif font. Aside from the name, there is nothing that really makes it unique. Maybe try some different fonts and see if you can get some different styles. Also, I'd ask in the Illustrator Server. You can probably get more traditional graphic design help there.

[storm comet]

Alright thank you very much

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[languid knot]

Cat/reptile eye, yin & yang, half and half, coffee bean, boiled egg sliced in half. It's hard to tell what it is without the name of the brand which could provide more context

[upbeat sandal]

What do you guys think of this one?

some feedback at least

[tribal prism]

Sure! Make sure to tag me on Instagram with the t-shirt, I would love to see it

[gray haven]

Which logo is better

1 or 2

1

2

settling a debate

[visual swallow]

the text of the first and the logo of the second (personal opinion)

btw that corner is kinda weird

I would move the duck to hide it

[visual swallow]

what is ur @?

oh

[tribal prism]

@bitter ravenga.alin_

[visual swallow]

allright

[tribal prism]

: D

[quiet patio]

https://files.fm/u/y4reahhmm can u make comment my retouching work? does skin seem artificial or its good? (it is upload link, this file is big so i cant upload it here)

[dapper obsidian]

I think you overblurred a bit

[quiet patio]

i wanted them to disappear but i cant

what should i do? should i blur more to disappear them or let them stay i got confused

[flint compass]

Changes?

[dapper obsidian]

Blur just enough as i told you..

You should pick a nice spot

Thats it

[quiet patio]

okay but if i decrease blur, they will still show up, it is okay them to show up?

[dapper obsidian]

😩 that is for you decide, its about what you are trying to achieve

It s not difficult to erase them without making it look un natural

[quiet patio]

i am asking how to do this

[dapper obsidian]

Just duplicate the photo, blur it just enogh so they don t show up at %100

Mask it, make the mask black

[quiet patio]

but you say you blur too much. even now they are still showing

[dapper obsidian]

And paint with white

[quiet patio]

okay thank you

[dapper obsidian]

Only those parts

[novel comet]

It pains me to link to tiktok... BUT... it's pretty good to be fair:
https://www.tiktok.com/@ronyjanseeno/video/7103289914640436481

[quiet patio]

i am using frequency separation technique. after what stage should I do this?

[novel comet]

I have no piggin' idea - I just liked the video

sorry

[quiet patio]

thanks for help

[sleek marten]

AMAZING

OH MY

https://tenor.com/view/gigachad-chad-gif-20773266

^^^^^ so this u ?@severe sand

[quiet patio]

https://easyupload.io/q3ypg4 Do you have any feedback on it (retouching work)

[flint compass]

Changes?

[toxic dome]

looks good damn

[flint compass]

But r there anything to change like the fonts?

[soft pollen]

I just checked it. The skin has an artificial look and doesn't look real to me at least. You can go ahead and use clone stamp and healing tools for this. Otherwise later on if you feel the ambition then apply frequency separation method.👍

[quiet patio]

I already used healing brush tool but I guess I used blur 2 times for different purposes. I think thats why skin look artificial

I am already using Frequency Separation technique, are you saying I should use another technique?

[soft pollen]

Well, then try to adjust the blur because it might has been overdosed in the respect of final outcome.

[wicked escarp]

holy

[tribal prism]

moly

[wicked escarp]

hows this one?

[tribal prism]

dope

[wicked escarp]

ty

im new

[tribal prism]

is it a merch?

[wicked escarp]

no but i'd love to sell it

to a seler of merch

seller*

[tribal prism]

Nice

[quiet patio]

okay, i will try to adjust blur thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @soft pollen

[upbeat sandal]

Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @sleek marten

[upbeat sandal]

This is so beautiful

[sleek marten]

Guyss

My fren made this

I converted to this

[toxic dome]

Thanks bro

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @upbeat sandal

[wicked escarp]

Yoo epic

[sleek marten]

:D

Pen tool 😱

[toxic dome]

Feedback?

[fading hazel]

so i have a school class logo project. the theme is inspired by gucci/hermes/LV logo. any advice to make it better?

i think this channel is the right place to ask this

[wicked escarp]

I think its looking pretty good

[wicked escarp]

YOOO how did u get the smoke there could u please tell me?

[fading hazel]

what should i do to make the logo better?

[wicked escarp]

I think its pretty done tbh

[fading hazel]

i am not satisfied about the logo

[wicked escarp]

just the logo?

tell me what font is tht?

ill try to make one

and see if i can make it better

[fading hazel]

hmm

the dollar font is

georgia

and the n

is rolls royce font

https://fontsempire.com/font/rolls-royce-font/

there it is

[wicked escarp]

ok

[toxic dome]

does the image look good?

[wicked escarp]

Is that a question?

lmao

its amazing!

[toxic dome]

ahaha thanks!

It's like my third time ever

well, I just searched "smoke png"

then found a good one

[wicked escarp]

OHH

btw a sugesstion

u should use freepik

[toxic dome]

whats that?

[wicked escarp]

A site

With millions of pics

i used it to get a banner for a guy

[toxic dome]

Oh thanks!

[wicked escarp]

check this out!

[toxic dome]

damn!

[fading hazel]

cool cool

@wicked escarp are you now tryin to remaking my logo?

[wicked escarp]

yea

im still trying

[fading hazel]

ok thanks. i hope you find a better design of it

[wicked escarp]

i cant move the n to a ceratin place so ill just leave it u can fix it just a minor deatail tht i added

look dude now

im no logo expert yet

but i tried to change the color pallete

i thgink the colors look better now

[fading hazel]

hmm

wait

let mesee

[wicked escarp]

u can change it to ur desired font now

btw this is in Tojan Colors golden

[fading hazel]

are you using the font that i give to you

[wicked escarp]

no i said u can

[fading hazel]

the color and fx is very nice

[wicked escarp]

ty

[fading hazel]

sorry what font is that?

[wicked escarp]

the color is The torjan colors golden

[fading hazel]

i was asking for the font sorry

what font is that?

[fading hazel]

its great but its to modern

i need something elegant

[fading hazel]

great but its not my cup of tea sorry

[wicked escarp]

trajan

[fading hazel]

ooh

alright

man

thank you for telling me this font

this good

[wicked escarp]

welcome!

i think it has more than 1 color

[fading hazel]

@wicked escarp do you have the real color sample?

of that

[wicked escarp]

it was just selected for me

but wait

just selcted for me

should i send u the code for it?

[toxic dome]

how is this

oops

[flint compass]

The human's face is a bit dark, maybe brighten a BIT

[toxic dome]

thats not the one

[fading hazel]

sure

[wicked escarp]

sheesh

using freepik this time ? lol

i tried out the somke thing

[toxic dome]

nah thats zyzz

zyzz is a legend

found him on google

[fading hazel]

@wicked escarp wdyt?

[sleek marten]

my friend made this

i converted it into this

: D

[fading hazel]

Cool

[toxic dome]

awesome, how did you do it

[visual plover]

Help me guys please 😢

[toxic dome]

💀

[wicked escarp]

Yooo this is fire

[sleek marten]

Heyy

Ok

So first I played with levels and darkened it

The i made a path around the lines

And stroked them with black

Then added colors

Then gradiend

The glow

[sleek marten]

Epico

[verbal thicket]

Im a begginer please don't hate

[flint compass]

1. The text doesn't look natural enough
2. The yellow icon in the middle doesn't match the texture and the color of the red shield
3. The plant surrounding the icon is a bit weird to be in the picture

But what is this actually for? Maybe I can give u some ideas

[verbal thicket]

This is for Clash of Clans logo in my discord channel

[flint compass]

Ahhh

ok

1. You can add a Baibarian face or the Clan Wars double sword int the middle.
2. Maybe you can use a wooden texture for the shield

[flint compass]

And also add ur clan text maybe below the icon (I mean the middle stuff, idk what will u put)

[verbal thicket]

ill show u why I choose that soon in your dm let my phone charge hold a min

@flint compass

[flint compass]

hmm ok

[dapper herald]

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/1000500745881255956/1008227717625430046/unknown.png

[astral sandal]

nice rust art

I feel like the lumin text sort of ruins it though

[dapper herald]

Ik it is just my name since people love to steal my stuff and just put there name over it

[astral sandal]

oh true people do that lol

[dapper herald]

They litterly take my stuff snip out the name and then sell it

[astral sandal]

I guess its inevitable but I'm sure you can sue them if they actually sell it

actually nvm I think there's more to it than that but yeah

that sort of stuff happens and I guess you can't do much about it

except like add a bunch of watermarks

[lyric mason]

What do you guys think of this gym logo I made for someone?

[toxic dome]

typography looks too compressed imo
try changing the font but keep it the same style (sans serif)

[lyric mason]

Ok alright

[thorny thistle]

design concept i made, what do you guys think?

[toxic dome]

First image editing in Photoshop

[main tundra]

I am on the mega noob territory but does anyone have feedback for this?

[icy terrace]

https://tenor.com/view/perfect-10-score-gif-7911501

[soft pollen]

@sharp grail As far as I know, you could have used the refine edge tool in "select and mask" feature or you could tweak the value of shift edge in the same section. But anyway, it's a pro work!👌

[soft pollen]

#✂challenges-feedback message

[dapper herald]

text is horrible

[toxic dome]

To begin with, I did not ask for opinions.

[dapper herald]

it litterly says design feedback for the channel name

are you dumb

[dapper herald]

all you did was add bad text over it

[dapper ruin]

Not sure if it fits in here but it's made in react. What would you change on it ? https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1005779133609017374/1007651508352991293/unknown.png

[dapper herald]

?

[toxic dome]

Because that's how the posters are, that's how the movie is, it's suspenseful and terrifying

[dapper ruin]

I mean design wise. Font's etc..

[sacred crystal]

Here's a photo composition I made:
https://www.behance.net/gallery/150502925/Photo-composition

[devout crystal]

Been trying to make a correctional center patch (prison) for a friend that enjoys haunted house acting. This is my most recent version, I feel like it's missing something.

[pliant parcel]

honestly, i personally think that it looks good,its a logo so no need to be full of things

[wooden oak]

@dapper herald is correct. This channel is for receiving comments on projects you post. If you don't want feedback on your projects, you should just post in #🎨share-your-work-archive.

[wooden oak]

Generally, logos are created as vector graphics so they are resolution independent. Typically, those sorts of graphics are created in a tool like Adobe Illustrator. You may want to consider that if this artwork needs to be flexible in terms of usage, i.e. print, screen, web, shirts, embroidery, etc. Regarding the design: it does look like an actual insignia for a correctional facility. I don't think it necessarily needs any other elements. You might want to decrease the size of the scale to add a bit more space at the top and bottom. Currently, it looks very close to the lettering which makes it look a little crowded. The space around the inside edges of the shield and space between the main elements should be similar. That might help to balance it out.

[thorny thistle]

made this design for a small clothing brand, what do y’all think?

[astral kindle]

Check out my Sports Media Design Collection on Behance

#sportsdesign #sports #media #f1 #mma #football #cricket #basketball

https://www.behance.net/gallery/150521663/Sports-Media-Design-SMA

[unborn cloud]

@devout crystal looks super nice

maybe if bottom letters were just a bit lower

that's what's off, imho

[sleek marten]

i like photoshop

we like photoshop

[unborn cloud]

@sleek marten you like Photoshop

[sleek marten]

yes :D

[devout crystal]

I made the scale a tiny bit smaller. Any better? or more?

[wooden oak]

It looks better. Not as crowded.

[viral scaffold]

Bored edit lol

[sleek marten]

Noice

[exotic dock]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/148689781/Drake-De-Deus-Brand-Identity

Guys do check out my new project and let me know your views on the same!

[ember flare]

Hey guys! I don't like how my "projects" section looks on my portfolio website. What would you guys reccomend?

[viral scaffold]

Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @sleek marten

[viral scaffold]

lol

[stark gust]

What do you think for my 2nd attempt at using PS??? (left google image of the footy top, right my attempt from PS To fivem)

Made for a friends server

[tawdry falcon]

Hahaha. The summer update brushes are fun

[upbeat violet]

Hey just jumping in hope that's OK. Caveat: I don't know anything about what this will be used for so maybe others can advise on that 😉 Things that I like about this design: Elements are not overcomplicated. Good contrast between dark/light and variation in texture.

My note#1: is the placement Lock down the design before you do anything with colour/texture/fonts.

If you're not already doing so, make a layer for each element.

Hide all layers except the shield and one graphic element the wreath and use transform controls to balance out the negative space (i.e. the shape of the space around and inside and between things). This is probably the most important step of making a good design. Then show the lightning bolt and adjust so it has a good positive/negative shape against the other two. Try resizing/overlapping elements (and changing layer order) if you don't like the results.

Note #2 Then turn on the circular text layer and align its curve with the shape of the wreath. Resize it very small - can you read it? I think this is a pretty good font for readability, but if you want to change, now's the time.

Then resize the image very large and adjust the spaces between the letters (read up on kerning for more advice on this -- type design is a deep dive and there are whole books on the subject).

Note #3 Can you reduce the number of colours? 3 is plenty (I count 5 here). If you sample the most important colour, you can use the slider wheel to adjust hue, individual RGB or Saturation/black levels. But adjusting just one or two levels on a base colour, you can make some very pleasing color schemes. View in greyscale to check if there's good contrast between light/dark.

Note #4 resize it very small again and squint your eyes. does it still look good? Can you tell what it's supposed to be?

If you make revisions, please post! I'd love to see where this goes.

[dapper herald]

Nothing was really that complicating to do that but looks alright

[potent musk]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/150823807/Love-Death-Robots

[stark gust]

Thanks, Never in my life have I used photoshop tho so was pretty proud hahaha getting confused with other stuff now tho and it’s annoying me

[tribal prism]

You don't need 8 hrs to learn this. There are 5 min tutorials on yt

[wooden oak]

About 8 seconds if you use a preset. Not throwing rocks. Just sayin' :)

[hollow trail]

its for fiverr

[tribal prism]

Ikr

[hollow trail]

people on fiverr deliver these types of photos in 2 days!

[tribal prism]

Well this isn't fiverr

[wooden oak]

Yeah but you're posting in a Photoshop User Group with no explanation of what that is.

[hollow trail]

i just posted

[wooden oak]

Yeah. Now you did.

[hollow trail]

dumb az ppl

[wooden oak]

Be civil or you can leave.

[hollow trail]

blah blah blah

[wooden oak]

Final warning

[hollow trail]

bye bye

[wooden oak]

Adios!

[cunning pollen]

Very good work maybe reduce the wave texture a notch maybe very small amount of gaussian bluer

[stark gust]

Thankyou kajrov 😆 but everything after that I have no clue as to what u mean as it’s literally my second time using PS so at the minute it’s literally like 🤯

[cunning pollen]

It's look like his is wait for Santa to com, well done

[misty flint]

The particlish stuff on top like form a square shape, so I think it’s better to just spread out and randomise it a bit

[flint compass]

Thoughts?

[proper niche]

Somewhat a beginner to photoshop, did one of the recent daily challenges. Thoughts?

[minor ridge]

Hello Guys, could you give me some comments for this poster, I make it for a night of worship.

And here is the logo that I created for the alcohol branding. Our target customer is the normal people with common salary in VIETNAM. The main core value is to bring the connection and the memory when they taste and drink our products.

[toxic dome]

Hey there, the layout seems pretty basic to me. Try playing with the typography so that the poster catches the eye of the viewer and attracts more attention. And the CTA button is too small in the corner, make it stand out

As for the logo, I won’t say too much as it’s the client’s decision to make changes or not, just that you’re aware, logos are created in Adobe Illustrator or any vector graphics software, so if you want feedback on logos, this photoshop server isn’t technically the place to go for.

[sand furnace]

part 1

[minor ridge]

Thank you for your feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shut garnet

[minor ridge]

Where are you from?

[toxic dome]

Canada

[viral scaffold]

Zombieland X Left 4 Dead

[indigo hollow]

Hey, I'm beginning to get back in the flow of making things again, trying to make fake album covers has worked so far, wanted to see if anyone had any major critiques they could give me for a design like this

[grave monolith]

with or without bottom text?

[arctic ivy]

my previwe

[icy mist]

Thats sick bro

[icy mist]

Thats awsome!!

I rrly like the colour Pallette

And rule of thirds being used 😮‍💨

Kinda

[toxic dome]

sick

[minor kraken]

any feedback for this?

[proper niche]

Challenge im doing for another server, thoughts?

[magic jewel]

https://twitter.com/VelocityCreates/status/1563900686852562944?s=20&t=5pvNsJVLS9366Mai5XcH2A

Vove Nate🇮🇪 (@VelocityCreates)

Poster for @Charles_Leclerc @ScuderiaFerrari @F1
#charlesleclerc #F1

https://t.co/Qlg1NTYmGT
❤♻

Twitter · Aug 28, 2022, 2:45 PM

[white ice]

I'm new In PS but after following a tutorial I made these.

PS: The "NOPE" one is based of the movie "Nope"

[stark gust]

Deffo a nope from me it was shockingly bad 😂

[cunning pollen]

My new logo Big and Small Color and B/W

79*79

[echo spear]

Any tips how to make it better?

[mossy heart]

Hi! I'm looking for feedback on ficitional YouTube Thumbnails and it's variations. Title: Giving Away $10,000 to the first stranger I see Brief: Along the same vein as Mr. Beast’s big giveaway videos, this video features a man on a mission who has decided to film his giving away $10,000 to the first stranger he sees at his local park. He wants the thumbnail to really command attention

[young wyvern]

It looks like a thumbnail from a scam or clickbait channel to be honest @mossy heart

[mossy heart]

What can I do to change that?

[young wyvern]

maybe you can just use simple photos of a person holding a money with some effects on it

also the font looks confusing

some thick some thin

also it is overwhelming with texts

[clear lark]

yes try something minimal and attractive

[young wyvern]

maybe just writing 10.000 dollar give away only is better

that design is too much

[mossy heart]

The video title in the brief was "Giving Away $10,000 to the first stranger I see!".

[clear lark]

if u don't mind can ya take a peek at #❓ask-a-question I need a lil help

[toxic dome]

made this from an image of an mountain and an image of the milky way, thoughts?

[tall wave]

before and after

[sterile elm]

How did you do that. THat is super impressive

@tall wave

[dense mason]

Yes this is so cool @tall wave

haha man u rock

[astral sandal]

I don't usually do this sorta stuff but i tried

[wooden oak]

Cool! Also, what are you feeding that dog? :D

[astral sandal]

well he'll be feeding on human flesh

those r da flames coming out of his mouth

[tall wave]

I wonder why no one has repositioned the dog onto a skyrim canvas and make him Alduin

like put him on a building

[bitter meadow]

my Neon Edit The sims

[tawdry falcon]

WIP

[wicked escarp]

rip

[smoky sail]

last one looks good

[arctic ivy]

scar face

[arctic ivy]

Dio

[final ivy]

Any feedback regarding this?

[novel comet]

Hey. What do people think of these two alternative rulebook covers?

I'm helping out a fellow discorder here and they can't decide 🙂

[whole night]

the top one has a modern vibe, matching with the style of the logo. The bottom one compared to the top one is toned down and safer but the logo feels out of place while it fits just right in the top one

[novel comet]

Thanks

I'll pass on the feedback from a 'professional!'

[bitter fog]

hi, i'm just finish my art, thanks 🙏

[bitter fog]

awesome, how do you edit?

[tall wave]

hmmm? wdym

[bitter fog]

i mean, how do u make your art?

[tall wave]

ohh sorry, my brains not responding rn. I just did multiple layers of multiply and overlay of seaweed, a wave, horizon, and plopped it on a beach

I can prob put the file in a Google drive and send it to u if u want

I have adjusted it a little since then tho

[sleek tiger]

I also like the top one, James! There is more interaction between the background and the title. All the areas are better distributed without making the cover to look busy.

[novel comet]

Thanks

[shy aurora]

A colourisation assignment I did. Any feedback? Thanks

[mossy heart]

I'm following a brief so I'm aware of the long title but I'm looking for feedback on fictional YouTube Thumnails.

[sleek tiger]

I'd go with the second one, to remove a little bit that long title impression, you might consider blurring the background 🙂

[whole night]

try matching the fonts https://fonts.google.com/knowledge/choosing_type/pairing_typefaces

[upbeat nova]

i would make the number 2-3 times bigger and the outline too so contrast is better

[polar crescent]

Hello, would you please tell me your opinion and what to improve
https://www.instagram.com/p/CiQo_5_sdFr/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

y.elsahhar

Fan art poster for

Instagram

[novel comet]

Personal opinions: - sorry they're all criticism/constructive!
(Generally nice though!)

Make the number a contrasting colour to the background. Not green on green.
obviously one of those hands is flipped, making all the money backwards (no biggy)
having left aligned text with a random central aligned line is weird and jarring
too much green. That first one looks like an ad for a landscaping company

[novel comet]

Nice. But too many different fonts, that red splodge in the middle makes it look like the guy has a painful skin condition. The yellow bullets aren't aligned properly and kind of look like 'o's... FREE TRIAL is too small. The bottom right splodge is kind of wasted space. Maybe turn it purple and put the '25% off' headline in there.

Also... instead of making BODY and expanded stretched font, just make the word 'body' bigger/deeper.

Maybe also put 'stay fit not still UNDER the logo not in front of it. More like a tagline.

[novel comet]

Nice work. Out of interest, did you manually 'colour it in' or use the photoshop auto colourise feature?

[shy aurora]

Thanks. I used the hue satueation + levels and curves to get the colour

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[bitter fog]

hehehe no prob, thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @tall wave

[mossy heart]

I'll try this! Thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @sleek tiger

[mossy heart]

I will try it that! I've been looking at it and making so many changes but something always looks off. Thank you!

[mossy heart]

No no I really appreciate this! I've been deprived of constructive criticism so I welcome it! I tried to get a different shade of green than the grass since it's money but I guess it's just not working. Not sure about the flipping. The random central aligned line is it the $10,000 you're referring to? LMAO@Landscaping company That made me laugh. I just can't get that look to work it seems lol. I'm in luck if I try for a landscaping company though. 😅

[south solar]

How can I better pick the bottom left text to make it seem more fitting. I feel like its off but im rly bad with typography

[cunning pollen]

Well done look great to me, special the gold paint

[visual swallow]

Rap battle sign

I made for some friends

any advice?

[north ravine]

Hi everyone 👋 I Just published a new project with experimental CGI-images, finally edited in Photoshop ... https://www.behance.net/gallery/151859359/metallic-3D-slices

[muted acorn]

First project of a new course.

[long ridge]

.

[mossy heart]

@novel comet @upbeat nova @sleek tiger I made some changes according to you guys suggestions. I made a few variations. How does it look now?

[wooden oak]

Why did you post the same image three times?

[mossy heart]

They are 3 different variations.

[wooden oak]

What variations? They look entirely the same.

Slightly more blur in the background?

[mossy heart]

They're not. There is slight paint effect and reduced opacity on another. Is it not allowed?

[wooden oak]

Its allowed. But with an image like this, I'm just making sure that the intent is actually for feedback and not to spam some clickbait to something.

[mossy heart]

Ok then. I'm not spamming. I'm looking for feedback that's why I directed at it them since they suggested changes to my original project.

[wooden oak]

I think the one with the darker background makes the text stand out more, which I assume is the point of this image. The blur gives it a depth-of-field look and slightly darker pushes the text forward in the design.

[mossy heart]

That's what I think too but I didn't want it to look...too dark. The brief was to show a park so I couldn't decide on the effect.

[magic jewel]

https://twitter.com/VelocityCreates/status/1568912172553732098?s=20&t=SsFWBUZJfhJ-wbVLl9eQCg

Nate🇮🇪 (@VelocityCreates)

My new @LAThieves project is out now on my website and behance!
@100Thieves @CODLeague
#LAThieves #WeThieves #CDL2022 #CDLChamps

https://t.co/PT8JWFuneD

https://t.co/1vemiGyALt

Twitter · Sep 11, 2022, 10:39 AM

[worthy heron]

damn this looks dadaist i like it

[mossy heart]

I'm redoing a brief for a YouTube Thumbnail. I followed the brief previously and now I want to remove the long title from the thumbnail. Title: Giving Away $10,000 to the first stranger I see Brief: Along the same vein as Mr. Beast’s big giveaway videos, this video features a man on a mission who has decided to film his giving away $10,000 to the first stranger he sees at his local park. He wants the thumbnail to really command attention. Not sure which direction to take...I kind of want the "Welcome to AlderShot Park" to stand out. Not sure how to execute that.

[abstract musk]

https://dribbble.com/shots/19362937-PhonePe-Dashboard-FinTech-UI

[sleek tiger]

Hi @abstract musk very nice dark mode! You might post it on the Adobe XD server which is dedicated for UI as well 🙂

https://discord.gg/adobexd

[bitter fog]

heheheh thank youuuu 🙂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @worthy heron

[swift fulcrum]

Feedback on that? Like what can be done better or how I can improve work

[novel comet]

That guy in the front is way too bright

he's gotta get darker 🙂 - Then you can make the torchlight more dramatic

also, look at the waves in the water, the boat wouldn't have a reflection like that

In regards to making the light look better, check out how the artist here uses the blend effects to improve the look of the lighting....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sL8I55b6Qpg

@swift fulcrum

[swift fulcrum]

Thanks, going to sleep. Will check out tomorrow. :)

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[arctic ivy]

JoJo novelle

[novel comet]

Why does it say dio?

[wooden oak]

I don't think its Ronny James Dio. (of Rainbow in the Dark fame)

[novel comet]

I know it's delayed but....
For a poster, the text is too small. I like the font! - if you actually try to print it on normal inkjet/laser printer, i think you will be very disappointed in how the bright green and orange will display.

[arctic ivy]

yes,i am

[distant crypt]

Hi guys, If anyone had any feedback on potential improvements, I'd love to hear them

[novel comet]

I like the big chunky font!

how did you apply the gradient on the letters?

did you intentionally avoid the gradient 'spilling across' onto the next letter?

[distant crypt]

So I used basic white text, then added a grain overlay I had ready, and used MBL plugin for brightness

said overlay

[dapper obsidian]

Looks nice , just wanted to say you could try a slight and sharp bevel just on the "hearthless" that would match it s shading to rest of the composition which feels cold and gloomy, not sure how it will look tought

It could also make it worse by decreasing the general contrast of bg and text, you gotta try and see 😄

[pseudo remnant]

i can use some critique (project is not finished)

(i know the second text is not centered)

[mossy heart]

YouTube Thumbnail. What can I do to improve it or am I heading in the right direction?

[novel comet]

hey. 🙂

There isn't a title anywhere, it doesn't really make much sense as a thumbnail

[pseudo remnant]

ops pls?

[novel comet]

Looks good. nice use of colour, lots of effects without it looking like you've gone bonkers with the effects panel. - that background grid looks a bit low res,

Maybe consider making 'GOLOF ONE' a big bigger so it's the same width as the line below it.

[novel comet]

Check out Shutterstock and Canva for youtube thumbnails and pick some favourites... then try and style yours the same sort of way. - Trying to just do it 'from scratch' is always more needlessly difficult than it needs to be. 🙂

[pseudo remnant]

thxbeside makeing the points a higher quality i wanted to add some particals or mabey some lightning and some small tech stuff u think it will work or should i let it like this

[novel comet]

Check out https://www.shutterstock.com/search/partical - and see if anything catches your eye perhaps.

You probably know this already, but if you grab a nice abstract image, pop it in, and then play with the blend effects in the layers panel (and opacity), you should be able to add a few nice effects quite easily.

[pseudo remnant]

Thanks mate hope u have a wonderfull day

[chilly hornet]

I'm new to photoshop, but I tried to edit this raw photo I took at a festival.
Just some color correction, sky replacement and an iris blur.
Feels grainy still, might be because of the photo quality.
Got the raw photo and sky background if u wanna check it out yourself and try to recreate, just DM for dropbox link.

[upbeat nova]

roof feels too dark

[novel comet]

Looks like a tiltshift 🙂

[chilly hornet]

Ye kinda does. Must be because the lighting reflecting on people's faces and the iris blur(?)

[novel comet]

well, it's just due to the extreme out of focus shots at the bottom and the oversaturated colours

(neither of which is a bad thing!)

[chilly hornet]

actually tried to make it brighter from the raw photo. 😩

[chilly hornet]

I tried to go a bit overboard on saturation as it was a DNB festival, hence the crazy sky replacement. 😄
Only thing I'm not satisfied with is probably the tent itself.

[novel comet]

well technically I don't imagine the tent fabric is THAT opaque, I imagine much of the light should shine through..

[chilly hornet]

That does look better. did u isolate the tent cover and increase something?

its was one of those plastic rain covers, so it didn't let any light pass

[upbeat nova]

im curious how the origianl looked

[novel comet]

The original photo before @chilly hornet played with it? - You'll have to ask him/her to post it... or maybe just google DNB festival

[chilly hornet]

i can dm it i think, too big for post in this channel

[upbeat nova]

please do

[upbeat nova]

look at the layerpalette of the screenshot

brightness/contrast

[novel comet]

Ah if in doubt, just screenshot it 🙂

[upbeat nova]

yes screenshot would be fine

[novel comet]

yeah, you can see my mask in the layers panel...

[chilly hornet]

original raw

[chilly hornet]

got the dropbox link for it if u wanna work with it

[upbeat nova]

no I wouldnt go that far

😄

but thanks

[chilly hornet]

maybe not a great photo to begin with 😄

[upbeat nova]

it kind of has a weird vibe I have to say ^^

[chilly hornet]

alien abduction vibes

guess you could swap the tent with an UFO and it would make more sense

[upbeat nova]

xD

[sleek mountain]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/152334753/A-Meeting-With-The-DEATH

[sleek mountain]

This project is all about my emotions. I will be happy to get experts feedback

[chilly hornet]

No, Liquicity festival in netherlands.

[sleek mountain]

I wouldve work on highlights and shadows and some curves adjustments to make it more realistic

[chilly hornet]

Yeah, i think that is what is missing right now, looks too artificial. Although i have to learn how to do shadows and curves from a guide first!

[mossy heart]

It's an assignment for a lesson to use Photoshop so it's basically creating thumbnails from scratch.

[mossy heart]

#📝project-feedback message This is the brief along with the thumbnail but I settled with the above after making a little adjustments.

[novel comet]

You can still build from scratch... but follow a nice style or colour scheme

[mossy heart]

That was my effort from following my lesson.

[verbal wren]

i recently made this for a school task, but what should i put down here? it feels boring

[sleek mountain]

What exactly it is?

[fringe belfry]

BATIK "COUTURE" , BATIK "STRONG" , BATIK "PASSION" , BATIK "INLINE" , BATIK "ARISE" , BATIK "INFUSION" ... some prompts for you to work from.

[verbal wren]

My high-school crafts teacher told us to make a mock up of something on a shirt

We're supposed to use the school computers, but I'm using my own since they do allow working on our own laptops

What it looks like rn

[verbal wren]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @fringe belfry

[viral scaffold]

Made my own concept of Lightsaber, i use some parts of Darksaber as well

[rose elm]

Hi anyone could rate this helmet

I am planning to make a body as well But hows the face? I am planning to try as a pngtuber

[molten needle]

8/10

[rose elm]

thanks

[rose elm]

I tried with a body

Tbh it feels like it doesnt fit but how is it? Which part can i improve on?

This is still a rough drawing

Should i add black outline on the helmet?

Then add the white light to the clothes as well?

[mystic kayak]

how is this guys i created in photoshop

[wooden oak]

This is a great banner. Nice design work. I like the color palette as well. Nice work!

[mystic kayak]

which one better added a photo filer on these

[wooden oak]

The bit of color adds a different quality to it but I like the greyscale one as well. I think its personal preference.

[mystic kayak]

yeah ❤️

[tranquil fossil]

I really like the first one a lot

[mystic kayak]

thankyou mann

[clear lark]

which one would yall click on? 🤔

[plucky basin]

Honesty is key so: not any of them

Because the design dynamics aren’t very good

[clear lark]

What feedback would you give to make it better?

[clear lark]

sick

[mystic kayak]

u can make this more better like u can spead the image from corneers it will look like a zoom out image

[serene spear]

Just a couple different shoots

[novel comet]

They're lovely!

[wooden oak]

Nice work!

[verbal wren]

lower

[clear lark]

thanks for feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @verbal wren

[verbal wren]

like the top one just feels confusing but the bottom one makes more sense

[serene spear]

Thank you, been shooting for roughly 3 years now… last 2 more serious than the 1st

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[serene spear]

Appreciate it!

[plucky basin]

Take your angles from a closer viewpoint

[shrewd marsh]

Hey all, I'd appreciate some feedback over this church tract-back I designed. Its as if its missing something to me and I'd appreciate some advice so that I can improve upon it.

Also btw ignore the missing media info I removed it

[silver vessel]

make background bit more blurry for clearer reading

[shrewd marsh]

Got it its so much better now, thank you

[mossy heart]

Attempting for constructive feedback on a YT thumbnail as a beginner in Graphic Design. I'm not supposed to be using templates or anything as it would defeat the purpose of color theory or learning how to create from scratch. What can I do to improve it?

[turbid sierra]

What can I improve?

[languid knot]

I recommend changing the text purple to a different color so it stands out more. Make it more vibrant and eye catching instead of muted. Maybe a good green representing money or blue since it's the most attractive color for the eyes. You could bring down the text to fill that open space so you can further emphasize the money in the person's hands.

[upbeat nova]

I prob wouldnt rotate the text and make it a lot bigger and maybe even remove the background as it doesnt add much

[languid knot]

That too ^

[languid knot]

@timber hound What do you want feedback on specifically?

[mossy heart]

I had thought since the park sign is dark greenish-yellow to go with a purple but I guess it doesn't look obvious anymore. I'll try those suggestions. I was using this picture below hence why I went with purple as not to have green on green. Also thank you for suggestion on text placement it does look quite empty.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @languid knot

[mossy heart]

Thank you for the suggestion. I've actually been trying to incorporate the background as the giveaway brief states it's held at a local park. Okay I thought rotating the text would look a little more appealing since the sign board is straight but it does need to be more bigger, thanks!

[surreal mason]

Any tips/help on this? I need better ideas for backgrounds instead of just a solid color

[mossy heart]

@languid knot @upbeat nova Trying to do what was suggested. Is this better?

[toxic dome]

Hello friends!
What do you think about this website banner?
I look forward to your comments and suggestions
Made with Photoshop 💜

[toxic dome]

guys please💜 🙂

[lean swift]

I am new and inexperienced regarding photoshop but hey, looks good to me...

[upbeat nova]

personally I would align the text to the bottom right and make the first line of the text bigger so it aligns left and right flush to the second line and colorize one line differently, then I would overline the background with a purple overlay and make the anonymous guy on the right equal in size to the guy holding the money

[toxic dome]

Oh 😍 , thank you for your comment
I have 3 years of experience working with Photoshop, but I just found the Photoshop server

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @lean swift

[upbeat nova]

1. Dont call me dear xD and 2. this was a 5min draft as an example for someone else here...

[wooden oak]

Is there something else planned for this bottom area? There is a lot of empty space there.

I would try to use the empty space a bit better. Make the headline and subhead larger. Slide the button down. Maybe even put a Call-to-Action in the middle region.

Also, the text on the button is really "crowded" and margins are uneven. I would put an equal amount of space (margins/padding) around the text: 'Are you ready to invest?'

[toxic dome]

ok

[toxic dome]

Yes, according to the customer's request, this place is empty and something will be placed on the site

[toxic dome]

Thank you for your help, I will fix the design problems💗

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[visual swallow]

They were just sending it via whatsapp

[visual swallow]

the font is handwitten

it's actually a combination of Tordesillas (the place where it is) and Freestyle

so

Torde-free

[mossy heart]

Thank you very much for the example! It's very helpful! Much appreciated! I'm not so sure about the bright purple for the park sign. So the anon guy is equal not smaller? But the $10K is definitely getting the point across, really helps seeing examples! Thanks again!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @upbeat nova

[mossy heart]

@upbeat nova Like this? The anon dude's ? is being covered up by the fonts....

[upbeat nova]

yeah I think the font is better, you are right about the anon-dude, you can definitely lose the questionmark but I think you can recognize that its a person

[languid knot]

Closer to this but without covering most of the hands/money/silhouette. Actually, how necessary is the silhouette in this thumbnail? Unless it means there is a surprise guest? Is it supposed to be the person receiving the giveaway?

If it's the giveaway then try leaving the silhouette out. It'll open up more space for you

[mossy heart]

The title is meant to be "First stranger I see!" so that's why I'm keeping the anon silhouette. "Giving away $10,000 to the first stranger I see!" So to leave room for guessing who it is. In my latest attempt, mostly his hands and a little of the money and tad bit of the silhouette is being covered...

[mossy heart]

Is it a bad move to use the ? this way... Does it look right having the silhouette be as big as the main dude?

[upbeat nova]

imho you read it as "10k?" which is probably not what you want

[mossy heart]

@upbeat nova Is this better or just better the ? is gone altogether. I think it now doesn't question if it's 10K but more like a $10k giveaway? ...not sure if it's better.

[languid knot]

Maybe instead of the question mark, you have a small text saying "stranger" with a curved arrow pointing to the silhouette? @mossy heart

[mossy heart]

Thank you! I'll try this! I'm finding designing so difficult. Literally been at this one thumbnail for several weeks now. I started to run out of ways to think till you and @upbeat nova and another two helped me out. Just never looked right with the changes I made. Very much appreciated!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @languid knot

[mossy heart]

@languid knot It looks like now I can push "$10K GIVEAWAY" further to the right. How's the positioning of "STRANGER" and the arrow, I think it looks okay.

[languid knot]

Stranger is hard to read, try making it the size of the "Welcome to" and you can make that one at an angle to create more interest. I suggest putting it in the middle under the "ot Pa" part, and resizing the $10K to be much smaller, like just above the size of the current giveaway text because it seems too big for me right now

Have you looked up video thumbnails for similar giveaway topics?

Maybe finding reference will be more helpful for you to see what the competition is doing

[mossy heart]

That's the very first thing I did. Since the brief followed along the lines of Mr.Beasts and his thumbnails have no words I kept getting told to keep it with no words and have this same look of shock and cash with no words.

I did my own take at it a little but I don't quite know what I'm actually learning doing this.

[languid knot]

Ok got it
So one thing I notice is that he's relying on shocked expressions, rule of thirds, and some form of payment being held in someone's hand from the first person point of view to create that shock value. No mention of location or any kinds of words. That's what the title is for

So maybe what you can do is remove the $10k giveaway text, keep the stranger (+small stranger text), but make the Aldershot Park text a lot smaller since it seems to be one of the first things you read

[mossy heart]

Yup and I was told not to go with this (no words thing). His older thumbnails have words but his newer don't but his audience seem to go for this type of look. Should I create a thumbnail similar to Mr.Beast?

[novel comet]

My comment isn't photoshop related and it's absolutely not a dig or complaint about anything posted above.... but god I hate all the stupid clickbait 'shocked faces' on YouTube thumbnails.

[mossy heart]

So do I . But it's what is getting views and millions of views at that, it's one generic look to it. That's why I'm questioning whether I'm actually learning anything if I follow the same trend/look since the people who do these YT thumbnails are usually not learning or doing Graphic Design. Over the years it seems like what appeals to the generation is less words/no words and more pictures.

[mossy heart]

@languid knot Stranger placement looks busy? I made "$10k GIVEAWAY" smaller, looks emptier on the right to me?

[wooden oak]

Yeah. Please don't post those clickbait videos in here.

Furthermore, the constant posting of this banner with the 10k giveaway is starting to seem less like you want advice and more like you're promoting clickbait.

[novel comet]

To be fair - I don't think that they're trying to promote a video somewhere - I don't think the video even exists since I remember the OP saying it was a brief/assignment for school.... - That said, I am so horrifically sick of seeing it posted here.

[wooden oak]

That's fine. I have no idea what motivates people or how honest they are about their motivations. Regardless, they've posted it dozens of times. Gotten lots of advice on design and direction. They can make endless variations and it's not really changing that much.

If this were an "actual" ad campaign, you'd make several variations and run them all. Then use your analytics from Google AdWords (or whatever service) to determine which one(s) had the best click-thru rate.

You could make a hundred of these and ask a hundred people which ones they thought were "appealing" and "which ones would they click on." (You'd probably get 75 different answers.) But that would be a different type of design study.

[latent briar]

Im looking for some constructive criticism for my thumbnails im making

[mossy heart]

The images are from Unsplash and Pexels and if it were to be clickbait, it would actually be on YT long before. This is the second time you have implied something other than seeking advice for Graphic Design. I wouldn't know about actual-ad campaign as it doesn't exist. My next assignment is a YT thumbnail for Watercolors, is that going to get called out for promoting a non-existent channel and being clickbait as well? Really don't make sense. If you wouldn't help and someone kindly offers me help and you take issue with that.

[wooden oak]

1.) I don't know if its spam for a video or someone's clickbait scheme. I can't research every post that is made here. People are constantly trying to spam all the time. Most often, it's clickbait-y things like this, i.e. discord offers, crypto, scam-jobs and offers of money that are never going to be paid. So it looks suspicious. Sorry that you don't understand that. If you're legitimately just seeking "graphic design" help, then I apologize to you.

2.) I did offer you help... Weeks ago. I told you what I thought. They were 3 thumbnails that looked almost the same. I told you which one I thought was the best and why. You've posted at least a dozen other designs for the same thing. I didn't provide any suggestions on those because other people have given you feedback on them.

3.) After reading all of your posts, I'm still trying to understand what your "goal" is with this. You're questioning what you're learning from all this. So am I. If its not real, will never be real, then what are you hoping to take away from this exercise? It has been almost a month since you started posting these thumbnails. You've been given feedback on many designs and from many people. Perhaps, you should post up 3 or 4 of your best designs and see which ones people find the most compelling.

You don't need an "ad campaign." That was a real world example of what you would do if you were actually trying to determine what "works." However, you could set up a straw poll and ask people to vote on the designs. Then perhaps you could get some meaningful data on which design works best or is at least the most aesthetically pleasing.

[warm delta]

Hey @mossy heart! It's great that you're making a lot of iterations for this project. That is an important part of creating. I understand that you're trying to do the best you can for this assignment, but it seems like it can be mistaken for spamming. You should keep creating multiple versions, but if you're looking to improve it would be better to finish the project and ask for feedback afterwards. I feel like you're getting into the details (which is good!) but the changes you're making are very small, and unlikely to affect the whole piece. By posting your finished work, you can get pointers on what you can improve on your next.

Focusing on the details is good, but don't get lost! It's sometimes better to end the project and start another one.

[obtuse valley]

How could I improve this?