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for the text i added a layer above, made it a clipping mask used the hard round brush to add circles in the clipping mask
then i added another layer above that one and changed the blend mode to overlay to lighten the corner
for the bakcground
i just added a bunch of cirlces with the hard round and soft round brushes
also some more circles
on top of everything i had a layer of yellow + a lens flare overlay
thank you 😄
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak
Tyyyy so much, I will do that later, have a good day 👍
👍
It is a bit too dark. It's difficult to see what's going on.
hmm
if i make it brighter id have to restart on the astronauts shading
The font must blend with the texture otherwise it doesn't make sense/looks very cheap and lazy
Can anyone guess what show this is?
Scooby Doo
Correct 🙂 , does it look like a legit poster tho?
I suppose so. The phrases/wording seems a bit "off"
"Waited enough, it's about time" ?
"The Guess Who's Back This Fall" ?
This is not correct English. heh
oh thanks for point that out XD
Maybe: "You've waited long enough."
Maybe: "Guess who is back this fall." or "Guess who's back this fall" I suppose the contraction would work as well.
These would read correctly to a native English speaker.
@wooden oak Thanks for the feedback, I'll get that all fixed
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak
thank you very much for the feedback!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @onyx spire
officially a master at photoshopping
Unfinished sonic the hedgehog 3 poster concept or something
Sorry if it’s an eyesore
Guys how is this
Happy 4th of July
What have you done on that one
Have you done the Text, lines and stuff, basically the Graphic Design or aswell the drawing behind
@toxic dome
It doesn look bad at all, everything fits the theme, maybe if you want more readability, the text on the left bottom and top right can be a bit brighter
No i haven't
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This is what i have done
;-;
I c let me fix now then
think its still great good work
the top of the wagon has a white shine, but the area around is more yellowish/warm colored
maybe consider change the top of the wagons shine
The sun is very low in the sky at this point, I imagine there would be quite a long, low shadow pointing off to the right
@novel comet @tame depot thanks for the help guys, i'll change that later and then i'll send the result again.
Hey there
I know this is very bad
so
I would appreciate any advice
If u want to know what does it means:
Basically he was a Spanish streamer that committed suicide 1 year ago, and he used a phrase: "no se le baja" or "no le bajamos", that basically means "don't slow down" or more like don't act below who you are
and, I'm not having a good time, and this days I am wasting my time a lot, so I decided to make a poster remembering that phrase for being more cheerful/active
Animal Fur in Photoshop 😉 Zoom in to see edges 😎
Is this all Photoshop? If so, that's wild (pun intended)!! Awesome!
All Photoshop
Nice! Looks great!
Perrrrrfect :D
Logo I created for an audio plugin company I'm building called Cyclop Audio (hence the C in the middle)
"Cyclop" without the s? Isn't it "cyclops" and plural "cyclopes" ?
Shhhh don't tell anyone haha
It is Cyclops, but it just sounds better when you say it together
Cyclop Audio vs Cyclops Audio
and online there's a lot of content that uses Cyclop
I guess people are probably used to both versions...
Whatever works for you. :)
any feedback?
personally I would put the cloud all down and change the writing style
if you want to keep the cloud ofc
What you guys think?
Ye, bc I dont know how to put text there then
I've already did that on my last ver
That is beautiful, you have really grown your skills
Thanks. I work on it hours every day. I’ve recently taken up acrylic painting too
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @long wind
i wanna see a group of Spitfires to fly out of an Venator please.
#❓ask-a-question message @rigid swift You dont really need to add shadows there, actually use to practice shadows objekts that dont have one originally.
just add a few filters may be the best
thanks
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @tame depot
Nice I like it but if you can glow The headlight of Car it will look good
That's a great tip, thank you very much!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @silver prism
No problem sir
you thought creative peoples ?
maybe make the person black and white? it would probably add a cool effect
Ok i will try it thanks
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @errant yoke
Can I get Raw image pls
here :p
Thanks
latest artwork, and plan to sale
still working any tip for me
Well, the red eye looks her look like a robot or something . so if that's what you're going for.... go all in! - make it a bit brighter, and pop in some joints, seams to make her look like an android type thing...
Alternatively, if you're NOT going for robot... the eye looks a bit too saturated. Maybe knock it back a tiny bit?
Either way, good masking and use of the blending to allow the reflection to come through 🙂
Eres de españa? o.0
how is it? 😂
Realmente no
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The bike is lit up like it's the middle of the day. - I think you need to darken everything on the bike but the headlights... e.g.
thanks you @novel comet for your reply, i didn't makes it darker because i want the trees to appear, anyway, i will try to fix this, and thanks again♥
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet
I meant make everything on the bike darker. - You can keep the background the same
oops it makes no sence
yah
i just understand the comment
i though you was talking about the envirenment
e.g.
That's more like it! Nice.
👍
Yes it sharingan eye
From Naruto anime
yes try to asd shadows and details to the eye so it blends well
@whole night can you make this better?
You've got many different styles happening here which are making this composition appear a bit disjointed.
There is no simple way to "blend this together" to make it better.
I doubt anyone is going to do the work for you.
If you want to hire someone to create something for you, maybe check out fiverr or similar freelancer sites.
@grave fulcrum - You're lucky I was so bored at work this afternoon 🙂
PSD sent privately via wetransfer. Have fun, take/remove whatever you want. - It's a comp of about 10-11 different assets.
Cubes were in there, since I get the vibe from your socials that this is clearly Rubix Cube related.
Dang.
Hi! Ops?
Thank you so much
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet
Thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet
Do anyone have idea how to add the earth and cube in rocket from this to
This
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet
Toughts on this logo
big w
its really good but it reminds me to much of microsoft edge
you might want to change it a little to differentiate between the two companies
scs!
icon's shape and color are nice 🤩
and for the "Quest" font
maybe you can do a little experiment and choose another font type with a Q letter that resembles the Q icon shape
the Q icon and the Q in "quest" letter are too different, it doesn't looked like they belong together as one unit
Thanks for the feedback!
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model and environment in blender, compositing in a photoshop ripoff because I’m broke 🥶
Looks amazing dude
The sketch and the final result
Wonderful art 😍
Looking for some Constructive criticism!
I was about to complain about some strange floating 'smudge' just below the UFO.... - and then realised it was just a mark on my monitor 🙂
How did you got a real picture of Mark Zuckerberg and his Co-workers from.
I honestly can't see anything I'd change/fix. The shadows I think look pretty realistic. (It's a cloudy day, so there won't be heavily defined ones) - The position of their feet on the rocks look realistic. The lighting looks good. The UFO has a green light, but I don't think it's strong enough to need to worry about applying a green tint to the rocks/alien heads. - The 'noise' on the aliens matches the background.....
I'm being Suuuuper picky here. - I'd already give top marks. - but Maybe they might be a bit too 'sharp' against the background? - The background looks a bit more blurry than the aliens do?
Before and After
Thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bitter fog
Thank you soo much for your feedback dude.
and yeah i've actually added a little blur on that side i will fix it...
You basically saying that the bg looks a little more blurry right compare to the aliens?
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet
A tiny bit. They kind of look 'placed in' simply because their edges maybe look a bit too sharp/perfect. - but again.... if it were my own work (with a proper paying client/company) - I'd be happy as is!
Yes i will work on that
Thanks alot man
or your feedback
Actually a guy told me
that there were few mistakes in this edit and he reedited the same pic
but i dont think the results are accurate tho
here is his version of this edit
Shadow direction is wrong if i am not wrong
Hey i'm training on Photoshop , any advice ?
Hey everyone!
Please like, share and comment on my new work. 😇
https://dribbble.com/shots/18719913-Fashion-Branding
Btw I know the moon shouldn’t have that shadow
Any critiques/advice that would improve this composite?
I'm not the most expert, but I see that you need to improve a little bit in terms of the perspective of the objects that you insert in the scenery.. in addition to the lighting. Having a little sense of perspective, it will help you a lot to choose your 'background', your objects and etc.. I indicate this video below. It's step by step, I'm also learning little by little.: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OoHfZFl65fo
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The idea is very good, but I think the reflection of the lights (the colored ones) and the normal ones are not good, both on the character and on the stones up there
for example, at the top, where you can see the sky..
I don't think the stone there should be that bright, because the sky suggests it's quite dark.
You have a lot of creativity, if you adjust a little in the lighting issue, it will be even more wild!
I prefer your original
Good point. That’s makes sense. Thanks
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rain kayak
Who will help me?
I don't like it. But I don't know what I missed here :/
Any advice/thing I could add to make it look better?
The final version
Can u dm me the assets?
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would do it for a little bit of help 😄
thx
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Feed Back Please
well done
Thank you
for the rock one i would have made the kneck all visible, shoulders disappear and make cracks behind him in the wall as he would just break through the wall with his head
i hate typing on phone xD
nah i am fine.
Ok
If you want to do the break through the wall version tho you can do it. Is a good practice and might look funny. i might attempt this myself
Ok alright, GL!
I Tried
for the time already good stuff
Cool. - I'd maybe consider putting a 'mask' over the bubble layer and removing some of the bubbles that are right in the middle of her face..
Yeah gonna edit tomorrow
thoughts?
What do everyone think about this thoughts?? And Rate them ✨ 💖
These are very cool designs. Is this all vector art (Adobe Illustrator work)?
Yes
The portrait of the woman looks great. One comment I have is: perhaps spend a bit more time on the highlights for the hair. Currently they look like simple strokes. Maybe there is a variable-width Stroke Profile in Illustrator that would work better. Like, thicker in the middle and taper off at the ends.
I'm not sure if you're trying to "redesign" the Adobe App Icons or what your intent is with that one. Adobe icons are more 1:1 ratio and use a thicker/heavier weight on the letters. I'm fairly certain that they do this because they have to be reproduced very small, as in a 16x16 pixel icon, "corner application icons" and similar usage. If the font weight is too light, the letters might not be legible. You may want to think about that. :)
Let me know your opinions 😉
Full Project: https://www.behance.net/gallery/141171851/Moon-Knight
Great work! Good composition. Very nice job on matching up the lighting on all of the objects.
Looks great 👏 but the cups are a bit flat
Thanks for your feedback
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @buoyant bay
I made the Sydney Opera House abandoned. Thoughts? (My first try)
Maybe remove the people and/or make the whole city look abandoned and overgrown.
don't know
Ok
I improved my abandoned opera house artwork from yesterday. Any thoughts on my improvment?
Ye
that's really good! i like this!
my only thoughts are the ones in red stand out too much, maybe try make it so the original image shows through a tiny bit as that might give of the effect of it blending in more?
oh and the blue the circle is where i think it could do with some adjustments as that's where the perspective would change and it would also have some shadows on it? when i say perspective i mean that whatever is in that blue circle is, it will be at an angle as the building it's on is at an angle
I’m new but in my option the trees are to alive
Ok! Thanks for your advice
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @dusk igloo
Do you mean "associated" ? You may want to correct your spelling.
Oh wow i thought i checked
Thank you for telling me
English isnt my first language so i might mess up every now and then
I have now tried to made USA Capital Building look abandoned
That is the United States Capitol Building. Not the White House. :)
oops sorry. I searched white house and this came out 😦
I think there would be a lot more weeds and things growing up through the seams in the cement.
The grass would be overgrown.
There would be garbage everywhere.
Those vehicles would probably be destroyed.
Just some suggestions.
teasing master
I would suggest to make your images look a bit darker in general and maybe add a bit more contrast, the blue happy sky doesnt really fit the abandoned theme 100% imho
True
Nice. - I think the lovely blue sky kinda is a bit too much of a contrast against the moody abandoned effect you're going for....
try using the "Sky Replacement" tool if you haven't done so already 🙂
interisting maby you put the cups on a table or in a cafe
Whats that debris you put on the floor
Ok
literally the first one I found "urban mess floor"
Ok
Yess
Banana.Inc
this was one of my recent phone wallpapers I worked on, it's not too bad. The horns and faded vampire teeth kind of make it look funny, which has me thinking of removing it and replacing them with more realistic horns and vampire teeth 
Made this after a trip
Is this good enough for my homework?
edit: ugh the resolution dropped so bad when uploaded to discord
Inspired by Utsuro-bune Incident date back in Medieval period of Japan
Inspired of this
Cool. Nice attempt.
I like that you added the reflection in the water. +10 points!
Just from a personal point of view, I think it always helps when all assets are the same 'style'.
You have a hand illustrated lady, a spaceship that looks like it's clipped from a 3D render and a floor from... um... somewhere else. Try and find some bits that all look like they're the same sort of style.
It might be worth considering a few shadows on the floor caused by the sun lightsource.
and thr red light layer probably shouldn't have such defined edges around the circle.
Thanks !
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet
also Thanks for your Opinion of it :D
Nice! - Try a different 'blend mode' for the word 'alex' and the star... you might see an alternative you like more @arctic ivy
Thanks
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet
is it just me or it reminds me of Jotaro from jojo,,, maybe the Hat
JoJo reference
Both are great! In my opinion the first one with the play button looks better for me
Quick conceptual piece (via pixel-bashing)...
I made Seattle abandoned - but its not finished (trying to figure out how to adds cars and overgrown foliage
@green chasm - What do you think of mine?
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I can't take the credit. It was made by AI.
DiscoDiffusion... ?
?!?!
I just asked it for "An illustration of a wombat wearing sunglasses and a blue batman t-shirt"
What are you using?
Also, there is no way it got that close or that clean. haha You put that logo on there.
Wow. You pay for that thing?
Currently in Beta
I'm getting close to using all mine.... here were the other variants... - I won't continue posting about it since it's not really photoshop related...
It could be good for generating prompts. Ideas. Directions to try.
That goes for all of the AI art mashers.
Most of the time, they create these nightmarish images. :D
hi
what do you guys think about my designs?
these are my first logos btw I've never made any logos before
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Done a thing. Ps, painting.
Could've use another suitable font
Just a basic thing - was using filters and found this
This is a cool stylization.
thanks
That's really nice. - What filter did you use? I thought that sort of thing could only be done on Illustrator with the image tracer tools...
before and after
Good job
thx 😀
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @sand furnace
i've been rly into photo editing lately
midjourney?
Trying out B&W edits as well as sharpness adjustments
Hey all! I have been working on this robot character, he supposed to be an old invention designed to help humans build a better future.. so far I only did some sketches but all feedback is appreciated:D
This is cool!
Edited Khari Fortnite skin with a full galaxy style ❤
How's this guys?
Just added the lights
DIO
@vivid dragon Tried the sloth man while you were making it. Mine, not what your looks like... Your's with only shadows looks super awesome... So, I'll keep on practicing. Thank you for the stream...
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Thanks 😊 🙏
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak
Not much was done. I colorized this photo. Again not much but I just really love the outcome and the whole concept of its cool how we get black and white to color its cool to me
Thoughts? Should I add sth more or what?
Rate this and any suggestions or tips??
really really good
@wide ginkgo - As I stated in the other channel, a professional logo should be created with vector graphics so that it can easily be rescaled and reproduced easily (for many different purposes). It should also work well in one color if possible because it may need to be produced in black and white or any other color depending on the need.
Also, be aware that there are already a lot of organizations that use a similar logomark...
Okay noted
The overall design of the layout will determine what color the logo should be. If they want the logo on a blue background, maybe the logo is just reproduced in white...
That's why its important that the design work well in one color.
or maybe it needs to be embroidered on a shirt or hat... or laser etched into a metal surface.
Colorful logos won't work for those instances.
Well so far I know it is needed for just posters and flyer purposes.
Noted
Yes but you don't just design a logo for use on a flyer. If its a real business, they will probably need to use it for a 100 different things.
So you can have the color version with the gradients. It looks cool. Just make sure when you design logos that the design doesn't rely on a gradient to be unique. It's the shape that is most important. Colors are secondary.
Ahhhh
Look at Apple, Nike, Starbucks. All of those use colors in their branding. But their shape is instantly recognizable.
I like this one too. It's simple
Okay for now as a beginner I'm just gonna use the black version as that works with everything.
I'm still going to keep the blue as you said.
This actually give me an idea. What do you think if I were to make a Hexagon shape border around the Blue Logo and fill the hexagon shape in black?
I don't know. I think its probably up to your client. heh
Lets say I want to added the logo to a flyer im designing in photoshop. Should I export logo as .PSD or Save as a PNG?
I guess my first question would be: why are you designing a flyer in Photoshop? Generally, design layouts are constructed in Illustrator.
I saw a template that I could used off freepik.com and its in PSD format.
Is this going to be printed?
You probably don't have to export the logo at all. You should just be able to drag/drop your Illustrator artwork into Photoshop.
If you're intending on doing some editing on it, I suppose you could copy and paste the shapes from Ai to Ps.
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @vivid dragon
Attempt 2.1 of @vivid dragon's July 19 Character. Thanks, Sam! I just got to work on the muscles, line work, and clothing.. But, it was FUN trying to copy it 😆
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I wonder what could make the attempt three better?
Amma take your advice on having flyers be done in Illustrator from now on :/
So basically stuff like Flyers, Posters, Banners and Profile pics along with logo is best design in Illustrator?
Any type of "graphic design layout" should probably be done in Illustrator. Unless its a complex, multi-page document. Then InDesign would be a better tool for that.
Photoshop would be best used for creating/editing any bitmaps that need to be inserted into those layouts. Ps is for editing pixels. Generally, not great for creating layouts.
Don't get hung up on the names of the apps because "Illustrator" isn't really a descriptive name for that app based on how it is used. "InDesign" isn't either.
Ohhh okay. I actually thought that you do everyone in those other apps and finalize things in PhotoShop.
No. Subject matter, goals, final output determines how you approach a project and what app(s) you use to complete it.
My first flyer. Hard criticism only @wooden oak @novel comet
Good effort, but since you asked specifically for constructive, honest criticism ....
Logo is too small and not really lined off against anything
The group of people are still in that big 'block' - meaning that the white square is cutting into the circle, and the one on the left is floating in the air
The "are you tired" font doesn't match any other style on the page.
The line endings in the 'come work for us' look a bit wonky (but to be fair, it's because 'employment' is such a long word.
The people illustration has a speechbubble with nothing in it...
The logo style/identity isn't reflected anywhere in the poster itself. - No gradients etc.
You appear to have two competing 'headings' - "Now we're hiring" and "are you tired"
Are you sure it's meant to be "Now we're hiring?" - I'd have suggested "We're now hiring"
The text on that right edge is too close
"perfect" and "Job" are on two separate lines for no apparent reason
This is presumably a banner/print-flyer that has no hyperlinks in it, - meaning that the icons for social media feel kinda pointless
there is no telephone number shown
The group of people have also been 'squashed', they all look like stumpy midgets
Again, all those comments are said with love! - Not to tease or be mean!
Also, "Come work for us" is used twice. The second one is redundant.
No no no thats okay you are making fair points! I'm making notes as I read along
A good sneaky trick I think is maybe check out what other people have done. Check out 'Canva' for some inspiration 🙂
Thanks. Needed a place where I can go to find good ideas. I'll bookmark that.
See those Canva examples? "We're hiring" --- no "now" -- its clean and concise. :)
haha
I mean... part of the problem isn't the design, it's the actual copy/message.
What roles are they looking to fill? It just says "Customer Service".
I mean, does that mean sitting in a call centre? working in a retail store?
where is it? what skills are they looking for?
I can understand it not mentioning salary, but any basic job title examples?
I was trying to do everything all in one so I "copy pasta" some of the texts and forgot to change to typo error.
For the people on the yellow, I don't know how to curve them so that it seems as if they are standing on the yellow circle.
I will edit the context once more, I see where I went wrong.
For the logo, I know its small, but wouldn't the gradient color matchs the "Hiring", "The People" and the "Email" color?
e.g. Customer Service Operatives? Customer Service Manager? I wouldn't know if I should apply since I don't know if I'm over or under qualified.
"Copy Pasta" sounds like a 3D Printer for making various extruded pastas. :D
To be fair to you. If you're doing this for a client, they really need to provide you with decent copy. - If in doubt, feel free to use 'Lorem Ipsum' in early design phases. That way you don't get people like me, Dhumann (and the client) complaining about the 'copy' when you're trying to focus on the design.
(Lorem Ipsum is just general 'gibberish' - that, at a glance looks like real text)
Beware; you may get someone asking if you speak Latin. And why its in their layout. (This actually happened once.) :)
Once time, we inserted the specs, schematics and drawings for a carburetor and nobody caught it. heh
"This looks great!"
Well actually the context was actually given to me to use but I edited it poorly. I don't want to tweek to too much but I do understand what the client is asking for.
I had a senior client at a major company (You'd both recognise the name of the company) - and her first response to some of my work was..... "oh my god, I love the design, but there's a problem! - All the text has gone Spanish!"
(It was Lorem ipsum... and she hadn't supplied me with any copy yet)
can't stop listening to this so I made some edit
So,, i try to learn this kind of Photoshop,, but i ended up losing control lol
this is the Stock photo i use for the Red baron and the other ^
Hi everyone, this is my first try on photo composition, what do you think? I'm not 100% sure on the planet, maybe I can make it better
What do think about this suggestion pls
This looks pretty nice, i got the vibe of a Café somehow. With the browns sprinkels in the Background and all.
Only have one or two things i noticed. There are some white areas around the ears, it may be you have out them there so you have a bigger difference between your rather brownish ear and the brownish background. Maybe check on the outsides to remove the white
@toxic dome
Ok thanks alot
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Thanks
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DIO!!!
First time created a poster
Can you guys give some suggestions for improvement..
The small text are unclear, rest are fine I guess
A or B ???
