dex-entries-discussion

[upper loom]

Rule 22 CODE OF CONDUCT: Speak English in channels outside of #international and, only speak the given language in the #international channels. These channels exist to allow fans to chat together in their languages of choice without the flow of conversation being disrupted by messages the rest of the channel cannot read.

[storm light]

Might have to get a mod's thoughts

[rich goblet]

I’ll go ask the mod team, give them a blip

[storm light]

Plus, if i understand it properly, the software translates the sentence into english as they write it, so it should be nearly the same in their native language

[rich goblet]

I have this awkward situation. I have @zinc patrol in #dex-entries-discussion who is using a translator to write entries and get help making them grammatically accurate. The only issue is that sometimes he posts the Chinese original text with his entries. He has otherwise been abiding by the rules.

Does action even need to be taken here? If so, what?

<@&306953740651462656>

And now we wait

[wanton plume]

That's really more of a question for the dex managers

[rich goblet]

So this doesn’t break rule 22?

[storm light]

Ye but since it's still a technical rulebreak

[craggy beacon]

I think he is referring to a rule22 sitch

[craggy beacon]

Btw in the future you can use #helper-help for this too

[junior osprey]

they post the og text because they use a plug in translator that keeps the chinese while also translating to english

thats what it looks at least

[rich goblet]

Oh right, I have access to that

[storm light]

No access my beloathed

I'm nosy

[craggy beacon]

I think it's fine. I checked some messages, it's correctly translated afaik, so

[nimble sage]

#québec

[craggy beacon]

god damn it pory

[storm light]

No access jumpscare

[rich goblet]

As long as it doesn’t break server rules I’m alright with it

[wanton plume]

I suppose if it's just exactly what he's saying in English in the same message, then it's probably fine

[storm light]

Plus they've been writing some cool entries

[junior osprey]

either tell em to delete the chinese part or swap the translator ig tho as long as they are posting the english translation to their messages it shoudnt break the rule 22

o dile que borre la parte en chino o que cambie el traductor supongo aunque mientras ponga la traducción al inglés en sus mensajes no romperia la regla 22

[rich goblet]

Cool, just making sure

[narrow cosmos]

Now I'm kinda curious what some of my entries would look like translated into Japanese.

[willow venture]

Are you Japanese?

[narrow cosmos]

Nope, it was just a curious thought.

[regal cedar]

The thing about translation is literal vs. nonliteral, too. Localization is a hard process!

[willow venture]

Turbo weird weebs from Oklahoma would fall on their knees and weep seeing you say that

[zinc patrol]

I guess I should? I'm testing whether my translator removes the original Chinese text.

Well, that's probably better, after all I can check if the English part expresses my thoughts correctly when I translate the message into Chinese again only on my side.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+aron/

POKENAME actively consumes minerals, making the buds on its back as tough as metal. When it evolves, the outer layer of the buds sheds and can be used as a special high-strength material.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.392b/

The cactus on POKENAME's back can store a large amount of water during the rainy season. POKENAME buries its body in the sand and uses the water-filled cactus to lure small animals.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+roselia/

POKENAME's flower buds emit a fragrance, but the juice inside is highly poisonous. Once it senses a threat, POKENAME will squeeze out the venom while retreating to a safe distance.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.406a/

Although it has no discernible sensory organs, POKENAME can actually perceive its surroundings through psychic abilities. While it can adapt to various harsh environments, it will go into hibernation if it does not get sunlight for a long time.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+snorunt/

POKENAME hides in hollow flower buds and eats snow to hydrate. It can roll quickly, but when rolling in the snow, it easily becomes wrapped like a snowball to the point it can no longer move.

[storm light]

I would change feeds on snow water to something like "eats snow to hydrate."
Also in the final sentence, how does the snowball not move if the pokemon was rolling enough to become one? Instead, you could say "when rolling in the snow, it easily becomes wrapped like a snowball to the point it can no longer move."

[zinc patrol]

Thank you, I modified the original message accordingly

[zinc patrol]

And, are all the five consecutive entries above suitable for uploading?

[clear hollow]

Its body is always coiled tightly like a spring, ready to launch itself away from any danger. The crystal orb POKENAME holds with its tail is said to hold the power to cure venomous bites, even the ones from POKENAME itself.
539.543 Spoink/Seviper
Mergemay Day 8 - Serpentine

entry based on one of the magical properties of serpentine stone that was used historically by Romans for protection and curing venomous bites and poisons

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+sliggoo/

[zinc patrol]

Is its entry misplaced? There are no leaves in the picture, and neither prototype has thorns.

[zinc patrol]

<@&1210701164426039366>?client=gtx

[hexed fog]

Toss this in #custom-dex-errors please 🙂 most likely a sprite was removed and the entry got shifted

[zinc patrol]

Thank you, I will do it and then delete the above three messages

[hexed fog]

No need to delete 🤣

It ain't that serious

[rugged socket]

DexSlog Grid #6: Terraforming - 24/100 entries! 🎉 If you haven't tried it yet, come and help fill in the grid!

Get involved here: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1eEDisY-UaS44v_kBY8tNA4qmVEP6fToEKTzBPN_bcro/edit?usp=sharing

[rich goblet]

POKENAME actively consumes minerals, making the bud on its back as tough as metal. When it evolves, the outer layer of its bud is shed and can be used as a special high-strength material.

[rich goblet]

This one is fine

[rich goblet]

POKENAME's flower buds emit a pleasant fragrance, but are also full of venom. Once it senses a threat, POKENAME will squeeze out the venom to shoot at foes while retreating to a safe distance.

[rich goblet]

Although it has no discernible sensory organs, POKENAME can perceive its surroundings through its psychic abilities. While it can adapt to various harsh environments, it will go into hibernation if it does not get sunlight for a long time.

[rich goblet]

Hollow flower beds? What does that mean in this instance?

[zinc patrol]

Well, if I had to say it myself, is it the calyx? But I remember that this word is not a common word in English.

[rich goblet]

Oh I misread it, never mind

One second

[zinc patrol]

Are bed and bud the same? After I translated it using a translation software, there was a big gap between the two words. I thought you had typed the wrong letters.

[rich goblet]

No not at all, it’s just one letter off though

[zinc patrol]

Don't worry about the word "same", translators sometimes add random words for the sake of grammar.

I think I should say the whole thing before translating.I mean "Did you see it wrong, bed and bud?".

Since the translator refused to translate the quotes, I had to translate it myself in BING.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME hides in hollow flower buds and eats snow to hydrate. When rolling in the snow, it picks up so much snow that it gets embedded in a giant snowball.

[rich goblet]

Yes I misread it, in English bed and bud are one letter apart, my mistake

[zinc patrol]

Whenever I habitually omit something like a spoken word, the translator starts making up for me what is missing in the grammar

I will post some machine-translated entries in a row, and then I have to buy instant noodles before the supermarket closes.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.455a/

POKENAME looks like a Bulbasaur with added tentacles, but normally it only shows its flower bud besides the tentacles. Other than moving back and forth between water sources and sunny spots, POKENAME hardly moves.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+stufful/

The bud on the back of POKENAME can release gases that convey information to Grass-type Pokémon. It dislikes physical contact, even with plants.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+registeel/

POKENAME's torso is wrapped in flower buds, with only one eye exposed. Its light-colored parts possess unimaginable toughness, and its vines can drag the entire forest.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+goodra/

POKENAME often smears mucus on flower buds to evenly mix the toxins with the mucus. POKENAME usually only takes water from small puddles to avoid contaminating the water source.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+palossand/

Due to the decrease in hardness after sand wraps around its tissues plant, POKENAME tends to catch small prey. Its fragrant flower buds are filled with the vitality extracted from prey, and places it passes often leave behind shriveled remains.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+sandygast/

The green granules that make up POKENAME's body are sand wrapped in plant tissue. Although the cactus on its head is not part of its body, POKENAME can briefly control creatures that are pricked by it.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+cacturne/

POKENAME will set up a bud disguised with sand and then remain still under the sunlight. This bud absorbs the moisture of any creature it comes into contact with, rendering the prey powerless to resist.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.456/

Vines hanging from POKENAME's arms can entangle opponents during its battles. Although it lives alone, POKENAME doesn't mind sharing the sunlight with other Pokémon.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+amaura/?client=gtx

POKENAME lives in polar regions to avoid most predators. Due to the weak sunlight in the polar areas, POKENAME has evolved the ability to absorb even the faint light of dawn and dusk.

[willow venture]

Are you just going through every unwritten Bulbasaur sprites lol

[zinc patrol]

Not everyone. By the way, I'm not a Bulbasaur fan, just because its serial number is 1.

[rich goblet]

I need to go to work so I’ll get to this when I can, it’s going to be a while

[fading shale]

Im doing that for zekrom

[rich goblet]

@vernal gyro Please do not capitalize any part of your username when submitting an entry. Additionally, please review the lorebook in the pinned comments and post your entry here to get feedback before submitting, thank you.

@whole valve Please use your discord username when submitting entries, we will not accept entries that use your display name.

@foggy matrix I noticed you submitted an entry recently, welcome to this part of the game! I highly suggest reviewing the lore book in the pinned comments since you're starting out, and to have your entry reviewed here before submissions.

@zinc patrol Please do not mention animals in your entry, they do not exist in PIF

[rancid sun]

INDIAN ELEPHANRS

[thorn ingot]

Copperajah

The real fish from S1 anime?
Never happened

[rich goblet]

That was... random, but okay

[thorn ingot]

I mean it was a thing that happened

[rich goblet]

@autumn holly Please get your entries reviewed here before moving forward with submissions, just until you get an idea of the tone the Pokedex should take

[rich goblet]

I'm missing something here, were there elephants in the anime?

OH FISH

[thorn ingot]

Yeah the fish

[rich goblet]

Yeah no, never happened

There is no fish in ba sing se

[rancid sun]

Plus Indian Elephants were mentioned in the Gen 1 entries

[rich goblet]

We are BETTER than Game Freak, no logical inconsistency here

[thorn ingot]

[rich goblet]

Please don't mention animals, only Pokémon

[thorn ingot]

Plus we have Copperajah which is that animal’s Pokemon version now anyways

[rich goblet]

You forgot Donphan exists

Livid

Angry

Mad even

[thorn ingot]

Donphan was not the Indian elephant replacement for the dex entries

How could you be so incorrect

[rich goblet]

ELEPHANTS ARE FIIINE

I guess

They're the same thing

[thorn ingot]

You can look at PLA dex entry and it uses Copperajah

[rich goblet]

Le sigh

We run a tight ship here

[thorn ingot]

Also how are you gonna shock a ground type

100,000 volts vs dirt, and dirt wins

[rich goblet]

I forgot what we're even talking about

[thorn ingot]

Indian Elephants (which relates to Raichu dex entry)

[rich goblet]

Ooooh right

[drifting cloak]

The dense fur that runs down the POKENAME's body is made up of a tightly compacted snow. POKENAME has blubber so thick that only the sharpest of stings can pierce it.

idk if "runs down its body" and "stings" are the right phrases/words.

[rancid sun]

Exactly

[rich goblet]

The dense fur that envelops POKENAME's body is made of compacted snow. Its blubber is so thick that only the sharpest of tools can pierce it.

[drifting cloak]

Thank you

[foggy matrix]

love looking through dex entry author profiles and immediately finding out what the writers mildly specific favorite pokemon is

[storm light]

you'll never guess mine

[rich goblet]

It's harder than you think

Though mine should be obvious

It's not even close which one is number one

[thorn ingot]

Mine is totally not obvious

[storm light]

i had a lot more aerodactyl than i thought

[thorn ingot]

I did just remember that my Charizard and salamence counts are a bit inflated since self fusions

[autumn holly]

Okay, I'll be sure to do that from now on! 🫡

[fading shale]

https://tenor.com/view/legendary-pokemon-zekrom-dragon-type-pokemon-electric-type-pokemon-pokemon-gif-8321828649576053870

@rich goblet is there a time when one becomes worthy of just sending in dex entries without reviewing it in here ?

[rich goblet]

Honestly as long as it makes grammatical sense and doesn’t have lore breaks you can post as many as you want. It’s just that lots of people have poor grammar and don’t know the lore book

[fading shale]

def not me with the grammar

[thorn ingot]

Definitely* 🤓

[rich goblet]

Some times I read an entry and question my sanity

[fading shale]

im not writing a dex entry !

[fading shale]

rude

[fading shale]

me when necrozma

[thorn ingot]

I was joking

[fading shale]

reported

[fading shale]

actually not true

someone else questioned it

uh

wildheart !

[rich goblet]

Not yours in particular but there have been a few cases for other people

[fading shale]

oh no i know he was joking dw

sadly so many entries for zek fusions already exist

[storm light]

Honestly, once a majority of your entries are approved here and subsequently approved on the spreadsheet, then I'd personally say you're good to go off and post them on your own. I still post mine here from time to time anyway just because I like doing so and getting extra eyes on it helps

@rich goblet could I get your opinion on these three?

[rich goblet]

Looks good at a glance, I say send them

[fading shale]

yea i agree
also duckys wording is crisp af

[thorn ingot]

I never post my entries here mwahahaha

[thorny turtle]

How does one refer to Oricorio when referring to a specific form? Is just "Oricorio" fine or do I have to be more specific?

[storm light]

https://www.fusiondex.org/exeggcute+wigglytuff/
POKENAME collect eggs laid by other Pokemon and decorate them using berry paste and other organic materials. It is not known why they do this, but this habit is thought to have been the inspiration for a certain spring holiday.

[storm light]

You could probably say Oricorio's [Form] form, but they are also counted as separate pokemon so it's a lil weird

[rich goblet]

@zinc patrol In the future, please do not post more than three entries at a time. Thank you.

1.455.png
POKENAME are encased with thick tentacles that allow it to bunker down when in danger. POKENAME rarely moves and only does so with the changing tide, ensuring a delicate balance of sunlight and water.

1.451.png
The bud on POKENAME’s back releases chemical signals to warn nearby Grass-type Pokémon about any present danger. It dislikes physical contact, even with other plants.

1.449.png
POKENAME is wrapped in a leafy bulb that leaves only one eye exposed. This leafy bulb is made out of an incredibly tough material, giving its vines the capacity to uproot trees.

1.446.png
POKENAME smears mucus on flower buds to mix toxins from poisonous flowers, integrating the chemicals into its own body. It only drinks from small puddles to avoid contaminating larger sources of water.

1.460.png
POKENAME catches small prey like Krabby or Corpish by quickly snagging them with its vines. The scent that comes from its bulb smells like cooked fish, drawing the attention of Trainers and Pokémon alike.

1.459.png
Each green granule that makes up POKENAME’s body is wrapped in plant tissue. Those who are pricked by the cactus on its head feel numb, as though POKENAME is trying to control them.

1.458.png
POKENAME hides flower buds in the sand around it to rapidly sap moisture from anyone near it. These traps can remain effective for several days at a time before withering away.

1.456.png
Vines hanging from POKENAME’s arms entangle foes during battle. While it is a solitary creature, it tolerates the presence of other Pokémon while it is sunbathing.

1.461.png
POKENAME live in cold regions away from the many predators in warmer climates. As sunlight is weaker in these regions, POKENAME can absorb faint light found at dawn and dusk.

@zinc patrol You're welcome.

[fading shale]

POKENAME are often found in open plains near citys, racing each other for fun. Their tail is able to generate electricty through the running, giving them a noticable boost in agility.

By quickly rubbing their cheeks, POKENAME are able to generate a high amounts of energy, stored in their ears. The more energy they stored, the brighter glow their ears and cheeks.

While having wings, POKENAME stay mainly on the ground absorbing electricity through theirs ears. By concentrating the generated electricity into their feet can they reach the speed of a lightning bolt.

(idk if the second sentence is prober english tbf ⬆️ )

POKENAME often dig tunnels near power plants, enjoying the electricity in the ground. They can store some of that electricity in their cheek pouches, delivering a shocking bite when threatened.

POKENAME have developed electrified barbs all over their body., working like protective quills. The electricity running through their whiskers helps them navigate in the dark and even underground, where they form large families with their kind.

POKENAME are able to concentrate the electricity running through their body into their claws, helping them dig underground tunnels for their families. When with friends or family, they tuck in their electrified barbs to prevent accidental injuries.

[rich goblet]

@fading shale Please limit yourself to three entries at a time in the future.

350.19.png
POKENAME are found in open plains near cities, racing each other for fun. Their tail is able to generate electricity through running, giving them a noticeable boost in agility.

350.25.png
By quickly rubbing their cheeks, POKENAME are able to generate a high amount of energy, stored in their ears. The more energy they stored, the brighter the glow in their ears and cheeks.

350.26.png
While having wings, POKENAME stay mainly on the ground absorbing electricity through their ears. By concentrating the generated electricity into their feet, they can reach the speed of a lightning bolt.

350.27.png
POKENAME often dig tunnels near power plants, absorbing the electricity in the ground. They can store some of that electricity in their cheek pouches, delivering a shocking bite when threatened.

350.29.png
POKENAME have developed electrified barbs all over their body, which work like protective quills. The electricity running through their whiskers helps them navigate in the dark and even underground, where they form large families with their kind.

350.30.png
POKENAME can concentrate the electricity running through their body into their claws, helping them dig underground tunnels for their families. When with friends or family, they tuck in their electrified barbs to prevent accidental injuries.

@fading shale You're welcome.

[fading shale]

oh ok...
someone else also posted os many so i thought il put out all i thought about...

sorry

[fading shale]

gets ?
at the end

or unnecessary

[rich goblet]

Not your fault, you didn’t know. Just keep in mind to share the space with others, lots of new writers lately so I want to make sure everyone feels welcome.

[rich goblet]

Why would it get a question mark?

[fading shale]

but my zekroms

jk i understand

[fading shale]

no no not ?

only gets

it was a question

By quickly rubbing their cheeks, POKENAME are able to generate a high amount of energy, stored in their ears. The more energy they stored, the brighter the glow in their ears and cheeks gets.

[rich goblet]

It does not need anything else

[fading shale]

alr

[fading shale]

thank u

[rich goblet]

@severe scroll Just so you know and are looped in, with how many new authors are coming in, we would like to limit the number of entries in review at a time to three. I know you like to post your entries in bulk so I am letting you know.

This isn’t an official request but I figure it made sense to those who are already posting a lot

Like if you accidentally post four I’m not going to burn the place down but just keep in mind everyone uses this space

[fading shale]

(just one more to finish the tree)

POKENAME are often the heads of large families or groups of their kind. The wings on their backs are extremely sturdy, able to shield others from falling boulders.

[rich goblet]

Loose rubble

[fading shale]

i appreciate all the time u put in my suggestions ducky just so you know

[rich goblet]

You should have seen stuff before I was here

[fading shale]

can i limit myself to 5 at a time?

[fading shale]

rests fine ?

[zinc patrol]

I broke out of sleep. Regarding the one I was pointing at, I thought the yellow color around its bud might mean it was a false bud, an illusion like a mirage.

[rich goblet]

Yeah the rest of the entry is fine

[rich goblet]

I’d prefer three since it covers an evolutionary line, and because there’s at least three people who will be doing roughly the same amount

[fading shale]

aw okay
reasonable

[zinc patrol]

I will do three of them honestly. In addition, what if there are fans of Ibrahimovic

[zinc patrol]

Um, Eevee

[rich goblet]

Thank you for understanding, I see a lot of new author's and I'm happy about it, but it gets a little much when I also approve entries

[fading shale]

cant u get someone else to help u ?
if its all you i sure feel its alot u go through xd

[rich goblet]

Eevee has like 9 evolutions, but please only do three at a time. You can always post more when I get back to it

[fading shale]

Ohh so its not 3 a day its 3 per checking

[rich goblet]

You can always ping an Unown if you urgently need help, it's just that my schedule is basically like babysitting and its part time, so I get to it first

[rich goblet]

Yeah it's like that, three messages from three people fill up a screen pretty fast

It also allows me to distribute the help over multiple people so no one feels left out

[fading shale]

not urgent
sometimes just like now im totally in the flow and it rlly helps me with my private problems crushing me atm to wind down on those entries

[rich goblet]

You should start a google document for these sort of things, or just a journal or something. You can always copy paste later

[fading shale]

but thats fine
i can write them down and just sent 3 by 3

ye ye

we telepathic

[rich goblet]

I was once a young author and had flow states, so I get it. It's more to share the space

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+cacturne/

POKENAME will set a trap made of sand, which looks like a flower bud in the sunlight. This trap absorbs the moisture of nearby creatures, making it impossible for the prey to resist.?client=gtx

I translated it again, hoping it would express my original meaning this time.

[rich goblet]

I think if you said
POKENAME sets traps made out of sand that look like flower buds. This trap absorbs moisture from nearby creatures, making prey too tired to escape.

It would work better

[fading shale]

just me but why nearby?

shouldnt it drain captured ones ?

trapped*

[rich goblet]

I mean maybe it is proximity based, I don't question it too much

[fading shale]

[zinc patrol]

It's a slow-acting trap, like an exaggerated version of a sponge. (The original settings were definitely not changed to save word count)

[fading shale]

ah

[rich goblet]

I can see it

[zinc patrol]

Damn it, memes can't be translated effectively. I originally wrote the contact, but later found that it seemed to be easier to read closer.

[rich goblet]

memes are very hard to translate

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+aurorus/

POKENAME can accumulate enough nutrients during the polar day to last an entire year and store them in its flower buds. Its green fins can absorb light even in the darkest places, adapting to extreme weather.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+lycanroc-midday/

Wild POKENAME often live alone, focusing on gathering nutrients for their buds. The tips of its vines grow woody spikes, which can be flexibly used in battle.

I haven't saved up 3 yet, but I'll give it away first

[rich goblet]

The phrase "polar day" does not exist in English so I'm doing my best with what I am given.
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POKENAME accumulates enough nutrients during a day in the tundra to last an entire year, storing that energy in its flower buds. Its green sail can absorb energy in low light conditions, as long as the sun is shining.

1.464.png
Wild POKENAME often live alone, focusing on gathering nutrients for its buds. The tips of its vines grow woody spikes, which can flex and are used in battle.

[zinc patrol]

The word I entered into the translator refers to the following

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Midnight_sun

[rich goblet]

One moment

[rich goblet]

POKENAME accumulates nutrients during a single polar day to last an entire year, storing that energy in its flower bud. Its green sail absorbs energy in low light conditions as long as the sun is shining; excess energy is crystallized as dust.

I'm going to grab a bite, y'all be good now. No riot.

[hollow nimbus]

polar day is a thing

It's not a commonly heard phrase unless you live near the arctic circle or are really into polar-based science, though

[rich goblet]

This has been resolved 😅

EDIT: I didn't know it at the time but I know now, and incorporated it into the entry. I wonder why I didn't know of it sooner

[zinc patrol]

Let me ask in advance, is "Smoldering Combustion" a commonly used concept in English? If not, what do I call burning without visible light?

[rich goblet]

It isn't common but its effects can be inferred from the words

Like people can figure out what it means based on the words

[zinc patrol]

That's good, I'm relieved.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.488a/

POKENAME absorbs sunlight through its green shell to maintain an internal smolder. When needed, POKENAME can increase humidity to release smoke or ignite renewable vines to launch an attack.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+frogadier/

POKENAME can move flexibly through the forest. When encountering enemies, POKENAME wraps pebbles in bitter foam and throws them to disturb the enemies.

[rich goblet]

This is fine as is, you're slowing picking things up

[rich goblet]

move flexibly? Do you mean agile? Just making sure before I make small changes

[zinc patrol]

Ah, yes

[rich goblet]

POKENAME move swiftly through the forest, hopping between branches with great agility. When encountering enemies, POKENAME wraps pebbles in bitter foam and throws them to disrupt their enemies' concentration.

@willow venture I see you, how you doing? Hope your studies are going well. You have finals don't you?

[willow venture]

Omg hu

Hi*

[rich goblet]

I assume it is finals, I tend to be older than people expect

[willow venture]

I don't know who told you about studies but I'm already a working guy lmao

I might be around your age man ngl

[rich goblet]

How is work treating you then?

[willow venture]

Shit as usual lol

[rich goblet]

I find the internet tends to skew young so I try to cover my bases

[willow venture]

All this with less than bare minimum pay but you know we soldier on

[rich goblet]

True!

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.489a/
POKENAME's buds can absorb the grudges of forest creatures. POKENAME remains vigilant toward any foreign beings, including humans, and will attack if they come too close.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME's flower bud absorbs the grudges of forest creatures that have succumbed to deforestation. POKENAME remains vigilant toward anything foreign, including humans, and will attack if they come too close.

[zinc patrol]

A question suddenly occurred to me. Can pictures of existing entries be used to create new entries? If it is, that means I don't have to worry about which entry is not good enough and takes a spot, because something better can come and take its place.

[rich goblet]

If a sprite has an alt (like a, b, c) then it can have its own entry

You just type like

1.1a.png for the a alt sprite

[zinc patrol]

If I write a mediocre entry and it passes review, can someone with a better idea later submit a new entry to replace me? I don't want me to leave some kind of flaw in this project that's hard to fix.

[rich goblet]

A single sprite can have multiple entries as long as they are not from the same author.

We're still working on how to show all the entries (if we keep them all) but for now that is the policy

[zinc patrol]

That's good

So it seems that instead of looking for great ideas, it is also a good idea to correct the unreasonable parts of the automatic splicing illustrations first. Just read the two original illustrations carefully.

[rich goblet]

Oh, that's right, only custom sprites can have entries.

In other words, only art made by a person gets a Pokedex entry

If a sprite is grey in fusiondex.org it means it is automatically spliced and unable to get an entry

[hexed fog]

is the sheet freaking out?

[zinc patrol]

Translator for everyday psychosis. I'm referring to automatic entries for artworks.

[hexed fog]

or is my pc dying

[rich goblet]

The automatic entries for artworks are temporary. It is why this channel exists, we do not like the automatic entries.

The more creative and special the entry is, the more likely it is to be kept.

I routinely deny low quality entries, so don't worry about quality, I'm also the one likely to judge them

@hexed fog It is a little slow on my end

[zinc patrol]

That's why I'm eyeing the artwork with only auto-entry, after all even the version that isn't corrected here is so much better than the "Auto-spliced ​​Pokédex Entry".

[rich goblet]

That's fine! My only concern is that it might get boring after a while, so feel free to write for ones that are your favorite Pokemon

I write a lot for Psyduck

@zinc patrol By the way, you can use this site to keep track of the entries you've written https://www.fusiondex.org/authors/oreee0230/

[zinc patrol]

Oh, they're on the website already? I thought it would be at the end or beginning of the month.

[rich goblet]

Whenever @hexed fog updates the game, it usually is updated in the website shortly after. You can see when the last update is in the pinned comments.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+scraggy/

The lower leaves of POKENAME have an incredible elasticity. They often stretch the leaves to increase the area exposed to sunlight, and the individuals that stretch the most become the leaders of the group.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME have elastic pants made out of leaves. By stretching these pants, they increase the surface area that can absorb sunlight to gain more energy. Those who can stretch the pants over their head are most likely to become leaders of a group.

[zinc patrol]

New avatar...well another kind of duck

[zinc patrol]

Wait, I remember the requirement is two sentences?

[rich goblet]

Typically 2-3 sentences, not strict requirement

It can be one if it is long enough, the point was to discourage short sentences

"It is red. It likes cakes. It does not like pies."

^ This would be poor form, since it doesn't have substance to the sentences

[rich goblet]

Yeah I switch it from time to time

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+lotad/

POKENAME's short legs are not good at walking, but it is very good in water. It can hardly move on land because of the weight of its flower bud.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME can barely move on land because of the weight of its flower bud and its short, stubby legs. Its swimming ability is much better by comparison, so it prefers to stay in the water.

@zinc patrol

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+minior-meteor/

POKENAME will continuously absorb sunlight and thicken its buds, not caring if it becomes too heavy to fly. If it encounters a danger that the buds cannot withstand, it will escape rapidly in another form.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME will continuously absorb sunlight to thicken the cell walls of its body, even if it becomes too heavy to fly. If it encounters danger that its body cannot endure, its bulbous body peels apart to change form.

[thorn ingot]

Oh wow I didn’t even recognize duck without the psyduck pfp

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+diancie/
All Grass-type Pokémon cannot resist POKENAME's beauty. POKENAME can revive withered plants, but it only uses this ability on plants that have encountered accidents.

There are times when I feel like Thanos is a successful philosopher, especially regarding the curse of knowledge. No one knows how much shock I experienced when I first saw those two yellow pistils.

[rich goblet]

The first part is a bit weird and overpowered, espeically since plants normally don't feel attraction

[zinc patrol]

I think it's normal for Mythical Pokémon to have special abilities. Also, it is a grass-type Pokémon, not a plant.

Please ignore those singular forms, the quantity will not be specially marked in Chinese, and the translator will add it randomly according to his understanding.

Just now the translator interpreted the singular form as an odd number

[thorn ingot]

I think saying no grass-type pokemon period can resist it is a bit too far. I would say most instead

[rich goblet]

Yeah it shouldn't break the lore of the game

I'll still cook something up though, watch me

Grass-type Pokémon feel a certain subserviance when encountering POKENAME's beauty. POKENAME can revive plants from the brink of death, restoring vitality to plants caught in disasters.

[severe scroll]

omg, Ducky changed their profile pic!

[rich goblet]

Yes I did

[zinc patrol]

Okay, to me, the fantasy Pokémon just needs to stay special, not necessarily powerful, so this change is in line with expectations.

[willow venture]

Can anybody give me a random like

Lapras fusion

[zinc patrol]

I mean Mythical Pokémon

[willow venture]

Just one will do and then I'll work my way to the rest of that specific Lapras fusion's line or smth

[rich goblet]

One sec

https://www.fusiondex.org/mareep+lapras/

@willow venture

[willow venture]

Splendid

[rich goblet]

I am wrapping up and headed to bed soon so yall be nice

[willow venture]

Does it have the rest of the Mareep line

[rich goblet]

Let me check

Sadly no

[willow venture]

https://tenor.com/view/sad-pepe-gif-24668210

[rich goblet]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bonsly+lapras/

This one does though

[zinc patrol]

Okay, good night, I'm going to order some instant noodles for lunch

[storm light]

If enhydro agate is too obscure to mention, lmk. I thought it would be neat to reference them
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enhydro_agate

https://www.fusiondex.org/suicune+diancie/
The crystal-like half of POKENAME's lower body is thought to be made of enhydro agate and contain pockets of pure water. These Pokemon have only been recorded roaming caves where underground lakes form.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+pelipper/
POKENAME's jaw looks like a flower bud, but there is no corresponding structure inside. When POKENAME is on a tree, prey can only see a bud until POKENAME opens its huge mouth.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+plusle/
POKENAME can emit currents that promote the development of plant organs. It occasionally leaks electricity when excited.?client=gtx

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+minun/
POKENAME can generate electricity that promotes plant growth. It occasionally leaks electricity when it is depressed.

[ember urchin]

Hey, it's been a while since I've been here. Is there any way to tell which fusions are possible in a normal playthrough (non-randomized)? Do they take priority or nah?

[zinc patrol]

The following content is from the translator: I’ve seen no one reply for too long, so I’ll give you a reply. I'd like to answer you directly but I don't know the answer, and this channel focuses on Pokédex entries. Well I'm new here and don't know where the correct channel is for this question. I think we should wait for someone who knows any of the above to come online.

[rich goblet]

There is a list of Pokémon that are a priority on the approval sheet, but it is entirely optional to complete them.

As for a list of fusions found in a normal playthrough, technically all combinations are found in a normal playthrough, except the Hoenn exclusives (PIF Hoenn is still being developed)

[keen kestrel]

any fusions you meet in the wild should already have at least one entry i think, they prioritized a pass on those a long time ago

[ember urchin]

Thanks!

[hexed fog]

Yes please tell us if you find any wild mons with no entry

[rich goblet]

I’ll be at work for a bit so if anyone needs anything just ping an Unown

[rich goblet]

This also looks fine by the way, one can infer what it means with the words around it

[rich goblet]

This Pokémon is like a pelican right? How does it lower the vigilance of its prey?

[rich goblet]

POKENAME emits electrical currents that accelerate the development of nearby plants. It leaks electricity from its ears when excited.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME generates electricity that accelerates plant growth when discharged. It leaks electricity from its bulbous head when it is depressed.

[abstract tusk]

Hey! So in the lorebook it says "Nothing and no one can be stated to be a god in an entry, and angels and demons do not exist in the PIF world." But what about deities? Can an entry say a pokemon is considered a deity? People can worship mundane things too right?

[azure wagon]

I believe if you frame it like "Ancient cultures once regarded [WHATEVER] as a deity/spirit/etc." it should be alright

basically keeping it vague or framing it like a legend/myth

And as long as Pokemon themselves dont worship whatever it is, as animals dont have religion

[abstract tusk]

I see, thanks! I'll try working around that hjahaha

POKENAME was once regarded as a deity by an ancient civilization. It was said that picking up a fallen scale of this Pokémon would bring beauty to the founder's descendants.

Something like that maybe?

[drifting cloak]

POKENAME live in spherical shells that are incredibly smooth, allowing them to roll seamlessly. They tend to outgrow these shells, and are left in an incredibly vulnerable state if they are unable to find a larger shell in time.

I tried to go with some hermit crab typa vibe

[rich goblet]

Entries must refer to a species of Pokemon, this describes one instance of the Pokemon

[abstract tusk]

All POKENAME were once regarded as deities by an ancient civilization. It was said that picking up a fallen scale of this Pokémon would bring beauty to the finder's descendants.

Generalizing?

[storm light]

could be a simple change from was to- yeah that

this -> these prob

[rich goblet]

What does founder’s descendants mean here? I’m a little confused

[abstract tusk]

emm what founder as in the one who finds, not founding something

let me look fot he correct word LMAO

finder

sorry I had a brain fart LOL

[rich goblet]

Is descendants an important part of the entry to you? You could say “bring beauty to those who find one”

[abstract tusk]

I thought about it as it would make more sense in the context, but I didn't know how accepted a sudden change of appearance was?

[rich goblet]

POKENAME live in spherical shells that are incredibly smooth, allowing them to roll seamlessly. They tend to outgrow these shells, and are left in an incredibly vulnerable state if they are unable to find a replacement.

[abstract tusk]

but it's a myth so can make sense

When POKENAME's head is stepped on, it shoots bubbles out of it's mouth as a distraction and slithers swiftly away to the nearest rocks.

I didn't know for this one if it's better to say "When pokename's head is stepped on" or "When someone steps on pokename's head"

[rich goblet]

POKENAME was once regarded as a deity by an ancient civilization. It was said that picking up a fallen scale of this Pokémon would bring beauty to those who find one, instantly clearing their skin of blemishes and scars.

@abstract tusk

[jagged ledge]

Why would its head be stepped on? And a distraction from what? How does it escape from underfoot?

[jagged ledge]

Doesn't that still have the singular focus issue though?

[abstract tusk]

But isn't that refering to one instance of the mon? I like the final part!

[rich goblet]

Oh one second

Sorry on mobile so I’m a little myopic and slow

[abstract tusk]

Like, when you walk on the beach you can accidentally step on animals, and like bubbles as distraction because it thinks it's a predator? like a squid with the ink

[abstract tusk]

I can change it for you don't worry

[rich goblet]

Let me finish typing please

POKENAME were once regarded as deities by ancient civilizations. Legends say that picking up a fallen scale from one of these Pokémon would bring beauty to those who find one, instantly clearing their skin of blemishes and scars.

[jagged ledge]

as deities. Adjust plural

[rich goblet]

Done!

[jagged ledge]

👍

[abstract tusk]

thanks a lot!

[rich goblet]

Thanks Wildheart

[jagged ledge]

No problem, saves me time in Dexdoku reviews later

[abstract tusk]

and do you like this explanation or should I change up the entry all together? hahaha

[jagged ledge]

Well then you can say something like "POKENAME slither through sandy coastlines to hunt for prey. If one of them is stepped on by a passing Trainer, it will scatter bubbles as a distraction and hide amongst the rocks."

You shouldn't assume everyone will make the same connections as you automatically. If you have logic behind the meaning of your entry, always try to communicate it within the entry to guide the reader's logic.

[abstract tusk]

Ohh, thanks! I'll try to think more National Geographic-like to be more impersonal and neutral yeah

[thorny turtle]

How does this entry look? I'm a little unsure about if the second sentence is kosher or not

I was trying to go with something akin to IRL cookie-cutter sharks

[jagged ledge]

Well to be fair, you should still try to write about what you want to, it's just about understanding the format and being creative in how you bring out the personal voice, intentions, or comedy.

Like for example:

Don't say "Aww, look at the precious little guy!"

Instead say something like "Trainers fawn over POKENAME's adorable demeanor, leading to many struggling to give their Pokémon commands in battle against them."

[keen kestrel]

ripping off chunks of flesh might sound a little too gory, but the pokedex does say mareanie breaks off branches of corsola when hunting lol... i guess there's a very very thin line between those 2 things haha
*maybe you can say "It leaves distinctive bite marks in the leafy appendages of Dhelmise it hunts"
that's a big change i know, doesn't have to be that, just an example

[abstract tusk]

POKENAME's internal gem is really valued amongst jewelers. Its pointy shell is as sharp as a diamond and protects it from anyone who attempts to seize its gemstone.

I tried to keep this one more neutral

but idk about if the gem's considered the brain/pokemon itself like starmie? I chose to believe not LOL

[jagged ledge]

"Valued highly"

[abstract tusk]

and highly valued?

[jagged ledge]

Maybe instead of "shearing off a chunk of flesh, say something like "breaking through" or "working piece by piece", something to communicate the intention without being as visceral.

[jagged ledge]

I think also good?

[keen kestrel]

actually just "leaving distinctive bite marks on its prey" might be fine

like, i have bite marks from my cat 😂 but i'm not missing chunks of flesh. mostly

[thorny turtle]

My intention is "Clampedo swims up to a large Water-type Pokemon, takes a single clean bite out of it, and swims away with that bite in its mouth"

[rich goblet]

What does your current entry look like?

[thorny turtle]

#dex-entries-discussion message

[rich goblet]

This part we can keep:

The edge of a POKENAME’s shell is covered in rows of tiny teeth, giving the shell a razor-sharp edge that never grows dull.

I was thinking we can change the second sentence as follows:

When eating large prey, it tears a massive chunk from its meal as though it were sliced with a cookie cutter.

Had to fix something but what you think?

[thorny turtle]

I might use that change, or I might write a new sentence. I had a few different ideas in mind for Sentence 2 so I have backups

While I'm here, I have another entry-related question

How does the second sentence of this look?

[rich goblet]

That’s one sentence

[thorny turtle]

er, second half

[rich goblet]

Oh

[thorny turtle]

the part about swim bladders

[rich goblet]

Maybe rely on instead of use?

Nothing egregious here

[thorny turtle]

Mostly I was curious about stating the existence of swim bladders

[rich goblet]

I mean they exist, it’s fine

[thorny turtle]

As well as using "Water-type Pokemon" as a replacement for "fish", since many Water-types wouldn't have a swim bladder (e.g. Wingull)

debating replacing "Water-type" with "piscine" [maybe sic]

[rich goblet]

If that’s your concern replace other with many

[thorny turtle]

alrighty

[rich goblet]

yeah if you say "Many people do X" it means that lots of but not all of them do it

Hope that helps

[tiny pier]

I'm not sure if I should report this here but my game crashes at this Pokedex entry

[storm light]

This is more of a #tech-support issue

[rich goblet]

Funnily enough, that sprite doesn't even have an entry

nailed it

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+illumise/
Nectar rich in nutrients can be squeezed out of POKENAME's buds. Other Pokémon, especially those raising young, will do their best to take care of it in exchange for the nectar.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+castform/
POKENAME's appearance changes with the weather. The bud under its body can not only absorb moisture from the air but also predict the weather.

[zinc patrol]

If they look from below, small prey can only see a bud with a few leaves.

[rich goblet]

I still don’t see the connection

Like it looks up at the sky and sees a bulb? How does it make a Pokémon lower its guard? It doesn’t make sense

[zinc patrol]

Okay, how about waiting in a tree instead?

[rich goblet]

Maybe, feel free to rewrite it and I’ll let you know afterwards

[zinc patrol]

I modified the original message

[rich goblet]

I’m still confused, so it looks like something while at an angle? A lot of Pokemon can do that, it isn’t really anything significant

[zinc patrol]

Indeed, many Pokémon can do it, so I often mention bud camouflage in other entries, but most of them are used for self-defense, this time it is used for hunting.

Bulbasaur's color is originally a protective color, so I think this is fairly expected.

[rich goblet]

How is it a protective color?

Like this is a Pelipper fusion so it should be camouflaged into the sky with white or blue

[zinc patrol]

The venue I expected was in the forest. Well, the first thing that comes to mind when mentioning the large-billed gull is the sea.

But I even wrote tree

Add to

[rich goblet]

I need to take some time to do some yard work, feel free to Ping an Unown to get help or wait until I’m back

[zinc patrol]

Well, forget about the green-chinned pelican. I'll post another entry to make it up to 3. Later I will try how to use the mobile version of discord.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.554a/
POKENAME in the rain. It takes this time to cleanse its insides through periodic absorption and expulsion of water.

[regal cedar]

Do we have a list of Pokémon that can affect/delete/alter/add memories? I can only think of Uxie and Malamar, but I'm positive there's others.

[thorn ingot]

Not the same but Latios can make people see images it imagines

[storm light]

Sight sharing :) I believe both the latis can do that

[rich goblet]

POKENAME has nutritious nectar oozing out of its shining buds. Those tasked with raising children often help POKENAME in exchange for this nectar, feeding it to their young.

[rich goblet]

This one looks good enough, feel free to send it, I’ll fix any grammar errors tomorrow

[rich goblet]

POKENAME cleanses its body through the absorption and expulsion of rainwater. Once this rainwater is flushed through its body, it can be harnessed as liquid fertilizer.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.556/
Although it can absorb sunlight to sustain itself, POKENAME often searches for fruits to supplement its nutrition. The size of the bud on its back directly reflects POKENAME's recent physical condition.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+skrelp/
POKENAME likes to float on the surface of the sea, pretending to be a rootless aquatic plant. Once other creatures come close, POKENAME will spray venom and escape to another location.

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+castform-snowy-form/
This is what POKENAME looks like in snowy weather. It enlarges its body by forming parts of it out of snow, allowing it to enjoy the scarce sunlight filtering through the snow clouds.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME enlarges its body by forming parts of itself out of snow, allowing it to enjoy the scarce sunlight filtering through the snow clouds. Its green wisps are a mixture of ice crystals and pollen.

@zinc patrol Also, I have used the emoji to indicate that the entry is good enough to be submitted. Keep an eye out for those as I sometimes give judgement during small breaks in the day

[zinc patrol]

Got it, sir. ?client=gtx

[strong flame]

Ohey, I just sprited an evo to this one today.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/bulbasaur+sealeo/
POKENAME's leaf-shaped whiskers have sensitive tactile and light-sensing abilities. Through the guidance of elders within the group, POKENAME can develop the skill of determining direction by measuring sunlight with its whiskers.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.14a/
POKENAME uses vines to secure itself to the tree. From the leaves to the vines, and even on POKENAME's cocoon, there are controllable poisonous stingers.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.15a/
The antennae on POKENAME's head can ignore plants and only detect prey suitable for consumption. When it cannot quickly sting the prey with its venomous stinger, POKENAME sprays toxic gas from its flower bud and then waits patiently.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME's leaf-shaped whiskers have sensitive tactile and light-sensing abilities. Through the guidance of older members of its herd, POKENAME can develop an accurate sense of direction by measuring sunlight with its whiskers.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME uses vines to secure itself to a tree. Each part of POKENAME's body has a venomous sting and are especially potent in its leaves and vines.

[rich goblet]

The antennae on POKENAME's head can accurately separate plants from prey. The flower bud on its abdomen sprays a toxic gas when it cannot attack fast enough with its stinger.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.27a/
POKENAME almost never exposes its head or limbs above the ground. The buds on its back have a bitter scent that spreads over a short distance, so there is no need to worry about being preyed upon.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.28a/
POKENAME's skin can absorb water from the air, while the cactus on its back can absorb excess water from its skin. POKENAME's cactus often falls off during intense activity, and some Pokémon patiently wait around it for the water.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+clefairy/
POKENAME can absorb moonlight just like it absorbs sunlight. During the day they rest scattered in the forest, and at night they gather in clearings.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME rarely exposes its head and limbs above ground, tunneling just below the surface. The flower on its back has a bitter taste and a foul scent, ensuring it never needs to worry about predation.

[rich goblet]

This is confusing.

Both the skin and the cactus absorb water? Also why does the cactus fall off?

[zinc patrol]

Skin absorbs water from the original illustrated book. Cacti absorb water from, um, cactus absorbs water. The cactus is located where the thorns on its back originally were. The original illustrated book said those words are easy to fall off but regenerate very quickly.

[rich goblet]

The illustrated book?

[zinc patrol]

Sorry for the translation problem, I'll change it into a more error-free expression.

https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Sandslash_(Pokémon)

[rich goblet]

I'm a little confused but I'll give it a shot.

[zinc patrol]

I misremembered the skin-absorbent description of Sandshrew, but I guess at this point they are the same?

[rich goblet]

POKENAME absorbs water through its skin and the cacti on its back. When mature, the cacti fall onto the ground behind it, creating a source of nutrition for desert scavengers.

@zinc patrol

[finite salmon]

Cacti is plural, so either that or falls is conjugated wrong

[rich goblet]

Thank you

[rich goblet]

POKENAME can absorb moonlight as readily it can absorb sunlight. It rests in open fields both day and night.

[zinc patrol]

I wanted the entry to reflect the nocturnal nature and gregarious nature of the species at night.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME can absorb moonlight as readily it can absorb sunlight. It rests in open fields during the day and awakens at night to play.

[zinc patrol]

Thanks for the modification

[rich goblet]

I've been getting sloppy, I need to lock in more when I do the approvals

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+clefable/
The bud on POKENAME's back emits a strong fragrance under the moonlight. Once it hears a human sound, wild POKENAME will stop moon-gazing and hide.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+jigglypuff/
The bud on POKENAME's back contains a specially shaped cavity that can amplify its singing. Since its leaves can also be used for breathing, POKENAME's singing can continue without needing to take a breath.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.40a/
POKENAME often expands its body size by inhaling. Its belly can stretch 20 times, efficiently absorbing sunlight.

[rich goblet]

The bud on POKENAME's back emits a strong fragrance under the moonlight. Once it hears Trainers nearby, wild POKENAME will stop moon-gazing and hide.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME often expands its body size by inhaling. Its belly can stretch 20 times its original size, increasing the available surface area it has to absorb sunlight.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+vileplume/
A sweet-smelling but highly poisonous nectar flows from the top of POKENAME's head, which it uses to lure prey. Because it moves clumsily, many prey animals are not afraid even when they realize POKENAME is there.

Please help me remove the word animal if it is grammatically correct.

[rich goblet]

A sweet-smelling yet highly poisonous nectar flows from the top of POKENAME's head, which it uses to lure prey. Because of its underwhelming and clumsy movement, many of its prey are not afraid even when they realize POKENAME is nearby.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.50b/
In order to accumulate nutrients for its buds, POKENAME's appetite has become enormous. Sometimes in the forest, you can see plants being dragged by it down to the ground to be eaten.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.51a/
Vegetarian food cannot meet the nutritional needs of three buds, and POKENAME often preys on other Grass-type Pokémon. The scent of the buds easily makes prey let down their guard, and POKENAME drags them into the ground the moment they relax.

[rich goblet]

@zinc patrol How do you write so many entries so fast?

[thorn ingot]

Uh translation go eepy

Also that’s funny coming from you ducky

[rich goblet]

I've been on a dry spell lately, I only manage like five a day or so

[thorn ingot]

The Unown writing syndrome strikes again

[zinc patrol]

Read the official entries of the two prototypes?client=gtx

[rich goblet]

No like how do you get the ideas to write for these entries so quickly?

You don't have to limit yourself to what is in the Pokedex, Pokemon are more than the sum of their parts

You can talk about stuff outside of the Pokedex so long as it makes sense

[thorn ingot]

Also that’s still higher than my 3 per day

[zinc patrol]

The official illustration is not a limitation for me. Basically, it is equivalent to external brainstorming. If a certain feature of the two prototypes can overlap, or overlap with the picture, I can quickly figure out what to say for this entry.

[rich goblet]

Good enough for me, just remember that even though it isn't mentioned, a Pokemon can still do other things.

Like bird Pokemon can fly, make nests, search for food, stuff that a normal bird can do the Pokemon can too

Don't limit yourself is what I'm saying

With that said

@zinc patrol

In order to accumulate nutrients for its buds, POKENAME's endless appetite causes it to eat all nearby plants. In the forests that POKENAME are native to, people report seeing plants being dragged underground to be eaten by a POKENAME.

Plant-based food is not nutritious enough for the three buds, so POKENAME often prey on other Grass-type Pokémon. The scent of the buds makes prey docile, allowing POKENAME to drag them into the ground the moment they relax.

[storm light]

https://www.fusiondex.org/oricorio-sensu-style+zubat/
Despite being blind, POKENAME are able to calmly fly and navigate through any environment. It is believed that they may be able to sense their surroundings using spiritual energy, sweeping waves of calm energy with the flap of a wing.

[rich goblet]

Despite being blind, POKENAME are able to calmly fly and navigate through any environment. It is believed that they may be able to sense their surroundings using spiritual energy.

@storm light I added navigate to the first sentence so there would be a point of connection between the two sentences, and I changed thought to believed to make it sound more opinion based

[storm light]

I wanted to add something about their wings flapping giving a sense of calm, but I think that fits more with Ori Pa'u lol

or maybe like calm emotions of grieving individuals

[rich goblet]

Despite being blind, POKENAME are able to calmly fly and navigate through any environment. It is believed that they may be able to sense their surroundings using spiritual energy, sweeping waves of calm energy with the flap of a wing.

[storm light]

goddamn, that imagery

[rich goblet]

Sometimes I sneeze and something beautiful comes out

[storm light]

https://giphy.com/gifs/bird-gets-taken-disappears-disappeared-U7kbn9KA78acbxTCe3

Now for Golbat

https://www.fusiondex.org/porygon+golbat/
POKENAME colonies roam areas of cyberspace that are less frequented by users. If disturbed, POKENAME scatter into the user's computer, lagging user input immensely until cleared out.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.61/
POKENAME intentionally rubs nectar on the spiral of its belly. When Bug or Fish Pokémon are attracted, they become sleepy from staring at the hypnotic spiral.

[rich goblet]

The only thing I would say is "lagging user input" to be more computer oriented, as slowing is a very general term

[storm light]

true

[rich goblet]

POKENAME rubs nectar onto its belly to lure bug Pokémon close. Once they have gathered close enough, they are lulled into a slumber with its hypnotic spiral.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.63a/
Although POKENAME needs twice the amount of sleep of its waking hours to restore energy, it seems to recover faster under sunlight. Wild POKENAME almost only appear on sunny days, and if they cannot get sun, they will teleport to distant places.

[rich goblet]

Although POKENAME spends twice as many sleeping hours compared to the time it spends awake, it seems to recover faster while napping in sunlight. Wild POKENAME only appear on sunny days, teleporting away to distant places as soon as it is cloudy.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+alakazam/
POKENAME's buds emit a powerful psychic energy and support its weight. Its spoon seems to be able to fertilize the soil, but only trainers it trusts are allowed to use it.

[rich goblet]

I'll have to get to this tomorrow, it is late where I'm at

[zinc patrol]

Okay, I'll make up to 3 and save the rest temporarily

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+machamp/
Although the leaves on POKENAME's head can also absorb sunlight, it still needs to eat to support its large amount of physical activity. As it exercises, its flower buds become more vibrant.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.70a/
When POKENAME hangs on a tree, it uses flower buds as a counterweight. If it eats too much at once, it may be forced to spend the night on the ground because the difference in weight between its body and the flower buds becomes too great.

[storm light]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/42.437a/
POKENAME swim at astonishing speeds with their mouth agape, swallowing anything in their path. Their sharp fangs hold enough venom to paralyze a Wailord, making POKENAME bites deadly to humans.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/43.224/
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/43.224a/
POKENAME dig into the ground to hide from predators, leaving only their crown of leaves exposed. If their leaves are disturbed, they retaliate with Octazooka attacks filled with ink. POKENAME in different environments exhibit different colors.

https://www.fusiondex.org/castform-sunny-form+gloom/
The orbs on POKENAME's head exhibit a warm similar to a campfire on touch. When the weather turns cloudy, these orbs cool down. Even when taken care of properly, POKENAME emit a foul odor from the cloud in their mouth.

[fading shale]

POKENAME can load the electricity generated in its body into its ears, which gives it an almost echo location like hearing. With its empowered ears can it detect sounds even underground.

POKENAME have very soft tails which they also use to take naps on. They can absorb electricity into their tails, able to make it glow and amplifying their fiery attacks with shocking accuracy.

[storm light]

Its -> their and it ->they to keep consistency

Tail should also be plural, as Vulpix have 6 tails total

[fading shale]

POKENAME love to eat fruits and vegetables, which are turned into electric energy in its belly. Depending on which food is POKENAME´s individual favorite, the more energy is gained from consuming it.

[icy canopy]

is it possible to do a dex entry that just implies that the pokemon itself wrote it, it may not actually be that but i'm thinking it could be funny to have like a smeargle alakazam or something say ''this pokémon is intelligent enough to write in human language'' followed by praise for the species or something (it is a very powerful species and etc) that makes you think the pokémon wrote the entry itself

[zinc patrol]

I guess anything that isn't forbidden is allowed? After all, many stickers also contain META elements.

By many images, I mean picture files.

[fading shale]

does your feedback also count to the 3 entrys a time mark ducky set up ?
or should i wait for them to sign em off

[rich goblet]

It’s not a hard rule, it’s just how I prefer things go

[fading shale]

il keep to it

https://klipy.com/gifs/yes-sir-buzz-lightyear--k01KRKYVE0BA5QG1YWB2MQQ8K4A

[rich goblet]

I will be out and about today so feel free to ask for feedback from the other Unown by pinging the role

[fading shale]

can i ping them since u said only in urgent situations

also have fun

[rich goblet]

I only said that because sometimes they get a lot of pings

[fading shale]

https://klipy.com/gifs/raccoon-hehehe-4--k01KRKYSDVGAR7Y3961PE5FX8DM

[rich goblet]

<@&1210701164426039366> Can someone help Zek with grammar feedback?

#dex-entries-discussion message

The first entry is linked in the message above

[fading shale]

[ember urchin]

Did the first parts of the Aron line x Farfetch'd ages ago. Time I finished it

Along with ramming with their hard bodies, their stick and webbed feet are razor-sharp. Working together, a flock can drive off packs of far larger predators.

https://fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/333.83/

[ember urchin]

Maybe shorten it in places? Readers will assume its body generates elecricity like most elec Pokemon (eat, sleep, etc.)- though some can power up as well from external sources.

POKENAME stores generated electricity in its ears, making its hearing act like echo-location. When charged, it can detect sounds even deep underground.

[fading shale]

what

[ember urchin]

@rich goblet Asked for you to have feedback.

So I gave it

If that's ok

(Been out the loop for a while)

[fading shale]

yea but i dont get ur feedback XD

wdym shorten it

[keen kestrel]

Means make it shorter? Lol

[fading shale]

then entry? why

[ember urchin]

OK, shorten was probably the wrong word. More like, making it flow more naturally by taking out superflous words?

(in my opinion!)

[severe scroll]

Dusktop (313.237)
POKENAME spins on its antenna in order to attract and contact spirits. The faster this Pokémon spins, the more spirits are attracted to it. When enough spirits are following, POKENAME will walk and guide them to the afterlife.

[fading shale]

like what

[ember urchin]

I did Aron x Farfetch'd and Lairon x Farfetch'd. Never got around to Aggron x Farfetch'd, so I gave it a go.

[fading shale]

werong ping

[fading shale]

this

[rich goblet]

If you're going to give feedback, please be clear about it.

@fading shale I've got a bit of time, give me a second and I'll give replies

[fading shale]

no worries il keep it at those 3 for today enjoy your time ^^ il get back at it tomorrow :p

[rich goblet]

POKENAME loads electricity into its ears, creating echoes that help amplify sound. With this superhearing, POKENAME can hear Pokémon underground.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME have soft tails that they enjoy taking naps on. They can absorb electricity with their tail, causing it to glow and amplify their flaming attacks.

[hexed fog]

Just do your best and leave it on the list I'll look later brotato

[rich goblet]

POKENAME loves to eat fruits and vegetables, storing the energy as electricity in its belly. More energy is absorbed from its favorite food.

[severe scroll]

Hello Dex Writers!

[fading shale]

i apologize if im being alot XD

[rich goblet]

Hello Pirate Kat!

[severe scroll]

Ducky, op-onions about the Dusktop? 🧅

[rich goblet]

Lemme scroll up

[rich goblet]

How does it contact spirits if its just spinning? Like its hard to say or sign out anything? I'd fix that logical break before more feedback

[rich goblet]

Along with ramming with their hard bodies, their stick and webbed feet are razor-sharp. Pairing these together, a flock can drive off packs of far larger predators.

[severe scroll]

The antenna that Dusknoir has allows it to contact the spirit world. I was going off of that.

[rich goblet]

The orbs on POKENAME's head exhibit a warmth that is like a campfire. When the weather turns cloudy, these orbs cool down. Even when taken care of properly, POKENAME emit a foul odor from the cloud in their mouth.

I generalized the warmth a bit to flow more naturally

Looking at it now

[rich goblet]

POKENAME spins on its antenna in order to attract and contact spirits. The faster this Pokémon spins, the more spirits are attracted to it. When enough spirits are following, POKENAME will walk and guide them to the afterlife.

No further changes needed

[rich goblet]

These two are fine as is

[rich goblet]

Fine as is

[rich goblet]

POKENAME's buds release powerful psychic energy that supports its weight. Its spoon seems to be able to fertilize the soil, but only Trainers it trusts are allowed to use this powerful tool.

[rich goblet]

Fine as is

[rich goblet]

When POKENAME hangs on a tree, it uses flower buds as a counterweight. If it eats too much at once, it may be forced to spend the night on the ground because the weight of its body and flower buds becomes too great for its muscular tentacles.

[severe scroll]

Duskgigas (313.346)
POKENAME use their large bodies and connections with the spirit world to protect their trainers from malevolent spirits. While loyal, this Pokémon does take some time to get themselves moving.

[rich goblet]

Oh right, I’ve told people this already but I recommend posting up to three entries at a time so they don’t get lost in the sauce. Not a hard rule just a preference

[fading shale]

me if i see anyone sending more then 3

[rich goblet]

This looks fine

[fading shale]

[rich goblet]

Please do not minimod, it’s just a preference

[fading shale]

was just a joke

i love the emote

just asmuch as

[rich goblet]

It is a good emote

[fading shale]

rage baitin a lil

[rich goblet]

Careful not to get into spam territory

[fading shale]

alr alr

[jagged ledge]

It's also more just vibes based. There's usually only one or two Unowns active in chat at a time. Like I've been out today running errands and now I'm heading home for dinner. We appreciate people having so many ideas, but we don't want to rush through your entries or risk losing track of them. We're all human and working together here, so we appreciate your patience and cooperation.

[rich goblet]

I mischannel so hard I swapped to a different server

[jagged ledge]

...I had something I was typing, but when I went to reply, I hit "edit message" instead and lost it.

[rich goblet]

That sucks

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+tentacool/
POKENAME absorbs sunlight through the crystals on its head to focus its energy into laser beams. A stranded POKENAME will try to use vines to grab rocks to pull itself back into the sea, but on a flat beach it can only wait for the tide to rise.
https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+tentacruel/
The bud on POKENAME's head can release powerful ultrasonic energy. POKENAME can grow new vines at will and absorb water through them to multiply their length dozens of times.
https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+ponyta/
The casing around a POKENAME's bulb is constantly heated and cools as it runs, protecting the budding flower inside as if it was made of diamond. Its leaves generate heat after absorbing sunlight, which can last until the next sunrise.

[jagged ledge]

Uh TLDR: We're here to help you, but remember that this is the discussion channel, not just the sheet filter, so it helps us to slow down and work with each entry directly as opposed to huge walls. We're glad people are excited, but we appreciate patience. By all means please submit as many as you can write, just maybe focus on one batch at a time.

[jagged ledge]

In English, Subjects come before the Pronouns that describe them, so you would put "POKENAME" before "It". Also try to use a more confident tone by filtering words like "can" unless you are directly stating an option/condition or at least trying to make the action more into the present tense. "POKENAME absorbs sunlight through the crystals on its head to focus its energy into laser beams. It struggles to swim, so if it washes ashore, it will simply wait for the next tide." But also, this could use a bit more Ivysaur. Maybe it could drag itself back into water with its vines?

Where are you getting Psychic Energy from? Also I don't see Thorns on the Sprite. Instead of saying "They don't have a fixed number", you could say "POKENAME can grow new vines at will" or something to treat it like a feature, not just a mystery.

Where are you getting "as hard as diamonds" from?

[zinc patrol]

1. Okay, I'll try to let it drag itself back into the sea.
2. The spiritual energy comes from the original entry of tentacruel. In the picture, the flower bud is placed in the position of the crystal, so I gave the flower bud the power of the crystal. I added sting because it is a jellyfish, but it seems that this word does not trigger the corresponding association at all, so it should not apply here Regarding the quantity, you are right, I should modify the description.
3. This description comes from the description of the hoof in the ponyta illustrated book. Since the hooves and buds are the same color in the picture, I thought this description would make it more unique.

[jagged ledge]

1. 👍

2. Well that's the slippery slope that comes with building on the base-game Pokedex entries, your word choice needs to be deliberate enough to be consistent, but original enough to not repeat the same information. "Psychic" is another Pokémon type, which neither Tentacruel nor Ivysaur are. Take note that the base-game Pokédex specifically says "Ultra-sonic" energy for example.

3. Ah, when using broader references or less-often considered information, it help to narrow-in your descriptions or provide extra context/purpose. For example: "The casing around a POKENAME's bulb is constantly heated and cooled as it runs, solidifying in order to protect the budding flower inside until it's ready to bloom with a structure akin to diamonds."

[zinc patrol]

Are they suitable for release now?

[jagged ledge]

Instead of "and they have elasticity in water", say "and absorb water through them to multiply their length dozens of times."

[zinc patrol]

Is everything else correct?

[rich goblet]

ultrasonic is one word, otherwise looks fine, I'll fix it tomorrow when I do approvals

You know, if you try hard enough, you can learn English from all this work

[zinc patrol]

Thank you, no? Neither hard work nor study sounds good.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+rapidash/
The buds and leaves at the end of POKENAME are not afraid of flames. When it runs quickly, the flame on its back expands and leaves a trail behind it.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+slowbro/
The plant behind POKENAME is more of a symbiont than a part of it. The plant provides it with a continuous supply of energy, while it needs to constantly replenish the water and minerals that are absorbed.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.92a/
POKENAME's poisonous body has a strong floral fragrance. The area it inhabits is often filled with plants that can resist toxins.

[rich goblet]

---

The buds and leaves at the end of POKENAME's tail are resistant to flames. When it runs quickly, the flame on its back leaves a trail.

Tails, hooves, padding are all fine words to use, if you want to use them, minor fixes

The plant at POKENAME's tail acts like a symbiote. The plant nourishes POKENAME with a continuous supply of energy while POKENAME constantly replenishes the water and minerals used.

Just a spelling fix and a few minor things

POKENAME's poisonous body has a strong floral fragrance. The areas it inhabits are filled with plants that resist its toxins.

I figure you want to say that the toxins belong to the Pokémon so I made that minor change

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.98a/
POKENAME supplements its nutrients by filtering soil. If its pincers accidentally break, they can fully regenerate after being exposed to sunlight for half a day.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+krabby/
POKENAME can completely absorb all the nutrients from the soil through filter feeding, only spitting out dry dust and gravel. If its claws accidentally break, they can fully regenerate in just half an hour.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+electrode/
The leaf structure of POKENAME can induce discharge under the slightest electric field. During thunderstorms, this structure can harmlessly absorb the charges in thunderclouds while protecting the forest from lightning strikes.

[rich goblet]

1. I'm not sure if crabs filter feed, I'm pretty sure they have mouths, so maybe eating dirt would make more sense?

2. Same as 1.

3. The leafy structure on POKENAME's head discharges with a single spark. During thunderstorms, these leaves absorb electricity to protect the forest from lightning strikes.

[zinc patrol]

I guess filter feeding and eating dirt depends on where the debris comes out? Anyway, I'm pretty sure the crab can do this and the residue comes out of the mouth rather than the anus.

[rich goblet]

I suggest rewriting those entries without filter feeding, crabs tend to eat with with their claws and mouths:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YrEr9Z0LUtA

[zinc patrol]

I don’t know how to describe it, I thought it was common sense that crabs filter feed. Of course they won't refuse food if it's available, but that's not how things work in the wild.

[rich goblet]

Let me try

[zinc patrol]

https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1T11jYjEGd/?vd_source=01e96c06a48aca0c09be9120847f6758

This is underwater. What impressed me most was the scene of thousands of fiddler crabs spitting sand on the beach. It was one of the CCTV advertising pages.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME supplements its nutrients by eating granules of sand, piece by piece. If its pincers break, it can regenerate this limb after being exposed to sunlight for half a day.

@zinc patrol What do you think?

POKENAME strain sand through their mouths to gain extra nutrients. By basking in sunlight for half a day, it can regenerate lost legs or claws.

[zinc patrol]

This is in line with expectations. Now I have a small obsession. I want to find that fragment.

I found it, it's a great scene
https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1Fm4y1A738/?vd_source=01e96c06a48aca0c09be9120847f6758

[rich goblet]

Huh, learn something new everyday. One moment then.

[rich goblet]

This first one is fine.

POKENAME can absorb nutrients from the soil by filtering it through its mouth, only spitting out dry dust and gravel. If its claws accidentally break, they can fully regenerate in just half an hour, as long as it has enough energy and sunlight.

Oh, you already posted them

It's no big deal I suppose.

[zinc patrol]

Do you want me to send a new one and then you ignore the old one?

[rich goblet]

No I'll fix it since I'm right here

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.110a/
POKENAME strengthens its own toxicity by absorbing poisonous substances released by other Pokémon. It is not afraid of most toxins, and even its buds become more vibrant as its toxicity increases.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+chansey/
The buds carried by POKENAME are full of nutrients ready to bloom. It is quite alert, and will quickly flee at the slightest disturbance.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+kangaskhan/
The baby in POKENAME's bag is a creature that used to be a Bulbasaur. The two have changed each other's life forms through long-term symbiosis.

[rich goblet]

@final briar You have two entries for the same sprite, please pick one of the options below to keep.

A)
477.195.png POKENAME is amphibious and lives in marshlands. It buries itself in mud and keeps its mouth open under the water, waiting for prey to accidentally swim in. The bright colors of its petals and docile demeanor make it popular with younger trainers.

B)
477.195.png POKENAME is an amphibious Pokémon that lives in marshlands. It buries itself in mud and keeps its mouth open under the water, waiting to catch prey. The bright colors of its petals and docile demeanor makes it popular with younger trainers.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME strengthens its own toxicity by absorbing poisonous substances released by other Pokémon. It is not afraid of most toxins, and its buds become more vibrant as its toxicity increases.

Fine as is

The baby Pokémon in POKENAME's pouch resembles a Bulbasaur. The two mutually work together to help each other survive.

Kangaskhan is tricky to write for, doing my best

[final briar]

oh I'm sorry, must have double submitted. A is fine

[zinc patrol]

Regarding the baby, I wrote that it was once a Bulbasaur, because it already has red buds, but its size is not like that of a Bulbasaur. If you use words that express something similar, then I guess Ivysaur would be more appropriate.

[rich goblet]

I'm confused, do you want me to include red buds in the entry? I can do that

The baby Pokémon in POKENAME's pouch resembles a Bulbasaur because of its red buds. The two mutually work together to help each other survive.

[zinc patrol]

I know what the problem is, I said ivysaur and the translator thought it was Bulbasaur.

[rich goblet]

Oooooh, yeah we can just swap it out

The baby Pokémon in POKENAME's pouch resembles an Ivysaur. The two mutually work together to help each other survive.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+horsea/
POKENAME uses flower buds to attract prey, then shoots out water to stun them. If it accidentally attracts a large Pokémon, it will use ink to cover itself and escape.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME uses its flower bud to attract prey, then shoots water to stun them. If it accidentally attracts a large Pokémon, it will use a cloud of ink to cover itself and escape.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+pinsir/
Although the leaf on POKENAME's head is not hard, it is very sharp. During the day, POKENAME uses the vine in its mouth to eat fruits and tender leaves, and at night it digs underground to avoid the cold.

[rich goblet]

Looks fine

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+tauros/
POKENAME will initiate duels to compete for leadership. Its mane becomes more vivid with each battle it experiences, so the leaders of the group often have bright red manes.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME initiates duels to compete for leadership of its herd. Its mane becomes more vivid with each battle is goes through, so leaders of its herd often have bright red manes.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+ditto/
POKENAME often disguises itself as part of other plants. Although it does not do this intentionally, if small Pokémon come close, POKENAME sometimes tries to prey on them.

[rich goblet]

Where are you getting the "prey on them" part?

[zinc patrol]

Would you say where the inspiration came from? Amoeba and Slime Predation. I'm not going to reference the original Pokédex entry for Ditto's fusion.

[rich goblet]

Tricky...

POKENAME disguises itself as a part of nearby plants. If small Pokémon come close, it may try to nibble on them.

[zinc patrol]

POKENAME gathers surrounding electric charges, and there is always the sound of static electricity on its bud. It tries its best to absorb natural or artificial electric energy and becomes full of energy.
https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+jolteon/

[rich goblet]

Sorry, pressed enter too early

[rich goblet]

what are electric charges? you do not find electricity just lying in the wild

[rich goblet]

POKENAME gathers solar energy to convert into an electrical charge, its leaves crackling as it does so. It tries its best to wake up at dawn to maximize the amount of energy it receives.

[zinc patrol]

I just left for a while. The natural electricity I am referring to is thunder.

[rich goblet]

One moment then

POKENAME gathers energy from lightning storms; its leaves crackle with excess electricity. It can also absorb sunlight to ensure it is always full of energy.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+flareon/
POKENAME's leaves contain flame-retardant components. When it accidentally eats too much, it goes to a cool, ventilated place and spreads its leaves to dissipate heat.

[rich goblet]

Pressed enter too early

POKENAME's leaves contain fire-resistant chemicals. When it eats too much and creates too much heat, it goes to a cool, ventilated place to spread its leaves and dissipate heat.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+omanyte/
POKENAME's buds are hard, and its leaves are tough. By wrapping its body with leaves, POKENAME can protect itself in most situations.

Sometimes I’m quite speechless when reprinting the original entry. Omanyte’s entry doesn’t look like a Pokémon, it looks like a real ammonite

[rich goblet]

"POKENAME can protect itself in most situations" is very generic, maybe you can go into detail?

[zinc patrol]

Basically like Omanyte, it has ways to protect itself, but Carracosta, Archeops, and the rest of the big guys still eat them like nuts.

[rich goblet]

Maybe you can come up with something creative, it is very generic right now

Like pick a situation it would be in and write about it

[zinc patrol]

Oh, my ideas often rely on textures. I could imagine a hollow green bud, but this semi-open red bud doesn't really look hollow, so I chose large leaves as a means of protection.

In fact, most of the ones I skipped didn't have any unique ideas. If I just wrote an entry that made sense logically, I might actually try it one by one according to the number.

Whenever I think of an idea that no one has written before, I will definitely try it.

After all, no one knows whether it is a good idea before it is sent out.

[rich goblet]

As long as a Pokémon can reasonably do it and it applies to the entire species it should be fine normally

[zinc patrol]

So is it suitable for uploading? ?client=gtx

[willow venture]

Is that supposed to be the Squid Game jacket btw

[rich goblet]

Yeah, don't limit yourself to just Pokedex entries

Like no Pokedex entry has nest building, but you can reasonably mention it

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+omastar/
POKENAME's buds are very light compared to its body size, so its speed is faster than most of its close relatives. When hunting, POKENAME tightens its buds to reduce resistance, lunges, and uses its sharp teeth on its prey.

[rich goblet]

When hunting, POKENAME tightens its bud and lunges forward to bite with its sharp teeth. Its flower bud is made out of lightweight petals, making it faster than a heavily armored Omastar.

Is this fun for you by the way? I can't tell if you enjoy doing this or if you are doing it out of some obligation.

[zinc patrol]

interesting. By the way, there's no obligation, I just feel like it would be rewarding to see my screen name on a website.

[zinc patrol]

Probably replace the word in the first sentence with fun

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+dratini/
The shed skin of POKENAME always carries a petal that can purify the land. This kind of petal is extremely valuable, but as long as it is not attached to the skin, it will quickly take effect and wither.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME’s scaly skin sheds with a petal attached that can purify poison. These petals are valuable, but lose their power if removed from the shed skin, quickly withering away.

Last one for tonight

[zinc patrol]

Good night

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+sentret/
POKENAME gather together, using their tails to support themselves, with their backs to the sun. While most POKENAME are sunbathing, the ones on watch stand around to keep guard.
https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+spinarak/
Because POKENAME's flower bud is too conspicuous, it will stay on a nearby tree when ambushing prey. If the prey caught in the web is resistant to its poison, POKENAME will sometimes choose to release it.
https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+ariados/
POKENAME builds nests using silk threads and the branches and leaves of other plants. It actively hunts prey, and when it encounters danger, it uses the silk expelled from its head and abdomen to stick itself to trees for camouflage.

[abstract tusk]

POKENAME are known to live in peaceful clean lakes. If it senses any impurities in its home, it'll walk on top of the water, purifying it with a special liquid from its paws.

IDK about the paw thing but I wanted to include suicune's ability to walk on water somewhat

POKENAME lives near human-packed beaches. It's known for gifting Heart Scales to couples, signaling their eternal love.

and for this one I didn't really know if human-packed beaches was a good way to put it or maybe putting Trainer? idk

[storm light]

ngl, I don't see a lot of Milotic in this one. Maybe you could say something about them representing beauty or are in some form deep dwelling? Maybe their scales are used in beauty products?

[abstract tusk]

I got the lake thing from it, maybe say that people polute their home to get their liquid that makes one beautiful?

POKENAME are known to live in peaceful clean lakes. If it senses any impurities in its home, it'll walk on top of the water, purifying it with a special liquid from its paws. People seek that substance for its beauty inducing properties.

?

[storm light]

That does seem better! I'm not sure on the certainty of the beautifyin properties, but it might still be good lol I'm not an Unown so if you want to keep it like that, i can't stop you

[abstract tusk]

I can put for its supposed beuty inducing properties haahahha

supposedly? idk LOL

[storm light]

Supposed lol

[rich goblet]

POKENAME gather together into groups with their backs to the sun to sunbathe, using their tails to support themselves. As they sunbathe, they each take turns keeping guard.

POKENAME’s prominent flower bud is quite conspicuous, so it ambushes prey from a nearby tree. If the prey caught in its web resists its poison, the prey may be released to conserve energy.

POKENAME builds nests using silk threads, branches, and leaves. When it goes hunting, it spins silk from its abdomen to cling to tree branches, waiting for the right moment to ambush prey.

——————
I made a few changes to the entries to help it flow better, let me know if anything else needs to change

[rich goblet]

POKENAME lives in lakes with a peaceful atmosphere and clean water. If it senses impurities in the water, it will hop onto the water’s surface to purify it with a special liquid from its paws. Tourists travel to these lakes to witness its beauty.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME lives near highly populated beaches. It is known for gifting Heart Scales to couples, a sign of eternal love.

[abstract tusk]

and the beautiful for milotic?

[rich goblet]

Oh one second

@abstract tusk

POKENAME lives in lakes with a peaceful atmosphere and clean water. If it senses impurities in the water, it will hop onto the water’s surface to purify it with a special liquid from its paws. Tourists travel to these lakes to witness its beauty.

[abstract tusk]

Thanks to its thick layer of insulating blubber, POKENAME can swim comfortably across frozen oceans. It is one of the most widely used Ride Pokémon in cold regions.

[rich goblet]

With a thick layer of insulating blubber, POKENAME can swim comfortably through the frigid ocean. It plays a vital role in cold regions, helping people transport goods.

I did my best to capture the core of what you wrote.

[severe scroll]

Arhorn (390.111)
POKENAME rams itself into the side of rugged cliffs where iron ore is found if there is no exposed ore. If this Pokémon finds a good source of iron, it will continue to bash into that area, creating a hole in the side of terrain.

Rhyron (111.391)
POKENAME's armor has not yet fully developed, but that doesn't it from bashing boulders with its head and horn. This Pokémon requires a high iron diet and live near industrial sites, consuming guarded scrap metal.

[rich goblet]

POKENAME rams itself into the side of rugged cliffs to expose iron ore. If this Pokémon finds a good source of iron, it will continue to bash into that area, creating a hole in the terrain.

The first sentence was simplified, as one can reasonably assume that if there is already iron ore it wouldn’t need to expose more.

[rich goblet]

I would say instead of “not fully developed”, something like “POKENAME’s armor is made out of a soft metal that bends.” As the former connects the entry to another evolved form.

[severe scroll]

Regiperl (447.562)
When POKENAME filter feeds, any loose sediment that gets trapped inside the shell will attach to its core. This sediment will slowly transform into crystal like shards that are popular souvenirs at beach festivals.

[severe scroll]

Fair enough. Thank you for catching that!

[rich goblet]

Hyphen between crystal and like, otherwise looks fine

[severe scroll]

Ledydreavus (165.200)
At night, when this Pokémon is alone, POKENAME will let out soft cries akin to the sound of a person in mourning at a funeral. During the early morning hours, POKENAME will sit in the rays of the sun to warm up before resting.

Lairffy (391.180)
While tough in appearance, POKENAME love to be groomed by their trainer. However, the steel wool that makes up this Pokémon's mane makes maintaining this process hazardous due to the rough fibers and static electricity.

Unba (201.165)
POKENAME can be found in caverns within lush jungles ruins. Due to their high photosensitivity, these Pokémon will avoid sunlight at all costs.

[storm light]

https://www.fusiondex.org/electrode+paras/
The Premier Ball-like growths on POKENAME's head are fragile and tend to explode on the lightest touch, spraying a dense cloud of spores into the air. These spores conduct electricity easily, causing major short-circuits in machinery they land on.

https://www.fusiondex.org/paras+rapidash/
As POKENAME travel, they scatter spores from the mushrooms on their body. These same mushrooms are also edible and are sought after for their strong savory and spicy flavor, often described as getting kicked by a POKENAME.

[severe scroll]

Dusktwo (313.150)
Using its psychic abilities, POKENAME can manifest two extra hands to grapple its opponent. If the opponent is held by these hands for too long, they will begin to feel tired as their life is being sapped away.

[storm light]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/47.131/
Compared to other Lapras populations, POKENAME pods are often left alone by poachers. These Pokémon have been seen moving as if they are one single unit rather than a group and attacking a single target at nearly the same time.

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.173a/
POKENAME sulks on nights when it can't see the stars. If taken under the starry sky by its trainer, it will bring good luck to the trainer.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.173b/
POKENAME will happily dance together under the starry sky. If a shooting star passes, they will chase it together.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/2.190b/
POKENAME is worshiped in remote areas and is repaid by taking care of the fields. Although crops can still grow without POKENAME, this relationship is beneficial to both sides in villages without trainers.

I just discovered that the existing reactions in the left-clicking comment area will have the same reaction, so I may have accidentally sent a lot of strange things before.

[storm light]

https://www.fusiondex.org/venonat+mewtwo/
POKENAME sit motionless as they sleep in dark forests, awaiting nightfall. If disturbed, they only expend as much energy as is required to make the disturbance go away. When the moon rises, POKENAME awaken and scour their homes for bug Pokémon.

[severe scroll]

That's... too hairy for my liking...

[storm light]

dude just sits waiting for a challenger

[severe scroll]

Just pushing this for writers to see!

[storm light]

https://www.fusiondex.org/mewtwo+ponyta/
POKENAME's mane and feathering are created from excess psychic energy pooling in their body and are hot to the touch. Despite their small size, they can manipulate objects and fire with ease and can kick a hole through solid steel.

might as well get mewtwo out of the way lol

[severe scroll]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/543.380/
What a name.

[thorn ingot]

A name of all time

[rich goblet]

I’m brain dead after work so no feedback from me today, you all help each other out

If you think its good enough, it is probably good enough, just send it

Worst case scenario is that you need to work on it and resubmit, I need a nap

[severe scroll]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/85.44a/
Amazing

And no entry for it.

[dapper patio]

In the same vein:

[severe scroll]

Marth?

[dapper patio]

Are you familiar with this character?

[severe scroll]

Fire Emblem, right?

[dapper patio]

Correct

[severe scroll]

I know he's a fighter in Smash Bros

[dapper patio]

Also correct

[severe scroll]

[dapper patio]

Smash is the only reason people know FE exists lol

[storm light]

I knew about it because a friend of mine growing up was into playing it

[dapper patio]

They're classics

[severe scroll]

@fading shale https://www.fusiondex.org/artists/whitticker_fang/

No entries written for these five awesome sprites

[fading shale]

wooooooooow

those are insaneee

[severe scroll]

You should totally write their entries. : )

[fading shale]

https://tenor.com/view/mochi-mochimons-mochimon-kawaii-cute-gif-13105127215766961484

is god himself

[ebon warren]

Odd that they just stopped posting and spiriting 3 years ago, they're still in the server though

[fading shale]

how dense or lose are the rules when speaking of pokemon from outer space, cosmos, stars etc

[severe scroll]

Check the FAQ on the doc.

[fading shale]

i just found that too alr

lets cook

[severe scroll]

Ontomb (95.295)
POKENAME only appears in deep caves near underground lake edges where it is commonly mistaken for a well and hexes trespassers. The internet is filled with theories of what the main body of this Pokémon looks like.

What do you think of this, Zek?

[fading shale]

POKENAME dwells in the highest parts of the atmosphere, absorbing energy from the sun. The electricity in its body is so strong that it can cause massive atmospheric storms just by flying through the sky. Its exact strength is shrouded in mystery.

[severe scroll]

That's really cool imagery!

[fading shale]

very interesting concept ngl

[fading shale]

https://tenor.com/view/bean-tag-bean-tag-dancing-little-guy-gif-14281434892717366045

i hope ducky likes xd

[fading shale]

it does look like a well holy sht

[severe scroll]

Ducky isn't feeling 'well' x3

[fading shale]

aw bless bro

[severe scroll]

Go ahead and post it! I think it looks good.

[fading shale]

I- can i ?

no offense your no unown

ducky told me to wait for feedback

[severe scroll]

Worst case scenario, they pull it and we resubmit it.

[fading shale]

aight

[fading shale]

let the mans nap

amen

Every head of POKENAME is able to control the current flow of electricity stored inside their body. When they align, they can perform massive lightning strikes, strong enough to temporarily black out an entire city.

maybe remove temporarily ...
to make it sound more vicious

XD

oh sht hes here run

jk <3

[rich goblet]

I’m back for a bit, let’s see

[fading shale]

u should rest

[rich goblet]

You get a cookie point for using the Lorebook, they don’t do anything but you’ve got one

[fading shale]

hey hey i was also reading that exact same thing

[rich goblet]

Their body, admittedly this Pokemon is hard to keep pronouns right for, which is why it’s important to know how to use both it its and they them

Otherwise good enough

[fading shale]

wha-

[rich goblet]

I see “inside its body”

[fading shale]

oh its multiple bodys ?

no wait+

nvm

[rich goblet]

Should be “inside their body”

[fading shale]

yea

im getting the hang of it

https://tenor.com/view/bean-tag-bean-tag-dancing-little-guy-gif-14281434892717366045

[rich goblet]

I think the first part should say

“Each of the three heads of POKENAME are able to”… etc etc

Yeah Hydreigon tricky

[fading shale]

you think its needed to menation the three ?

i can include it

is it black out or black-out

[fading shale]

Each of the three heads of POKENAME

i was thinking of writing that but to me the double OF sounded funky

[rich goblet]

It makes grammatical sense, all that matter to me

[fading shale]

bc my proper english is of the quality of sand

[rich goblet]

I’ve approved worse

[rich goblet]

blackout for city, black out for verb

Wait no

[fading shale]

lol

[rich goblet]

One sec, let me check the dictionary

[fading shale]

XD

[rich goblet]

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/blackout

[wind badger]

is there a way to remove fusions from your pokedex?

[rich goblet]

black out (spaced) should be fine

Uhhhh

That’s more a #tech-support ?

I think?

[wind badger]

ok mb

[fading shale]

or #gameplay-help

[rich goblet]

This is for writing the Pokédex

[wind badger]

oohohh

[fading shale]

u want me to go with this or

[rich goblet]

I’d stick with that yes

[fading shale]

aight

[willow venture]

Do you mean entries you wrote

Go to #custom-dex-errors for that

[rich goblet]

I took that way too literally, what is my smooth brain doing

[fading shale]

what would u call the things on its jaw

jaw horns ?

axe something ?

[rich goblet]

I think those are tusks according to the Pokédex, let me check

https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Haxorus_(Pokémon)

Yeah tusks

[fading shale]

Due to the massive amount of electricity flowing through the body of POKENAME, its inner gravity is disrupted, rendering its ability to fly. It can vibrate the two big tusks on its jaw, making slashing through dense objects light work.

[rich goblet]

rendering?

[fading shale]

removing

disabeling

another word for those 2

POKENAME´s exoskeleton is extremely hard / durable and covers most of its body. The sharp edges on its wings and claws are sturdy enough to easily cut through steel beams and never get dull.

and @severe scroll thx for sending me those <3

[rich goblet]

preventing it from flying would make more sense

[rich goblet]

I don't actually know if slashes are not allowed but it is also just a clunky punctuation

[fading shale]

Due to the massive amount of electricity flowing through the body of POKENAME, its inner gravity is disrupted, preventing it from flying. It can vibrate the two big tusks on its jaw, making slashing through dense objects light work.

[rich goblet]

Where are you getting the gravity bit by the way?

Also, "light work" is a bit awkward at the end, I would just says something like "effortless"

[fading shale]

from the electricity and zekroms ability to deffer magnetic fields with said electricity

[rich goblet]

Ooooh magnetic fields, one sec

[fading shale]

can i keep the cut through or do ineed to reword itr

[rich goblet]

One sec

Due to the massive amount of electricity flowing through the body of POKENAME, the magnetic fields it generates prevent it from flying. It can vibrate the two big tusks on its jaw, making slashing through dense objects effortless.

There we go

This is a grammatically correct entry, and can be changed if you want more details

[fading shale]

u want me to name the magnetic field straight up? thought i play around it with the inner gravity to not make it so direct xd

[rich goblet]

I mean as an encyclopedia for the game it would make sense for it to be direct

Subtle wordplay may be used here and there, but this is a mainly descriptive source

[fading shale]

i see

alr

[fading shale]

and this dude ?

[severe scroll]

[rich goblet]

I only now saw this, you get one too 🍪

[hexed fog]

@uneven heart please continue to get entries reviewed here before posting until a member of the Unown team advises otherwise

[severe scroll]

Rhyron (112.391)
POKENAME's horn is made out of a light yet durable steel, allowing it to carve iron out of caverns effortlessly. Due to these properties, POKENAME are prime targets for poachers.

[fading shale]

was this now fine or no ?

[rich goblet]

The slash in the entry probably isn't allowed and is clunky, I'd rephrase it

[storm light]

I'm also curious to get your opinion on these, duck lol

[fading shale]

Their sturdy tusks will stay sharp even if used to cut steel beams.

thats the normal dex entry

[rich goblet]

I'm talking about the / symbol

[fading shale]

OH no no

thats a this or that

XD

like which sound better

[rich goblet]

I'm confused.

[fading shale]

POKENAME´s exoskeleton is extremely hard and covers most of its body. The sharp edges on its wings and claws are sturdy enough to easily cut through steel beams and never get dull.

or

POKENAME´s exoskeleton is extremely durable and covers most of its body. The sharp edges on its wings and claws are sturdy enough to easily cut through steel beams and never get dull.

xd

[rich goblet]

Both work, but I lean towards durable

Pick one

[fading shale]

durable too

[rich goblet]

Compared to other Lapras populations, POKENAME pods are often left alone by poachers. These Pokémon have been seen moving as if they are one single unit rather than a group, often seen striking in unison.

What do you think of this fix?

[storm light]

That def flows a lot better, idk why i didnt think of that in the first place lol

I dread the feedback on the mewtwo ones lmao

[rich goblet]

Sometimes we as writers tend to get myopic, its why language can be so beautiful

Oh there's mewtwo ones? I didn't see them, want to link them?

[storm light]

They got posted right after oreee's entries lol

[rich goblet]

Thank you, I'm pretty bad at keeping track of these things

[storm light]

Same tbh

[rich goblet]

POKENAME sit motionless as they sleep in dark forests, awaiting nightfall. If disturbed, they only expend as much energy as is required to make the disturbance go away. When the moon rises, POKENAME awaken and scour their homes for bug Pokémon.

“Almost” was not necessary because Mewtwo can easily sit idle. Nightfall sounds better, and “as is required” is the proper phrase. Instead of insects, bug Pokémon is the preferred term.

[severe scroll]

Okay, I just read through the entire Lorebook.

Holy info dump...

It was actually really interesting

[rich goblet]

It is a LONG read, and a useful one at that

[zinc patrol]

I don't know if anyone is here, but could you please see if these three are logically and linguistically correct?

[storm light]

https://www.fusiondex.org/palkia+venomoth/
POKENAME's wing patterns vary between individuals and were once rumored to be windows into other dimensions. The powder on their wings causes visual hallucinations if inhaled.

[willow venture]

I still remember the Palkia/Butterfree sprite...

😔

[rich goblet]

POKENAME can be found sulking when it cannot stargaze. If taken for a trip to see the starry night sky by its Trainer, it bestows good luck onto them.

[rich goblet]

This is fine

[zinc patrol]

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+espeon/
POKENAME can simultaneously restore health and accumulate energy under sunlight. If necessary, POKENAME can convert the energy stored in its buds into energy, but this will lead to prolonged weakness.

https://www.fusiondex.org/ivysaur+wobbuffet/
All of POKENAME's actions have only two purposes: basking in the sun and protecting its flower bud. It uses other parts of its body to take attacks for the flower bud, and sometimes just staring at the flower bud can scare it away.

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/1.213a/
POKENAME collects a large amount of withered plants inside its shell, and then hangs itself in a cool and ventilated place using vines. Although the fermented liquid has the scent of the plants, its most suitable use is actually as fertilizer.

[viscid light]

Alright, to prove I'm still here, put in some of my dex entries into the submissions

[rich goblet]

@viscid light Please get your entries checked before submitting them. There are resources in the pinned comments, including the Lore Book, which include the following section about the language to be used in entries.

[viscid light]

Let me guess. the Porygon Z and Gardevoir fusion?

[rich goblet]

All four.

[viscid light]

That's reasonable

Had to reduce the word count of 2 of them

[rich goblet]

You will need to cut out some content to make entries fit. You do not need to include a Pokémon's entire life in one entry.

Additionally, please refer to the Lorebook when making entries, as you are expected to follow the guidelines in it.

[viscid light]

I know - they're prior dex entries I posted here

[rich goblet]

Did anyone ever give you the go ahead on these? I do not remember these entries since my tenure as an Unown.

[viscid light]

No

#dex-entries-discussion message

#dex-entries-discussion message

#dex-entries-discussion message

#dex-entries-discussion message

[rich goblet]

Your entries have been denied. Please post entries here and wait for feedback from other writers. Please also read the lorebook for information about what we expect from entries.

[viscid light]

...regarding with the other 5?

I believe you're the only person who's responded

[rich goblet]

You have five entries prior to today's submission that were approved.

[viscid light]

(Not counting with the Ferrothorn fusion)

And frankly, they were less "can I please" and more to hell with this, I'm putting them in

[rich goblet]

I can tell.

Just um...

The ideas were cool but were not written in a way that would be allowed in game. I don't really control the rules, I only enforce them.

[viscid light]

That, and (outside of a few examples), I handle my Dex Entries as "on-the-field" as opposed to the normal scientific lorebook (Also, when Kanto had 10 year olds making dex entries, it's groan-worthy)

Those few examples being either direct tampering (Mr. Mime) or being data itself (Porygon Line)

[viscid light]

That's fair - really shouldn't have gone off on the messager like that. Sorry