#dex-entries-discussion

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acoustic scarab
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The pinned comment has a link

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Chibi beat me to it

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It's a big sheet, jump to the bottom

ebon warren
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Did you actually read the pinned messages? Because the second one in this thread (#dex-entries-discussion message) says AT THE VERY END to "see all the entries that have been APPROVED here!" and the word here is a clickable link.
That message is also over a year old, so it has been that way for quite some time.

hexed fog
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Please do not be rude to others in here.The pinned messages very clearly state how to review an entry. If you can't act civilized we do not need your entries.

ebon warren
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Dex entries also specifically focus on writing skills, which would require reading comprehension skills as a baseline. If your reading comprehension isn't fully-formed, this will directly and negatively impact the quality of your entries.

It's also crucial to realize that Dex entries are typically intended to read as encyclopedic and/or scientifically sourced. Which means they need to be thorough and accurate. If simply reading instructions on how to do Dex entries takes too long or isn't convenient enough, reading up on all the lore, the rules, and the FAQs will absolutely not happen at all (as they are far more involved and often require finding the information yourself instead of it being conveniently pinned here for you already), which would mean entries written without those significant areas of self-education will most likely be incorrect, break rules, and possibly even sound too informal or not seem credible.

Think of following the directions pinned here as the entry exam, and you absolutely can fail.

drifting cloak
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Many have reported seeing POKENAME in their worst nightmares. There have been no reported sightings of POKENAME outside of dreams, triggering speculation whether it travels through minds.

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I was trying to go with a sort of freddy krueger kinda thing

azure wagon
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Dex-ruary Day 12: Dawn Stone 🔹

Frosviper #429.543
POKENAME's scales remain cold even when POKENAME is out in sunny weather. Touching its body can cause instant numbness.

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gonna slowly get caught up in my own event heehee

hollow nimbus
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Rather than saying The scales of POKENAME, you can just say POKENAME's scales

rich goblet
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@azure wagon Did you ever issue a challenge for the Dexentine/Dexuary? I decided to try an all pink challenge heehee

hollow nimbus
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Teeeechnically, it should be either when they're out in sunny weather or when POKENAME is out in sunny weather, since the subject is scales rather than POKENAME

azure wagon
hollow nimbus
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If you go for the first correction, remember that you still need to change its in the second sentence to specify a different subject

twin vapor
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#1447122181812388066
If surprised while weaving its webs in the dense marsh grasses, POKENAME rears up to frighten predators with its false face.

rich goblet
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Generally most entries have two

twin vapor
rich goblet
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Actually, is it your sprite? heehee

twin vapor
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for sure, and i appreciate the suggestion! yep, it's still in spritework and i should probalby link it!

rich goblet
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Gotta wait for the sprite pack to hit but your entry would be priority over any others anyway

twin vapor
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Thanks! yeah i've gotta remember to add it next month, it just is much easier to forget to write one at all once i've moved on to the next project. Hopefully someday the ability to combine gallery posts and dex submissions will return, but I understand why it'd cause issues too.

rich goblet
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Yeah it is clunky, but at least giving sprite artists priority over their own work helps keep things smooth

wild prism
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aye, I tried again with giving Igglyaldo a new dex entry

rigid finch
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i went to check up on a dex entry that i submitted, but couldn't find it in the spreadsheet anymore

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infinite fusion devs, thank you for helping me discover my nonexistence

hollow quartz
rigid finch
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just redid it

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i put the full username, it should work this time

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now to wait again

regal cedar
hexed fog
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@stray cave due to a couple issues in your recent entries please be sure to get your next few entries reviewed here before posting more 🙂 this way you can see what we are aiming for

regal cedar
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Although POKENAME is unconfident and generally unreliable in Pokémon battles, it nevertheless trains incessantly during its waking hours, even during downpours and other harsh conditions.

https://www.fusiondex.org/poliwrath+caterpie/

FusionDex

Its voracious appetite compels it to devour leaves bigger than itself without hesitation. Its highly developed muscles never grow fatigued, however much it exercises.
HP: 75. Attack: 48. Defense: 55. Speed: 53.
Special Attack: 53. Special Defense: 66.
Sprite by shasmo85.

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Only POKENAME's eyes and arms are mobile. As the Water-type grows larger and larger, it grows closer and closer to evolution.

https://www.fusiondex.org/poliwrath+metapod/

FusionDex

Its shell is as hard as an iron slab. Its highly developed muscles never grow fatigued, however much it exercises.
HP: 76. Attack: 41. Defense: 68. Speed: 43.
Special Attack: 55. Special Defense: 68.
Sprite by shasmo85.

final bison
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Thanks for reviewing my entries already, guys Venopog

I've had a rough couple of months and haven't been feeling great, but I'm hoping to get back to writing Pokémon descriptions with a little more consistency. HeartMail

drifting cloak
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POKENAME has a gem-encrusted tongue that is very sensitive to taste. It thrives in darkness, the ruby on the POKENAME's chest acting as a lure to catch unsuspecting prey.

rigid finch
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update: i exist again

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lowk super hyped to see my dex entries in-game when they release

rigid finch
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roughly how often do dex entries update?

regal cedar
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whenever they get around to it. Typically every few weeks--it is synced outside the game via the internet, so you don't need to worry about having a game update or anything.

storm light
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I've seen several of these kinds of 'entries' recently. The form already asks for the sprite you're makingit for but like.. why?

midnight siren
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as far as i can see, they aren't even on the server Thonking

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i assume someone who just saw the form option on daena and just put stuff in mrshrug

storm light
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I'm thinking of making an entry for these 'mons just so they have something, but it feels weird lol

midnight siren
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yeah, i'm not quite sure what the point of them is

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but at least they're easy to autodeny kekruff

hollow nimbus
narrow cosmos
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Funny about all this dex writing lately, it’s making me want to dust off my ancient fanfiction skills and write an actual IF fanfic of some kind. kekruff

midnight siren
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i remember a few of us over in the MM event did that last year heehee

hollow nimbus
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We need more PIF content of any (rule-abiding) kind Quagless

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I've thought a few times that a PIF comic would be cool, but that would be so much work

midnight siren
hollow nimbus
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I have one one-page comic that I posted in artwork
It's not really good, but I kept thinking about it

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So I had to make it to get it out of my head heehee
It was at least a learning experience

narrow cosmos
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I do have some basic ideas for the story, it’s just been a long time since I did a fanfic. I haven’t logged into my fanfiction account in a decade, and don’t have an AO3 account so far. kekruff

midnight siren
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i've written a few fanfics that haven't lasted and i'm reworking into games/books heehee

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having a project with regular updates is really hard for me for some reason Thonking

narrow cosmos
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Mostly I like my idea of a villain team that exists in the early days of DnA splicing tech. Decrying it as unnatural and trying to cause problems for the tech and forcibly unfusing Trainer’s Pokémon and such.

tranquil thunder
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Shupwag #405.60
POKENAME bobs on the edge of the lake to show their eerie faces on dark nights. Although many have been spooked by them, they are inherently harmless.

rich goblet
tranquil thunder
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Good points

tranquil thunder
rich goblet
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POKENAME bobs on the edge of lakes to show their eerie faces on dark nights. Though harmless, many have been spooked when seeing them in the water.

@tranquil thunder Did a quick fix for clarity and grammar edits, what you think?

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(Don't forget that your username when submitting this is the whole thing!) ```fireflower20002

tranquil thunder
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Although clarity about seeing them in the water would be nice touch.

rich goblet
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Oh let me make it fit the structure you wrote then, one second

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POKENAME bobs on the edge of lakes to show their eerie faces on dark nights. Even though many people have been spooked seeing them in the water, they are harmless.

tranquil thunder
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That's good, just wondering if adding "when doing this" in the end would be a nice touch or pointless fluff.

rich goblet
tranquil thunder
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Thanks for the opinion

hexed fog
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With me sporting a handsome fever give me some poison types that cause fevers

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Or grass types that cure them

ebon warren
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Or maybe Fairy types that can provide palliative help with illness symptoms?

hollow quartz
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Ironically I just wrote one for Swinub/Ivysaur yesterday about how grinding the leaves into a salve can help with high fevers huehue

rich goblet
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I just did a few sucking poison/curses with gulpin fusions

hollow quartz
narrow cosmos
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Realizing my phone didn't properly register a few presses for an entry the other day and put POKEN instead of POKENAME. Despair

Ah, well, easy fix for the Unown who catches it, I would hope. heehee

hollow quartz
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You could also submit an error report to make it even easier for them

narrow cosmos
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Swear I remember this sort of thing wasn't supposed to be submitted before Unown analysis. 🤔 I remember there was some error I reported in the past where that was stated, but can't remember the finer details.

hexed fog
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We can fix minor errors like that

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Please dont report minor stuff like that

narrow cosmos
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Gotcha. Now back to my furious never-ending battle against Izik and Infinex. heehee

narrow cosmos
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When POKENAME's gem sparkles, it's evaluating the mind of someone nearby, to see if they have anything worth stealing. Some people take offense to being ignored by POKENAME after it analyzes them.

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Imagine somebody getting mad at this one because it decided "nah, you ain't got nothing worth stealing, move along." heehee

hollow quartz
narrow cosmos
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I'm sure it will, you've still been doing steady progress from what I've seen. Feels like it's probably not long before I'll have a few break days myself. Need to unwind with some games or something once I get a free day from work.

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That feeling of getting older when you no longer have the time/energy to game like you did as a kid. Despair

acoustic scarab
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It's very funny watching you guys from the sidelines XD

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Just chugging away at my own list, watching you both rocket so much higher

hollow quartz
acoustic scarab
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I miss Minecraft 🙃

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Wish I had the time for it again

hollow quartz
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Sometimes I wish I could easily play minecraft, but my A(u)DHD makes it hard for me to play something too sandboxy and minecraft feels like that to me

narrow cosmos
acoustic scarab
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Oh for sure, and I'm not even doing it to make my number go up

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For me it's a byproduct of playing

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It's why it took me months to realise I was getting auto denied XD

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I never really check to see if I'm getting accepted

narrow cosmos
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I should maybe try to actually play the game again, I haven't booted it up in a long while, most of my contribution has been the dexing. heehee

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Maybe try a randomizer run for the first time in a while...or ever, I think.

hollow quartz
acoustic scarab
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I'm doing mono species runs as nuzlockes

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When one run ends, I move on to the next species in order

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Currently on Raticate

hollow quartz
acoustic scarab
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And I write entries whenever I find a missing one

narrow cosmos
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Although, minor gripe tangent, I wish so many neat ROMhacks for Pokemon games didn't always seem to focus on the competitive scene. All the best or neatest ones these days always seem to come with competitive difficulty as the default, with no way to grind/circumvent that sort of thing, which is bad for me and my unga-bunga strategy of all attack moves and very little status. kekruff

acoustic scarab
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I don't think I'd have the patience to do it the way you're doing it (which isn't a criticism, different ways of enjoying the same thing)

hollow quartz
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In a similar tangent: I don't think I have ever really used status moves in long time, outside of running them to catch specific 'mons at times

acoustic scarab
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I usually use set up moves or leech seed outside of hard fights

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Though Soak has been crucial in my current run XD

hollow quartz
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Oh right, okay in leech seed's case that one is one I sometimes use

acoustic scarab
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Dark/Poison is a lot less scary when it's actually water

narrow cosmos
acoustic scarab
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Pokémon Rogue is cool

hollow quartz
acoustic scarab
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I tried out Run and Bun too, but that's very unforgiving

hollow quartz
acoustic scarab
hollow quartz
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oh riiiight

acoustic scarab
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And black sludge

hollow quartz
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like i said, i haven't done non-randomizer in a long while kekruff

acoustic scarab
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Hah XD

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I randomise encounters, but not the trainers

narrow cosmos
hollow quartz
acoustic scarab
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Randomising trainers removes a bit too much of the challenge for me

acoustic scarab
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There's some cute ones

hollow quartz
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Fair, part of why I would maybe still randomize them is so I can see any other sprites I'd maybe wanna write for if they don't already have entries for

acoustic scarab
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I suspect the trainers don't have them written in base tbf

hollow quartz
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but yeah, non random trainers eventually to see how they look now would be a good idea

acoustic scarab
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I've been toying with doing, like, "Youngster Joey" run where I use a trainer's team and see how far I can take it

hollow quartz
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Not a bad one Thinkaton

acoustic scarab
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But my current mono species runs will take a long time

hollow quartz
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Though I think we prolly are extending the non-entry talk a bit here if I were to guess

acoustic scarab
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I've got 501 runs total, only on attempt 20 XD

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Yeah, fair

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I've gotta go anyway, staff meal time

hollow quartz
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godspeed LimesSalute

acoustic scarab
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Have fun leaving the rest of us in the dust! 💖

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(affectionately)

hollow quartz
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-# I'll have to see if I have the energy to write some after lunch with family in a bit, though I feel I might be better off waiting til the update so I can better avoid dupe entries (I've reached that point a bit where I am sure I have a lot waiting for the status of, or last I knew I did heehee

narrow cosmos
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Ah, my random-chain of dexing has lead me to that once or twice, that feel of "did I do this one already?" kekruff

hollow quartz
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Yeah and despite my usually-methodical approach, some still slip through the gaps enough that I get deja vu when I see some sprites

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so I go: "Did I already do this or did I only just see it and register it in my mind without writing for it"

ebon warren
hollow quartz
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Thinkaton could see it

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But also: "Ma, could you fix up some scrambled [Chansey fusion name here] Eggs for me? I think I'm coming down with the flu!" heehee

storm light
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A Chansey fusion that replaces other chansey eggs with its own, whether for purely innocent or malicious reasons evil

hexed fog
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@rough jolt @worthy timber Before submitting more entries please get your entries reviewed here for a bit

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I have noticed quite a few errors

hollow quartz
ebon warren
thorny crescent
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@lapis cosmos thank you for your dex entry for my chimecho!!! I love it sm

lapis cosmos
thorny crescent
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This is a real early sprite of mine lol and I just realized it's missing a pixel of outline

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I'm glad you like it happo

sturdy sedge
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I feel like you can say the glitching at the bottom of the tail is an effect of the repeated glitching due to being far from the main body and thin

main silo
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Thank you all for doing the dex entries for my sprites they have been great to read

kindred stream
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Were can I get the game download

main silo
sturdy sedge
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Either of these 2 to be even more specific

kindred stream
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Okay thanks

grave sedge
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POKENAME is a somewhat unstable Pokémon that delivers milk to trainers. Its milk is delicious.
Anyone see any errors/issues with this?

storm light
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how is it unstable? Doe sthat have any effect on its behaviours? Do all Milnoir deliver their milk to Trainers?

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also not really getting the dusknoir vibe off of it, just miltank

grave sedge
storm light
grave sedge
storm light
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You can make vague references, like how the reference might influence its behaviour, but despite the fact it looks like a reference, it is still a Pokemon

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Here's one of my own reference entries (Monster Hunter Shogun Ceanataur)

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It still reads like it's a Pokemon, but those who know the reference will also get a lil fun out of it

grave sedge
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Okay, thank you for all the feedback! I'm bew to official dex entries and this is my first reference one so I thought it would be more plain reference.

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Just a minute, I'll try to add something to the first sentence

storm light
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We're here to make sure your entries are good and check all the right boxes before they're submitted, don't be afraid to ask for feedback! PoyoHeart

grave sedge
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POKENAME is a very paranoid Pokémon that constantly suspects those around it of conspiracy and malevolence, but it delivers milk to those it trusts. Its milk is delicious.

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Is this better? Or too long, maybe?

storm light
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There's a FAQ in the Pins and on the sheet you can find in #dex-entries-submissions that you might want to look over as well

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I'm getting the sense that this reads more like a single member of the species, but that might just be me lol

grave sedge
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Ohh you right hol up

storm light
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It is within limits though! I use the form to check for length since it tells you immediately if it's too long

grave sedge
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POKENAME are very paranoid Pokémon that constantly suspect those around them of conspiracy and malevolence, but they deliver milk to those they trust. Their milk is delicious.

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Would this be preferable?

storm light
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How about:
POKENAME are very paranoid Pokémon that constantly suspect those around them of conspiracy and malevolence. Those that gain their trust are rewarded with delicious milk delivered by POKENAME personally.
This? (Idk the reference tbh)

grave sedge
storm light
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Oooh, alright

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ngl i think yours might be a better fit reference wise

main silo
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or "their milk is deliciossuiuis"

grave sedge
deep portal
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POKENAME often appear in the wild during autumn. A long time ago, this pokémon was believed to be able to predict the beggining and end of the season. Its high body temperature seems to warm up the air it cleans up through photosynthesis.
hey guys! need some help making this guy's entry. Any feedback?

main silo
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the second sentence doesnt read very well, what does it do with photosynthesis?

deep portal
sturdy sedge
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The original Halloween pumpkins were inspired by this pokemons nature to scare away small bug types with scary faces on the pumpkin?

deep portal
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leafeon does photosynthesis and the dex says it's always enveloped in clear air.

sturdy sedge
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Oh I misread the prompt nvm

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Oh yeah give leafeon/eevee a symbiotic relationship with POKENAME

deep portal
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there's also two different entries for leafvee, according to fusiondex

main silo
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"Its high body temperature seems to clean up the air around it by heating it through photosynthesis." i dont think thats how photosynthesis works but the sentence reads better i think

grave sedge
sturdy sedge
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POKENAME has been observed working with a leafeon, where POKENAME uses photosynthesis to make cleaner air and Leafeon uses it as a better fuel

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The leafeon, in exchange, will help the POKENAME with its general needs

sturdy sedge
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The desc may be too long,, but I think it fits

deep portal
rich goblet
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Just remember you can check the character count on a few apps, the limit is 250

deep portal
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yeah it'd be too long WobbuF

grave sedge
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By how much?

deep portal
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imma try and rephrase it in a better way

deep portal
grave sedge
deep portal
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wait it's a bit less heehee i had the formatting with the entry

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not much better tho, changed it up a lil bit and it's 267 now

grave sedge
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What if you combined the high body temperature with the first sentence instead,, smthn like:
POKENAME often appear in the wild during autumn, when its high body temperature warms the air.
Or
POKENAME often appear in the wild during autumn, when the heat can be felt in the air from its high body temperature.

grave sedge
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Then the last sentence could be shortened to smthn like:
It cleans the air through photosynthesis

deep portal
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POKENAME often appear in the wild during autumn, when its body temperature heats up the air. A long time ago, this pokémon was believed to be able to predict the beggining and end of the season. It cleans the air around itself through photosynthesis.
EXACTLY 250 huehue
-# edited to correct a very minor spelling mistake lol

grave sedge
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Let's goooo

deep portal
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btw hi cali

deep portal
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very much safe, 201

ebon warren
# grave sedge Ohh you right hol up

A very easy way to not make any Dex entry sound like it's referencing only a single member of the species (as you saw) is to make the entry plural.
Just for future reference ohyes Nice

deep portal
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i'm writing another entry and i'm having a hard time with this one lol smh

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When hunting, this pokémon presents itself in a friendly manner. Once POKENAME's prey let their guard down, it traps them in a burning hot hug, releasing heat from its fur until the prey's completely defenseless.
i'll be honest i'm not really sure on that one. i don't know if i can pinpoint why, though.

hexed fog
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Ugh am I really going to have to put miltank on the problem pokemon list bruh

hexed fog
deep portal
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i can try adding more gliscor if it's not

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wait i think i can do something rq

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When hunting, this pokémon presents itself in a friendly manner. Once POKENAME's prey let their guard down, it swoops in and traps them in a burning hot hug, releasing heat from its fur until the prey's completely defenseless.

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maybe that?

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not too big of a change but it's something featured in gliscor's entry

grave sedge
hexed fog
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Yea thats fine

deep portal
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oh, ok then allthethings

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about my edit, the question still stands. is it better than the original?

hexed fog
grave sedge
hexed fog
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I am very easy to appease when it comes to approvals

grave sedge
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Was my Milnoir entry problematic?

hexed fog
grave sedge
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And where can we see the list of problem Pokémon? Maybe I can try and help with it

grave sedge
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🥺 sorry I oft have many questions

rich goblet
grave sedge
hexed fog
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@near latch Please get your entries reviewed here before submitting more. This way you can see what we are looking for in an entry.

hexed fog
night pike
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Question; is there a specific format used to post entries in the chat, or do you just copy/paste? Been wanting to write and finally got the courage/motivation to give it a go

rich goblet
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Unless you're looking for feedback

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In which case a sprite number, name, and sprite does help if you're writing about one of the pokemon's features

night pike
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Yeah, feedback. I wasn't super clear, apoligies

rich goblet
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You're fine! Worst thing you can do is not ask

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Actually worst thing you can do is write about cubone's mom over and over but you won't do that

night pike
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What about Cubone's dad? Quagless

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(that was a joke)

rich goblet
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So what's the entry?

night pike
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One sec

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It's being fidgity, not letting me send

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Dhelmagius #453.255

With a crew of other Ghost-type Pokémon, POKENAME roam the oceans, hunting for other seafaring vessels to harass with their nautical hauntings. Passenger ships are favorite targets, since they have plenty of victims to spook.

rich goblet
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Lemme check the lorebook

rich goblet
night pike
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My though was "crew" was more a colloquialism people used to describe this pack of ghosts instead of an official term. I made sure to read the player handbook first!

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But yeah, ty!

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I'll wait a bit, see if anyone wants to chime in before officially submitting it.

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Oh, one more question. I didn't see it anywhere, correct me if I'm wrong, but when it comes to mons w multiple sprites, can you make an entry for a specific sprite, or do they need to stay universal?

thorn ingot
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All entries are tied to a specific sprite

night pike
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Thought so, ok

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I wanted to make one for a specific rotom sprite, but wanted to ask first before going into it.

hexed fog
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**The 23FEB2026 Dex Update has been sent. Please allow it some time to activate. You don't need to manually update it will happen automatically as you open the game. **

hexed fog
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Porygon Bodies are up... dear god.

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Yeah good luck with that

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Remember to review the porygon pokepage...

narrow cosmos
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Hoo boy, here we go

hexed fog
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youll soon see why I dont like 'reference alts'

hollow quartz
azure wagon
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need to read up on normal porygon entries to get an idea of how to write something for them...i've avoided writing about them for this reason lol

hollow quartz
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I can already tell that I will prolly not be able to write anything decent for the sprites with ads in them lol

azure wagon
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Ongon #95.137
POKENAME's geometric frame is extremely dense and heavy, making it unsuited for navigating cyberspace. Its movements are stiff, but its defenses are exceptional.

i tried 🪨

hollow quartz
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I think it works hmjj

regal cedar
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Man, I really did just spend 45 minutes trying to figure out if a fusion would get blown away by strong gusts of wind. What am I doing with my life.

regal cedar
hexed fog
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Guys

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Remember to read the Porygon Pokepage

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and FAQ 23

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23 Can an entry for a reference sprite of a beta Pokemon use the beta Pokemon's name at all? No. Reference sprites should still be considered to be fusions that just so happen to resemble the thing they reference and not the reference itself

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The porygon family is going to be the death of me with all of the ref sprites

keen kestrel
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Good chance to hunt down ones that need better sprites/mains haha

rich goblet
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@hexed fog I'm a little confused, I thought I was being quite general when I wrote this entry:
POKENAME are part of a popular game that children play on their PCs. They have a sprite that resembles a small sapling that many children chop down to collect wood.

It does not refer to a single instance of a POKENAME and I definitely do not refer to them as a robot.

Is the issue the fact that they are part of a popular game? I can rephrase it if that's the issue

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Also I concur, Porygon will be quite painful to go through

hexed fog
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Referring to them as just part of a game makes them not pokemon. It makes them a program. All members of that species are not part of the game.

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Theyre living things and should be treated as such

rich goblet
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I need to emphasize they are living creatures, got it

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If you don't mind, I'll make a few quick fixes so you don't have to add them to the list again?

hexed fog
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Try to be less overt aswell

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"It is part of a videogame" takes away from it being a pokemon

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And faq 9s it

keen kestrel
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here are some entries i made for my "reference"-ish sprites that got approved
Because it was created by code, Porydon's head is the most perfectly rectangular object to ever exist. Scientists are rushing to study this Pokémon.

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A Porydon with this appearance is unusually aggressive. It will attempt to smash its way into towns using its large face.

rich goblet
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That makes sense! Feel free to reject the ones I wrote where I involved a videogame, I'll rewrite them to be more cyberspace-like and more vague

keen kestrel
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not to say mine are perfect heehee but they got approved at least

rich goblet
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I get the picture, and I'm always happy to rewrite if need be

keen kestrel
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huh, someone wrote an entry for this sprite of mine. i guess they got away with it by adding a loophole at the end? lol
Trainers say this Pokémon's appearance bears resemblance to a castle in a video game. Porysand's appearance, however, is purely coincidental.

rich goblet
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That... is a good point

keen kestrel
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IMO less interesting than just coming up with some new info about the creature itself though

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not that i have any ideas for this one right now lol

hexed fog
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Yup loopholes

rich goblet
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@hexed fog could I ask for a spot check on the most recent entries I've made? I know its a weird request, but I think it'd be faster if you rejected them than me typing out and guessing which ones should be rejected

hexed fog
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When I'm out of bed again

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Taking breaks from bed rest

rich goblet
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^My face when I had the incorrect assumption

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For those of you watching at home, this is why I'm not an unown

hexed fog
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You can have another <@&1210701164426039366> do it lol

rich goblet
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Oh yeah!

midnight siren
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gimme like 10 mins

rich goblet
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Take your time

midnight siren
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just finishing up an event announcement and i can get on that

rich goblet
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Yeah just do a reject on anything that you think needs to be rejected, and I'll rewrite them and submit an update, no need to approve anything

midnight siren
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they mostly look ok, just got a couple i need to get some other eyes on Nice

rich goblet
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Oh cool! Thank you, I feel a little guilty for not updating my set of assumptions smh

midnight siren
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its all good, feel free to ping me whenever Nice

balmy gate
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This was one of my first fusions and I've always wanted to write a dex entry for it. Does this sound good?
POKENAME's antlers are covered with a film that becomes soapy when wet. After emerging from a body of water it leaves behind a trail of bubbles while frolicking around.

rich goblet
balmy gate
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Awesome, I'll go ahead and submit it. Thanks.
I'm going to go through some of the other sprites I made seeing if any dex entries come to mind. It was something I was planning to do more until I got distracted just making the sprites.

rich goblet
drifting cloak
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Despite its woolly appearance, the strands growing from POKENAME's body is made up entirely from hard rock. These rocky vines assist the POKENAME in battle, since their dense exterior is surprisingly versatile.

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idk if i'm wording it wrong, but it sounds clunky 😭😭

drifting cloak
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mate atp I have no idea what it is

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to me this looks woolly

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kinda

rich goblet
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entangled might be a better word

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Also, in the second sentence, I recommend saying "the rocky vines" or something similar since "it" could mean anything

drifting cloak
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Ok thxxxxxx

rich goblet
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Looks a lot better now! Good job 😄

drifting cloak
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...is it ok if I backhandedly insult a pokemon?

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i wanna call a pokemon a gremlin but idk if i can

rich goblet
drifting cloak
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i wanna casll it as feisty gremlin

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wait i just thought of something

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a feisty bundle of energy

rich goblet
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I'm pretty sure the dictionary has a weird definition of gremlin

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I would call it a feisty mischevious creature, but that is quite long

drifting cloak
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a feisty troublemaker?

rich goblet
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Maybe like unreliable helper or mischievious troublemaker

rich goblet
drifting cloak
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thank you!!!

rich goblet
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@balmy gate You posted the entry as your username and vice versa. I'd just submit it again posting it in the right spots heehee

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No big deal if it gets rejected

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You can always try again

balmy gate
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Oh shoot, I did it backwards. Whoops. I'll resubmit it

rich goblet
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It goes username, filename, entry

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You'll get the hang of it dw

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(I've done this thousands of times I'd be concerned if I didn't know)

balmy gate
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Okay, that should be the right order now.

midnight siren
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it is, and i've denied the wrong one for ya

rich goblet
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Since the most recent check was today, it'll take about two to three weeks to get approved

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Otherwise? You did a good job

balmy gate
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Thanks again, I'll definitely be thinking of more entries.

drifting cloak
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These feisty troublemakers spend most of their time zipping around grasslands at extreme speeds. POKENAME are mischievous, and are likely to be seen bickering with each other with little squeaks.

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gonna be so real I might just leave this entry n move on

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bcI can NOT think of another characteristic for this gremlin

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can I reference other pokemon?

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I wanna say starly but idk if i can

thorn ingot
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It’s not recommended to mention non-IF Pokemon when you can mention one that is in PIF but if that’s not possible you can mention non-IF mons

random dust
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I have an idea for an empoleon and mankey fusion.

random dust
storm light
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It doens't have a sprite right now, so unfortunately it can't have an entry yet https://www.fusiondex.org/empoleon+mankey/

FusionDex

When it starts shaking and its nasal breathing turns rough, it's a sure sign of anger. The three horns that extend from its beak attest to its power.
HP: 69. Attack: 82. Defense: 52. Speed: 66.
Special Attack: 85. Special Defense: 82.

random dust
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flip the fusion

thorn ingot
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also doesn't have a custom

storm light
random dust
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my bad primape

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Primape head; Empoleon body

rich goblet
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Are you asking for an entry or are you wanting to write one yourself?

random dust
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Both would work for me

rich goblet
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Give me a second then

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POKENAME are both wise and tough, making them reliable leaders of other Pokémon in the wild. Their protective instincts are as strong as their temper, which sends them into a frenzy whenever they are upset. @random dust

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What do you think?

random dust
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Thank you so much.

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I just fused them and the sprite was just a chef's kiss.

rich goblet
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Just so you know, it will be in the game in 3-4 weeks, as the most recent check was today

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Otherwise? I hope you enjoy it.

random dust
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THX

thorn ingot
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I feel like the submission form needs to say that you have to be in this discord for your entries to be approved

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Because I just found someone in the pokeathalon (our showdown) server who has tried submitting them but have not found them being approved

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So I feel like they might not be the only one

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And that there are others like them

rich goblet
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The only place they could really get access to the form outside of the server is through @chilly bloom site, who I will ping to see if we can’t make a popup or warning to ask people to join the PIF server first

thorn ingot
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Hmm still feel like it should be mentioned directly on the form tho since having a popup appear everytime sounds annoying

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Well I guess it can be mentioned in the text part

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Where the link part is

rich goblet
narrow cosmos
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A mischievous creature, POKENAME uses its power over times to play tricks on computer users. When it appears, it uses its ability to revert the computer's operating system to an older, outdated one.

thorn ingot
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Pretty sure it’s frogman himself owns the form but don’t quote me on that
-# unless it’s true, then quote me on it evil

narrow cosmos
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Imagine minding your own business, this thing shows up and suddenly you're on Windows XP. heehee

chilly bloom
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that reminds me I gotta get the dex update

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2,067 additional dex entries since last update heehee

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I guess the form doesn't say that you must be a member of the pif discord

ebon warren
narrow cosmos
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I did pretty good, nearly 400 new entries added with this update.

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I'm gaining on Izik, slowly but surely. heehee

chilly bloom
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gave frog a heads up that the form only implies, but never explicitely states, that you must be a member of this discord in order for your entry to be reviewed (and subsequently approved)

ebon warren
chilly bloom
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or maybe it should be "if there's an issue with your entry we'll only be able to notify you if you're in the pif discord"

ebon warren
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There's also no way currently to enforce it, so even just managing that restriction would require a lot of time

ebon warren
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Just the disclaimer

balmy gate
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I've been seeing all the porygon entries and had a thought. What if someone wanted to make a worm virus from porygon and instead ended up with a worm shaped porygon.

POKENAME was created when someone attempted to hack the copy protection of Porygon to create a self replicating worm. POKENAME lacks self replication, but can slow down computers by covering files in sticky digital threads.

storm light
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though tbf i could be reading it wrong bc i'm a lil tired, will take another look in the morning

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I'm also a lil confused on if it can be said that someone created it specifically since that implies specifying an origin, but the PokePages say Porygon were artificially created so huntershrug

balmy gate
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That is fair, I can see that. I'll see if I can change it up. Maybe dropping the initial bit on the porygon copy protection so that it did initially replicate before becoming the pokemon.

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I can see why now porygon is a bit weird to write entries for.

storm light
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I usually avoid it for that reason, but now it's our problem 'mon

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I also understand why Paya doesn't like em either lol

balmy gate
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Hmm, how about this? Dropping the origin for just the first discovery and conflating the network virus worm qualities with qualities of being a living worm.

POKENAME was first discovered eating and corrupting files on the network of a research laboratory. Its sticky digital threads are a common cause of internet slowdowns as it seeks more files to eat.

thorny crescent
#

@hollow nimbus you 🫵

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Thank you everyone for the dex entries!!! Melts into a puddle of goo!!!!!!!

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I love every dex entry thats been given to my sprites

thorny crescent
thorny crescent
rugged socket
hollow quartz
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with the dex site updated, I can see I need to redouble on my efforts eventually--and thankfully next week should be less...chaotic than this one and last one so I should have some ample time for it as well heehee

hollow quartz
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yeah fusiondex, I checked a few times yesterday and it hadn't yet, understandable of course, but I awoke to see it has updated now

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So close yet so far from breaking 3k...

grizzled ferry
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hellooo! I'm new around here, and want to take up making new entries in my free time, which can be quite ample as of late! How many.. entries, exactly can someone make at a time? I don't want to overwhelm people, but I love to write and have been known to cook up entire paragraphs on accident ^^;;
and. silly question but is the main submission google forms or discord?
-# if it's through discord, how are... typos, handled? I may be using a device PRONE to typos. so I wanted to ask ^^;; [I can't control the typos either. They keep popping up regardless of if I correct them post-sending with how my phone works. It's reaaaaally annoying. the more I try to correct it, the worse it gets.]

azure wagon
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You can write however many you want, though each individual entry can't have over 250 characters.

narrow cosmos
narrow cosmos
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Whoop, looked away for a few minutes and Izik swoops in and Porygons it up again. kekruff

rich goblet
storm light
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Swabgon #442.137c
This variant of POKENAME are most often seen cleaning and sorting files in a way only known to them. Messing with the organization of the files causes POKENAME great upset, flashing the light on their head and flailing the brush they hold.

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Been a bit since I've seen Wall-E, but I love Mo heehee

thorn ingot
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I have no way of checking the sheet rn so I’m just gonna hope I don’t create a porygon entry someone else has already done

storm light
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Sprites can have multiple entries so I don't think it's too big of an issue lol

true walrus
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What do i do if i submitted alot of custom pokedex entries before joining the IF discord server?

hexed fog
rich goblet
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Well, Mega Evolutions are not acquirable by the player, and fusions are not the same as it, but that's nitty gritty, I guess it does exist

narrow cosmos
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The Porygon entries aren't proving too iffy so far, but now that I think about it, Porygon2 might be more difficult outside of referential sprites, if only because its whole shtick is practically "Porygon, but more." SelenThink

storm light
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Porygon, but ✨smooth

keen kestrel
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The poke pages had some interesting stuff about it i never knew

thorn ingot
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Alright I need help on my Oricorio-Sensu/Porygon2 dex entry since it got FAQ 8'd
POKENAME are primarily used on death scenes to call forth and identify deceased souls. They also play a crucial role for police investigators, as POKENAME's ability to speak to these souls allows them to quickly identify the perpetrators.
I did remember dex manager getting pinged about it before in dexdoku and they said it was fine after a reword but I guess not

hollow nimbus
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Well, I can tell you a few problems with it

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The first, biggest reason it got denied was that you're making definitive claims about what the afterlife for humans is like

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The secondary reason is that the Pokémon being able to speak to the souls letting the humans identify the culprit suggests that the Pokémon can speak to humans when neither of the component Pokémon have that ability

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While it's true that fusions can have abilities not found in either of its counterparts, verbal communication with humans has to be a bit more strictly enforced because of the implications that brings for the lore

civic girder
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captain crunch killed the cook

hollow nimbus
#

If I were to adjust this entry to fit FAQ, I'd try this:
POKENAME are primarily used by police investigators at crime scenes. Because they can always find the perpetrators easily, some people believe that they have the ability to speak with the souls of the deceased.
However, I'm not going to force this specific revision on you. Ultimately, the only one who knows the real shape of your intentions for this writing is you.

thorn ingot
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Or is that the “definitive afterlife claim” you mentioned?

hollow nimbus
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Yeah, part of the problem of the first sentence is that it doesn't leave much ambiguity
If they're used to call the souls of the dead, there's nothing that suggests that it results in anything but success

thorn ingot
hollow nimbus
#

That works great Nice

hexed fog
narrow cosmos
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I say it mostly because it feels like less to work with when there's not much of a gimmick and I'd hate to repeat myself too much on the Porygon2's, but then again I just saw how many "wracked with terrible nightmares" are in my Darkrai entries so who am I to worry about repetition at this point? kekruff

hollow quartz
#

Me with all the sylveon entries I did where I used the word "feelers" and had to constantly switch with using "appendages" or "organs" heehee

hexed fog
thorny crescent
narrow cosmos
#

Get banished to Windows 2000

hollow quartz
#

Would that not be a blessing instead heehee

hexed fog
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Lol

hollow quartz
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Oh yeah I used that sometimes too huehue

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currently browsing my entries to any major errors, some that I might be missing cuz my energy is still very drained, and currently I am realizing I did so many sylveon entries kekruff

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maybe tomorrow I'll have the energy to try and write some more MELTING

ebon warren
hollow quartz
ebon warren
vague osprey
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i should give someone access heehee

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editeded!

ebon warren
ebon warren
storm light
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Espgon #196.137
Thanks in part to its lightweight body, POKENAME is able to levitate using psychic power. Its walleyed stare is often found humorous, allowing it to catch opponents off guard.

midnight siren
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458.396:
POKENAME produces a sweet juice inside its body which is incredibly effective at slaking thirst in deserts. In particularly dry months, its protective shell is weakened due to moisture loss. - requested by @hoary yoke

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448.270:
The body temperature of POKENAME can reach lows of -200 degrees Celsius. POKENAME frequently offers lifts to its prey, eating them only after they have frozen solid. - same as above

rugged socket
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<@&1210701164426039366> would this fly?
Shroomish/Sandshrew

POKENAME and Cacturne have developed a protocooperation relationship, Cacturne can chew up and spit out sand in a form in which POKENAME can consume. In return, POKENAME finds prey during the day for Cacturne to stalk at night.

midnight siren
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it wouldn't fly, it has no wings Quagless

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lemme look rqnonpif

crimson ledge
rugged socket
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Sweet thanks. Was worried about the word protocooperation, and introducing the lore of Cacturne chewing up and spitting out sand

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Like I don't think it's a stretch but wasn't 100%

midnight siren
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as knilk said, it should be protocooperative, but i think its fine

rugged socket
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Sweet, cheers smilemeowth

crimson ledge
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Ah yeah, it's really only very technical terms we want to avoid, and even then some allowance is made if context clues make the meaning clear.

midnight siren
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460.179:
The sandy body of POKENAME is constantly being shed and reformed. If another Pokémon comes into contact with the loose grains, they will be paralysed for up to 4 hours. - again, requested by @hoary yoke

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118.484:
POKENAME channels its psychic powers through the twin shells pinned to its flowing dress. When predators try to attack POKENAME, it expels the stored energy to increase its speed by up to 30 knots. - requested by @deep portal

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162.484b:
The plushie that POKENAME carries is used to focus its psychic power. If it is disturbed whilst resting, it will lash out indiscriminately at its surroundings. - as above

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381.484a:
The wishes granted by POKENAME are often altered from the original wish maker's intention to be beneficial to POKENAME. This has caused POKENAME to be notoriously difficult to train due to its self-centred nature. - as above

hexed fog
hollow quartz
#

i was sure that's jirachi/delphox

midnight siren
#

but yeah it should have a bit of delphox now that i look at it Thonking

hollow quartz
#

I do like the play on a genie-ish vibe, ngl allthethings

midnight siren
#

i was honestly struggling with an idea for it heehee

hollow quartz
#

I should give Jirachi another look through, maybe it'll help warm my brain up to try and help with some Porygons

midnight siren
midnight siren
hollow quartz
midnight siren
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yup smh

hollow quartz
#

Jirachi is a bit of a rarer exception, at least to me, since it also has the "long dormancy period" gimmick with it sleeping for such long periods, in tandem with its wish-granting

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Being reminded that the blue tags it has actually serve a purpose helps give some inspiration at times too

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Like instead of wishes, maybe people write names on them for targets of bad events, or to dispel themselves of foul emotions, etc

midnight siren
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i still really like this jirachi entry i did a while ago

hollow quartz
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Snrk, that is a good one

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Maybe now we know who to blame for the moon being made of cheese huehue

midnight siren
#

so true

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the giant rat who makes all the rules AzuGasp

hollow quartz
#

Jerry's evil relative, Jicate

hexed fog
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I saw the dress and assumed Despair

grave sedge
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What do we think about:

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POKENAME loves to run and jump around while gleefully swinging its bell back and forth. However playful, this activity often causes splitting headaches and telekinetically sparks roaring fires.

hollow quartz
#

The "telekinetically sparks roaring fires" feels out of place to me a bit--like it seems like a bit of a leap, but that may be just my perspective.

keen kestrel
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I like it tbh

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Fusion of a baby psychic type and a fully evolved fire type, who knows what it will do heehee

hollow quartz
#

I'd personally go with something like "The sounds of its bell may cause headaches, and seems to have an odd influence over the strength and movement of nearby flames." but that may be a me thing, again.

hollow quartz
#

-# and yes I used "esque" over "ish" to avoid the blatant puns/jokes that could be made huehue

grave sedge
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Hmm I'd like to defer to your experience but I'm torn, because

  1. Chingling's entries state that it does cause bad headaches amd pain, so I'd like to keep that part for sure
  2. Delphox's entries do state that it telekinetically causes fire and controls fire
    So idk Thonking
hollow quartz
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No I get it, like I said it might just be my perspective is all. Like I said, it just feels like that particular part stands out in a weird way to my brain compared to the rest of the entry

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It probably works fine and is just my perspective being skewed for some reason, tbh

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My brain is annoying like that, even with my own writing heehee

grave sedge
#

What if we change the last part to say "and telekinetically kindles fires nearby",, would that feel nicer?

grave sedge
hollow quartz
#

Hm, it might specifically be that it's about roaring flames to me, as I ponder it. Like my mind goes to those Pokémon somehow causing widespread devastation as they play about or something. So maybe something like "and telekinetically spark many weak fires around them." ?

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Again, though, I just reiterate: my perspective, I'm not an unown so I could easily be overthinking

keen kestrel
#

Combine the headaches and the fires

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It makes peoples heads spontaneously combust heehee

hollow quartz
#

Honestly, the idea of a headache that also feels like a burning fever without actually being sick sounds especially devious heehee

grave sedge
#

I am so mixed on that idea too I hate making decisions 😭

#

Considering:

hollow quartz
#

At the end of the day, you are the writer--it's your entry, I can only provide a differing perspective and potential ideas to ponder, rather than say "do this" or "do that"

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If the original feels best to you, then go with that--I am but one voice of hundreds others

grave sedge
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  1. "And telekinetically sparks small, haphazard fires around it"
  2. ". . . often causes feverish headaches and high body temperatures"
hollow quartz
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-# or is it thousands by now, in terms of the count of who all are in the server huehue

grave sedge
hollow quartz
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If you want it to be fires, keep it as such--the fevers thing was more of a joke type thing, though I do have a bias for finding ways to tie abilities together in a way that may change them. Like a fusion where the poison/venom now causes one to feel hypothermia or frostbite just because part of the fusion is with a strong ice-type

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But that bias is just that--personal bias. A personal habit I have, not necessarily a recommended norm of any sort NODDERS

grave sedge
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I knoww, but everybody's got something good, and the more little biases we apply, the better it will be hopefully

deep portal
#

i like your take on my bell fox

grave sedge
grave sedge
hollow quartz
deep portal
grave sedge
hollow quartz
midnight siren
#

fair enough, lemme have a look Thonking

grave sedge
grave sedge
deep portal
#

they gave the baby strong powers and expect him to behave like an average baby Quagless

midnight siren
#

‘tis a preference thing though, not required to change Nice

hollow quartz
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Dragon saying the same stuff I did; about it being a preference thing, that is heehee

grave sedge
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Yeahh lol

grave sedge
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So imma ask for the spriter's preference heehee

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@deep portal 🥺

  1. ". . . telekinetically sparks roaring fires"
    Or
  2. ". . . telekinetically ignites roaring fires"
    ?
rich goblet
#

Looks like ignites was preferable

grave sedge
#

Okay ig imma submit that then ❤️ thanks y'all

deep portal
hollow quartz
#

POKENAME are able to create or mimic over 108 different sounds, including the cries of other Pokémon. However, they seemingly can only remember at most 108 different sounds and will quickly forget one if they learn a new one.
-# as I scroll through Spiritomb, I come across Chingling which felt ironic enough that I figured I ought to do heehee

rich goblet
#

Instant cortisol spike

hollow quartz
#

I would be safe at least, considering throughout middle school and high school I could sleep through five of those old-school ringing bell alarm clocks going off at the same time--each of which were less than a foot away from my head kekruff

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-# though looking back, I do wonder if they're why I might have a mild tinnitus noise present at all times

hollow quartz
rich goblet
#

What if it just doesn’t want to learn

hollow quartz
#

The cruel joke: and thus we end up with many "wild" Spiriling that learned such sounds and never forgot them somehow

storm light
#

We love ads, here's a Pokemon that helps get you more heehee

Espgon #196.137a
Thanks in part to their lightweight bodies, POKENAME are able to levitate using psychic power. POKENAME are relied upon by advertising agencies to predict what their customers might be looking for while surfing the web.

hollow quartz
storm light
#

Do you think it should be advertising agencies instead of companies? I'm not too well versed in how they produce ads, but it sounds like agencies would fit better

hollow quartz
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I actually know not either, but I could see it fitting Thonking

storm light
#

might just be the funny alliteration heehee

keen kestrel
#

I agree agencies would be better

grave sedge
hollow quartz
#

Yeah you might've been right, I already submitted a bit ago unfortunately--looking at it, it does feel a tad redundant to say it twice like that Thinkaton

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I just either make an error report to tweak that or I submit a second entry to "overwrite" the prior one, if only my brain were working at a fuller capacity to recall which is better, bleh

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@midnight siren which should I do in this case--submit a second entry or just do an error report? I don't recall which is less of a headache/hassle for you all

midnight siren
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either one works mrshrug

#

it’s about the same amount of work tbh

hollow quartz
#

Alrighty, wanted to be sure I didn't choose one that makes for an even more annoying route was all

midnight siren
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I’d say just make an error report asking for the first version to be denied and then submit the new version

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If no one else gets to it, I’ll sort it when I’m home in like ~1-2 hours

hollow quartz
#

As always your work and help is much appreciated allthethings

midnight siren
#

np :p

true walrus
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Question, i’ve been making custom dex entries a whole ago, and they still haven’t popped up, i did them all correct, and followed the rules but they still won’t show, is it because i have to wait?

tropic ermine
#

They may not have been added yet maybe?

thorn ingot
true walrus
#

Alr thanks for telling me

rich goblet
#

They are approved in bulk so it'll take like 3-4 week yeah

rich goblet
#

@hollow nimbus How specific can I be with this? Is saying a fusion is 'disease-ridden' okay, or 'plagued by illness' okay? Can I also say that a fusion causes specific types of disease like 'respiratory illness'? Thinking about koffing and weezing for these sort of things

keen kestrel
#

Well, asthma like you would get from bad smoke doesn’t necessarily involve microbes Thonking

rich goblet
keen kestrel
#

yeah i just mean there are plenty of afflictions that don’t need to reference germs haha

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Im curious what you are up to haha

rich goblet
rich goblet
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Koffbat #109.42

POKENAME are disease-ridden creatures that fill the air with noxious fumes and drool thick, sticky saliva onto cavern floors. Many Pokémon that either inhale the fumes or touch the saliva break out in hives.

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@keen kestrel This is an example of what I am thinking about

hollow nimbus
hexed fog
balmy gate
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A small question, do you have an error channel or something similar for issues in dex entries?

balmy gate
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Okay, so when it says an error report needs to have been reviewed, is that saying I should bring it here to make sure before I submit the report?

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Wait, I think I am just being dumb, I re-read it. It is just saying the entry has to have been approved and in the dex. I can't submit error reports on entries that have just been submitted and haven't been added to the dex.

balmy gate
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Decided to take a crack at a legendary fusion. How's this sound?

POKENAME is said to be capable of causing lightning storms using the large horn on its head. It can be found in forests after a storm as it prefers the sap from trees struck by lightning.

rugged socket
drifting cloak
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POKENAME's hollow horns are sturdy enough to withstand the strongest winds. POKENAME tend to be found in barren environments, oftentimes being the only source of life.

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I really want this pkmn to feel dystopian

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like a tumbleweed

rich goblet
drifting cloak
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Omg of course!

rich goblet
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POKENAME tumble through wastelands where there is little life. They latch onto carcasses they find to consume the bones, leaving no remnants behind.

drifting cloak
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This is so good omg

tranquil thunder
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I would personally combine the last tidbit of Jojo's entry in the end of Ducky's promt

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Actually nvm

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The first line from ducky does mention the lack of life

balmy gate
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I had a idea for this guy, but I am a little unsure about the how second sentence turned out. Any thoughts?

POKENAME's back is covered with graves and is home to many Ghost type Pokémon. It is believed that some ancient nomadic cultures buried their dead on POKENAME so they would not have to abandon their deceased loved ones.

keen kestrel
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I like it but I’m not sure what being nomadic has to do with it

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Oh, because its a mobile graveyard?

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Might want to make it clearer for dum dums like me haha

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Clarify that it travels alongside those people perhaps

balmy gate
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Sure, how about something like this for the second sentence?

It is believed that some ancient nomadic cultures traveled with POKENAMEs in their group allowing them to bury their deceased without having to abandon them.

steady plinth
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guy who has never played a pokemon game before writes a pokedex entry
Klinklang/Gallade/Klinklade #337.288d

POKENAME channels energy through the ring around its body to create powerful blasts and sturdy barriers. Because of this, it is often seen protecting important locations.

azure wagon
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It seems like a fine entry to me

balmy gate
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Had some ideas for one of my favorite porygon lines. How do these sound?

This Pokémon often runs out of memory space when attempting to upload itself to cyberspace. Its software is robust, if not also slow. If given enough time the upload will complete even if it takes POKENAME days to complete.
Despite software updates improving the amount of memory this Pokémon has, POKENAME still runs out due to memory leaks. People are often frustrated to see its loading progress stall out near the end after its fast progress at the beginning.
Due to poorly created software updates to fix its memory issues and increase its upload speeds POKENAME often experiences errors when transferring to cyberspace. This Pokémon becomes glitchier over time with every upload.

rich goblet
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I love how you incorporate the evolutions into the process, its beautiful

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Even if there may be minor errors, I can mentally image the Pokemon kekruff

regal cedar
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'POKENAME minds its own business until whatever it has deemed a foe comes too close, upon which it begins to lunge after them.'

....I feel like I need to have a better term than 'minds its own business', but brain doesn't generate one today.

rich goblet
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I need more context I think, is this out of aggression? Or is this out of fear?

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It matters

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remains carefree

remains reticent

remains insouciant

remains indifferent

All possible and around the same character count

regal cedar
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It becomes aggressive if approached (by whatever it sees as a foe), otherwise it's neutral.

rich goblet
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keeps to itself

remains indifferent

stays distant

Few more ways it could be worded

regal cedar
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Keeps to itself is a good one. Nice work.

ebon warren
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Could also describe it as diffident at some point in the entry too, if you want. It's brief and very effective at describing it the same way

regal cedar
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Hi everyone! Has anyone seen a Skiploom fusion on the wind recently?

rich goblet
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@regal cedar I did one on 44.188.png if that is the one you are referring to

regal cedar
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moar allthethings

rich goblet
rich goblet
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I did like 8 you're welcome heehee

regal cedar
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omg

storm light
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Tbh we need more middle evolution entries lol

hollow quartz
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True

ebon warren
hollow quartz
shy portal
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*luxio malicious

hollow quartz
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Luxio isn't a troll choice, Luxio is just a good choice

rich goblet
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I’ll write more when I feel like it, I’m hitting a inspiration drought

hollow quartz
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I feel that in my core

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My brain has stopped cooperating as much as it was, much to my chagrin

rich goblet
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I wrote a good number of koffing/wheezing entries based on underwater bubbles spiders rely on to walk on water

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And that was today

hollow quartz
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Yeah it doesn't work for me like that

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I can't sit still watching stuff unless I'm in the mood for it

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I try and I just end up too antsy and agitated

rich goblet
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Like exposure to new knowledge helps a lot

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Even if it is YouTube shorts

hollow quartz
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No, it doesn't work like that for me. With anything involving watching stuff. My attention ends up floating away.

rich goblet
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Oh

hollow quartz
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I have tried many things. It's why I struggle to read, even when I want to.

rich goblet
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Brain short circuited for a moment

rich goblet
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We appreciate every entry

hollow quartz
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I am aware, it's why I'm not forcing myself to write--I know it'll just burn me out further

rich goblet
hollow quartz
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As much as I dislike it, I still am only able to go with the flow of my brain rather than steer it to my desired course

rich goblet
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<@&306953740651462656> Spam and Promo

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Get the clanker

rich goblet
hollow quartz
rich goblet
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I saw that

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I am questioning things now

hollow quartz
hollow quartz
ebon warren
hollow quartz
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Pft, I rose that one mostly just cuz Porygon is already up as the next on the troubled-one list

thorn ingot
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No that’s his rounder smarter cousin

ebon warren
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rounder, smarter alter-ego

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Jekyll and Hyde

thorn ingot
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What would P-Z be in the family then heehee Thonking

hollow quartz
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what about Porygon-Z, thou--

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darn, I wasn't a quick enough draw

ebon warren
hexed fog
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porygon is really stumping yall huh

hollow quartz
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To some extent it did, for me my groove for writing has also begun to peter out a bit

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Porygon is an easy criminal of fact reiteration, for me, when I did try to write more for it.

steel glade
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where do yall even get porygon

tranquil thunder
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Meowinja #52.289

Owners of POKENAME like to save their spare change in POKENAME’s empty shell of a body. POKENAME are especially fond of those who have saved up a lot of money in their shell.

steel glade
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thats cool i like the oriciorio ghost plus noivern i wish i could show it i forgot how

storm light
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I can see Porygon only being able to do simple things while Pory 2 is a lot more refined and can handle more complex tasks, the trouble is actually emulating that in the entry while also having little knowledge about how it would actually work in computer space heehee

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Pory Z is its own whole can of wigletts

hollow quartz
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One of the issues for me with Porygon is how rigid its body is, ngl

rich goblet
pale venture
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I haven't made any entries in a while, I've been so busy irl

rich goblet
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I just did a few porygon of varying quality

tranquil thunder
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I'm gonna try my hand at one, just give me a moment.

storm light
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I wonder of we could get some porygon that help at hospitals raThinking (Prompt! ✏️)

rich goblet
tranquil thunder
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Yeah, I saw that too but I have no idea what its actually referencing so I rather not try.

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Poryking #137.199

POKENAME are very slow going and don’t really like to get into fights unless they know they can win. They instead call upon others to protect and fight attackers for them.

balmy gate
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Here is an idea. How's this sound?

POKENAME is capable of creating digital copies of herbs and berries it can mix inside its shell. It is commonly used at hospitals to create and test new experimental medicines.

summer saffron
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nice

tranquil thunder
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I like the concept

main silo
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If it doesnt add to much effort to your work, plz send a ping if your doing a dex for one of my sprites. I wont change anything about what your write.
Just wanna see the thought process heehee

hexed fog
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While the Porygon Bodies are done... enjoy the Porygon Heads

pale venture
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Never

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We'll angrily make porygon-head sprites

hexed fog
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it's honestly awful lol

thorn ingot
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I love making Porygon head entries

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Oh

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I’m just better apparently Quagless

hexed fog
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make 100

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then tell me how much you love it

thorn ingot
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I don’t have time to make that many at once

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Otherwise I might

thorn ingot
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Porygon and Porygon-Z are easy for the most part

pale venture
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This is bait

thorn ingot
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Nope

pale venture
tranquil thunder
thorn ingot
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Already made 3 since then

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And ENJOYED MAKING ALL OF THEM

hollow quartz
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The heads for the Porygon line easily gave more ideas than the bodies did for me

thorn ingot
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Yeah very much same

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head porygons are infinitely better than bodies

hollow quartz
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The bodies are just....something about them, specifically for base Porygon, just are so rigid-looking that they broke my brain

thorn ingot
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For me, most abilities of Porygon that I want to write dex entries about fit better as heads than bodies

hollow quartz
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Even Z is sometimes better than base Porygon in terms of the body--and 2 suffers similar to base for me

hollow quartz
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It doesn't help I don't like writing Porygon as a data-made being--I know that's what it is, but it goes against something at the core of my mind LOL

thorn ingot
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Z is even easier since twitching and having errors works both head or body

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POKENAME was programmed to solve all of its problems by headbutting. Knowing no other logic, it continuously rams stuff with its head until something happens.

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Just wanted to share this

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Because I think it's funny and fitting heehee

thorn ingot
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Now I snorsleep in Pory happiness

pale venture
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Porywhirl #137.61
POKENAME are often found hiding within herds of Poliwhirl, imitating their movements and patterns. POKENAME can produce a clear fluid similar to water, that is often used to incubate Fossil Pokémon

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Poryuk #137.89c
POKENAME have a fluid body that can easily transfer data from one device to another, which was once considered the future of data transfer technology. The process of transferring data creates a terrible odour that poisons the environment.

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#137.115a
POKENAME have the ability to materialise program data by entering modern machinery and exiting with physical data. While it is unknown how they do this, POKENAME like to fix data they bring out, before placing it back into the machine it came from.

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Lickigon #108.137
POKENAME are able to copy data by licking discs and can transfer this data to other blank discs. POKENAME are often used in creating TMs, though POKENAME often enjoy eating the discs whole as a snack.

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Porylava #137.156
POKENAME can use the strange white flames on their back as propulsion, able to thrust themselves in any direction without slowing down. These thrusters were thought to advance space travel, though the power generated is not enough to lift POKENAME.

pale venture
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Porysire #137.195
POKENAME will lay at the edge of riverbeds and camoflauge themselves to the environment, waiting for prey to stroll into their mouth. POKENAME only use basic movements to conserve energy, though they regularly forget to use the energy stored.

pale venture
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I'm making a few Porygons, are you proud?

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I promised ten so you're getting 10

pale venture
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Poryllery #137.224
POKENAME are able to shoot targets with ink from far away, using the data stored in their body to triangulate a shot. POKENAME can change the properties of this ink to produce differing effects to adapt to their opponent.

pale venture
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Porytom #137.358
POKENAME are commonly used to send messages between Pokémon Centers and Marts, mainly for updates on deliveries and incidents. In emergency situations, POKENAME can be used to power faulty machines and electrical equipment.

pale venture
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Porygrigus #137.362
POKENAME leave cryptic messages on nearby devices to warn people away from their nests. POKENAME make their nests with piles of gold, which they also eat from.

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I'm not sure how to word that last bit

pale venture
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Poryeon #137.290
POKENAME are capable of perfectly camouflaging to any environment, only detectable with advanced technology. POKENAME do not need to breath, allowing them to hide for long periods of time, even under water.

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There's my 10

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10 Porygon fusions

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As promised

rich goblet
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I have church today so I will need to wait until after that to write Despair

hollow quartz
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and here i felt like doing some entries today, but somehow i hurt something in my left upper back so now moving my left arm hurts Despairge

rich goblet
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I am finally home and I did the 10 Porygon things I said I would

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\o/ what a day

ebon warren
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I've always wondered if anyone did entries on mobile. Were I traveling for any significant amount of time (half an hour or more), I'd do them on my phone honestly, so I wondered if anyone else did Thonking

rich goblet
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I have an iPhone so I swap between fusiondex and the form all the time

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It helps pass the time on busses

ebon warren
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The tool I use for the word count is also a website so that would be easy, and I can quickly look up lore on Bulbapedia the same way.

I just don't ever have the need to ride the bus that far, the whole island is only 34 miles across at its widest and I rarely need to go more than half of that even

rich goblet
ebon warren
rich goblet
ebon warren
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But buses don't work too well in cities with a lot of vehicle traffic

rich goblet
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Don't forget I'm in the US sadly

ebon warren
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Subways, trams, and trains are far superior

rich goblet
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Oh 100%

rich goblet
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GOOD

ebon warren
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And eventually a functional tram

rich goblet
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If you lose that you're cooked

ebon warren
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They're currently building a sky tram (fully electric and fully autonomous) but it's taking a long time and a lot of money

pale venture
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Flying tram??

ebon warren
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No, it's just basically a subway line but it's entirely built on stilts. The whole thing has to be above the roads and buildings underneath. Can't dig into the ground

pale venture
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Flying tram pog

thorn ingot
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Only exception was like yesterday

rotund oxide
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hi, i wrote some dex entries last night and thought i was still in the server!! apparently i left some time ago but could i get these possibly re-checked? aicit_squirmaga_eatbook

rich goblet
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<@&1210701164426039366> What is the procedure for this? Do we just tell them to resubmit again?

rotund oxide
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i can do that if needed!

rich goblet
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Give it a moment, they'll reply

crimson ledge
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Resubmitting isn't necessary, I've un-not approved them.

rich goblet
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They hath spoken

rotund oxide
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thank you !!

true walrus
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How long does it take for entries to appear in the game/ on fusion dex again? I think its been more than two weeks for me… 😔

rich goblet
true walrus
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Like rn? Wheres that at?

rich goblet
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293.333.png was approved, I think Daena just needs to update the site

true walrus
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Nice! Also i made one for Chandelizikem (chandelure + blaziken) thats the one im waiting on

rich goblet
true walrus
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My entry?

rich goblet
true walrus
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Ah ok. Well i’ll just keep waiting patiently then

storm light
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Actually did a couple the other day

hexed fog
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If your entry was denied for some reason during that update then that's the reason it was not in the game.

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Looks like ducky advised it was on the 24th... which is not 2 weeks ago.

pale venture
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Not yet

tranquil thunder
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Enpede #244.422

POKENAME are said to be the young guardians of distant volcanoes. This is derived from the fact that POKENAME are very aggressive about their territory, injecting any trespassers with a poison that can cause an intense burning feeling under the skin.

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Strangely enough, this sprite isn't the default one on the website although it is the one without an alt letter. I preffer this one so this one shall get my dex entry (and it was an old one too).

pale venture
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I'm in the double digits

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I'm in the top 100

trim jetty
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would a dex entry mentioning a pokemon's edibility be okay? i know a few official ones do but idk if theyre modern/allowed in IF

unkempt summit
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Are you allowed to give a suggestion dex entry for a Mon that has one already or no?

tranquil thunder
pale venture
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I've not had any of my entries corrected or changed at all for a while, would it be ok to start just uploading them? think

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@hexed fog

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I've been posting them here for approval but no one has said anything about them in a while and they've always been approved

rich goblet
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I think the quality of your entries has improved, but I’ll wait for Izik’s comments

pale venture
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Thank you happyGeng

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I wanna make more but I don't wanna overload you guys on bad submissions

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So I wanna make sure I get the OK before I overload you on good submissions

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To help, of course

midnight siren
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we have a lot of good writers here that will pick up on most issues, so we're unlikely to need major changes

pale venture
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All thanks to you Dragon Hunter, thanks for the help

tranquil thunder
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Mudpie #282.10

POKENAME likes to spend most of its time in the mud found in wet marshlands. POKENAME only gets out of the water during heavy rainfall, where they eat the plant life found there.

trim jetty
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for fusions that are still in the spritework forum, do I just share the dex entry with the current sprite? or should i wait till i get the spriter role and can submit it to the gallery?

rich goblet
rich goblet
trim jetty
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i thought there was a built-in thing for when you post it to the gallery if you include the dex entry with the submission. at least it says so in the spriter announcements

rich goblet
trim jetty
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oh okay thank you

tranquil thunder
rich goblet
tranquil thunder
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Wondering if saying "they eat the reeds and other plantlife found in the marshland" is too much or just enough information.

pale venture
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But ye I see that

chrome bane
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Hey there! Ive come to this channel a few other times to see if anyone would be willing to write up cool dex entries for somr of my sprites, and the writers here are awesome and have always crushed it in the past

I have another one I was hoping someone could do a cool write up for:

The general concept for a dex entry I was hoping to convey was the following:

The small rodent in the center is a dead-serioud, no messing around rodent with flash-like speeds to spin the wheel-gear (so fast that it can even glide over water). While the 2 other gears (siblings?) Enjoy spinning around, playing, blowing bubbles, and giggling laughing all the time.

I thought it would be cool to have this little hamster rodent thats dead serious (imagine him with his arms crossed looking serious as he stares down his opponent), while his laughing and giggling gears spin around and blow bubbles. The contrast between serious / unserious seemed fun to me

pale venture
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I can't seem to find you by author on fusiondex

chrome bane
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Im terrible at writing these efficient and condensed entries. I can come up with the concept, but I always end up writing paragraphs,lol.

Thank you in advance if anyone is willing to write something cool for my rivals final-evo starter

(Please ping me - i unfortunately have to step away for an hour or more)

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@pale venture I should be the only one for BeardyBiscuitShooter

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It usually prefills for me when I get to beardy

pale venture
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Oh weird, you're not on fusiondex but you're on infinitefusiondex

chrome bane
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That is weird

Ill look into that

pale venture
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I can give a shot at one or two of them soon if you'd like though, I'm not the most experienced but I've been doing pretty ok recently

pale venture
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I wonder what the rules are for referencing items think

rich goblet
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@pale venture

pale venture
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Appreciate it, thank you

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#15.57b
POKENAME become enraged when other Pokémon enter their territory and will hunt trespassers relentlessly. The giant stingers POKENAME wield secrete a venom that puts their target into a crazed fury, which was once used to create a Berserk Gene.

unborn notch
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Omanyte/Hitmontop
POKENAME use their body like a spinning top to break into the shells of Shellder or Clamperl. They then grab their injured prey with their tentacles and slurp up what's left.

Is this good enough?

tranquil thunder
soft flicker
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Dexslog Doublade & Docks
Glaceon/Doublade
A POKENAME can cut though most organic material, its icy blade freezing the area around the cut in seconds. The Pokémon is very popular on harbors and docks, as it can very effectively prepare the freshly caught fish for transport.

rich goblet
true walrus
chrome bane
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@pale venture this is awesome! Thank you!!

Both pokemon are pretty angry little critters so I really love this dex entry, and tying in an item was a really cool idea too!

Thanks again!

pale venture
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No problem, glad you liked it!

thorn ingot
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@hexed fog the problem Pokemon sheet is broken. It is showing all Porygon fusions and saying there are 0 for all of them when there are entries for them already.

hexed fog
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ugh

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sec

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fixed

rich goblet
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Man I feel uniquely unqualified to do porygon fusions because I don't know a lot about coding

thorn ingot
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You don’t have to reference specifically coding their are other aspects of computers you can reference as well like data, files, viruses, software, even hardware can work

rich goblet
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Porytu #137.177

POKENAME enjoy playing games with their Trainer, especially abstract strategy games. Their programming gives them glimpses into future states of the game, helping ensure that they win.

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@thorn ingot Does this entry make sense? I'm trying to allude to solved games without being too technical

thorn ingot
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It likes to play strategy games, it can see into possible future game states, and plays the moves that gives it the best outcome of those possible future game states

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Makes sense to me

rich goblet
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Oooh right, should probably change it to singular pronouns

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Thanks Soup!

thorn ingot
rich goblet
thorn ingot
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Ah shoot

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I was just gonna explain how complex fits more when talking about games since it means they are having a lot of depth and not all theoretical or imagination

rich goblet
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I was thinking of like, solving chess vibes

thorn ingot
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Guess it’s fine then

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I think it still works

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Yeah just looked it up abstract is right

rich goblet
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@thorn ingot By the way, what is the expert mode in your nickname refering to? slowthink

thorn ingot
rich goblet
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Ooooooh, you've beaten it?

thorn ingot
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I was one of the main people who MADE the mode lol

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Like about 1/3 of the trainer fusions in Expert are made by me

rich goblet
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Oh cool!

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I did not know this

thorn ingot
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~~I also send lists of unsprited trainer fusions of Expert Mode as well and offload them to Team Wild to do evil ~~

rotund oxide
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can you refer to other fusions in the dex entries of fusions? i.e. i referenced miltank/trubbish in the bio of ampharos/trubbish?

tranquil thunder
soft flicker
grizzled charm
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I've seen dex entries on fusion dex that mention another fusion, so it was at least let through. It's probably just don't need information you'd only get by reading another dex entry like Pixel said.

regal cedar
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Keep in mind that this 'other Pokémon' should be obvious. For instance, we had one entry use 'Biking', and it had meant the fusion between Bisharp and Nidoking, which was not immediately apparent. Saying the name and the components is not a bad idea if not 100% clear.

cosmic hornet
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The main way I find dex entries to do is Random Fusion and doing the things that I immediately have an idea for

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Occasionally I just find ones already filled out

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This was my favorite that I've seen

rich goblet
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I don't like that entry but I can see why people do

pale venture
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I'll admit, I did release a small chuckle

timid sky
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That took me longer to get then I’d like to admit

pale venture
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The autosplice is just as good though

cosmic hornet
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Entries are dry by nature

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The most personality they can typically afford is reverence or warning about legendaries or ghost types

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So having that same tone for a monkey rock that spanks you is why I like it

soft flicker
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Deslog Doublade & Purple
Arbok/Duoblade
POKENAME exclusively attack their foes by stabbing, the parallel placement of the wounds have earned the Pokémon the nickname 'Bite of the Snake'. The poison the blades are coated in is strong enough to kill 10 Mamoswine.

Honestly not really sure about this one. Something's bugging me and I don't know what

tropic ermine
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I feel like that comma could be a period, maybe that's it?

keen kestrel
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You use the word “attack” 3 times in one sentence which makes it a little awkward

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“Marks of the attack” could just be replaced with “cuts” or “wounds”

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You could replace “attack their foes” with “strike”

tropic ermine
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You could also change stabbing attacks to "attack by stabbing

keen kestrel
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Oh or that yes

tropic ermine
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Any combo of these to cut the repeats out should help a good bit, you don't need to do all 3 suggestions lol

soft flicker
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Nah I think it works better like that heehee

rigid finch
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i was making a dex entry for reuniclus/tyrantrum, and i wanted to know if this reference to an actual metroid's life cycle sounded cool

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According to ancient manuscripts, POKENAME with certain genetic mutations could evolve yet another time. Unfortunately, fossil restoration deemed this certain code as a mistake, ceasing further evolution.

cosmic hornet
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I’d say that the information is based off of its DNA being incomplete rather than ancient manuscripts

rigid finch
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alright

cosmic hornet
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Something like

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Its damaged DNA suggests that POKENAME could evolve yet another time. Unfortunately, fossil restoration deemed this certain code as a mistake, ceasing further evolution.

rigid finch
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neat

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how's this sound:

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Due to POKENAME's surplus of traits, it can be found working a variety of jobs. It can use its strength in wrecking crews, its steadiness in carpentry, and can even sense plumbing issues before they get out of hand.

thorny crescent
rich goblet
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Also, I'm not sure what 'surplus of traits' here is meant to be