#dex-entries-discussion

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jagged ledge
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Stopping in real quick to clarify that while this entry isn't immediately glaring in concept, we recommend avoiding basing entries too heavily on previous evolutions, at least in formatting. I can clarify better when I have more time later on.

hollow tapir
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Yeah I’ve heard that before, one of my previous entries was kinda like that? Think it got accepted tho

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I thought it was fine as long as they don’t also have to read the other entry

dull folio
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Dex doku is done 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 (apart from editing and submitting)

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I’d help you but I made an entry for the reverse of this sprite and I don’t want it sounding to similar lmao

dull folio
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Too true, the bestest of spiders

jagged ledge
midnight siren
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getting the final couple entries decided, all i gotta do then is write the damn things heehee

dull folio
brisk bane
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It's a joke sprite lol. I love that someone found that in my list of sprites lol

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ty btw

midnight siren
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i wish the evolves with level allowed for either side of the evolution, i have 2 fully evolved guys i want to have on the doku smh

dull folio
midnight siren
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oh yea, i forgot that

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eh, i'll just play it safe mrshrug

dull folio
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Probably for the best Nice

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You can do a lot with pre evos, the ones I did and just posted Im pretty happy with

midnight siren
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dammit, mime jr is a mimic evo Despair

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finally, i have my list allthethings

split gulch
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POKENAME are frequent pests for factory workers, as they will frequently attempt to eat the many gears and wires that make up the machines.

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Just sending this here to make sure this looks well written.

midnight siren
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Bi/Starter:

318.331:

POKENAME are the protectors of the forests they grew up in. If any outsiders damage any of their territory, they will swiftly see an axe thud into the ground in front of them. ||dexdoku||

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Bi/LevelEvo:

294.411:

POKENAME can carry logs up to 10 times their weight. Because of this, they are often kept as pets in logging villages, and help with transport. ||dexdoku||

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Bi/Free:

383.424:

When provoked, POKENAME will throw the twig it carries as far as it can. This is only a distraction, however, as POKENAME will then charge at its foe and unleash a powerful headbutt. ||dexdoku||

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first 3 dexdoku done allthethings

midnight siren
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it'd be nice to have a bit more added, as it's a really nice picture being painted here, but that's totally up to you smilemeowth

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Ho-Oh/LevelEvo:

231.250a:

The ears of POKENAME are covered in feathers allowing for low altitude flight. It uses these wings to hunt, flying above its target and then dropping down on top of its unsuspecting prey. ||dexdoku||

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last one for this evening allthethings

little gulch
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Wow I didn't expect this cutie to be a dangerous hunter

midnight siren
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I was going to go more of a dumbo esq route, but then I couldn’t think of wording so it’s a deadly beast heehee

hollow tapir
split gulch
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How's that?

brisk bane
midnight siren
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~~at the same time I’m currently making a good line in trading favours/event rewards for dex entries, so maybe don’t/j heehee ~~

midnight siren
split gulch
ebon warren
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Clarification for instances with multiple spellings:

Similar to how some words have more than one correct spelling (such as color/colour, organize/organise, theatre/theater), there are also some instances where specific things in the Pokémon series have multiple spellings, too.

When the same word has multiple actual spellings (the examples above being US versus British English), both are acceptable and neither is considered incorrect. ||This does NOT apply for homonyms, as using the wrong homophone would be a spelling mistake, since they are different words.||

For examples in the Pokémon universe, if the spelling has changed throughout the series due prior to limitations or formatting requirements (usually a character limit or to include a previously unsupported character), the most current spelling will be the only one that is acceptable.
Some notable examples would be Thunder Punch which was previously ThunderPunch and Never-Melt Ice which was previously NeverMeltIce. In both of these cases, the prior spelling is now incorrect, as there is no longer a character limit for item names is not an issue, making the most recent and current spelling the only proper spelling.

ebon warren
slim solstice
split gulch
fresh gazelle
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help

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POKENAME are mostly found hiding beneath flowers and colorful plants. It disguises itself using it's scent that is spread by the leaf on it's head

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is this any good?

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after looking at Scizor/Chikorita's typing and status, I think my original idea for a dex entry is shit, so I decided to make a new one up, is it good? well written?

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tbh I feel like it isn't that very good

brazen flicker
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Looks good! But all the it's should be its
Maybe you could say the scent to remove one of the it's tho? It does have 3

clever loom
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Batch of little guys ™ incoming (sorry for the mild flood)

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POKENAME is a recommended Pokémon for young trainers as it is docile but has great potential. Sadly POKENAME is also quite uncommon in the wild, they are more likely to be born from a daycare egg.

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POKENAME are found haunting the gardens left uncultivated. Taking care of such a garden helps POKENAME to move on and evolve.

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On stormy days POKENAME are found hopping joyfully in the rain. Once they see a thunderbolt they will run toward it, hoping it strikes in the same place twice so they can charge up.

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POKENAME is one of the most fearful Pokémon that exists. In the wild they can only be observed closely following a bigger Pokémon while seemingly on the brink of crying.

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The orb on POKENAME's head is the scource of its psychic powers. It is said that if you stare inside it for long enough you will see what you'll look like in a decade.

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Batch done !

rugged socket
rugged socket
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They've v cute though smilemeowth

clever loom
clever loom
wanton ember
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@last ice feedback on your entry just now, it should be "its" not it's and the dot at the end is missing

rugged socket
clever loom
lapis cosmos
midnight siren
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cause "psychic powers" isn't a pokemon key word, it's lower case

rugged socket
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Oh sorry, mb

fervent shore
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Hey I have an entry I want to submit for Sharpslash (See photo)
A scimitar that is now possessed by a pirate's soul. It's very skilled in sword play and can cut through almost any material.

clever loom
craggy beacon
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consider "POKENAME is a scimitar that's possessed by a pirate's soul."

willow venture
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Finished my 2nd DexDoku pride!

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Now time to submit them in the doc lol

midnight siren
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Ho-Oh/Starter:

318.250:

The tree on the back of POKENAME is home to many small bird Pokémon. These Pokémon gather food for POKENAME in exchange for protection. ||dexdoku||

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Ho-Oh/Free:

274.250:

The icicles on POKENAME's wings are flung at foes as its main form of self defence. These ice shards can fly at up to 100 MPH. ||dexdoku||

chrome bane
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Hey, I hopped onto this channel about a week ago and had someone come up with an incrediblr dex entry for a sprite of mine. It came out great, so I couldn't resist coming back for more. Y'all on this channel are awesome.

Does anyone want to come up with a dex entry for my Skarmory/Tauros sprite i made awhile ago?
https://infinitefusiondex.com/details/128.227

I had just one thing I was hoping could be included in its dex entry: I liked the idea of the red-mane actually being rusted metal hair/wire.

midnight siren
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Luv/LevelEvo:

84.501:

The two heads of POKENAME work together in perfect synchronisation. It is said to represent platonic love, and petting both of POKENAME's heads will make a friendship last forever. ||dexdoku||

hollow tapir
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Should I submit my entries on the form now?

midnight siren
hollow tapir
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I don’t think so really, no

midnight siren
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maybe post 'em in the dexdoku thread and see if you can get some revision help

midnight siren
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i've got 2 to do, i'm happy to have a quick look over ur entries once they're done if you'd like?

hollow tapir
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Yes please!!!

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I marked them all with dexdoku in here unlike last time so it should be easy to find

midnight siren
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sick

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Luv/Starter:

501.6a:

The water on the wings of POKENAME are infused with rose petals, and emit a calming aura. It flies around looking for conflict to mediate and resolve. ||dexdoku||

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Luv/Free:

106.501:

POKENAME spends hours everyday practicing its kicking technique. At its peak, it can bring down the sturdiest of trees in a single hit. ||dexdoku||

hollow tapir
midnight siren
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frfr

brazen flicker
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Do I try to bust out 8 more dexdoku entries....

Also, is second person you allowed in entries? I thought it wasn't but can't remember

midnight siren
jagged ledge
brazen flicker
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Oh I didn't know it started next fri, thanks!
But next friday it's gonna give harder parameters wahh

jagged ledge
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I mean... just a little. heehee

hexed fog
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even with the latest sprite pack we are under 1500 wild entries remaining

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I am so proud of us ;;

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I will try to get some done tonight to help us along

chrome bane
hexed fog
brazen flicker
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"Burning off fury" goes hard

hexed fog
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Lol

jagged ledge
dull folio
chrome bane
dull folio
midnight siren
jagged ledge
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Death, taxes, and the izik pile. heehee

midnight siren
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no matter how many unown work on it, it will keep increasing at an exponential rate smh

dull folio
hexed fog
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tbf you can all become Unown

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and work on it 😉

jagged ledge
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I will say I actually did have fun with the entries I reviewed. Izik is very flexible with the edits smilemeowth

midnight siren
jagged ledge
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And with all due respect, Izik, some needed edits heehee

midnight siren
hexed fog
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thats why we need others to do our entries

dull folio
jagged ledge
midnight siren
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i'm just afraid i'll misread the google sheet cause of my eye issues and aprove stuff i shouldn't mrshrug

jagged ledge
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Don't do drugs kids

hexed fog
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Don't do drugs kids

dull folio
hexed fog
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NO

jagged ledge
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Not even then

hexed fog
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NO KIDS

dull folio
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Unless your in the swamp hut then it’s fair game

midnight siren
hexed fog
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I never procreated for a reason I cannot be trusted

jagged ledge
hexed fog
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I consistently teach my niece incorrect colors and letters

dull folio
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Ik Ik drugs bad I’ve been taught all that

hexed fog
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🟩 this is blue
🟦 this is red

jagged ledge
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Are you colorblind?

midnight siren
hexed fog
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ok yes(green red) but I do it on purpose lol

midnight siren
jagged ledge
hexed fog
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"What does the cat say? Woof!"

dull folio
jagged ledge
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...

midnight siren
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i'm currently transitioning into building programs instead of having to actually do stuff in class allthethings

jagged ledge
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Oooh fun

hexed fog
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sounds like you guys have a bunch of pokedex ideas evil why not use them on the wild list

dull folio
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I’ve just done a bunch of mock exams so I’m just happy I’m done for the rest of the year

dull folio
midnight siren
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i need to finish my minior pokefan ASAP

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i got 6 sprites i'm hoping to get done in the next hour or two

jagged ledge
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I actually really like teaching. I was a teaching assistant at my Synagogue's Hebrew School for a while and there's this one Hebrew letter that basically no one cares about and didn't even having a good trick to remember it in the textbook, so I made one up as a kid and used it in my teaching. The kids actually learned to remember the letter and the other assistants were amazed heehee

dull folio
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You would honestly be a great teacher, you’ve taught me half of the grammar I’ve picked up and I’m genuinely using some of the stuff you guys have taught me in my English lessons. You guys are great people and I really appreciate you helping me and others out you guys are great HeartMail

midnight siren
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i have so many things like that, a load of them passed down from my mum who's also a teacher

jagged ledge
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I also find it funny because sometimes explaining things to someone else helps me remember the things my brain just kinda processes in the background lol

midnight siren
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i'm just mostly maths/CompSci heehee

jagged ledge
midnight siren
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its so much nicer, cause i know if the kids mess up for a fact

dull folio
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Don’t mention it and keep it up, really helping us all out

midnight siren
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as opposed to like marking writing where you can mark grammar and spelling, but overall text is more vague in terms of how to mark it thorns

dull folio
midnight siren
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i need to get better at remember grammar terms before i become an unown, i can look at a thing and say it looks wrong, but like forget which kind of clause it needs heehee

dull folio
jagged ledge
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I get flashbacks of Junior High "A FOURTH test about commas!?" And now here I am as an editor like "Thank goodness I studied commas so much omg..." heehee

hexed fog
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tbf alot of my entries be like:

POKENAME consumes seeds by inhaling them through the bottom of its nose. Its magnetic force increases the more seeds it stores internally.

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chaos.

jagged ledge
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Ok if we're calling you out...

hexed fog
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I imagine this thing has just a hollow stone body

midnight siren
jagged ledge
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But most of your entries are really good. smilemeowth

jagged ledge
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And that's fair, it is a good premise! I just had to find a second sentence to go with it lmao

hexed fog
midnight siren
hexed fog
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dude Axew and Gabite line entries are the WORST

midnight siren
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i mean axew at least as the regenerating teeth and stuff to give it something

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gabite does suck tho

hollow tapir
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I like gible line but it’s hard to write

midnight siren
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i mean i think gible's pretty easy, just go down the friendly nibble esq route allthethings

hexed fog
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i think ive done a couple things like going over its scales

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or its ability to glide

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like i feel like gf was like "Dragon is dragon"

brazen flicker
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Is POKENAME counted in the character count? I am ONE character over the limit cry

hexed fog
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whats your entry we can trim

midnight siren
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at least it gives us some freedom of characterisation mrshrug

brazen flicker
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Its wings must slowly grow fluff to have enough surface area to fly. They're a popular choice for farmers, who laud the fluff for its water-resistant capabilities, but they shear at the risk of leaving POKENAME defenseless.

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"have enough" could be replaced with sum (the original entry was longer that I choppped) but can't think of what atm

midnight siren
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you could just remove must Thonking

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i'm thinking that condensing but must be careful about how much they shear would be useful

brazen flicker
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I could see it, but I think removing must wouldn't convey how I want it to

brazen flicker
hexed fog
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they shear at risk

brazen flicker
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Does that still work? I haven't used that style(?) of writing before

hexed fog
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saying at?

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yeah I'd approve it

midnight siren
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yeah, it def works

hexed fog
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I'd probably move POKENAME to the front of the entry though

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and its to the end

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but like... it's really not that serious

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one thing you have to always remember with all of the dex entries is... none of us are getting paid for this.

this is a pokemon fangame.

it's gonne be ok.

brazen flicker
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Ya right ya right

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hmm I wanted to see if I could mention something about ti throwing the fluff at things but don't think I have room

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The froakie entries call it bubbles for wtv reason

hexed fog
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getting too attached to any one entry leads to soooo much heartache if you get hyperfixated on the small things

brazen flicker
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Tru

hexed fog
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remember, theres 500k+ pokemon

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the odds of it even being seen are slim to none

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I am SUCH a party pooper

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anyway I'm going to quick get my 34 to 50 and play a videogame

dull folio
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I’m going to sleep now that I’ve submitted my dex doku in absolutely shattered lmao

midnight siren
brazen flicker
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Milotic/Luvdisc:
POKENAME will win mates if it has the most vibrant pink and blue. Recent studies have shown that ocean pollution can dull its colors, which may explain why the population has declined.
Bisharp/Venusaur:
It mercilessly defends its canopied territory, and it is so violent that only a handful have ever been caught. Despite its nature, there is a one-of-a-kind photograph depicting a POKENAME at peace with a Fletchling on its arm.

For the milo/luv, does "boldest pink and blue" strike enough? I'm trying to convey "who has neon colors" basically
For the Bis/Venu, does it convey the "look at this super violent thing it can have peaceful emotions" and is Bulbaling the correct way to reference other Pkmn?

brazen flicker
midnight siren
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I played it like 3-4 years ago, encounter a mime jr autogen fusion and have been trapped in spriter jail since smh

brazen flicker
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Spriter jail?

midnight siren
brazen flicker
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VIBRANT THATS THE WORD IM LOOKING FOR THANK YOUUU

midnight siren
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In terms of the “Bulbaling”, generally referring to other fusions can get confusing so I’d recommend avoiding it unless it’s in the evo line (e.g. talking about venusaur/talonflame and referring to bulbaling). you could change it to simply be a Fletchling mrshrug

midnight siren
brazen flicker
hexed fog
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k thats 50

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The Pile sits at 922

midnight siren
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glad it’s not my job to sort allthethings

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although I think I will apply for unown soon

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once I hit 100 entries approved

hexed fog
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do eet

brazen flicker
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Uhhh how do I forward messages to threads if possible-
I saw someone else do it for dexdoku entries and have my completed entries in a priv server

midnight siren
# hexed fog do eet

I think I have to at this point, the amount of people telling me to is getting insane heehee

brazen flicker
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Both, but pc is easier Id assume

midnight siren
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I mean they’re both simple, just different so I don’t wanna give bad info lol

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aight, so PC: hover over the message you want to forward. There’s a little toolbar that appears above the top right. there will be an arrow that curves round to the right, click it and you will be prompted to say which channel you want to share to

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I’m just not sure if it works cross servers

brazen flicker
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I tried to do that+search the channel name but didnt pop up for sum reason

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Odd and now it shows on mobile

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Curse you discord

midnight siren
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technology is a right pain thorns

brazen flicker
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Good god @hexed fog you've done over 5k entries wtf-

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That's one fourth of all entries.

hexed fog
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theres no proof

jagged ledge
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What do you call the Dex Sheet?

willow venture
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The Dheets

clever loom
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POKENAME is a very kind Pokémon, it can be seen swimming gracefully and showing off moves to other Pokémon. They also are great indicator of the ecosystem's state as they struggle in polluted waters.

grave rampart
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Pokémon itself is plural. No need for the s at the end of it.

clever loom
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I wonder if this is the case in french too but i think not...

anyways thanks !

grave rampart
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Anytime.

clever loom
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Well, i've added a lot of s for nothing then !

fresh gazelle
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is this entry too small/vague?
Despite its size, POKENAME produces fruits in a matter of hours every time its fruit is removed.

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seems about the size of Tropius' official entry

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ok why do I feel like the banana is misaligned by one pixel now?

little gulch
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its not it's

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Also it seems slightly too short

fresh gazelle
craggy beacon
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Yeah but you should be using its, not it's

little gulch
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No, what I mean is that here is not "it's", but it's the possessive "its"

craggy beacon
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it's is "it is"
its is possessive

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Important distinction trueroaches

fresh gazelle
craggy beacon
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yes way

little gulch
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In both cases

fresh gazelle
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that's an actual rule?

little gulch
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So much that it had to be pinned catLaugh

craggy beacon
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so yes

fresh gazelle
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but I might just have forgotten about it

craggy beacon
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i do!

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and im currently a student, so heehee

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...and a writer of nearly my whole life but i digress

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but yeah that's a grammar rule. it's is not possessive

fresh gazelle
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5 years ago I fucked up by not remembering the difference between 'wanna' and 'gonna'

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which is pretty stupid ik

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I used to think the usage of its with no ' was always typos

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up until now

craggy beacon
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yeah na

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it had to be different because if you use ' with posessive its

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it just looks like it is

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which reads weird

fresh gazelle
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ok I am not very creative with writing entries

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I could be better at it if I was currently playing

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because I like to make stories in my mind

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but I ain't

craggy beacon
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you could add another sentence about the quality of the fruit

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OR

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taking from reality

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the fruit being a sort of defense mechanism so the pokemon itself isnt eaten, but its fruit is

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(less defense mechanism more uhh. survival mechanism)

fresh gazelle
little gulch
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Maybe give the fruit a specific taste or effect based on Pokémon berries?

craggy beacon
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nanab berries, aka the bananas of the pokemon world, restore health

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so... maybe

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somethin with that

compact marsh
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I’m thinking up a Pokédex entry for pakern (paras/sunkern) here’s what I’m thinking

Despite feeding in shaded areas pakern chooses to bask in the sun. At night their mushrooms glow with a faint light leading others to safe food sources causing them to swarm

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Any thoughts?

jagged ledge
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I would say "wittles down small trees" or "trims spare branches" but otherwise looks good.

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I would just specify "This habit has led", but otherwise, looks pretty good.

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Could possibly need some tweaks at the very end like "only use the swords to protect its home when necessary." but otherwise looks good.

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The first sentence is a little redundant. It would be easier to just say "POKENAME has a natural knack for dancing." Or something similar. Also a smirk would be more smug than a smile.

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I'm a little confused what the intention of the first sentence is. Who is it asking for while crying about its needs? Also your second sentence combines two different ideas in a slightly rushed way.

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Saying "walk on land" instead of "be on land" would help provide a clearer picture. I would change "prefers the depths of the water" to "prefers living underwater." Since you have "depths of the ocean" later.

compact marsh
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I love this specific part of the process I really hope I can one day say I contributed to this, I hope the one I come up with is ok 🙂

jagged ledge
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Oh of course, sorry I'm a little busy with some other reviews for an event, I can look over your entry real quick while I'm here

hollow tapir
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Damn I gotta lot of work to do Despair

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With the Ho oh baby looking fusion I essentially was just trying to play into the idea it was recently born

jagged ledge
jagged ledge
hollow tapir
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I’m trying my best I swear

jagged ledge
jagged ledge
compact marsh
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I meant pakern leads other pakerns to food in the forest

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I can give it another try

hollow tapir
jagged ledge
jagged ledge
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So quick question: How do people use them to end relationships?

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A very cute concept, but I'm a little worried that it's a little too civilized/humanoid? How would it know about Romance Media?

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Gotta go for now, but that should be at least a first batch of revisions for everyone.

hollow tapir
hollow tapir
chrome bane
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If anyones looking to flex their creative jellies, I'd be curious to see what you guys could come up with for these 2 sprites of mine. I literally got nothing for them. I made these sprites ages ago because I ended up with the mon in a random playthrough.

Props to anyone here who can actually make some cool pokedex entries for these 2 weird balloons dancers

compact marsh
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The first one reminds me of a tiki dancer and the second could arguably just be a larger one

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Or you could say once it has reached mastery in a chosen dance form it ascends to the clouds, it is a rare event. They are seen as peaceful dancing gods serving as an inspiration to Driflcorio

hexed fog
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That will be denied

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Per the faq we cannot describe any pokemon as gods

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I will look when I get to my pc. Typing via phone suckssss

timid sky
hexed fog
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We don't question the frog

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Honestly it is a slippery slope. Most of those rules are because people have no chill

willow venture
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I feel like the rule only exists purely to make reviewing things so much easier lol

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Even if everyone here understood intuitively how to write 'god-like pokemon' in a dex entry in a way that makes it work I think the workload will just be insane in terms of really parsing the nuance of how god-like can a pokemon be or how much this godly powerset makes sense with a certain fusion

split gulch
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Tbf it also opens up for more unique entries for all fusions of Arces, Dialga, Palkia, etc because otherwise I’d assume people would just write down “POKENAME is the lord and creator of insert thing here” for all of them lmao.

craggy beacon
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our lord and savior

clever loom
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Despite being composed uniquely of rocks and knowing it, POKENAME still behaves as small Plant type, trying to bloom.

craggy beacon
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FullAzusob what a lad

clever loom
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Even after a fight is lost POKNAME still will cheer the losing Pokémon, secretly feasting on their negativity.
Even after a fight is won POKNAME still will cheer the winning Pokémon, secretly feasting on their positivity.

clever loom
split gulch
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I made the sequel to my last one. How does this look?

clever loom
hexed fog
chrome bane
hexed fog
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1278 wild entries remain

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think we can get it under 1000 this weekend?

jagged ledge
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Under 1200 definitely

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1000 might be a stretch. Some people are on vacation.

clever loom
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What do wild entries refer to ? I've seen that a lot and still couldn't guess

midnight siren
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entries for pokemon found in the wild

clever loom
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Oh ! thanks !

hollow nimbus
dense meteor
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https://www.fusiondex.org/165.416/
Mostly keeping to itself, POKENAME is heard more often than seen. Though rare, sightings indicate a widespread range throughout the world's forests.

https://www.fusiondex.org/165.369/
The tear in POKENAME's stomach is present in all recorded specimens. Whatever is inside the shell seems to have long outgrown it.

https://www.fusiondex.org/166.369/
Though it has no recorded history of violence towards humans, POKENAME's imposing figure and unsettling stillness make it the subject of a few horror stories.

FusionDex

Ledyolett communicate using a fluid that they secrete from where the legs join the body.. HP: 46. Attack: 56. Defense: 43.
Special Attack: 38. Special Defense: 70. Speed: 41. Sprite by jacobtmm.

FusionDex

Ledylurk communicate using a fluid that they secrete from where the legs join the body.. HP: 56. Attack: 89. Defense: 63.
Special Attack: 45. Special Defense: 80. Speed: 55. Sprite by moon_tah.

FusionDex

It is said that in lands with clean air, where the stars fill the sky, there live many Ledlurk.. HP: 66. Attack: 94. Defense: 70.
Special Attack: 55. Special Defense: 100. Speed: 65. Sprite by moon_tah.

hexed fog
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Ok i got up to that natu done heehee

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The Pile has hit 960. Be strong my bretherin

flint tinsel
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Chennekie, the Trio Sprout Pokémon. This playful Pokémon embodies a surprising blend of energies. Its soft, moss-like fur belies a swift and agile body, and it's known to puff out small, warm embers when it's particularly excited.

Brailladier, the Blazing Knight Pokémon. This evolved form stands with a noble and protective aura. Its fiery mane burns brighter with its conviction, and its leafy armor is surprisingly resilient, allowing it to move with a powerful grace in battle.

Cheninphox, the Mystic Guardian Pokémon. This majestic Pokémon radiates an aura of profound wisdom and controlled power. Its movements are precise and graceful, and it can unleash devastating torrents of psychic energy or fiery bursts from its intricate, flowing mane.
Pokedex entry ideas for the Kalos starters triple fusion line. Sorry if the post is to big.

jagged ledge
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We don't currently have a way to give Pokedex entries to Triple Fusions. Apologies.

craggy beacon
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Sorry if the post is to big
must be new here Quagless

ebon warren
# flint tinsel Chennekie, the Trio Sprout Pokémon. This playful Pokémon embodies a surprising b...

Yeah posts having a lot of words is part of the whole thing about this thread so that's usually not an issue.

Triple fusion sprites don't have custom Dex entries at this point.
Also, entries cannot be submitted without a sprite that is already in the game. The only exception is for PIF2 but you'd still need to have a specific sprite for which you write the entry.
You can try to find sprites that have already been made for any of the Kalos starters and write entries for any of those. Preferably you'd choose any fusion combinations of the Kalos evolutionary lines that do NOT already have entries, but you can also write entries for any fusion sprite even if it already has one or more entries written for it (just not if you've written a prior entry for that exact sprite).

clever loom
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POKENAME is one of the best companions possible for a gardener; it can water plants that needs it and heal the ill ones. The only part POKENAME is defenseless against dealing with Bug-type pests.

hexed fog
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1239 wild mons remain

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cmon gimme more remedies created with pokemon parts

hollow nimbus
clever loom
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; that is the semicolon right ?

dense meteor
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https://www.fusiondex.org/421.29/

After POKENAME digs up a gem deposit, it rolls around, assimilating the crystal into its soft flesh. Hunted by Pokémon and humans alike, POKENAME spends most of its time hiding in tunnel networks.
https://www.fusiondex.org/421.30/
Miners are often instructed to kill POKENAME on sight. With POKENAME's poison spines and vicious nature, the task is quite unsafe, and such policies tend to be resisted by unions.
https://www.fusiondex.org/421.31/
It has been hypothesized that POKENAME are biologically immortal. In caves untouched by humans, specimens have been found with gems covering the entire body.

FusionDex

It digs branching holes in caves using its sharp claws in search of food--raw gems. When enraged, it releases a horrible toxin from its horn. HP: 51. Attack: 56. Defense: 59.
Special Attack: 56. Special Defense: 56. Speed: 44. Sprite by Not Found.

FusionDex

It digs branching holes in caves using its sharp claws in search of food--raw gems. This Pokémon is at its strongest when it is defending its young. HP: 63. Attack: 79. Defense: 83.
Special Attack: 68. Special Defense: 71. Speed: 67. Sprite by onix98.

dense meteor
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https://www.fusiondex.org/421.152/
POKENAME's leaf is vestigial; at some point in every POKENAME's life, the withered, gem encrusted thing will finally fall off.
https://www.fusiondex.org/421.153/
While the gems on POKENAME's crown and tail are collected from the ground, the ones on its neck are grown through a precipitation process.
https://www.fusiondex.org/421.154/
Archeological evidence indicates that POKENAME was sacred to many prehistoric cave dwelling humans. Today, it is highly endangered and fervently protected.

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I love Sableye sm

jagged ledge
dense meteor
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think fusion dex is just spotty right now unforch

sonic pollen
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anyone else getting error 404 and 500 trying to access the fusion dex site or is it just me?

midnight siren
sonic pollen
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ah alright

craggy beacon
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treat it like a comma and period space wise

hexed fog
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I lost track of time while playing skyrim and burned 4 hrs of my weekend. I will get the rest if the approvals done today and shell out some entries

hexed fog
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ok thats 50 entries

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The Pile has hit 1006

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the remaining wild entries are sitting at 1161

jagged ledge
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I'll try to get some done tomorrow night, but definitely hopefully Monday? We'll see. I'm honestly a little burnt out lol

molten pendant
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Guys, I wanna help, what can I do?

sonic tusk
timid sky
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Alright @jagged ledge, since it's been a while since I've done a Dexdoku, I decided to do multiple this time. So here are my 3 dexdokus:

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While dim witted on their own, if POKENAME are able to shake hands with others of their kind they can form a network between their brains to increase their intelligence.

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Dexdoku #2:
When the branch it carries starts to produce larger bubbles, POKENAME swims to the ocean floor to receive visions of the future. It uses its psychic powers to create whirlpools to ensure that it is not disturbed.

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Dexdoku #3:
POKENAME searches abandoned mines for fluorescent minerals which it burns for fuel. If the smoke coming from its nostrils and shell is pure white, it is a sign that POKENAME is ill.

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And those are my Dexdokus done. What's that look for? All of those fusions fit every square on the board, so they should all count as their own Dexdoku heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee heehee Trollgar TrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgarTrollgar||ok fine, Yawn/Psychic for Necrozma/Torkoal, Yawn\Future Sight for Kingdra/Delphox and Yawn/Gen 5+ for Reuniclus/Slowbro||

dry spruce
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Is this a good dex entry for a Jirachi and Poliwhirl fusion: If POKENAME looks at you, you will be forced to tell it your greatest desires. Though it can stay in space, it hangs out in small lakes where it has all the control.

brazen flicker
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Oh wait another dexdoku has started I was so busy this wk I couldnt re edit last wk's entries-

jagged ledge
brazen flicker
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Im not sure how it works, but are the entries I submitted being put on the sheet to go into the game, or will I have to submit them thru the forms manually?

round cave
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#1391453009325723769
POKENAME captures its prey by hiding in underwater sand with its horns sticking out, appearing to be two pointy rocks. When unsuspecting fish Pokémon swim between them, POKENAME grabs them, jumps out of the sand, and eagerly eats them.

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I kinda feel the first sentence is too long, but I'm not sure how to split it

timid sky
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You can remove the “the” in between “in” and “underwater”

brazen flicker
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You could experiment w removing the "with its horns", since its clear from the sentence before that its grabbing them w the horns

midnight siren
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you could change “POKENAME grabs them with its horns, jumps out of the sand” to “POKENAME jumps out of the sand to grab them” Thonking

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if you’re trying to cut down on the first sentence, you could try and remove the end of sentence clause?

hexed fog
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@rugged socket can I tempt you into doing these quagsires

jagged ledge
rugged socket
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I'll do a couple today, going away next week so won't be able to get any more done until next weekend

jagged ledge
midnight siren
hexed fog
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Misty has been blowing it tf up

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ok thats 40... I'll do 10 more later

hollow tapir
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I still need to redo some of my entries… mainly baby ho oh one

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And figure out if I can use some words similar to romance media that aren’t as strange to have happen

midnight siren
jagged ledge
hollow tapir
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Other one I just don’t know

midnight siren
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could you chuck the entry in here so I can see the context Thonking

hollow tapir
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It’s in here already but I can reply to it

midnight siren
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that’d be helpful allthethings

hollow tapir
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Lmao you reacted to it too

midnight siren
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did I?

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sounds like me to forget about it heehee

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you could change it to “love stories”?

hollow tapir
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You did allthethings

midnight siren
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or you could simply change “media” to “films”

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ig the question there would be if a Pokémon could be said to watch films tho heehee

hollow tapir
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Can pokemon read??

midnight siren
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some probably

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wth was that autocorrect heehee

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that’s all the ideas I have, my brain is not functioning today

hollow tapir
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Idk if a fish meteor can read

hollow nimbus
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A Pokémon might watch a movie if it happens to be playing near them (think like, a cat watching the tv in the living room), but it's debatable how much the Pokémon understands

little gulch
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Some Pokémon are defined as smart or sentient. Not saying they would read, but they might be interested in pictures or movies

midnight siren
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I do think that luv/minior probably is the latter being optimistic heehee

hollow tapir
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I’ll just say romance films then

dull folio
hexed fog
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@dry spruce please be sure to read the rules when submitting entries

hexed fog
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we are at 1096 entries

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remaining

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the wild lsit is dwindlinggggg

dull folio
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Not done many in a while I’ll try and bang out a bunch when I have more time tomorrow 👍

rugged socket
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I think my drag queen entry is sick haha, Quag Deen

rugged socket
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Right that's me done for the evening, got a few Quagsires done, feel free to take the rest or I'll tackle them next weekend

hollow tapir
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I should be helping but damn braincells and other video games

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I fell off fr

hexed fog
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If fed cheese, extra tails erupt from POKENAME's body as it screeches for more. It will trap people behind a Barrier if it senses more cheese nearby, thick saliva dripping from its maw.

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raticate entries acting like cheese is some kind of narcotic is end goals

jagged ledge
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Hey guys! I just wanted to ask everyone what kind of potential future Writing Events you would like to see.

terse pawn
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Darkrai/Lugia 347.249 Sprite by kattenkg

POKENAME is a fusion made by an evil organization in an attempt to close the hearts of Pokémon. Its dark storms have loomed over the Orre region.

split gulch
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A pack of wild POKENAME will use the bulbs on their backs to disguise themselves as plants on farms. They will lie in wait until night, when they will get up and feast on all the crops in the fields when the farmer is none the wiser.

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How does this look?

hollow nimbus
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If there is an event that occurs in the life of every member of a species and it is not obvious that this could easily happen for every individual, I think entries should use the plural tense to help make that more clear

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Additionally, fusions cannot be solely the result of human manufacturing, as fusion can occur in the wild.
You could say that the evil organization discovered the Pokémon or introduced the species to the Orre region, though

hollow tapir
jagged ledge
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Rejected SmugCatSneasel /hj

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But genuinely, there will probably be easier event categories down the line lol

terse pawn
craggy beacon
jagged ledge
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I mean my question is specifically for Dex Events, but I'm sure there's always input for new event ideas

rugged socket
# jagged ledge Hey guys! I just wanted to ask everyone what kind of potential future Writing Ev...

Maybe like a collective one? Something like a 10x10 grid with Pokémon on the row, and ideas on the column (like how izik pops up every now and then saying 10 Pokémon that can grow a beard or whatever, or a certain word you want the entry to contain). We then all work together to fill the grid. Prizes could be that you get to choose a Pokémon for the next grid, and could be given to the best entry, the most prolific writer and maybe a random lucky square that you choose and keep secret and whoever fills it wins. Could start at once a month or so, working cooperatively rather than competitively might make it different enough from DexDoku

jagged ledge
dull folio
unkempt plinth
rugged socket
unkempt plinth
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Or you mean, something like the theme blizt generator, but will indicate if has custom entries ?*

rugged socket
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So shouldn't need a tool:)

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I actually don't know what the theme blitz is haha

unkempt plinth
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That, but will indicate if the sprite has a custom entries, somewhere.

rugged socket
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Ahhh

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So that is a possibility, but I was thinking the top row as is, but the column would be like a concept, to give you an idea of how to shape the entry

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Not a specific Pokémon

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But it would be useful in general to be able to search if a Pokémon has an entry, without looking in the Google Sheet

unkempt plinth
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One for check entries from one writer or one spriter or one pokemon.
The second, for check which custom sprite has a custom entrie (black background).

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Like you can see here ^^ (but the sprite who appear is random between main, if multiple main, the black background may not appear) (i need to put priority on custom entries)

jagged ledge
dull folio
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I mean it could just be submitted after the event, the sprite just needs to be posted for the submission, like old dexdoku before the google form

jagged ledge
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Just seems like a lot more manual work and an odd time gap for an event that doesn't show results for two months is all. mrshrug I'm not saying no, I'm just saying it's an odd situation.

dull folio
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Fair enough Nice

jagged ledge
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We could maybe see about Spritepack Release Events? Where Spriters from the latest Sprite Pack can request entries for their Sprites here right away?

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I make no promises because at that point it's more on the Spriters if we want it to be truly collaborative, but I might make note of "Spritepack Release Rush" or something.

dull folio
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Alr then just making suggestions I’ll try and think of some others heehee

ebon warren
# unkempt plinth

Making the background color change would suffice.
So white could be no custom entry and green could be one custom entry and blue could be multiple custom entries maybe?
BUT that runs into issues with multiple sprites. So we'd have to adjust a little for that.
Then perhaps we could have white for no custom sprites and red for multiple custom sprites with no custom entries and orange for multiple custom sprites with at least one but not all missing a custom entry and yellow for one custom sprite without a custom entry and green for one custom sprite with a custom entry and blue for multiple custom sprites with only one that is missing a custom entry and purple for multiple custom sprites and all have custom entries perhaps.
Honestly it's tricky, this may not even be specific enough but at least covers enough of the bases

unkempt plinth
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Not a bad idea.

amber mulch
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Umbreon/Noivern 197.441 Sprite by kokotherabbit, Rescuers use Pokename's rings of light from the sky to search for missing trainers. Its appearence bring a sound mind to those who see it.

midnight siren
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as in it’s basically the same event but with dex entries lol

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could be interesting to do a dex version tho

rugged socket
rugged socket
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Guess all the good ideas are already taken haha

midnight siren
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fair enough lol, it’s an event I run mini-maps for

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the only real difference is that your suggestion has all squared revealed from the start, whereas prize hunters reveals as you go along

midnight siren
craggy beacon
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saw this and was shot back to my elementary signet room Pronto

hexed fog
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We need 10 pokemon that utilize mineshafts

topaz stream
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guys how do I remove a dex submission, I messed up 😅

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<@&1210701164426039366>

hollow nimbus
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You can just let us know, and we'll deny it for you

topaz stream
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no I just sent it, for my loudred/swalot fusion (521.536)

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I put in the dex entry of its evo on accident

topaz stream
hollow nimbus
hollow nimbus
topaz stream
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yup, thx

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sorry for the trouble lul

topaz stream
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third time's the charm

hollow nimbus
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Make sure to double check your work before hitting submit 😅

topaz stream
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yeahhh 🥲

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sorry again

analog radish
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Hi guys I SUBMITTED A FEW ENTRIES AND THIS IS THE MOST FUN IVE HAD WITH POKEMON IN A LONG TIME. I love thinking about the lives of these strange creatures

topaz stream
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POKENAME absorbs minerals and nutrients by driving its tail into the ground and bouncing, like an oil pump. The jagged peridot atop its head amplifies its psychic powers, but thanks to its iron-like skin, it feels no pain from the sharp edges.

feedback?

analog radish
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DUDE AWESOME

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I know i just got here but can i make a teeny tiny suggestion

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Really cool how it covers so much... i like this bouncy guy...

analog radish
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Idk if thats the kind of feedback you were looking for BUT in terms of actual content THIS IS REALLY COOL and detailed

topaz stream
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mhm mhm

analog radish
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OF COURSE BRO

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IM EXCITED TO SEE MORE (If you write more)

topaz stream
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I intend on doing so lul

analog radish
twin vapor
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Minior meteor/Mareanie (498.454)
POKENAME soars through the ozone layer, catching small meteors in it's tentacles and devouring them to reinforce it's shell.

analog radish
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This is so freaking cool im just picturing it soaring up there

midnight siren
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it's means it is, whereas its is possessive

twin vapor
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definitely

terse pawn
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It is believed that wild POKENAME will appear to pure hearted trainers who have formed very close bonds with their Pokémon.

analog radish
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WHAT A CUTIE OMG And thats super fitting for it i think

midnight siren
twin vapor
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thank you Lawrence and Dragon Hunter both! i really appreciate the help

midnight siren
midnight siren
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i hang around here pretty often to help with entries nonpif

analog radish
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I might need your help in the future btw so if you see me post stuff feel free to give feedback

midnight siren
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i've written a few entries like that lol, recently made a dumbo-style sprite a proficient predator by falling out of the sky onto its prey heehee

analog radish
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LMAOOOOO

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squish everything 😭

unkempt plinth
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Not your "Blue Dragoon"

midnight siren
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oh yeah, that's a big thing

unkempt plinth
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For know, because i update my website every week with the entries. When they are approved then moved to the approved ? For not updated my website too often for nothing

terse pawn
midnight siren
midnight siren
unkempt plinth
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I wonder if unown ping people about this issue ? 🤔

terse pawn
midnight siren
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zap them needs a with after it

terse pawn
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Slight oversight

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but thanks

midnight siren
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personally i would change are known to -> will, but that's more preference

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ok so currently you're refering to POKENAME as both plural and as a singluar - you need to only have one or the other

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as you use plural twice and singular once, i'd suggest changing the singular

terse pawn
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Alright

midnight siren
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which is a wild POKENAME

terse pawn
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I just remove "a"

midnight siren
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not quite - you would need to remove were to as well

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so the start would read If wild POKENAME witness Pokémon

twin vapor
# twin vapor

as for adding a little more to their pokedex entry, how about this simple addition to set it up for the core version i still need to write 😆
POKENAME soars through the ozone layer, catching small meteors in its tentacles and devouring them to reinforce its shell. When this shell grows too heavy, POKENAME crashes to the ground.

midnight siren
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i like it! just remember that every dex entry should be standalone

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so you can do a core entry with a similar throughline, but don't refer back to this one

hollow tapir
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Dragon can you help me again plz Despair

twin vapor
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Minior (core)/ Mareanie (499.454)
Without the weight of its shell POKENAME becomes a small but dangerous predator of Rock-type Pokémon, especially Corsola. After devouring enough minerals, the shell reforms and POKENAME returns home.

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thanks!

hollow tapir
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I imagine it going yoink and just Chomping through em like nothing

midnight siren
midnight siren
twin vapor
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in an effort to avoid too many clauses with the later mention of corsola, if i were to change it to small but dangerous , would that work too? i think it sounds better anyways, phrasing changed.

hollow tapir
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Need to redo this one cause it’s weird

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Like I enjoy the idea but it is weirdly phrased yk

midnight siren
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hmmm, it's an awkward one for sure

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give me a min and i'll see what i can come up with nonpif

midnight siren
# hollow tapir Need to redo this one cause it’s weird

POKENAME's cries for help when newly born can reach 120 decibels. When upset, it will burn its surroundings to ash. Despite this, many people search for POKENAME because of its feathers. - reworked a bit, but smth like this?

hollow tapir
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I just wanted to be like ah yes. Baby

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Okay wait I love that rewording

midnight siren
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ik it's changed a lot, i thought vocal could be changed to something like loud, and just thought some of those other elements flow better

midnight siren
hollow tapir
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Nah just that one

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Am I allowed to just steal that wording

midnight siren
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i'm happy for that

jagged ledge
midnight siren
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yea, i was just going for an approximate rewording mrshrug

jagged ledge
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No worries, I appreciate the effort and ideas

hollow tapir
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I mean I feel like if it’s a baby it’s just in general crying out for help but idk

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Or maybe like an. Abandoned type bird situation?

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But idk if that would work for the whole species

jagged ledge
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I mean probably? I would argue a habit of needing help and crying would make more sense for a species than an individual. It is just a bit of an odd situation since Ho-Oh can't typically breed. Thonking

hollow tapir
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Yeah that’s my bad I just saw what I interpreted as baby bird and ran with it

jagged ledge
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Sorry I'm also just a little out of it right now.

hollow tapir
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nah nah youre good

hexed fog
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Enjoy these prompts and get that free sprite!

hexed fog
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@bleak gull please be sure to only put in entries for sprites already in the game

terse tide
fresh gazelle
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Some POKENAME can fly for short periods of time using the wing-shaped like leaves on their back. Despite its size, POKENAME produces fruits in a matter of hours every time its fruit is removed.
are we good now?

midnight siren
fresh gazelle
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right, thx!

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done

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now I copy and paste it and post

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only two more to go

midnight siren
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i would also change wing-shaped like leaves to wing-like leaves

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or wings shaped like leaves / wing-shaped leaves

fresh gazelle
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nobody complained about my cursed sprites for the horsea line, so I thin they good

fresh gazelle
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sounds more proffessional

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which is what the dex should sound like

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tbh

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Some POKENAME can fly for short periods of time using the wings made of leaves on their back. Despite its size, POKENAME produces a new fruit in a matter of hours every time its fruit is removed.

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they're actually made of leaves

midnight siren
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reason being -shaped and like are doing basically the same thing in the sentence

fresh gazelle
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I also changed the second sentence

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because it's a singular fruit

midnight siren
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looks good to me smilemeowth

fresh gazelle
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thx!

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now I just gotta think of something for these guys

midnight siren
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if you want any help, feel free to ping me smilemeowth

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should be around for help for the next 2-3 hours or so

fresh gazelle
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wait, since when is Vine Whip an egg move?

midnight siren
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  1. swim closer: doesn't really tell us anything, i think it should be swim close
  2. can: (in my opinion) the word that can ruin an entry the most. saying a fusion can do something tells us very little about the species as a whole. i generally suggest that saying a fusion does something works better. TL:DR remove can.
  3. menaced: personal preference, i would make it intimidated
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it is a shorter entry, which is fine, but i do think you could add a bit more. no pressure to tho, that's purely personal preference

fresh gazelle
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I don't know what else to add tbh

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can removed

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I think it's all fixed then, but I'll leave posting for later in case I have any new ideas

midnight siren
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as i say its purely personal preference, i prefer writing/reading longer entries mrshrug

hexed fog
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make your life easier

fresh gazelle
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POKENAME swim close to the surface and sunbathe for hours every day. When threatened, it shoots seeds and dangerous powders to drive predators away.

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I think shooots is more appropriate

hexed fog
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@livid swift please use your correct username going fwd, I will fix your entry this time

silk sedge
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Just submitted:
Natural hydraulics allow POKENAME to launch their durable bodies at speeds exceeding that of 150km/h. Due to their strength, few are willing to disturb the calm, peaceful lives POKENAME lead.
Short, sweet, straight to the point. Thoughts?

hexed fog
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Rejoice! we are officially under 1000 wild entries!

hexed fog
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The Pile is back over 1000 :J

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theres officially more in the pile than team wild entries remaining lol

silk sedge
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just in time for hoenn

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wild entries though, assuming those are naturally appearing fusions?

hexed fog
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correct

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this list

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is what is remaining

silk sedge
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where can I find it

hexed fog
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the tab is on the bottom of the document

silk sedge
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ty

silk sedge
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drawing a blank, do dex entries capitalize the word pokemon?

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nvm

topaz stream
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yall are the dex entries we put along with sprites on the sprite gallery getting added? I recall seeing something on that but I can't find that post again

silk sedge
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ending off my first little dex submission streak on a great note

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the two sylveon minior fusions, real happy little entries

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"omen of positive change" stuff

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rewriting from memory
"On clear, starry nights, POKENAME shed their shells and dance about the sky in a display of joy. People around the world will hold pop-up festivals beneath these POKENAME in celebration of transformation and hope."

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With the core entry being more along the lines of "omen of positive change"

hexed fog
hexed fog
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I applaud Venopog

silk sedge
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Tyvm george, words are just half of writing

brazen flicker
hollow tapir
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Correction: it’ll mean gramps is out of a job

jagged ledge
vague umbra
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Okay, I hope this one works for the hypothetical fusion I made months ago. It goes as follows:
"It's often a debate that POKENAME is a fusion or not, as the Pokémon don't directly have their body shapes changed in anyway. However, It is said that it was their bond that was fused, not the body. It's unknown if this is correct or not, but the bond the Pokémon share are as close as a knight and a princess, which is pretty close."

hexed fog
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What sprite?

midnight siren
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also what izik said

hexed fog
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Sprites need to be in the game before making an entry

hexed fog
topaz stream
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I'm between these two:

POKENAME fuse peridot shards into their chlorophyll-rich bodies, increasing their psychic power. When absorbing minerals from the earth, they dance in a strange way, releasing psionic pulses as a means to confuse possible attackers.

POKENAME fuse peridot shards into their chlorophyll-rich bodies, increasing their psychic power. When absorbing minerals with their tails, they dance in a strange way, releasing psionic pulses as a means to confuse possible attackers.

twin vapor
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When this Pokémon builds up enough swimming speed its flames erupt, allowing POKENAME to rocket through the sky at over 300 meters per second before returning to the waves.

silk sedge
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is the whole POKENAME thing looking for an exact string, or can I slap a 's on the end of it

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ie; "POKENAME's allies"

topaz stream
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I think you can put 's by it? pretty sure

twin vapor
undone karma
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Need help with a Dex entry for this, as here’s what I have so far:

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POKENAME are rebellious bullies who will trounce anything that gets in their way, especially if it spots a lone Corsola.

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It just doesn’t seem to fit right.

silk sedge
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could encourage rebellious tendencies in those around it

topaz stream
twin vapor
silk sedge
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POKENAME are highly social Pokémon that form numerous tribes throughout Ice Mountain. They spend their free time grooming each other's coats, ensuring that every claw, tail, and frill is sharp enough to cut through solid rock.

Feels a bit syllable heavy but I think that might just be me being over-critical

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first sentence is what's doing it

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second flows fine

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eh, yeah, think its just me overthinking

hexed fog
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I get that its multiple mountains but cmaaaaaan

silk sedge
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ah

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are corrections as straight forward as re-submitting?

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also elated that a good slurpuff fusion was open:
"Popular with families across Johto, POKENAME have a friendly disposition and are fiercely loyal to their allies. POKENAME possess an appetitie for sugar, and when they catch wind of a snack they'll stop at nothing to steal a bite."

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slurpuff might make every fusion worse but man if the sprites aren't always peak

rugged socket
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Happy POKENAME emit a scent like lemongrass. When distressed, however, their odour shifts to that of rotting fish. Some theorise the scent affects brain chemistry as Trainers often grow deeply attached, tending to them like a child rather than a pet.

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Is the second sentence alright?

silk sedge
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POKENAME feast on the high concentrations of detritus found in polluted waters. Due to this behavior, scientists across the world track POKENAME populations in an effort to monitor ecological health.

remote wadi
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POKENAME struggles out in the wild. One reason for this issue is the rapid growth of yarn. Which causes other issues, as such for hunting. POKENAME rather stays in local areas where they exchange their yarn for food and shelter.
Could i get some help with this pokedex entry?

silk sedge
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Wild POKENAME struggle with the rapid growth of their yarn-like fur. As a result, POKENAME are poor hunters and...

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one thing I've found to really help is reading any entries like you're the pokedex talking to ash

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try to... "speak" like it

remote wadi
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Delrein, the fatass cat pokemon, a normal and ice type

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Wild POKENAME struggle with the rapid growth of their yarn-like fur. As a result, POKENAME are poor hunters. A way for them to survive, POKENAME lives in local areas inhabited by humans where they exchange their fur for food and shelter.

silk sedge
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a bit, should probably merge sentences 2 and 3 though

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"...poor hunters, as a way for them to survive, POKENAME live in local areas..."

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or...

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"...poor hunters and often live in areas inhabited by humans... as a way to survive."

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flows much better

remote wadi
silk sedge
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yw

remote wadi
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i need to take writing classes T-T

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Wild POKENAME struggles with the rapid growth of their yarn-like fur. As a result, POKENAME are poor hunters. As a way for them to survive, POKENAME live in local areas inhabited by humans where they exchange their fur for food and shelter.

midnight siren
midnight siren
silk sedge
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removes a third sentence, avoids "as a" repetition

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or at least flipping around the third, ending it with "as a way to survive"

twin vapor
# remote wadi `Wild POKENAME struggles with the rapid growth of their yarn-like fur. As a resu...

maybe highlight some of the positives to adjust the tone yet keep the message? Also, i think eliminating definitely one but mabye both uses of "as a" would help
POKENAME's warm and durable yarn-like-fur is extremely prone to tangles was kinda what I had in mind. and maybe grooming rather than shelter being what they trade for? their problem doesn't sound like life in the wild, just excess unkempt hair.

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sorry if that's too much editorializing, I'm pretty new on this part of the Discord

dull folio
midnight siren
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damn, i was beaten to the things i was gonna suggest smh

dull folio
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That’s all your ideas condensed down best I can tell me if your a fan of this @remote wadi Nice

midnight siren
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i've given suggestions that were longer than a discord message at times, when that's what is needed

dull folio
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Oh yeah most people are happy to receive feedback I know I would be, so long as your constructive about it no one will mind at all

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Whole point of this thread, to discuss dex entries and improve them smilemeowth

midnight siren
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also to be intimidated by the izik pile heehee

dull folio
midnight siren
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it was over a thousand last time i looked Despair

twin vapor
dull folio
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Also, I’d be lying if I said I knew what I was doing, I’m not exactly an expert writer 💀

midnight siren
dull folio
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Every time I look away it multiplies how does this man do this 🙏

midnight siren
twin vapor
violet ermine
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one day in and I've seen nothing but pile

dull folio
dull folio
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Second willing diving into the izik pile is crazy work

midnight siren
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i'm just a mid writer heehee

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working on my book atm tho, so we'll see if it's actually good at the end lol

dull folio
midnight siren
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cause the book is mid at best heehee

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it's fantasy allthethings

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like every other story i've written heehee

dull folio
midnight siren
dull folio
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Nah I’m sure they’re bro having the balls to go through with fully writing a book is an achievement in itself ohyes

twin vapor
midnight siren
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i think i'm only like 1/5-1/4 in atm, so a lot of work ahead lol

remote wadi
midnight siren
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if you post it to gal, it will be counted as your entry

silk sedge
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POKENAME wander around villages grabbing any discarded sweets they can find. Every night, POKENAME host elaborate tea parties for other wild Pokémon.

The act of sharing food with others brings POKENAME immense joy. Using any means necessary, POKENAME will produce enough pastries to feed everyone around it.

twin vapor
twin vapor
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oh and you can take the credit.... if you write a dex entry for one of my sprites cackles evilly

remote wadi
twin vapor
remote wadi
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alright :D

midnight siren
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i'm sure your stories are great allthethings

hollow tapir
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Hopefully, I too want to write a book

midnight siren
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what kinda genre?

terse pawn
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175.172
POKENAME will often nuzzle their trainers with affection as soon as they hatch from their eggs. The friction from the nuzzling generates electricity, so they often shock their trainers by mistake.

hollow tapir
midnight siren
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oooh, nice!

hexed fog
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@silk sedge I changed earth to the world in one of your entries 😉

silk sedge
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ty, will keep in mind

hexed fog
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it's not a big deal just figured I'd let ya know lol

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btw loving your entries

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keep it up

undone karma
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It is unclear why POKENAME sometimes resemble the Unovan dessert known as s’mores, but it is not unwelcome. They smell just like s’mores too.

This POKENAME probably got too excited, causing its more charred appearance. Still smells good though.

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Just for fun.

silk sedge
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POKENAME appear in areas of conflict and offer protection to those in need. It's said that POKENAME can sense cries for help from anywhere in the world.

POKENAME can be found guiding people to safety in the wake of disasters. Some say that the light emitted by POKENAME's eye will ward away all evil.

hollow tapir
undone karma
craggy beacon
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100-250 is the range

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that second entry is JUST over that btw

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LMAO

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its 101 characters

hollow tapir
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I was just looking, I knew there was a range but couldn’t remember the exact

craggy beacon
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well 102 if i get rid of the line break and add a space

hollow tapir
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Also given you’re not meant to need to read other entries to understand the fusion, it reads a bit weird

jaunty crest
hexed fog
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Ice Mountains is forever the name

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There's no going back

hexed fog
wary scarab
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POKENAME floats just beneath the surface of ponds, feasting on small aquatic plants that drift nearby. Its broad leaf and cattail-like tail help it blend into the surrounding reeds, hiding it from bird Pokémon flying overhead.

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Mm "Cattail" and "tail" being so close are troubling me but I fear if I use the word we use for cattails I would confuse people lmao

wary scarab
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Thanks lol

terse pawn
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176.25

The elusive POKENAME have been discovered by a ranger who surveyed through a misty forest. POKENAME have the ability to detect the presence of others and even read their emotions through the electric field.

hexed fog
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They mean pokedex tone but it is a moot point if there is no sprite

vague umbra
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Moot? What does that mean?

midnight siren
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like null - it's unimportant

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essentially what izik is saying is that if you don't have a sprite for us to use as reference for the entry, then the entry working within the FAQ and guidelines doesn't matter

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(at least that's how i read it, lmk if i read it wrong izik lol)

hollow tapir
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And I think it’s the fact the sprite you were using as reference isn’t even in the game yet, meaning they couldn’t accept it anyway

midnight siren
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also you didn't even say what the fusion was which makes it trickier

hollow tapir
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Reading your name gave me a stroke for a second

midnight siren
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don't look at the RPG chat then heehee

hollow tapir
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Also saying it was posted months ago when it clearly wasn’t is just. Weird?

midnight siren
hollow nimbus
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Is the entry you've been talking about for a Meloetta/Keldeo?

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I must inform you that if that is the case, you will never be able to submit the entry.

Entries are written to go alongside custom sprites, not fusions in general.

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Keldeo is not in the game, so there are no plans for a Meloetta/Keldeo to be added to the game.

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If you are not writing this entry to be submitted and are only doing it for fun, you can do anything you want with it, since it won't be part of canon PIF lore. In that case, we can only help you with arranging content so much, as the guidelines we help people to follow are designed for creating a cohesive game universe, which may not be your exact goal.

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||I say never, but there is a small chance. If Frogzilla ever decides to add another legendary/mythical to the game and chooses for that to be Keldeo, then a spriter makes a Meloetta/Keldeo sprite, they never write their own entry for their sprite, and the sprite is added to the game in a sprite pack, then you could submit an entry. For the time being, that scenario seems rather far away.||

topaz stream
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I'm thinking "with their tails" might be better

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but unsure

vague umbra
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As Amitie from Puyo Puyo would say, So much for that...

hollow tapir
terse pawn
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347.127

Many people reported having nightmares of angry POKENAME chasing them through a foggy forest. As a result, many had developed insomnia due to these nightmares.

midnight siren
twin vapor
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POKENAME collects the spirits of those lost to the briny deep. It is said their light shining on the seafloor guides mariner's souls to the afterlife.

hollow tapir
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Yayyyy

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We love a deep sea friend

wanton ember
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Dex: The mighty POKENAME-class carriers represent the pinnacle of naval pokemon engineering. The unparalleled reach of their airwings makes these behemoths the pride of the Hoenn Coast Guard.

Something like this permissible?

violet ermine
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I would get a second opinion though

wanton ember
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the idea is that its a pokemon thats combined with mechanical elements on it

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like a horse saddle heehee

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i can rewrite that part tho

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Dex: The mighty POKENAME-class carriers represent the pinnacle of naval pokemon deployment. The unparalleled reach of their airwings makes these behemoths the pride of the Hoenn Coast Guard.

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hows this?

violet ermine
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That reads a bit better imo 👍 just remember the capitalization and apostrophe on Pokémon, and you’re set

wanton ember
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true, thanks

dense meteor
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This one already has a description in game but it's not on the spreadsheet if anybody here's able to update it

https://www.fusiondex.org/146.200/

FusionDex

Moldreavus is a legendary bird Pokémon that can control fire. A Moldreavus frightens people with a creepy, sobbing cry. HP: 80. Attack: 73. Defense: 70. Speed: 111.
Special Attack: 85. Special Defense: 86. Sprite by sueterregorampa.

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fun one too

jagged ledge
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That's... odd.

midnight siren
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could it be someone having requested it be removed?

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or moved to a dif sprite?

jagged ledge
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OH! I found it

dense meteor
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can't imagine why it would be, how does that stuff even work? Is that spreadsheet the source of truth for what shows up in the game, or is there something else that's not publicly accessible?

jagged ledge
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It was from someone who's entry was removed because of a username issue, but we contacted them and corrected the username

dense meteor
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oh word

jagged ledge
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So maybe without the error, it's reading it normally? Thonking

timid sky
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And forgot to add it to the dex grid obviously heehee

dense meteor
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i don't know how anybody is ever supposed to scroll through the dex grid lmao it's torture

jagged ledge
# dense meteor fun one too

It looks alright as an entry, I'm going to mark it Approved since I'm already in the works on adjusting/updating that user's entries.

dense meteor
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I guess it's kind of cool for just browsing actually that's too harsh

timid sky
jagged ledge
dense meteor
jagged ledge
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It can look nice visually to see the grid filled and if you're patient, it's a good visual aid. mrshrug

dense meteor
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it is sort of cool to just scroll through yeah, can't wait for the powers that be to figure out how to get the custom descriptions on fusiondex.org though

timid sky
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Anyway, since I'm here I may as well continue to work on my dexdoku start my 4th dexdoku heehee

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Someone give me two numbers between 1 and 8

dense meteor
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5 and 2!

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wanted to finish this one
https://www.fusiondex.org/146.255/
POKENAME is a master pyromancer and a lover of grand illusions. It has been known to soar high over the land in the form of a colossal phoenix; its true body is almost never seen.

FusionDex

Molmagius is a legendary bird Pokémon that can control fire. Its cries sound like incantations. HP: 80. Attack: 73. Defense: 70. Speed: 118.
Special Attack: 91. Special Defense: 100. Sprite by yozara.

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hope it's not a faux pas to expand on the phoenix illusion thing from earlier it's just such a cool visual motif

timid sky
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@jagged ledge Dexdoku Wild Pokémon/Psychic:

POKENAME plants its feet underground before it goes to sleep so that it can replenish the water in its body while it rests. If POKENAME is attacked while it sleeps, it simply teleports away.

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-# Forgot the picture of the fusion whoops

hexed fog
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50 have been added to The Pile. Be strong Unowns. Be strong.

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We are officially up to S on the wild list btw

hexed fog
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all pending entries have been reviewed 😄

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I miss @lapis cosmos 's different pokemon used in desserts D:

hollow tapir
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I need to get back into entry making….

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It’s been a long few weeks Despair

lapis cosmos
hexed fog
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i hope youre doing something fun ❤️

lapis cosmos
terse pawn
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374.334

POKENAME have been revered in ancient times as beings that guide the dead to the afterlife. The flapping of their wings emits an ethereal buzzing sound which led many to believe they are mystical.

terse pawn
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352.287d

POKENAME are forest guardians who often enshroud their territory in mist to protect weak fairy Pokémon from those that seek to harm them. Any trainer foolish enough to approach their territory will be met with a Fleur Cannon.

hexed fog
terse pawn
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Okay, should I change the move?

hexed fog
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Stick with moves either can use naturally

terse pawn
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352.287d

POKENAME are forest guardians who often enshroud their territory in mist to protect weak fairy Pokémon from those that seek to harm them. Any trainer foolish enough to approach their territory will be met with a Magical Leaf.

hexed fog
clear hollow
hexed fog
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yeah but I usually do a quick change on those for the whole sheet

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it's not a huge dealeo

trim sinew
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203.281
POKENAME flames ignite mid-strike, guided by instinct sharpened in countless fights. The heat of its body rises with each attack, fueling its final blow.

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281.203
POKENAME senses danger moments before it strikes, flaring with intense fire. It uses its speed and flames to land a blinding counterattack.

hexed fog
hexed fog
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I like these a ton btw

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keep it up

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870 wild mon entries remain o_o

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be strong dexxers

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be strong

trim sinew
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203.280
Quick-witted and quicker-footed, POKENAME can land fiery kicks before others can blink. It uses rapid bursts of flame to disorient foes before closing in for a strike.

hexed fog
hexed fog
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if you arent picky I can just do this when I am going through the approval process

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as long as you dont mind me rewording stuff (this way you dont have to slow down those creative juices)

trim sinew
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its fine.

hexed fog
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feel free to just submit those then, I'll do my thing once theyre in

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ffs theres 43 remaining scrafty and scraggy

trim sinew
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203.425
Small but fierce, POKENAME uses psychic force and mighty stomps to protect its friends. POKENAME can hold on to bite thanks to their strong jaws.

hexed fog
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i hate entries for those

hexed fog
trim sinew
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where do i submit btw? on the google sheet thingely?

hexed fog
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i assume you mean psychic force rather than tricks?

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trim sinew
hexed fog
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lol

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these are the ones we are trying to get done by end of july

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we should be able to without issues

trim sinew
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Write its exact file name as it's displayed on https://if.daena.me/, .e.g.: 123.321b.png. Don't rely on the file name a sprite has in the gallery!
what does this mean...

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come back @hexed fog

hexed fog
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should be

trim sinew
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omg he is back

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did I do this right?

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or should I write the pokemon fusions name ?

hexed fog
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why

terse pawn
hexed fog
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you use this

trim sinew
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oh the whole name and numbers?

hexed fog
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no

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i have circled the numbers you silly goose

trim sinew
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So I sudmit forms for pokemons I havent drawn or both? Because I got a form. So I want to do the Girafarig/Tyrunt so 203.425.png and then again the pokename? 203.425?

hollow nimbus
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You can submit an entry for either

hollow nimbus
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The form is used for entries for sprites that are already in the game

trim sinew
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i see

hollow nimbus
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If you are a spriter, you can write an entry to go with your sprite and put it in your galpost, and that should be submitted to the sheet for you when its respective spritepack goes out

trim sinew
hollow nimbus
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Short takeaway:
Form is for sprites in the game, yours or otherwise
Galpost is for your sprites, gets submitted later

trim sinew
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where is galpost..

hollow nimbus
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Galpost is a portmanteau of gallery post

trim sinew
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oh so i can just write my text in there?

hollow nimbus
hollow nimbus
trim sinew
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alright i go to sprite-gallery then

hollow nimbus
trim sinew
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omg

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thank u