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On your original thumbnail, I think the subject and WoW logo are too big... There is no more room for "Addictive"
I would suggest you to use guides (rule of third for exemple) to create your composition... Fixing your subject eye at the intersection of two guides will let you room for additional text and logo... Here is a quick exemple of design made with the help of rule of third
wow! thank you so much! once u helped me before and i really liked your art
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1101)
u are very kind, can i ask for the archive so i can download it?
Here is the psd file... Sorry for the delay... Massive ice storm in my area and the internet connexion is erratic...
You can find the font used for "Addictive" here: https://www.dafont.com/lifecraft.font
LifeCraft Font | dafont.com
It seems well balanced... Great job!š
Thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1103)
dont worry, thank you for your help
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1104)
you know actually, i was working in this project, its the same, but another colour, u think the suggestions u made before can apply here?
Yes... It's just my opinion but I think the Subject and WoW logo are too big... I would use one of these scale...
Smallest one is my favorite but It's just a metter of taste...
yes, i totally agree with you, i was searching for the best scales, and also, best title effects, so i think it is a great idea the font u used and also the logo that is smaller
now i think i will try to add some shadows or another effects to the title, so its better integrated with the background, if u dont mind, can u share me the psd? Thanks for your help i really appreciate it
Yes it's good idea. Honestly, I didn't have much time to polish it.... Up to you to update it like you want..
Dont worry, you helped me a lot with this great ideas! Thank you so much!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1107)
Oh damn, that looks a lot better!
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Nice video overall. Some points at the beginning you dont say your name or something like "welcome to the Chanel of...." or something like that. Maybe also make a unique little intro. Try to put with OBS or whatever Tool you use to record those Tutorials your facecam in a round shape on bottom left or right and not "cut" your face in a small strip. Also try to make your sound a bit better (echo in the room -> but blackets around the room or try to cover as much blank walls and floor with thick woofen jackets, etc.). Also you talk about rimlight -> use it for yourself š
For the content itself the Tutorial is really good, but also very long. often users only need the part what tool, what parameters and how overall it is used. So that saves time if you do not show ALL the part you doing over several minutes paint over the picture. Also I would get rid of the dodge&burn part if you ONLY want to show the Rimlight thing.
BUT if you maybe would do some kind of series (first do D&B, then Rimlight, then this, then that, etc.) THAT would also work and you would have content for several days. such a small Tutorial normaly should not last longer then 10min.
Also all the parts with the face, the beard, etc. makes the video way to long. At this point the people should know hot it works.
BUT you COULD also do some look how I do it Livestream like video whee you edit one Image with all you do normaly. THER a 30min. video would be fun. Hope that helps.
Here just an example Intro. Simple prompt using Adobe Firefly, after that using Adobe Express to put some music to it, Fade in and Fade out, ready. For the "real" intro you also put your Chanel name or slogan in it, too. Took me less than 5min. In the same way you make a short Outro THAT you can put after the video. Both put in youtube studio and every time you upload your videos you automaticaly would have your premade intro and outro, voila. Have fun.
Also be aware of your own Branding. Other Intro, other you.
DUFFLE BAG DESIGN I MADE RECENTLY
Cool design.
For me there is too much of the bag in shadow.
Thanks alot for the feedback Henrik!! Really helpful man and yeah, I definitely get you. Will apply some things you said, thanks alot brother!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #20 - 119)
that was intended and thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 287)
I think its looks awesome, but I would try to change the blue color of the Text
In that case, you nailed it š
Thanks brother
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 288)
What do you guys think? I would like some feedback!
Good job
Thanks
I mean is there like too much of anything of any creeping I could work on dyt?
But thanks.
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #115 - 16)
I like it. The tone and noise is a good look.
The building is very monotonous across the whole image. This isn't necessarily an issue. Perhaps you could add some variety by adding shading/shadows to different parts of the building.
Ok thanks for the advice. I would relate!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 289)
Up to you ... I did that just to show you you can change color depending the overall design...
No worries. Happy to help.
Hello everyone! Please provide feedback on any areas where I could improve. Thank you
The absence of the face is a little odd for me... especially given the amount of detail in the person and that the animal has a face.
i donāt know about the editing but this is a sick ass photo
Increase the saturation
Otherwise, good job.
Previous version and second draft, about a two day turn around
Have you tried adding an arc to the top left rainbow like the other one?
Drew the face to the man, what about color palette? Is it okay?
I tried making something that looks like a old video game box cover art, but for some reason it came out looking odd for me and I can't tell why.
@inner solar : How old? 80's,90's...?
Do you have an exemple of the style you want to reproduce? In general, when it comes to the 1980s or early 1990s, itās best to avoid overly subtle textures and transparency effects... Back then, game covers used a limited number of solid colors...
Any feedback? (Omori is so peak)
Thereās a lot of grain I respect the decision but itās a bit too much even when going for what this gives me as like a Miss Peregrines Home for Peculiar Children and I would also naturalize the sky or blend the difference more with it but other then that itās a great shot
Ts feels awfully ai idk why
Nice working adding the face. For me it makes a big difference.
Both characters share the same colour scheme. Perhaps you could reverse it on one of them. Maybe make the āleopardā primarily yellow with blue/grey accents.
The brightness of the lightbulb really draws the eye. If that is not your intention perhaps drop it's brightness to more closely match the highlights on the characters.
I'll try thanks ^^
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 290)
It's a little too colorful. Mkae the background less saturated.
Yeah^
Less grain, otherwise it's really good
Let me help out
Is this better?
Too much detail is what makes it stand out i think
Old covers were usally a few primary colors
is this good?
Omg clearly.
thanks i am 13 actually currently studying made in my free time
It is really good.
I would say increase the black point
After having it laying around for about a year i finally finished up this piece of branding for my upcoming Garry's Mod Server Project, only added some small final touches and done some adjustments.
Aurebesh Text above the normal letters also translates to Imperial City Roleplay, fittingly in the common Star Wars Font / Language "Aurebesh"
This is very rushed but gives an idea of what I was talking about.
Like this
Good job!
How about some motion?
I used early 2000s video game ads as a reference.
ok
For me "blurring" everything doesnāt work. However, you could perhaps restrict some of that blurring to specific parts such as the arms to suggest they are moving. I would be very reluctant to blur the faces in any situation.
Understood.
is this good?
did you draw this?
It's very dark. Almost too dark to discern the elements in the image. And there is no clear focal point in the layout. Is the focus supposed to be the car? The car seems too large for the road. Next, are these supposed to be "swords" stuck in the ground? They seem too large when compared to the environment and the car. Sorry. Just not understanding what's going on in this image. Thus, I'm not sure what the goal is with the layout.
You could add more visual interest by bringing illumination into the scene using either the sky (with a sun setting behind the mountain) and/or the car headlights on the road. Just some ideas...
More edit images with Gemini 3 Nano Banana Pro image 1 is original image 2 is Gemini 3 result, the only ?? is the bridge to left it looks like a banderol with text, but Nano Banana Pro did a good work with the input information, my conclusion Gemini 3 Nano Banana Pro is that biggest strength is edit bad photos.
My prompt is Gƶr tydligare (Swedish) the nearest in English clarify this prompt is to short for Firefly to understand. Gƶr tydligar = āto free from confusion or ambiguity; to make clearā or clarify the picture or make the picture clearer or bring the picture into focus or make things clearer,
do you guyts think i should go darker or more vivid with colors? they wanted something like this
No itās a whole bunch of images mixed together
That does actually make it more interesting thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #2 - 3272)
How is it looking
Nice composition!
This might be nitpicking, but the figurine looks a little blurry...
If you have the original picture you might try to sharpen it a bit (with Camera Raw filter > Clarity and Texture for exemple) š¤
Otherwise, it's a solid piece of work!
Thanks you so much for giving a solid and a true Opinion on this i will make sure to improve by the time
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1112)
wth thats actually awesome
nice job
The first project I landed through LinkedIn, design a brand coffeeshop from arabic with specialty of ethiopian coffee, feel free to check it out @everyone
https://www.behance.net/gallery/245840345/Buna-Beans-Ethiopia-Coffee-Shop-Brand-Identity-Visual
Looks great
Thank you!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @slate ermine (current: #661 - 2)
npp keep it up
Yeah have to make a poster every day or every 2 days to post on ig so Iām testing diff styles for now
try out simplsitci next
this is not good ik
Your image is the first one?
Yes
Its not done yet
but just a example if i do darker or brighter
I would go for a darker background with a more dramatic sky...
If the color of the stadium is not mandatory I would apply a Dark Blue to Bright blue gradient map to keep present but put the focus an the Player...
I don't know how you created the 3D text āSPRING,ā but I'm not sure the color fits well with the Team colors⦠If you could thicken the stroke of āvisitā or choose a contrasting color, it would improve the readability.
I used a custom made text from a websitebut this is fite can you guide me through what you did? That little simple edit gave it so much life im still learning photoshop sorry
Its not mandatory
If you want i can send the psd file and you can check it out for your self?
You can share it there for minute (I will remove after downloading if you want)... I can check it and give you some advices if you want...I have about an hour to spare...
Sounds good i will send it over now
i have to leave some space in the upper left and upper right because i need to fit in 15-17 different college logos also the file is too big to send
also there is a weird line you will see when you open it
from what i seen the stadium pic has a line
Got it give time to process...
it also does let you change the color of it under surface effects gradient
Paint black over the line area on the layer mask to hide it.
Alright
I made a huge file (more than 500Mb) so please let me know when you'll get it... I can't let it on my google drive for a long time...https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Injt2ipCG-6k44IhUAaDDK2BMErKM0hp/view?usp=sharing
you are free to use the file like you want the only stock I had inside is from Adobe Stock Free section (Free to use)
i don't have access to adobe stock sadly
downloaded it
Woah, nice job!
Tone down the white glow around the player a little.
Let me help out
Idk what the focal point is, but there should definitely be some highlights.
yea im trying to figure out how to do that
Do you want me to help?
yea im kinda new to photoshop
Alright, Iāll help out.
thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #106 - 18)
Youāre welcome!
what do you think i can do to make the college logos blend in and not js look pasted
yea one sec
Thank you
Very nice job, btw!
thank you! im just trying to position the offers so it looks good
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #104 - 19)
Iāll try something
ima go shower this what i have for now whenever your done just send me it.
You're good
I js realized it looks completely different for u then me
My pc color settings are different
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On my pc it looks vibrant and vivid on my phone itās dark
Itās good lol
There this how it looks
Good job
Do you only need one version
I can help out with recolors if you want
Yea
I do rlly fw the colors but i cant rlly change the jersey color
Really like that first purple
No biggie, I'll just mask the jersey out
Are you ok with that
It's the same color dw
yea can tou send me the first purple one
This one
With the jersey like that
Perfect!
Thanks. Would you like any other colors?
Maybe like a white? I think thats all mostly blue/purp/white
Alright
There is a free section (nothing to pay) => https://stock.adobe.com/free
Great job @glacial grove and @stable burrow!š
Thank you
Last time someone said lower the saturation, I canāt decide which one I prefer
which one is better?
Third
can u kindly tell me what are the fonts used
Gondens DEMO- sunflower
Futura PT- body text
the small text also?
small text is futura
sure

hehe np okay bye
Third one for me.
Thank you!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1113)
1st one looks good
Third
If I had to choose just one I would take the first one. Bright area in the center adds a nice contrast and makes the giant silhouette pop.
Thirdš
me when im a fat duck and im sad bc ppl are throwing snowballs at me
yea ima try
lmaooo
Lol
kinda like this you think?
i just gotta make that visit fit in make logos smaller put dates and i think make it all blend
Yeah
wym? on thestadium?
with everything selected?
Yeah
Yup!
ima go do something real quick and try to finish it when i get back
inner glow? Or drop shadow
On the top, like a gradient
Make the school logos more visible.
Turn the cyan down just a little bit
Yea i am ima put opacity up and maybe like a glow so they pop more
you think i have the logos scattered with dates
or organized like on the left
alright i js feel its so empty like between them and they are so small but i gotta have dates
Like on the left seems better for me...
15 games or any chances few logos will be removed? If not, you'll need to pay attention spacing between each Logo/game date... It will be crowdyš
its all his visits so i assume all gotta be there lol can't leave any out
Ok!
then write dates under?
Yeah
It could work but take care the logos spacing to make sure you have enough place to put date and keep them clear.
is it for print or social media post?
socioal media
I would maybe slide everything up to make some room on the bottom of the layout and add the team names and dates there. Just an idea....
wait thats actually smart having the name on the bottom
wait that actually is super smart!
Also the "Visits" text gets lost for me when I look at this. SPRING is so bold and VISITS is so thin, that I think that might be worth another look (at that element).
I like how its a different color from the background so it rlly pops
Its not the color that's bugging me. Its how light it is in contrast with SPRING which is a big fat typeface.
Just my opinion.
Yea i get what you mean i can try and find a different text style to match the spring
Might be worth trying another script-type font (if you like that) which is a bit heavier/thicker.
Yea i can try and see how i like it
Yes!
Very good job
Hmm⦠That looks great, D!
But since this is for a social media post, my first thought would be to try to keep the logos and avoid textā¦
Iād try moving the āPlayerā and āstadiumā down a bit to make enough room to spread out the logos and dates, Iād try a different script font for āVisitsā and place it over āSPRINGā⦠etc.
Iām just thinking out loud š¤
I donāt really have time to test all this out @stable burrow
Thank you!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #97 - 20)
I'm not suggesting that they delete the logos. Keep the logos and add the actual team name and the date for each team on the bottom. Which serves two purposes. Also, I fail to see why this being a social media post makes any difference to what you're talking about. Lastly, this is my opinion. The OP can take my suggestions and try them or completely disregard them.
I think thereās way too many logos in the middle of the image wouldnāt it be better to just get rid of them or just keep the 2 teams playing?
That is up to the OP. It's their project. Perhaps they want the logos there for quick team recognition. Also, since its "Spring Visits" I'm assuming they are trying to show all of the teams they're playing.
No problem, Daniel!
I was just sharing my opinion too...
I hope you didn't take that as a negative critique... That wasn't my intention at all!
True but too many logos makes it harder to focus of the actual work and focus on the logos instead
its not teams playing its what schools hes invited to visit and if i take some off its gonna show he has preference
But yes very true!
I'm suggesting that they put the names of the teams and dates on the bottom because it actually lists the team name next to the date. Putting all these dates under each logo feels messy and confusing to me.
Yea that would be smart
Harder to focus on... "the actual work"? What is the actual work?
The layout is about all of the teams this home team is playing. That seems like the focus to me but maybe I'm misunderstanding the intent of this layout.
This is good
Really good
The art behind it I phrased it wrong but I mean the logos look like they were just added on there
I would probably put that bottom line of text on one line so "side quests" are next to each other instead of being broken up like that and carriage returned to the next line. Just my opinion.
But I see the point from it
That is actually a great idea
I didnāt notice it was broken up since it was just a quick work to post today since I skipped posting yesterday
Well, if the layout is being created simply for an exercise of "creating something" then I guess the logos don't matter as much in that instance. However, if we're looking at this as if this were an actual poster, there might be a requirement to show all of the logos. Who knows? That's really up to the OP.
That is true it depends on the brief and the op
OP is trying to mimic something like this...
#šproject-feedback message
That may be why the logos were added
I like the logos. College Football fans will be able to quickly scan the poster and see which teams are coming to visit. Some people might not know which teams the logos represent. Thus, why I suggested they put the team names and dates on the bottom.
@bleak echo
Looks good!
Nicely done! Great improvement! Isn't it?
Yes it is!
Thank you for the idea
No problem! I think you get help from other some great users! Don't hesitate to ask for your future projects!
hello, how is it going? days ago you helped me with an image, i was thinking to ask your for some ideas for another photoshop, i really liked your style, if its not any problem, can i ask you some suggestions?
Yes you can ask here if you need feedback. I'm not the only one here who can help! If you have question about photoshop technique or tool you also can ask in #āask-a-question feed.
Thanks for answering, got it!
Note: I'm afk for now (on cell phone). Don't hesitate I can join later tonight
Oh ok! i will send my question
I really like this style of images, the character in a corner and in the background a landscape with the video game logo or a phrase. The thing is
Here's my attempt to replicate that style with The Legend of Zelda Ocarina of time (idk if u played the game), but If u did, i feel like it didn't turn out well, Maybe I chose some images poorly, like the character image or the background landscape. Any suggestions? Maybe other images? other effects?
Not familiar with Zelda at all... Last time I played a Zelda game it was on Game Boy I think... Yep I'm pretty oldš
Your design is already really solid...
I would reduce a bit the saturation of the background to put the main focus on the subject...
If you have a look at the reference images you've shared the main subject is on the subject => Brighter and colored Vs Background with less colors or a bit "faded/washed out"...
I would put a bright spot behind the subject (around the open eye) to match the light on face and put emphasis on the character...
I replaced the Logo with shield and Sword because I found they were competing with the subject... I paint with a soft low flow dark color under the logo to increase contrast and make it more readable...
All of these moves are personal choices made for the seek of advices... Up to you to follow them or not because you've already done a pretty nice work!
@wind swallow :Here is the psd file used to create the preview if you want to explore it...
Turn down the highlights on the background like 25%
Thereās a little white clipping on the right side of his face
Put a Gaussian Blur on the background
Opacity 75%
Mostly nice job.
Let me do my magic.
Here's my take!
If you want my file.
I also wanted to say you did a pretty decent job.
Could probbaly work on lighting and shadows.
Now, let me try...something else.
One color can also help things seem more focused.
any feedback?
Playing around with blurs.
Very good job.
is it just in my head or like does the text feel somewhat cramped?
I made the poster overall longer idk if this is better
move the text up
so ti doesn't look cramped
@wind swallow
If you have any questions about the process, just ask me!
And a higher quality version.
Yes! Why not... IMO, first one is nice, the other two seem too blurry for my taste...
But it's a great idea!š
OMG... Didn't know my psd file was so bad that you need to make so many different version of it...š«£
wow! Thank you so much for your help, it really looks nice!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #94 - 21)
This the final @bleak echo @wooden oak he said it was perfect i donāt really like the visit shadow but if he liked itš¤·
Yes!
Sometimes our tastes don't match those of our customers... And It might be hard to accept their decision, because we want to be proud of our work, but that's just part of a designer's life!š
Itās not bad, I love it!
Youāre welcome!
I was thinking, does it look similar to this images or a little bit "empty" should i choose another background or another character image from google?
It looks good imo
Link should be the main focus
Keep the background simple so you can see Link more
yes, but i mean, if u check the images i sent, the background its a character or maybe a structure, here is a biome, do u think the background should be that?
for example, check this image
any suggestions on changing the background? or you think the background i chose is good?
Itās good
Not sure for HyperCondensed font... RONALDO name looks a bit weird...
7 effect is nice... Maybe you could tweak the mask a little around the cheek area (?)
yeah yeah i also noticed that
Tone down the shadows on Ronaldoās shirt
Also put a soccer ball in the bottom right
ok yeah
i think i should keep it minimal and 2nd point it is a football not soccer
Yrah
Just use my version
Soccer is Football for North american people... For US people Ronaldo is not a Football player but a Soccer player...
I think you're all talking about the same thing.š
yeah
yeah
Fixed up the logo shadow.
Hum... Not sure it's fixedš¤ ...
I don't know if it's the shape, its color or its opacity but logo shadow looks weird.
What if you make it more subtle?
Ok
Forgot to post it here
Any feedback?
Are you trying to mimic ripped paper over another surface? If so you might try to add a subtle cast shadow to sell the effect.
its just put over basically
im improving the shadow
my result
Any feedbacks?
Maybe smudge the blood a little
Good job
What do you mean, exactly?
Brigthness, contrast etc of the image on top left
Idk why my space button didnt work there sorry-
Here's the whole PSD file if yu want
Sure!
I also used Multiply Blend mode.
I'll just show you how to do it
Thanks ^^
You're welcome!
Put a Black and White Adjustment Layer.
Make the Reds and Yellows lighter.
Erase or use black paint to 'reveal' her lips and eyes.
Hopefully that helps!
Yo like... thank you very much
You're welcome!
This should help
You can click inside the layers and see how I did it
Never cut the legs like that, as shown in your picture. It looks terrible.
what can i do to improve this logo
also can someone give me some random ideas for any other logos and stuff. Im really bored. (simple stuff pls)
thanks!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #91 - 22)
For my school assignment
It's looking good. Can you provide some context so we can give some appropriate feedback?
I was tasked to make an album cover for either a fictional or real musician or band (I chose fictional as itās easier for me). Weāre given the specs to use 3 design elements (typography, imagery, and textures). Incorporating photoshop effects such as layering, blending modes, filters, and or layer styles. And suchā¦
hello
What I sent here is my second draft⦠which I decided to settle on submitting
Great style and well executed!
Love the cross dithering effect !
You could crop the image a little differently using the Golden Ratio Guide (for exemple) and align the head on the top left guides intersection... But perhaps I'm nitpicking a bit...Great job!š
Use a layer mask.
Use black paint to paint over her lips and eyeshadow.
Could make the text bigger.
yeah.
make "is anything even real?" bigger
try inverting the text when it goes on the subject instead of putting it behind it
cause i cant tell what it says
rn i think it says puotin
putin
pardon?
instead of the text being behind the subject, put the text in front of the subject and make it so when this part goes on top of the subject it gets inverted colors
ahh ok
Iām a big fan of an element partially overlapping text. However in this case there is so much overlap that the text is unreadable.
I like both this and the previous one. Are they alternate covers or does this replace the previous one?
I like this one more, you need to start using ai more
oo i like the echo/glass effect
Are they floating in the air or on a solid surface? If it's the second option then I think you need some shadows for the box and feet.
i'm good.
good job
The issue for me is that it looks like your toes are pressed up against a surface. Perhaps it would be more convincing if your legs were dangling.
I meed to reshot the photo then
And yea o noticed that isue
If you can not reshot you can try to manipulate your image...
A āPuppet Warpā transformation applied to the feet, a subtle drop shadow well below the cube, and a few subtle reflections on the cube could make it look like it's āfloating in the air.ā
You also can do something like this:
Main Text behind the Helmet, Helmet layer then a copy of the text layer clipped to the Helmet layer with fill set to 0% and a stroke applied to it.
Here is a short video that shows you the layers sandwich...
Inverted image clipped inside the text could give interresting result too...
How is it looking everyone
Looks good!
I would keep a 50pixels margin (pink guides on the screen shot) around the page and move Text away this Zone (Push down Yasaka Pagoda a bit, and big asiatic sign to t left).
Also you might crop your image to match the vertical rule of third guide (cyan guides on the screenshot)
Finally
1- There is a weird halo/glow around the top of the pagoda
2- Not sure texture on signs add to your design... A solid color could be better
I love most of it!
yeah yeah thanks i hope i improve
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #5 - 1195)
Are the white patches intentional?
Yep
Hmm.
As these are only a few, very limited areas, they might give the impression that they are āerrorsā.
Guys i just made this Resident Evil Ada Wong Poster, What do u guys think and what can i do to improve it?
Any feedback on this?
I would prob have ada like be holding the guns or smth, rn it looks like kinda off, like just it's there without purpose. Other than that, it's pretty fire
Thank you for the feedback i appreciate it
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @vagrant wyvern (current: #1037 - 1)
Ofc!
get rid of the motif on the L.
This is looking excellent.
For me too much of the second character is hidden behind the building. Perhaps you could raise the second character to reduce the spacing between it and the first character.
hey everyone i just wanna ask how to make these type of posters and if possible tell the font's name too
Here's a starter š
Sorry - it was just a quick rush attempt to just quickly smash through some steps. - one take š
That small tower on 'L' stands out a bit
@novel comet made a great demo. I think you got the idea. I would suggest to test "Urbane" font from Adobe fonts for the title (free with your Photoshop or Creative Cloud subscription)...
Reduce the tracking (-75 for the S and -100 for all the other letters) and you'll get something close your reference image (almost horizontal S end, bended T foot and tilted T top)
Good job!
Nice glitch effect!
Hey everyone new here been doing ps for around 3 months what do you think of this artwork I made
Thanks for your time! And for the font
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how to create this type of halftone?
Good start!
You're really pushing yourself with this kind of design after only three months of learning. It's great that you've matched the colors on the skull to the tones of the flames below. However, there's still work to be done... Keep in mind that if the light source is at the bottom, the upper parts should be in shadow.
i have this poster for ladybug i added a description a image and the name but there is too much space left how to fill?
@wooden oak ?
Yes? Make the text larger. Include other views of ladybugs that support and reinforce the text that you're displaying.
yes Ok thanks for your time
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I made the colors saturation, highlights and shadows a bit obvious to show you what I meant in my first message...
Hope it will help you to get the idea...š¤
True I guess thatās something for next time thanks a lot though
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How is it looking? @wooden oak
@gaunt linden - Please stop pinging people directly. People provide help and feedback when they are available.
Ok sorry
What if you mimic a dictionary definition layout?
Ahh yeah
Hey ani1 can tell how to edit this thing and what elements to put also keeping it minimalistic
nice but i do think you can make the small cursive texts bigger and more readable
Okay ty for the feedback š
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anytime
Thank you.
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1120)
Turn up the highlights on the fires.
Filter > Filter Gallery > Halftone
Try adding a spotlight!
looks good
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Maybe play around witt the colors a little?
I'll help out
Actually let me do something else.
yeah fs
Yeah did think of doing that looking at it now the opacity on them is like 75%
hmm i c i can now do myself
Please reply with normal sized text.
sorry i used to talk like this in the other server sorry
There is no need to create giant text for a reply unless you're trying to be annoying.
alr sorry
good
@gaunt linden
ayy looking cool
Thanks. Need anything else?
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @gaunt linden (current: #1037 - 1)
nah i am fine
Alright.
What would you guys do with these?
I was thinking of going with the below but I'm not sure I quite love these drafts
Love these! I would just take care of tail masking on the second one.
Great effect!
Yeah that was just a draft, you actually fw the effect for these?
I can't answer...Don't know what does fw mean?
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Nice
You just did choose a completely different font?
Turning 3D elements into a more flat design is nice but I'm not really convinced that the font used and the outline applied to it are appropriate...
TBH, layer styles should be used with great caution, as they can easily result in an unprofessional look.
this is the raw, im having trouble editing it any suggestions?
Could you give us more context?...What do you mean by trouble?
when i edit it the way i want, its way to saturated, but when i turn saturation down its undersaturated
I just finished editing and this is the final look I liked
Do you mean that the preview in Camera Raw doesn't match the file that opens in Photoshop after you've made changes in CR?
yeah
weird! It seems to work well on my side... Perhaps try to change the CR color space?
Thicker Inline doesnāt look the same on mine
I was gonna make them 3D
Also true ig
Better?
Is this for a school/learning project? - or just for fun?
I only ask since your text and bevelled edges don't match
You;ve also given Avril a drop shadow - which is giving it early 2010 vibes š
For fun.
Inspired by this
I really like the vibe of it.
I'll try to fix them
The lines don't show up on my font
Even against a color background.
For reference - the font looks like Eras Bold ITC
The lines are an 'effect' not part of the font
Oh, thank you!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #5 - 1196)
Yes. - exactly
I don't know how many times they 'applied' the effect to get it looking that wierd
I might just make a Reddit account to ask them.
Technically you could 'smart object' it, and then re-apply the effect again
(Personally it's not an effect I'd strive to include in my own designs anyway)
Yeah, they only posted about a week ago, so I assume their account is still active. - it's not like the poster was made in 2002.
Am I getting closer?
Can you post those settings larger, please?
Nvm, I got them.
Mines look a little different.
in fact, very certainly
thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @gentle horizon (current: #14 - 287)
I put the same things as you.
Please note: The settings depend entirely on the size of the image. AND you need to use different ācontour shapesā in two places.
I did that
Can any of you just fix it for me?
I'm rather confused.
As I mentioned earlier: āPlease note: The settings depend entirely on the size of the image.ā
Unfortunately, given the small size of your image, you wonāt be able to replicate the effect. Here are the settings for you to try out
thanks
How big is yours?
Iād just copied it from somewhere here and pasted it into Photoshop at this size. (And extended it upwards by about 500 px)
2667 px Ć 3842 px
And the zoom level of the view always plays a part in effects like this.
In the previous screenshot at 16.67%, the effect looks a bit odd. At 100% view, it looks fine again.
Now, can you help me with the one on the bottom?
It seems they only used 1 and turned down the outline a lot.
What contour would we need this time?
That aside, I'm almost done with the basics.
Thatās a bit tricky. But you could give the Contour Editor a go.
Thank you
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It's not the same, but similar
Thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @gentle horizon (current: #14 - 289)
Great job! You're pretty close! I think there is something missing on the outline...
There is like a double off set outline (Black/White) on the reference image which I've never been able to reproduce exactly...
Generally I love challenges but I think I spent enough time on this outdated appearence now... I'll stay online to see if someone has more success than me š
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I usually rarely, if ever, use the contour styles in Photoshop. So this was a nice āpractice exerciseā with acceptable results. However, I don't want to spend any more time on it.
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thoughts? tried to be a bit experimental
You've made both images from a picture or just turned the first one into a black and red version?
i made them both from this
Wow! Love the gritty effect you've done with this image!
I don't know exactly how you did it but I assume there is Gradient map involved... I would perhaps play with background level around the subject to get more contrast around the edges... The left side is a bit sinking in the background...
I mean, something like this...
But your versions still nice!
looks great. You can try adding shadow and reflection.
True.
@glacial grove thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #86 - 23)
You're welcome.
oh yeah, very cool
thanks
tbh the background was just some random picture of an eye i just distorted it so much you can't tell š¤£
@glacial grove Are these the images you used for your previous design?
what do you think i can improve on this design?
this is meant to be for practice not for anything
Nice gritty design! I wonder if the white outline is really necessary on the Skull and Hand designs...
On the "eye" design it helps because of the dark bacground but on these I'm not sure...
Were these outlines created using the āStrokeā option in the āLayer Stylesā panel?
Nicely done!
IMO, grainy subject over a grainless background seems a bit weird...What if you try to add a bit of grain on the background too...
It might make the whole design more cohesive.
Great work anyway!
Kind of
I just made a halftone in Photoshop
Itās different from the second one thoigh
Thanks
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1125)
This is the real deal
Some time can use of your native language make a better result as a prompt to GenFill than a prompt here is example I use a Swedish prompt to this image the result is from Gemini 3 or Nano Banana Pro. The promt is "Gör tydligare" if you will try the prompt and not have à Alt + 0246 on PC Opt+U O this is for US-keyboard. I did also use a English " Make Sharper" and it did not give the expected results. Img 1 Original, Img 2 Swedish prompt, Img 3 English prompt, Original images is taken from Empire State Building observation deck. I used Nana Banana for both prompts,
Funny design! I would use the same space for horizontal and vertical edges of your frame...
For the text, I'm not sure the black and thin white outline serve well the design... You might try to use colors picked from the image...
Here is an sample made with colors from the pictures... There are multiple combinations to test...
Finally, Your font is really classic. If it's on purpose that's fine but keep in mind font choice depends the tone you want to give to your design...
For example I used a casual/funny font => this radically changes the tone of the design.
Interresting!... Sharpening looks better (in my opinion) on the english version but the statue's arbitrary reorientation completely ruins the whole thing!
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ty and i made the white outlines cause it was like this before but i changed the color and added a bevel/corner radius to it so it pops out more
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do i add anything or change up/improve anything tho?
and yea i added it with the stroke in layer style
i made it rasterized so its cleaner
here it is without the outlines
I have not test if add more prompt will help like "do not rotate the statue"
Worth a try... Even if some AI models don't handle "negative" prompts.
That helped but not so sharp
Yeah⦠But at least it's sharper than the original⦠š
this is to funny I try this prompt "Make Sharper the statue look easter" a little misspell
How did you capture the original image? Telephoto lens? Liberty Island is a very far from the Empire State Building.
I use zoom on my Canon Power shoot S3IS that model had optics zoom correspond to 1200 mm 35mm camera, distains ESB and Statius of Liberty is 8.415 m or 8.4 km or 5,23 mile
I took this from Top of the Rock. Liberty Island is waaaaay out there. :D
I have some decent shots from the Obs Deck at Empire but Liberty Island was too far away.
I think my lates Canon PowerShoot SX70HS had make a perfect shoot I got a perfect photo of Mercurius whit that camera, it is not easy to get a good shoot it's mush smog, I was in NewYork between connections so had only 3 hours in NY before I hade to go back to Newark NJ for my flight hoe to Denmark/Sweden, I got a lucky shoot of the statue from the airplane the it turned to go over the Atlantic, this was in 2006
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would like to have your feedback on this.
https://www.instagram.com/p/DWZHKP7iQA6
That looks awesome! Love this effect I would be curious to know how did you achieve this Fx...
hey thanks. was not really confident with this one. but happy to see your review. Yeah i got this effect using touchdesigner but enhanced in photoshop
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1128)
Didn't know touchdesigner... Is it a plug-in or a stand-alone app?
I love all of them but the multicolored one is my favorite... Turned out well!š
its a standalone software. even i am not familiar with it. was just playing around. tinkering with some tools.
hahah but i was least confident with the multicolored lol. but thanks franck
rlly clean i love the effect and maybe add a texture in the back unless your going for simplistic
I really like this look and the roach was a nice choice.
For me the pattern feels a little too uniform. My example is rushed but it shows what breaking the uniformity could look like.
Again, you've made a great piece.
You could easily do what I did by painting black onto a new layer. However it would be preferable to do this with masking if your design has transparency against a separate black background layer.
Any feedback?
Cool
Good colors
There is psd file if anyone wants
There is a white halo around some of the cut out items.
You could try applying a small Inner Glow set to black with a Blend Mode of Multiply to make it less obvious.
cool thank you. Yeah i was going for simple background to enhance the roach color and its flashes
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Thanks a lot for the feedback, yeah even i felt that uniformity a bit disturbing at first and tried to break it by painting black. but i also felt the original one was fine. but yeah now looking at your example, it makes sense.
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Cheers. Good luck with the design.
super cool but i do think the effect can be toned down cause when i first saw it i thought it was a spray from a bottle instead of a roach š
effect should not be toned down. it looks good because of the amount of tone it has.
admittedly, i did not recognise the object as a roach at first
Itās not necessarily bad, but itās missing too many essential elements to achieve a good Vidiq ranking.
The āsecretā to a high-performing thumbnail lies in a clever blend of psychological triggers and data-driven design. Rather than simply creating an āaestheticā image, the thumbnail must spark ācuriosityā that compels the viewer to click immediately.
You should do some research on the key elements of a successful thumbnail... The rule of three elements, text that teases...etc.
Additionally, looking at your thumbnail, thereās clearly a lack of contrast between your main elements and the background (dark elements on a dark background). Keep in mind the 10% rule: (Since most viewers are on mobile, shrink your design to 10% of its size; if you canāt clearly see the subject or read the text, itās too cluttered.)
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Did you make the animation with After Effects?
Seedance 2 between the frames
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modded with Gemini and krea realtime ..
the workflow was super fun
the lines were done on illustrator
truth is .. the better of a handle one has on AI workflows .. the easier and less limited the creative process becomes .. the whole culture is designed to keep your creativity imprisoned ... the artist has already broken the mold
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very clean i like the hands going around but i do think they look too dark compared to the blue bg
looks like a monochrome hand came into a bright colorful page
maybe a better font as well?
and a texture in the back
overall 7/10
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npp
I think that was his intention
oh
mightve been
but i think it'd look kinda better with it being on the hand as well
like colors blending in a bit
Yeah maybe. But I think it was a good decision that he made the arms monochrome. That way the arms stay subtle, the eye isnāt overwhelmed, and it can focus on the text and the background.
oh good point
But both ways could work
in that case it'd be like an 8/10
A bit of context might help in giving an appropriate rating... Generally, the rate is based on the assignment's brief...
Technically, it's very well done! Great concept!
I know some people aren't convinced by the monochrome effect on the hands, but I think it works pretty well.
Points to improve (IMO):
- The darker hand at the top left is "killing" a bit the B (I would try tu use a brighter one if possible),
- Some letters have weird distortions that catch my eyes (I, N bottom of G),
- I would try to add some noise in the letters to match the rest of the design...
These are just minor details... 8/10
Thanksss
Any suggestions on the layout?
1- Not sure the use of different fonts for "R" and "etrospection" is a good idea...
2- Do you plan to keep the thin line frame all around your composition?
3-Are all the elements you want to include in your arrangement visible in the shared image?
(Retrospection, next stop:, the main picture and the sentence "You are enough. You're always moving forward even while resting")
For now everything seems to be stacked in top right corner and it gives an unbalanced composition feeling...
Don't know if I understand well (english is not my native language) What's the next stop?
For 1, I took inspiration from other gd work where some of the letters, usually the first one is a script font followed by serif or sans serif. For 2 thats just the margin it isn't part of the design. 3 for the most part yes but I will try using decorative elements in my files to finish it off, nothing very distracting.
Next stop is like where the train is heading to next
To stop at for a bit then to the next location
OK! What's the tone? Serious, more casual, optimistic... I understand what you're trying to do with the title but I wonder if the font styles go well together(?)... Can you share an example/a reference image of the effect you're trying to reproduce?
@deft bane : what if you use sans serif rather serif font for "etrospection"?...
Also I would suggest you to use a grid system to place your elements in your composition...
Composing with grids offers you almost infinite possibilities....
Just few ideas (even if I don't have exactly the context)...
Thanks a lot for the suggestion! For context this style of posters was my inspiration
And mood was supposed to be chill, somewhat serious and optimistic
That looks very cool.
amazing but maybe add a shadow to the computer to signify as if its there instead of floating?
Thats not mine its just inspiration
ahh i see
not bad but i think the R should be a different font thats closer to the E rather than the middle being so distance toward the E and the bottom has space to add stuff like retro
Great example! As you can see, the graphic designer probably used a grid to create this designā¦
The choice of fonts and the spacing between characters are also important⦠Theyāre different, but they go well together
What do yall think?
The noise/grain effect seems pretty heavy-handed.
I tried to make the image like in the 90s anime
maybe too much, I'll try lowering it
Can I get an opinion on this? I feel like it's missing something, text effect or placement
It's for a social media post
Iāll look at it
thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #82 - 24)
I'd maybe just reposition things a little bit. Change the spacing slightly.
In which areas?
I made an image. It's right there.
Oh lol, I don't see it for some reason
Love the colors and the main idea but IMO there few points to improve or to test.
1- Too many space at the top. I would move everything up a bit.
2-I would try a bolder weight for UP TO and OFF! (try with same weight than 2025 MODEL)
3- The way the white car is framed and how close the gray SUV is to the edge seem odd to meā¦
Thereās a visual imbalance on the left, and Iāve never seen a photo of cars where theyāre framed only halfway like that...
I think there should be a white outline around āBlowoutā
Okay valid. I wanted the vehicles to take up most space of the design so it does seem quite crammed. In the brief it was a minimum of 2 cars.
Got it.
That's a good idea, thank you!
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #82 - 25)
Youāre welcome!
Added white outline in 2 ways, personally I think 1 is way better. 2 seems a bit excessive
I like 2! Just make it thinner.
(sorry if this is too much of a demand)
can you make it glow?
Make it semi-transparent
Noodling... in the Abstract
I think you should add some stars behind the guy
Otherwise, very nice job!
I like the blur effect
Hi guys, back to the art after a while, any thoughts?
make the background darker
Let me do a demo for you
Here's an idea.
I like the colours.
What we can see of the face feels a little flat in terms of lighting compared to everything else. Perhaps a little sparkle in the eyes or a little more in the way of highlights and shadows?
Amazing job
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Nice job! Your stuff looks very solid.
I need help in the placement of the small pictures, Im trying to make a poster of an artist. Im trying to do smth similar to this. Im not sure what to do with the background either
Add some color back to the black and white image
Put something on the bottom
For the background, do a blue vignette
Great job, btw!
I cam up with this for now! I think it is still missing something
put the color back on the black and white image if you can
Alright Ill try that, is there anything I should do to the bg?
Add the viginette
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hey this is just an idea but what if you add some color inside of the magnifier?
skin color or any color of your choosing
it might look nicer
so am not a big illustrator guy
I hail for Photoshop supremacy
all the scene in the videos where designed in Photoshop than animated in after effect
I know it's not the best work flow
but thats what I know to do for now
as for all the social media posts design they where all done in Photoshop am not that good in graphic design so I can't go in details about the process as am not the one who did them
but they where mainly done using Photoshop and adobe firefly from generating the photos to editing them
thanks for taking your time to look into it
That would look good maybe, how can I do that tho?
add a color on a different layer on that part of the magnifier than use the color option for blending
blending options i forgot what the little dropdown menu was
but it has overlay and stuff
Alright I'll look into it, thanks!
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How would you rate this design out of 10 guys ?
Please don't hesitate to share any criticism you have; it helps me improve.
Hey, any thoughts? Photobashed and retextured with brush set
Fast time lapse you may see here:
p.s ibzanarts was my old nickname (if someone interested)
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how can I make the text fit and blend in with what's around it, I have text that blended in well before, but that was through either luck, or just pressing random buttons for thirty minutes until it worked, but that became too time consuming, please explain.
8/10. Maybe make the background a little darker
Make the logo shine/glow a little
Some threshold effect and maybe turn the blood down a bit.
Otherwise, thatās a good start!
What exactly do you want it to look like?
Peak
Can you make the text bigger?
hey how does this look?
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Better
What can I do to make it even better?
Make the girl light purple.
Alright I'll be looking to that
not too bad but i think it shouldnt be over the eye and could be a different color that matches the vibe
I'll try to help out!
damn this looks so good
To me, the design is a bit disjointed. If the main article of this magazine is "Film Noir" then perhaps the design theme should be "darker." The font choices for "Film Noir" text are also not great. Again, if this is the headline, then it should be bold and clearly legible. If you're going to include a bar code in the design, note that they are always black bars and black numbers on a white field; it often includes a price nearby (usually above). This is a quick mockup of what I'm talking about.
Nice concept!
thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm crater (current: #325 - 5)
i would like to see more of your designs
if you want something more colorful
thanks :P
When I think film noir, it doesn't conjure "colorful" notions for me. Classic, Golden Age noir flicks are mostly black and white movies, sometimes with blue tone / sepia tone images depending on the film stock. I personally wouldn't use that mauve color but it was included in the Ops post so I went with it. If it were my layout, I would choose more black and blue hues to stay in the dark, cool themes of classic film noir movies. We'd also have to know more about the brand. I don't know what FAOUZIA is or what it represents. Thus, its all spit-balling at this point and personal tastes.
Been recently stuck in a art block and this is my first graphic in a month and would like some feedback. I feel like its compelete but unsure if the text in the double pager is too much or just right.
When you say "double pager" are you talking about a magazine spread? If so, I think running the text across the spine would be an issue. Perhaps try two columns of text.
If it was being printed then yes it would be an issue. My posts mainly meant for digital slides.
The blue and red are quite striking. Nice work with the colour.
Makes sense. I think the lines of text are still way too wide and would benefit from columns. By the time you run your eye from the right back to the left you've lost track of what line you should be reading.
Ah, you do have a point.
bevel and emboss on the first picture
On the text?
yes
I don't completely agree but I'll try it next time
I think it is a good start. For the Acura Page I would try to find a better Background that would represent the more the car finish. For me it more looks like two shades of blue, but a car finish so much.
For the Image with the kind of double Expusure with the Text on the hood... maybe look that there is no double exposure that disstracts so much. The viewer does not know what that would be.
For the Page with the many different angles of the car maybe try not to put the car (=main object) behind Text. Also the distance between the Text and the Car is to low. The distance should be on all sides the same.
rest looks good.
I understand what you're trying to impliment. I'll make the changes and see how it goes, thanks!
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Could u send me the barcode element and the font used for 'film noir'?
Just ideas. Do what feels right for you.
Its nice to see different viewpoints, I never thought of using a dark bg or changing the fonts, so thank you!
You can probably find a better one.
Ill search around thanks
This is an Adobe Font: Abolition
make the background darker
I'm just pitching ideas.... I would:
- Clean the subject (hair cut out is really harsh) and adjust him with CameraRaw filter (soft skin, hair and face details...etc),
- Add rim light and glow behind him to make it pop,
- Subtle dodge and burn to accentuate the details of the subject.
- Darken the edges of the image to draw attention to the subject in the center (vignette effect)
- Try to make the redlines (I don't know what they are supposed to represent) more like a sort of neon glowing (Note:left shoulder line should be masked over the hand)...
Yo this is fire, ty. The red lines are meant to represent cheats, basically wallhacks
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Memphis Grizzlies vs Denver Nuggets
Exploring a clean editorial direction.
Open to collaborations & design work
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What do you guys think about this āļø
I need some help with the fonts and placement, I'm trying to make this look like a magazine cover but just going really plain
the fonts suit an artist like charile xcx
but Im super proud of myself with the adjustment layers, this is one of my first projects in ps
Nice effect!
What if you right align "Queen Of Pop-Rap" and "Define...Feminine" blocks of text?
Oo how can I do that? Also does the lines seem corny? My friend says so and I can't think of suitable lines
I'm not a big fan of the headlines - however I'm also not the target audience. I'd suggest:
āDoja Cat Doesnāt Fit the Box - She Owns Itā
āPop. Rap. Chaos. Doja Cat Rules It Allā
āUnfiltered. Unbothered. Unstoppable.ā
āNo Labels. No Limits.ā
As for the quote, I have no idea if she said that specfic line but I prefer:
āI Decide What Feminine Looks Likeā
āThereās No One Way to Be Meā
āIām Not Here to Behaveā
āI Make My Own Rulesā
āYou Donāt Get to Define Meā
Additionally, you have too many 'titles' and no hierarchy - I don't know what's meant to be a headline.
However, that's no different to other magazines - they're similar!
Alright how can I create a hierarchy? I think it'll make the design even better but I'm not sure which line should be the headline
In your version, every headline uses a different font. - for seemingly no reason. (except for perhaps the barely italic bit for the quote).
I do actually really like that font used on the vogue cover.
That's probably Futura or Helvetica Neue.
I'll check those fonts out, Thanks! The sizing off fonts can make a big impact too right?
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #5 - 1197)
Yes. - Avoid the condensed font. Yours looks like it's all been STRETCHED!
You can use different sizes, but if done more tastefully it can feel like a more 'typographical' headline: - Like my example here:
Here we see different fonts, but at least you can see what's meant to be the 'main headline' (after the masthead) right in the middle.
@prime rune - Good luck š
Thank you so much for the advice! I'll try to implement them in my design
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #5 - 1198)
A few quick thoughts:
1 - Too much empty space in the bottom right corner. => This throws off the composition.
2 - The very bright area between the two players is distracting.
3 - Adjust the white balance of the player in the foreground to match that of the player in the background.
4 - You could enlarge the "Game Day" text block.
A quick test,
The player in the foreground has been enlarged and repositioned to fill the empty space and rebalance the composition,
White balance adjusted for the player in the foreground,
The space between the players has been darkened to reduce distractions,
"Game Day" text enlarged...
Thanks for this
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #7 - 1140)
Youāre right looks a lot better with the edits. Wow bro š«” thanks
Iāll implement the edits
can u guys pls give helpful feedback?
Make the yellow parts glow a little, if you're going for the stained glass look.
This is amazing. Very nice work, James!!!
you are using different colors
increase the size of the subject
that's kinda the point
you wanna use different colors?
yeah
ok
increase the size of the text cardi b one
ok
do share it after making changes
I'll make the Japanese text smaller
do share the steps as well
the changes you will be making
you are very interested in this
thank you
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #72 - 28)
You're welcome!
Thank you too.
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm crater (current: #285 - 6)
i will make changes and share it with you and you should try to make little tweaks as well
Sure thing.
@novel comet Hey how does this look now? I think it looks better, I'm not sure what to add in empty space above
Woah this looks really good!
thank you
i am open to criticism or feedback as well
Gave +1 Creative Carma to @prime rune (current: #662 - 2)
i want to improve
Maybe add some texture in the bg? I'm not quite talented to give feedback haha
this one is good as well
i think you need to pick different fonts
its more like getting to know what you would have done
i am open to ideas
Yes I was thinking the same, but I'm not quite sure what fonts to use, they dont go well with eachother
thats great! What type of style are you going for, is there a reference pic u follow?
use something more fancy than Impact
nope
for this one i didnt use anything
I think adding texture might help too and maybe a border?
Turn down the grain on Dojaās skin like 50%
How can I edit the grain again? Everytime I try to, it ends up increasing
I'll try that out thansk
Youāre welcome