📝project-feedback

[sacred eagle]

That's the og photo ?

i see

Very impressive on the composite

[wooden oak]

No. I used your "low poly" image as as structural reference. Rendered a new car and a new background. Then comp'd those together in Photoshop.

[sacred eagle]

How'd you render it

[wooden oak]

An AI model.

[sacred eagle]

Oh ok

so you referenced the photo in an ai model and composite with my original photo

Ok I see

[wooden oak]

This new image is a Generative Expand with Photoshop to add new areas to the right and left of the image.

[sacred eagle]

Yea

What ai model did you use ?

[wooden oak]

Stable Diffusion

[sacred eagle]

ok

Looks sick

Anyways do u know how to match the haze in my original question

[wooden oak]

You could try to use a Camera Raw filter. Select the background and work on that a bit. Not sure exactly. I'd probably have to experiment with it.

[sacred eagle]

I tried using a gradient filter with the original colors from left to right masked w the background from where the mtns was but I sort of browned it out and ruined it

The distances are different in each photo which threw me off as the haze wouldn't be as noticeable

[wheat sigil]

I ruined this into this.

[wheat sigil]

more cyanish

[raw wadi]

good job 🙂

[vale parrot]

any suggestions for my client?

[frank mist]

how can i improve to make this look more professional

and also im using canva

[vale parrot]

Use photoshop.

[frank mist]

🤓

[hoary wren]

which one is better? (i made em for fun btw)

[red garden]

It would be better if you remove the bats below the second photo

[vale parrot]

1st one

[hoary wren]

alr thx

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @vale parrot (current: #914 - 1)

[vale parrot]

ill try and recreate it

[hoary wren]

wait really?

[vale parrot]

yeah

[hoary wren]

alr man

[lusty vessel]

after

before after

before after (insta page dmt__sr)

[trail gyro]

Second one but remove the bats below

Cause there are already bats in the logo

I would hire you for game poster/art design bro

You're peak

[turbid ember]

what do you guys think of it and rate the design also

[hoary wren]

GOD DAMN

[hoary wren]

sure

[hoary wren]

wait a minute you know Arabic?

[hoary wren]

the Lights On The Leaves should be fixed up a little to match the sunset and Environment if you know what I mean

and the glass as well

[storm mirage]

Album cover

[lusty vessel]

ye but im pershian

[hoary wren]

NICE

[hoary wren]

fix up the Lights and shadows

[lusty vessel]

Thank you for your explanation

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @hoary wren (current: #433 - 3)

[hoary wren]

np

[hoary raft]

hi all, trying to work on an old image of my grandmother, any way to really clear this photo up? or at least bring a studio feel to it?

oh lord hdr really ruined that, one sec let me reupload that

[hoary wren]

you have a really cool grandmother🫡

[hoary raft]

thank you!!! shes 94 today!

[hoary wren]

ohhh

[hoary raft]

i am trying some color grading since sea thru is no longer a thing :/

[hoary wren]

damn

[hoary wren]

she looks 30 or 20 in this pic ngl

or 50 or some like that

[hoary raft]

i thought the same thing! shes always been very youthful, her hair is graying now though because shes at the point where shes stopped dyeing it

[hoary wren]

cool bro

[trail gyro]

Tell your grandma I said she's godamn amazing

[hoary raft]

Thank you!!!!

[hoary wren]

SAME

[trail gyro]

👨‍❤️‍💋‍👨

[hoary wren]

wha

[trail gyro]

Freaky

[hoary wren]

what do you guys think of this btw?

i made it for fun

[trail gyro]

Bendy and the ink machine?

[hoary wren]

uh huh

[trail gyro]

You're my best friend now

[hoary wren]

oOoOo

me got a new friend

[trail gyro]

More than friends 👅 💦

[hoary wren]

AYO

[trail gyro]

this slaps but it doesn't fit the game (idk if you tryna make it fit the game or nah)

[hoary wren]

no no no

i made it for fun

[trail gyro]

Yeah that slaps

Add the horns though

Like one to the very right

And one to the left

[tough wadi]

How much do you rate this Thumbnail

[odd flame]

cant see the body, wayy too dark

[wheat sigil]

Whats neon glow, oniric or you draw linear dodge (add) layer?

[supple turtle]

Hello, everyone! I've been doing a UX/UI design of a computer application where you can learn courses, etc. Please review and rate my efforts please)
Your feedback and comments on my new design are invaluable to me 🎉

https://www.behance.net/gallery/204705211/LearnEase-Web-App

[vale parrot]

Well its supposed to be dark plus its just a demo

Dont really care how dark and blahblah it is

[vale parrot]

Thanks anyways 😄

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @odd flame (current: #77 - 23)

[thorn matrix]

graphic design for tshirts, I am launching a brand with this similar design layout

I plan to do mario, studio ghibli, persona 5, sailor moon, hello kitty, and DBZ

each designs will have different color schemes and concepts but same mosaic layout

[trail gyro]

Ok this SLAPS

THIS SLAPS SO HARD

LET BRO COOK 🗣️💯🔥🔥

[knotty coral]

what should i do to improve this poster (i'm a beginner)

[vale parrot]

Make it a black and white poster, i suggest making it a paper themed poster

And also the background doesnt match what is happening

[thorn matrix]

Thank you 🙂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @trail gyro (current: #344 - 4)

[hoary wren]

OH MY GOD

SOMEONE HIRE THIS MAN

[thorn matrix]

Thanks 🙂 I am going to have about 50 of these characters each with a different stylized direction and franchise.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @hoary wren (current: #344 - 4)

[thorn matrix]

I am working on the next one from Mario then will move onto persona 5

[hoary wren]

respect🫡

[thorn matrix]

Thank you 🙂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @hoary wren (current: #280 - 5)

[indigo cave]

may recive feedback on this project

[wintry orchid]

Went for a comic book feel, what should I change?

[hoary wren]

bro

this looks like it can be a real menu

[hoary wren]

is this the cover?

put the comics code on the right side of the cover

and make it abit big

or leave it like how it is

[wintry orchid]

It’s not an actual comic book, it’s a poster that’s designed to look like a comic book cover

[hoary wren]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

that's nice

[wintry orchid]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @hoary wren (current: #250 - 6)

[hoary wren]

np

[abstract oxide]

This looks fantastic mate. Great work.
If you are looking for some serious feedback perhaps you could describe more about the character/comic/genre/style/etc…

[abstract oxide]

Really nice work. Very professional. A few thoughts…

• Do you even need MENU/FOOD on the cover?
• I feel like there is a little too much empty space within the menu
• Perhaps remove the boxes around the text to let it breathe

[abstract oxide]

This looks great

[thorn matrix]

Thank you! I'm working on the next ones right now.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #16 - 131)

[thorn matrix]

Someone colored it for me.

I mean I can color it too

@abstract oxide @hoary wren @trail gyro

I was going to have the black and white going

But I can just sell both.

[abstract oxide]

They both look fantastic. Again, great work.

[hoary wren]

niceeee

that's cool ngl

[abstract oxide]

Are you building these using vector shapes or is everything pixel based?

[abstract oxide]

The reason I ask is because if everything is vector, Illustrator might be the more optimal place to build these.

[thorn matrix]

Teach me?

I'm using PS

I only know how to use PS LR and actually IL too but I use IL to build catalogs

U can design in it?

[thorn matrix]

Everything is pixel and manually colored with my apple pencil

I have physically drawn the icon shapes. And retouched the colors when sizing because the sizing skews the color.

[abstract oxide]

Wow. You have my respect. I had no idea you were drawing the icons.

[thorn matrix]

So some of them are taken from places but I recolored black and white and stylized them

So here's my dry bones.

Idk why I cared about him so much cause in the grand scheme u won't notice.

[abstract oxide]

Very cool. These look great.

[thorn matrix]

So some of these things have add ons and stylized changes. But when I am sizing the icons they lose clarity. So I zoom in and retouch them up

I spent a LONG time on peach retouching icons.

But she was the first. Not the others will be easy cause I have the icons now.

So for mario I wanna do
About 6 characters.

[abstract oxide]

Nice. Building the pool of assets is often the longest part of the process.

[thorn matrix]

I thought so too but those touch ups were kicking my ass lol

I'm excited to move onto persona 5 those will have the same mosaic concept but stylized VERY differently. Same icon concept though.

[abstract oxide]

If you haven't already, I would encourage you to consider creating these icons as vector objects or sketch them and later convert them. You would gain so much flexibility. You could also then print them at any size.

[abstract oxide]

The Image Trace feature in Illustrator could be very useful for that.

[thorn matrix]

Can you guide me later or point me to a video?

[abstract oxide]

There are many videos on YouTube but a specific one doesn't jump to mind. I recommend doing a search on something like "How to Image Trace in Illustrator".

[thorn matrix]

Ok thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #16 - 132)

[thorn matrix]

I can like some them and move them into mu outline on there?

Isn't illustrator for my magazine yearbook catalog etc stuff?

I'm an idiot that's indesign

I use indesign light room and photoshop haha

[abstract oxide]

Illustrators primary purpose is for creating vector graphics. There are far more tools available in Illustrator, compared to Photoshop, for creating and manipulating vector paths. While the work you are doing can be done in Photoshop, it looks like it would be more at home in Illustrator.

[thorn matrix]

Perfect thank you 😊

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #16 - 133)

[thorn matrix]

I will try to teach myself

[abstract oxide]

There are many programs out there that you could possibly use. Just explore whether they are creating pixel based or vector based graphics. It could help save you a lot of time if you later had to convert everything to vector.

[abstract oxide]

I'm signing off mate. You've got some amazing skills. Keep up the great work and best of luck with those projects.

[trail gyro]

Your welcome pookiebear

[trail gyro]

I would buy a shirt with this on it

Also reminds me of creepypasta for some reason

You're an amazing chef, marry me RIGHT NOW

[thorn matrix]

That's what I'm creating. Their graphic tees. I'll let u know when I'm done.

[trail gyro]

💍 NOW

[thorn matrix]

Lol!

[trail gyro]

NOWWWWWWW!!!!

[wintry orchid]

This isn’t actually a comic book, it’s a poster with a comic book design. It’s a rapper from Brooklyn.

[hoary wren]

FR

[toxic dome]

Thoughts on these?

I know the the hood can use some bledning

[native urchin]

Do you guys like my thumbnails?

People say it is ugly

[toxic dome]

it is

like

im terrified bro are u ok 😭

its 2 am and im gonna have nightmares bro

😭😭

[native urchin]

Its supposed to give an eerie vibe

A B Testing what do u like

[toxic dome]

yeah ur giving me demons bro wtf 😭

[native urchin]

Which one do you like better

I feel like the Top you can read the IM 16 part better

@toxic dome

[toxic dome]

uhhh

i think the to pone

top one

[native urchin]

Ok

I am so bad at photoshop

Like wtf

I watch Piximperfect all day

and I still suk

[spiral tendon]

Feedback?

[simple sleet]

need feedback

[vale parrot]

too much empty space

[vale parrot]

too much empty space here also

[indigo cave]

thanks for the feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #16 - 134)

[jolly yew]

HAND DRAWN TYPO

[toxic dome]

Thoughts?

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. Happy to help.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @indigo cave (current: #915 - 1)

[dense pier]

I'm exited to share with you my new project on Behane! https://www.behance.net/gallery/204675963/La-Dolce-Vita-Italian-Restaurant

[last ferry]

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1269796526721601691/1269796924563783721/prev.png?ex=66b15e0a&is=66b00c8a&hm=8caa5bd1243db08928b24940261c79828b8a521e03aaf3512039eb961f69724d&

[wooden oak]

Cohesive design. Excellent work.

[wooden oak]

"Hidden#0001" stands out the most here (and almost distracts from the rest of it). Perhaps actually change the coffee cup mockup to have an actual brand on it and then dial down the watermark so we can focus on the composite. Just my opinion.

[last ferry]

Okay thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2218)

[dense pier]

Thank you! 🤩

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2224)

[glacial flower]

What do you guys think about this?

[novel comet]

Nice, but Triple is spelt incorrectly 🙂

Personally though, I think the red and yellow Background are too overpowering, making it hard to see the burger!

[glacial flower]

Which colours would you suggest?

[novel comet]

Maybe go for more of a darker, radial gradiant?

Just helps make the burger stand out more, and not end up 'hidden' on it's own poster

You could still include your yellow slant/angle if you want:

[wooden oak]

Triple? I see five burger patties in there. ;)

[novel comet]

(triple 'bacon') 🙂

I'm hungry now.

[wooden oak]

It comes with a doctor's referral for angioplasty. :)

[ripe canopy]

Hey!

What do you think about my photomanipulations?

[toxic dome]

Fire 🔥

[ripe canopy]

Thanks!!

[toxic dome]

Wait... Benjamin van valen?

[ripe canopy]

My favorite designing youtuber

[toxic dome]

Mine too XD

[languid zephyr]

I don't know how to tell you do it but the texture of the man, zombies and grave stone are not the same. I struggle with this too. They are cut out really well, I don't see anything around them but the texture and tonal differences are pretty obvious. I would test using the burn tool on the gravestone and see if you can get it to blend a bit better

Also if you have this in layers still then trying using the burn tool on the zombies to make them appear like they are in the distance, also the moonlight is behind them and they are very bright 🙂

[ripe canopy]

burn tool?

I dont have photoshop in english language

but i've never heard about it

[languid zephyr]

Would you like me to screenshot it? Or find a video for you? It's a super useful tool, it can literally burn the shadows, midtones and highlights.

It's helpful in making things look distant, blending them into shadows and creating depth

[ripe canopy]

if you find a video

i will be grateful a lot!

[languid zephyr]

https://youtu.be/wPIrBoQH548?si=Tjxxzsu85gDIogGQ

[ripe canopy]

oh

thanks a lot!

[toxic dome]

juicy burger

when u buy it it’s all smushed bru

[toxic dome]

anything i could change or add? blurry due to the fact that its a screenshot btw

[toxic dome]

(screenshot)

[abstract oxide]

The colour and contrast look great in this. Nicely done. A few thoughts...

• If the person is strongly silhouetted, shouldn't the rocks be as well?
• The shadow of the sticks/skis sticking out of the ground looks off.

[abstract oxide]

A Benny fan I see 🙂 Nice work mate.
You have a strongly backlit scene with some nice dark shadows on the rocks facing us on the left. Elements like the arches should also have similar shading.

[toxic dome]

do yk how i could fix the skis? ive been trying but it hasnt really gone well lol

[toxic dome]

yeah i was thinking the shadows of the rocks might be off due to the fact that im really dark, ill change that

[ripe canopy]

Thanks!!!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #15 - 135)

[toxic dome]

i think im finished with it (still a screenshot)

[glacial flower]

Okay Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #5 - 955)

[glacial flower]

What about this?

[glacial flower]

the bacon

[abstract oxide]

Great work adjusting the shadows. The whole thing feels way more cohesive now.

[toxic dome]

thanks for the feedback btw! really helped me

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #15 - 136)

[abstract oxide]

As for the shadows on the skis, perhaps take some inspiration from the shadow on the person.

[abstract oxide]

That's great to hear. Thanks mate. Keep creating awesome compositions.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @fleet grove (current: #97 - 16)

[toxic dome]

thank youu 🙏❤️

[hollow marsh]

Edited the Headlights, I'd be grateful for anything that will help me do better next time.

[wooden oak]

The overall image is very bright. Editing the image to turn the headlights on... does that make sense in this context? It would be cool if you could do a day-to-night conversion of the image and then turn the headlights on. Just an idea. :)

[hollow marsh]

You are right, that would be cool. I'm gonna try it

[abstract oxide]

Can you post the original so we can compare?

[wooden oak]

I'm not suggesting that you do this (exactly). This is just a 5 min edit for context... but something like this.

[abstract oxide]

You could really strengthen the shadows and midtones with just a single Curves adjustment.

[hollow marsh]

Thanks, I always avoid that tool guess todays the day I try it out

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #15 - 137)

[abstract oxide]

Awesome. Curves are such a powerful tool. Best of luck.

[abstract oxide]

How did you darken the image? The shadows are now brighter than than the car.

[hollow marsh]

I did a gradient map and slightly lowered the opacity. I was trying to get it better but my attempts made the car look unnoticeable so I just quit because I really only cared about the headlights

[cloud lark]

any improvements?/tips

[wooden oak]

I would probably try to make them a bit more dynamic. Maybe add some action lines, glows. If the text is the focus, push the action toward the text. Perhaps don't put the text so close to the edge of the layout. Give it some margin for breathing room. Just a few suggestions...

[cloud lark]

@wooden oak what about the second one also amazing design u made ❤️

[wooden oak]

Here is my example PSD if you want to play around with it, use it, whatevs...

[cloud lark]

thank you. what about the 2nd one.

could you come call 5 minutes?

i really wanted help on smth for so long and it wont take more than 5 minutes

[wooden oak]

I actually have to get going. Stop back tomorrow if you still need help.

[carmine fox]

Trying to edit a DARE style ad, if anyones got feedback real quick that would be greatly appreciated 🙏

Feel like the concept is almost there and there’s a lot of potential, but it just looks like a high school project right now 😭

Idk maybe I’ve stared at it for too long

[glad lion]

Heyyya hope yall doing great, was requesting for some feedback on this

[toxic dome]

why is spongebob there 😭🙏

[wooden oak]

The design is well done. I'd probably remove Sonic and SpongeBob. They don't add much value to the layout. In fact, they kinda cheapen the design a bit. They are also someone's copyrighted characters, so if this was an actual Olympic poster, you wouldn't be allowed to use those in this context.

[glad lion]

he likes having funny socks during races

[glad lion]

thanks alot, let me take them out, just thought it would bring a fun aspect to the socks he likes

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2227)

[toxic dome]

OHHH😭😭

[wooden oak]

Perhaps. Its your design. You can keep them in there. These are just my suggestions.

[native urchin]

Color grading seems a little off to me. Maybe reduce the yellows a bit? Its a frozen tundra but the sun is literally beaming. Its going to melt all the snow

[tough wadi]

Only Indians know who they are 😂 😜

[ripe canopy]

cutting down the forest looks a bit strange lol

[wooden oak]

That is a GIANT FOX and a tiny ufo.

[ripe canopy]

Oh I see now

I've never seen an ufo

maybe its small 😅

[wooden oak]

I haven't either. heh

[ripe canopy]

and i've never seen fox

is it really small?

[wooden oak]

I'm trying to imagine what creature would be the pilot(s) of that thing. They'd have to be like the size of Lego Person.

And the baby fox looks big enough to knock down one of those trees in the background.

[ripe canopy]

oh

thanks a lot!

[native urchin]

How did you add this really cool glow effect?

on the UFO Ray

[wooden oak]

Overlay Blend Mode...

[ripe canopy]

or linear dodge

[wooden oak]

Linear Dodge (Add) will also work in certain instances

[ripe canopy]

or exposure adjustment layer

and hue/saturation

i used here

Benny Productions made a video about highligts

[wooden oak]

Please stop pinging people.

Yes. You can post here. You have to wait until someone has time to help out.

I'm not sure this image makes any sense.

What is this for?

"Infinite Money" with this emoji. I have no idea what this thing in the middle is supposed to be.

I don't know. I don't know this game and I'm not really a fan of any of this.

[native urchin]

Bro nobody is going to steal this xD

[wooden oak]

If "Infinite money" is the most important thing then it should be more prominent.

And as I said last night, perhaps stop putting the text so close to the edges of the layout.

[native urchin]

Its Incredibly close to the edges

safe margins are a thing

[wooden oak]

If you already know everything then don't ask me for advice.

[native urchin]

You should make it more hacker like

[wooden oak]

Stop now or you'll be timed out.

[native urchin]

as soon as you look at it

like with a terminal background

or increase the terminal on the right

[wooden oak]

@cloud lark - At this point, I'm going to suggest that check your behavior. If you continue with that behavior and these belligerent remarks, you won't be welcome here. \

Choose your next words wisely.

I'm doing other things. I don't have time to sit here do this all day.

Learn how to behave in civil society. You've been making belligernet remarks to people for the last two days here.

[native urchin]

I might steal it and use it for my yt videos 🤔

notice how the resolution is so bad but it doesnt matter

Hes in the server

[toxic dome]

screenshot

not sure what to add or change

[ripe canopy]

I would make this ball bigger

because its a bit boring

I mean

nothing happening

[storm mural]

Please rate the following brochure for me.

[abstract oxide]

I think the text overlapping the graphics is hard to read. Personally I would wrap the text around the graphics so there is no overlap.

[wintry orchid]

What should I change? I wanted something relatively minimal similar to the original album cover (2nd picture)

[abstract oxide]

This looks awesome. Very creative.
The blacks are deep and bold on the clothing, particularly near the base. However, the shadow on the ground is very soft. Perhaps try darkening it up.

[wintry orchid]

Good idea, thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #15 - 138)

[novel comet]

I think there are some solid bits there that I like, but some items I don't like...

• I don't like the multiple font colours
• I like the vertical lines beside the text blocks
• I don't like how text appears over the images

[storm mural]

Can you be more specific and how do you see the layout?

[novel comet]

• I don't like how the text appears to be misaligned.

• Font size seems a little inconsistent throughout

[novel comet]

"Grand opening" doesn't work for me either.

[storm mural]

Do you think this layout 2 is better?

[novel comet]

yes, but I'm not sure about the colour choices. - Products seem a bit randomly sized/placed?

[storm mural]

The grand opening is mandatory for me to leave there and cannot be changed. Do you have a better arrangement, cover, or add any words?

[novel comet]

Is this coursework/homework for study?

[storm mural]

That's right

[novel comet]

Cool. - Is the 6pp roll-fold specifically necessary? I'm not suggesting you change it or anything, I was just wondering.

I** do** like the nice big use of this image here:

[storm mural]

I have to make Trifold Brochure it is mandatory

[novel comet]

So I assume, this makes it the front cover. - I'm not really sure what the main title is, or the leaflets main goal is?

Alert people to a stores new grand opening, and the 3 watches they'll be promoting when it opens?

[storm mural]

yes my teacher title just said "Grand opening"
And I pretended to be selling these 3 products, in 1 Trifold Brochure
and that was it

[novel comet]

I think it looks better when you focus on one KEY hero image, instead of splitting attention across...
.....7 different images

[abstract oxide]

Thank you. Again, great work.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wintry orchid (current: #917 - 1)

[novel comet]

Also, pick a nice solid colour scheme and stick to it throughout. - I kinda like orange!

[storm mural]

yes i reviewed the question yes
do you think the first layout is ok with that question?

[novel comet]

Just because a leaflet is trifold, you don't **need **to make 3 distinct columns on the inside spread.

[storm mural]

why haven't i seen you since 3 days ago🥹

[novel comet]

(I was on holiday 🙂 )

[storm mural]

ok so are you free a lot i will post new layout here later

[novel comet]

For a front cover, I'd suggest that "Less is more"!

Perhaps intrigue the reader into opening it up to learn more.

[toxic dome]

i’ll show u what i added when i home, i think it really helps it

[ripe canopy]

can you give this image with clouds?

[novel comet]

Inside can then focus on a main hero shot, with space for smaller secondary images too,,,,

[storm mural]

oh my god did you do it or artificial intelligence?

[novel comet]

I did it. No AI.

@storm mural

[storm mural]

I don't understand the word "Grand opening"
can I use that word on the cover when launching a product?

[novel comet]

Didn't you use the words 'grand opening' on your own leaflet?

[storm mural]

yes that's right, i mean if we use the word store opening and inside talk about a product like yours is ok, i mean yours is extremely beautiful there's nothing to complain about, the information hierarchy is very good, but i can totally talk about a product in the main content right?

[novel comet]

"Grand opening" would mean "Were opening a new store that sells stuff"... it's not specifcally the term I'd use if I was releasing a new product to the market. I'd use words like "Launching", new release or 'introducing'

[novel comet]

Yeah definitely.

No customer gives a toss about the literal fact a store is opening. They want to see what will benefit them as a result of the store opening. - in our case... it's the new opportunity to get a fancy new watch!

[storm mural]

I understand, because a friend told me:
Yes, the grand opening brochure must show the diversity of the showroom
Ha
And the applicable sales programs

and here are the teacher's requirements
: FINAL PRACTICE EXAM REQUIREMENTS
I. About the topic/content:
The opening/launching event of a brand or product of your choice.
The information content on the design publications must have at least the following parts:
Brand name
Opening program name
Product
Opening promotion
Contact information

---

[novel comet]

Cool. Well I guess you can show diversity on the inside. Maybe include some key other watches, and perhaps on the back, a nice grid of other brands or product ranges.

[storm mural]

yes it's a bit hard to figure out what you said because i had to translate it, but ok i get the general idea

[novel comet]

I just mean a simple, clean grid showing other brands on the back of the leaflet. - helps showcase alternative options and shows the broad range of products on sale.

[storm mural]

?

[toxic dome]

when i’m home of course!

[ripe canopy]

of course

but I will be grateful for this🤠

[toxic dome]

whatchu think so far

and heres the original cloud image btw

[ripe canopy]

thanks!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @fleet grove (current: #95 - 17)

[ripe canopy]

I mean for me blue Ball should be bigger a lot

look at highlights on a perskn and on a ship in the right

almost the same

if you put less you will make less mistakes (my math teacher always tells us it)

and it can be accurate

maybe Ball could be closer amd octopus smaller brcause it is far away

[toxic dome]

thankss

ill change all that rn, test things around

[ripe canopy]

you're welcome

[warm crater]

How does it look?

[toxic dome]

this looks decent, in my opinion , but isnt the drop shadow little too much ?

[toxic dome]

how did you create this something this good in such a short span of time ?

😭

[storm mural]

thank you so much, and i love you
but i'm designing a new layout, that layout i've abandoned, i'll post it later for everyone's comments

[toxic dome]

love to see it

little softer drop shadow would look good

[abstract oxide]

I like your design. I would probably move the person up slightly or scale them up a little to get their eyes on the top third line (rule of thirds).

[abstract oxide]

A couple of quick examples of how you could potentially more closely unify the different images, if you wanted to that is.

[warm crater]

I am definitely gonna try that

[abstract oxide]

Excellent 🙂

[storm mural]

HELLO GUYS, PLEASE RATE THE FOLLOWING BROCHURE

[toxic dome]

really love the zoom in going behind the green watch , but why dont blue watch didnt get that zoom in behind it

regardless good design

[echo umbra]

NEED FEEBACK

I am a newbie, I just started today. How can I improve this? The goal of this design is to be warm and the same energy or vibe as light by wave to earth. Wave to Earth is a korean band. The font I used is poppins, is there another font I could use that could maybe look better? Im just looking for ways to improve this or maybe what I could I potentially add to the bottom right corner near the lyrics or should I leave it blank? Any feedback is welcomed and appreciated :))

[novel comet]

Poppins is a good font choice. Stick with it. - Whole thing looks smart.

Maybe avoid the orphan word by making the text box a little deeper

[echo umbra]

okay thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #5 - 960)

[last ferry]

tips

?

[wooden oak]

What is the purpose of this graphic? Perhaps add something; some background elements.

[last ferry]

im just working on the text atm

the graphic design is for "FiveM"

if you want some other designs to get an idea of what it is please lmk

[wooden oak]

Mmm. I don't know what "Woo RP York" or "FiveM" is but its a nice effect. The words are legible.

[last ferry]

i mean like what can i do to improve the text design? if your unable to help that is completely fine

[wooden oak]

I'm not sure what to suggest to improve it because I don't really know what it is or the intent of it. The composition seems fine. The words are readable. The effect seems somewhat interesting. I don't know if the glowing/radioactive green rock effect is related to the words but as it is, it seems to work.

[limpid condor]

ay

fellow fivem designer

[last ferry]

Hey avada

Can U give some tips?

[limpid condor]

dunno

really depends on what u do with ur background

but i like my text not grungy

more clean

[edgy heart]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C-YkIv6BpiK/?utm_source=ig_web_button_share_sheet&igsh=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==

redemptormortis2015

#art #religión #love #beauty #fyp

Instagram

[wintry orchid]

What should I change?

[wooden oak]

Add someone running away in fear of alien abduction?

[wintry orchid]

Good idea

[cosmic brook]

My eye goes right to the lavender shop awning since it’s the only pop of color. It pulls the eye away from the action. I would shift that bit to match the blueish tones of the rest of the composition.

[wooden oak]

You might also work on the silhouette. He looks a bit stylized, more of a graphic design. Whereas the rest of the composition is more photo-realistic. He may also be a bit large in comparison to the spaceship.

[toxic dome]

Could you tell me how to make objects ( like humans in image) be like photorealistic painting?

[low flume]

What do yall think of my shirts? started around 2-3 days ago

[dark perch]

rate this is my first creation with photoshop

[wooden oak]

Can you please post an image that people don't have to download to view. Perhaps reduce the size of it a bit.

[sacred eagle]

You should add more detail to the spider with outlines and cool patterns

[storm mural]

how are you guys

[storm mural]

bạn có đó không

[ripe canopy]

I think you should make almost everything darker using levels/curves

and add highlights

[ripe canopy]

I would make text white for example

because it would be more readable

thubnails are small so its very important

[vale parrot]

thanbks

[wintry orchid]

I made some adjustments. I feel like the lighting isn’t great but I’m not really sure what to change about it.

[normal spoke]

for me it feels like there should be darker areas in the foregrond and on the right side of the picture. Also the "big" spaceship looks like its nearer but its darker. For me it should be further away and a bit blurrier. rest looks nice.

[normal spoke]

looks like a 3-folded flyer. Nice overall design. On the Frontpage ther is the name of the Opening Store missing, because its a "grand Opening" Flyer. There are 6 watches listed, mit only 4 can be seen. important information such as the date, time, where the whole thing takes place, etc. is not as prominent n the flyer as it could be. The Designelement (grayish bar on the right side) could also be used on te other pages. On the "About Omega" Page there also could be an image of a watch, etc. Have fun.

[storm mural]

Thank you very much

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #23 - 92)

[toxic dome]

any feedback?

[ripe canopy]

try to check blending options with highlits

double click on a layer and in the bottom you have blending options

[toxic dome]

ik how to blend

and yeah i completley forgot to do that

but im also trying to fix my photoshop

i cant use camera raw filter due to an issue

[ripe canopy]

what does it look when its crashing?

[toxic dome]

it doesnt crash..

says this when i try to open the camera raw filter menu..

[ripe canopy]

do you have good gpu?

[toxic dome]

the thing is

i’ve used crf on other projects

only now this issue started

[ripe canopy]

check preferences

and reset it

[toxic dome]

lemme try it

@short hearth

wrong ping

@ripe canopy

how do i reset preferneces tho

[ripe canopy]

just open

preferences

Edit > Preferences

and this button you will see when you open it

and close a programm

[last ferry]

im using your work as inspiration [ i hope you dont mind ] how could i improve

[toxic dome]

yo

[ripe canopy]

general

and you will see a button

[toxic dome]

"reset all warning dialogs"?

oh wait i got it, let me see if it works

[ripe canopy]

reset photoshop

if it doesn't help

camera raw preferences or performance preferences should be checked

[storm mural]

I love it

[last ferry]

Thank you first time doing this, I want to get commissions for adverts etc

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @storm mural (current: #919 - 1)

[clever yacht]

Could anyone see some obvious mistakes for my photoshop assignment. Im given 2 weeks to do this assignment and I’m wondering what I could add/change

[ripe canopy]

use warp to adjust Coke in the bottom

[clever yacht]

Oh damn I didn’t think about that. Thanks 🙏

[ripe canopy]

not a problem, when I ve done it first time i watched youtube tutorials and i got it from there

theres a lot of bubbles

I would put it on a can

In the past i made some that type of graphics

its an introduction for "photomanipulations" for me

to make good type of that graphic you should be intermediate in photoshop in my opinion

and take care of light sources, shadow etc but not as much as in photomanipulations

check Nour Art youtube Channel for example

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps slightly darken the area below the can and/or add a shadow to show that the can is sitting on something.

[clever yacht]

That’s really impressive work

Thank you for the examples 😁

[clever yacht]

Yeah true

[abstract oxide]

This is rough but hopefully illustrates what I’m talking about.

[barren ibex]

Information is taken from this photo👇🏿

[austere lotus]

fire

[last ferry]

hey tucq

[vale parrot]

any suggestions?

[subtle saffron]

hello fellow members, please give your constructive feedback. thank you in advance.

[terse jetty]

It's good but I think that you've added a drop shadow on the object itself that is not really good in this case. And I think the second one is better for the "Delicious" Text , I just think it's more readable like that than the first one

If I were you I could've maybe find a more appropriate render with a different angle for that dish and make it blend it so it's hovering over that green bar

It's just an idea by the way, It may look good or not 🙂

[amber knoll]

the figure doesn't feel 3D

I think you should a bit of side shadow or smthn

[ripe canopy]

Hey! Someone could give me a good looking orange sky?

[wooden oak]

"Orange"? Do you mean "sunrise" or "sunset"?

[ripe canopy]

yes

you know what I mean propably

[subtle saffron]

thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @terse jetty (current: #40 - 47)

[ripe canopy]

Thanks!!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2254)

[remote delta]

i ade a catalogue

made

kindely review it

[toxic dome]

good design, but the shadow should be at the base of the pot, like the pot exists in graphics itself, instead of shadowing behind the pot.

[subtle saffron]

Thanks, for correcting me,I edited it 😊🙏

[vale parrot]

it has shadow plus u wont see the 3d ofcourse. regarding that its a full black character.

[last ferry]

Truly thanking you for giving me inspiration, i love this style of graphics

[glossy socket]

Thumbnail Concept for video, feedback appreciated

[wintry orchid]

Went for a comic book style poster

[last ferry]

looks good

[abstract oxide]

Really good design.
The character feels quite dark and heavy in comparison to the background. I wonder if at least some heavier shading in parts of the background would help unify the two?
Again, really solid work.

[abstract oxide]

The one highlight on the finger is far brighter than any other. Personally I would raise the highlights a little in a couple of other small areas such as the top of the shoulders.

[wintry orchid]

Good idea, thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #15 - 139)

[wintry orchid]

It’s actually not a highlight, it’s a bandage

[thin ether]

That is such a nice picture (and to use)

[signal sundial]

my partner wants to change OPS text design
any suggestion plz?
it will be concert organization brand logo and OPS should look like from greek mythology

[meager lion]

Duudeee I love Blonde, ur design is DOPE

[meager lion]

Frank be like "Rare as the feathers on my dash from a phoenix" 🗣🔥‼️

While me out here reciting the lyrics in tears from "It's just a fond farewell" 😭🗣

[abstract oxide]

I did notice that but it is still relatively bright.

[abstract oxide]

No worries. Thanks mate.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wintry orchid (current: #590 - 2)

[abstract oxide]

Have you seen the Green/Roman section on the font website dafont.com
https://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=204

[abstract oxide]

You can also have it preview specific text

[storm mural]

you are classy and awesome

[storm mural]

I really laughed out loud when I saw you make really beautiful watch products, I really like you

[last ferry]

Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @storm mural (current: #590 - 2)

[last ferry]

I want to get into the advertisement business but idk where to start

[storm mural]

SO OPEN A PRINTING STUDIO AND DO MORE ADVERTISING

[last ferry]

Printing studio?

[tough wadi]

How much do you rate it ?

[native urchin]

Why dont you turn the person on the right into a hot babe

[native urchin]

.

[hardy sand]

10 my brother

the guy is an 11

any feedback on this

promo flyer for a food companhy

[tough wadi]

Perfect

[hardy sand]

still waiting on more assets

[tough wadi]

Add Vignette

[hardy sand]

to which

[tough wadi]

Add depth

[hardy sand]

smart smart

[tough wadi]

Sides of the Frame So That Focus will be On The Centre

[hardy sand]

great idea

[tough wadi]

By The Great Work Brother 🔥

[hardy sand]

like this brother?

thank you brother

[tough wadi]

Yeah little Better then before

[tough wadi]

If possible Increase the size or Change the font of the name of the dishes because its too small And difficult to read it

Or you can Add Some Text box behind it

[hardy sand]

hows this

i changed to red aswell what you think

[raw wadi]

Personally I’d stick with the green grass look to better match the game theme. I read the white lines like field distance markers. 🙂

[hardy sand]

thank you brotha

[hardy sand]

here is my second one

[tough wadi]

Rate this one !

[cyan belfry]

being picky here but something seems off with the contrast on the Objects to the left

[tough wadi]

That logo ?

[cyan belfry]

no no the elements to the left

like dogs launching on

i think the red and green go off colour scheme and pop out a bit too much

[toxic dome]

@meager lion lmkkk!

[meager lion]

BROOOOOOO

This is DOPE!! @toxic dome

Love the shading u did on the kraken, the boats & clouds

I think in terms of suggestions, blending the clouds more w/the stuff rising above em would look cool!! Kinda like how I did the portal for my work: #1263649474652143647

Do that w/the corners kinda or just slightly above the clouds' base

OHHH also for the orb, I love that glow u added to it!! I think adding more sparkles & setting the blend mode to something more spacey/transparent could also help!

The shadowing looks rlly good on everything especially the guy's

Except for maybe the tentacles, you could try layering the shadows so it folds on the clouds but it could be rlly hard

I JUST NOTICED u did that for the guy's shadow!! Coolll

[wraith magnet]

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[wheat sigil]

where did u get 3D Icons? freepik?

[ripe canopy]

Well, I don't like this job, Sadge

[wind sluice]

i need ur feedbacks ✅

[thin ether]

Hello🌸 I will be happy to help any designer that needs feedback by DM (logo, whole branding, stationery, packaging, prints, etc). 🤍You can also check my Behance portfolio in my bio.

[hollow marsh]

I looked at your profile and thought all your stuff was cool but that Jeep one especially caught my eye

[edgy heart]

any feedback?

oh i just realized that i put paper instead of ink

[thin ether]

Thank you that’s really kind🤍 I added my Behance account to the message so people can know what type of feedback I can give.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @hollow marsh (current: #283 - 5)

[ripe canopy]

I don't like it a bit, I think it's because of the oversaturated colors, right?

[edgy heart]

maybe its too bright and in my opinion i think the transition from night to afternoon daylight its too fast

[ripe canopy]

oh thats it

thanks a lot!

[edgy heart]

and maybe you put too much sunlight on the mountains, specially on the right one

[peak marsh]

yea i agree i think it would stand out more if it was nighttime + the moon is already out why so much light in the mountains

[cunning stream]

it looks good, but you need to choose where does the main light source comes from? the right star is brighten from the left, the left one is brighten from the right, and the ground is brighten from the right

try changing the lighting direction of the right moon

[wraith magnet]

from you tube

[turbid ember]

hey

[split crown]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/205618491/AOL-PR-Brochure-Design

[clever yacht]

I’ve tried puppet warping for the past hour and I’m gonna lose it Istg

[ripe canopy]

not Puppet warp

ctrl + t

click right button of mouse

"warp"

[clever yacht]

That one felt wrong

Cuz the little grooves on the very end need more points for me to be able to have it contact the whole way

And it just looks kinda funky, but that could just be micro adjustments

[ripe canopy]

thats strangee

Ile never had this problem

search

glass reflection social media post

on a youtube

[clever yacht]

I mean I’m on a school computer and using an older version so that could be why

[ripe canopy]

honestly i dont know what they have changed since 2019

search on a youtube answer

[clever yacht]

24.7.4

Just looked now

Which video?

Am I looking for a certain one

[ripe canopy]

write this and you will have an answer

[ripe canopy]

I found short

about this warp i mean not puppet warp ofc

im almost sure you find good video

[clever yacht]

Not showing up for me

Is your set language on your computer/YouTube English?

If it’s not it might change our search answers

[ripe canopy]

strangee that you dont have it

[ripe canopy]

Which version is better in your opinion?

[vale kite]

2

[cosmic brook]

The blue one pulls me in, evokes a sense of the deep, lonely vastness of space. The big red star in the other one needs some flares or a corona of some kind to make it feel like a blazing star.

[tall elm]

Hey im pretty new to photomanipulation so im just looking for feadback of where i should pay attention and improve

[ripe canopy]

car doesnt need to be too dark

look

you made lights so these lights should also be on other places

[tall elm]

yeah i tried to play with outer glow but aguess it didnt work out 😉 that well

[ripe canopy]

I prefer make solid color adjustment layer

and with low flow make lights

but about highlights i recommend hue and saturation + exposure adjustment layers

benny productions made video about highlights (this is not an advertisement 🤠)

[tall elm]

i'll give it a look

[hollow marsh]

I like both but right all day with the cool purple ring

I am specifically hung up on if I messed up giving the eyes two different colors. I am attached to the two because I was experimenting and just really like the way both turned out. I was gonna replace the spoon eye nut might keep it

[cosmic brook]

I think it would be more cohesive with both eyes the same color.

[hollow marsh]

There's a chance fate might choose for me as it's gonna be a lot more redoing than I thought to even see how they look the same color the way my layers ended up. Does it look off-putting as it is? The table/chair background will be replaced with something outer spacey

[cosmic brook]

It isn’t off-putting. It just feels a little arbitrary. I’m slightly distracted by it which prevents me from appreciating the overall composition. I’ve done lots of projects where I’m adding cool things, but when I step back, I think, “there’s too much going on here. Something needs to go.” Gaining mastery involves not only getting good at creating cool things, but knowing when to take things out. Being able to edit your work is just as important as creating it. But it sounds like this is a work in progress. So leave it the way you want it until you’re finished. Then give it an honest evaluation and decide what to edit.

[hollow marsh]

Definitely taking all that seriously.

[ripe canopy]

you can make shadows at the bottom of that Animal to make impress that Animal is inside of a cup

[ripe canopy]

there but a bit better

[abstract oxide]

This looks cool.
Personally I would raise the highlights in much of the composition.

Interesting. Can you provide some context?

[ripe canopy]

I like setting moon on a "screen" mode

and I recommend you this way

its easier to make light and if you want more dark just use curves/levels

[abstract oxide]

More like...
Where will it be used?
Are you trying to make a particular statement?
etc...

[remote delta]

#📝project-feedback

made that project for industrial safety

[ripe canopy]

oh bro

how many assets did you use?

[granite tapir]

10, 15? Something about 70 layers in total. Not that much actually

[abstract oxide]

Nice composition. A minor adjustment to the white point and contrast helps this pop a little more.

[granite tapir]

👍

This was my first final version, after 2h of letting it rest I tried to shrink them down a bit and introduce the egg

Also the blending of the waves seemed a bit off here to me

[toxic dome]

Raw Camera Filter? Up the clarity?

[granite tapir]

This time I did all final touches inside ps via curves, lool up table, selective color etc. Although by the messed up blending I meant the splashes and masking of the ship (could spend more time on that in the new version too I guess)

[pearl yoke]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C-vNjiUtyu4/?igsh=bXk2bmZsa215MDF0

[abstract oxide]

Looking good.
Perhaps a few highlights or rim lighting on the head/neck?

[tough wadi]

Rate this from 1-10

[lost shuttle]

Hi! So this is a virtual portrait I created for my GTA character, I'd love to know how can I improve it and get some feedback!

[abstract oxide]

One idea. Get an image of some fabric, place it over your image and mess with the blending mode and opacity.

[lost shuttle]

Great idea, I just did it looks great, made the other shadows and stuff match it.

[warm crater]

what do u think of this one? its supposed to be social media post for clothing store or so

[remote delta]

why i am being ghosted 🙃

[cosmic brook]

I think your designs are effective. The message is conveyed quickly and clearly. Well done 👍

[abstract oxide]

Hey that's awesome. Thank you. Please post your image again if you are keen.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @lost shuttle (current: #923 - 1)

[abstract oxide]

Ghosted? Not all. It can be hard to give feedback on designs that look this awesome. Nicely done.

[abstract oxide]

Looks really good.
For me the giant brown dot strongly draws the eye? Is this really what you want to be the subject of the design? Personally I would shrink the dot and perhaps make the person larger.

[lost shuttle]

Ofc here is it with the edit.

[warm crater]

i want the person to have all the attention so I would shrink the brown dot right away

[fleet summit]

Rate this from 1-10

[native urchin]

The cigarette looks out of place

Which one looks better

@fleet summit

[fleet summit]

It is for Youtube?

[native urchin]

yes

[fleet summit]

Then, this I guess

[native urchin]

Do u like it

what could I fix

[fleet summit]

There's some strange white "smoke" around his hair. Is it has to be there? If not - fix it

[fleet summit]

And the sclera of his eyes looks like you paint it in "Paint"

[native urchin]

Ok thank you

[abstract oxide]

I like the changes. Nice work.

[abstract oxide]

Nice work with the fabric. A little "noise" generally helps make a design look more realistic.

[tacit cargo]

Lmaooo bro your youtube channel is crazy

daniel larson

[severe python]

I made this in photoshop for the picture editing, recoloring, filters, etc. And I made the text in illustrator. (minus the liquify on the mortis.) I just got these programs and i really like brutalism

[fleet summit]

Rate this 1-10

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[remote delta]

you made my day thanx 😭

[deep flame]

The eye moves from left to right. From the dot, to the person to the text, but then back to the person. It is an engaging and balanced design. Also with the person looking down that is where my eye moves.

[remote delta]

#📝project-feedback

[dense pier]

Hello everyone, I would like to share with you my new project! 😊
https://www.behance.net/gallery/205899621/Maris-Belle-Visual-Identity

[ripe canopy]

I don't have any inspiration but I wanted to do something, one person told me that the inscription even works, but I don't like it so there is a version without it

[limpid condor]

Nice i like the one without text more

[wooden oak]

I agree. I'd re-do the text if you want to add that into the layout.

[ripe canopy]

its not a must to put a text but thanks for a feedback!

[dapper sand]

https://x.com/DefoltGraphic/status/1825654030129107276

Tamer Oukour (@DefoltGraphic) on X

Left or right? 🏔️👇

Twitter · Aug 19, 2024, 10:00 PM

[cosmic brook]

Right. The guy on the left looks like he’s in a jungle which doesn’t sync with the idea of a peak.

[warm crater]

thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @deep flame (current: #592 - 2)

[dapper sand]

Agree! 🔥

[deep flame]

The inscription Archer is redundant as the image implies that. You are right, the one without the text is better, and the meaning of the piece is still clear.

However if you want archer text, I would make it small, all caps, sans serif, white with 300 to 400 spacing. Subtle

[raw wadi]

personally, I would change the font to something more block, very dark and add rim lighting from the moon above

[raw wadi]

I prefer the red one because there’s more contrast between the shoe and the background

[ripe canopy]

what is "rim lighting"?

[abstract oxide]

No worries. Thank you.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @remote delta (current: #592 - 2)

[abstract oxide]

Fantastic work

[terse jetty]

Simply lighting the edges of an object

Usually the dark edges

[ripe canopy]

oh

thanks!

[sudden lodge]

Tried my hand with some poster composition for my dnd group, thoughts and or criticisms?

[raw wadi]

Sorry I should have explained in more detail.
https://shotkit.com/rim-light-photography/

[sudden lodge]

👀

[clever yacht]

Before adding the blur I had a perfect reflection but now after adding the changes the reflection doesn’t sharpen.

For future I want to make the blur more intense further away and almost clear at the start

That’s the before and after

[valid zenith]

Hi guys i hope all is well! we just finished a documentary it's about Women in Captivity! Please have a look and share your feedback! Thanks 🙂 @everyone

https://www.behance.net/gallery/205792209/Documentary-Women-in-Captivity

[ripe canopy]

propably i dont understand

but if you blur it wont be sharp

but you can use soft brush to remove some reflection a bit

my work is not perfect (old work one of the oldest)

but you can see what j mean but dont change orientation of reflection like in my work

[warm crater]

HOW DOES THIS LOOK?

[sudden lodge]

So much for that lol

[deep flame]

Great design. Love the textures and the simple layout! My only thought is currently the water droplets are uniform size and should show perspective to indicate a flat surface. They should get smaller toward the horizon line, try skewing the droplets image.

also, depending on the effect you are trying to make, with the light source on the right, there should be a shadow of the can on the red surface on the left. This light source would affect the droplets too. And if you really want to get creative, the droplets can be more 3D.

[deep flame]

The logo on the right image is familiar. It is identical to one used by a contributor/graphic designer on a marketplace site I frequent. So not sure its purpose in the poster.

As for the designs, honestly they do not seem cohesive and complete. But perhaps that is just me.

Try making the poster taller, less square. Also add elements in background, and eliminate the logo. When overlaying images, add shadows to indicate depth and remember perspective, characters in the back compared to forefront. Also try adjusting the arrangement/placement of the characters to see if it works better. Hope this helps

[hollow marsh]

That's cool, I like how you included the original assets as it shows how much you altered things for that cool dark look. If this was a tv show I'd be compelled to watch it

[abstract oxide]

Nice layout. Good design.
For me the droplets on the ground are too big and the shadows are inconsistent.

[warm crater]

Thank you for your feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #15 - 144)

[warm crater]

I will change accordingly
Thank you for pointing these things out

[gentle pawn]

looks very poland

[subtle saffron]

#project feedback, In these designs, the products take on a life of their own, speaking directly to customers in a playful and engaging way. The idea is to let the product do its own marketing by showcasing its personality, making it both irresistible and memorable.

I would love to get your feedback on these designs. Do they effectively communicate the concept? How do you feel about the tone and messaging? Any suggestions for improvement?

Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!

[remote delta]

i waana write headline from oil how can i do that in phtotshop

its an oil press layout

its an 200 cc advertisement

[ripe canopy]

text add cool yellow texture + liquify

but for liquify filter i would recommend youtube video about it

its not that easy

(for me)

[remote delta]

i want to make it more like an realistic oil

i have tried liqify

first i need to convert it into smart object

[ripe canopy]

ofc

[remote delta]

how can i write headline in oil or water

[ripe canopy]

write a text put a texture on it

make clipping mask

[remote delta]

ok thanx buddy

[ripe canopy]

no problem

you will still can edit it

[remote delta]

is there any ai took can help me

[ripe canopy]

you dont need ai for it

just find good texture

[ripe canopy]

and its the longest part

[remote delta]

is i inspied from rajeev mehta vedio

[subtle saffron]

Yes

[uncut granite]

that's my first poster to design ever, there's problems obviously but the thing is i can't name it 🙂
(NEED HELP)

[gentle horizon]

Could you move the lettering ‘France la rog’ to the left so that the face remains ‘intact’?

[ripe canopy]

I recommend you use grids

to make margins

because text shouldnt touch edges in 90% cases

you know what I mean?

[uncut granite]

i only used it to fill up the whitespaces

i mean the text, and for the grids yeah i used grids, but as you can see im not the best with it 😅 . i mainly shared the image to get tips about coloring and composition and if there's any edits about the elements im using at the design

like most of the elements are not related if i would say?! or something like that idk🫠

[peak marsh]

im working on a poster and i feel like the bottom right is too empty any ideas?

[uncut granite]

Why don't you increase the tracing?

[peak marsh]

as in?

[uncut granite]

The bottom text

[peak marsh]

alright

i guess yea since all the rest of the text is so big

and that part is barely readable

still feel empty

i really like having the badge on the bottom right but im not sure what to add

im going for a brutalism feel

[worthy bane]

I would like to receive some feedback about my graphic!

[peak marsh]

what does the reaction mean lol

[wooden oak]

I'm not fond of all the "noise" overtop of it. The layout is very well done.

[wooden oak]

I add the Ps icon to images that I like.

[worthy bane]

thank you bro, i will adjust the noise, what do you think about the colorway?

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2301)

[wooden oak]

"Colorway" ?

[peak marsh]

oh ok

[wooden oak]

I like the orange; its powerful. However, I almost wish there was a blue or purple to compliment it. (Blue is a complimentary color to orange.) Maybe just make the hexagon background a blue to offset the orange. Just a suggestion.

It could be less saturated as well.

[worthy bane]

okay thank, now i will work on it, in a couple of minutes i will send the result

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2302)

[worthy bane]

I've made some changes in the color correction,I've also adjusted the saturation

I've also boosted the shadows of the text (Urus)

[wooden oak]

Looks great!

[worthy bane]

thank you bro❤️

[peak marsh]

i really dont know what to do with the bottom and specially the badge

i really wanna use it

i really like the top part but the bottom makes me go

[abstract oxide]

Thank you and best of luck with your designs

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm crater (current: #592 - 2)

[ripe canopy]

I feel like something is missing

[warm crater]

How's this?

[wooden oak]

I'm not really a fan of the "MXS 1990" font or the placement of it. I might take another look at that. I don't think that really fits with the rest of the layout.

[wooden oak]

The colors are beautiful and complimentary. I really like that combo. However, I'm not sure of the composition. I'm struggling to understand what the main focal point is in this layout. Also, what is the takeaway? Is it just the tree or is it that the man is discovering a special tree. If you look at it from a Rule of Thirds composition, none of the main elements fall on any of the points in the RoT layout. I might rethink the composition a bit.

[ripe canopy]

Oh I heard about these points from one Youtuber so if i would put tree more right and person will be bigger

it should be better right?

[wooden oak]

If the tree is the main focal point, I might slide everything to the right so that it falls on the that main point. Then it seems more in-balance compositionally-speaking....

[peak marsh]

fair i’ll see what i can do about it

[ripe canopy]

Thanks a lot! So these points can increase my composition skills?

[wooden oak]

I would just do a bit of studying on the "Rule of Thirds" and learn about that. That's one way to approach composition. Perhaps the most popular of the methods.

Centered layouts are OK but for something like this, I might opt for Rule of Thirds. Just a suggestion.

[deep flame]

Great design. I would recommend not splitting the word FASHION. Even with the figure over the letters the human brain fills in the meaning, give it a try and see. But good job again, I am really liking your work. 🙂

[warm crater]

@deep flame thank you for your feedback ... I will design one without splitting the word

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @deep flame (current: #438 - 3)

[carmine fox]

Would huuugely appreciate any feedback on this. Things to change, add, anything 🤝

[slate stratus]

i wanna photoshop on the porsche logo like that, what colour should i use and where do u reckon i should best position it?

[slate stratus]

Nvm I’m just gonna rock with the blue logo

[mental plume]

Banner for my Youtube channel it is a cooking channel just wanted to see what people think. Thanks.

[rancid patrol]

matchday design, wasn't going for something too crazy

[uncut granite]

I think the timing and nature of cyber feeling cuz it is art Ai generated will not go well with a cooking channel.

At least from a branding POV!

It depends, will your content be Ai generated too?

[blazing sparrow]

Anyone willing to give opinion ?

[toxic dome]

AI generated image with text? pass.

[wooden oak]

The back of the jersey looks odd to me. I might try to straighten that out a bit...

[wooden oak]

If "Apartment Cooking" is the name, I might expect to see an apartment in the background... A "depth of field" blur could be used to bring the focus to the cutting board/ingredients in the foreground. Just some suggestions.

[wooden oak]

Great layout! A lot of visual interest in there.

[wooden oak]

The logo placement seems fine. However, if its that important to you and crucial to your layout, I would make it more prominent. Additionally, I might get rid of the people in the image. They seem like distractions that take away from the main subject(s) and focal point. Just my opinion...

[deep flame]

It certainly grabs interest. Good job

[ripe canopy]

Hey, I'm posting other versions of the work

[jolly yew]

WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK?

[mental plume]

Thanks and changed it. I actually like yours! Check out my new one thanks.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2305)

[wooden oak]

Now you've got the kitchen but no food. The photo is an improvement. I'd say, add some food back in. try Gen Fill in that empty area on the right to add some food items to the image. Good improvement, though.

[mental plume]

@wooden oak I am using free adobe stock and could not find one with food. I did few with gen fill food and looked really bad. I even did a gen fill pots and pans. Most people watch YT on a phone so they only see the title only and some of the background. Where did you get the background for the one you made? I liked the stock photo you showed. Thanks for feed back. Its nice to have positive feedback.✌️😎

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2306)

[wooden oak]

The image I used was generated and manipulated.

[wooden oak]

I'd still try and include some food in the image...

Not saying it should be this; this is just a quick idea.

[mental plume]

@wooden oak I will keep trying new gen fills. Thanks for your help really appreciate it.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2308)

[blazing sparrow]

Thank you for your opinions @wooden oak @deep flame

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #3 - 2309)

[mental plume]

Ok so I messed around with curve lighting, hue, and about 5 diffferent gen fills and came up with this.

@wooden oak This is what is looks like on desktop but on phone it is cropped so you only see the title. Only time you will see the veggies and fruit is on a tv.

[ripe canopy]

honestly it looks real more than my works lmao

[mental plume]

@ripe canopy Thanks! I was surprised how good this gen fill looked. I had to adjust the hue lil bit, but came out. Most AI looks like its made by a robot on a bad acid trip.😎😂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @ripe canopy (current: #593 - 2)

[terse jetty]

That's great !, I love this color combo

[heavy talon]

hi guys I did this art work how is it