📝project-feedback

[worldly frigate]

something like this @raw wadi

i mean the ring looks like zn organge peel

[raw wadi]

I like it. Me, I’d make the ring smaller and the map like a rug so you see some floor. It is of course your design. Sometimes these things take a few iterations until it “feels” right

[worldly frigate]

but ima try and fi that

but what do i put instaed of the landscape there

cuz i was thinking small shadows od the diffrent chraacters

or the lonely moutnain

[raw wadi]

Perhaps a silhouette?
not this one because it (c)

[worldly frigate]

i tried the texturiseoh yeah

gollum

forgot that little guy

i tred using the texturiser tho for the carpet but dosent lookk as good

[worldly frigate]

what do you think @raw wadi

or i could even put the whole thiing in black and white apart from the rings and the carpet a bit more brownish

[raw wadi]

Give it a try, dump the texturiser and go old paper brown

[worldly frigate]

wdum by old paper brown like adobe stock effects or ....

[worldly frigate]

The carpet could either go until the landscape or stop before the door/ring

The. I’m ad the lonely mountain and character

[knotty estuary]

Does anyone know how i could make this more visually appealing

[worldly frigate]

Maybe get all the typo inside the picture and make a Polaroid

[empty hare]

iam working on social media post "We are back into business" any ideas or suggestions how to do it. Iam totally blank

[warm delta]

Sometimes simple is best. White background, text saying "We are back in business". What kind of company is this for?

[empty hare]

A food industry

An indian food industry, that focuses on healthy food.

[warm delta]

Yes, so just saying that you are opening back up and if it's going to be a reopening event then that's worth mentioning. Otherwise just what date the place is opening and that's as complicated as it has to be. If you want you can add decorative elements such as pictures of food that the restaurant serves, or patterns if there are any used in the branding already. But text on background is all that would be expected for a post like this

[empty hare]

How is this?

[peak cobalt]

Lovely, maybe add texture on top, including text layers?

[peak cobalt]

Seems alright on the first look but the more I look into it, the worse it gets, staring with text, not sure if you can use "who's" in that scenario, "who is" should be the right one, then the text "your go-to source for all things healthy" just doesn't feel right, maybe "your go-to source for all kind of things" would be better? Moving "healthy" to separate row and highlighting it with other appealing colors and making it bigger? Then the background also feels empty but I can't find a way to make it better rn

[peak cobalt]

This would go hard if it were a book cover

[primal snow]

Does anyone know what I should have done I need to so I can get better

[rustic patrol]

the one thing i can point out is the circle on the bottom of the photos i would say get rid of that first and foremost

[rustic patrol]

awesome design concept

[primal snow]

may I ask what is foremost I'm kind of new

[rustic patrol]

it has nothing to do with ps was just saying first thing i would do is get rid of the cirlce or make the circle defined

[primal snow]

ok

[rustic patrol]

right in that area....either make the circle stand out more then make the arms overlay the circle or get rid of it in my opinion

[primal snow]

@rustic patrol do you know a video how to fade in image like this because i got it from pack from a soccer discord but i dont know how to do it

[primal snow]

Is this better

[empty hare]

Any suggestions on what texture??

[rustic patrol]

what you mean by texture?

[peak cobalt]

No

[rustic patrol]

good job on removing the circle but if you wanted to keep it you could do something kinda like this man

its not anything crazy just whipped up something to show ya what i mean really quick

[worldly frigate]

Yeah but it’s supposed to be a poster

But ima ad the lonely mountain instead of the landscape and some shilhouette of the character walking

And then the actors names

What do y’all think

[rustic patrol]

you going for like movie poster style?

[worldly frigate]

Yeah it’s a project for graphic design. School I’m at

[limpid condor]

tips on this one?

[rustic patrol]

yea man i would maybe put mordour in the background might be kinda cool

[worldly frigate]

Oh yeah true black and white I guess with a bit of tint??

[rustic patrol]

yea for sure man

[rustic patrol]

i would put some frontal light on the text to show it more...cause right now its a little hidden ya know

[limpid condor]

oh ye i did put some after i posted

but ig light rays type light would look better

[worldly frigate]

What’s is it tho @limpid condor ?

[rustic patrol]

yea for sure man

[limpid condor]

header

for some guy to put on his discord

[worldly frigate]

Oh ok

[rustic patrol]

nice you using blender for your 3d?

[limpid condor]

oh nah :d

[worldly frigate]

Yeah i@would say get the top lighting a bit higher

[limpid condor]

this the bg

then put some pngs and blended them

[rustic patrol]

o nice...great job

but yea a little more lighting on the text and i think you got it

[limpid condor]

alright

thanks

[peak cobalt]

Ig we'll have to wait to find out

[worldly frigate]

Yeah I’ll work on it il send some screenshots in couple hours

[limpid condor]

alright

the web on the left looks a lil weird ig

[rustic patrol]

Yea I agree with ya

[limpid condor]

well

alr

[raw wadi]

This has the look of an old fashioned gas lamp. So there would be a very bright hot spot where the gas lamp filament would be.

[toxic dome]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/197818579/Portfolio

can anyone review my portfolio design ?

[worldly frigate]

Yo @raw wadi what do you think of the latest on yesterday I’m be sending some more soon

[worldly frigate]

I would put the your name and date below the the portfolio

Try and divide the main font size by the golden number maybe to get hierarchy

[raw wadi]

Last messaage today I'm afraid - out now.
With reference to this one:
Make ring smaller. Make map brownish like circle I've overlaid.
Sort the perspective on the map to fit the lines of tiles. (green guide)

[rigid raft]

Thanks 😃

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rustic patrol (current: #416 - 3)

[rigid raft]

Will surely look into it!

[worldly frigate]

Thnks will do

[worldly frigate]

kind alike that @raw wadi

[torpid oyster]

any suggestion pls? i dont know what else should i add

[worldly frigate]

i would make the lighting on the left a bit lower so as to emphazize the players themselfs and the logo

use burn tool

[rigid raft]

how is it ?

[peak cobalt]

feels off

so if i go into details, the poster now instead of having a history, feels kinda hostile (maybe it's due to the dark reddit posts i'm listening on yt) but anyway, thats not the texture i was talking about

i thought about this kind of texture, instead of deleting parts of text using texture, you just add one over the text

@rigid raft

[raw wadi]

Post the original map image and the ring layer as a png with transparency and tell me the font and I'll mock up my thought 🙂

[rapid bison]

No worries! Thanks for the feedback...after a bit more studying i whipped up another two creations. Thankyou for your time!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi (current: #32 - 57)

[rapid bison]

Constructive Criticism is always welcome 🙂

[worldly frigate]

Oh ok wow Thnks I do that in a sec

oh and here Bilbo's house wich is used as well

[raw wadi]

OK, here's a rough Back tomorrow 🙂

[worldly frigate]

Oh yeah that’s cool but what should we do about the landscape there

[fossil bough]

Aright , so am not sure how I can improve using this type of style with my posters I would love some tips on different ways on how to use grunge texters the second question on how i can improve is the text i fell like its just the same thing on every graphic I make even if this is not a Nike poster or well a shoe graphic. (sorry if this is in the wrong channel)

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps try getting more aggressive with your contrast. For example…

[fossil bough]

alright I'll try that because i did notice that most of the time the shoe it self is well hard to see with the bg sometimes so this might help

thanks for the tip

[novel comet]

Yeah, but I'd go for MORE contrast to help them stand out more...

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. Happy to help. You've got some great designs.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @fossil bough (current: #875 - 1)

[rustic patrol]

i agree with the contrast, but another tip is possibly try background a different color than the shoe color cause that kinda makes it hard to see the shoe as well

[low lagoon]

Front page of a new flyer i made for a kebab restaurant,

im not happy with the left page smh ...
But finding bottles/drinks even on adobe stock is super hard haha

i think this is a bit more appealing haha

[rustic patrol]

yea this one is better imo

[low lagoon]

gonna extend the top a bit so its not cutting of the top glass too much i think

[rustic patrol]

mabye a little lighter gradient

[low lagoon]

much better

even tho he has like 40 different softdrinks ... xD
but eh, cant fill it more than that

[rustic patrol]

no looks good

[low lagoon]

ok thx !

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rustic patrol (current: #331 - 4)

[low lagoon]

anyone got an idea how i could transform this onto the menu flyer?

[whole night]

what do you mean by 'transform'? you want to adjust the perspective of the image?

[low lagoon]

nahh

want to add the 3 "old" pics of food in first image down to 1 for the menu flyer

[whole night]

you can create a new rectangle shape with the shape tool , add color stroke and clip the photo to this shape

[novel comet]

All I'd suggest is that this is a MENU. It literally serves one purpose, which is to list and display food.

It feels like you're trying to cram all of the critical information into half a page of a 6pp roll-fold leaflet,

I see you've listed 16 dishes. Is this all of them or are there another 40+ to go?

Unless I'm missing something, I feel like you could afford to give some more space and spread it out more:

[low lagoon]

uh dis look fancy

gonna save that for later :D

[low lagoon]

much more. I ended up with this now

[novel comet]

ok cool! - that makes sense. - I was worried you were cramming things in needlessly.

[low lagoon]

its very plain but eh, client is boss

and its 💫 german 💫

[low lagoon]

like he said, he wanted the pics he has on his old menu board .. already told him, i can do that, but i wouldnt do it just people see the food... I would need to add more pages which results in more costs

i could make an 8 page flyer ... but thats too much. its not a restaurant. its order and pickup

[novel comet]

Maybe move your images along the bottom instead of bottom right?

[low lagoon]

not much space bc of the bleed

or you mean like a "carousel" ?

like dis? @novel comet

[novel comet]

yeah, kinda...

[low lagoon]

i mean i could fit it more

i already asked my client if we can change the order nr... but sadly nah. so i couldnt even more "tetris" the menu :D

[low lagoon]

this looks fine i guess lol

[rancid hare]

Hey guys,

Im trying to make a access pass, Its for swimmers, and Id like it to include the logo of the swimming team (as provided below) and also the national flag (Czech Republic) + sponsor... I have got no Idea for any design, any talented minds out there? :-)

was thinking of something really simple, since the logo of the club is blue, maybe add some blue lines along the sides, and then the name, for this example lets use "ANY NAME" and under it "The Czech Republic" then the three pictures.... I ll try to make some design... I am just learning so thats why im asking in here as well. 😁

[rancid hare]

Quick idea which I have done in like 20s in painting so dont hate on me, but something in this style.... I ll try to actually make something good in PS, but yeah somethinglike this. (9cm width, 6cm height) :)

[rigid raft]

changed it a lil bit...

[nova warren]

pls rate my project 1/10 and give me some ideas

[rigid raft]

2

The background should be solid and try adding your design in blur with less opacity in it

Just a reference for background

[rigid raft]

Moreover you should work on your design also

[rapid bison]

Havent finished with the shadows but general idea is there...any ideas to improve it?

[abstract oxide]

You’ve done a great job here. Nicely done.
I like colour. I like black and white. But by mixing them for the left and right image you've made him look, to me, kind of like a zombie.

[toxic dome]

So I notice that on the shadows that you have it black and white. A better way to do this is ⬇️

(Adjustments) Exposure over the Subject

decrease the exposure to your liking. Then on the Layer Mask do CTRL+I to invert the layer mask and get the brush tool using Black or White to remove or brush the parts you want the shadow effect to happen.

Using a Curves adjustment will also help blend the subject into the scene more.

[mellow vector]

So basically I am making a logo for a company called Archilens which is a photography company that is based and is focused on architecture. Their targeted audiences are mostly people from the creative field, photographers, architects, designers, artists and etc, As well as real estate companies and other businesses that are similar. The company is basically one that sells their photos in which people from the creative field can use that images in their design projects or for inspiration and references. Not only that but they do photography commisions, for real estate companies and more. The company is going for a sharp and defined look as well as being trustworthy and friendly to the targeted audiences/end users. I want you to give me crititcal feedback on which logos you like, and maybe also telling me what I can kind of improve from the logo concepts that you have chosen.

[novel comet]

Hey Ash. - In all honesty, I don't feel like any of these give off a "sharp and defined" with a "focused on architecture" vibe.

[mellow vector]

oh ok ty for the fredback but James, I got a question though if i Just gave you information that this is a photography company that is based on architecture would the Logos not fit? cause most of them represent AL which is the short name of the company?

In your opinion though where would you be able to use logos that combine 2 letters together?

[novel comet]

Why A and L ?

Architect and Lens?

[mellow vector]

Archi Lens

is the company’s name

[mellow vector]

yeah

[novel comet]

Ah. Cool. - I just played with some random abstract shape loosely like an "A" but not as boring as a towerblock.

[mellow vector]

O okay i see

[novel comet]

or with a splash of colour:

[mellow vector]

where is the L though or is it meant to be abstract? Like the L is switched upside down

[novel comet]

but I'd probably suggest you find something that really uses the 'lens' idea?

[mellow vector]

hmm so i can prob use the lens logo and further develop it

and develop a typography for the logo?

[mellow vector]

o

[mellow vector]

btw james how would you know if its best to add colour to a logo or not?

cause depending on certain situations you can turn the logo to a certain color of your chosen colour scheme

[novel comet]

This sort of approach technically brings the 'camera' angle as well as the "architectural drawing" aspect to it.

[mellow vector]

like something like this

this is not mine btw

csuse in certain situations like when your creating printworks

[novel comet]

---

I think it's nice to add a bit of colour to a logo, but just make sure it still works if it was later turned black and white!

[mellow vector]

oh alr

[mellow vector]

@novel comet do u know the purpose of doing this?

why do they do the opposite contrasts of logos with a solid colour in the colour scheme

ive seen shorys of designers doing it as well but not sure whats it for

[novel comet]

A brand agency/designer would typically show the proposed logo in a variety of colours and options, and often inverted too.

just to show how it can be used in different situations

[mellow vector]

ohh i see

so most brand logos are solid fill?

cause if they have colour it would be hard to make it fit certain situations

[novel comet]

Check some nice examples here:
https://barnard.co/

Note how many are 'solid colour':

[rapid bison]

i did that but since i had changed the two side players to black and white the highlights and shadows got that colour. i added a solid colour overlay inerted, used a soft brush and painted with one of the colours from the source of light. Im going to try and put them back to original an do it again...se how it looks and come back here

i wanna put an eagle since its the club's mascot

dont know where yet thow ahah

[mellow vector]

ty so much these are very helpful :D

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #5 - 893)

[rapid bison]

i see your point there! i'm going to change back to normal. To get both left and right with matching colours i have to mess with the hue and colour level and curves right?

i watched a video today on it so it was my 1st try trying to match different pictures together

[inner solar]

Hello, my friend asked me to make him a game cover for a horror game he's making, though I am a beginner I think I did a pretty decent job the final result looks pretty weird, if you have any suggestions you feedback would be appreciated.

[abstract oxide]

Can you give us some details so we can provide some constructive criticism?
Congrats on getting into Photoshop.

[inner solar]

It's around the last parts of a project that I struggle the most, adding a camera raw filter, making sure it's not too light or dark, in addition to adding the title of the game I can't understand how to use the text option in photoshop how to comsimize it and make it look good.

[abstract oxide]

Good info. Can you also tell us something about the game?

[inner solar]

it's a horror survival game where you use glowsticks as a way to figure out where to go is what I know about it.

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps you could incorporate some of that into your graphic. Something like a hand holding a glow stick that is illuminating only a portion of a dark, scary scene?

[inner solar]

I tried something like that, my original Idea was a hand poking out of the TV holding a glow stick, but it didn't work out because the hand looked like it was radiating, So I just put the glow stick on top of the TV.

[inner solar]

Right now I'm trying to add the title but the text function is very confusing.

[abstract oxide]

Based on what you've said about the game the TV seems irrelevant?

[inner solar]

That's true.

[inner solar]

when I sent him the picture he told me that he could barely see a thing.

[abstract oxide]

I think your original idea of a hand holding the glow stick is cool. Perhaps from a POV?

[cinder spoke]

Hi there, Happy to share my branding project here. https://www.behance.net/gallery/197105669/MOON-ON-Yoga-Studio-Branding

[inner solar]

A POV might be a great idea but I'm still having trouble with the radiating hand thing

[abstract oxide]

Why don't you mock something up and post it here for some feedback?

[inner solar]

sure one moment

[abstract oxide]

Cool. Take your time.

[inner solar]

didn't turn out too good, putting a glow inside a hand is really difficult.

[inner solar]

as you can see it's doesn't really look like a glow, looks like he's transforming into the amazing hulk or something.

[abstract oxide]

This is a really good first draft. Have you dropped it into your poster to see what it looks like in context?

[inner solar]

looks pretty decent, but how can I add a glow to the walls, as you can see the wall fades to black the closer it gets to the camera, should I add another wall.

[abstract oxide]

I did some Googling and was finding images like this...
Perhaps increase the overall contrast and increase the light on the inside of the hand?

[abstract oxide]

Maybe a corridor would be a good choice. You could have a little light on the left and right walls but the corridor could quickly fade to black.

[abstract oxide]

I'm signing off for a while. Best of luck with the project.

[inner solar]

thanks you G.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #18 - 112)

[cold escarp]

https://tenor.com/bnK7J.gif

4 different versions

4 different versions

[visual anchor]

Bottle label, any notes?

[raw wadi]

My initial thought @visual anchor would be that since it's for a chilli ie. hot sauce that the dragon should be red?

[raw wadi]

Like this maybe?

[limpid condor]

yo yall

this is a thumbnail of mine not recent

wanted to know what is it lacking

[odd flame]

i need yall help to add the term breakfast too

now it looks jus bad

[odd flame]

i think you could put the face on the left a bit higher , i think the thumbnail is good

[limpid condor]

mmm i see i see

ig thats true

thanks

[odd flame]

btw since most of the notes cast a shadow you missed this one soo yeah @limpid condor

[limpid condor]

oh shi fr

well ig i gotta look at the details more

[odd flame]

from what i have seen thats pretty much it i believe

[limpid condor]

alr thanks dude

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @odd flame (current: #417 - 3)

[limpid condor]

i guess u can make the text smaller

[odd flame]

yeah but then i looks like this

since its a thumbnail it wont matter but if your tryna make it perfect you can observe the repetitve design

[limpid condor]

shi yeh

[limpid condor]

well

dunno

me lost

[odd flame]

yeah aite

[novel comet]

Why not run the text down/vertically instead?

[novel comet]

..umm... maybe not.
"For breakfast, Nuggets I eat!"

[small needle]

what i can change in this image to make it better?
the text means "let's go workout?" in portuguese

[odd flame]

actually i managed fixing it the way it was made the nuggets part a bit more bigger did the trick

[odd flame]

if you are gonna post this on instagram or youtube you might have to change where the text is

[novel comet]

Thanks for your guidance there @odd flame

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @odd flame (current: #268 - 5)

[wheat sigil]

Hi, guys!
I wanna hear critics.
I was doing this today and I wonder what do you think about blending, colors, what could go better etc.

[barren linden]

in the first image the mixer grinder and the fruits don't go together,
I think it may be because for example the mixer and the left fruits are roughly around the same distance from the camera but the mixer is of the same size the big yellow fruit.

should you fix the perspective, i believe, it would be better

[wheat sigil]

Thanks, I could just scale down all fruits

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @barren linden (current: #875 - 1)

[sage merlin]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C6v1jJ-y196/?igsh=MWEwZWJmazJseXk0dA==

Any suggestions?

[odd flame]

try not to use white

like now days everything is set in dark mode cuz people can see properly right

try giving it a yellow? idk much but yeah thats my thought

[low lagoon]

Any Feedback on that menu flyer?

[untold kindle]

why doesnt the upper line at the bottom not cross the entire page

[odd flame]

its good just as the guy above mentioned

[odd flame]

i think its good, next time try to get a frame that is like 45 degree angle cuz straight 90 degree meh

[odd flame]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7KyQ-9oLB2Y

if you cant watch, try playing with the blending options available , select the one thats better other than that nothing else to do

[nova warren]

for me ?

or

[odd flame]

you

[nova warren]

thx u

[rigid raft]

any suggestions for improvement

[wheat sigil]

i would remove one image and place rest 3 in line with 3 columns in case they wanna 3 fold.

why don't you add texture over black to hit that darkness away.

or add diagonal red rectangles over all design and lower opacity

[wheat sigil]

White sells better, and I can't put kitchen material and white appliances into dark rooms.
Would be weird.

[low lagoon]

huh lol, it was moved when i did the screenshot xD

[cinder rain]

Thoughts?

[low lagoon]

theres some pop missing in the middle split

[cinder rain]

That is what I thought

Like lightning or smth

[low lagoon]

you could use some color dust

[cinder rain]

• the text isnt rly clear

[dry jolt]

Please could I get some feedback on my brand board? Does it communicate the message clearly or would you need more information to understand the brand mission?

[low lagoon]

Go for a pastell blue background and add some light pattern in the background.

I would als add a bit more Pop to the product itself. Fruit explosion, Juice Explosion, smth like that.
If the Client likes that ofc!

[ancient wing]

@low lagoon can i dm you about something?

[low lagoon]

I think the white is maybe a bit to neutral.
You could also splash popin the Main Focus areas and make the sense scale in bigger.

[low lagoon]

What's up?

[ancient wing]

i would rather take it to dms if thats okay.

[low lagoon]

Please let me not regret it but Sure xD

[ancient wing]

you wont.

[empty knot]

Fix that typesetting... Good heavens

[odd flame]

oh wow true

[pseudo tinsel]

What do u guys think of this gta 6 ps5 game cover i made

[low lagoon]

did that already ^^

[tawdry tangle]

How about this?

[odd flame]

its "."

not comma

idk

[tawdry tangle]

I think '','' is more used in Europe

[low lagoon]

if done it for all

this was just a pre finished one to show

the ready to print version is alined :D

[tawdry tangle]

Nice!

[toxic dome]

looking good bro

[novel comet]

lol. - yeah, the comma is fine! - Not everyone uses a (.) in their numbers.

[rancid patrol]

Any thoughts? it's a matchday design

[opaque skiff]

music art work

[barren linden]

looks cool.
although some thing are inaccurate according to real life.
like the shadows near the legs and the lighting on the yellowish dress guy
personal opinion: change the color/highlights of the text to make it look more visible

[rigid raft]

I would like to suggest a glow behind the text(Grad theft auto)
I think that magenta would work well and yes do something about that VI also, I mean it doesn't look that appealing

[terse jetty]

Aurora Hoodie Design
Feedbacks ?

[novel comet]

nice...but,,,,

CAN T ROCK MY STYLE

I think that T needs to be moved across and an apostrophe added.

[terse jetty]

lemme try that

Not That Impact But Yeah A Lil Better

[novel comet]

Look at how tight the STYLE word is though

[novel comet]

No 🙂 - I kinda liked the tight word 'style' I meant the T at the top could be closer

what font is it anyway? @terse jetty

[terse jetty]

" Another Danger "

[terse jetty]

Seems To Be Better

[novel comet]

yeah,it's tough isn't it!

that last one you did is better! 🙂 - nice work

[odd flame]

ohh okk

[terse jetty]

Thx

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #5 - 897)

[empty knot]

you're just using right-alignment. proper typesetting is to line up all of the commas

[empty knot]

see how 9,99 doesn't actually line up optically

[tawdry tangle]

I meant the red things

[empty knot]

I didn't

[tawdry tangle]

Okay

[rapid bison]

Tips to improve both compositions?

[abstract oxide]

Good colour and contrast in both.
I’m not a fan of the light pole and especially the shadow behind it. If you need something there, perhaps replace it with something like a trophy?

[abstract oxide]

I suggest raising the highlights on the people to match those on the curtain.

[cinder rain]

Polygonal lasso is good

np

[cinder rain]

Nice. Try a color match

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UrTzFExOCFA&ab_channel=PhotoshopTrainingChannel

@rare jungle

[nova warren]

Feedbacks ?

[barren linden]

suggestions?

pong on reply

[untold kindle]

any suggestions? making a school project

[toxic dome]

So from my perspective I

[wheat sigil]

Works for 1% of photos.

[wheat sigil]

Yeah, remove red, yellow and cyan, and add blue shades.
Winter is white and blue atmosphere.

Also, add blues to sky and remove magenta.

[wheat sigil]

Shadows and highlights are off.

In the first image.

[wheat sigil]

This is wrong.
He floated text to the right and you should look right alingment.
It is all good in what he did.

[empty knot]

No, it is incorrect. Proper typesetting for prices is to align them to the punctuation mark

the "5,50" is not properly aligned to the rest of the type, it has an indent because it's right-aligned instead of aligned to the currency

I use InDesign for typesetting because those kinds of details are very, very hard to accomplish in Photoshop! https://helpx.adobe.com/indesign/using/tabs-indents.html

[wheat sigil]

You are wrong.
He aligned it correctly.
That you do it like that does not mean it is the best choice.

[empty knot]

Sorry, but it is unprofessional.

[wheat sigil]

No, it is not.
I work in InDesign daily.
Imagine how it looks when something costs 1234,56 and under that is product that costs 3,45.
And you have columns and lines between them.
How messy it would look aligned left.

[empty knot]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1pcNQQmhg_c Here is a great reference for how to nicely align prices.

[wheat sigil]

1234,56
----3,45
This is proper aligning in economy, math, book keeping and everything else.

[empty knot]

I don't think you understand what I'm saying, and that's okay.

I hope you have a great day!

[wheat sigil]

I understand it very well, and you are wrong.

Have a nice day too.

[empty knot]

There is nothing on that menu that costs 1234,56. They all have the same price, but two of them have an ugly left indent because they're not aligned to the same currency point. If they're all the same length of characters - and they are - they line up by the punctuation on a menu. If you don't do it that way, it's not "wrong," but it IS one of the small details that tell professionals that you don't know what you're doing.

😉

[crisp igloo]

?/10

[barren linden]

7

imo

the lighting on the face is wierd

[karmic belfry]

https://twitter.com/manghnani_11/status/1789178989963104265?t=8WqFIe51lPC1o4s-Ybn0xg&s=19

comet 💥 (@manghnani_11) on X

How's it YouTube thumbnail
how education destoryed the system

Twitter · May 11, 2024, 6:21 AM

[barren linden]

before/after
ping if you reply

[odd flame]

yoo much better than before

[odd flame]

try using 1 font, and the colours in my opinion dont look that great

[odd flame]

it is actually great but the center light/clr could have been better

[odd flame]

face looks rlly goofy

[barren linden]

dont blame me brotha

I tried to make it similar

but yes the eyes make it wierd

I will change them

[odd flame]

ik it was my feedback 😅

you looked up any vid of people doing this??

[odd flame]

true

check "benny prductions' and his transformations, he does not give tutorials but u can fig out what he does tho

[barren linden]

benny productions is the reason I downloaded photoshop
didnt watch a single tutorial except his videos

lol

realistified series is great

[icy jasper]

if youre going for a Y2K theme id darken your background and add a noise filter

[sand verge]

The white gold. what do you guys thing how can i improve?

think*

[normal stag]

Maybe some more contrast? It feels like everything is a bit too bright, particularly the background
What I mean is that everything kinda feels one tint like “all brights”

Maybe you could have the entire image or parts of it as a group and add an adjustment filter (from the options near the layer menu) to it and try out different contrast settings (it's been a while since I've been on PS so I don't remember the names for everything. I'm sorry)

[odd flame]

no doubt

[opaque skiff]

10

[sand verge]

oka thank you so muchhhhhhhhhhh i will definitely try this!!!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal stag (current: #877 - 1)

[terse jetty]

Oh You Remembered me Of a photo manipulation that I've done a long time ago I've Even Used The Same Eyes That You Used

[nova warren]

how to remove the outside of letters in keyboard

[abstract oxide]

Have you tried clicking on that area with the Magic Wand Tool?

[nova warren]

i will try now

[abstract oxide]

Good luck

[nova warren]

i did it thanks

[abstract oxide]

Excellent. Thank you.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @nova warren (current: #877 - 1)

[nova warren]

@abstract oxide

feedback ?

[past plaza]

id like some feedback on some of these thumbnails for my youtube videos. what could i do to make them more engaging for viewers to watch? 🙂

[abstract oxide]

Looks cool. Can you give us some context?

[abstract oxide]

Personally I would raise the highlights. The whole image feels a little dark to me.
You could do this in just a few key areas. This would add some overall punch without washing out the image.

[neat steppe]

Hello there! 😁 could i have some feedback about it ?

[grand mountain]

I was Bored so i created the wiz on photoshop

[barren linden]

inaccurate lighting
crazy colors/mood/blending

[terse jetty]

Yeah I Said That I've Done This In My Beginning In Photoshop

[odd flame]

se learnado ai to enhance your images, there are other issues but this is the only one ima point out

[past plaza]

is the tool called se learnado ai?

[near creek]

Slam

[upbeat narwhal]

can yall tell me which ones better

[stuck yew]

In my opinion, I really like the top one!

[upbeat narwhal]

the dragon is actully from a game it doesnt really fit i think

[upbeat narwhal]

final result

[limpid condor]

cool

[upbeat narwhal]

Thanks:) not my best work tho i just made it for fun lol

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @limpid condor (current: #877 - 1)

[limpid condor]

ye still

i like the idea

dont see many nice tee concepts

[cinder rain]

Thoughts?

[stark bridge]

Maybe i'd make the stats a little smalldr and put them in the middle under salah

Because right now it kinda looks unbalanced i think

[cinder rain]

Like this?

[terse jetty]

I just like it like this but just change the white text color to black
and i didn't like the leg cut off just keep the legs and add shadows to the ground
maybe also fade the back image of the player

[cinder rain]

The text is black it is just the font which makes it look light

[terse jetty]

So you need to change the font cuz it's hard to read that way

[cinder rain]

Let me try convert it to smart object and do black overlay on blending options

[barren linden]

there is no ball and the players are kicking air (what I mean is add maybe path plur to the leg and ball)(it just looks wierd imo)

some of them have shadows such that light is coming from the right,
but there are no shadows on them from left
if the light is sharp enough to cause shadows, half the body will be dark

whytf are there 3 colors of teams

other than that there is difference in blur in the 3 players
the white dude and the red dude are blurred
but the blue dude is clear

even if we assume that the focus is set on the blue dude, why is the green dude so clear

also there is an error of perspective wrt to the ground and the players.
if the camera is so low, the players would be much taller than depicted

[rustic patrol]

which way yall think looks better?...just wanting another opinion. thanks in advanced

its not completed yet

[novel comet]

I prefer the first one. - other is too grey and washed out

[rustic patrol]

Yea that’s what I was thinking as well

[novel comet]

At least change the contrast so the gret is darker 🙂

I assume it was a gradient map?

obviously not as 'messy' as my quick version...

[rustic patrol]

O yea I know what you’re saying…I honestly think just gonna stick with color version

[lofty turtle]

what makes my design look very canva esque unprofessional?
idk feels very flat digital simple thing?

[desert stratus]

cc on the picture

apply some yellow to it

[rustic patrol]

Yea that would help out as well

[desert stratus]

and also the border around the picture is like

kinda powerpoint-like

idk how to describe it

this part

consider adding like a border around it so it fits

[lofty turtle]

Oh you're saying color grading it to match the bg colour?

[lofty turtle]

I see

[fiery nymph]

two recent typographies ive recreated ^^

[autumn lantern]

its cool but this looks like its saying AAacR on Titan

[fiery nymph]

I see where you can see the A but youre the first one to point that out haha

its two t's

only reason id fight against it is due to the fact that typographies when using a letter will usually always use the same layout

so having two different looking A's wouldnt make sense

[rancid patrol]

light source and highlights like this

[cinder rain]

Added retouches and it looks better 🤷‍♂️

[wary salmon]

These are geometry dash level thumbnails. Its quite confusing to look at before knowing what its about haha

[abstract oxide]

These look great.
I think the "ICEDCAVE" text could use a few more highlights.

[wary salmon]

Woah what did you use?

Smudge and blur?

[desert stratus]

yeah exactly, doesn't have to be too yellow where it looks strange, but currently the grading of it is blue-ish red, so just add some yellow to it and it should be aight

[toxic dome]

I'll have to keep it a secret.

[stable pendant]

Can anyone give me any constructive criticism on my Album Cover? First time making one and wondering if it will catch peoples attention

[lofty turtle]

oh i see thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @desert stratus (current: #879 - 1)

[rare jungle]

tbh the best jjk art i have ever seen

[fiery nymph]

Tysm ❤️‍🔥

[hazy glen]

Hey guys i started learning photoshop 3 weeks ago and i would like to share my project , would appreciate constructive feedback, i wanna get better lemme know what i could've done better !

[vast raft]

Please check and give your feedback

[rustic patrol]

i think you did a great job...the only thing i would suggest is to use a different pic on the right side so its not the same pose as the main pic in the middle

[hardy jackal]

any feedback appreciated! this is for a fashion show to post on instagram ◡̈ i already submitted it bc they are on a time crunch but im making a version for their ig stories too

the names are the designers^ btw

[fiery nymph]

Seems good to me

Good placement

Good use of colour

Understandable

No font issues

Good hierarchy

You got it all on point

[fiery nymph]

Did you use illustrator for the inflation effect? Or what exactly

[fiery nymph]

Keep pushin youre making progress

There’s a lot of faults you can tell but the only way to improve these personally I’d say is look at placement of other designs like this and try to match them

It’ll become second nature after you learn placement without having to use other designs as examples

There’s also tons of videos out there

[hardy jackal]

i used illustrator! then did image/filter adjustments on photoshop to enhance it to look more crisp!! 🫶🏼

[hardy jackal]

thank you! 🫶🏼

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @fiery nymph (current: #418 - 3)

[hazy glen]

Yess ill try and find another one thank you for the feedback!!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rustic patrol (current: #271 - 5)

[hazy glen]

Thank you!!! I will look more into this and try it out

[upbeat narwhal]

I honestly think you did a great job The only thing missing is some Color grading and shadows you can learn it from yt

[hazy glen]

Yeah i agree i will definitely look into that thank you for the feedback!!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @upbeat narwhal (current: #879 - 1)

[odd flame]

no too dark cold do better with the light

[odd flame]

i someting is off, if you are gonna make a poster, the tate of furious should be at the top

it feels like two images were attached using collage

[upbeat narwhal]

i made it like this anyone know to blend those to images

[odd flame]

if i were u i would have gone for this kind of approach

the that of the furious should be at the top

the cars and stuff in the middle

make it a bit more bigger

you can barely read the text @upbeat narwhal

lol

[upbeat narwhal]

Yeah got it I can make like that 👍🏻

[blissful coyote]

#📝project-feedback message add background

[wooden oak]

Hello. What are you hoping to do here? There is no bot to generate imagery, if thats what you had in mind.

[toxic dome]

The only way to do this is to go to remove.bg | this is way better than photoshop’s ai select subject. Then simply drag your png from the website into photoshop and add the image of your liking.

Though unfortunately, I notice there is a grid on the office chair so when you add your image the white may still appear on the grid.

[wooden oak]

Oops. Gotta pay for it on remove.bg...

Also, not sure how its superior to Photoshop in this instance...

I think I'd just opt for Photoshop. :D

A bit of Gen Fill to create an office environment...

[toxic dome]

I’ve used temp mail so many times and created alot of accounts to avoid this.

[wooden oak]

Super

[toxic dome]

I just don’t understand.

Cause when I do it it leaves edges crooked

[wooden oak]

I just used "Remove Background" in the Properties Panel.

[toxic dome]

So you mean to tell me I could’ve done this instead of creating 1000 accounts?

[wooden oak]

Seems easier but you do you...

[toxic dome]

I’m done

[toxic dome]

Just shocked how I’m just now finding out about this

I barely even use photoshop ai tools

[wooden oak]

No time like the present to start learning.

[elfin ridge]

how is my Late Registration album cover redesign?

[stray flint]

looks like album cover lol

but i like it

[finite girder]

Did these , any opinions? (These are just random celebrities

[odd flame]

where is this green light source from

looks like two images that were blend together?

[odd flame]

looks great idk much about the industry if there is any specific you must do so yeah

[upbeat narwhal]

several images where blend together lol

[upbeat narwhal]

makes sense hmmm ill add it later

wait its from loki lol

[native saffron]

does this look cool?

[upbeat narwhal]

i think this one blend well

[upbeat narwhal]

ye just lower the shadows of sides of the car since theres no light on sides ig

[native saffron]

I didn't even do anything to the car lol

[upbeat narwhal]

just added text?

[native saffron]

How do i remove it of i havent done anything to it

[native saffron]

Yea

Picture is from forza horizon

[upbeat narwhal]

car looks like cgi

[upbeat narwhal]

ah i see

[upbeat narwhal]

text looks cool

[native saffron]

thanks

[hardy jackal]

tysm!

[radiant nova]

is it good?

[toxic dome]

🙏

[normal spoke]

I assume it should be for Smartphone background. Design itself seem to work I only would not mark the area where you have your clock. others can put there anything else and then it would not work that well.

[abstract oxide]

Cool composition. Nice work.
The shadows on the gun and the sign are too dark in comparison to those on the person. I recommend evening them up.
It’s also an odd way to hold a gun.

[abstract oxide]

I like it. Did you build it from scratch yourself?

[radiant nova]

Background is from someone else but i have placed dark areas

[odd flame]

the gun is not placed properly

[odd flame]

if i were you i would not put the box for time, the notification looks cool

let me know if i could have did something more

[raw wadi]

Hi @odd flame It would be usual to set the tops of the text elements the same - as green lines> I'd make the eat fit the bar and the nuggets smaller to fit thr for breakfast. Overall the text is very close to the edges - perhaps smaller to give a little breathing space as they say.

[radiant nova]

ok thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @odd flame (current: #154 - 10)

[formal pebble]

How do I improve this one? It says DRINK RIGHT, DRINK RED. Campaign for drinking red milk

[novel comet]

I think the effects on the text are overboard.

I also think the dropshadow is too heavy

[normal spoke]

The shadows are different. its also a bit to much. the color red from the background does not match the red from the package. the "Fettgehalt 0,3%" does not match the rest of the Text.

[rigid raft]

is it fine ?

[toxic dome]

i tried my best ngl

[limpid condor]

first logo

[formal pebble]

Is the Layout good?

[ocean python]

just made this for a school project, wanted to see what yall think
(yes i know its not caesar, its a historical adaptation into the tokugawa shogunate)

[normal spoke]

Well, it is a straigt Layout, objects are mostly centered. The Add itself does not telling much ofa story or so, but it would be a solid start.

[wary salmon]

please bro im trying to figure out what to use rn 💀

i know its like a week later but still

[rustic patrol]

I would add a little light behind him cause the shadow blends with the image too much

[tough wadi]

Rate 1-10

[carmine fox]

Anyone got feedback on what else to add to this? I feel like it’s a little empty, thinking of adding poster text on slide 1 and maybe some poetry throughout that gets more distorted as you scroll

But as far as more effects or just general ideas I’m all ears ❤️❤️
The concept is boredom in the suburbs/boredom driving you insane

[raw wadi]

perhaps place a broken cell phone in this image 🙂

[rotund nexus]

i don't really know what i made xD is it too wierd?

[odd flame]

yes

nose

[toxic dome]

Is that chrisean rock

[normal spoke]

depending on what you ant to show and the context it could be Ok.

[upbeat narwhal]

hows this

made by watching a tutorial in yt

[stark tendon]

What do we think 🙏🔥

[tranquil wigeon]

Why did you make this, i ask formally

[stark tendon]

Ngl i ran out of things to design so i just redesigned an album cover

[tranquil wigeon]

Well, it's fantastic. Everything feels so... professional...

[stark tendon]

Thank You!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @tranquil wigeon (current: #880 - 1)

[tranquil wigeon]

How much experience do you have in PS?

[stark tendon]

since 2020 (:

[tranquil wigeon]

Impressive

[stark tendon]

🔥

[rigid raft]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @stark tendon (current: #880 - 1)

[rustic patrol]

t-shirt design im working on...let me know what yall think

[split crown]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/156971409/Nova-Brand-Guidelines

Hey guys. can i get your feedback on this project

[terse jetty]

Perfect !

[odd flame]

FE!N FE!N🗣️🗣️🔥 🔥

[raw wadi]

Hey @split crown I like it. A very clean, modern, tech feel. If there was one comment; I think the clip board in the quality statement looks out of place. Instead of the wooden board, perhaps something more modern.
https://www.interaction-design.org/literature/topics/skeuomorphism

[desert stratus]

my first time making a car poster, what we thinking?

here was the org image

[raw wadi]

I like it. However the font probably doesn’t say the pinnacle of German motor engineering 🙂

[rapid bison]

which of the both feels more balanced? should i change the composition layout?

[edgy heart]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C7GIXE0OC8N/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link&igsh=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==

redemptormortis2015

Instagram

how is this

[split crown]

Hey @raw wadi . Thank you for pointing that out. That was a good observation. I'll surely get it updated. ✌🏼

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi (current: #30 - 61)

[desert stratus]

yeah haha. tbh the text was made a bit impulsively at the beginning, i didn't know what style to really go with. thanks for the feedback on it 👍

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi (current: #29 - 62)

[warm delta]

What is this for? 😄

[rapid bison]

Practice

champions league finals coming up

the bluer toned one matches the CL colours more

[warm delta]

I'm referring to the design, where would something like this be used? With that format I'm thinking instagram post?

[rapid bison]

yeah

1080x1080

[pale sun]

• I like the blue more
• The trophy is creating a weird tangent with the arm of the player in the background. I'd move it
• What do you want the key takeaway to be from this piece? Right now it's the image and not so much the match or the league since the information is much smaller

[pale sun]

Can you add more contrast? When you squint you can see all you can really make out is the text and the headlights. The car dissappears into the background

[pale sun]

I like the psychadelic approach. The bottom left looks like it's artifacting a bit? Is that intentional or an export/scaling issue?

[mellow vector]

hey guys from these 3 logos in your opinion which one of these do you think fits more for the company?

[desert stratus]

i didn't even notice that. thanks for the feedback, i'll make sure to change that!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @pale sun (current: #271 - 5)

[stark tendon]

New Project for the song Butterfly Effect - Travis Scott

[edgy heart]

Thank you, the bottom left is the texture of the paper

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @pale sun (current: #203 - 7)

[edgy heart]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C7IrP19NNBa/?igsh=MXRmc3N3cDNzMWVwag==

redemptormortis2015

Instagram

[cinder inlet]

Is there anything i can improve on this?

[thin warren]

I love the fire

[elfin ridge]

Wow, that's super cool, I like it! This is pretty much perfect though. I don't know if their is anything you could change.

[elfin ridge]

WOW, that is good. The grain on the image works super well too. You know what would be cool if you tried to put Travis Scott with the wings outside him like he was the butterfly. Just an idea it could look really cool. Also for the Parental Advisory logo most album covers have them more visible so I would recommend moving it forward a little and maybe putting it on the bottom right corner. Other than that it's so good. I love the colors you added.

[abstract oxide]

This looks fantastic. I like the rim lighting. I feel like it’s missing from a few places like the arm and shoulder.

[cinder inlet]

I some times overdue it so i tried to turn it down

[raw wadi]

I like it @cinder inlet !
I'm as always following the lighting - mainly at the back over the tower. We don't know where the light hitting his breast plate is coming from. I've made the assuption that its from more fire/flames in front of him.
So' I've modified the breast plate colour to fit 🙂

[wintry orchid]

please be brutally honest

[still field]

https://www.instagram.com/reel/C7UME13ocPJ/

Here is a timelapse how i made Plusle using a red fox, snake for mouth, squreel eyes and some random plastic LOL

Please tell me what you think ❤️

curvedpedal

You are Wrong Plus is way better than Minus

Or well honestly i find them just as cute, but i did end up executing my plusle way better than minus

I will learning and focusing on editing way more now since my eevee timelapse gained so much traction.

Anyways please give me more feedback this one isnt maybe as exciting but it shows way more of ...

Instagram

what you guys think of the process how i made plusle

[vast raft]

Kindly give your opinion

[peak cobalt]

moon blended really well, but if it has to be that bright, the ground and the woman has to be way darker, to the point where you can't see much details, + shadows and highlight on the clouds can be improved

[edgy heart]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C7KL0DwO466/?igsh=MTVxOW43NjQ1cnFsMw==

redemptormortis2015

Instagram

[vast raft]

thanks for the feedback. i will work on this thing. 👍🏻

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @peak cobalt (current: #94 - 16)

[terse jetty]

Latest Project :

https://www.behance.net/gallery/199324645/Branding-the-Fusion-of-Snow-and-Space

Feedbacks ?

[toxic dome]

Sukana.

[still field]

the blending of the moon is good. and the slight shine

i would look into giving more of shadow under the body. like the food

foot*

also the background is very high quality. i think it would be good adding a blurr 🙂 or maybe stuff ore hazey. since everything is very sharp right now

Actually i take back with the haze and blurr. i believe adding some highlights from the shine of the mouth would do wonders 🙂

[cinder inlet]

I need help, idk if it is too bright. Plus i think it's a little confusing, bc of all the colors?

[cinder inlet]

I like the upgrade. The story was mainly about this lone knight, defending what is left of his village

[elfin ridge]

Everything is good but the font on the bottle doesn't work. Just letting you know because you wanted me to be brutally honest lol. But either than that it is really good.

[elfin ridge]

WOW, that is incredible . It looks so good. I think the brightness is fine. I really like it.

[cinder inlet]

Ty bro🙏

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @elfin ridge (current: #272 - 5)

[cinder inlet]

It's beautiful, but i think if you remove the text or make it transparent or carved into the bottle, that would make it incredible.

[wintry orchid]

Thanks for the feedback, can I get feedback on this one too?

[wintry orchid]

and this one

[elfin ridge]

Yk I think both look great. And I looked at an actual version of this and it looks identical. One thing that might work though is getting the same texture as the cold on the top of the Grand Soir and using that, unless you did do that I'm not sure.

[spice flint]

First time ever using photoshop and i made it in 5 hours please be honest

[boreal condor]

Guys give your opinion on this please\

[raw wadi]

For 5 hours in that's impressive. If there was one thing I'd mention it's to do with composition. I don't think I'd have the back of the helmet shot as the biggest one.

[raw wadi]

I'm not sure of the context however it looks like the guy is on a journey - perhaps to that temple? If so, I'd probably lighten it to make it stand out more? 🙂

[spice flint]

how this look

vs this

[raw wadi]

I think its better 🙂 and you? Perhaps drop the headshot down that's obscuring the text "MICHIGAN"

[spice flint]

hopefully final version

@raw wadi

[raw wadi]

I like it 🙂

[wheat sigil]

What do you think to hold this catalog at monochromatic colors due to such background or wide range like where are fridges?
And, also if you have any other suggestions, I am trying to make it easily readable on phones as well.

[warm delta]

In that case, I think the champions league logo is a bit small. For physical media it's okay if it's smaller, but digital needs to have it more visible. Especially on a platform like Instagram where you can scroll past it in half a second

[warm delta]

Catalogues' purpose is to promote products. With the colorful and saturated background it's taking focus off the products and onto the background, which is unintuitive. If you want to have a lot of color, I would put it outside of the product squares, like this first image. Otherwise I would suggest a different layout, something like the second image where there is a clear hierarchy of products that there is a focus on, broken up with text and other elements.

Other than that, I think the logo in the top left is a bit small. I like that in the last image you posted, that it's explained why these products are that price—because there's a "shopping days" sale! That's the kind of thing you need to pull in customers when designing brochures like this.

[wheat sigil]

Thank you.
Second image that you sent is kinda messy and it looks more like supermarket catalogue.
I like to keep things proportional, and I also i know it looks better on white color, but my main banner goes to be like the one in last image, so I am trying to go for similar brochure as well.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm delta (current: #25 - 82)

[worldly frigate]

hi gaain coming back with a new breifing: create a photoshop image of an imaginary flying creature/animal composed of
at least 5 biological/natural and mechanical elements. Digital only. Horizontal A3 format.
The result should make reference to surrealism, image must be credible. 'im out of ideas anyone got any so far ive gottten this one buts its lame af

[rustic patrol]

The only feedback I’d say on this one is make your side typography smaller cause it almost takes away from your main text on the top…very similar in size

[rustic patrol]

Awesome design….perfect shirt design imo

[rigid raft]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rustic patrol (current: #240 - 6)

[rustic patrol]

Here is a recent shirt design of mine

[rigid raft]

back print....nice nice

[rustic patrol]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rigid raft (current: #420 - 3)

[rigid raft]

what's your bench press

you seem pumped up to me....

[rustic patrol]

Honestly don’t know the last time I benched to be honest but I do a lot of other lifts

[rigid raft]

ohhh

good forearms btw

[rustic patrol]

Thanks appreciate it

[rigid raft]

what's your bicep curl PR

[rustic patrol]

Dumbbell or bar?

[rigid raft]

dumbbell
as well as bar

[rustic patrol]

PR dumbbell is 75 and bar is 110

I don’t push PR very often I train with lighter weights more reps

[rigid raft]

lbs right

[rigid raft]

control reps...i see

[rustic patrol]

Yes lbs

[rigid raft]

nice nice..

[rustic patrol]

Yea exactly it doesn’t overwork the muscles and tear anything

[rigid raft]

yeah

healthy body + calm mind = great designs...

[rustic patrol]

Exactly…plus my every day job is a workout in it self

[rigid raft]

😮 nice mate

[stark tendon]

Another Cover art done

[rustic patrol]

looks good

[abstract oxide]

I hear you. But in this case I think you could crank it to 11 and it would look great.

[edgy heart]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C7KkqmgupL3/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link&igsh=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==

redemptormortis2015

Instagram

[spice flint]

Took me and hour or 2 and this is my 3rd ever thing i made on PS. Give honest feedback

[boreal condor]

hi can i ask you something
how you managed to find images to make this manipulation lookks so good

[nova warren]

feedbacks ?

[abstract oxide]

Personally I would raise the highlights on the statue a little

[abstract oxide]

Fantastic work. You've progressed quickly.
I think the top line of text is a little hard to read against the light background. Perhaps something like a faint dark glow or drop shadow on the text to increase the contrast.

[nova warren]

thx for your feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #18 - 113)

[boreal condor]

give your opinion about this guys

[vapid narwhal]

Rate my Channel

[young zealot]

Could anyone give some suggestions? I was thinking of removing the middle B and making the background word a little more visible but I like the overall way it looks atm

Thanks

[wooden oak]

Honestly, the B kind of looks like 3 and also, with it there, it seems impossible to read what's behind it.

[young zealot]

I see. I could redesign the B and pull the background word layer a little more up but not all the way so it keeps the kind of abstract feel

[wooden oak]

If the word in the background is important, it should be legible. That's my two cents.

[abstract oxide]

Thank you. Best of luck with the project.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @nova warren (current: #569 - 2)

[cinder inlet]

I mainly use adobe stock photos for my images

[smoky scaffold]

Hello all! I have recently started learning graphic design via Photoshop and I created this for an event that I am hosting soon. I would like to get some expert feedback on the design as it will help me hone my PS skills. Can you please share honest views on the above?

I used generative fill to create images in the background and they have their flaws but i couldn't find images for free elswhere.

[upbeat narwhal]

Everything made using pentool and fill it took me 4 days 🥹💗

[still field]

Do you like the lil Texture effect?
Also the video will only show beetween the blue lines.
My idea is to show which image i use without having to waste time in my edits showing the Texture/picture i use

[spice flint]

Making an ig account and i was thinking if i should make this my first post. Thoughts?

[warm delta]

The text is a bit hard to read. The background is blue and the text is mostly blue, so it blends in even with the outer glow effect. Since there is already yellow in the picture, I would try making the text also yellow to match. Other than that, since this is a "welcome" post presumably for a specific player, I would consider adding his name, for anyone that is not familiar.

[warm delta]

Well done! This clearly shows what will be happening and at what times. From here you can specify a bit more. For example instead of writing "event agenda", you can give it a name. Where it says game 1 and 2 for adults, people may be interested in knowing what these games are. 30 minutes for dinner is really fast, by the way! People may want to sit and chat after food, and maybe wait a bit longer before getting into dancing haha

[warm delta]

I would also suggest trying to find better illustrations for the background as the warped hand is a bit unsettling. Freepik is good for finding free illustrations to use. Here's a link to illustrations of a hand with henna, for example https://www.freepik.com/search?format=search&query=hand henna &type=vector

[warm delta]

NIce job! This is a good illustration 😄 If you want to improve it, you could spend some time going over all the edges where the shapes meet and clean them up. There are some edges that could use some work in the shell creases, for example.

One thing you can do is try to simplify. If you see a shape that is too small to be visible when you're zoomed out, it's probably not necessary in the illustration and won't be seen by people. And anything that's visible but you have to really pay attention, you could make it more visible. Sort of "go big or go home" haha, the point is to not overload the viewer with details that aren't important

[warm loom]

any feedback please?

quality got downgraded🤦‍♂️

[spring totem]

hi! this is not to ask for feedback, just very new to this and wondering how i can make these kind of designs, i want to make a letter with circular holes with the same distance and size, is there anyway to automate this or?

sorry for the horrible example

[raw wadi]

My initial thought is that due to the relative different sizes of the cherries and the can it makes the can look small.

[raw wadi]

Perhaps look for a font like that?
https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/335588609704812829/

[spring totem]

Thanks for the reply.
Is that a font i can edit? or i have to take it as it is?
The plan is to turn the image into gcode and then cut it, but im a noob in designs, im using inkscape beacause i can save it as a gcode file.
thanks again

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi (current: #29 - 63)

[raw wadi]

If you use a font editor, then most likely you could edit it, but it would be time-consuming. You’d have to edit each letter individually. I’m afraid I’m not familiar with inkscape, just photoshop.

[spring totem]

Ill look into font editors, is that a photoshop thing?

[raw wadi]

Sorry, there is no font editor within Photoshop.

[smoky scaffold]

thanks very much Denas. All your feedback is very valuable and appreciated 🙂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm delta (current: #24 - 86)

[limpid condor]

very nice

[still field]

awe thanks ❤️

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @limpid condor (current: #569 - 2)

[limpid condor]

np

[hot fossil]

What you think about my facebook cover ?

[uncut frost]

^Made this design using this as an inspiration

[rigid raft]

is it fine ??

I tried to make a fan art for a client..

tried adding a texture over the text

[rigid raft]

final draft I guess

[spice flint]

how this look

[warm delta]

Much better! This is much easier to read with the higher contrast between text and background 😄

[spice flint]

i changed the gradient a little bit

do u think it looks better or worse

[warm delta]

I think the previous version is a bit better as it stands out from the background more. However I like that you made the text smaller so it's not "kissing" the edges haha

These tangents where shapes meet at just slight angles can be distracting in design. Here's a graphic to show what I mean. These are best to avoid.

[warm delta]

Glad to help! 😄

[kindred pivot]

recent art

[abstract oxide]

Looks cool. Are you OK with the fact that some letters are hard to read? If not, perhaps the tiniest of glow or drop shadow would help separate the letters from the background.

[rustic patrol]

Looks good man

[rigid raft]

Thanks mate

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rustic patrol (current: #203 - 7)

[rustic patrol]

Maybe try a stroke on the text but I do agree is a little hard to read

[odd flame]

where is the white light from, this is a dark environment

[limpid condor]

what do yall think of this logo

[undone rapids]

A GIF I made in Photoshop that was inspired by the stop motion GIF Live

Stream

[undone rapids]

Another GIF made with Photoshop. You never hit hardened steel with a hammer

[worldly frigate]

so i have this drawing and i have to now make a poster out of it (lord of the rings movie btew: anu tips on the backround to use?

[limpid condor]

nice sketch

[rapid bison]

before and after of a personal project. Still obviously struggling with Hihglights and Shadows. My question is really related to the shadows on the big subject, especially in the neck area...if the shadows are too dark? any other feedback is always welcome!

[worldly frigate]

Thnks so what do you think I should put in as a background

[limpid condor]

hm hm

maybe

not so noticeable planks texture

yk like a wall

[kindred pivot]

yea thanks for the feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #17 - 114)

[worldly frigate]

U men’s a brick like texture with like low opacity

[limpid condor]

or that sure

[worldly frigate]

Would it fit with tha fact that it’s a drawing tho I’m thinking maybe it should be a drawing like background

[abstract oxide]

Nice update mate. You could go even subtler if you wanted but I like it.

[night phoenix]

I did a bit of editing and thanks to @wooden oak for helping me, wouldnt look as good without him :D

I couldnt find a good wallpaper for this so I decided to make it myself

[wooden oak]

In the interests of full disclosure, I only painted 0.01% of the image. :)

[night phoenix]

you can take full credit, I insist

Im still learning photoshop lol

[spice flint]

lmk

[wooden oak]

I'm not sure I would make the text transparent.

[spice flint]

apart from that

is everything else good

[wooden oak]

Honestly, if it were me, I would probably focus more on the version of him that's throwing the ball with the arm cocked back. But that would change the whole layout.

Just seems more dynamic. But maybe wait and see if you want to make a different version of it.

[spice flint]

Thoughts?

[rapid bison]

Put Alex on top with colour and see how it looks might make it pop a little more

[rapid bison]

Noice

[livid laurel]

Made this for my YouTube channel profile picture, any advice?

[sudden lodge]

I’m using heroforge for the faceclaims but these are my like, synopsis cards for my dnd campaign, yall have input on how I can improve it past the picture

[timid wharf]

Hi there everyone! Could someone tell me from a somewhat technical point of view what you think of this logo for the club in my town called the derailed (like trains) and what could I add to the logo or any suggestions?

[abstract oxide]

I feel like you should have a few wheels or none at all. One wheel looks a little odd to me.

[abstract oxide]

Looks cool.
I wonder if the swords are too high in detail compared to the character?

[abstract oxide]

There is a lot of empty space. Perhaps increase the size of the people.
The eye is immediately drawn to the bright lights. Perhaps increase the highlights on the people.

[livid laurel]

Yeah I'm tweaking some of it

[fading sable]

https://www.behance.net/ouiamaesthetics hey guys i need some feedback about my work , what do u all think ?

[tame shale]

Yo I made this poster, I've used photoshop a bit but I still don't really know what I'm doing. Any advice on how to improve this?

[rustic patrol]

What yall think? Just something i whiped up tonight

[rustic patrol]

def like the comp you got going on...W in my book....only thing i would suggest is bring down header a touch from the top.....thats just bein nit picky but total W!!!

[spice flint]

thanks bro

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rustic patrol (current: #184 - 8)

[spice flint]

i think im doing very good for only starting photoshop 4 days ago

[rustic patrol]

yea i agree with the typeface is a bit hard to read

[rustic patrol]

o yea for sure...keep it up man

[boreal condor]

Guys give your opinion on this, i tried to blend the guy with the background

[rustic patrol]

good blend job W!

[boreal condor]

thanks buddy❤️

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rustic patrol (current: #169 - 9)

[rustic patrol]

i think it would look pretty dope with a dark sky though

[boreal condor]

yoo i thought that too, since i going out now i thought this might enough lets see others reaction and contiue after some time

i planned to add leaves like vegetation too

[rustic patrol]

Yea up the pillars or like maybe a dark red sky like a war going on in the background

Like glowing fire in the sky

[terse jetty]

Feedbacks ?

[tough wadi]

Rate 1-10

[odd flame]

compare your poster with house of highlights or any nba teams account,i think you need more

like i made one last year for lakers

wait a min heh

[regal raft]

7.1/10
the shadow at the bottom does not look good.
and the person has shine which also does not look good.

any feedback? (i like to hear my mistakes)

[tough wadi]

May I Know The Problem With that Person ?

[regal raft]

the person has shone on the face. I think it will look good if you make it a little warm

[tough wadi]

Hm Thanks For your Suggestion

[tough wadi]

Text is Not That Much Readable Rest Is Good

[regal raft]

@tough wadi well, I tried to explain it more in this example I hope you will understand what i mean to say.

[regal raft]

oh ok. I will correct my mistake
Thank you so much, Mister Ershan Ahmad

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @tough wadi (current: #885 - 1)

[umbral agate]

hey guys, can you give me some feedback on this piece?

[raw wadi]

Did you aim for a mainly colorless style? Also the gradient in the back may well show banding depending where you are going to use it 🙂

[raw wadi]

I like the realistic shadows from the earth cube. However perhaps a matching soft shadow to the left of the pyramid? It looks a little bit like its floating 🙂

[raw wadi]

I like it 🙂 very nice. I might suggest the following: his reflection in the tiled floor is perhaps a bit too dark. Perhaps an incredible soft light shadow to his left? 🙂

[umbral agate]

the person who this comission was for, asked for the color to be mainly grey :)

[raw wadi]

Got to keep the client happy 🙂 Just watch the banding though!

[umbral agate]

👍

[terse jetty]

Yeah I've already edited a lot of things

[rigid raft]

I would love to suggest that you should take care of the text
That white text is matching with the t shirt that guy is wearing.
You may try adding a texture and adding a lil bit gray colour in the text

@rustic patrol

Guess you removed it
While I was writing this msg

😂

[rustic patrol]

I didn’t remove it but yea I changed it some I just put some shadow behind it cause I wanted text to blend with white space on bottom

[half violet]

Zhor'ek trah nuvri! Kla'thor vi'zal Q'vranth sa'andrux. Tra'zen xi'var kro'lix yo

[cinder rain]

Any feedback?

(The picture of the bottle was taken with a Honor x8 camera. Don't judge 😭 )

[cinder rain]

Anyone?

[terse jetty]

It needs some blending

make the bottle smaller

add a shadows

add a pink splash around it

[still field]

Floatzel i finished ahhhh!!!!

After doing buizel i have now made Floatzel. What you think about the eyes?

(This is not AI i can provide proof if needed)

[abstract oxide]

I like your colour choices.
PRIME appears quite prominently twice. Perhaps lose the title altogether and make the bottle way bigger.

[toxic dome]

W or L? for an icon/pfp

[abstract oxide]

Looks cool.
Can you give some context so we can provide constructive feedback?

[toxic dome]

wdym by context?

[abstract oxide]

Where will it be used?
Are you trying to convey a particular message?
etc...

[neat pumice]

What do people think about my Thumbnail and how should I improve it?

[toxic dome]

It's a profile pic/icon for a page about celebrity news

[abstract oxide]

Seems like a good fit. Nice.

[abstract oxide]

If the thumbnail could be displayed very small then perhaps the text should be larger

[neat pumice]

How about now

Although I feel like it covers up my character

[neat pumice]

What do you think about it now

[abstract oxide]

Cool. Perhaps a little glow or drop shadow to separate the text from the background.

[neat pumice]

Ok

[fading sable]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/199700153/Titan-Fitness-Branding-and-Logo-Design what do y'all think?

[still field]

Floatzel i finished ahhhh!!!!

After doing buizel i have now made Floatzel. What you think about the eyes?

(This is not AI i can provide proof if needed)

[boreal condor]

this look awesome

[still field]

Awe thank you ❤️ that means a lot

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @boreal condor (current: #241 - 6)

[boreal condor]

Do you use stylus or do everything with pen

[still field]

i have a video showing how i do everythign

multiple videos

let me send the m<3

[boreal condor]

Ok

[still field]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C7eX4xcodkn/

curvedpedal

Do you love Drillbur?

Here is a drillbut timelapse!!!!

This is the first time i show one of my art creation in a reel first let a lone showing the whole process how i made him!!!

Please tell me do you like the editing but also the final result?

Super excited i been learning so much when it comes to editing so far, only issue would be that it...

Instagram

[boreal condor]

Dude this look awesome

I can learn more from you

[boreal condor]

👏

[terse jetty]

Oh that's nice

[feral laurel]

Hey guys!
https://www.behance.net/vaibhavagarwal20

Here is my Behance, please help me with some feedback. 🙂

[still field]

ahh thank you ❤️

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @terse jetty (current: #72 - 24)