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lyric raven
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on what specifically?

old fractal
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Lemon

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Also edge too sharp

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Of both apple and lemon

lyric raven
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how do I fix that

old fractal
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Plate shadow have unnecessary brightness.q

old fractal
lyric raven
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how? by erasing stuff?

old fractal
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Bro that is now how shadow works

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It is not sharp suddenly.

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It is soft transition from light to dark part

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In circular objecte.

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And i see bottom of lemon has very bright light outline.

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That is not natural.

livid basalt
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My recent redesign

raw wadi
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I've been having fun, having watched the season finale

obtuse compass
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Hi everyone, I'm just starting out in Photoshop and I've already done some projects, I'd like to receive opinions and tips because I thought I couldn't make it look like everything was on the same plane and the lighting and shadows didn't really please me.

raw wadi
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I like it. I’m not sure of the context or brief and so I’m wondering about the inclusion of that landscape?

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obtuse compass
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@abstract oxide Thanks for the suggestions, I'll use this in future projects!

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This is just a super rough draft for an idea I’m working on, but wanted to see if anyone has any ideas I could build on. The theme I’m going at is kinda like a tech-dystopia. Definitely wanna work on the typography more, make it look more distorted. I just quickly threw my vision together so I’d wanna work on proportions, and spend more time on the placements and angles of the security cameras. Am also gonna add texture and mess with levels so that will be covered.

I have some more pics from the photoshoot so I’m probably gonna expand the image in the same collage type of way, and have an idea to make it look like it’s getting more glitchy the further right you swipe.

But again, this is just a super quick mock up and if anyone has any ideas I’d looooove to hear them out!!!

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# carmine fox This is just a super rough draft for an idea I’m working on, but wanted to see i...

So that is some kind of a Vision board as I understand. In terms of idea I would try to get better story telling in the pic. Not sure why the girl is sitting there and why someone who threw a PC away would be under surveillance. If it should be something like Tech-dystopia and the phrase "Reality is watching you" I would do some guy who would put a Smartphone or so in a Recycle bin and tons of cams watching him and he looks guilty for throwing tech away. maybe as an idea.

toxic dome
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@everyone Hello, I'm looking for a person who is good at editing people in Photoshop.

carmine fox
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And then I definitely wanna make it glitch out and get distorted in certain patches

astral barn
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Tryna make a Logo that says DL, anyone have tips on how to make this look better?

untold karma
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Any recommendations on how I could improve either my technique or the composition of these poster style graphics.

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<@&548221840750018590> spamming this in the channels

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drifting pewter
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Thoughts on this thumbnail?

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I hate that youtube only allows 1280x720

raw wadi
drifting pewter
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šŸ˜…

digital hound
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how can i make this image look more like an oil painting

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livid basalt
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My recent design for client

raw wadi
thick moon
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Guys, I need your feedback, please! This is the first page of my brand guidelines. Does the gray color match with the logo?

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wooden whale
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any sugestions?

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# wooden whale any sugestions?

Cool idea! I like the container casting a shadow on the beach-goers. I'm not a fan of the text/font used. Also, I think the headline is too close to the top edge of the layout.

wooden whale
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wooden whale
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waht do you think?

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ughh doesn't look proffesional :/

wooden oak
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And perhaps be a bit more creative with your messaging. Just my opinion. :)

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wooden whale
# wooden oak

i like that idea tho šŸ™‚ might use it if it's ok

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wind compass
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perfect projet bro

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nice

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toxic dome
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Anyone around

spiral flicker
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thoughts?

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does it look decent?

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novel comet
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# spiral flicker thoughts?

I would try to put the upper Text "Save the Date" a little bit to the top so that the leafs are not in the text and not distracting. The Text is a bit flat maybe shadow or emboss would be a bit or interresting.

novel comet
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I'd suggest you try bring the text INSIDE the circle if you can.
Also, the DATE is more important than the the location right now, so make that bigger and make it stand out.

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The font at the top is nice but the spacing between save and the feels big enough to park a bus.

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I like how you added the white circle to the original watercolour wreath. Nice touch.

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Also, it's ENTIRELY subjective, but I kinda like the extra use of white too. - since it's presumably a wedding.

raw wadi
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wooden whale
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added some more color to the image but i feel like the highlights are not realistic :/ anybody git any sugestions?

raw wadi
toxic dome
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I am doing a profiles updates for my discord and i want to know if anybody think this look great

toxic dome
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to shine a lot

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# toxic dome I am doing a profiles updates for my discord and i want to know if anybody think...

In essence poeple see most of the time only the circle in the middle and that is very small. So the Image that is in the circle should be IMHO big so that its recognizable enough. here there is for me way to much stuff in that little circle. some unimportant car, some person that can't be recognized and the head and toues are also cut off. For me Images as from James, Euan, D.Humann, Ethan, etc. (in thischannel scrolled up) are way more recognizable as a profile pic, because ther is a clear big head or Symbol that is representative. Hope that helps.

torpid oyster
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is it coool?

azure swan
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Yes

late sundial
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so i need some feedback on this and possibly some help cause it feels "empty"

digital hound
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I feel something is wrong (other than the text)

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# torpid oyster is it coool?

I like the design. maybe you can try the face on the left without the dark bar so that it more fits the rest of the light design.

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# digital hound I feel something is wrong (other than the text)

The Text at the bottom seems Ok. The Top and the black frame arond seem a bit squarish, but the Image itsels a bit more swirrly, dusty, etc. that doesnt fit so much. Also if that should be some kind of Playlist Icon the black frame around would be in most cases wasted space, because many Online and Software players uses black also as background. Hope that helps.

lyric raven
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how can I improve these paintings?

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# pseudo rampart Hello guys, I'm exploring still life photography and this is my last project. Ch...

I like the play with light and shadow.
Unfortunately, there is still a lot of dirt in front of the object in the picture that can be wiped away or retouched.
I find the wire in the pictures below rather disturbing because it is also blurry. The last two pictures also seem a bit badly posed. The wire has no real meaning because it neither encloses or restricts the fruit nor interacts with it in any other way. The rectangular cut apple also looks rather out of place. If all the fruits were cut into rectangular shapes and then a few matching rectangular stones then the whole thing would have made more artistic sense to me, at least. Or you can build the wire completely behind the fruit and the wire then holds the leaves above the fruit. That would also make sense. Hope it helps.

late sundial
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can someone give some feedback / help me make it better by giving adice

austere locust
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Add cool texts

lyric raven
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lyric raven
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gotcha. I made this entirely in photoshop, so will have to do some fidangling lol

lyric raven
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what it looked like before for reference

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lyric raven
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I feel like it lost a lot of detail in doing that

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lyric raven
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how can I improve this one?

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# lyric raven how can I improve this one?

Just as a Tipp: What have you done so far? You are posting almost every few days that you want to improve BUT the Image does not change at all! You have to practice and do things for yourself first. There are MANY Tutorials that shows you how to do it, but you have to practice for yourself in order to get better. Please practice for yourself and look at your own work and look what you want to be better, look at other Artists and their Tutorials, incooperate what they are doing, get better and THENyou will see that questions will make more sense. Hope hat helps.

torpid oyster
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some feedback?

spark tapir
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Hey everyone - just getting into more graphic work / editing in PS. Would love any feedback. Thanks!

toxic dome
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Lamps and chains, icons and image is not drawn.

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raw wadi
# austere locust

I like it. I did make a couple of changes that suits my eye ~ very subjective of course.
I removed the window bar top left. I softened the shadows due to moonlight and cooled the tone.

raw wadi
# toxic dome

I like the lamp glows and the text shaping.
Question: what light source (not in the frame( is making the glints on the lamps?
Perhaps have the glints on the inner edges of the lamps as if they were illuminating each other.

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mighty dragonBOT
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toxic dome
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There is mistake on chains.
I forgot to intersect.

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No one will notice it. šŸ˜„

digital hound
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Which is better

raw wadi
novel comet
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or taking it a step further too, you could do a similar thing with the S:
and having the 'S' literally 'on the side' šŸ™‚

digital hound
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I like the idea but I don’t feel the DE

novel comet
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(Either way, nice work. - I like the font and simplicity)

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novel comet
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I guessed it was Futura or Helevetica Neue

torpid oyster
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torpid oyster
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then what if someone just take my creation

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no wm

novel comet
torpid oyster
novel comet
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(I think you misunderstood what the other person was suggesting @torpid oyster )

torpid oyster
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what

novel comet
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When they said "remove it" they were talking about this here:

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They're not suggesting that you upload a larger image onto discord.

torpid oyster
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ooohhh

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yes

novel comet
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cool.

torpid oyster
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also ty

late sundial
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What do you mean with cool texts

obtuse compass
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what did you think?

toxic dome
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i think it looks great

frozen saddle
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Does the gray gradient go well with the product end for the shapes?

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jaunty wasp
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how do i go from the picture on the left to the picture on the right

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im like new to photoshop

toxic dome
# toxic dome why would you

I said it.
Because image is of no use.
Without it, it looks professional, with it, it does not look so professional.

Lets try to be professionals, or at least hunt that level.

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@torpid oyster one idea.
Now you can do ot for whole team and create an album for sale.

toxic dome
toxic dome
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Double exposure that is not at edge of the main object or a person should follow lines of the object.

That said, I would fill up the whole head selection by the rose or whatever it is in the middle of the head, and I would try to smooth oit transitions.

Again, if you did this on purpose to look as what it is, it looks good.

jaunty wasp
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both steps, how do i do it

hardy hare
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toxic dome
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Else is fine.

spark tapir
spark tapir
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I'm just realizing I didnt remove the background near his hands šŸ¤¦ā€ā™‚ļø

ocean mirage
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I'm working on a Josh Dobbs edit and since he is also a Nasa worker I want to incorportate things like the stars I added. I was to make this graphic pop some more. What other things should I add?

livid basalt
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my recent work

raw wadi
toxic dome
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Looking for critics.

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sand whale
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hey guys, do you think there is any way to improve this thumbnail still? I'm going to upload it soon and wanted some more feedback.

the topic being on how tests are like in school

woven zinc
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Tips to improve skin tones and shading

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@ me

toxic dome
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I will try line selection and bewel on face, then add mask and delete bewel from outer girl parts.
Not sure will it work though.

livid basalt
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recent thumbnail redesign

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# toxic dome Looking for critics.

Nice idea. First I would retouch her a bit so that the lips are not so shiny and the hair straitghtend out. For the "technical" background I would use something what "shines" a bit better through the thin lines for the "cracks" in the face and the skin and maybe let the Edges more shine. Also maybe put her not only on a white background but maybe put some shadow on her. also there are now shadows and "real" edges on the cracks in her skin. With a bit more retouching that will be look good.

hardy hare
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I passionately hate crypto, its fee after fees to get and use it

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silver garden
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im making a logo for a website i'm creating in school for a project, i can't really decide on the color themes..can u guys give me ur opinion which one is better?

abstract oxide
silver garden
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i'm making a website for tote bags i design the logo isn't gonna be on the tote bags itself tho

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carmine fox
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Any feedback for this edit? Inspo is the sky in the second image, but I think I like having just the one fragment thing in my pic. Only thing is I feel like I could add something else to be going on as it might be too simple
But if it's not too simple jlmk and I'll keep it how it is!

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I just feel like it's missing something

carmine fox
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I guess I could add a text

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carmine fox
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Thanks

queen otter
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I'm not really happy with the pngs and the disposition, What do you think ?

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distant wigeon
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is there sth swrong?

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abstract oxide
# distant wigeon is there sth swrong?

You've got some great design elements there. Nicely done.
For me there is a little too much dead space with all that white.
Perhaps experiment with different sizes of the head.
I think the bigger the head gets, the more ominous it feels.

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distant wigeon
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Ty

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queen otter
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i also want to "stick" to the visual identity of the fast food, i have some other reference for that

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queen otter
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let me cook šŸ§‘ā€šŸ³

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queen otter
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what do you think ?

abstract oxide
# queen otter what do you think ?

It's looking really good. Great contrast and colour.

There is an obvious seam where the background repeats. I suggest overlapping these background elements a little and then use a mask with a soft edge on the top element to blend them together.

Seeing all the items together, perhaps increase the size of the titles and decrease the size of the price a little.

Great design.

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carmine fox
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How does this look? it's for the first slide of the first instagram post I'm doing on my new creative account

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carmine fox
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Like the main subject is photography but then there’s some graphic design in the background and a standout text at the top

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carmine fox
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True. Thanks

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Might try to add more glow on the entire cover to match the gradient of the rift thing in the middle

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And then for other slides Iā€˜ll make the elements interact more

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Do you think I should add text to the top right? Like how magazines have subtitles for different sections

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carmine fox
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Thanks!

abstract oxide
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grizzled tapir
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CnC

jaunty wasp
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looking for quick feedback, the theme is to show that kids nowadays are addicted to devices and constantly think about them. looking for simple ways to better portray this message

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broken trench
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the lightig is noticeable but you did better than i could

lime quarry
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Didn't notice anything. Looks good to me. šŸ”„

gusty niche
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gusty niche
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just trying to make it look as authentic as possible since it’s for a uni project

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raw wadi
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Two things that will help šŸ™‚
Its a still from a movie. As such there is an amount of motion blur that isn’t visible on you. You have placed yourself in the pic in direct sunlight coming from top right so add some appropriate highlights on the side / top of your image.

carmine fox
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I’d try messing with saturation/brightness/contrast to maybe get your clothes to match the lighting on the others a little more but that’s kinda a nitpick, and then a little motion blur like euan said

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austere locust
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Are you use AI?

wooden oak
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Yes. I use A.I. However, I make things using myriad technologies, tools and techniques. Not just "A.I."

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wooden whale
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could i make this neon effect more realistic? or is it enough? xD

idle portal
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Anything I can do to improve this?

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Anything I can do to improve this?

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# wooden whale could i make this neon effect more realistic? or is it enough? xD

That depends on for what do you want that?! I find it pretty good. From the technical perspective you could look how the Neon glows on the wall, adjust the shadows, look that the blurring on the blueish tubes look the same as the redish tubes and also the sharpness, etc. that are minor details where will be a lot of work involved, but after that it can get really realistic.

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# idle portal Anything I can do to improve this?

I think it looks pretty cool. you can maybe try playing around with the oppacity of the background that its maybe not as dominant as the black cutout in the front, but that depends also on your taste and how the Image at the end is used.

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would you say the lights are realistic?

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actually readjusted the lights a bit

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# wooden whale actually readjusted the lights a bit

In the dark you would not get that kind of light to the side of the car. Also the Light from the headlights does not shine as equal and not illuminating the street. The inside of the car also would be darker. For those kind of editing it always helps to have a look at actual photos of cars in the dark, etc. Adobe Stock is there a good place to search.

next moon
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Is there anything I can improve on this shot?

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Hopefully I put this in the right channel.

next moon
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Which one do yall like the most?

terse karma
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My first attempt to try to make an old photo from a new one (Just for fun).
The landscape is from my dslr and the couple is from a small thumbnail found on Google.
Any comments/suggestions welcomed.
Technical note:- The people where only added in as a last minute addition. So I do realise the added noise to them and the background noise isn't uniform (blush)

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# next moon Which one do yall like the most?

That depends on the context. It seems that they are snapshots on the go. They all look pretty much the same. For me the 2nd One has the most potential for e.g. a background of some kind, because there are not much distraction shadows in it. But that's personal preference and must not apply to you. Hope that helps a bit.

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wooden whale
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Took me about 2 hours. Any opinions?

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Try switching the blend mode to 'screen' instead of trying to clip them out from a black background

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knotty estuary
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how could i make the body text fit with this slide more

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# novel comet

It looks nice but I trying to follow a different aesthetic

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Cool. - I don't think I'm the target audience for your vision here, so I doubt I'd be able to offer much that would help with your design

knotty estuary
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thanks anyway

proper ibex
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What do people think of my little "Project"?? Hope you like it

nimble pond
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Do you have some ideas what i can put in center and what shadows and light i should improve?

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Nice. !

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# nimble pond Do you have some ideas what i can put in center and what shadows and light i sho...

I would not put anything in the middle, because there is that planet in the back. The scenery get the light from behind so for me it looks dramaticaly cool. But if you want you can try maybe some kind of Rider on a horse in the distance between the glowing planet and the two dudes in the front or depending on what story the image should tell an object lying on the ground in front of the knights like a small bag or crate.

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boreal condor
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Your opinion about my new composition please

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nimble pond
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In my opinion there is to much grass around the house and maybe more snow on roof

torpid oyster
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wht do u guys think?

west light
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how does this look?

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minus the fuzziness i can't seem to fix

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# torpid oyster wht do u guys think?

The Background seem to fit the look. The "person" seem to overcroud a bit the scene. one r two less and one relly big portrait would maybe benefit the scene.

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# boreal condor Your opinion about my new composition please

The unnatural blurring of the background mountains and the green grass would bother me šŸ˜‰ Also as said the snow that is missing. Also I would put some kind of animal or so inthe picture to get some more dynamic and "action" into the Image.

wooden whale
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hello! any tips on this?

west light
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this is where we at

west light
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or this

fervent ether
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maybe remove the grass from the stone and you are golden

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# west light

both woudl work. But to be clear I reffered with my "blurrinG" to the Image with the cottage in the winter scene i reffered to. For THIS with the girlfriend in the scene the Mountain looks Ok.

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Any feedback?

west light
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thanks though!

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toxic dome
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Last photo before its time to slep. Could I get some composition feedback? Or pose/anatomy. I am drawing a winter soldier on guard at their camp.

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may be hard to see

wooden whale
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i know that there is always room for improvement so could you guys give some opinions on this? could i make it more realistic?

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boreal condor
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Your opinion about my new composition please

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I did not plan to shade but I felt I had to cuz the lineart looked confusing

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# toxic dome Wip

Really nice work. You are a good artist.
I would now recommend you add a little space above the head šŸ˜‰

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idk how i want to take this someone give me ideas please and thanks

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what im sitting on rn

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im kind of lost on how I want to go about this. I am making a PSA 1930s-1950s styled billboard for an assignment. i stumped myself on how to make this look good though lol

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decided to change the silhouette image

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is this suitable for a buisness card?

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# red kernel is this suitable for a buisness card?

Well ignoring the dude with the AK, there are some issues:
The QR code position is a bit wonky, move it over to the space to the right and bottom is equal
You have a black icon on a black background, not good.
text is too close to the edge of the card
The front and back of the card are two different sizes
Your card has both centralised text AND left aligned, try and pick one
If it was printed, the text would likely 'fill in' dye to the heavy ink weight. (This is more a practical/print issue than design)
You'll likely be dissapointed in the CMYK print or the vibrant blue IF you were to actually print it

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The top of the text doesn't align.
I'm not sure what the main title is supposed to be. The left or right?

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A colour halftone suggested by VeryTori could make it look more like this:

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thanks for the input!

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Idk if the other person is really that noticeable

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One of my first edits, how is it?

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what can be added to this

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# jolly flame

I would use some light shadows or bevels for the text that it does match better with the background and the readability would be better.

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# jolly flame

I personally think it's too 'grey' I'd go for some stronger white and some stronger black?

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Plus make the CONTROL easier to read...

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If it's literally a t-shirt design, the end result would be a massive rectange in the middle of the shirt, I think it's kinda better if you could so something that doesn't result in a normal rectangular t-shirt frame. Like none of them below seem to do this...

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except those on the bottom row, and those look the worst (to me at least, who has no clue about fashion!)

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I'm not the best at Photoshop but this is what I came up with

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updated version

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# peak jetty

Perhaps some kind of a glow (light or dark) or shadow around the game titles. The title on the right is a little hard to make out against the noisy background.

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I see

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Hi, could anyone please give me some suggestions on this, I've been staring at it for too long. It'll be a Christmas present, so would like to be it as close to perfection as possible. It's the pup's on the left-hand side neck that needs improvement I think. I know both the fur & dog collars don't really go together, but really wanted to use a collar on both pups as sort of a connection between the two (as the one on the right's no longer with us hence the halo effect). Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated

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# rapid perch Hi, could anyone please give me some suggestions on this, I've been staring at i...

Nice idea. First I would try to match the lighting. the left puppy has very dim and soft light but the one on the right has bright light from the right side that does not match the one on the left. The collars does not match at all (reflections came from the left side, Light on puppys from the right). The collar on the left puppy works a bit better, because its under his chin and not tha promonent. For the right "floating" collar you may try something like reducing the oppacity around 50-70% or also place it under the chin. after some of those tweaks the pic will look IMHO better. Hope that helps.

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I am trying to get it as more as cartoon/drawing colored, but I find it hard.

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hey, Im currently a student so I probably have a lot to work on, this is a music poster for an artist (upper right) the name of the song in the singer handwrite (middle) and the duration,
the song titled "lost in space" i would like to get some advice

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Planning to get a print made of a couple recent photos. Anything stand out that would improve either of these shots, before I send it? Scaled down version for Discord.

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Same question for this one:

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(Can ignore the artifacts on the engine, that is temporary)

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What is better? and any quick tips

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some suggestion??

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I feel like something is missing

abstract oxide
# torpid oyster some suggestion??

Looks really good.
Perhaps some kind of a solid border.
Perhaps some kind of a thin internal border. It could weave in some way around the body and the arm.

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hey everyone!
I'm currently a student and the Teacher is a bit meh (good at photoshop not good in helping) and always sending me to YouTube, I did this as part of my 3 poster project, I think it looks good overall but I am sure there is more stuff to be done to make it perfect, I would love to hear your thoughts.
I'll give some background:
top right text: artist name - can't change the font
middle text: artist handwrite (I know it's kind of meh I thought of going over it in Illustrator after I'm done)
bottom text: time of the song (something the artist put on all his songs - can change fonts)

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Your opinion about my new composition please

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# boreal condor Your opinion about my new composition please

I think it's generally good.
To me it feels a little flat, particularly the police officer. Perhaps pick out just a couple of small elements and dramatically brighten them. This would actually be very realistic given the metal/reflective elements on the uniform. You could also do the same with the main car.
I like your colour scheme. Perhaps dull the yellow down a little.

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i'm new to photoshop, feedback would be gold^^

normal spoke
# boreal condor Your opinion about my new composition please

I think there can be some things done. First look at the lighting. The moon shines from behind, but the Reflections on the Person and the first car came from the front. Also the Front-car has no lights on, the back-car has. Not sure why thee is only one person as a "Croud Control" Officer on the side of the road (makes from the Storytelling Point no sense...). I also would ad some road-flares7candles that are burning red on the street.

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Any feedback

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Thanks!

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Only thing that I notice is that the pink on the eyes looks a little different on the left one vs the right one

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i don't like but don't know why

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# boreal canopy Any feedback

I think your design is fantastic.
If you are trying to sell the look of an old newspaper, I would recommend brightening the blacks. While the contrast on your design looks great, newspapers can't hold that much ink. The faded look also helps sell the age.

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Thanks for the feedback, will do!

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Hello, any feedback is appreciated. I may return to it and go into more detail, or I may start it over.

https://www.instagram.com/p/C0opz0DMs04/

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1st color pass. I think i'll leave this for now & get back to those portraits.

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Hello, anyone have suggestions for improvement ?

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Please feedback

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it is not finished, but i need some sleep^^

abstract oxide
# lusty lantern

Cool composition.
The clouds feel like they are in the distance but their transition to the water suggests they are extremely close.
The lighting feels very uniform. Perhaps play with with their rotation or even connect some of them to create a fork in the lightning.

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Hey, anyone has some tipps what i could change, its a project

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should i change the background i made the first pic with ai and changed the eye so they have sam hight

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im a complete noob

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what would be the best method to do this?

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okay

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you have a tip how i can take the contures from the wolfs hair and put it on the white parts? cause it looks really washed

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For a quick Test I used the "remove background" Tool and put a new Background with Generative Fill on a new layer

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The Wolf is not perfect, but that black hair looks IMHO better with that light blue background. Its only an idea, you should work it out for your own. Its good practice.

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you would youse a special tool for the fer?

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like to make some extra hairs and contures

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# sharp seal you would youse a special tool for the fer?

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I kind of agree, but that's the top of the dogs head....

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Hello everyone.
I'm currently studying in Multimedia Design in university and I need to do a branding Design for a class work.
Would be nice if you could help me to collect some info as part of the research step of the branding creation by filling the google form below:

https://forms.gle/8b7vewfFVREmhwmn9

Thank you very much!

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done. šŸ™‚

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Thank you very much! šŸ˜„

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# sharp seal

works way better. Also the colors fit much better with the background.

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you have any other advice or its good now?

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i'm exploring new workstyles in phsotoshop.. today i tried replicating a movie poster. first time doing something like this could i get some tips?

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i changed now something

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the finger there hasnt made any sense

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the hair of the men, should i make it in wolf fer?

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any feedback for this thumbnail

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and this one

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turned day to night

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please give your opinion about my edit guys

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# grizzled viper and this one

it's a good start. though, i would add a bit of shaddow to the glowing object so it does not look like it's just hovering there. also select the layer that contains the highlight on the subject and play with the blend if slider. take the one from the underlying layer slider to the right a bit and split it by pressing alt. it will bring back some texture as for now it looks a bit flat. also you culd try to cast a shaddow from the subject on the back wall. just duplicate it and add a color overlay from the layerstyles. blur it and play with the opacity

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# regal raft

There is way to much going on in that pic. Way to many elements. Also the Text is almost not readable. Some of the Images are not as sharp as others / Text. Try to get all in a good condition and the Text maybe with shadows or embossing to stand ot that its more/better readable.

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# boreal condor

I woud perhaps reduce the contrast a little, lift the blacks slighty and soften the beam as moonlight which I'm asssuming is the effect you are looking for will not cause such hard lighting. šŸ™‚

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i really need some help with this one. i feel like it's too empty and the highlights from the sparks are just not right with me. got any tips?

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# wooden whale i really need some help with this one. i feel like it's too empty and the highli...

I think you're in the right path, I dig the type you chose for the poster. First you'll want to find a reference poster, search the web for posters related to the final result you want to achieve. Once found, ask yourself what makes the reference poster work. This is a nice exercise to train your eyes.
My suggestions for this one is to add some background, successful movie posters are famous of telling what the movie is about visually and make the audience to want to watch it. Since it's an action movie you might add some elements that create some movement, add more characters, maybe a dark scene with some suspense aesthetic, I brought an example below, see how the rain adds a great sense of movement and action to the poster? The John Wick does not have much elements but you can see the details behind him add that action sense. Hope it helps šŸ™‚

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Thanks for the proffesional response. I will go ahead and retouch the poster later today and send it here again ti see my progress. Thanks again!😁

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tell me whats good or whats not good

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Please give your thoughts about this edit. Give a opinion on what i should improve or learn. I totally created this with multiple pictures combined and came to this so far.

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thank you

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# boreal condor Please give your thoughts about this edit. Give a opinion on what i should impro...

For the shaddow you should duplicate the subject and set a color overlay of a really dark gray, almost black. Then place it under the subject in the layers pannel and usit the perstective transorm adjust the position of the shaddow to match.blur it usit gaussian blur, make a mask and erase the shaddow more as it's closer to the camera.
That's what i would do if i wanted a detailed shaddow. otherwise play with the adjustment layers for the subject. match it better, also add some highlights to the metal stuff behind from the moon

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# regal raft

Perhaps tint some of the edges of the character pink/purple. This would suggest they are getting partially illuminated from the background lights.

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Did this art for a music visual that my friend requested. Any tips or opinions?

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Hello everyone, this is a piece of artwork I created to explore my abilities. I would appreciate your feedback to improve my skills. šŸ™‚

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# wooden whale Did this art for a music visual that my friend requested. Any tips or opinions?

technically the Image itself is Ok. But from the visual and Storytelling and Composing there could be done more. There is a very large wall and much wasted space on it. maybe think more of a Vinyl Cover where is only small space and compact all the infos to the center. Also what would be the main object to focus on in that Image. For me that Image could be cut in half. The Poster and the person on the left Side would do on their own. The right-side tells me not much and could be left out.

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My ART that I made out of boredom

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i feel like this palm logo is too simple

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im feeling its missing something

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For youtube

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# vale kite For youtube

looks nice but if you blur other things beside the main text I think it will look more attractive

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# vale kite My ART that I made out of boredom

I like that you’ve got a little red glow around the character. However, this does appear to be missing around the edges of the helmet. I would also personally increase the red glow at the body edges in general. This would help unify the foreground and background and also sell how bright the light source is. Nice work.

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Not that it necessarily needs it but a darker vignette could help focus interest around the center

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Hello! Would like some quick feedback for a shirt im designing. The center is a deconstructed logo of our organization so not much I can do about it. I just slapped the png on a khaki shirt for it to make sense not trying to blend it on there or anything.

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# ivory glade

To me the grey part in the middle looks quite confusing

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# ivory glade Hello! Would like some quick feedback for a shirt im designing. The center is a ...

I would not put one Text/Symbol over another. That may not fit for Shirts and stuff so well. In this case tha Grey Thing n the middle over the white earth is as said before confusing. Also the "Student" Text over "Council" (will that mean Council Student or Student Council?). The Stars does not seem to be the same yellow as the rest. You also have different Fonts (always stay in ONE Font Family).

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Thanks guys! I appreciate the help! Trying to fit in the 'student council' in the design was rough. I'll try to think of a better way to add it in 😁

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Feedback? This’ll be my second project for the page I’m making 😮

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My first project on bookcover design😁😁, your opinion matters

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I think you've done a great job.

If I was 'grading' it, I'd just say the same as others have commented elsewhere, with the text being too close to the edge.

If it was a real product, I'd possibly argue that the text is perhaps a little too difficult to read.

I'm also not really even sure what the book is called? (e.g. What would I type into amazon?)
Mind Body Soul
Mind, Body, Soul
Mind, Body & Soul?
Nature?
Nature: is the purest portal to inner peace

Is the front cover background a set of trees that have been stretched upwards by 10,000% until they're just lines? (No complaint, just wondering?)

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That is Unlined notebook cover šŸ˜…šŸ˜… btw I appreciate your considerationšŸ¤

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Is it attractive, How can I improve it more?

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Is it clickable?

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Why lot of artifacts?

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I make debate breakdown videos but I feel like the design is super flat and boring

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Anybody have ideas on how I can make this look a little bit more appealing?

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"I Can't Slow Down, You Just Said 30 False Things!" - Conservative Debate Triggers Destiny
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thanks!

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It's where the "discussion" via the cards happens

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Seems silly to try and entirely reformat your entire video. - Maybe just add some abstract background?

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I like that a lot

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Also, if I was doing it from scratch, I'd consider using more simplified text boxes?

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I am just starting a new video now so I can reformat anything at the moment

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I am curious as to what you have in mind for a simplified text box

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Also, I am thinking of some kind of border for the video frames, probably just a simple white line

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Maybe...something... like this?

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I only spent 2 mins on it.

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I suppose more of a nod to how a message on iphone/android would look?

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ahh very cool!

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Alright that has given me some ideas. Thanks for your help!

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I'm just making stuff up now before a meeting/call of mine starts....

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@winter jetty

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Nice!!

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@novel comet whenever you have a moment, can you send me that first background you used? Or direct me to where I can download it?

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Thanks James, really appreciate your time

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Got two designs im working on idk what to add

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Quite nice!

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I need some help with this client (restaurant) who thinks they're a designer 😭 They think that using zero colors, no emojis, etc. makes them sleek and sophisticated but they want to use their crappy cell phone photos as full-canvas images for social media (1200x1200) without any solid backgrounds, frames or shapes. When I explained that most of their images are too small to use as attractive full-canvas images, this was their proposed solution 😭😭 Does anyone have suggestions for how to elegantly approach typesetting on top of food??

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they hated my solution because it uses a COLOR and COLORS are not SOPHISTICATED

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(the color is in their brand book. I will strangle them)

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how we feeling bout this?

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It's easy to take their money for the worst and most boring "designs" I've ever been instructed to do, but I want to actually help them. It's my fault

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they have flat-out rejected me using more legible fonts like you did too. even though they're in the goddamned brand book

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they think they will find the rebrand concept by scooting elements around the layout lmao

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a brand is when you use the same font and layout for everything right

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Yeah. Unfortunately they hired some restaurant consultant who is taking them for a ride and blocking me from doing anything, so I'll just take the paycheck, NOT put it on my resume and let the contract end on Jan 8th

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what you guys think of my new lawyer logo? i stole it from Better Call Saul, can't help but feel like something is missing though.

what would you guys have done instead? or to improve it

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I can't think of a single 'logo' with the .com or .pub literally IN the name.,

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its www.pub.attorney

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www.pub.healthcare on the other hand is gonna be an AI doctor 😁

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Did this Music cover artwork for a friend of mine. what do u think?

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# keen drift

Can you provide some details about how and where this graphic will be used?

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Any feedback for me on this guys?

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I like it. Very colourful. Lovely photos BUT I think there are too many different fonts going on. - which makes it look very bust and cluttered.

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I think the 'service' font and yellow colour could be changed to match an existing font/colour.

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I think 'host' could perhaps be changed from orange (but i'm being picky there, it looks nice)

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Maybe remove the ITALIC from the 2023 and 2024

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Consider switching the social media icons to white-out versions.

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In regards to the other, I'd just suggest you remove the strange shadows....

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This is 100% subjective, but I'd also consider changing the colour of the ribbon to something with more contrast:

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yeah, probably. - Or maybe just one extra colour is ok šŸ™‚ Maybe the HOST box and 'service' can share the same unique colour

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i just started making these dsigns, started with anime banners and posters :))

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# native pine

The face and the title looks quite wierd to me, the rest is nice

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Try to show more details on the mouth part. Maybe choose a different font and remove the gradient

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ooh, i see, but the mouth thing i did it an iT look scarier xD

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xD

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Eminem without mouth won't rap so much.

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# hushed bear

You’ve put together some really nice pieces.
While they look good, I question whether you need the faded background heads. For me they are a distraction and draw away from the main image which I would make larger.

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First time trying a y2k style. i feel terrible for this xD any tips?

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Any tips on this?

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Also worked on this one

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# wooden whale Any tips on this?

Cool design.
I can see you are going for light on the left and shadows on the right for the food. Your lighting is a little inconsistent and could use a little more work.

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# rotund nexus You'r insane. How did you made these?

I used Photoshop and sometimes also Illustrator for creating some of the textures I used and to color adjust the result before publishing it. The main part was done in Blender (and sometimes Dimension). Thanks for your comment I'm glad you like it!

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Made with blender and ps

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Did this music cover art for somone. he said he loves it. what do you think?

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I feel like this IG post is missing something, any suggestions? It’s two slides

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Gonna add a texture but outside of that idk what to add, maybe something to do with the sky in the back?

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is it good?

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kinda messy

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# torpid oyster

Personally, I would move the front image more to the left so they cover the second A. As it is it looks like the hand is coming out of his head. I assume you can try this as its multiple layers? šŸ™‚

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hii, any feedback? its for a thumbnail

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normal spoke
# sonic gate hii, any feedback? its for a thumbnail

I would suggest to work on the text that the edges are not so blurry and also on the Highlights/Shadows. When it will be shrinked to a thumbnail much of the Details will be lost and it is only a black blob.

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i feel like the avatar will look too dark

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First time tryong out a brutalism style artwork. took some inspiration with the print-lines effect. waht could i improve? i really want to master this style

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# wooden whale First time tryong out a brutalism style artwork. took some inspiration with the ...

For the Fonts I would try to stay with one Font and not mix them. The print lines effect for the Background Image itself I like very much. The "Story" in the picture that the word there say does not work for me. The person looks very calm, there is not much going on it the picture and there are only two words printed over the Face. Why? As a rcommendation try to compose Images allways so that there are self explenatory. They shold tell the story on its own. Maybe you have something in mind if you made the Image BUT the Image does not tell here the story. For example if there where tears in the eyes of the person or some brutal weaponery in the image oder something that represents"deadly" of any kind then it may be a bit clearer. Its hard to tell storys with pictures, but with a bit practice it will getting better!

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# wooden whale

At first glance I only saw "your Thoughts" and the white stars. That meant nothing to me. The "Beyond" is technically very had to read, so that could be improved. If the Image should represent something like what weird thoughts could be beyond someones mind or something like that because the picture of the person is very blurred and psychedelic I would place something even more psychedelia spiral or other weird shapes behind the person.

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how is it?

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new composition. Give your opinion about this manipulation please

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My portfolio site:

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Waiting to see some feedback!

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I made a hero from a drawing, any thoughts of what I did right or wrong?

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I made this logo for my friend's fnaf roblox game and I don't like how Freddy is so low quality. I am probably going to remove this bozo, or I'll just make him Glitchy as well to make more sense that he's low quality, since I want this to look like a camera perspective

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#šŸ“project-feedback hi! I made this photo-manipulation art in photoshop using cheese stock images and a few other images. While I’ve watched a lot of videos, I’m very new to this. What do you guys think, and what can I improve on?

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Guys need some feedback on asthetics

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# abstract oxide Congratulations on getting into photo manipulation. Are you familiar with the co...

Wow that look a lot more interesting! I was playing around with it, but I couldn’t figure out a way to make the background darker but the highlights pop since all my layers were a bit mixed up. So when I darkened it, it darkened the highlights and color too. Thank you so much for the tip! So you use brightness/contrast. For this piece I used exposure, are they the same or do you recommend one over the other?

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# serene night Wow that look a lot more interesting! I was playing around with it, but I couldn...

In Photoshop there are usually at least 10 different ways to achieve the same result.
I personally like to use Curves because they are both powerful and very flexible.
Levels can be a little easier to use.
Using Exposure should be fine. Just be careful you don't push it too far and blow out your highlights. By that I mean if you make things too bright you might start to lose details in your bright areas.

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did this really abstract art today. any opinions?

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abstract oxide
# obtuse compass

Nice compositions.
The contrast of the trees and buildings is low and is especially obvious in comparison to the below water elements.

abstract oxide
# obtuse compass

The whale in the city is cool. I wonder if a few strategically placed bubbles would be a nice addition?

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help please

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# sonic mauve

Use a clipping mask on a transparent layer above the shape and then paint inside that layer. Point in between the two layers with the top layer selected and then Use opt/alt to create a clipping mask

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I was wondering if anyone knew how to fix this. I cropped a piece of the lid due to it showing a different background, but when I add the glow back on it shows up inside the lid where previously cropped. I don't want it in the lid and I only want on the outside. Can some please help me?

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Any thoughts on how to improve?

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Feedback on this project? Mainly if anyone has suggestions on what to change to contribute to the style more, that would be suuuper helpful, but here’s what I’m thinking rn:
I add text to the glitchy part on the right, based around breaking free from reality bc that’s the theme
I add a graphic or text on the left that’s like a magazine cover but kind of distorted (in the same style as the main girl on the left)
I maybe distort the middle two pictures if it’s not too distracting

So if anyone has suggestions on any of that, or just how I could convey the glitchy magazine feel better, I would greatly appreciate it!

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Btw the glitch part is just a placeholder for rn

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abstract oxide
# thorn stratus

Nicely done. I like your changes a lot.
Personally I’d still be separating those two lines of text.

abstract oxide
# thorn stratus

While it’s subtle, the line around JS is a little jagged.

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made in 50 minutes

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How is it? Made this with illustrator and photoshop.. I'm quite new in this

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# cobalt olive How is it? Made this with illustrator and photoshop.. I'm quite new in this

Congrats on jumping into Photoshop and Illustrator. This is a great piece for someone just getting started.

Your street scene is heavily backlit, meaning that your primary light source is behind your main subject (the car). For this reason I think your car is too bright.

I’ve created an extremely rushed example where I darkened the car and added some spots of red colour for interest. Hope it helps spark some ideas.

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What do you think of this 90's Chrome effect poster design? i did the crome effect using layer styles and a few more things

abstract oxide
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What do you think?

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wooden whale
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did this music coer artwork for my friends. any opinions?

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Give your opinion about this composition guys please
Happy holidays

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Funny wallpaper

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First real project ever, please give me feedbacks. I take all of them!

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Thanks

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what could i have done to make this better?

abstract oxide
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@abstract oxide uhh, if your asking if i combined these yes, it started out with only the mountain the i added the burger, dog, cat, random guy, last the bird, i had to google what compositing is lol.

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what do you think i need yall's opinion

abstract oxide
# candid vine what do you think i need yall's opinion

I think it’s generally quite good.
I like how the car and background look like they are on a folded piece of paper. I think you also need to include the text.
I don’t really understand the black line through the text.

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Feedback on this 2 slide Instagram post I made?

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Thumbnail for a 2d battle royale game

I want to add some pizzaz to it because it looks plain boring
Maybe some perspective warps or focus points or something to stand out to make it look better

Help please

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This is a designer server to talk about real design programs

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heavy yarrow
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do i just change the contrast

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alr looks a lot better

wooden whale
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do you think that there are too many things happening on the screen for a brutalism styled poster? i want it to still be understandable

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# wooden whale ohh got it

I should clarify that, for this specific piece, I think less could be more. However, I certainly wouldn’t want to discourage you from exploring different styles.

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Had a new idea for this one. I wanted to create a really old newspaper and make it as realistic as possible. Any Thoughts?

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# regal raft

I like the idea/concept of the Image. I'm not sure what exactly that gren Lines should represent and if it not would be better to get rid of them. Also the bird has some weird eyes, because it seems there is some overlay with those greenish things. In the Flames there seem to be some "burning Birds" incooperated that I found cool. Maybe it also could be integrated into the background as well. Also after several minutes I recogniced that tiny helicopter that (for me) does nothing add to the Image overall. Maybe replace that black thing with some "burning Bird" šŸ˜‰

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Give your opinion about my new composition guys
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looks amazing :)

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I have no idea if you mean a question in general, or one about that comp to the OP.

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i have no idea either i just lost my last braincell coz i have no idea what i need to do XD

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ok my question is , did you draw / sketch that before you use photoshop or you use mouse ?

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if you dont know what i mean just say it , my english isnt well

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dayum

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thats intresting

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can i post some1 art and then i ask how and wich software to doit

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we can talk directly

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if you want

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sure

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Any ideas?

blissful galleon
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Can anyone give an opinion on my work?

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Give your opinion about this composition
thanks!

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# jolly flame Any ideas?

Looks nice! maybe for that type of design you could try adding more "noise" to the overall image. Maybe make it a bit more brutal!

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# jolly flame alright

maybe try adding some dust/film textures to the image, or some graphic assets. try making it look more like a poster. That's the vibe i'm getting.

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# jolly flame Any ideas?

I think this is a great comp.
If you want to get super picky, the sliver of white above the first line of text jumps out at me.

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abstract oxide
# regal raft

I really like the colour. Great look.
The combination of realistic and cartoon looking elements feels a little odd to me.

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Give your opinion about my new composition guys
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i realistified this drawing i found online... any improvements that can be made?

normal spoke
# crisp stratus i realistified this drawing i found online... any improvements that can be made?

Maybe try too look for the Lighting. If necessary, take a look at the light. In the case of the head, the light seems to come from the front left, in the case of the stone igloo it appears to come from above at certain points, and the feet, which are actually under the igloo, receive light from above. Likewise, the feet seem to be too far back and the body is somehow missing. The water doesn't seem to interact with the stone igloo or the head.

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Can I get some options on these two photos

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heavy barn
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just a homework from school, how can I make it realistic?

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vague imp
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Hi i am an amateur and i need help with this project im doing for college, i need feedbacks on what i can do to improve it and maybe help with how to make the "SEMARANG" word looks better like what other font to use or add something else

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Any feedbacks is greatly appreciated

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Please, feedback

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tgis is a youtube thumbnail and can anyone help me on how I can fit the text perfeclty too the monitor

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Give your opinion about my new compostiton guys
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i think you can't see the sniper on left corner

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novel comet
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I think an approach like this might work quite well? With different images in different sections?

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that why I asked

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@vague imp

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a part from my familiy once lived in swiss

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trying to make flyers and posters using grids and font parings. what do you think?

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There are 4 different fonts that i used.. i think that's a bit too much and it may add inconcistency. Any tips?

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# rotund nexus Please, feedback

The tatto should be warped to fit the face and the eye patch should match the lighting and shadows of the face maybe remove the brown off the bottom part of the nose

The head looks edited in (even if it’s not) darken it where there’s a bunch of light so it would fix the image better from there play with the lighten

The hat neck and leather jacket looks fine blends nicely with the blurred background so they could be left alone

Finally just play with it until you feel it looks perfect or nearly perfect

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# wooden whale There are 4 different fonts that i used.. i think that's a bit too much and it m...

I think it’s fine looks like a legit poster maybe if anything lower the opacity on band name the date and address to fix the style of the restrictions and maybe change the color of the mm/dd/yyyy to a more complementary color but you should save it how it is and make the changes on a separate file and present it to whomever is paying you (unless this is for you then it’s honestly up to you)

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# rotund nexus Please, feedback

Also on the head there’s a bit of white background on top of the ears and the left ear didn’t cut out so well so many look into that as well

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Hello ! Can i get some feedback about it ? Thank you ! šŸ¤—

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