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how do I fix that
Plate shadow have unnecessary brightness.q
Roughen the edge
Mask it
Bro that is now how shadow works
It is not sharp suddenly.
It is soft transition from light to dark part
In circular objecte.
And i see bottom of lemon has very bright light outline.
That is not natural.
My recent redesign
I've been having fun, having watched the season finale
Hi everyone, I'm just starting out in Photoshop and I've already done some projects, I'd like to receive opinions and tips because I thought I couldn't make it look like everything was on the same plane and the lighting and shadows didn't really please me.
I like it. Iām not sure of the context or brief and so Iām wondering about the inclusion of that landscape?
For a beginner you are knocking out some great work.
Iāve shown here a couple of quick ideas.
Colouring everything with the same colour can be a way of quickly unifying everything.
Iāve increased the contrast of the lower half to better match the top half.
Nice work. No MiddleKi? š
Another rough idea where I've painted on patches of a second colour. This more closely matches the top half of your original design.
@abstract oxide Thanks for the suggestions, I'll use this in future projects!
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Thanks mate. Keep up the great work.
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There we go he said with a glint in his eye !
I see your glint and raise you a starburst
This is just a super rough draft for an idea Iām working on, but wanted to see if anyone has any ideas I could build on. The theme Iām going at is kinda like a tech-dystopia. Definitely wanna work on the typography more, make it look more distorted. I just quickly threw my vision together so Iād wanna work on proportions, and spend more time on the placements and angles of the security cameras. Am also gonna add texture and mess with levels so that will be covered.
I have some more pics from the photoshoot so Iām probably gonna expand the image in the same collage type of way, and have an idea to make it look like itās getting more glitchy the further right you swipe.
But again, this is just a super quick mock up and if anyone has any ideas Iād looooove to hear them out!!!
So that is some kind of a Vision board as I understand. In terms of idea I would try to get better story telling in the pic. Not sure why the girl is sitting there and why someone who threw a PC away would be under surveillance. If it should be something like Tech-dystopia and the phrase "Reality is watching you" I would do some guy who would put a Smartphone or so in a Recycle bin and tons of cams watching him and he looks guilty for throwing tech away. maybe as an idea.
@everyone Hello, I'm looking for a person who is good at editing people in Photoshop.
I might change the phrase, but I was kinda envisioning like a magazine-collage type thing that was made in this tech dystopia. The girl on the left is kinda out of place right now but Iām thinking of adding more people to the spread on the right, to take less focus off the girl throwing the computer
I might decrease the number of cameras too
And then I definitely wanna make it glitch out and get distorted in certain patches
Tryna make a Logo that says DL, anyone have tips on how to make this look better?
Looks very flat and has a lot of blank space. Also where the letters are is throwing me off. Iād recommend trying to layer things and use shading to add more depth and then shift the and DL a little bit. Iād also recommend either finding stuff to fill around the blank spots or changing the aspect ratio and going for something more minimal
Any recommendations on how I could improve either my technique or the composition of these poster style graphics.
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could you perhaps do a rough of what you're thinking so i could get an idea and maybe steal a thing or two?
It's a case of balance I think. Visually balance the DL between the flourishes š
In the case of the image on the left, I'd try and seperate the guy in the front from the background ~ perhaps lighter? Also you need to spell November correctly š
It looks like a ghost. Is it meant to be or is it meant to be a member of the Klan?
Definitely meant to be a ghost
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how can i make this image look more like an oil painting
you can add a brush stroke asset and do some mask painting over
i cant do that
thanks ill check it out
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Personally I'd prefer it without the color gradients on top of the person in the foreground. It would give more separation.
Guys, I need your feedback, please! This is the first page of my brand guidelines. Does the gray color match with the logo?
IMHO that will mostly depend on the rest of the Guideline. Normally you would have one maincolor and one secondary color.
any sugestions?
Cool idea! I like the container casting a shadow on the beach-goers. I'm not a fan of the text/font used. Also, I think the headline is too close to the top edge of the layout.
thanks! would you sugest a more "curvy" font?
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I would use a plain sans-serif font...
And perhaps be a bit more creative with your messaging. Just my opinion. :)
yea i thought about that but i really ran out of ideas for a more creative messege xD
i like that idea tho š might use it if it's ok
Of course. Use whatever you like. :)
thanks for the advice man aprieciate it!
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Lmfao sorry that was the wrong image, the upper lettering on the final copy is completely different. Also wdym by separate the guy in the front from the background?
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looks nice! though, you could change the date font and the bottom text one to something more groovy in my opinion
yeah, the font in the middle could improved.
I would try to put the upper Text "Save the Date" a little bit to the top so that the leafs are not in the text and not distracting. The Text is a bit flat maybe shadow or emboss would be a bit or interresting.
I'd suggest you try bring the text INSIDE the circle if you can.
Also, the DATE is more important than the the location right now, so make that bigger and make it stand out.
The font at the top is nice but the spacing between save and the feels big enough to park a bus.
I like how you added the white circle to the original watercolour wreath. Nice touch.
Also, it's ENTIRELY subjective, but I kinda like the extra use of white too. - since it's presumably a wedding.
The skater in the front is quite dark. If you want him to attract the eye more quickly then make him brighter
What's the logo for? I don't often see many with an outerglow like that
Love that!
added some more color to the image but i feel like the highlights are not realistic :/ anybody git any sugestions?
I am making assumptions that the goldfish should be glowing and so I've modified where the glow hits the ground and foliage. Given the position of the fish in Z space I've roughly moved the glow further forward and more underneath it.
I am doing a profiles updates for my discord and i want to know if anybody think this look great
Yes it look great so far (my advice) "maby add a little sparkle to the fish?"
to shine a lot
I like it well enough however I dont think you should cut off your head or foot.
wht chu mean when you type upu
In essence poeple see most of the time only the circle in the middle and that is very small. So the Image that is in the circle should be IMHO big so that its recognizable enough. here there is for me way to much stuff in that little circle. some unimportant car, some person that can't be recognized and the head and toues are also cut off. For me Images as from James, Euan, D.Humann, Ethan, etc. (in thischannel scrolled up) are way more recognizable as a profile pic, because ther is a clear big head or Symbol that is representative. Hope that helps.
is it coool?
Yes
I feel something is wrong (other than the text)
I like the design. maybe you can try the face on the left without the dark bar so that it more fits the rest of the light design.
The Text at the bottom seems Ok. The Top and the black frame arond seem a bit squarish, but the Image itsels a bit more swirrly, dusty, etc. that doesnt fit so much. Also if that should be some kind of Playlist Icon the black frame around would be in most cases wasted space, because many Online and Software players uses black also as background. Hope that helps.
You were asking about these 6 days ago! Iād suggest looking at some real fruit to clue you in. eg. lemons are not that shiny š
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Itās cus this is a homework project lol
I like the play with light and shadow.
Unfortunately, there is still a lot of dirt in front of the object in the picture that can be wiped away or retouched.
I find the wire in the pictures below rather disturbing because it is also blurry. The last two pictures also seem a bit badly posed. The wire has no real meaning because it neither encloses or restricts the fruit nor interacts with it in any other way. The rectangular cut apple also looks rather out of place. If all the fruits were cut into rectangular shapes and then a few matching rectangular stones then the whole thing would have made more artistic sense to me, at least. Or you can build the wire completely behind the fruit and the wire then holds the leaves above the fruit. That would also make sense. Hope it helps.
Add cool texts
also, what would I do to make them less shiny?
do not use as much intensity in that Lightsource you used in whatever program rendered those fruits. Also use a softer and bigger Ligtsource.
gotcha. I made this entirely in photoshop, so will have to do some fidangling lol
like that?
what it looked like before for reference
getting better.
I feel like it lost a lot of detail in doing that
looks good so far.
how can I improve this one?
Just as a Tipp: What have you done so far? You are posting almost every few days that you want to improve BUT the Image does not change at all! You have to practice and do things for yourself first. There are MANY Tutorials that shows you how to do it, but you have to practice for yourself in order to get better. Please practice for yourself and look at your own work and look what you want to be better, look at other Artists and their Tutorials, incooperate what they are doing, get better and THENyou will see that questions will make more sense. Hope hat helps.
some feedback?
Hey everyone - just getting into more graphic work / editing in PS. Would love any feedback. Thanks!
Hide left and right upper guys cut outs, there is a line on 4 guys heads.
You could use brush to blend it better.
Nice.
I don't see the benefit of image in upper right corner that is 90% hidden.
That one and 34-10 were best phones ever made.
I like it. I did make a couple of changes that suits my eye ~ very subjective of course.
I removed the window bar top left. I softened the shadows due to moonlight and cooled the tone.
I like the lamp glows and the text shaping.
Question: what light source (not in the frame( is making the glints on the lamps?
Perhaps have the glints on the inner edges of the lamps as if they were illuminating each other.
Thank you for feedback.
I took lamps from free internet source.
Liked the shape, so I ignored that glow on them, although it is weird.
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Which is better
My eye says the right. I prefer the Eās lining up
I too prefer the 2nd one, but I'm worried that the D is now too wide: Maybe shift it over a bit?
or taking it a step further too, you could do a similar thing with the S:
and having the 'S' literally 'on the side' š
I like the idea but I donāt feel the DE
(Either way, nice work. - I like the font and simplicity)
Thanks the font is futura I think
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I guessed it was Futura or Helevetica Neue
so i need make it bigger?
How about changing it up š
Ohh I like it
It could use a better font for stuff like that
remove it
Welcome to the internet.

(I think you misunderstood what the other person was suggesting @torpid oyster )
what
When they said "remove it" they were talking about this here:
They're not suggesting that you upload a larger image onto discord.
cool.
also ty
what did you think?
why would you
i think it looks great
Does the gray gradient go well with the product end for the shapes?
how do i go from the picture on the left to the picture on the right
im like new to photoshop
I said it.
Because image is of no use.
Without it, it looks professional, with it, it does not look so professional.
Lets try to be professionals, or at least hunt that level.
@torpid oyster one idea.
Now you can do ot for whole team and create an album for sale.
Looks all fine.
Why such saturation?
On purpose?
Double exposure that is not at edge of the main object or a person should follow lines of the object.
That said, I would fill up the whole head selection by the rose or whatever it is in the middle of the head, and I would try to smooth oit transitions.
Again, if you did this on purpose to look as what it is, it looks good.
how do i do this
both steps, how do i do it
āRougher side for tenderizingā and āfine side for tenderizingā is just not a good way to differentiate them
YouTube it
Yes, the gradient is fine. However the hammers are blending into the background. I've also modified the small teeth. What do you think?
Wdym?
Whole football team.
What can i add or remove?
I'm just realizing I didnt remove the background near his hands š¤¦āāļø
I'm working on a Josh Dobbs edit and since he is also a Nasa worker I want to incorportate things like the stars I added. I was to make this graphic pop some more. What other things should I add?
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Depending on what your end use is, do be aware that it's a copyright photograph.
Photo by Kevin Sabitus/Getty Images
Looking for critics.
Thank you! But I do not plan to sell or really post the image anywhere just trying some things out! Would it still be able to be posted? Or will I have to give photo credit or not use the image at all?
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All material like this has copyright assigned to the maker. In your case what would apply would be called āfair useā. This is never black and white and is judged on a case by case basis. Merely claiming this doesn't put you in the clear.
The next point to consider is where and under what cicumstances the copyright holder may find their image and their subsequent reaction.
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Nice editing.
The horizontal and vertical lines donāt appear to match the contours of her face and neck.
Ty for the feedback.
Fixing lines by better (not so perfect lines, rather some that follow face shape) drawing, or it could be done by some effect?
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Thanks mate. Happy to help.
Personally I would use the Pen tool to draw paths/shapes. These can be filled and outlined (stroke). The beauty with a path is that it is a live object that can be modified at any future point. While drawing with something like the Brush tool may be easier, changing these pixels in the future can be more difficult.
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hey guys, do you think there is any way to improve this thumbnail still? I'm going to upload it soon and wanted some more feedback.
the topic being on how tests are like in school
I did draw it with pen tool and filled stroke, then I added bewel which looked good.
Once I decided it to look like a visible chips inside I was not sure how to clip it in inside bewel or any other way to make like pinched skin around that area, so it ended to look not natural (like chips image is just clipped to line drawing).
I will try line selection and bewel on face, then add mask and delete bewel from outer girl parts.
Not sure will it work though.
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How about adding a blur layer on the skin then a layer with painting and finally a little noise on the skin
Nice idea. First I would retouch her a bit so that the lips are not so shiny and the hair straitghtend out. For the "technical" background I would use something what "shines" a bit better through the thin lines for the "cracks" in the face and the skin and maybe let the Edges more shine. Also maybe put her not only on a white background but maybe put some shadow on her. also there are now shadows and "real" edges on the cracks in her skin. With a bit more retouching that will be look good.
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Use a photo for reference.... he's lobster pink š
im making a logo for a website i'm creating in school for a project, i can't really decide on the color themes..can u guys give me ur opinion which one is better?
Cool logo.
It would help to know kind of backgrounds this logo may sit over.
You are definitely going to have issues with that text over darker backgrounds. Something like a white stroke around the entire logo could easily fix that.
i'm planning on putting the icon on my website only
i'm making a website for tote bags i design the logo isn't gonna be on the tote bags itself tho
Out of all those... bottom left.
Any feedback for this edit? Inspo is the sky in the second image, but I think I like having just the one fragment thing in my pic. Only thing is I feel like I could add something else to be going on as it might be too simple
But if it's not too simple jlmk and I'll keep it how it is!
I just feel like it's missing something
I guess I could add a text
Hey bro y good at editing
Thanks
I'm not really happy with the pngs and the disposition, What do you think ?
I think a little contrast boost helps
thanks !
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What do you mean by āI'm not really happy with the pngsā?
i think they are a bit ugly
No worries
The white container holding the fries jumps out at me. Perhaps some colour or some lighting contrast would help.
is there sth swrong?
ok i'll try things
This is crude but it demos something you could do to the fries container. Best of luck with the project mate.
Thank you very much !
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You're welcome. Thank you.
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i changed the fries and i think it's much better now, when i tried to add red to the fries container it looked a little bit too much like mcdo
thank you for the feedback š
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You've got some great design elements there. Nicely done.
For me there is a little too much dead space with all that white.
Perhaps experiment with different sizes of the head.
I think the bigger the head gets, the more ominous it feels.
Good choice mate. Looks a lot better without that big block of solid white.
Hmmmm, uāre right i love it))
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Awesome. Thank you. Again, you've got a really solid design there.
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btw what do you think of the price ? personally i think that it's very bland, and adding a "star" behind it makes the design look very cheap
i also want to "stick" to the visual identity of the fast food, i have some other reference for that
I don't have a problem with it. In fact I like it. I like the boldness and simplicity.
I'm assuming this is just one section of a large menu that could have 10/20/30 items on it. In a design like that I think it's important to reduce clutter wherever you can.
Okk thank
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You seem experienced, do you mind if i send you the final product for feedback ?
Ah yes. I've seen you post this menu before and I like it.
Thank you. I'm happy to help where I can but I'd prefer to keep all communication in this public forum.
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yes of course 
Cheers mate
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I'm signing off. The menu looks awesome. Best of luck with the project.
Thank ! See ya
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what do you think ?
It's looking really good. Great contrast and colour.
There is an obvious seam where the background repeats. I suggest overlapping these background elements a little and then use a mask with a soft edge on the top element to blend them together.
Seeing all the items together, perhaps increase the size of the titles and decrease the size of the price a little.
Great design.
Thanks for the feedback ! i'll do that šŖ
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Thank you
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How does this look? it's for the first slide of the first instagram post I'm doing on my new creative account
Youāve got 3 very different design elements/styles competing for attention. I feel like simplifying this might help create a stronger composition.
Best of luck with the new creative outlet.
I mean I feel like a lot of magazine covers and similar styled images have multiple design elements
Like the main subject is photography but then thereās some graphic design in the background and a standout text at the top
I completely agree. This is just a personal preference. I think unifying some/all of these elements in some way would make it feel like a cohesive design. Perhaps a little overlap. Perhaps a consistent colour in some form. Etc...
True. Thanks
Might try to add more glow on the entire cover to match the gradient of the rift thing in the middle
And then for other slides Iāll make the elements interact more
Do you think I should add text to the top right? Like how magazines have subtitles for different sections
Sounds like a cool strategy. I'm keen to see what you come up with. Best of luck.
Thanks!
I think some extra text could look great. If you do, perhaps keep it simple so as not to introduce another style.
Yea Iād probably just do a basic font, and could do a couple different sections of it with one on the black background and one on the rift thing. That might help visually blend the elements I feel
Sounds cool
looking for quick feedback, the theme is to show that kids nowadays are addicted to devices and constantly think about them. looking for simple ways to better portray this message
Hi everyone.
Anyone needs help in designs for your branding or Shopify store.
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I guess my first thought is that theyāre holding a book and not a device?
the lightig is noticeable but you did better than i could
Didn't notice anything. Looks good to me. š„
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yea i feel like i need to change the contrast a little bit to match the dust from the shoe covering everyone else
just trying to make it look as authentic as possible since itās for a uni project
you could also try hiding yourself in the crowd to the left because the lighting would match better and you would be hidden in the crowd
it would also hide my out place outfit haha, I think part of why i might be more noticeable is because iām the only person there in shorts š
Two things that will help š
Its a still from a movie. As such there is an amount of motion blur that isnāt visible on you. You have placed yourself in the pic in direct sunlight coming from top right so add some appropriate highlights on the side / top of your image.
Iād try messing with saturation/brightness/contrast to maybe get your clothes to match the lighting on the others a little more but thatās kinda a nitpick, and then a little motion blur like euan said
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Nice work. I like the double border (black and white) around the title. This will work well against pretty much any background.
The internal borders are a little inconsistent. I like the spacing around the T and the A but not the O.
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could i make this neon effect more realistic? or is it enough? xD
Looks really good. If you are going for ultra-realism you could add a few elements like cables and the clips that hold the neon tubes. You could also add overlap and missing portions.
Cool design.
It's a personal preference but I'm not a fan of elements that intersect with eyes. Personally I would back off the patterns over the face and especially around the eyes.
That depends on for what do you want that?! I find it pretty good. From the technical perspective you could look how the Neon glows on the wall, adjust the shadows, look that the blurring on the blueish tubes look the same as the redish tubes and also the sharpness, etc. that are minor details where will be a lot of work involved, but after that it can get really realistic.
I think it looks pretty cool. you can maybe try playing around with the oppacity of the background that its maybe not as dominant as the black cutout in the front, but that depends also on your taste and how the Image at the end is used.
What catches my eye is the slight double shadow from the blue tube. The tube itself would not create that shadow. If there are other lights implied then the red tubes need the same shadow.
thanks for the idea!
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didn't even think about that thanks!
No worries. Thank you.
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In the dark you would not get that kind of light to the side of the car. Also the Light from the headlights does not shine as equal and not illuminating the street. The inside of the car also would be darker. For those kind of editing it always helps to have a look at actual photos of cars in the dark, etc. Adobe Stock is there a good place to search.
Is there anything I can improve on this shot?
Hopefully I put this in the right channel.
Which one do yall like the most?
either 2 nd or 3rd
My first attempt to try to make an old photo from a new one (Just for fun).
The landscape is from my dslr and the couple is from a small thumbnail found on Google.
Any comments/suggestions welcomed.
Technical note:- The people where only added in as a last minute addition. So I do realise the added noise to them and the background noise isn't uniform (blush)
Alright, thank you
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That depends on the context. It seems that they are snapshots on the go. They all look pretty much the same. For me the 2nd One has the most potential for e.g. a background of some kind, because there are not much distraction shadows in it. But that's personal preference and must not apply to you. Hope that helps a bit.
Youāve done a really good job matching the tones. I zoomed in nice and close and you seem to have a pretty uniform noise across everything. Nice work.
If you are looking for additional things to try, perhaps a heavy vignette. Not necessarily a dark one but maybe a light one.
Thankyou for the comments. I did actually add a little bit of vignetting, but more to the dark side. I will try on the lighter side then.
This looks great. I like the colour and and the contrast is great.
As for possible changesā¦
- Perhaps a vignette to draw the eye towards the middle?
- You also appear to have a blown out highlight at the top. Was this a RAW file you could possibly pull detail from?
Thank you. Donāt be afraid to go super extreme with the vignette. Many vintage photos have rounded corners that fade to total white. Personal preference of course š
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Thank you.
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I could try that, and yes I always shoot RAW+Jpeg
Took me about 2 hours. Any opinions?
Nice. Now tell a more engaging story. Maybe add a rebel solider running away / running toward the camera (or something). :)
I'll try something. Gotta find a stock image that sort of fits first
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Great composition. Nice addition of the Stormtrooper. I was going to suggest you add something to the foreground.
Thanks a lotš This is probably the artwork i'm most proud of!
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You should be proud. It's a great piece.
The lazars look really dark maybe adding in some kind of glow, and have it on the front trooper
Lovey, my ONLY issue is that the lasers have a darker outer glow
Try switching the blend mode to 'screen' instead of trying to clip them out from a black background
that's exactly what i did but becasue of the vignette it got dark ima fix it now
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Change it entirely.
Cool. - I don't think I'm the target audience for your vision here, so I doubt I'd be able to offer much that would help with your design
thanks anyway
What do people think of my little "Project"?? Hope you like it
Do you have some ideas what i can put in center and what shadows and light i should improve?
kind of tried something. what u think?
Nice. !
Nice editing.
My main issue is that the curves look very symmetrical. Many parts look like a mirror image. Distorting some of those curves would go a long way to fixing that.
Again, nice work.
I would not put anything in the middle, because there is that planet in the back. The scenery get the light from behind so for me it looks dramaticaly cool. But if you want you can try maybe some kind of Rider on a horse in the distance between the glowing planet and the two dudes in the front or depending on what story the image should tell an object lying on the ground in front of the knights like a small bag or crate.
its getting better! Like it.
Your opinion about my new composition please
Needs snow on the roof š
In my opinion there is to much grass around the house and maybe more snow on roof
wht do u guys think?
The Background seem to fit the look. The "person" seem to overcroud a bit the scene. one r two less and one relly big portrait would maybe benefit the scene.
The unnatural blurring of the background mountains and the green grass would bother me š Also as said the snow that is missing. Also I would put some kind of animal or so inthe picture to get some more dynamic and "action" into the Image.
hello! any tips on this?
I don't know if you're still around, but that background was made with generative fill, what kind of prompt do you think would change the hills/mountains in the back look more realistic, and what part of the photo would you reccommend the animal to be?
this is where we at
this 100% i dont know much but that looks great
maybe remove the grass from the stone and you are golden
If you used generative Fill you just choose another one where that Blurring is not that much. The Animal may your choosing that fits the scene and the "Story" of the scene.
both woudl work. But to be clear I reffered with my "blurrinG" to the Image with the cottage in the winter scene i reffered to. For THIS with the girlfriend in the scene the Mountain looks Ok.
thatās my bad lol, i was rlly tired and misread haha
thanks though!
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Last photo before its time to slep. Could I get some composition feedback? Or pose/anatomy. I am drawing a winter soldier on guard at their camp.
may be hard to see
i know that there is always room for improvement so could you guys give some opinions on this? could i make it more realistic?
The composition is good and I really like the colour and contrast.
The different patches of blurring on the astronaut looks odd to me.
The bulk of the visor is solid black and looks very flat. Perhaps a couple of extra well placed reflections or highlights could help.
Nice work.
Itās looking good to me.
There is a lot of dead space behind the soldier. I would crop the left and top a little. If you do so, the right knee might need to slide forward a little.
Iām keen to see the final version.
Hi My name is Mariam , I need to know what do you think about my project https://www.behance.net/gallery/185384977/Luxury-Masterbedroom
Your opinion about my new composition please
I am a bit confused. I understand what you mean with it being dead space behind the soldier. But when you say crop to the left and top you mean shrink or expand the drawing? Also move right knee forward because of that. I'll try. Thanks for helping though.
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Really nice work. You are a good artist.
I would now recommend you add a little space above the head š
idk how i want to take this someone give me ideas please and thanks
what im sitting on rn
im kind of lost on how I want to go about this. I am making a PSA 1930s-1950s styled billboard for an assignment. i stumped myself on how to make this look good though lol
decided to change the silhouette image
Perhaps this filter could help...
Filter > Pixelate > Color Halftone
My example is far from perfect and is not necessarily appropriate for that size text. But hopefully it demonstrates how you could go for an old printed look if that suits.
is this suitable for a buisness card?
Well ignoring the dude with the AK, there are some issues:
The QR code position is a bit wonky, move it over to the space to the right and bottom is equal
You have a black icon on a black background, not good.
text is too close to the edge of the card
The front and back of the card are two different sizes
Your card has both centralised text AND left aligned, try and pick one
If it was printed, the text would likely 'fill in' dye to the heavy ink weight. (This is more a practical/print issue than design)
You'll likely be dissapointed in the CMYK print or the vibrant blue IF you were to actually print it
The top of the text doesn't align.
I'm not sure what the main title is supposed to be. The left or right?
I think a more appropriate FONT would make a huge imapct:
I think the colours are too 'vibrant' on your version. - I tried it by using the font here:
https://www.dafont.com/anderson-stingray.font
Anderson Stingray Font | dafont.com
A colour halftone suggested by VeryTori could make it look more like this:
thanks for the input!
color halftone filter by itself is really bland, I like to spice it up a bit š
One of my first edits, how is it?
thanks bro ima implement that i apprechiate you a lot
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Looks great.
How you did magical trail?
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Tysm š, I did the magical trail with a wisp of smoke, then I liquefied it into the right shape.
Smart trick to use smoke vector in this way.
Ty š
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I would use some light shadows or bevels for the text that it does match better with the background and the readability would be better.
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I personally think it's too 'grey' I'd go for some stronger white and some stronger black?
needs more contrast
Plus make the CONTROL easier to read...
If it's literally a t-shirt design, the end result would be a massive rectange in the middle of the shirt, I think it's kinda better if you could so something that doesn't result in a normal rectangular t-shirt frame. Like none of them below seem to do this...
except those on the bottom row, and those look the worst (to me at least, who has no clue about fashion!)
alright š
Perhaps some kind of a glow (light or dark) or shadow around the game titles. The title on the right is a little hard to make out against the noisy background.
Hi, could anyone please give me some suggestions on this, I've been staring at it for too long. It'll be a Christmas present, so would like to be it as close to perfection as possible. It's the pup's on the left-hand side neck that needs improvement I think. I know both the fur & dog collars don't really go together, but really wanted to use a collar on both pups as sort of a connection between the two (as the one on the right's no longer with us hence the halo effect). Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated
Nice idea. First I would try to match the lighting. the left puppy has very dim and soft light but the one on the right has bright light from the right side that does not match the one on the left. The collars does not match at all (reflections came from the left side, Light on puppys from the right). The collar on the left puppy works a bit better, because its under his chin and not tha promonent. For the right "floating" collar you may try something like reducing the oppacity around 50-70% or also place it under the chin. after some of those tweaks the pic will look IMHO better. Hope that helps.
maybe go to filter gallery and play with those. they can give you a more cartoon-ish look
Thank you for a detailed feedback, appreciate it. What do you think would be the best method to match the lights on their faces? Should I bring the highlights down on the right one or try and enhance the brightness of the pup on the left? And if so, what tool would be best for it? I always struggle with light matching!
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hey, Im currently a student so I probably have a lot to work on, this is a music poster for an artist (upper right) the name of the song in the singer handwrite (middle) and the duration,
the song titled "lost in space" i would like to get some advice
There is zero possibility a shadow of man in space would show on planet.
Edge of the biggest planet should have smoothness.
Ty. Will try.
Yes, highlights down and not only enhance the brightness but also look from what angle the light come and where the reflections in the eyes are and match them to the other puppy. For all technices try to look up some Tutorials on youtube, etc.
try blending each object to match better with the background. play with curves, hue/saturation, color balance
and try blurring just a little bit the planets in the back
Looks better now thanks!
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I will appreciate some feedback on this, constructive criticism are welcome as well
Please don't post the same thing multiple times, in multiple channels.
Planning to get a print made of a couple recent photos. Anything stand out that would improve either of these shots, before I send it? Scaled down version for Discord.
Same question for this one:
(Can ignore the artifacts on the engine, that is temporary)
What is better? and any quick tips
Looks really good.
Perhaps some kind of a solid border.
Perhaps some kind of a thin internal border. It could weave in some way around the body and the arm.
I donāt mind your choice of light and dark on either the man or the city. However, I feel they donāt match.
Finally done!!
hey everyone!
I'm currently a student and the Teacher is a bit meh (good at photoshop not good in helping) and always sending me to YouTube, I did this as part of my 3 poster project, I think it looks good overall but I am sure there is more stuff to be done to make it perfect, I would love to hear your thoughts.
I'll give some background:
top right text: artist name - can't change the font
middle text: artist handwrite (I know it's kind of meh I thought of going over it in Illustrator after I'm done)
bottom text: time of the song (something the artist put on all his songs - can change fonts)
personally Iād try gen expand or gen fill to get the other wing tip into the frame š
Well done, perseverance pays off š
Thanks!
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Not sure what the problem or help should be, but I try to give some infos as I look at the pic. First its not Designwise good to mix up Fonts. Try to find one font and seperate handwritten text from it.
The black blob in the middle looks a bit awkward maybe with some bevels or shadows or soit gets more depth. Hope that helps a bit.
thats my problem with everything. i dont have the artistic mindset you would say
Your opinion about my new composition please
I disagree. You've got some great elements there. It's just my personal opinion that they don't quite match. Most people's early work, definitely mine included, is less than optimal. Keep up the study š
I think it's generally good.
To me it feels a little flat, particularly the police officer. Perhaps pick out just a couple of small elements and dramatically brighten them. This would actually be very realistic given the metal/reflective elements on the uniform. You could also do the same with the main car.
I like your colour scheme. Perhaps dull the yellow down a little.
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i'm new to photoshop, feedback would be gold^^
I think there can be some things done. First look at the lighting. The moon shines from behind, but the Reflections on the Person and the first car came from the front. Also the Front-car has no lights on, the back-car has. Not sure why thee is only one person as a "Croud Control" Officer on the side of the road (makes from the Storytelling Point no sense...). I also would ad some road-flares7candles that are burning red on the street.
Any feedback
i think it looks sick^^ i love rocky
Thanks!
I like it
Only thing that I notice is that the pink on the eyes looks a little different on the left one vs the right one
thank you
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i don't like but don't know why
I think your design is fantastic.
If you are trying to sell the look of an old newspaper, I would recommend brightening the blacks. While the contrast on your design looks great, newspapers can't hold that much ink. The faded look also helps sell the age.
Thanks for the feedback, will do!
Hello, any feedback is appreciated. I may return to it and go into more detail, or I may start it over.
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1st color pass. I think i'll leave this for now & get back to those portraits.
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I really like what youāve created.
Personally I would increase the contrast just a little and maybe add a few glowing light reflections on the very brightest parts.
Please feedback
it is not finished, but i need some sleep^^
Cool composition.
The clouds feel like they are in the distance but their transition to the water suggests they are extremely close.
The lighting feels very uniform. Perhaps play with with their rotation or even connect some of them to create a fork in the lightning.
Hey, anyone has some tipps what i could change, its a project
should i change the background i made the first pic with ai and changed the eye so they have sam hight
The edges of the person and the dog seem to have a white glowing edge (cutout not so good) maybe you can try to work that out or try a light or white background
just use the blue to cover the white parts?
I'm not sure that this would work better that way around but you can also try it.
okay
you have a tip how i can take the contures from the wolfs hair and put it on the white parts? cause it looks really washed
For a quick Test I used the "remove background" Tool and put a new Background with Generative Fill on a new layer
The Wolf is not perfect, but that black hair looks IMHO better with that light blue background. Its only an idea, you should work it out for your own. Its good practice.
yes
you would youse a special tool for the fer?
like to make some extra hairs and contures
Try Tutorials about "Masking Hair" or fur. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yjIAr_g8Qpw&ab_channel=PiXimperfect
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Youāve got a pretty good transition happening there.
For me I would add a little fur in the upper left and have that transition into the human hair.
I kind of agree, but that's the top of the dogs head....
Hello everyone.
I'm currently studying in Multimedia Design in university and I need to do a branding Design for a class work.
Would be nice if you could help me to collect some info as part of the research step of the branding creation by filling the google form below:
https://forms.gle/8b7vewfFVREmhwmn9
Thank you very much!
Design + Lab is a space to be shared with the courses that belong to Arts department of University.
The courses that belong to Arts department are Multimedia Design, Fashion Design and Industrial Design.
With this form, I hope to have feedback that can help me create a branding design for Design + Lab as part of my design class work.
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works way better. Also the colors fit much better with the background.
thank youš
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you have any other advice or its good now?
Me personally I like it as it is now.
Please feedback
i'm exploring new workstyles in phsotoshop.. today i tried replicating a movie poster. first time doing something like this could i get some tips?
what grade would you give? like the objective was to implement an animal human being in an environment
Nice piece.
I think a little separation between the small text and the background is needed. Perhaps a small glow?
I would also lower that text.
Looks pretty good so far. I would try to do a little less snowflakes for the redish picture in the head around the person in the middle so that it is a bit clearer. Also "The Road" I would try without Snowflakes in Front of the letters.
i changed now something
left is my improved version
the finger there hasnt made any sense
the hair of the men, should i make it in wolf fer?
any feedback for this thumbnail
Sounds good i'll try that. Thanks for the advice!
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it's a good start. though, i would add a bit of shaddow to the glowing object so it does not look like it's just hovering there. also select the layer that contains the highlight on the subject and play with the blend if slider. take the one from the underlying layer slider to the right a bit and split it by pressing alt. it will bring back some texture as for now it looks a bit flat. also you culd try to cast a shaddow from the subject on the back wall. just duplicate it and add a color overlay from the layerstyles. blur it and play with the opacity
hey you have any idea how i can make that. Like the whole headform is from the human. i could try to just recolor it in the wolfs fur. idk i never did something like that
There is way to much going on in that pic. Way to many elements. Also the Text is almost not readable. Some of the Images are not as sharp as others / Text. Try to get all in a good condition and the Text maybe with shadows or embossing to stand ot that its more/better readable.
I woud perhaps reduce the contrast a little, lift the blacks slighty and soften the beam as moonlight which I'm asssuming is the effect you are looking for will not cause such hard lighting. š
oh ok
i really need some help with this one. i feel like it's too empty and the highlights from the sparks are just not right with me. got any tips?
I think you're in the right path, I dig the type you chose for the poster. First you'll want to find a reference poster, search the web for posters related to the final result you want to achieve. Once found, ask yourself what makes the reference poster work. This is a nice exercise to train your eyes.
My suggestions for this one is to add some background, successful movie posters are famous of telling what the movie is about visually and make the audience to want to watch it. Since it's an action movie you might add some elements that create some movement, add more characters, maybe a dark scene with some suspense aesthetic, I brought an example below, see how the rain adds a great sense of movement and action to the poster? The John Wick does not have much elements but you can see the details behind him add that action sense. Hope it helps š
Thanks for the proffesional response. I will go ahead and retouch the poster later today and send it here again ti see my progress. Thanks again!š
There are some ways you could make the text stand out a bit more. Try using a more dinamic font to match the vibe of the overall image and play with the layerstyles
Please give your thoughts about this edit. Give a opinion on what i should improve or learn. I totally created this with multiple pictures combined and came to this so far.
thank you
For the shaddow you should duplicate the subject and set a color overlay of a really dark gray, almost black. Then place it under the subject in the layers pannel and usit the perstective transorm adjust the position of the shaddow to match.blur it usit gaussian blur, make a mask and erase the shaddow more as it's closer to the camera.
That's what i would do if i wanted a detailed shaddow. otherwise play with the adjustment layers for the subject. match it better, also add some highlights to the metal stuff behind from the moon
oh ok thank you
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Hey guys
I need some advice on a website design that i did for my friend:
https://discord.com/channels/547473772727238676/1184747959506714684
Perhaps tint some of the edges of the character pink/purple. This would suggest they are getting partially illuminated from the background lights.
Firstly, requests for feedback and the images involved are best kept to this channel š
Personally I like the pink option however it is a bit of an obvious "girl" theme, maybe not what your friend wants. It would also lend itself to making a repeating background that would suit long web pages.
its a great advice thank you sir for the help :>
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Did this art for a music visual that my friend requested. Any tips or opinions?
Hello everyone, this is a piece of artwork I created to explore my abilities. I would appreciate your feedback to improve my skills. š
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technically the Image itself is Ok. But from the visual and Storytelling and Composing there could be done more. There is a very large wall and much wasted space on it. maybe think more of a Vinyl Cover where is only small space and compact all the infos to the center. Also what would be the main object to focus on in that Image. For me that Image could be cut in half. The Poster and the person on the left Side would do on their own. The right-side tells me not much and could be left out.
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i feel like this palm logo is too simple
He doesn't appear to be sitting on the chair.
im feeling its missing something
For youtube
looks nice but if you blur other things beside the main text I think it will look more attractive
Thanks, I'll take that into account next time š
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I like that youāve got a little red glow around the character. However, this does appear to be missing around the edges of the helmet. I would also personally increase the red glow at the body edges in general. This would help unify the foreground and background and also sell how bright the light source is. Nice work.
I tried to fix some problems as it seemed to me the work was a bit empty and I added something else
I really like your additions. I particularly like the increase in contrast and the stronger red. The extra symbols and sparks also look great.
Not that it necessarily needs it but a darker vignette could help focus interest around the center
Thank you for such a high appreciation of my work
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Thank you very much. Best of luck with the project and your Photoshop studies.
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As a logo I like the symmetry and I donāt mind the simplicity. However, I think you need to reorient some of the shapes at the top to make it look a little like a palm tree.
Hello! Would like some quick feedback for a shirt im designing. The center is a deconstructed logo of our organization so not much I can do about it. I just slapped the png on a khaki shirt for it to make sense not trying to blend it on there or anything.
To me the grey part in the middle looks quite confusing
I would not put one Text/Symbol over another. That may not fit for Shirts and stuff so well. In this case tha Grey Thing n the middle over the white earth is as said before confusing. Also the "Student" Text over "Council" (will that mean Council Student or Student Council?). The Stars does not seem to be the same yellow as the rest. You also have different Fonts (always stay in ONE Font Family).
I think youāve got a lot of really good elements there.
Iām not a fan of the word STUDENT written over the top of COUNCIL.
I think the 3 stars on the left and the one on the right are a little odd.
Thanks guys! I appreciate the help! Trying to fit in the 'student council' in the design was rough. I'll try to think of a better way to add it in š
Thanks mate. Best of luck with the design.
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Feedback? Thisāll be my second project for the page Iām making š®
U need to work on the light, glow, texture
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My first project on bookcover designšš, your opinion matters
I think you've done a great job.
If I was 'grading' it, I'd just say the same as others have commented elsewhere, with the text being too close to the edge.
If it was a real product, I'd possibly argue that the text is perhaps a little too difficult to read.
I'm also not really even sure what the book is called? (e.g. What would I type into amazon?)
Mind Body Soul
Mind, Body, Soul
Mind, Body & Soul?
Nature?
Nature: is the purest portal to inner peace
Is the front cover background a set of trees that have been stretched upwards by 10,000% until they're just lines? (No complaint, just wondering?)
That is Unlined notebook cover š š btw I appreciate your considerationš¤
Why lot of artifacts?
I make debate breakdown videos but I feel like the design is super flat and boring
Anybody have ideas on how I can make this look a little bit more appealing?
What's the gap in the middle for?
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Here's the video for reference
thanks!
It's where the "discussion" via the cards happens
Seems silly to try and entirely reformat your entire video. - Maybe just add some abstract background?
I like that a lot
Also, if I was doing it from scratch, I'd consider using more simplified text boxes?
I am just starting a new video now so I can reformat anything at the moment
I am curious as to what you have in mind for a simplified text box
Also, I am thinking of some kind of border for the video frames, probably just a simple white line
Maybe...something... like this?
I only spent 2 mins on it.
I suppose more of a nod to how a message on iphone/android would look?
Nice!!
@novel comet whenever you have a moment, can you send me that first background you used? Or direct me to where I can download it?
Download this free illustration of Abstract Texture Background from Pixabay's vast library of royalty-free stock images, videos and music.
Thanks James, really appreciate your time
Got two designs im working on idk what to add
Quite nice!
Maybe a snake like this one
For which one
Love it
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I need some help with this client (restaurant) who thinks they're a designer š They think that using zero colors, no emojis, etc. makes them sleek and sophisticated but they want to use their crappy cell phone photos as full-canvas images for social media (1200x1200) without any solid backgrounds, frames or shapes. When I explained that most of their images are too small to use as attractive full-canvas images, this was their proposed solution šš Does anyone have suggestions for how to elegantly approach typesetting on top of food??
they hated my solution because it uses a COLOR and COLORS are not SOPHISTICATED
(the color is in their brand book. I will strangle them)
how we feeling bout this?
Just use "Generative fill" or find another client haha
I was going to suggest that next, but it's not tenable because I'm trying to give them templates they can use without a designer generative filling every image they want to use
It's easy to take their money for the worst and most boring "designs" I've ever been instructed to do, but I want to actually help them. It's my fault
they have flat-out rejected me using more legible fonts like you did too. even though they're in the goddamned brand book
they think they will find the rebrand concept by scooting elements around the layout lmao
a brand is when you use the same font and layout for everything right
Then they should just take new pictures like that. Leave a bit of space on the right side and not so close. If they don't understand it or don't want that, then they are stupid and should do it on their own. A restaurant should focus on good food and leave the graphics to the professionals. It is actually quite simple. If they don't understand your help, move on.
Yeah. Unfortunately they hired some restaurant consultant who is taking them for a ride and blocking me from doing anything, so I'll just take the paycheck, NOT put it on my resume and let the contract end on Jan 8th
what you guys think of my new lawyer logo? i stole it from Better Call Saul, can't help but feel like something is missing though.
what would you guys have done instead? or to improve it
I dislike the colours, and I'm a bit confused by the www.pub
Is it supposed to be saying the address is ww.attorney.pub?
I can't think of a single 'logo' with the .com or .pub literally IN the name.,
its www.pub.attorney
i dislike the colors too š¦
www.pub.healthcare on the other hand is gonna be an AI doctor š
Repeated identical characters that are supposed to look hand drawn always stand out to me. I would recommend pushing the vertices around a little in such characters.
I would probably make "www.pub" one colour.
I would also recommend using a colour that contrasts strongly with the white background.
Did this Music cover artwork for a friend of mine. what do u think?
Can you provide some details about how and where this graphic will be used?
There are no rules for that. Art is art. Look at this album cover by Drake. Painted by a 5 year old.
Any feedback for me on this guys?
What do you think of the those two designs guys?
I like it. Very colourful. Lovely photos BUT I think there are too many different fonts going on. - which makes it look very bust and cluttered.
I think the 'service' font and yellow colour could be changed to match an existing font/colour.
I think 'host' could perhaps be changed from orange (but i'm being picky there, it looks nice)
Maybe remove the ITALIC from the 2023 and 2024
Consider switching the social media icons to white-out versions.
.,... Jeeeez. Is it a.... 12 hour service?
(or one at 6pm and another at 6am?)
In regards to the other, I'd just suggest you remove the strange shadows....
This is 100% subjective, but I'd also consider changing the colour of the ribbon to something with more contrast:
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Something like white?
yeah, probably. - Or maybe just one extra colour is ok š Maybe the HOST box and 'service' can share the same unique colour
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what yall think of this? made by me
i just started making these dsigns, started with anime banners and posters :))
The face and the title looks quite wierd to me, the rest is nice
tysm, what do u think can i change on the face and the title?
Try to show more details on the mouth part. Maybe choose a different font and remove the gradient
ooh, i see, but the mouth thing i did it an iT look scarier xD
Then keep it without ^^
xD
Youāve put together some really nice pieces.
While they look good, I question whether you need the faded background heads. For me they are a distraction and draw away from the main image which I would make larger.
First time trying a y2k style. i feel terrible for this xD any tips?
It's nice, but maybe make the moon orange like the font
Any tips on this?
I think, the fire looks kinda random placed
what should i do with it then?
Also worked on this one
Maybe add a logo into the flames. at the right maybe a slogan*
I love it, but the swirls are too much for me^^
Cool design.
I can see you are going for light on the left and shadows on the right for the food. Your lighting is a little inconsistent and could use a little more work.
Lemme try that
I have created an edit , please tell me how can i improve and what i can add, https://youtu.be/GymLdgn7Mx0?si=sV0y_ZBrNYqZLEtf
I do not own the video.
Clips taken from YouTube.
Please comment and tell what I can do to improve.
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I used premiere pro
thanks for the feedback!
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Hello again everyone! š For me it's kind of like a tradition to publish new images on December 21, which was the day when I started doing graphic design (December 21, 2017 -> 6 years ago) . Here it is for this year: https://www.behance.net/gallery/186795693/2023-4-personal-3D-explorations What do you think about this project?
You'r insane. How did you made these?
Nice project. maybe you also can tell the Viewers a bit more about the project like some thoughts about it, is it made with AI or selfpainted or how its made or whatever story comes into your mind. Some of the images look very similar to each other. Here it could help to show the Top 6 or 10 of each Set and also Link to the other Gallery.
I used Photoshop and sometimes also Illustrator for creating some of the textures I used and to color adjust the result before publishing it. The main part was done in Blender (and sometimes Dimension). Thanks for your comment I'm glad you like it!
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might be an idea too. Thanks for your feedback!
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Made with blender and ps
looks cool š
No worries. Thank you.
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Did this music cover art for somone. he said he loves it. what do you think?
I feel like this IG post is missing something, any suggestions? Itās two slides
Gonna add a texture but outside of that idk what to add, maybe something to do with the sky in the back?
Nvm I think Iām finished, dropped it in #šØshare-your-work-archive
Personally, I would move the front image more to the left so they cover the second A. As it is it looks like the hand is coming out of his head. I assume you can try this as its multiple layers? š
My recent work with adobe photoshop 2024š„
https://www.behance.net/gallery/187316877/(Free-Font)-SAGERANGE-BLACK-METAL-FONT-VOL-11
hii, any feedback? its for a thumbnail
great!
thanks
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You need to style your text, and play with the color grading and texture, the whole pic Green
alr i will try to make some changes
Okay, tyt
I would suggest to work on the text that the edges are not so blurry and also on the Highlights/Shadows. When it will be shrinked to a thumbnail much of the Details will be lost and it is only a black blob.
Me personally I would like to have ore clear and visible letters. The difference between the B and the R would be too small for me to be able to tell the difference. I could totally see it for Album Covers of Hard Rock Bands or so, but I would like more clear Letters. Also would be nice to have additional characters such as the @ sign, etc.
First time tryong out a brutalism style artwork. took some inspiration with the print-lines effect. waht could i improve? i really want to master this style
I think, it's a bit empty
I don't like the text thing, but the rest is š„
For the Fonts I would try to stay with one Font and not mix them. The print lines effect for the Background Image itself I like very much. The "Story" in the picture that the word there say does not work for me. The person looks very calm, there is not much going on it the picture and there are only two words printed over the Face. Why? As a rcommendation try to compose Images allways so that there are self explenatory. They shold tell the story on its own. Maybe you have something in mind if you made the Image BUT the Image does not tell here the story. For example if there where tears in the eyes of the person or some brutal weaponery in the image oder something that represents"deadly" of any kind then it may be a bit clearer. Its hard to tell storys with pictures, but with a bit practice it will getting better!
At first glance I only saw "your Thoughts" and the white stars. That meant nothing to me. The "Beyond" is technically very had to read, so that could be improved. If the Image should represent something like what weird thoughts could be beyond someones mind or something like that because the picture of the person is very blurred and psychedelic I would place something even more psychedelia spiral or other weird shapes behind the person.
i see. placing objects behind the person would be pretty difficult. i need to sepparate the subject from the bg and apply the same effect to both.
yup.. i need a lot of improvementš
seperating the person from the background should be pretty easy with PS (Remove Backgrond) and then you can place all you want on the layer behind the person. Also you can play with Blending Modes and Layer Blendings.
how is it?
new composition. Give your opinion about this manipulation please
For me it's generally quite good. Nice work.
It feels like you have a little dead space in the upper left. I would suggest cropping a bit or partially filling it with something like cloud or tree.
The tree appears to be strongly in silhouette while the people and dogs are not.
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I made this logo for my friend's fnaf roblox game and I don't like how Freddy is so low quality. I am probably going to remove this bozo, or I'll just make him Glitchy as well to make more sense that he's low quality, since I want this to look like a camera perspective
#šproject-feedback hi! I made this photo-manipulation art in photoshop using cheese stock images and a few other images. While Iāve watched a lot of videos, Iām very new to this. What do you guys think, and what can I improve on?
Congratulations on getting into photo manipulation.
Are you familiar with the concept of using a soft brush to paint on layer masks? In this very rushed demo I have created an adjustment layer to darken and another to lighten. Painting on the layer masks allowed me to quickly add dark and light areas to add interest.
To help unify the piece you could add some of that glitch effect to the icons that are currently nice and sharp. I also get it if they need to remain as is.
Placing a colour over everything is another way to help unify separate elements
Guys need some feedback on asthetics
Wow that look a lot more interesting! I was playing around with it, but I couldnāt figure out a way to make the background darker but the highlights pop since all my layers were a bit mixed up. So when I darkened it, it darkened the highlights and color too. Thank you so much for the tip! So you use brightness/contrast. For this piece I used exposure, are they the same or do you recommend one over the other?
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Thanks mate. Iām happy to hear this might help you out.
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In Photoshop there are usually at least 10 different ways to achieve the same result.
I personally like to use Curves because they are both powerful and very flexible.
Levels can be a little easier to use.
Using Exposure should be fine. Just be careful you don't push it too far and blow out your highlights. By that I mean if you make things too bright you might start to lose details in your bright areas.
i did
thx tho
Cheers
did this really abstract art today. any opinions?
nice one
Nice compositions.
The contrast of the trees and buildings is low and is especially obvious in comparison to the below water elements.
The whale in the city is cool. I wonder if a few strategically placed bubbles would be a nice addition?
Use a clipping mask on a transparent layer above the shape and then paint inside that layer. Point in between the two layers with the top layer selected and then Use opt/alt to create a clipping mask
I was wondering if anyone knew how to fix this. I cropped a piece of the lid due to it showing a different background, but when I add the glow back on it shows up inside the lid where previously cropped. I don't want it in the lid and I only want on the outside. Can some please help me?
if you lasso select the background, copy to a new layer under the lid, and merge the layers, you should get the right effect
Thanks
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Any thoughts on how to improve?
I personally think there is too much overlap with the text
I see, you got any thoughts on how to position it while trying to go for a minimalistic/clean type of look? Thanks for the feedback
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Feedback on this project? Mainly if anyone has suggestions on what to change to contribute to the style more, that would be suuuper helpful, but hereās what Iām thinking rn:
I add text to the glitchy part on the right, based around breaking free from reality bc thatās the theme
I add a graphic or text on the left thatās like a magazine cover but kind of distorted (in the same style as the main girl on the left)
I maybe distort the middle two pictures if itās not too distracting
So if anyone has suggestions on any of that, or just how I could convey the glitchy magazine feel better, I would greatly appreciate it!
Btw the glitch part is just a placeholder for rn
Nicely done. I like your changes a lot.
Personally Iād still be separating those two lines of text.
While itās subtle, the line around JS is a little jagged.
how would I get rid of the jaggedness, sorry im new to photoshop like i just started š
How are you creating the JS text?
How are you adding a stroke/outline to the text?
Adding a screen capture of your Layers panel could help.
I like the separated text
made in 50 minutes
Looks really good
Thanks
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No worries.
You wanting to make any changes?
How is it? Made this with illustrator and photoshop.. I'm quite new in this
Congrats on jumping into Photoshop and Illustrator. This is a great piece for someone just getting started.
Your street scene is heavily backlit, meaning that your primary light source is behind your main subject (the car). For this reason I think your car is too bright.
Iāve created an extremely rushed example where I darkened the car and added some spots of red colour for interest. Hope it helps spark some ideas.
Thank you.. I'll try some different idea
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What do you think of this 90's Chrome effect poster design? i did the crome effect using layer styles and a few more things
Nice work on the chrome effect.
I think it would look stronger without all the strokes around the text.
What do you think?
Maybe Make the title bigger and more artistic
did this music coer artwork for my friends. any opinions?
What did you do?
Give your opinion about this composition guys please
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First real project ever, please give me feedbacks. I take all of them!
The light from the motorcycle shouldnt just start on the road, there should be a glow emanating from the light and shining on just about everything in front of it. Otherwise, I would add some orange light coming from the background fire and make the rider a little lighter to match the buildings.
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You've created a strong composition. I like it.
The cutting out around the hand reaching out and his hair needs a little work.
You don't have any strong shadows. This is suitable as it suggests to me a misty or dusty scene. However, as the guy in front is right up on the "camera", I feel that the contrast on him should be stronger.
thanks for feedback. I will correct my mistake. After this composition the PSfile became 1.16gb, made my laptop heat during this composition. thanks for letting me know
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No worries and thank you. I wouldn't call what you did a "mistake" but I understand what you mean.
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what could i have done to make this better?
Is this AI? Are you compositing this yourself?
@abstract oxide uhh, if your asking if i combined these yes, it started out with only the mountain the i added the burger, dog, cat, random guy, last the bird, i had to google what compositing is lol.
You've got some interesting elements there but the composition doesn't feel cohesive. For me one of the most obvious things is inconsistent contrast. The foreground grass, for example, has nice highlights and shadows while the character in the lower right is low contrast with washed out highlights and shadows.
ok thanks
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Perhaps a little overlap between some of the characters would also sell this as a composition. Right now it feels like the characters have been evenly scattered about the canvas.
No worries mate. Hope it helps and best of luck with the design.
Hey, I tried applying what you told me. Is it better now ?
It's a lot better but i would have some of the light shine on the walls as well the same way it shines on the ground
what do you think i need yall's opinion
I think itās generally quite good.
I like how the car and background look like they are on a folded piece of paper. I think you also need to include the text.
I donāt really understand the black line through the text.
Feedback on this 2 slide Instagram post I made?
Thumbnail for a 2d battle royale game
I want to add some pizzaz to it because it looks plain boring
Maybe some perspective warps or focus points or something to stand out to make it look better
Help please
Is this a single image or do you have different elements on different layers? If this is multi-layered can you post a screen shot of your Layers panel?
This is a designer server to talk about real design programs
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Some basic outer glow to act as shadow would help....
Less toxic looking grass texture and a bit of basic drop shadow would be my suggestion..
thanks, how do i make the grass look less toxic
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do you think that there are too many things happening on the screen for a brutalism styled poster? i want it to still be understandable
I think your instincts are good. Removing some of that ānoiseā should make a much stronger composition.
U mean the dust/film texture on the screen?
I was using the term ānoiseā very loosely. It could be your pink/black texture. It could be the red symbol. Etc...
ohh got it
I should clarify that, for this specific piece, I think less could be more. However, I certainly wouldnāt want to discourage you from exploring different styles.
i really wanted to exagerate with everything, but still be undrastandable. for example the "bleed" text from behind or the subject itself
Have you tried making the central figure larger? If it had a stronger presence you might be able to go absolutely bananas with different ānoiseā while still maintaining some overall cohesion.
i really tried, but if i make it bigger the text behind is not readable...
That makes sense.
really need to find a balance here
That's design for ya š
Had a new idea for this one. I wanted to create a really old newspaper and make it as realistic as possible. Any Thoughts?
looks good so far. Maybe you could add some crumpled Paper. Right now it looks very clean.
I like the idea/concept of the Image. I'm not sure what exactly that gren Lines should represent and if it not would be better to get rid of them. Also the bird has some weird eyes, because it seems there is some overlay with those greenish things. In the Flames there seem to be some "burning Birds" incooperated that I found cool. Maybe it also could be integrated into the background as well. Also after several minutes I recogniced that tiny helicopter that (for me) does nothing add to the Image overall. Maybe replace that black thing with some "burning Bird" š
Give your opinion about my new composition guys
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looks amazing :)
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Really great composition.
If you are looking for something to possibly change, the snow sits high on one wheel but low on the other.
can i ask a question?
You just did.
I have no idea if you mean a question in general, or one about that comp to the OP.
i have no idea either i just lost my last braincell coz i have no idea what i need to do XD
ok my question is , did you draw / sketch that before you use photoshop or you use mouse ?
if you dont know what i mean just say it , my english isnt well
yeah i will change that thanks for commenting
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i just took different pictures,cut it out all, and try to blend it all with background thats all
dayum
thats intresting
can i post some1 art and then i ask how and wich software to doit
sure
okay, I understand, and thank you sir for your opinion I'm glad that you see my work Thank you so much
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Any ideas?
Can anyone give an opinion on my work?
Give your opinion about this composition
thanks!
I like the lighting. I feel like his eye-beams should be flipped vertically so they're shooting up to the upper left, following the angle of his head.
Looks nice! maybe for that type of design you could try adding more "noise" to the overall image. Maybe make it a bit more brutal!
alright
maybe try adding some dust/film textures to the image, or some graphic assets. try making it look more like a poster. That's the vibe i'm getting.
Thanks mate
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I think the comp is solid. Nice layout.
For me the lighting doesn't really match. The car has good contrast with a strong shadow but the background and person do not.
Based on the stance and head position I feel like the laser beams should be more horizontal as opposed to angled down.
I think this is a great comp.
If you want to get super picky, the sliver of white above the first line of text jumps out at me.
I really like the colour. Great look.
The combination of realistic and cartoon looking elements feels a little odd to me.
Give your opinion about my new composition guys
thanks
Really solid composition. Nice work.
The white halo around the hair jumps out at me.
I think a few specular highlights on the character would help, especially on the metal blade.
i realistified this drawing i found online... any improvements that can be made?
Maybe try too look for the Lighting. If necessary, take a look at the light. In the case of the head, the light seems to come from the front left, in the case of the stone igloo it appears to come from above at certain points, and the feet, which are actually under the igloo, receive light from above. Likewise, the feet seem to be too far back and the body is somehow missing. The water doesn't seem to interact with the stone igloo or the head.
Can I get some options on these two photos
I think the head is sitting too low in comparison to the legs.
Are you just trying to "correct" the photos in areas like exposure and white balance? Or, are you looking for ideas to go crazy with adding different design elements?
just a homework from school, how can I make it realistic?
Best of luck with the homework.
A couple of thoughts...
- The mirror appears to be facing to the right. I don't think the position of the person and their reflection makes sense.
- The outline of the person, especially around the hair and face, needs some work.
Hi i am an amateur and i need help with this project im doing for college, i need feedbacks on what i can do to improve it and maybe help with how to make the "SEMARANG" word looks better like what other font to use or add something else
Any feedbacks is greatly appreciated
Please, feedback
I would remove the building behind the persons head as it looks like it is growing out of their head.
Best of luck with the project.
Anything for the letters?
hmmm yeah you're right... thanks!
No worries. Thank you.
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tgis is a youtube thumbnail and can anyone help me on how I can fit the text perfeclty too the monitor
you german?
Give your opinion about my new compostiton guys
thanks
i think you can't see the sniper on left corner
use either distort or vanishing point to match the perspective and u could make it seem like it's from the monitor by playing with "blend if" also try playing with blending modes
What's the brief?
It's fine but personally I think that the whole merging images together like this, fell out of fashion about a decade ago.
I think an approach like this might work quite well? With different images in different sections?
no^^
you sure?
I'm from swizerland
Feedback, please
I know it fell out of fashion but its what my lecturer wanted so i have no choice but to comply haha, of course if i was given absolute freedom i would've done something else
thx for the mini tutorial though this is still useful if i ever need it in the future
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yeah I`m haha
you speak german?
a part from my familiy once lived in swiss
Sure, and a few words in french
das ist cool
More just ideas and comments on the colour scheme and composition the lighting the timing and angles that kinda stuff
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trying to make flyers and posters using grids and font parings. what do you think?
There are 4 different fonts that i used.. i think that's a bit too much and it may add inconcistency. Any tips?
The tatto should be warped to fit the face and the eye patch should match the lighting and shadows of the face maybe remove the brown off the bottom part of the nose
The head looks edited in (even if itās not) darken it where thereās a bunch of light so it would fix the image better from there play with the lighten
The hat neck and leather jacket looks fine blends nicely with the blurred background so they could be left alone
Finally just play with it until you feel it looks perfect or nearly perfect
I think itās fine looks like a legit poster maybe if anything lower the opacity on band name the date and address to fix the style of the restrictions and maybe change the color of the mm/dd/yyyy to a more complementary color but you should save it how it is and make the changes on a separate file and present it to whomever is paying you (unless this is for you then itās honestly up to you)
Also on the head thereās a bit of white background on top of the ears and the left ear didnāt cut out so well so many look into that as well
Hello ! Can i get some feedback about it ? Thank you ! š¤
this is just a personal project, i tried experimenting with grids i can make any changes