📝project-feedback

[flat axle]

🅱️ New Thumbnail

The 2023 Rookies Have Been Disappointing... Here is why...

[boreal condor]

tried my best to make this, Pless tell how to make this more horrifing or make this better

also please tell any remarks for this

[normal spoke]

I would first delete that Sign on the left or put some rotten wood at it or so. Then make it dark. So the sky should be in night time. Then put some dim light in the house by lighting the windows, but only a little and only in one window there could be a candle light or a shadow of a person be seen.

also put some ground fog in front of the house and some crows or so in the sky.

[boreal condor]

good idea i will make it

[boreal condor]

I made everything you told and i love how it turns out. Thanks for giving me some suggetions. If you want me to improve something in this please tell i will try to improve

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[boreal condor]

Guys please give your feed back on this. See from this

[normal spoke]

you are welcome. Have fun with it.

[tropic marsh]

plss criticize my work

[flat axle]

A Thumbnail for a YouTube short, titled:

The Most Fat Formula 1 Driver 😮

[peak ermine]

Hey, ive done some fine tuning with a image I took on a video game. I change the temperature of the colour a bit and gave the light a bit more life. Should I make the blur look a lil faster or is it fine as it is?

Left is the edit and right is the original

Im still adjusting the levels on the photo though

[novel comet]

Looks good, I'd not change much more

[abstract oxide]

A little more motion blur could be good.
Perhaps a little more mist with light rays and glows from the lights.

[toxic dome]

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how can i make it better and rate it outta 10

[manic maple]

Final of a project I'm working on, any feedback?

[ionic salmon]

can add some drop shadows to the skull i think

but other than that beatifull

[analog raven]

I’m sure there’s a ton to do right?

Maybe the brightness?

[flat axle]

Meet The King of Formula 1 Crashes...

Thoughts? Any feedback is 100% appreciated 🙏🏼

[lusty slate]

need feedback pls

[abstract oxide]

The rope and the white shorts on the player in red looks too bright to me. I recommend adding some shading to better match the lighting.

[abstract oxide]

Cool design. A large area of wall has an orange glow around the LFT text compared to the larger horizontal orange lines.

[abstract oxide]

Generally a great piece.
Should the skull be slightly smaller? I'm not sure?
Looking at the shading on the arms, should the shadows wrap around the sides of the skull a little more?

[analog raven]

Thanks for your feedback! Other than that it’s good?

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

I think overall the design and colour is strong. If your aim is to simulate a neon sign I would recommend rounding the ends of the rectangles.

[analog raven]

How did you get the filter effect it looks so badass 🔥🔥

[boreal condor]

tried myself inspired from a youtube video, please give your feedback tell me what can be improved to make it look realistic. learning about highlights

[normal spoke]

Taht looks pretty good so far. Try to ad some more light where it can bounce maybe from the floor or other things. Also the Cristal on the left side would illuminate the foot of the robot more then the top (e.g. the leg). Also the green and orange light would bound a bit more in the florr and illuminates the feet of the robot a bit. That are all minor details, but they are essential.

[boreal condor]

thanks i will improve of what you said

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[boreal condor]

anyfeedback to improve and make more realistice please??

[abstract oxide]

Really nice job. The subtle particles are a nice touch.
Perhaps try darkening the grass in the distance and brightening the grass close by.

[boreal condor]

I turned this left photo into night or evening vibe in right
any feedback to improve to make it more night mood

[toxic dome]

can u send me da PSD? :>

[boreal condor]

yeah i will dm u

[mortal patrol]

hi

[vital dagger]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/177444675/Mobile-App-For-Data-Privacy

[trail robin]

What do you guys think of this thumbnail?

Composition, editing and effect wise

[toxic dome]

fonts arent great, colors dont realy match up and that iceberg looks really weird. the red line on thne iceberg isn't lined up and the stroke looks weird just fix up the fonts

and the eye on thne bottom

is kinda wild

[merry laurel]

Thoughts?

[trail robin]

My poor thumbnail got demolished...

[trail robin]

The Iron Lung font is the font of the game, the other one is my brand font. The colours look complementary enough I wanted the title to stand out and the blood red ocean is part of the games original scenery. The red line on the Iceberg doesn't really matter and isn't noticeable by most people on a thumbnail. The stroke is there because without it the words look muddy. The eye needs to be there to attract viewers and remind them which game this is

Thanks for the feedback tho

[toxic dome]

can u show me the game am interested now

[toxic dome]

its not that bad just the fonts are weird

and u know every detail matters in gfx design so the line would still make a decent difference even if u wont instantly notice

[trail robin]

Here's the video, it covers almost everything bout the game
https://youtu.be/ELNCifnXM_I

[trail robin]

The thing is, my dumbass thought that was normal

[toxic dome]

bro your game is so miuch better than the thumbnail

[trail robin]

And like it could pop up behind the thumbnail

[trail robin]

Wait, which game?

You mean the video?

It's not my game btw

[toxic dome]

oh

i thought u made it

[trail robin]

Unfortunately

I do make games though!

[toxic dome]

i like ur mic quality

[trail robin]

Thank you, I made sure of that haha

[toxic dome]

can u send me the PSD?

@trail robin

of the thumbnial,

[trail robin]

alright, but why?

[toxic dome]

jus curiouus how u did it

[trail robin]

alrighty

[boreal condor]

worked out for long time, Please give any feed back to improve and make it more realistice.

[hushed bear]

What do you think of the design guys?

[torpid crater]

Yo. I'm struggling making this floating head poster 💀
I looks off too me, but i don't know what it is. i would really appreciate your feedback :)

[outer cosmos]

to me wat i see is the lighting on the people everything looks ok
overall good job!

[candid kernel]

made this guy all by myself (please help me I dont know what im doing)( THE DEMON IS FROM ANIME ITS NOT SATANIC IM SORRY)

[normal spoke]

I think its a good start. You can ad maybe some shadows to the horns and wings and also get rid of the white around the horns and the eyes. Then it will get better.

[normal spoke]

It looks very much Ok. You can try to lighten up the Details and faces that they are not look so blueish and get a little (but only a little) blue over the Text that it would not lock THAT detached from the rest. Nice work.

[boreal condor]

Any feedback please to improve this composite ?? give your opinion

[torpid crater]

Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to fix it :)

[torpid crater]

Thanks! :)

[manic maple]

I really like your lighting etc, the only thing that throws me off is the moon and the stars. they kinda take the focus away from the statue I feel

[manic maple]

Honestly I just clicked a lot of things in Camera raw and it worked haha

[clear spade]

Is there anything I need to change? Been confused a bit!.

[boreal condor]

ohh then in need to blur that down

hope i fixed the issue

[torpid crater]

Finished result :)

[heady arch]

What do you think?

Resources:
Background: https://pixabay.com/de/photos/kosmos-himmel-universum-raum-star-3819483/
Lunar landscape: https://www.pexels.com/de-de/foto/landschaftsfotografie-des-berges-757158/
Earth: https://pixabay.com/de/illustrations/erde-planet-welt-globus-weltkarte-1617121/
Desiccated edge on earth: https://pixabay.com/de/photos/planet-mars-krater-victoria-krater-11613/

The glass area was created purely with the fill options as well as a few minor Photoshop filters

[upbeat orbit]

Thoughts?

[grim mauve]

What’s up yo

I was wondering if anybody could do me a favor

And photo shop me something 🐶🥲

[lime quarry]

I like the color tone. selection should be more good to make is real. Left side brightness good I guess. But in right side try making is darker.

[grim mauve]

Can someone get rid of that ugly E and that red circle and put my logo on instead?

[lime quarry]

you can simply use spot healing brush tool to get rid of that. then you can put your logo

[grim mauve]

Oh nice thanks for the information

So for 5 dollars no one would be able to do it? I’m at work and I need it done in line 30 minutes 🫠

Would if I needed it done in like 30 minutes but I was at work??

I didn’t realize this was the project feedback groupchat

[grim mauve]

What’s the help?

PayPal?

Cashapp?

[analog raven]

lmao looks dope bro

[novel canyon]

What looks better

[lime quarry]

2nd one looks good. but why all of your photo have so much noise?

[blissful galleon]

Does the shadows look realistic. I was trying to make an African spiderman

This was the rough edit

[dense pier]

hello everyone ✌️ i’m sharing my work, hope you like it 👍

[vast raft]

kindly check my NR logo based on Batman logo

[lapis sorrel]

what people think on this project; https://www.behance.net/gallery/177899165/Rochelles-Aesthetics-Logo-Brand-Identity-Beauty

[abstract oxide]

This server is all about helping people to make their own edits.

[past fossil]

Hi, I made this composite from my imagination. Please give feedback, Thank you!

[late igloo]

does the face go with it? or is it too brown?? or is the photo poorly edited?

be completely honest

[glad sky]

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/884243554342432821/1142178437558177824/attachment.gif

[idle zodiac]

thats very good!

[lime quarry]

Not bad. Please fix the perspective of the 🚀. and do some color corrections. And your good to go. ( for me Imagination is the most important part of manipulation )

[lime quarry]

I am not sure but adding white stock (man) can make your thumbnail more attractive.

[thorn scarab]

this is my first banner, any feedback for this?

[thorny obsidian]

Wonderful work!

[heady arch]

🥰 thank you Do much. I really thought because I didn't get any feedback that it wouldn't be good. That's why I really appreciate your feedback!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @thorny obsidian

[thorny obsidian]

No worries and you're welcome! It's very great, I love the stars, focus, and concept

[lavish ruin]

What do we think

[tough plaza]

Which one looks better and what can I do to improve the photo?

[heady arch]

🥹 thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @thorny obsidian

[abstract oxide]

Strong colour. Solid design. Nice work.
I would try increasing the size of the guy.

[abstract oxide]

Nice design mate. The name is centre aligned while the text blocks are left aligned. Have you tried making them all the same?

[abstract oxide]

The yellow line is not an equal distance from the green edge.

[lavish ruin]

Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

Any time. Thank you.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @lavish ruin

[tall skiff]

4th project I added a whale replaced the sky. Added land on the left and right. And Added a little crab on the beach. Looking for tips and feedback to help me improve

[heady arch]

Final result from my live tutorial today on Twitch 🙂 what do you think?

[tall skiff]

🤯 Thats amazing, way better then anything I could do

[heady arch]

Everyone can! My tutorial is on German, its very simple: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1903721672 (just sorry, my mic was broken. so I had to use my very old headset)
The Ressources are here: https://aerofly.design/tutorial-vorbereitung/photoshop-session-20-08-2023/
The most tricky part is to make an Selection from the tree. I think needed around 1 1/2 hours for that.

[whole viper]

Hello guys, I designed an Architecture project, what do you think? Do you like the outcome? If you can, please give it a like and leave a comment, I would greatly appreciate it. I really enjoyed doing it. I love working and designing manually on a sheet of paper and then digitizing it. Greetings from Argentina!

https://www.behance.net/gallery/177755729/OAS-ARCHITECTURE-ARQUITECTURA

What do you guys think? I'm really happy with the outcome. But I don't have much recognition, so sometimes I get discouraged.😔

[wraith elbow]

What could I improve? this is going to go onto a coke can professionally printed for a DIY project, any feedback would be very helpful!

[abstract oxide]

Will you be printing on a generic pop/soda/soft-drink can or will you be printing on an actual Coke can? How specific do your colours have to be? If an actual Coke can then a red version (instead of pink) could work well.

[abstract oxide]

Solid design by the way

[wraith elbow]

Well it will be on a coke can most likely, but the can itself doesn't matter. This image is for a streamer that I watch and the stream currency he has is "Z-fuel" knockoff G-fuel. So this is basically fan mail for him. Hopefully that answers your question. If not lmk

[abstract oxide]

Sounds like a fun project. Best of luck with it.

[keen drift]

?

[wraith elbow]

Thank you 🫡

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[tall skiff]

Before I send this to my friend is there any changes you would make? also @heady arch what do you think 😁

[keen drift]

das dope

[abstract oxide]

Cheers mate

[outer heart]

feedback on my magazine cover pls?

[flat axle]

🅰️ Thumbnail CONCEPT 1

OR

🅱️ Thumbnail CONCEPT 2

The Mistake That Almost KILLED Ferrari…

*For the record these are really quick drafts I made on my phone in the middle of class

[digital kraken]

Hello!! I would like to know your appreciation on this logo project.

[digital kraken]

Excellent work, perhaps you can use white color for your Venice title, which helps to understand that you are talking about Venice. Also, the price, edition and date, put it below the name of your magazine.

[silent hedge]

Amazing !! 💜💜💜

[heady arch]

Thank you so much :3

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @silent hedge

[thorny obsidian]

Amazing lighting and perspective!

[heady arch]

Thank you su much! Best part: both images, the Kids and the tree, had the Same angle! So i Just needed a soft brush for masking. It Was like winning the lottery after i saw it xD

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @thorny obsidian

[thorny obsidian]

Definitely hard to find the right image, but then when you do... It's Golden!

You're welcome!

[heady arch]

Right? Right??? Its so Hard to find good free Ressources. At all. So, i was for this tutorial very lucky xD

[thorny obsidian]

Very hesitant to showcase any WIP/rough draft photo manipulation. Does anyone have any critique?

Hate the blurry overshade. Wish it was clearer on where it's meant to be. Barely learning fundamentals. Third WIP, I think.

[heady arch]

Oh, I love how the little cyperpunk / videopunk feel in this image ❤️ One thing - but where I can't describe what it is either - is that it comes across to me as if bright areas or highlights are darkened. Quasi, almost pure white are forced to go down to gray. I think you can see that very well on the light roof strut, where there are small gray areas. Otherwise, I would have only so small comments: On the model right on the jacket, there is still a slightly gray mask edge. The green glow goes through the leg, but since it looks like the leg is lying down, the green glow could not continue - not without a shadow of the leg itself at the same angle. The left area on the model confuses me a bit because I don't know what it is, but I think that will become clear in the WIP. Its a very great idea!

[thorny obsidian]

Thank you so much! I am glad you are just as confused as I am and are able to point out my concerns. I'll try implementing what you've mentioned

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @heady arch

[thorny obsidian]

You're also very good at English. Lol

[heady arch]

My True English ist very very bad. I use for long texts like this a Translator xD. I can communicate. But for someone, who 'just learned Barely the fundermentals' it is very impressive. Keep going!

[thorny obsidian]

Haaa?? Really? Thank! Will do 😊

[heady arch]

Yes, Really. My first Images in Photoshop was not that detailed.

[thorny obsidian]

I Simply cannot be Simple 🥺 It is Pain for me as well.

There's always this vast incomplete emptiness when I go for simple, unless it's very much what I desire

[heady arch]

You Don't have to be Simple, as long you keep going and enjoy the Progress and values the process

[thorny obsidian]

Oh 🤔 🤔 Never thought it that way before actually! Thank you!

[heady arch]

Photoshop is simply a very powerful collection of tools. But only in connection with other techniques they unfold their full potential. And how you use and combine them for yourself, you will only find out in practice. And it doesn't matter how you do it - whether you redo the image 3 times and use different methods and click around until you get the result you want, or whether you follow tutorials and learn it piece by piece. The constant process is what makes the difference. At least that's how I feel about it. (and I feel over 10 Years about it, and I see progress.)

[ruby drift]

Hey guys what do you think of this ? What can I improve to make it look more realistic ?

[heady arch]

@ruby drift Guy3 For realism it is important to see the shadows in detail, as well as to consider the light source. For example: Your light comes from the top center (if it should not be a reflection now). This means that the shadows are to be evaluated differently. Photoshop has unfortunately not yet the possibility to determine the depths of an image as in a 3D object. but it helps immensely to put such a figure times under such a light 🙂 there you see very nice what shaded and should be made. also what is important: the angle, how the fogures stand. On the right, the sigut has a completely different angle than on the left. In other words, the position would have to be completely different.

[silent hedge]

Lovely !! 🩵✨️🩷

[heady arch]

Thank you su much, I really tryed :3

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @silent hedge

[muted patio]

Thumbnail I made for my video, thoughts?

[daring bluff]

Made this for a new football player signing.. Looking for some feedback on how to improve

[ruby drift]

Thanks for the feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @heady arch

[heady arch]

I hope, it helps

[abstract oxide]

Nice work. I think it’s really important not to obstruct the eyes when creating graphics around people. Perhaps lower the text or shuffle things around slightly so that vertical line doesn’t pass through the eye.

[daring bluff]

Got it, Thanks @abstract oxide !

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

No worries. Thank you.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @daring bluff

[gilded hemlock]

Just random project that created out of boredom

[vast raft]

Please check and provide your feedback

[toxic dome]

i would maybe change the font of "the"

in rest , looks very good

[abstract oxide]

You've got some good design elements there. One thing you could work on is the lighting and how inconsistent it is. For example, the...

• Bats are in total silhouette
• Skulls are well lit
• Guy is lit from top right

[kindred pivot]

thankyou appreciated most def will fix

[abstract oxide]

Hey nice work. It’s definitely looking more unified. Nice job on getting rid of the rim lighting around the bats.

[abstract oxide]

Given the topic and the elements you've chosen, I think darkening everything more might be the move. Your light source is top right and behind. So you could darken things like the front of the guy and the skulls but just leave their upper right edges lit.

[kindred pivot]

bet

[lost reef]

I think we should be more honest in our praise like they are at design/architecture school.

If somebody's design is bad, the do it and hurt their feelings. They'll sure learn from it, and thank you in the long run.

Plus there's the cry wolf effect when somebody really does post something awesome.

[lost reef]

I think it looks pretty horrible like some desperate attempt at promoting a new season of Buffy.

But I have some suggestions.

Find a similar area and rig up to shoot things after dark. But make sure it's that small time window just as the moon's setting and its early reflections are bouncing over all the surfaces.

I did this once by accident, it was beautiful. No photo effect can really repplicate this.

And what about you hold a bad b- i1at .ch whose back is towards the camera, with your fangs in her neck or shoulder.

[wooden oak]

You're assuming that the person reading your criticism respects your opinion. If you want your opinion to be respected, you should begin by being respectful and positive. Beginning with a statement like "it looks pretty horrible" and describing the post as "a desperate attempt (at something)" is not positive or helpful. If you know anything about mentoring, the correct process/method for critique is: praise, correct, praise. Not bash and then tell the person what they should do. People in this server start from different places and have vastly different skill levels and resources at their disposal. Thus, what they are capable of producing will vary based on those things. I suggest you pay attention to your tone because this sort of "advice" ends up sounding mean. There are already enough trolls on Discord. Lastly, if you can't be respectful of other people while providing feedback then I suggest that you don't post anything at all.

[vast raft]

Yeah you're right mate thanks

[edgy basalt]

what could I add to be original and fill the empty spaces ?

[wooden oak]

The design elements are consistent and those elements match well so that looks good. If a requirement for the design is that you use this layout size/aspect ratio, perhaps push the headline and the watch image up into the middle of the canvas to make better use of the space. If this is an advertisement, perhaps include some call to action toward the bottom of the layout. It is somewhat difficult to suggest other things without understanding the project brief and/or what your goals are for this design. I would also probably remove the "tiles" or lines in the background. I think they might distract from the main elements.

[edgy basalt]

Nice thank you 👍

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[boreal condor]

give your opinion on the pic guys about manipulation

[uneven turtle]

what should I add to it? any idea

[wooden oak]

Overall, tonal matching looks pretty good. I might work on the shadows underneath the bike as it doesn't really look like its sitting on the ground. Appears to be "floating" a bit. Good work thus far. Keep going!

[silent hedge]

Welcome back! So ! Your thumbnail is pretty good but you need somthing more impacting. Your thumbnail is what it makes people come to you, you need to improve it by a Coloring theme (Palette), Fonts theme, and specially you need to have a good placement of your selections. Actually on your thumbnail, there are too much information and we don't get the main information. Think simple first, and then go on your details.

If these Characters are made officially by the creators, then you can keep it, if not, think about the artist.

[uneven turtle]

oh ok i understand and thank you my dear friend

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @silent hedge

[silent hedge]

Lovely ! ✨

" What are the 7 laws of design?
*Emphasis, balance and alignment, contrast, repetition, proportion, movement, and white space are the cornerstones of the principle of design. *"

There are some rules in Design to "respect", maybe this can help you ! https://www.turing.com/kb/what-are-the-7-principles-of-design-detailed-breakdown

https://www.socialmediatoday.com/news/10-graphic-design-rules-you-should-never-break-infographic/586358/

[uneven turtle]

oh ok i learn a lot of things from you let me watch the video for more information

[boreal condor]

yeah yeah i just now noticed about shadows thanks man

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[silent hedge]

I am glad I could help you ! If you have any questions please, do not hesitate !!

[uneven turtle]

ok Xayanah i appreciate your help

[lavish ruin]

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[past ginkgo]

Hello, does this image appear authentic? I introduced a subject, yet I still perceive it as having undergone Photoshop alterations. I'm seeking the viewpoints of others. Thank you.

[keen drift]

which one do yall prefer??

[past ginkgo]

2

[safe vector]

context

[normal spoke]

That depends on the Project that would be used for. The Colors in the second one are stronger.

[flat axle]

colors are a bit weird after exporting

Why Ferrari HATES Italian Drivers...

any feedback appreciated. I feel like something is missing, so if anyone can help me out I would hugely appreciate it 🙏🏼

[cloud field]

Hello all, I did an edit in lightroom this morning and I was wondering if I could get some feedback. Any and all advice (positive or negative) is welcomed, thanks in advance.

(not sure how I can share the file without it being compressed beyond hell)

[past ginkgo]

Maybe a before pic would help

[cloud field]

Thats the cr2

Gimme a sec, I will export the original

Is it possible to share on here without the extreme compression?

[past ginkgo]

I believe you need discord nitro

[cloud field]

Yeah that sounds about right :/

[exotic coral]

hey can someone gave me a feedback on the Color of this picture pls ? https://assets.adobe.com/id/urn:aaid:sc:EU:b1ecba0d-6fce-4d39-8cde-5331dbf1071b?view=published

[normal spoke]

Do you want the answer here in Discord or on the Asset itself?

[exotic coral]

On the asset if you can 🙂

[normal spoke]

done.

[normal spoke]

The dog (legs) look like foating. I think a bit shadows unter the paws would help. Also there is no light from the violet light on the girl (no reflections) but the Composition overall looks nice so far!

[toxic dome]

Ty.
I did tried picking ground color and apply to paws, but it still is not very convincing.

[calm harness]

tried doing sketch glow for the first time anything i should do to make it look better?

[heady arch]

today's result of my livestream tutorial. What do you think? What can i improve to get better?

[exotic coral]

Thanks !

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[exotic coral]

I love it

[heady arch]

Thank you very much :3

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @exotic coral

[exotic coral]

Im doing some colorimetric experimentation on this picture wich one you prefer ?

[uneven turtle]

tell me my mistakes. i tried to make a logo icon

[lime quarry]

2nd one looks good

[torpid crater]

Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds.

[wooden oak]

@sand rain - if you want comments and suggestions on your work, please post your image(s) here. And please don't post the same thing multiple times in multiple channels.

[silent hedge]

so cool ! it was such a movie tho !!

[sand rain]

feedback pls

[whole night]

The white space doesn't really balance the image too well for me

[uneven turtle]

ummm make the main img big

[shrewd river]

This is still under development, I'm not sure about the colors, shadows, or even just the elements/decorations on it, but here is what I've been working on for a few days ^^', don't hesitate to give me some feedback 🙂

[flat axle]

The Deadliest Formula 1 Rivalry…

*This is a draft thumbnail, I did it on canva really quickly on my phone during the middle of class

[heady arch]

I think it's a nice idea. I think if you unify the white balance of the individual elements, as well as light and shadow, that you could still produce a more coherent image. Keep going :3

[abstract oxide]

A strong design. Nice work.
The left and right people are nicely cut out but the edges of the middle person needs some work.
In regard to the spacing between the second and third letters, I would experiment with slightly increasing it or removing it altogether.

[final notch]

Ui button

[flat axle]

Yeah I will 100% improve it, this was just a canva draft but in Photoshop I will make it much better 👍🏼

[abstract oxide]

Awesome. Keen to see the final result.

[flat axle]

💯🔥

[smoky belfry]

someone want to give me some feedback on this? 😁 good or bad, everything is welcome. 👍

[flat axle]

Updated Thumbnail @abstract oxide

The Deadliest Formula 1 Rivalry...

Any feedback and comments is appreciated! 🙏🏼

[abstract oxide]

Lot’s of great additions there mate. The texture on the text. The increase in contrast. All very nice. I do have some suggestions for improvement...

1. I’m liking the idea of a shadow to separate the middle person from the others. However, what you’ve created looks more like a black glow.
2. The 3 stokes over the faces are clearly identical. Can you find different versions or at the very least manipulate the one that you have?

[sand whale]

hey everyone i've been working on this thumbnail and I wanted to ask, what would you do to add/improve the thumbnail (besides adding the faces/emotions). My goal is to make this Image, really easy, and simple to understand. It's supposed to be a teacher and student running down the hallway, while the Teacher chasing after a student reaching out their hand towards the student.

Thank you 💚 💚 💚

[abstract oxide]

The perspective of the lockers adds great depth. The bodies are extremely square and don't suggest any kind of dynamic movement to me. I would also shrink the body of the teacher and place it much closer to the centre to suggest that they are behind, not next to, the student.

[dusk blaze]

Hi guys! 🖐️ 😆
So, I'm trying to transform this picture to Boa Hancock from One Piece using photo manipulation.
Let me know what do you guys think? 🤔

[silent hedge]

That is sick !! 😍😍

[slim whale]

hey everyone! what do you prefer, with or without the pink clouds in the corners?

[solar depot]

Without

[flat axle]

Thanks! In regards to your suggestions:

1. Yeah I see that, I’ll fix it, thanks for letting me know 👍🏼
2. I did that, but it still looks similar I can admit. I’ll also fix that, thanks for the feedback 🙏🏼

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. Hope it helps and best of luck with the project.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @flat axle

[abstract oxide]

Without. Perhaps you could nudge up some of the clouds from the middle to help fill (not completely) the empty sky at the top.

[keen drift]

the first 1, looks, to me it looks like a face, but idk whats the vibe??

[narrow solstice]

carti wip

tracer wip

[native field]

Hello everybody
I made this signature on illustrator but i wanted more feedback. I am going to embroid it on the wrist of my brand's garments to add a unique though subtle detail to them. It represents the name Felix JAVET (the big zip if F). Idk why though this signature seems a little off, idk what bothers me but something is. does it give you the same impression. some people may say that it is too clean and not rough enough, usually people scribble. I know and i made it on purpose so that it was more of a design than an actual signature. (+ take in in account that it's going to be emboided, it has to be the clearest possible... So please give me feedback on what you think abt , if it's weird for you too and how you think I might possibly make i tbetter
Thank you for your feedback

[wooden oak]

It looks cool to me. One thing you might want to try is making the line a bit thicker. When its embroidered, the line will probably be “heavier” than this. Thus, you should do a bit of visualization on the design to see if it still works for you at different line weights. Just something to think about.

[native field]

very true, do you think it looks rough enough to be a signature you could find on a official document i kind of trying to find something similar to this :

so i came up with this :

[toxic dome]

bruhhh

the heck was that about

[native field]

su i'm asking for feedback

[toxic dome]

what nooo not you

There was a user who apparently spammed porn, and I said 'What was that all about"

[toxic dome]

I mean whats the point on rading a Discord server for Photoshop 😂

[daring dove]

Hi guys I am a beginner and I am making a book cover for wattpad for a friend. the title is 'Ashes to Roses'

I want to keep to different from Ashes and Roses. Do you have any ideas for that

Moreover how can I make this even better

[novel comet]

I like the symmetry, the font and and the background. I like the contrast of the red to black but I don't like the font of 'to'.

Nice work!

[karmic zealot]

yh the font of TO put's it of but aside that the work is nice

[novel comet]

You might want to consider using a nice image from Midjouney?

[karmic zealot]

is there a way for me to make this better

[karmic zealot]

this is very good GG

[novel comet]

The actual text/icons/box look fine, but the purple background looks a bit boring perhaps?

In the example here, I just grabbed an image of some smoke online, added a black colour cast to darken it, added a white overlay for the text and then added a light blue outer glow?

That said... design is very subjective 🙂

[karmic zealot]

thx

love the back ground

[novel comet]

https://unsplash.com/photos/UBpM_NPeYTw

[heady arch]

The picture is great. But I would like to add that you still have to resort to other AIs to scale. If these are printed, you need at least 300dpi and also other sizes must be considered.

[sand whale]

Okay everyone, I've created the 2nd update to this thumbnail, adding speed lines and making the shapes more dynamic, what else would you do to add/improve the thumbnail (besides adding the faces/emotions).

I'm trying to make this image as simple and clear to understand, A teacher and student running down the hallway, while the Teacher chasing after the student reaching out is reaching their hand towards the student.

Thank you 💚

[formal pebble]

First School Project, never used photoshop before than the last 2 days but I feel it's going great. How can I improve.

[narrow solstice]

keep up the good work, it can be very overwhelming when you first get into photoshop because of how many tools there are and the incredible talent out there. as for the pringle’s design, the first thing that stands out to me is the red bottom circle clipping through the under part of the pringles box. I also noticed that there is a light source being reflected off both the right and left peppers, I would recommend trying to recreate that light source above the pringles box and then add light reflections on the box itself to make it seem like the light is being reflected onto it. it will make everything seem like it came from one photo and will match better with the peppers. for the text, I enjoy the font a lot, stands out and goes well with the pringle’s box, the only noticeable thing for me is the placement of the text in relation to the circle, it’s off centered. with it being off centered I think the top half of the circle needs more, you could add drop shadow to the pringles box and peppers to make it seem as tho they are above the circle. Be careful with this idea because we want to keep in mind the x,y and z planes to make sure everything is matching. what i mean by this is for example if you where to make the circle ontop of a table, we must consider our placement with respect to the perspective of the table, along with the shadows and everything else. overall, very good start keep it up

[abstract oxide]

You've been using Photoshop for 2 days!? That's amazing. Congrats.
Your design feels a little flat. My example is very rough but it shows how some variation in lighting can bring a little more life into the composition.
Best of luck and keep up the great work.

[novel comet]

I'm not the OP/author - it's not my book, I was just showing possible other design routes and fonts.

[abstract oxide]

In case it helps, this is how I quickly altered the lighting on your design. I added multiple Curves adjustment layers and then drew on their masks using a soft brush.

This is not necessarily the most economical way of doing this. However, spreading changes across multiple layers can give you more flexibility.

[formal pebble]

Appreciate it

[abstract oxide]

No worries. Hope it helps.

[exotic vector]

Hello, could anyone help me choose a good photo?

Please help me choose a good photo.

[lost reef]

will do 👍

i like how the darkness makes light around that rectangular building look like a portal.

i think those twin towers are the the most beautiful skyscrapers in the world 🤔

[exotic vector]

Do it as fast as possible thank you.

[lost reef]

just wait...

[bronze sky]

I finished making most of the big stuff, what else should I add/edit? maybe particles or effects or something? (I'm going to add a character right in the middle of it)

[warm delta]

Hi! Nice work. You've got a good composition with the reflection on the ground. I am hesitant to give any feedback as adding a character will change the balance, and thus, the piece significantly. I will give some pointers, though keep in mind that I don't know how this will look with the added character.
I like the light/dark contrast, it's very clear what is going on in the picture. Something that bothers me slightly is that the lanterns are lighter than the moon, and also in the same horizontal line. This makes the composition less clear, with these three big elements, plus the textured background. If possible, I suggest moving the moon up a big to make sure it sticks out more as a compositional piece. Upping its value and lowering the lanterns' should make it stand out even more.

[sand whale]

which feature placement is better?

[wooden oak]

With the hand being slightly behind the ball cap, it gives the comp a greater sense of depth / dimensionality.

[sand whale]

thank you so much!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[formal pebble]

Anything else?

[drowsy lintel]

The background blends into the Pringles can. What I would probably do is click on FX and increase the outer glow. This would help with the contrast.

[formal pebble]

Should I create Outerglow on the Pringles can?

[drowsy lintel]

Thats, what I was thinking of. You may also need to change the outer glow color to black.

[novel comet]

So is your objective to build the image FROM SCRATCH?

I only ask, since you could try utilising mockup files?
https://goodmockups.com/free-cylinder-tube-chips-packaging-mockup-psd/

[formal pebble]

So basically it was to make a Advertisement Poster I took this picture and this is the can in the picture with some and adjustments.

I replaced the text and logo, but it is the same

[novel comet]

So is it important to use your own photo then?

[formal pebble]

Yea

[novel comet]

I like the photo itself 🙂 - Lifestyle, outdoors, etc

[drowsy lintel]

Honestly, I agree as well.

[novel comet]

(I couldn't bring myself to type in the cliche "Once you pop.... tagline! :)" @formal pebble

(I'm less of a fan of using RED as the Background, since it's can reference danger/threat/etc

[formal pebble]

Lmao, that looks awesome. Thanks for the ideéa I will tro to recreate that shoudn't be too hard

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

(I asked ChatGPT to help with taglines)

Please propose some advert taglines for Pringles

"Once you pop, you can't stop!"
"Pringles: Poppable Pleasure in Every Bite!"
"Unleash the Flavor with Pringles!"
"More Than a Chip: Pringles Delight!"
"Pringles: The Crunch that Packs a Punch!"
"Elevate Your Snacking Game with Pringles!"
"Stack, Snack, Smile: It's Pringles Time!"
"Snack Smart, Snack Pringles!"
"Experience Flavor Stacking with Pringles!"
"Pringles: Where Taste and Fun Collide!"
"Savor Every Stack of Pringles!"
"Bold Flavors, Infinite Stacks: Pringles Love!"
"Pringles - One Pop, Endless Possibilities!"
"Taste the Difference with Pringles!"
"Make Every Moment Poppable with Pringles!"
"Join the Pringles Party of Flavors!"
"When Cravings Call, Pringles Answers!"
"Snack Satisfaction: Pringles, No Compromise!"
"Pringles: Your Crave-Worthy Companion!"
"Elevate Snack Time with Pringles Stacks!"
Remember that taglines should align with Pringles' branding and messaging while capturing the essence of their product.

---

Can you add a bit about the fact that they can be taken with you when travelling
ChatGPT
Of course! Here are some taglines that highlight the portability of Pringles for travel:

"Pringles: Flavor On-the-Go, Wherever You Roam!"
"Taste the World with Pringles by Your Side!"
"Adventure-Tested, Pringles Approved: Travel Snacking Perfected!"
"From Takeoff to Takeout: Pringles for Your Journey!"
"Jetsetter's Choice: Pringles - Your Ultimate Travel Companion!"
"Wanderlust? Don't Forget Your Pringles Stash!"
"Stack Your Snacks, Pack Your Passion: Pringles Travel-Ready!"
"Globetrotter's Delight: Pringles, the Passport to Flavor!"
"Explore. Savor. Repeat. With Pringles on Your Travels!"
"Unveil Flavors Around the World with Pringles in Your Bag!"
These taglines emphasize how Pringles can be a convenient and delicious snack to take along on your travels, ensuring you have a tasty treat wherever you go.

[mortal pond]

Working on an advert for a sleep gummy..

[novel comet]

Nice.

But the shadow is pointing the wrong direction

[mortal pond]

I was wondering about that.. so the item on the left is naturally there so I just followed that shadow. Do you think I should point it the other direction?

[mortal pond]

def right

[novel comet]

Also, I think you would be able to theoretically see more of the 'inside' of the can

@mortal pond

[mortal pond]

great call out.. @novel comet !

• i dont know what to do with the end of the light beam up at the top.. kind of just ends.. weird?
• overall light beam.. not sure if it needs anything else
• overall lighting, i was trying to use render > lighting effects to make it all feel as one.. but got stuck on it not sure again

thank you for everything already!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

The light beam should 'fade out' way more granually...

like steam from a hot drink would

[mortal pond]

very true, working on that tin opening up more now. thanks a ton! @novel comet

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

I messed it up a bit, but you get the idea...

(regarding the top of the swirl)

@mortal pond

Also, see what happens if you change the blending mode of the lightbeam/swirl to either 'overlay' or 'soft light'.

(may look awful) - hard to guess)

[mortal pond]

soft light was so faint, this is interesting but a bit too far off of the dreamy look i think. with a bit of work though it could turn into something i think

[mortal pond]

how the hell did you disspipate the smoke like that

[novel comet]

Because I only have a flat image to work with... I just fudged it with the clone tool

and made use of the clone tool 'opacity'

[novel comet]

What if you duplicated the swirl layer a few times?

With the overlay blend mode still enabled...

Also.... since I'm being pickly... normal shadows aren't CONSISTENT throughout. especially when that close to the lightsource - look at the other items on the desk, they're darker, the closer you get to the object

maybe duplicate the shadow layer and then mask it with a gradient

[mortal pond]

So once we start using the blend modes, you start to lose the effect of the items being behind the swirl in different places. Attached is blend mode duplicated a few times, blend mode + origina layer reduced opacity, original

[novel comet]

yeah cool. - they were just ideas anyway. - Looking good though. Good Luck 🙂

[mortal pond]

thanks thanks thanks!

[bronze sky]

what should I put in the middle?

[wooden oak]

As it is, the focal point of the comp is the moon. If you're wanting something different, perhaps put a character in and blur the background a bit to give it a depth of field effect.

[bronze sky]

yea that's what I want to do, I just don't know what character to put in XD

[wooden oak]

Well, it's your design. Think of something. Imagine a character that would be appropriate for this scene. A vampire, some other creature. Private detective. Something mysterious to match the vibe you've got going.

[bronze sky]

alr

[karmic zealot]

give grave yard vibes

[sand whale]

what do you think of the facial expression I used for the teacher in my thumbnail showcasing a teacher chasing a student down a hallway?

[warm delta]

It's very clear. No face on the student puts the focus on the teacher, and the composition works well.

[sand whale]

Thank you!

[sand whale]

Been working on this one all week. Which one do you think is the best and what else do you think I can do to improve your preferred thumbnail?

It's supposed to be on Sneaking out of School

[hollow blade]

honestly somehow incorporate the text into the actual thumbnail instead of seperating it

[heady arch]

today's result of my livestream tutorial. What do you think? What can i improve to get better?

[cobalt radish]

Is there any feedback you would like to share ?

[sand whale]

which looks better? i was trying to experiment with speedlines.

[dusk igloo]

2nd

[frail ravine]

im not sure what this is missing

its supposed to be a portal being veiwed from the side but it doesnt liik quite right

[heady arch]

Mh, sorry, that doesn't look like a portal to me. When I think of a portal, like Dr. Strange, I think of an immediate tangible place that I can go to. If you want a 'dash', that is a sideways variation, maybe it helps if you distort the surroundings a bit, and if a person comes out that is cut off?

[frail ravine]

I was thinking about having someone come out of the cutoff but then i thought having two people coming out of both sides would look nicer

also what do you mean by dash?

[heady arch]

The lines

[frail ravine]

oh that makes a little more sense

[novel comet]

Looks a bit washed out. - Did you slide the saturation filter too far to the left?

[wooden oak]

I would probably just do one person / one side. And make it dynamic action, e.g. running/jumping out of the thing. Also, the use of various blurs will be necessary; one for the background to blur out the distant objects. Its too clear. And one for the character. A motion blur to impart that fast-moving run or jump out of the portal. This is just a quick example...

[wooden oak]

I agree with James. It looks a bit washed out. Perhaps a Camera Raw Filter adjustment at the end of the workflow. Levels, brightness, contrast, etc can make a huge difference.

[toxic dome]

Now?

[tired kelp]

This is gorgeous but you know what? I think if you went in with the dodge tool and lightened up some of the highlights, it would really pop.

Im trying to recreate the Kaboom sports card style, but it’s very cartoony while still seeming like it’s just a real photo. I went in and burned some contrast into josh here but I’m wondering how I can get more of a cartoony look. Maybe a blur? Some smudging?

[shut dune]

feels kind of boring

[toxic dome]

Thanks for your feedback! sure

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @tired kelp

[toxic dome]

Duplicate the layer and Use Cutout From Filter Gallery(Number of levels =2 ,Edge Simplicity =0,Fidelity=2) on upper layer then set it to overlay adjust opacity according to satisfaction (30).

@tired kelp

[heady arch]

@novel comet @wooden oak Thanks for your feedback and that you have reported ❤️ yes, the image as a whole was occupied with a style, which goes a little bit in the direction of nostalgia. The words for the composing were nostalgia, pale, butterfly.

These are the images i used

https://pixabay.com/de/photos/frau-chinesisches-hanfu-hanfu-5450043/

https://pixabay.com/de/photos/weg-bäume-wisterie-blumen-garten-4284677/

https://www.pexels.com/de-de/foto/insekt-schmetterling-gehockt-hockend-8404034/

https://unsplash.com/de/fotos/_Apdet7E5yU

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[wraith elbow]

I am recreating a discord server icon, before it was a drawn skull but I like to overcomplicate things so this is my design of the logo. Prompt is a skull with black and purple color scheme, and the word "TXTO" is the name of the server. Please give feedback on how to improve this!

[novel comet]

Seems fine, but perhaps a little hard to read when it's a tiny icon

(I tried just searching for existing black and purple skull images on midjouney)

@wraith elbow

[wraith elbow]

Good point

This isn't much bigger but it has a little white outline to it and a bit bigger

I don't really want to use AI to make this project beacuse I already spent time on it, but its not a bad idea for future projects..

As far as everything else do you think it looks decent? should I make the text even bigger or easier to read somehow

[warm delta]

If I zoom out of the image so it's the size of a Discord server icon, the text is a bit hard to read. This may be due to it being similar in contrast to the skull and its details. What you can try is turning the text purple with a black outline, this may make it easier to read. Otherwise, I think making it slightly bigger will help with legibility. Another thing to try is adding some drop shadow to push it more forward, adding contrast.

[wraith elbow]

Not really sure how I feel about that, kinda blends in with the fire/smoke and doesn't really match the vibe as much, probably easier to read but not sure it's what I want.

[warm delta]

I agree that it's very similar to the smoke. Did you try adding a bigger stroke on there? Either with purple text with black stroke or vice versa, perhaps with the black drop shadow. If you're willing to experiment you could make the skull a bit smaller and have the text be above it, instead of on top. Here is the logo of an Adobe Creative Career partnered server, you can see how the bunny is smaller and the text is above and they're both visible. This may be easier to read 🤔 💭

[wraith elbow]

Trying this out now, thank so much for the feedback!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm delta

[wraith elbow]

@warm delta I tried a few different things, this is the one that came out the best imo. What do you think?

[warm delta]

This makes it very clear! I like it, huge improvement from the original 😄

[flat axle]

The Tragic Tale of Wolfgang von Trips

I am so pissed, this video has so much potential yet my I am not happy with the thumbnail... please any help is appreciated 🙏🏼🙏🏼

[wraith elbow]

Thank you so much for helping once again, you helped me make this look alot better 😄

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm delta

[cedar osprey]

do you guys think its missing something? i think it's looking pretty good but think it lacks something, the idea is to recreate the materazzi and rui costa picture from the derby della madonina

[clear spade]

Is this good or ?
Still I'm trying to do it little better,before that I want some

Feedback>>

[heady arch]

Thanks in any case for your idea, but I personally for me, do not like the version. The vignetting and the colors are much too aggressive for my taste. The light areas are darkened so harshly, which also leads to the fact that the incidence of light is disturbed. But thats only my own opinion

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @jaunty wadi

[toxic dome]

Negative space is more try to increase size of middle elements little and balance it and align background text with subject . Design Looks good

[silver stump]

My first photo manipulation :'>

[drowsy lintel]

I like it, the contrast between the airplane appears to stick out a little. I would see if you could blur it a little to represent the airplane in motion.

[silver stump]

thanks for your feedback sure I'll apply those changes

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @drowsy lintel

[novel comet]

Plane feels a litle large perhaps?

[frail ravine]

Im going to add some blurs as someone suggested but the white is really sticking out, im not too sure how to fix it

this is a project someone wanted me to help them start and they left me to this😭

[silver stump]

i don't know how to fix it

😭

[novel comet]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xQyceKmZTR8

[silver stump]

right now i have really basic understanding of color balance and curves

[novel comet]

Your life will be a LOT easier once you realise you can view Tranform controls

I don't think you need to blur it)

[drowsy lintel]

What did you have in mind?

[silver stump]

i recently learned that but forgot to turn on xd

[novel comet]

It probably looks a bit too well lit perhaps? - see this example? It's a lot darker.

[drowsy lintel]

Hm, I see what you mean. So if I’m understanding this correctly, you’re suggesting the plane to be darker?

[silver stump]

this how it looks without curves

[novel comet]

I'd just go way smaller - big plane looks like it's coming in to crash

(and completely central just from a comp/aesthetic point of view?).... which is entirely subjective of course

[silver stump]

lmao

[silver stump]

yes okay thanks :>

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

yea, you wouldn't usually see its light like that, in a hot day in the desert, at 30,000ft

[drowsy lintel]

Fair point 😂

[silver stump]

🤣

[frail ravine]

should i add highlights to the people because off the streetlights? or will it look off?

[silver stump]

first, blend them in before adding highlights

[frail ravine]

sorry im kinda new to photoshop, wdym by blend?

[wooden oak]

So now there is no "portal"? Its just two people walking across the street? The people look composited. They are not "grounded"; there needs to be shadow underneath each person. Also, they both seem to be walking on the same path in different directions. Occupying the same space. One of the people needs to be either pulled forward slightly or pushed slightly back into perspective.

[frail ravine]

i removed the portal for the time being so i can focous on the people more

This helps a lot though!

[wooden oak]

If you're still doing the portal, then the second part of my comment probably isn't valid.

[frail ravine]

okay

so ill js kinda Keep them in terms on directions

[potent wharf]

Hello

I have to make the first picture, better. But also keep it realistic. And not too yellow

I sharpened the picture, got rid of some haze? I have to make it realistic again, but that is so subjective to me

[novel comet]

The only issue I see is that the sky on both looks "blotchy"

did you use the clone stamp tool @potent wharf ?

[potent wharf]

No I used nothing on the sky

Shoulda elaborated

This is a DNG panorama made in RAW

Weird assignment

Like can I edit stuff in it? Yes. Do I have 30 people+ who would say i do it well? Yes

Can I make a photo "better" and still realistic? Depends what your idea of that is

But yeah I can make it to that.

But for an assignment gee it's hard

We have to work in Raw btw.

[potent wharf]

Second attempt, a little less intense on the blues, found a different setting

Yeah this is better

[frail ravine]

Im tryna add the orange highlights to the red jumper like ive done on the right side

but its like coming out in a weird brown colour, how do i work around this

[hoary wren]

can you guys please tell me what you think. I made it myself

[wooden oak]

It looks pretty good. I think perhaps you would want the drop shadow on each object to be in the same direction. The shadow on the G looks to be at the wrong orientation. It seems like it should be like the other letters. You could Group all of the objects together and use a Drop Shadow Layer Style on the Group.

[hoary wren]

actually you're very right

[queen otter]

Do you guys know how i should fill the empty spaces below the boissons and below the poulet roti ?

[hoary wren]

YOU MADE THAT?

[queen otter]

no

[hoary wren]

oh

[queen otter]

its from a template...

i was planning to change things here and there

[hoary wren]

oh that's okay

[queen otter]

but i like the style it has, and i haven't been able to make something that match

[hoary wren]

is this good?

I didn't overdo The Shadows

[mellow hare]

Do you have a goal for what the project is for? Is it a logo?

It's simple and clean for sure; if that's what your aim is, then yes! Great job.

[hoary wren]

a logo for a server

I made this but I will stick with the other one

[wooden oak]

The shadows are still "misaligned" The shadow under the T is down (as if the light is from above). The G, the shadow is going up (as if the light is from below).

[mellow hare]

I think for the purposes of a server, if your goal was something with a less professional, more lively feel, this is pretty solid.

I agree that the shadows are not being cast at the same angle as each other; though, that could just as easily be a creative design choice if, as I mentioned earlier, your goal is for something less professional and maybe even a little intentionally sloppy as someone might infer from the messy font choice. It definitely in my opinion adds some charm.

[hoary wren]

now?

don't be hard on me I'm still a beginner😕

[wooden oak]

Looks more correct.

[hoary wren]

are The Shadows on the same angle like the others?

[wooden oak]

They appear to be.

[hoary wren]

finally☠️

[wooden oak]

It just looks "odd" when the shadows are cast in different directions (for no apparent reason).

[hoary wren]

oh ok.

I'll start training a little

and also thank you so much guys

[narrow solstice]

^

[hoary wren]

thx

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @mellow hare

[hoary wren]

here's a new one (big thanks to my friend for giving me tips)

guys if the shadows are little messed up please tell me

[novel comet]

Why would you want to fill the empty space? Let it breathe!

[queen otter]

if you think so :)

[novel comet]

In all honesty, I'd maybe try spinning the image of the chips around 90 degrees. OR put the drinks NEXT to the tacos, instead of beneath it

helps keep the menu more balanced?

[queen otter]

great suggestion thanks !

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

Headings could be shrunk down a tiny bit more to provide the extra space you'll need

@queen otter - I'd honestly just keep the bottom third clear...

[queen otter]

woow thanks

it's true that it looks neat

[novel comet]

(but try and align the columns)

[queen otter]

yeah right

[queen otter]

what do you think ? Personally i think that it's great, but i'm a bit worried that i'll not find stock images matching this quality for the verso

[novel comet]

verso?

[queen otter]

the menu is recto version (there is also a 4 screen version i need to do but not now)

[novel comet]

ah you'll be fine! 🙂

[queen otter]

really ? do you know where i can get high quality food photo ?

i always struggle with this ._.

[novel comet]

Adobe Stock?
ShutterstocK
Unsplash

(Unsplash is free)

[queen otter]

thanks ! i'll look into each one (you're a lifesaver i swear )

[novel comet]

https://unsplash.com/s/photos/fries-isolated

[queen otter]

i really think i'll use it

thanks you for your help @novel comet ! i'll experiment with everything you sent tomorrow, good night 👍

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[sick ore]

Hi everyone, I am trying to get some feedback on a work I am creating. The text coloring , stroke and position is where I am concerned. Not sure if changes are needed. I want it to be readable with still fitting into the aesthetics.

[mellow hare]

The main concern I think is probably trying to avoid too much visual noise.

High contrast will almost by its very nature introduce this noise by accentuating hard edges and sharp details that might not otherwise stand out.

You might benefit with increasing font size and dimming some of the contrast from the underlying artwork. It could also be worth trying to play with stroke width and see how that modifies the aesthetic.

You could also try introducing an underlay to the card text with varying opacity in order to help segregate it from Joker's head which could assist with readability quite a bit, though possibly at the cost of visual appeal, depending on how you implement it.

[silver stump]

my life has been a lot easier since I literally have to go in edit and click free transform again and again can't thank you enough tho

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

That border is insanely busy, which forces you to squash everything into to middle of the image.
I presume that they're meant to be playing cards?

The text it too hard to read over the jokers head.

I think you need to keep the text, and image entirely seperate. - Look at any card from a cardgame and you'd see it works like that

Have you checked out 'Card game mockups'/designs? - there are some AMAZING templates you could use as the basis.

(Try going into the midjourney discord and searching for what people have generated from the words "card game template")

[neat venture]

Hello, guys, I am new here, I just started a course on Udemy about graphic design, which I am very excited about, and this is my first work project following this course of Lindsey Marsh, a poster for social media.

[frail ravine]

it looks amazing but that last part a lil confusing to read😭

might just be me

[novel comet]

no, it's not you. - That is crazy confusing.

Also, using different fonts in the same heading like that is a big no-no, since the reader isn't sure whether they're two different headings/titles.

[neat venture]

thanks for the feedback, it was meant to be confusing in the end, as people nowdays are used to get everything on a tray, without any brain exercise. Also the mix of fonts is intended to make the contrast between important and unimportant, red used to capture attention, and handwriting because it is a poster and make it familiar, as anyone could have written that.THANKS GUYSXX

[neat venture]

Another shot for social media:) hoping better this one, is just understanding how layers work and using typography, still baby steps, guys, have mercy on me:)

[ruby bison]

any quick corrections on the pose or anything like that?

[solar thorn]

just made this

thoughts?

[neat venture]

interesting i would say

[frail ravine]

Thoughts?

also would be nice if i could maybe get some help with my highlighting

[wooden oak]

It looks cool. I'm not sure I'm getting the vibe that the people are exiting a portal though.

[frail ravine]

hm

i can see why

Ill use a motion blur then

Also im not sure how my highlighting came out as this😭

[frail ravine]

what do you think of this adjustment then?

[wooden oak]

Not sure its just the blur. I understand your intent because I've been following along since the beginning of this project. However, someone looking at it for the first time, do you think they will get that the characters are exiting an interdimensional portal?

[frail ravine]

thinkin about it now

probaly not?

what are you suggesting? I would love to hear it

[wooden oak]

I suggested a few things the other day when I first saw the image and heard the initial comments. Perhaps making the portal more "flat" facing the viewer and mask off portions of the characters where the portal exterior overlaps them. This might give the impression that they are coming from one dimension into another... #📝project-feedback message

(I don't think my message link is working correctly. Not pushing all the way up to my reply.)

The character is masked off a bit. Like he is coming out of the thing.

[frail ravine]

Oh yeah you did show me this

I thought it looked nice so ill put it into my peice

[wooden oak]

It's just a suggestion. Something to try and see if it works.

[frail ravine]

though i might just do it with one character instead of both for personal prefrencess

[frail ravine]

Yeah ill try it now

thanks

not a good job so ill clean it up soon but i like this

[wooden oak]

Cool. Keep going!

[frail ravine]

im almost done with this artpeice all i need to do is fix the highlights on the red jumper, thanks for follwing!

[calm bridge]

What you all think

What should i fix

[north sundial]

Make the faces more clear to bring life to the image, its soo dark.
just my opinion good job anyway.

[abstract oxide]

I think the rim lighting you’re creating looks great. The shadows on the people, particularly the faces, is inconsistent.

[narrow solstice]

add a shadow that match the proportions for the umbrella, also i agree with the comment above 👆🏾 make the faces pop more, and the proportions for the shadows need to match. ex, if there is a light from above, keep in mind how the shadows would look realistically being reflected off the objects. (in this case the people). you do a good job with rim lighting along the edges just keep in mind the lower shadows just to keep everything proportional and nothing will look out of place

keep in mind 3 point lighting techniques when it comes to rim lighting and the primary perspective of the photo

[misty flint]

Alonso poster rate 1-10

any feedback is open

[wet rivet]

nice start, not sure about the guy's head between the 'o' and the 'n' personally. Looks a bit disruptive and best to keep faces intact

[sick ore]

Thank you for the advice. I am taking the advice and reworking the frame. As much as I like it, it is taking to much space. I still will go with something vintage but try like you said to keep the image and text separate.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[sick ore]

Thank you for the advice. I agree there is too much going on and I am reducing it by choosing a different frame. I will try increasing the font size also for the rules text. I am trying to keep with the color for type indication and the use of Joker purple to keep with aesthetics though.

[misty flint]

Yeah If I put it behind, his name would be a little hard to guess, so just erased parts of it with a soft brush, any improvements would be highly appreciated

[flat axle]

The Tragic Tale of Bruce McLaren

This is a proven thumbnail concept that has worked for me in the past, so any feedback appreciated! 👍🏼

[silent rose]

Anyone know how I can make the text more defined?

[sand whale]

School Group Projects, thumbnail I'm working on, what you think?

[frail ravine]

i finished! Thoughts?

[split summit]

Thoughts?

[sonic mauve]

i need help with this

its a poster, 30x40cm

i need to this looks better

with hierarchy and contrast

i can't make less text

[novel comet]

What does it say? Knowing the context would help.

[sonic mauve]

its for music production

[novel comet]

White outer stroke may help?

[sonic mauve]

free music production

does it looks better? like colors

[novel comet]

My first response would of course be "remove some text", but you've already said that it all needs to remain

[sonic mauve]

yep

[novel comet]

What does it generally say? - - It would help if you had some kind of image?

[sonic mauve]

yep

[novel comet]

Also where is it for? Are you planning to print it and put it on a wall?

[sonic mauve]

like make you person to an artist

[sonic mauve]

yes

in high schools

what do you think about "text"?

sizes and colors?

gratis mean free in spanish

[sonic mauve]

i should make it all white??

[novel comet]

(I've just translated it to see what it says)

[sonic mauve]

hmm

the translation is not correct

like 60% right xd

[novel comet]

yeah, but it's given me a good idea at least 🙂

[sonic mauve]

but its okay for the context

yep

[novel comet]

I think if we start by finding a decent image to use as the main body/background, it would help dramatically.

[sonic mauve]

i want some minimalist and easy

i found it on google and i like it

[novel comet]

nice. - I've just gone onto midjouney discord and searched for 'microphone' for inspiration

[novel comet]

I like the idea of using soundwaves in some way.

[sonic mauve]

yep

[novel comet]

You don't want to put a literal image of a singer, keyboard, microphone etc, since music production is far more than literally voice or playing an instrument,

[sonic mauve]

maybe

like a piano in the background

maybe that background helps a lot

what do you think?

[novel comet]

Something simple and abstract can probably get you started...

[sonic mauve]

:0

[sonic mauve]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[quaint rover]

Finished project so far, thanks to helps from moderators, are there any space to improve ? Thanks in advance

[north horizon]

well done man, looks nieat

[neat venture]

Another step with gradient maps

[sonic mauve]

hello guys

can i get an opinion?

its for a poster, 30x40cm about free music production

[warm delta]

Hi! Nice work, it looks like you have all the information on there. This is something I would call practical design, where the focus is on the graphic performing a task, which is informing the reader. I don't see a place or a time on the poster, so I would make sure to add that as well. But as it is right now, it is a design that works.

Where you can go from here is to work on the composition and structure of the poster. Here is a poster I found, that does a very good job of explaining everything while setting up a hierarchy. The most important thing is to let the reader know why they are reading the poster. Therefore, the biggest thing on it is text explaining what to expect from reading, it's a kids' music workshop. Then the next important thing is the date and time, the when. And immediately underneath the big title, it tells people where it is. And after that you would probably read the text highlighted in blue, it informs people what is happening. 2 music and science workshops, for kids 6-10 (and parents). After that, you will probably read the little music note keywords where you learn what to expect from the event; piano exploration, pitch games, music theory.

You don't have to change your design completely, but this is a suggestion on where you could take it. You could set up a hierarchy where the biggest element immediately tells the viewer what is happening. Your title sort of does that, but will everyone who reads it understand quickly enough before they look away? The designer's job is to make people care!

[sonic mauve]

thanks!

[toxic dome]

can i get an opinion?

made with blender ps and lightroom

[abstract oxide]

I think it could benefit from increasing the contrast on the character. The shadows are very bright on the character in comparison to the rocks.

[abstract oxide]

Nice grid design. Personally I would bring the text in more from the edges to give it a little more breathing room.

[narrow solstice]

there’s a lot of open space

[bitter stone]

Anyone Got some feedback or what else i can add just started doing this type of stuff Cheers.

[abstract oxide]

I think the stroke and the bevel on the text makes it hard to read. Perhaps experiment with removing or reducing these effects. Or perhaps thicken the text.

[abstract oxide]

He kind of looks like he is floating/flying. A little shadow under the foot could help ground the character and make it look more like he is running.

[bitter stone]

thanks

[abstract oxide]

No worries

[feral fossil]

Hy I am Sharing My personal Project. Please Give me feedback

[warm delta]

Hi! Nice design, it totally explains the message clearly. I have some thoughts on the design, which you are free to implement or ignore completely. I see what you are doing with the chocolate, and it's good that you are avoiding tangents, which is a common issue where an element's just barely touches something else. You've clearly cut off the chocolate pieces intentionally and that's great. What I would like to see is a complete piece of chocolate in the canvas to really send the message across.

I like the added white lines, it adds flavor to the design. The typefaces you have chosen are readable. Could you tell me where this is to be shared? Is this an Instagram post, or is it meant to be printed out and hung on a wall? I'm asking because on the bottom it looks like there is a button that says shop now, and I'm wondering if that is supposed to be a button that you can press. If it's not an actual button, instead you can add an address or url where readers will be able to purchase these cookies. And to be more specific, you can add a date and time for when they will be available. For example, if you post this now, and someone reads it in 3 weeks, they might think that these cookies are still available, and will be sad when they find out they were 3 weeks too late! Adding a date would avoid this issue altogether.

Moreover, you can add some more details. If I see this and I'm not familiar with who is posting, I might be confused. Is this a store that ships out factory made cookies, or is it a small bakery that sells freshly made cookies? Adding some text saying "homemade" or "baked in-house" could avoid this. Great work, though, these are just some suggestions!

[feral fossil]

I am Not posting it anywhere this is only for practice and thanks for giving me feedback @warm delta

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm delta

[feral fossil]

Can I share you my process? how I created and tell me this is good way to create!

[warm delta]

Yeah, please do!

[feral fossil]

I Took 5 or 6 creatives, and I created their collage then I took 1,1 elements from all the creatives and create the result. Nothing is created by myself only I took each and every element to give result. Is this right way to create a poster? @warm delta ?

[normal spoke]

Hi, I like the overall Design. As some ides/suggestions I would have sharpen and not blurred Chocolate pieces and more of them around the plate in the middle. Also the "tiny stars" make for me no sence. The plate with the cookies is very good. From the Font perspective I would try to have only ONE Font for the whole project. Also give the Text and decorative Elements some 3D effect or some shadows to get a bit more depth. The overall Design i find appealing. Good work.

[feral fossil]

I am sending 1 more but text same as last but

I follow this process(I Took 5 or 6 creatives, and I created their collage then I took 1,1 elements from all the creatives and create the result. Nothing is created by myself only I took each and every element to give result. Is this right way to create a poster?) Please tell me is this good or not !

[feral fossil]

Updated

[honest osprey]

you making a thumbnail? or transition?

[silent hedge]

Okay, now I'm hungry. This is so great !!

[hearty crest]

hey fellas mind helping me in ask a question

[silent hedge]

Shoot your question and let's see ! Someone will always be able to help you !

[hearty crest]

just did my brother

[sonic mauve]

how? o.o

[narrow solstice]

free transform, resize

[sonic mauve]

change the size of the text?

[keen drift]

what could i do better

[empty oak]

typography

[novel comet]

Yeah, green text on a geen background doesn't work.

also, I think adding noise/speckles to the flames wasn't required

Also, you wrote GAURD

makes me think of....

Spelling is GUARD

[heady arch]

today's result of my livestream tutorial. What do you think? What can i improve to get better?

[warm delta]

Looks like you're following the jojo art style. Nice work!

[honest osprey]

give more feedback

[normal spoke]

I would unblurr the Lava the gets directly out of the vulcano and add more sparks. The "Dragon" I would do a little bigger so that is a bit more present in the Image. Also the light from the Lava would reflect from the Dragonbody so maybe some light shadows under the Dragon. Have fun.

[heady arch]

If I make the dragon bigger, then somehow it no longer fits the ground :/. About the light, shadow and shade to the dragon: they are inside - maybe you can't see it so well. But here would be the original resource: https://pixabay.com/de/illustrations/drachen-fantasie-photoshop-1512457/

But more sparks and possibly unblurr could be an idea 🙂 thanks you very much for your hints!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[feral fossil]

I Took 5 or 6 creatives, and I created their collage then I took 1,1 elements from all the creatives and create the result. Nothing is created by myself only I took each and every element to give result. Is this right way to create a poster for any brand ?

[warm delta]

Hey! As long as you're using copyright-free or licensed elements, you can definitely do that. Usually it's not worth it to create everything from scratch unless you're working with a big studio. But most of the time designers find assets to use instead of making them.

[feral fossil]

So am I doing right or wrong ? I am beginner in this field so...!

[warm delta]

If it's all licensed or copyright-free, you're good to go! 😄

[feral fossil]

Ok Thanks @warm delta

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm delta

[torpid crater]

Made this video, lol

[bitter stone]

Better?

[sleek tiger]

Hi @bitter stone I found a video that explains how to build shadows in an image with similar angle as yours. But keep in mind the light direction, a great point of reference is the shadow cast on the neck 😉 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5TuhBcN9k8w

[mortal pond]

For a client, their product is called "In Da Couch" (iykyk) - i should add some berries to the lid of the tin on the bottom but it keeps looking weird.. what else looks off? any changes?

Thanks in advance!

[queen otter]

i think you should match the lighting of the objects with the room

[mortal pond]

@queen otter thanks for this, I kind of tried.. but didn't really get anywhere good clearly. how do you suggest I approach that?

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @queen otter

[queen otter]

try to watch this, i didn't watch it but the end result is great
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BPHnbC6HxTI&ab_channel=OKprod-Tutoriel

it's french but i think it will still help

[scenic cave]

Is there any way for me to improve this avi(I just started with photoshop today and this was the first thing i made)

[north sundial]

your feed back about this artwork

[mortal pond]

@north sundial here to say that the font is AWESOME. On the small "nokia' underneath, I feel like it could use a bit of a shadow/stroke to it has an edge to it. right now it kind of just bleeds into the background. super minor, but anyways just wanted to say seriously impressed by the font on this.

[peak ermine]

Hey yall I need some input.
So Im new to designing magazine covers since I enjoyed doing them quite a bit. But i want to try something new. I want my magazine cover to be something unique that will catch peoples eye.
This is the base image that I will be putting.

Im wondering what should I do with this, should the image disperse or liquify and things like that.

Here are the other covers I have gone over so far as a reference to my work

[fast zephyr]

finishing up on a design, any feedback would be greatly appreciated

[jaunty shell]

hi

[feral fossil]

Hy can Someone Give me feeback for this design. Topic of design was ( May Ganesh Chaturthi launch your journey to greatness, guided by Lord Ganesha's blessings and wisdom.
Ganesh Chaturthi post
CM Autosales - Maruti car dealership)

[toxic dome]

do you guys think i should add more to this?

[warm delta]

Hi! Could you tell us more about what this project is for and what you are going for with this concept, so we can give you more personalized feedback?

[warm delta]

This is really cool! Personally, I would love to see more grain and texture added to this piece. It looks like something that would benefit a lot from having some additional texture. This could be in the planets (I see you have some), or in the black background. Or across the whole canvas to really connect everything together.

Other than that, I think the composition is nice, with both maximalist and minimalist characteristics. The choice of typography is good, I love the type. One thing I notice is how most of the design uses sharp edges, but the stars in the top part have short diffraction spikes. You could try out having longer, spikier stars around the text if you haven't, it may look nice with this design.

[warm delta]

Hi! Do you have any references of the types of magazine covers you are referencing? Vogue tends to play a lot with both layout and colors of their covers. Have you played around with the background? Sometimes Vogue uses plain gradient backgrounds like you have, but usually they will then have a more saturated and busy foreground image which catches the attention.

I would say try deconstructing how magazine covers are designed, focusing on the layout of the elements, colors, movement of the images. See what you can learn from it and how you can apply it to this project.

[narrow solstice]

improve qual

[fast zephyr]

thanks so much, ill try implementing your feedback and see how it looks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm delta

[dusty flicker]

pretty bored, any feedback to make it look more realistic?

I dont really ever focus on realism so its really different for me

[tall kraken]

Bros using gen fill

[abstract oxide]

Try evening up your contrast. The front of the heads are in shadow while the tentacles on the same plane are quite bright.

[abstract oxide]

I think a little difference between the colour inside and outside the bottom of the frame would help create some separation and focus.

[abstract oxide]

My example is rushed but it demonstrates what I mean

[warm estuary]

hey everyone, so I'm trying to achieve the ghibli artstyle

does anyone have any critiques on the overall shapes?

[dusty flicker]

Oooo ok

[dusty flicker]

whats that

[dusty flicker]

Is this good

Cuz this is the original LMAO

[sick ore]

Good afternoon. I am posting an update on the card token I am working on. So I reduced the visual noise of the rules text by removing that. I enlarged the card name for visibility and centered more the art. Changed the font to plaza. Any feedback would be welcomed.

[novel comet]

If 'wicked role' is the only text required on the card - then yeah. Looks nice!

Font feels like it matches the frame.

[sick ore]

Yeah, sometimes you have to pivot on things to streamline things. I plan on using this template for the rest of the series. Had to use the Batman the Animated Adventures font with this series.

[toxic dome]

I feel like the skull are a bit on the right side

Its look good already, just don’t understand the idea of A devil riding a skull horse in middle of the ocean with kraken’s tentacles 🦑

Anyone know how to add frame , edge or border in pts , also i need recommend for frame design for shirt

This one was meant for t shirt

[keen drift]

does this look good?

[abstract oxide]

This looks great. It's now far more dramatic and mysterious. Great update.

[abstract oxide]

Wow! Just wow. Slight difference 😉

[dusty flicker]

LMAO, I was just doing random stuff to practice 😭

[dusty flicker]

Thanks!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

No worries

[toxic dome]

Its really cool imo

[narrow drift]

hi i dont even have photoshop but i thought i would come here for suggestions, this is my first thing i made and im looking for any feedback, thanks

original photo if that helps

[toxic dome]

perfectly for the front of a shirt

imma start making back side soon

[hoary wren]

I made this and I think it's really simple tbh. can anyone give me some feedback?

[toxic dome]

Its look complicated for me , good job

[hoary wren]

it was really easy tbh

[narrow drift]

could i get some feedback for this? please and thank you 🙏

[bitter stone]

How could I improve this like if I add another logo somewhere or smth to make it look better or I change something about it ignore the shadow on the feet I fix it later

[novel comet]

Shadow placement makes it look like he's floating 🙂

[ruby sigil]

How did u do that

[novel comet]

The floating man?

I googled it and nicked it from a stock image site - It was just a reference to the footballer image above.

[bitter stone]

Could I get some feedback on this Please. 🙏

[neat steppe]

Hello, could i get some feedback please ? Just finished it 😄 Thank you ! 😄

[wet rivet]

this is good! I do wish I could read the text behind the subject better. But I always find type more interesting 🙂

[narrow drift]

ok i got a lot, the first one was my first kind of photoshop esque thing so looking for any feedback on that and the second is for what would be a tshirt or something and then other images are references. thank you!!!!

[narrow drift]

i noticed sides on vhs one and fixed them

[livid basalt]

My Design is here

[verbal void]

what do u think?

[hoary wren]

it took me 2 minutes and a half to make💀

[toxic dome]

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/591200311700619294/1148975514980192376/image0.gif

[hoary wren]

canva made it so easy

[random pulsar]

Hey I'm a new photoshop designer and was wondering if anyone had tips for my project!

[grave palm]

We can't see the blue text

[wooden oak]

Looks like you're getting familiar with the practice of using Layers to build your comps. Great! A couple quick things: "Minecraft Content" is difficult to read. You might want to use a lighter color so it stands out a bit more from the background. Same goes for the other text as well.

[grave palm]

the swords are too small

the pixelate cube plus the background with lot of details doesnt match

i think you can work the size of all your elements plus find a composition matching more

[normal spoke]

In Addition to what D.Human wrote also maybe try different and more bold Fonts. Try instead of dark shadows on the dark Background maybe white or lighter colors so that the contrast is more visible. Text can also be much bigger. Rest will come with practice, practice, practice. Have fun!

[normal spoke]

some text of the switches would be a bit to bright and also distracting to much. But the idea and composing is very good. Like the old Graphiti style.

[normal spoke]

Nice work. I think there could be going on a bit more in the Background. some more "magic" gadgets floating around, 1-2 characters or creatures, etc. But overall a good design.

[livid basalt]

I've got some great ideas.
Thankuuuuu so much
I've screenshot your words

[normal spoke]

To understand it better can you tell us what it was made for? When I assume that it could be a Album Cover of some kind then the Design itself is very good. The only thing that bothers me is that I could not read the words.

[normal spoke]

Great to read that! Appreciate it.

[normal spoke]

Cool idea. I would do maybe some kind of motion blur to the side on the lines that there would be a bit more dynamic in the Picture. Overall a good design.

[silent hedge]

That is sick !!!

[hoary wren]

me use canva

[wooden oak]

Please don't post the same thing multiple times.

[kindred pivot]

it wasnt it was 2 different ones but mybad

right or left? (feedbacks)

[silver stump]

does that background sky match the overall scene or should i manually change color through color balance "im bad at color balance"

[wooden oak]

I think maybe without the dog/wolf. Unless its integral to your story. :)

[wooden oak]

It looks decent to me!

[silver stump]

oh okaY

thanks

[kindred pivot]

ty but naw it's someone else story just wanted to see what looks better

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[narrow drift]

ok i got a lot, the first one was my first kind of photoshop esque thing so looking for any feedback on that and the second is for what would be a tshirt or something and then other images are references. thank you

[normal spoke]

The comp itself looks good. But I had a hard time to spot those minor differences. Because the dog in the left is more prominent and the comp is feeling a bit better I would go there. That black crow on the street-sign I did not spot there, so it would not be relevant for the Image itself overall. Have fun.

[normal spoke]

I think the sky matched pretty good. Depending on the story and the light on the figures it looks like it would be sundown time. If that's the case, then it might be better to have a little more sunset in the sky and to have a little more sunlight or brighter in the front/back right of the sky and then about a less light in the back left.

[silver stump]

oh thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wild trail

[silver stump]

thanks you to

[neat steppe]

Just a creation I made for a poster design ! Yes I know, especially because I worked on the type too, but I wanted to enhance he portrait 🤗

[neat steppe]

Thank you !!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @silent hedge

[silent hedge]

Lovely ! ❤️

[silver stump]

can someone tell me what layer style should i apply to the text im generally confused

[kindred pivot]

thanks & yea I'm still working on lighting

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[clear spade]

This is my third time modifying the poster, is anything missing, I think it's not perfect yet do more🤔 ! >>FEEDBACK>> please

[warm delta]

Could you tell us what this is for before we give you any specific feedback? Looks like you're setting up a general scene in 3D and adding text on top, is this a video thumbnail?

[silver stump]

yes its a video thumbnail

[silver stump]

maybe tell me how can i improve the text

[normal spoke]

I like the idea and the Composition. Very well done. maybe try to get some evenly sharp Images of the person and try to match the brightness of the Light a little. The "Mystical" do not seem to be centered, but that are all minor details. Good work so far.

[random pulsar]

Hey any pointers? I'm pretty bad at PS and was wondering if anyone had any pointers to fill in black space/make it look better.

[random pulsar]

Im pretty bad

[abstract oxide]

Did you mean to say "blank" space when you wrote "black" space?

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps center and enlarge the text “MYSTICAL”.

[abstract oxide]

Try adding some contrast to the faces of the left and right characters to better match those in the center.

[pine vine]

/info

[warm delta]

If this is a thumbnail and the point is to grab attention, you are missing contrast for the text. It sticks out, but if you're comparing it to thumnails, it's fairly low contrast and flat. What you can do to improve its ability to grab attention, is add a stroke. This is pretty much the number one thing used in this type of design that will immediately add a big punch. From there, you can add a border around the whole text, rotate it, add more colors or a gradient, resize it.

[abstract oxide]

Is this a new post or a follow up to a previous one?

[flat axle]

The Story of America's Forgotten Formula 1 Champions...

[normal spoke]

Looks like an unsharp Image of a photo of a Painting, but weird Brushstrukes (way to even painted). The Art itself is very Abstract. I think some could say to all kind of facts about that piece a thing or two depending on what Feedback you wish for.

[normal spoke]

I would try to put the Text withinthe Picture itself als as a bottom Banner. Also try blend the edged between the two persons maybe a bit bette with not so much blurr in the brush. The Image itsels is good.

[normal spoke]

I like tha Rap Style. But I had a really hard time to read the Text and could not read it well. That could be improved. Also the two Goat Heads have almost the same white as the T-Shirt so its hard to see when its all white where the Person in front ends and the Goatead begins. maybe try a little shadow or more neckline.

[supple turtle]

Hello everyone!
I'm studying UX/UI Design and decided to make my first Design Dystem.
I would like to hear your feedback)
https://www.behance.net/gallery/180223539/Design-System-From-Dartus-Design

[feral fossil]

Please Give me feedback about this?

[limber prairie]

I'm back, I've taken a break from making things for a few weeks, but I suddenly had some inspiration to make something again,
Would love to hear some feedback and critiques, thanks!!

[knotty estuary]

thoughts?

[kindred pivot]

yea the text color was hard to choose and make it pop

[coral dome]

i likee the use of what looks to be a vinyl to add some texture. idont know what a guy hiding his face and the word "stay" is supposed to evoke out of me but i think its a cool idea for sure.

no clue what you're asking here.

[normal spoke]

They look all the same! ask 20 People and you get 21 different answers 😉 If you can be more speciffic we maybe can help you better.

[normal spoke]

Good start. But maybe you can try to focus what would be the important part in the Image? Why are there red lights? It seems that they do not add anything specific to the Image. Then what would be the main "Character" of the Image? The Person in the Car, the "Death", the moon (very prominent) or the Gravestones. Such an Image should tell some kind of storry, but I do not see it here. IF the Person would have ben behind the wheel of his car texting while driving THAT would be a message/story that would have been selfexplained. If you can be more concrete with the "Story" The Image itself would be getting much better. Have fun.

[normal spoke]

Nice Compositions. For the knight pictures: Also try to mach the Color of the Lights. Yellow sun and brown or gren hills do not match so much. Also try to put some kind of castle on the Mountain. It looks like the Mountain is a bit empty. For the "Night" Image: Look wher ethe Lights and shadows come from. The earth on the right hast Light from above AND below, but the lake and Person in the forground are totally dark that would not match so much. Also the Light on the boat dock would light up the Person more and it would pop out better. To bring a bit more dynamic a little boat or something else on the lake could be nice. Have fun.

[flat plinth]

I'm an illustrator/graphic designer, and I have a passion for making my clients' ideas become a reality.
I've been working in the graphic design industry for over 2 years now, and I've designed everything from logos and websites to posters, flyers, book covers, characters and more. I'm also skilled in vector-illustration programs like Adobe Illustrator and blender. I'm looking for new clients who want to work with me on their next project. If you have an idea that needs to be brought to life in a visually stunning way, please contact me today!.
wanna have look on some dope designs....

[safe sapphire]

Working on a logo for my brother upcoming podcast. He wants it simple yet conveys what it's all about, any feedback is greatly appreciated.

[lilac ember]

can i get some feedback on my twitch banner?

[lilac ember]

I like this layout, the perfectionist in me would change the corners on the P's to have the same inscribed angle as your circular "play" button tho

whatever the arc of a circle is called i forget the name

this part

[abstract oxide]

Looks great. Nice work. If we are getting pedantic, the spacing between the letters within the title seems slightly inconsistent.

[lilac ember]

i feel the same way, adobe says that its 4pt distance but i agree it

[abstract oxide]

I will often manually adjust the spacing between pairs of letters, particularly within large titles. I'm no typographer but sometimes the spacing just feels wrong.

[lilac ember]

im in a typography course atm, i might just ask my instructor because its irking at me too

i was honestly suprised you noticed because my friends said it looks fine

[abstract oxide]

To quickly adjust kerning (spacing between adjacent characters), place the cursor between the two characters, hold down Alt/Option and tap the left or right arrow keys.

[lilac ember]

[abstract oxide]

Typography is definitely both an art and a science.

[lilac ember]

i dont really like this course it feels very redundant to me if i can be honest

im mostly just learning the term names to stuff that generally i already knew

but its required so maybe ill pick up on some things later on

[abstract oxide]

Sounds like you already know your stuff. Hopefully you can pick up a few tricks.

[lilac ember]

the other graphic design courses are where its at tbh

ive learned so much in my illustrator class

[abstract oxide]

Excellent. Best of luck with your studies.

[safe sapphire]

Really appreciate the feedback 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿

[toxic dome]

Thoughts?

[safe sapphire]

Looks good, excited for the final outcome

[karmic meadow]

what do we think of the typography/ layout? i think it could be better

[unreal abyss]

does this look good?

is the logo on bottom left well aligned?

or if there's any other critiques?

@clear coral Sorry for ping, wanted to ask you your opinion on the overall thing since you saw me work on the logo earlier. Thank you in advance.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @clear coral

[sudden stone]

I've been working on creating testimonial graphics for my company, but thinking about changing the design a bit for next year's iteration. I'm thinking of updating the accent line and possibly the background, but keeping the color scheme. would love feedback!

[past jay]

i would definitely try experimenting with different backgrounds , i like the overall composition w the accent line and the names on the bottom tho

[past jay]

would also try playing around with different fonts / font sizes for the question text on top and maybe even the names, also something like a - in between the name and job position, the gap in between tina and architecture just feels a bit off ( to me at least ) good work tho!

[toxic dome]

Are my highlights getting any better?
(Fictional light source is coming from a particular side.)

[toxic dome]

It is visible that car image is cropped from night or darker photo.
You will have to match that colors better.

[abstract oxide]

I would suggest right aligning all the text, not just individual blocks of text.

[abstract oxide]

I think the logo is well positioned

[abstract oxide]

I think you’ve got a pretty solid design. Nice work.

A few things you could experiment with…

• Lower the opacity of the text in the title a little so you get a little blending
• Rotate the dark rectangle a little
• Put the text in two columns with text wrap on the right edge so that it wraps around the person

[karmic meadow]

@abstract oxide thank you, I actually ended up scratching it and making a cover

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[novel canyon]

@mighty dragon dms

[normal spoke]

That Layout seem pretty Ok. But maybe you look at the Text that they are all in line with each other. Also the Cross Lines/Folding Lines are a bit weird. The rest is very minimalistic.

[normal spoke]

The Design looks good. I would miss the Lions Club Logo/Icon, but its Ok.

[normal spoke]

There are some Reflexions in the Windows and there is missing some light under the car. Other then that its a nice Comp.

[novel comet]

Is this your own design? - I'm a bit confused what its supposed to be.