#art-discussion-and-wip

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lament stump
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ok

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well I'll tell them it'll work

lusty hazel
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wait that looks similar to one of the bases shikni made

lament stump
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I'll make like a swimusit bra under

dusky trail
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because it is my base

lament stump
dusky trail
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he blackmail and took it from me sob sob

lusty hazel
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very suprising

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smh aki TeRiRiSleepy

lament stump
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okay I'm gonna go to the store while search for a good beach chair on pintrest

lusty hazel
lament stump
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her back ain't gonna be on that thingy tho

inner talon
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wouldnt her arms start hurting if she stays in that pose without leaning on something lol

lament stump
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she's fixing her hair and getting ready for beach time

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cmon selinaaa you gotta start thinkinnnn

inner talon
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i thought she was like doing a pose with the arms to look cool :(

lament stump
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she fixing her hair while looking cool

inner talon
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lmao ok

lusty hazel
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ez

dawn rapids
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I am learning colouring

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Any suggestions

graceful echo
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I think im gonna serious on drawing moebius even i draw it in uncolored version

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WIP

shadow nebula
lament stump
lusty hazel
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hmmmmmm

grave nymph
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yabe

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tracing

lusty hazel
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??? wtf does yabe mean

onyx breach
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Oh no

hazy lichen
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yabe?

plain bane
zealous pasture
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What will I do guys o..O Should i make Ai chan.... or Sirin..... or Rita? O..O can't decide

graceful echo
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Eh

graceful echo
graceful echo
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Is it illegal?

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If its illegal then sry and ill not post it in this server again and keep it for myself...

grave nymph
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as long as you don't claim it as your own art

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all is good

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tracing is quite often used on practicing

graceful echo
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So... Tracing its allowed if im not claim it as my own art aight?

zealous pasture
graceful echo
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Ooh okay

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Umm about the mobius that i draw

zealous pasture
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hmm.. hm..

graceful echo
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Im not really good at coloring so im mostly make my something that i draw like this... Is this good?

grave nymph
zealous pasture
graceful echo
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What is owo?

zealous pasture
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umm..

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FuHuaApprove
here's better I can't explain owo

graceful echo
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Ok...

lusty hazel
graceful echo
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Ooh okay

smoky osprey
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Would you wear that to the beach

onyx breach
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i cant really call it good coz youre tracing it, theres no skill behind all of this

grave nymph
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mmh

onyx breach
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Even shii can produce this quality by tracing it as well

grave nymph
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I guess I'm still not good enough huh TeriRip

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oh well, looking forward to the weekends

lament stump
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:)

onyx breach
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i'd say you're a lil bit above Aki

lament stump
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damn itttttt

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here i tought shii ain't shit

grave nymph
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still not good enough TeriRip

lusty hazel
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cool but am i above aki

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kek

grave nymph
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so yeah

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Now I wanna draw TeriRip

lament stump
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that last drawing of your's had potential but you rushed it

grave nymph
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Deadlines

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:"D

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I'm getting burnt out on that one anyways

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so better just moved on to another one

lusty hazel
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me and shii doing art 1 minute before deadline

grave nymph
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šŸ¤

lament stump
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blue seele hair lookin like a wet towl

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red one was okay but I'm still salty

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about that line on her calf

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making it thicker was the move i swear

grave nymph
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Then if you hate it so much, then why don't you do it

lament stump
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i said it's good except 1 line

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and that line is -10 points so you back to 0

grave nymph
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wdym good? That one was never good, botched the coloring so damn hard

lament stump
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nah red seele was okay imo

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blue, yeah i don't wanna talk about her

grave nymph
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that's just how trash I am at coloring

lusty hazel
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veliona's eye lash looks pretty weird coz the hair and it has no color difference

lament stump
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you're a bit to harsh

grave nymph
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and that's okay, it motivates me further, so it's both a good thing and a bad thing

lament stump
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if being harsh motivates you then that's cool

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you suck shii.

grave nymph
lusty hazel
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shii coping with the harsh comments aki gives

grave nymph
lament stump
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i commented on her tweet

grave nymph
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šŸƒ

lament stump
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i said it was ok

lusty hazel
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very useful constructive feedback aki, thank you

lament stump
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np

zealous pasture
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O..O who should i L*** next O..O I already finished mobius O..O maybe rita? Ai chan? Sirin?

grave nymph
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thank you resident Kami-artist Aki

lament stump
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i called someone out on tracing earlier but i couldn't bother saying anything else

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you guys dealt wiht them?

zealous pasture
lusty hazel
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ah

zealous pasture
lusty hazel
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rita has the best design on the list you mentioned

zealous pasture
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hmm... hm...

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check my pixiv if u want to see mobius owo I can't post it here

grave nymph
lusty hazel
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i will

grave nymph
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Aki: TeriChrist

zealous pasture
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Im still not much good but I did my best currently OwO for snekk

lusty hazel
zealous pasture
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Now O O now come to think of it I still didn't post it on danbooru and R**

lusty hazel
grave nymph
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anyone's artstyle's better than mine, don't worry, I accepted that fact already TeriRip

lament stump
smoky osprey
lament stump
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azure hear me out

lusty hazel
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azure hear me out
aki has no fashion sense

smoky osprey
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LOL

zealous pasture
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O..O my art is still not enough O..O my mind is planning to draw L*** at the same time my body is telling me to draw kawaii modius

lament stump
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she just got to the beach, she's fixing her hair in a bun and she's getting ready for the water

smoky osprey
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Okay

grave nymph
lament stump
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1 sandal on 1 off

smoky osprey
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And she needs to take off that crazy looking shirt to get in the water right

zealous pasture
lament stump
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you can see her upped swimsuit

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somehow

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we'll see how

smoky osprey
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Bro you touch that shirt

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And the strings on her neck and thigh are gonna snap

zealous pasture
smoky osprey
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Also the neck string looks like it’d choke her

grave nymph
lament stump
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it's all gonan be fine azure

grave nymph
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A2 Kami-artist

lament stump
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trust my skill

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he he

smoky osprey
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So

grave nymph
smoky osprey
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It’s not gonna be fine

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If I trust your skill

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I see i see

zealous pasture
lament stump
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I'm pretty happy with me current art state, i have improved a lot since the start

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so

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I'm going confidently into this

zealous pasture
smoky osprey
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I like your confidence

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Unfounded confidence is quite refreshing BocchiNod

grave nymph
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isn't it?

smoky osprey
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I’m kidding aki

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It looks alright

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Just uh

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Don’t snap her neck

zealous pasture
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Guys what's happening?

smoky osprey
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I miss drawing

lament stump
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my name is aki

smoky osprey
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It’s been like a week since I worked on inktober

lament stump
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that's what's happening

zealous pasture
lament stump
lament stump
smoky osprey
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I have an exam in 8 hours okay

grave nymph
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SLEP

smoky osprey
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And I’m catching up on 5 weeks worth of lectures

grave nymph
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or even just

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REVIEW

smoky osprey
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I’m frickin cramming at 2:34 am god help me

grave nymph
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I still don't understand why people cram, do they not listen on lectures or something? Guess that's a topic for #off-topic-discussion šŸƒ

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But I also have school work so yeah, I guess I'll lurk here BronyaLurk

smoky osprey
lament stump
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he he

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i never lurk cuz I'm chad

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ok that's cringe mb

smoky osprey
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Apparently I have to draw 3 mobiuses for my missing inktobers

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Kinda hate drawing her

onyx breach
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which reminds me that inktober is dumb as hell

dusky trail
onyx breach
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True

lament stump
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after i finish and post this before beach art

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I'll see if ppl on devi gonna give me some requests

hardy yew
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you guys are doing Inktober ?

grave nymph
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was doing honkaitober, stopped due to lack of time to doodle

hardy yew
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i have no idea what to study in art atm

grave nymph
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everything w

hardy yew
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I'mma just look at the Fundamental chart

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and choose the first one

onyx breach
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you need to decide what kind of artist you want to be first, concept, chara, background etc

dusky trail
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a fanartist or someone want to develop his own stuff

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specially lately with the rise of webcomic

grave nymph
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oh?

hardy yew
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I think i want to something like an Illustrator

jaunty python
hardy yew
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To draw characters and backgrounds

dusky trail
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92m has been making short art for his OC lately

hardy yew
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that's definitely nice

grave nymph
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another one on my "Follows" list

hardy yew
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do you know aoseagrass ?

grave nymph
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thanks shikni-sensei o/

lament stump
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shik is forceing someone to become a webcomic artist

hardy yew
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no don't

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I don't want that lol

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I want to be something like this man

grave nymph
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geez

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those colors

hardy yew
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they are insane

dusky trail
hardy yew
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Webcomic is like

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Drawing + Literature

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you must establish a story

grave nymph
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mhm

dusky trail
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muh =3=

grave nymph
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uhhh what was that sensei o-o;;?

dusky trail
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nope kawakami masaki 's stuff just too much for discord

lament stump
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it is time guysss

grave nymph
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lol wat

dusky trail
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hah

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anyway~ Masaki's "comic" start out just bunch of gag until it got out of hand

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quite fun

grave nymph
lament stump
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i rly like how mobius looks so why not try and get her

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i am into broken ones as you guys know but also into these crazy ones

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like hu tao and mobius

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hu tao also teases which is my fav

dusky trail
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sure, try to get one of the type mostly depend on her weapon and gear

hardy yew
onyx breach
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mobius' power effects are so dirty-looking that i can barely tell whats happening but i love her so its fine

dusky trail
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who won't with that kind of laugh

lament stump
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sooooo

dusky trail
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still wish you don't have to wait for another patch to get her bridge animation update

lament stump
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i can get this too?

hardy yew
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ok aki come back when you get mobius and full gear her

lament stump
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i have 0 primo saved

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crystal

dusky trail
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then just give up

lament stump
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so a bad start but we good

onyx breach
dusky trail
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but but Carole is coming next~~

grave nymph
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who cares about her

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she's an SP valk

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which means a skip patch for me LiliSleep

dusky trail
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Carole's span is fun

lament stump
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idek what sp is

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ik fish is that

hardy yew
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i wish honkai didnt take up so much time HigoIDK

onyx breach
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im already sick of using her in apho, time to skip

hardy yew
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i spend like 30min - 1h on abyss sessions

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when i could be drawing

dusky trail
onyx breach
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30 mins should be fine if you dont tryhard

hardy yew
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its usually longer than 30mins

dusky trail
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it also took me around 30 mins to finish it

onyx breach
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what?! as battle only lasts 5 mins, theres 4 stages so you only have a maximum of 20 mins spent on abyss

dusky trail
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just do all 4, get the gem, don't care about the ranking at all

graceful echo
dusky trail
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that hand though

onyx breach
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i'd take your art anytime than your traced mobius

graceful echo
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Ok :)

hardy yew
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tracing is ok if you're learning from it but other than that no

graceful echo
dusky trail
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like tracing a "manga" page so you can try out color

graceful echo
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:O

lament stump
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that color

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is better

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then your main

dusky trail
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it is too damn bright, what are you talking about

lament stump
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i hate your color style so anything is better

onyx breach
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ye, its too washed out

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its like when you shove a floodlight down someone's face

lament stump
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too simple

dusky trail
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also, that still the same color style i always use

lament stump
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has more depth mabye cuz of that red suit idk

graceful echo
dusky trail
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well you first need to grasp how the light and shade work

whole cloak
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I think your coloring in general is just very saturated with always neutral color shading

lament stump
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don't cell shade that's my advice

onyx breach
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you dont even know how to draw yet and you already want to know coloring? practice anatomy first like Aki

lament stump
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well i do both

onyx breach
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you have to jump through the same hoops as Aki

whole cloak
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I’m still figuring out how I want to color

graceful echo
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Ok then teach me how to draw the body(?)

lament stump
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i have a day plan for today I'm gonna wash dishes and study for a bit and then I'll have a 2h drawing setion, will try to figure out the bg in that time and mabye add clothes if I'm fast enough

lament stump
graceful echo
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;_;

whole cloak
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don’t get aki to teach you anatomy

graceful echo
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Then to who i should ask for teach me about anatomy

dusky trail
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you can get Aki to send you the link to the tutorial he watched

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just not let him teaching you how to do it

whole cloak
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yea youtube tutorials are great
in general even a quick Google search is helpful

graceful echo
whole cloak
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and using yourself as a reference to see how things work

hardy yew
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common thing i see a lot with beginner artists is that they think they can learn 1 thing and be god at art

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that was me last year lmao

whole cloak
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same that was also me TeriRip

dusky trail
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well if people around you don't do art or just often being nice, it can get you over your head...

grave nymph
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mhm

grave nymph
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that's why roasting exists w

whole cloak
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and then get stuck in that comfort zone

lusty breach
hardy yew
grave nymph
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if people get are nice to you you might think you're some kind of kami-artist and you won't even try to improve

hardy yew
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big ego in art isnt good if you're beginning

grave nymph
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or something like that

whole cloak
# graceful echo I dont understand...

If everyone around you says ā€œyou’re doing awesome and perfectā€ when you’re not, ppl lose sight of the fact that they can improve

grave nymph
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mhm

lusty breach
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I don't show my friends my drawings

whole cloak
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It goes to their head often did for me for a while

dusky trail
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and then you start ignore the basic because you thought you already so good at it

dense void
hardy yew
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the only thing i ask from my friends is "ayo does this look deformed" or "is this the right color because im blind"

dusky trail
hardy yew
lusty breach
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Slightly open

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:ā—‹

dusky trail
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so it is teeth there then

whole cloak
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It looks slightly open to me
the line in the middle is teeth right

lusty breach
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Yeh

lusty breach
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I'm so proud of myself right now I draw a guy

whole cloak
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i ask friends irl if there’s anything they see blatantly wrong and I come here to get roasted

whole cloak
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shik.

lusty breach
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I'll get distracted

whole cloak
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I have a friend who’s been trying to draw abs for a while but can’t figure it out bc they don’t look up references and I can’t convince them

graceful echo
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Something between the legs is little bit annoying... (You know what i mean)

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( ͔° ĶœŹ– ͔°)

dusky trail
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ya sometime people rather stubborn on how they do thing

dusky trail
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and just say "i'm too lazy" for that and ignore the advice coughtakicought

hardy yew
lusty breach
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They gonna regret that

graceful echo
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Ok then im gonna watch the anatomy vid... Bye

hardy yew
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i have a friend who always says they want to get better at art but they dont even use a proper drawing software

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mf uses the equivalent of ms paint

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but on browser

lament stump
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you still need it?

onyx breach
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bruh, paper and pencil will do

hardy yew
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holy moly

lament stump
hardy yew
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they always complain about not being able to draw guys and i tell them to look at references and they never try

lusty breach
lament stump
lament stump
hardy yew
hardy yew
lament stump
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well it's study time

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bye bye guys, be back in 30min lol

dusky trail
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you normally plan thing ahead so you won't caught in that "yep, no clue what to do here" in the first place

hardy yew
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wanna draw guy ?

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study anatomy

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and probably study some gay furry artist, not the bara one tho

lament stump
hardy yew
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on the serious side tho

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im also a newb and have plenty if creativity aki

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except when i try to draw what i imagine it looks

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off

dusky trail
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you don't have to be "too creative"

lusty breach
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I have wild inaginations TeriDerp

hardy yew
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but i have to say

lusty breach
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But its good to plan things before doing it

hardy yew
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mastering anatomy

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you'll end up studying woman with booba on

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and boy with pp on

dusky trail
lament stump
hardy yew
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and then there's those biology breakdown anatomy thingy

dusky trail
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you should still be able to imagine vaguely the kind of setting you want for a pose

dusky trail
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well ya that is why you search for reference to help visualize those better

hardy yew
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I feel like i have a very narrowed imagination

lusty breach
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Yeh good thing shik sends a lot of reference

dusky trail
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while Aki, you seem to have habit of see a cool pose, draw it first then decide what you gonna do with it

lament stump
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yeeeee

hardy yew
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Many artist roughly sketches the pose first to visualize

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before they start getting more "Detailed" with the sketches

lament stump
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shik

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will towle on a sand work?

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with my pose

dusky trail
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sure

hardy yew
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also

lament stump
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you have any beach refs?

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I mena ik you do

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so send

hardy yew
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do you guys have any idea on measuring when drawing

lament stump
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yes

hardy yew
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I want to get over this weakness of mine, getting some of the proportion wrong

lament stump
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your legs should be the same lengs as the top of the head all the way down to where legs start

lusty breach
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Aki I thought you're studying

lament stump
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me too

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it'a juat homework tho

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I'll copy it

lusty breach
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Oh okay

hardy yew
dusky trail
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well you can use the body itself to measure thing

hardy yew
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o

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alrighty

lament stump
hardy yew
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I'mma save it and study it later

lament stump
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i always 1st do upper body and from there i mesure head legs arms

lament stump
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just like in that vid

dusky trail
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like look at Aki's draw there

lament stump
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YOGA

dusky trail
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you can see the legs have different length

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just by compare they length to each other

hardy yew
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oh

dusky trail
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so one of the easy way to spot the mistake is just simple compare part to each other

hardy yew
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Yea, I just realized that in the latest gesture drawing I made TeriDerp

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as you can see, the legs' lenght is way off

dusky trail
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not just the legs

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look at her hands

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you can see one of them is bigger than other

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and after you spot it, you can decide which size you want to use or if it fit to the rest of the body

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to see if it too big or too small in compare

hardy yew
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I've only managed to fix the leg

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ye, the hands are pretty uneven

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i have no idea how to do the arm that is resting down

dusky trail
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if you draw by reference then you can start by framing the pose itself

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also, you can also see the place she sit on are in different angle from the reference

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that why the arm also feel longer

lament stump
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shik

hardy yew
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oh

lament stump
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you have any refs with a cool lookin park in the bg?

hardy yew
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I'll try

dusky trail
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just try to do something like this so you can get the feel of the frame

lament stump
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not water

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park

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you booba freak

lament stump
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i can tottaly steal that

dusky trail
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a park is a park, if you want it too look cool, just fill it with rando running in the back

lament stump
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is that hard to draw

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that park?

dusky trail
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well depend on how confident you are with your background skill

lament stump
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0

dusky trail
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otherwise, not that hard at all

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not like you need to detail every tree and grass

lament stump
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the grass scares me the most

dusky trail
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well gonna go eat, just ask Shii if you want someone to bully you

lament stump
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idk what's the saying when you wish someone a good meal

hardy yew
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Bon appetit

lament stump
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yea

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that

hardy yew
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i can also bully you but without the good advice part

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This is why I'm scared to post my art here WeltHmph

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dont worry if you dont want critique you can just mention it

lament stump
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nah you'll benefit a lot if you post it

lone wagon
lament stump
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ask anyone who did if it was helpful

lone wagon
hardy yew
lament stump
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hello hanami

lament stump
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they should too

onyx breach
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you guys lost your screws

lone wagon
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Yeah everyone else gives advice but you straight up say its bad but dont tell them what's bad

lament stump
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why dis game so big in gbs

lone wagon
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IT'S EXACTLY LIKE THAT

lament stump
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PROOF?

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I SAY WHAT'S BAD

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AND THEN i just don't say how to fix

lone wagon
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Literally last night me and shik made fun of it after the "advice" you tried to give

lament stump
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bully

ruby yoke
grave nymph
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isn't it?

lone wagon
onyx breach
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best course of action is to just not say anything Aki since you dont know how to deliver your message well.

grave nymph
lament stump
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BRO

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THE FACE WAS SUPER BAD

hardy yew
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my advice is bad but not as bad as aki's TeriHuehue

lament stump
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so i just said it's bad

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and it's bad cuz they didn't focus on it

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that's it

hardy yew
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if you just say "its bad" but dont explain why how tf do they fix it

lone wagon
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That's not really advice.

onyx breach
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until you learn what constructive criticism is, its better if you just dont talk about it

hardy yew
lament stump
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the face looked weird cmon, even shii can see it

grave nymph
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what if the senseis just tell you, "Art bad", what would you feel?

onyx breach
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theres a difference between constructive criticism and straight up shitting on ppl's faces

grave nymph
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Yeah you know that it's bad, but where's the part that makes it bad?

lament stump
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I'm not the one who needs to give advice when there's other ppl who do it betetr

hardy yew
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then dont give it

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simple as that

hardy yew
grave nymph
lament stump
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ok i won't say shit from now on

hardy yew
grave nymph
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oh hey a lurker

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hello there o/

hardy yew
lament stump
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send your art and see what happens

grave nymph
lone wagon
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That almost sounds like a threat

lament stump
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oh no it's not a threat

lone wagon
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When did this channel become so violent?

lament stump
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i said i ain't gonna say anything

grave nymph
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idk

lament stump
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I'M GETTING VIOLENTED

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here

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and idk how spell

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that

lone wagon
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Its only 2 mins, you should watch

plain bane
lament stump
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les go

dusky trail
solemn inlet
lament stump
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i didn't get snake girlllll

lament stump
grave nymph
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guess we’d see Aki getting bonked soon huh meisip

solemn inlet
inner talon
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this is getting off topic huh

lament stump
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no

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i moved to

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now go help me there

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everyone ignores me

solemn inlet
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Too many typing at once

lament stump
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im up there somewhere

solemn inlet
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Not gonna scroll there

dusky trail
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then go there and spam Shii for help

near girder
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Omg what happened here?

lament stump
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i pulled one pull on the thing where you get her stigmas and i got a 4* stigma but not hers :((((((

solemn inlet
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šŸ’€

inner talon
dusky trail
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just Aki feeling lonely as usual

near girder
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Aww

lament stump
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i need attention ok!

solemn inlet
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šŸ‘

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U new to Honkai itself?

lament stump
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idk, probably

solemn inlet
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You are from Genshin Collab?

lament stump
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my fish cracked tho

lament stump
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e

solemn inlet
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Let's move the conversation to dms

hardy yew
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This looks like Kongming and Fuhua baby right?TeriRip

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Its like if HoS ate Kongmingteri_cursed

dusky trail
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is she a puppet type or something with those kind of knees?

hardy yew
dusky trail
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=3=

hardy yew
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She doesnt look like an SA ripoff does she?

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I can change some colors

dusky trail
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nah she is totally look like Kongming

hardy yew
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Fuck

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What do i change

dusky trail
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your is just lighter color

hardy yew
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How do i make her not a ripoff

dusky trail
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well you could give her a detachable sleeve and maybe something for her waist instead of bow knot

hardy yew
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I think her hair color should change

dusky trail
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you can also give her a ponytail with bun instead of long hair with bang tied to the back

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or even side knot instead of front one

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plenty of option to change it so it won't look the same but still keep the same feel~

hardy yew
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Is she not kongming ripoff now

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I took design elements from Empreaya too

dusky trail
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well it certainly doesn't help when her thingy look like Kongming's harp

hardy yew
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Oh

dusky trail
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if you show that to anyone they will instantly think about Kongming

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maybe instead of a straight line like the harp's string

onyx breach
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can you not tell?

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šŸ˜•

hardy yew
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Is this….less kongming

frank sundial
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I think it’s pretty amazing and good money too since vtubing has been trending and the community will grow even bigger later

dusky trail
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ya she almost look like Ayaka + Kokomi now

onyx breach
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if you want to get rid of kongming elements, first thing to change is the color theme

hardy yew
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I mean….I really wanna keep an air theme

onyx breach
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get creative then

dusky trail
hardy yew
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I guess i should just scrap her design

dusky trail
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you could try different kind of green

hardy yew
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Would look too much like a tree theme but ill try

dusky trail
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well just try out various layer of color and see which one look good

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that say, she leaning more into water type than air theme

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with the way you use the color + the pattern on the clothe also give off more bubble - water feel

lone wagon
# dusky trail

This is feom world flipper shes she's air element right?

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World flipper has really good character designs dor air types

dusky trail
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i don't play World flipper, i just like her for her "body"

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so i just store some "reference" as usual

lone wagon
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Oh her

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She's a useless 5* for sure

dusky trail
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that tan skin though~

lone wagon
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I think the one that looks like the most aired themed atm is celty

hardy yew
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Hmmhmgnhm

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Its not like i want her to look completely different from kongming i guess

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I want her to look kongming inspired, but not a ripoff

lone wagon
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Oh

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Then this would be useless

dusky trail
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legs

lone wagon
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This is celtie, but shes nothing like how you want

dusky trail
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well if you stuck, just look at various design to see what you can combine

hardy yew
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I guess i should change the skirt color

lone wagon
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But celtie gives a really air element vibe

dusky trail
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not just from the character you "inspired" from

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but also from other design too

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like those with similar design theme

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or even just similar outfit design

hardy yew
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YES YES FUXI

lone wagon
hardy yew
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Im gonna use fuxi hair

lone wagon
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What about changing rhe clothes?

hardy yew
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Oh, shes pretty chinese inspired so id want to keep the hanfu

lone wagon
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I think this one suits your design more. Something elegant would look good on her

dusky trail
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delicious pelvic curtain

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so ya, if you stuck, just look around to different kind of design

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you can just combine or adjust them into the similar design you want them to be

whole cloak
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imo the other designs look more japanese themed than cn and yours looks cn
sorta reminds me of kongming + kokomi + fuxi

hardy yew
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Should i settle with this?

hardy yew
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I also threw HoS in there

dusky trail
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is she just wearing sock without any footwear?

hardy yew
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Forgot to adjust the colors

dusky trail
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=3=

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but ya i think that is fine enough, the design may feel similar but you can always show the "personality" to give off a different feel

lament stump
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that a oc?

hardy yew
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Yes

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Quite satisfied with this already

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What’s kongming’s personality, so i dont make her too similar

lusty hazel
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somehow complicated to explain

lament stump
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@whole cloak how do i find the wanish point for bg?

lusty hazel
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your character looks like humanoid zither lament

lament stump
dusky trail
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go ask Sel or Delay for background tip

dusky trail
dusky trail
lament stump
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quick question

dusky trail
lament stump
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am I looking at here from above or below

lament stump
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i have no ide

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a

hardy yew
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Well kongming just seems like a theresa

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Is she?

graceful echo
dusky trail
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just like the rest of Captain-verse gang

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Kongming is a ruler so she is more mature than Theresa

graceful echo
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Ty

hardy yew
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Ive decided for a name for my oc anyways

lament stump
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don't watch ep 2

hardy yew
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Huixing

lament stump
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it's too hard

dusky trail
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while Theresa often do this...

graceful echo
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Ok

hardy yew
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Teri can technically buy alcohol and drive butMeiStare

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If you had no idea who she was, Would you believe her if she told you she was 47

dusky trail
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they also often use this kind of angle to make Kongming feel taller

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and so we have thing like this

hardy yew
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Kongming seems like a tease

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I could make Huixing more of a clueless type of person

dusky trail
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well your char does have that "ara~ ara~" feel of her

lament stump
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okayyyy

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it has an okay feel to it

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I'll add a cat here as well

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I hope I'm not too ambitious with that cat

zealous pasture
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1st thing I realize

dusky trail
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it is a drawing style of "no panties?"

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it is when you draw character in a way make you question if she even wear anything at all

zealous pasture
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well O..O look at the angle

zealous pasture
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oh well nvm

lusty breach
dusky trail
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is there a panties there~ you don't know~~

zealous pasture
dusky trail
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well you can always see it in-game

zealous pasture
dusky trail
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as whenever you use QTE to summon her, it pretty much in full view

zealous pasture
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yup O O my eyes go bigger at that time

graceful echo
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I think i should stop my drawing hobbies....

lament stump
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stop if you think you're not up for it

graceful echo
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Ok

lament stump
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if yo think you could do it

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then

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prectice

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just watching vids ain't gonna help

graceful echo
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Im alr practice it many times... But yeah...

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Its just make me stressed..m

lament stump
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if it's making you stressed cuz you wanna do it but can't then do it even more

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if it's just annoying to you

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pls stop

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okay I'm done with bg

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time to find ref of threes cat running man and yea

zealous pasture
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gambare owo

lusty hazel
lament stump
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ye

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i gave up on dude in bg idea

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too hard for me to draw some dude running

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anyone has experiance with drawing cats?

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they hard?

dusky trail
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super easy thou

lament stump
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aigh

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t

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she too big too small or something?

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and yes all cats are she to me

graceful echo
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Ok i try it again.... Is it good?

lament stump
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fuck no

graceful echo
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;_;

lament stump
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don't worry i have a vid for that

graceful echo
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Ok ill try it again

lament stump
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IT WILL HELP SOOO MCUH

graceful echo
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Rlly?

dusky trail
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the eyes look like it those are hole... not eyes

graceful echo
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._.

lament stump
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it helpssssssssss

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so much

graceful echo
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Damn...

lament stump
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listen to his every word

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and then

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try it your self

graceful echo
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Ok...

lament stump
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i just learned this not to long ago

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it's amazinggg

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okay bg doneeeeeeee

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@dusky trail some anime girl resting face reference?

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all i found are not resting but bored faces

dusky trail
lament stump
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hm

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no

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I'll look some more but thanks

graceful echo
lament stump
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weird but way better

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no practice it more

graceful echo
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?

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No practice it more?

lament stump
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now

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I have done a lot too

graceful echo
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Oh ok

lament stump
lament stump
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face ok?

dusky trail
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she looks dead again

lament stump
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bruh

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how

dusky trail
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because the face and the body don't seem like they fit with each other

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so your character aways have this "what am i even doing here" look

lament stump
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but thoes the face look ok

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when you don't look at the body

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mabye something like this

graceful echo
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Ok im alr complete it and yeah.... Its weird at the red mark

lament stump
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cuz your jaw line is too big

lament stump
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jaw line goes a little under that nose like

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your's is fucking huge

graceful echo
lament stump
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jawline goes just a little under green line

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@graceful echo

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thoes 2 lines should be the same lenght

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that's why your jaw is so big

graceful echo
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Ouh

lament stump
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so jawline goes a lil under nose line

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and jaw is same lenght as that line

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your plane is also too small

graceful echo
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What plane

lament stump
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it's 2/3 of the circle

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marc said it

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pay attention!

graceful echo
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Ok... Ill watch it tomorrow when im not sleepy

lament stump
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okay gn

quiet nebula
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working on finishing Mobius, if anyone has some criticism that could help i wouldn’t mind . šŸ™‚

shadow nebula
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It looks good and you render very well but make the crown symmetrical and make her hands smaller since they are much too big

quiet nebula
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Thank you, i’m still working on improving hands so this helped a lot.

dusky trail
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the pinky also oddly long

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you can look at the left pinky compare to the right one

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her right hand also looks like you just force it to show all 4 fingers

shadow nebula
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Of course. For measurement, if she were to put her hand flat on her face it should go from her chin too a little above her eye brows. This varies amongst people a bit but thats the general rule. I love her face tho

dusky trail
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and also rather too high compare to the knuckle of the rest of the hand

quiet nebula
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Thank you, both of you, i’ll try to improve on that now šŸ˜„

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Ur right tho the hands are a bit odd lmao

lament stump
shadow nebula
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Can’t wait to see the finished piece

dusky trail
frank sundial
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you are very skilled

dusky trail
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so you can see those two fingers are really off the base

quiet nebula
frank sundial
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but one thing that bothers me but i could be wrong

dusky trail
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the lastly, i guess the crown would create some shade on the hair

frank sundial
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if she rest her head on her hands, wouldn't she be leaning and perhaps we may see her shoulders a little?

lament stump
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it the light source in front?

frank sundial
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which may part her hair a little

quiet nebula
dusky trail
lament stump
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it's a weak light i assume

frank sundial
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yes

quiet nebula
lament stump
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dim or how do you spell it

dusky trail
frank sundial
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ah I see but I just want to point out from my perspective it would rather seem someone else is helping resting her head or someone lifting her head

quiet nebula
frank sundial
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but other than that and the others suggestion, you are very good

dusky trail
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because of the length of the neck and the non-existent shoulder make it looks super long

shadow nebula
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Its fine as it is. Mobius has a lot of hair and shoulders being covered like that is pretty normal

quiet nebula
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thanks everyone, i’m gonna go work on this more now

lament stump
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have fun

dusky trail
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to not create a weird illusion of her head being rip out off her neck

frank sundial
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even if she has lots of hair enough to cover, her arms would feel a little too long if I were to draw red lines to draw her upper body to the same position of her arms

dusky trail
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though there also no line to make the hair seem to be in front of the body either

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all the hair line just make it seem to be the inner hair one

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so the hair covered the shoulder could be use if there are more lineart along with the shading make them slightly brighter than the rest of the hair

ruby yoke
lament stump
onyx breach
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what expression are you trying to do?

shadow nebula
# lament stump siph do you have any opinion on this face

You’re missing the back of the head. You should make a clear distinction of where the mandible is, where it curves up, and where it ends. Mouth will typically sit a little above but almost in line with where the mandible curves up into the the cheek bones. So you’re mouth is too low. The eyes and eyebrows are sitting on two different levels and are at different angles. Inner corners of the eyes will always line up together and so will the outer corners.

lament stump
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no ide how to do that

lament stump
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idk how to fraze that

shadow nebula
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You didn’t draw it

lament stump
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i did it in lumine head step

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I just removed where it is

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but I'll redo the whole head

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be back in like 10min

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@onyx breach do you mabye have a ref for "she looks ate you with a soft smile as you are tottaly care free in this world" face

onyx breach
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hmm

shadow nebula
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You will see a bit of the back of the head but as you currently drew it you just have the face portion

lament stump
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alr time to redo it

onyx breach
lament stump
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no that's you aren't care free cuz she about to die while she doesn't slightly smile at you

onyx breach
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that sentene oesnt make sense

dusky trail
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it just Aki's depress girl fetish as usual

lament stump
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@shadow nebula

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boom!

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got it?

onyx breach
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like this?

lament stump
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oh yea that's good ty

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no ide how to angle it

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to fit my hea

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d

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but i will try

onyx breach
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reverse this image and itll fit your face

lament stump
onyx breach
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yup

lament stump
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ok it does...

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how

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wtf

whole cloak
lament stump
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sel

whole cloak
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wrong at

lament stump
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we ain't on arms yetttt

whole cloak
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wait right at
ohh

lament stump
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what's wrong witht he face

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i can't see it

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but i think that something is

plain bane
#

The spacing between eyes looks a bot odd to me, also how the left eye ||our side|| looks like it's not affected tye 3rd point perspective?

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Whole the rest of your head is?

lament stump
plain bane
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One of her eyes looks weird

lament stump
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ahh

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:(((

dusky trail
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it just look like she is looking down

plain bane
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Visualise

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At least what I'm thinking

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I think it would be beneficial for you to place the ears in before you draw the eyes

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Then you can line them up properly

shadow nebula
lament stump
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weird now?

plain bane
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It still looks a bit wide HoVLoading if that's the word for it

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Someone save me from my own tiny vocabulary

lament stump
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spacing between eyes