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void trench
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Darn

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Making a short fic

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frank rose
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so ranting about fic ideas

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any of the todoroki kids match up just about perfectly with one of my fav characters: Cinders

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in Cinders' Song, she says "When I was a little girl, my mother always told me
“Someday your prince will come, my love”
But as I grew, I knew it was a princess who would hold me"

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so yuri basically

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i will not name any ships but

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endeavor telling them that they'll marry the opposite gender, and then them growing up to marry queerly

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"My world was left a-burning and my royal house a-bleeding
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My stepmother and sisters betrayed our world, conceding"

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literally todoroki kid referring to endeavor?

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ooooo i need to fic this

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rn

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literally buzzing

void trench
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Cause actually putting it into words can be hard asf.

cloud hemlock
void trench
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Oh that rat girl

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DAMN NATSUO WON

west lotus
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So I made an oc and could use help developing her further

Trixie valentine

American transfer student hero name carnival queen (quirk fear manipulation)

5'5 foot tall. scene aesthetic. permanent scary clown makeup crazy neon green hair. can preform any circus act professionally. hates the word freak

This is all I've came up with so far

cloud hemlock
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resources in pins u can check out

fallen pewter
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I'm in the middle of writing my fic.

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Present Mic dies because Kurogiri's portal closes on him and he snaps in two like gojo

cloud hemlock
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L

fading drum
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So theoretical idea for the Fic I'm working on; MC has healing powers, primarily it's worked on his own body so far so there has been no need to go to Recovery Girl at any point but at some point during training with All-Might, he discovered that he can externalise that power...which ends up making All-Might's previous injuries heal up.

Which on one hand makes All-Might overjoyed at the fact that he can remain in his prime form without the risk of deflating albeit without being at the level of strength he had before the injuries.

But it also made the MC pass out from the enormous amount of energy he unintentionally flowed through All-Might and was sworn to never EVER doing something that potentially risky since no one knows if it draws off of his own life force to rejuvenate someone to that extent.

untold thorn
fading drum
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though I'd say that to even it out, is that he can turn his deflated form into a alternate form in case he wants to blend into a crowd or avoid drawing attention, otherwise he could have a stamina cap that'll deflate him since he technically spent a lot of time having to manage between buff and deflated so a lot of this will be him training to better control

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cloud hemlock
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any drawbacks?

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void trench
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I think I'm gonna finish chapter 3 today

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Got five kudos in just two so that's nice.

cinder orchid
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So, I came up with an idea for a fic plot point after getting into the Cyberpunk franchise: Cybernetics meant to either augment Quirks or help with one thats use is damaged by injury.

Thing is, Mutant Quirks would be relatively easy (just have custom-made ones for their unique physiology), but Transformation and Emitter Quirks are a lot trickier. From that, I was thinking they'd harness the Quick Factor of the user in some way, such as by having the blood of a user flow through it like an organic body part to enable them to use their Quirk through the Cybernetic. That sound good or nah?

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I guess it also depends on whether the "Quirk factor" is more in the body part itself or the actual DNA of the person.

void trench
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Updated today

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cinder orchid
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cinder orchid
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Yeah, but still, the voice and lines sound way more like Bakugo. And what Denki does isn't really anything like going super Saiyan beyond superficial aspects.

void trench
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Imagine mha but Bakugo's voiced by Brian Drummond.

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I think I'd like him way more, not anything against both voice actors for him it's just Drummond is so good.

odd stag
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Well, hi guys

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I have a fanfic called Finish the Story

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The story is about Toshinori Midoriya, a 14 year old teenager who lost everyone and everything that he loved

And also the mankind was killed by an alien empire

So, he went to the past in order to get stronger and defeat this intergalatic empire

errant cosmos
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Anyone here happen to know Hiragana order (the japanese alphabet one might arrange a class seating chart with) pretty well?

analog violet
cloud hemlock
south iron
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Hi everybody.

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I'm creating a hero oc.

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What do you all think of the hero name 'Shyless' or "Shylese"? (Like shy-les)

cloud hemlock
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is there meaning behind it

void trench
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Just made up Shoji's origin:

Shoji was an amateur boxer in his home from 12 to 14 who constantly faced prejudice for his appearance, but he still won every fight even with only two arms. Him doing so well got him noticed along with a chance to try out at UA.

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6'0 and 200 pounds at 12 when the average is 5'7 for men in Japan.

errant cosmos
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Regardless tho I already got it figured out

cloud hemlock
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:.|:;

void trench
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I'm American so I have a head start

slim epoch
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Artist and writers!!!
I dare you to crate a alternative Universe off My Hero Academia in your countries!!! >:3
you´ll have to do:
2 or 3 studentes 🏫
3 pro heros 🦸🏻
and 2 villains 🦹🏻‍♂️ !"!

analog violet
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Wdym

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Like change their nationality??

cloud hemlock
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alt universe or just different location?

scarlet pollen
west lotus
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Am I lazy for making my ocs quirk fear toxin and laughing gas?

cloud hemlock
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i mean if its just directly ripped from batman and thats it then maybe

west lotus
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The difference i tried to make for fear toxin was that its a gas instead of a liquid but its still very similar because ot causes hallucinations and paralyzed but she can also control the intensity in 10% intervals. 10% is like anxiety. 50% is mild hallucinations and no paralysis. 100% is full hallucinations and paralyzed

idle hinge
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How it feels already having 32 chapters outlined and the scenes + interactions all planned out but you can’t sit down and write the full chapter for shit 🥀 💔

round fox
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And how long

analog violet
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What if there was a Quirk that stole happiness from others?

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Like they stole dopamine from people

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Aka how Dementors from HP work

cloud hemlock
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reverse ms joke or smiley

analog violet
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Exactly

slim epoch
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Just the profiles

round fox
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How long

fluid belfry
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@lone plover @unkempt quiver @vague adder @steady raptor

I don’t care if you don’t care but if you do care here’s my COMPLETED oc info

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17_kt4T39bk__JGTQhPxJUwDnGOg89dDMuNr6K0MwHgY/edit?usp=drivesdk

Google Docs
Saruhashi Hideki: MHA OC Sheet

Saruhashi Hideki Saruhashi Hideki ( 猿橋 秀樹 ) also known as The Swinging Hero: Simian ( スウィンギング・ヒーロー：サイミアン ) B-Tier hero and Shiketsu High School Alumnus On Field, Defense/Rescue specialist After an irreversible injury in the Final War, Saruhashi retires from his hero position and beco...

cloud hemlock
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tryna contact the creator

steady raptor
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analog violet
fluid belfry
analog violet
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Andy you're my opp now

heavy forum
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Few op quirks incoming

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Quirk #1. Earth/Volcanic Embodiment

Quirk Name: Volcanic Embodiment
Quirk Type: Emitter
Quirk Description: The holder of Volcanic Embodiment has the ability to do Geo-Thermalkinesis and Geokinesis
Quirk Drawback: The quirk user are still affected by the heat they produce

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I didn't see a need to make it a long quirk description and quirk drawback when it's simple enough

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Quirk #2. Ocean Embodiment

Quirk Name: Ocean Embodiment
Quirk Type: Mutant
Quirk Description: The quirk users body is entirely made up of water, although they can solidify into a human at will, Holders of Ocean Embodiment become the embodiment of the ocean itself, meaing they have access to Water Manipulation and Ocean manipulation
Quirk Drawback: Every single accident that happens at sea, the quirk user feels, also if they are not careful they might cause a island to get flooded

fading drum
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hear me out, you think that AFO would make a separate group of villains as a backup in case Shigaraki proves to be too much of either a lost cause or unwilling?

heavy forum
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From what I seen in S7 is that All For One had thought very well about his plans

fading drum
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cool, then my plans to make Izuku start his own Gang works

heavy forum
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you might gotta shorten it and break it up

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as that is a text wall

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which is against the rules

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just a heads up

fading drum
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Thanks, but I've got a set of Quirks plus double ups as AFO's "Gift" to a group of anarchists called the Ba Mo (Eight Demons), see if these work

Fire: Izuku Midoriya/Huǒlóng
Quirk: Fire Eater, a combination of Telekinesis and Fire breathing through Consumption), Dragon Physiology through AFO’s Gift
Role: Leader
Originally; Izuku Midoriya wandered the streets as a vigilante in the same manner as Stain but once he saw his former friend again, he emphasised that he was doing good in a way that All-Might or the Heroes couldn’t: By targeting known criminals and reducing them into ash piles, once he caught the Hero-Killer saving Kenshi, his mental state spiraled and he ended up as a prime target for All For One and his manipulations.

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Sky: Tiānkōng xuánwō
Quirk: Twister (Tornado generation and Manipulation), Vacuum generation (Gift from AFO)

Moon: Yuè mó
Quirk: Nothingness (A Sensory Deprivation Quirk), Irukandji (Fear Inducement)

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Thunder: Léi mó
Quirk: Thunder (A Quirk that revolves specifically around the concussive force of thunder)
This Quirk allows it’s user to carry the sheer impact of an explosion, its shockwaves displacing air with enough intensity to send opponents flying, fracture bones, and leave devastating craters in the environment. Unlike mere sound waves, the shockwaves they create behave like solid walls of force, slamming into anything in their path with enough intensity to crack stone, shatter metal, and rip trees from their roots. When unleashed at close range, these bursts can knock the air from an opponent’s lungs, disorient them with sheer pressure, or even render them unconscious through sudden, overwhelming force.

Earth: Daisuke Yoshiyasu/De mó
Quirk: Bone Shot (Firing Bone Bullets from the fingertips)

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Mountain: Shān mó
Quirk: Weight Distribution (A Gravity Field Quirk)

Wind: Fēngmó
Quirk: Wind Blade

Water: Shuǐ mó
Quirk: State Control (A Quirk that freely manipulates the state of a liquid to freeze or boil)

void trench
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Another update

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cloud hemlock
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more like rip them apart

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cloud hemlock
fading drum
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that’s probably where I was going with since Electricity Quirks tend to be more common so I figured “Why not Thunder?”

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scarlet pollen
fading drum
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again, Itook the power from a wiki and am tailoring it to fit properly

still blaze
nova oak
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Name:

kaito ronin

Powers: Invincibility and gunslinging (which is the power of transforming a weapon into any weapon even a nuke, it’s a power I made up)

Personality: chill, opposite of Bakugo, he’s also helpful and really know how to make a gloomy room into vibrant vibes

Looks: Black balaclava and orange tinted tactical goggles with dual pvs-31s , under the mask is green eyes, side fade haircut and a tiny scar on the nose

Relationships: chill with everyone in the school, doesn’t know that Mina has a crush on him.

Height: 6’5

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This is him btw

coral bramble
charred violet
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lone plover
charred violet
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ok wait lemme look at these

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and cook up

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sum 4 u

coral bramble
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nishihara isn’t completely finished tho 😔

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YAYYYY TY GUYZ

nova oak
cloud hemlock
errant cosmos
charred violet
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The user moves objects freely with telekinesis while simultaneously shaping raw psionic energy into solid constructs (blades, cages, spikes, hammers) to hit or trap enemies.

cloud hemlock
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what limits or drawbacks

void trench
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Could heroes be sent as, "peacekeepers," to skirt around a potential violation of article nine?

acoustic oyster
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Oc 1 also known as Hypnos :

Quirk Drawback, You need to be holding a real gun to activate the quirk... yes, he's a vigilante

Quirk : Force someone to sleep for 4 hours and it has a 5 hour cool down

Why he holds a gun...? oh that's if he wants to permanently put someone to sleep... someone unredeemable

also that's the only way his quirk activates, and it NEEDS to be a real gun, not nerf, paintball or airsoft or slingshot, it can be any gun but hypnos prefers SMG's or his own made weapon is dual-golden deagle pistoleros

... his second quirk... given to him by absorbing his brother in his mothers womb... is Instant healing, though the drawback is... he goes through the pain that he went through originally but tripled.

cloud hemlock
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the healing is p well balanced but idk about the sleep one

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requiring a gun is kinda arbitrary, and also has nothing to do with sleeping

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with how rare guns are in japan theyd probably never discover it

nova oak
# cloud hemlock any drawbacks, also how does he have 2 quirks

Well y’know how students of two power parents gets two powers combined into one well that’s the same but he’s a bit different you see his dad was a special forces sergeant in the actual Japanese special operations unit (forgot the name) so I thought since military involved guns it’ll be a good power for my character then his mom was a superhero with invincibility so she passed it down to her son

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Boom

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Also currently working on a fanfic

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Revolving my character but the genre is comedic

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Cause why the hell not

cloud hemlock
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normalize actually combining parent quirks instead of just giving the kid both separately fr

nova oak
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Also I found the actual name for the arm info guns

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*into

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It’s called Gun manipulation

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Well my oc, my rules fr fr

void trench
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I keep forgetting to post my updates

sonic zealot
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its (Hero Name: Crimson Lace) Class: 1-A, U.A. High School Quirk: Hemochrysalis (Bug Blood Manipulation) 🧬 Quirk: Hemochrysalis Akari can manipulate the blood of insects—especially hemolymph, the fluid that acts like blood in bugs. She maintains a colony of specialized insects inside her costume, each bred for unique traits (venomous, explosive, adhesive, etc.). By syncing with their hemolymph, she can: Control their movement like a hive mind. Harden bug blood into armor or weapons. Use bug blood to form temporary constructs (wings, shields, traps). Her own blood has insect DNA, allowing her to communicate with bugs and survive venom. 🧛 Appearance: Her hero costume resembles a gothic e.

gaunt rain
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It may sound a little crazy, but I've been creating this for a couple of months.

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Name:Jere Vladimir Cabrañez Conuses

Quirk:All For Existence

Parents:
Yahvé Moussa Exaltus Seor (Mother)
Vladet Vladimir Monic Impire (Father)

Context:The character is the creator of absolutely everything that can be called existence, he is called God so to speak, he is the creator of One For All giving the quirk to Yiochi Shigaraki In a sphere while he was watching what was happening, after a while he went to the world where he had left One For All, he materialized in human form while visiting the world getting to know the UA there.

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(I warn you that this is only the beginning of the character, there are still details to refine since I haven't seen the anime yet, but I will give shape to the character...be clear that it has too much Lore)

scarlet pollen
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This is the 15th god I've seen here today

gaunt rain
scarlet pollen
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So a god

gaunt rain
scarlet pollen
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"Creator of absolutely everything that can be callef existence"

gaunt rain
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Aside from the fact that its story is completely different, having to adapt to the canon of the series

scarlet pollen
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"He is called God so to speak"

gaunt rain
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You can call it that, I repeat, but it is totally different, it is not the typical glitch that wants to rule the whole world and have them be its slaves.

scarlet pollen
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I never claimed he wants to rule the whole world. Only that yeah, he's just a god.

gaunt rain
scarlet pollen
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So he is a god

gaunt rain
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I imagine the same

scarlet pollen
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Giving me mixed signals here

gaunt rain
gaunt rain
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I'll tell you the beginning later, but I need to know what opinions there are here (most people will say it's boring or they won't like it, but anyway, I accept that kind of thing too).

analog violet
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I think there lies two problems here

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Anything god-related put in a series that doesn't have anything to do with gods (like MHA) stands out too much and might put a sour taste in your readers' mouth

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And

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Whenever a godly character is to be written, the general audience won't be able to relate because they think that this character might've never went through the same experiences as they did unless they were written in the same vein as Superman

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Born as a God, raised as a human

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A third unseen problem might also be that anything god is probably the most dragged out trope in literature and is uninteresting

scarlet pollen
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And somehow I'd still prefer that shit you just said over any manwha I've had the misfortune of reading

gaunt rain
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In itself the character is divine but theoretically I try to make him as close to the canon as possible, meaning having weaknesses among other things, I know that in the world of MHA perhaps none of that exists.It would probably be boring but I try to stick to it as much as possible because you really realize where quirks come from or what sense it would make if you made a character the creator of that very thing.

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Thank you very much, what recommendation do you think I should put?

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Or what advice would you give me because this OC is just in process, it needs to be fine-tuned a lot, that is, polished until the stone is completely ready, do you understand?

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The character himself has control over everything but is totally limited, it's not like he uses an energy ball to destroy All Might in one shot, it's not like that, I have a metallic suit design For this character to make his quirk literally seem like nothing is existential so to speak

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He wasn't raised by humans, he just wants to be one of them and live any kind of adventure like any totally normal hero, that's his purpose.

analog violet
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This character sounds like they have toon force as a Quirk

gaunt rain
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What I mean is that this character keeps his identity as God hidden so that he seems like just another hero with weaknesses or being mortal, he really isn't, but I still believe Among absolutely everyone else he would be just a hero and a common character.

analog violet
gaunt rain
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Prototype:
(It's in Minecraft style because I could only do it there, but I can adapt it a little better)

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analog violet
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I think you could ask why the audience should even care about him, if he's like a literal God where he essentially created all of MHA starting with OFA

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Meaning he must've given it to Yoichi Shigaraki

gaunt rain
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Yeah

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It would be interesting (in my opinion) but that's why I'm considering what people say

analog violet
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Why care for a God that gave AFO a reason to terrorize his brother for his Quirk, yk

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Seems like he caused a really big problem and that he's in need of redemption

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If anyone knew they'd look at him and go "Where were you and why didn't you do anything?"

gaunt rain
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I must clarify that One For All left him in the world for the simple reason that he traveled through worlds to give ultimate power to each one, and seeing that in MHA it became chaos Due to the fight between villains and heroes, he would have to come to the world of MHA so that All For One does not fulfill his objective of stealing One For All because if these two combine, it could be a high power range.Isn't that right?

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analog violet
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Okay but why would he gift someone OFA if there's AFO

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And if he's omnipresent then that would mean he would've known that there would have been a AFO

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So he knew but still decided to give away OFA anyway

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analog violet
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And how was Yoichi given this mana

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Was it by him or did he obtain it magically

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analog violet
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No conflict since there's no AFO

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No AFO meaning no reason for a Symbol of Peace

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No Symbol of Peace meaning All Might wouldn't have a reason to be a hero

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There still would be heroes, All Might just wouldn't be one

gaunt rain
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The conflict

analog violet
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But then we have no reason to care about the OC

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As he's the one that tipped the domino

gaunt rain
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I'll make it easy, the character gives OFA to Yiochi, then he obtains it but he passes it from generation to generation until he reaches where it is already mentioned.

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And here it all starts because AFO wants to steal that power since it is a mana that belonged to an existential character.

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That could give him dominion

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Do you understand?

analog violet
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The question about why we, as the audience, should care about him is still left unanswered

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If anything it seems like the audience would just hate him

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Either hate him or not care about him as he's just a God that decided to give someone power yet not intervene

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analog violet
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Btw I'm not being negative here I'm like asking questions as the reader

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The reader should be challenged by the author

gaunt rain
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A debate in conclusion

analog violet
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Like rn you are challenging me by coming up with a OC who's pretty much God and that I'm digesting the idea by asking why should someone such as I care for a character like him

gaunt rain
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About that topic

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It's just a matter of fine-tuning it so people like it.

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And also be part of the canon without problem

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A big mistake of mine is that I don't have much knowledge about MHA, I know some things but from there what is manga or extra chapters well it is difficult to fit together pieces More apart from having decision how my character influences that moment

analog violet
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What if this character was like Galactus or Darkseid where it doesn't matter what iteration the story is in, it's still the same character

So like Jere Vladimir Cabrañez Conuses of something something is the same Jere Vladimir Cabrañez Conuses of MHA

gaunt rain
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I think that is one of the main reasons why I came here to see what opinion and criteria you have about this project of mine.

analog violet
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And it's not like "He's just another Galactus or Darkseid" no they're actually the same Galactus or Darkseid from the very beginning

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There is no multiple Galactus or Darkseids btw

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They're all the same character no matter what universe

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As there's only one of them

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analog violet
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I just did

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Both characters are Gods like this one

gaunt rain
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Oh

analog violet
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Mr. Mxyzptlk is also the same Mr. Mxyzptlk since conception and he's an Imp

gaunt rain
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Maybe it would be something like this

analog violet
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Why is why he knows a lot about Superman because he met different Supermen

coral bramble
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yall wanna see what i have so far of my submission for the new order role

analog violet
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What is it

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what is what

analog violet
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You submission

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ohhh

analog violet
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Like what do you have so far

coral bramble
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im writing a story using my mha ocs

gaunt rain
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@analog violet But what are you trying to say then, I mean, sorry if I'm ignorant or don't understand, but what's your point about what you said recently?

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analog violet
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Because where did mana come from

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You could say it came from Frieren

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Because that's fantasy

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Mana is a fantasy term btw

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So every single medieval fantasy series works with mana

gaunt rain
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Or it is also called that way because I really did not have the necessary mind to put a worthy name attached to it

analog violet
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Hey man I'm just the reader

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This is what a reader coming up with headcanons look like

analog violet
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This is how you entice a reader, this is like reading the back of a book to see the synopsis

gaunt rain
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@analog violet Could you help me with this character's topic?

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gaunt rain
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I can send you the full story since I only posted a fragment.

analog violet
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Again about the mana thing, readers are going to think it came from a fantasy realm

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So if you can it needs a different name to avoid confusion

gaunt rain
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Noted

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Thanks

nova oak
void trench
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1.5k hits

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I made it

severe scaffold
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I was thinking of making a girl MHA oc
I want her to be a specific based species though-I have a fox/kitsune oc, and I have an elf oc. I was thinking should I make, a monkey MHA oc? I’ve seen a lot of gacha monkey ocs and they are always adorable and have caught my attention, otherwise I was thinking a spider?-please ping me for if you respond with an opinion, I haven’t seen much spider ones before so that’s another thought.

cloud hemlock
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resources in pins u can check out

tight tangle
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I'm making a project of MHA called-

My Hero Academia: Heroes Next Door.

And It Technically Works Like An OVA / Movie And Takes Place Before The Actual Final War.
(I AM STILL PLANNING TO TAKE ON WHAT ARC / ERA!!) This Is The First Script And The Rest Is Dead, I Dont Have Anymore Ideas😭

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scarlet pollen
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You making a short movie?

tight tangle
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Its split into two parts.

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Heroes Next Door- This One- Is The First Part.

nova oak
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Sick

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I’m thinking of writing a mha college fanfiction, after I finished the show ofc 🙂

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It’ll take place 4 years after the events, the students of 1-A had sad news when unpacking their stuff at U.A. college

All might had died trying to protect the entire city from a villan nicknamed Decimator

analog violet
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Why would they go to a college question mark

nova oak
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Uhh to upgrade their powers as well

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To make them more powerful

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Logical

analog violet
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Okay you got a point there and it's def not cause of Shockwave ref

nova oak
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Ok

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Also

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It’s a great way to have a villan that’s very very evil more eviler than the devil

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The villan could have a gas mask, taller like 7’6 and his power is a rare one

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Repeater which is when he absorbs any heroes’ powers and kill them with it

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Characters

Ronin (my oc)

Mina ashido

Bakugo

Deku

Uraraka

Kirishima

Camie

Sato

Todoroki

Aizwaza

Present mic

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Villains:

decimator

Terx

Yuri

Xealt

Smotherer

And finally

The Nomu but stronger

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Plot

After all might’s death, the class of 1-A and others must plan out a plan to discover who is the decimator and who is responsible for other random hero deaths

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Title name

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MHA, Reckoning

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Rating for the book

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18+

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Since, gore, sus shit, language, violence, civilians getting murdered etc etc

cloud hemlock
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All For One^2

fading drum
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is there any good way to space out of time skip stuff so that it doesn’t all take place in a year? I’ve just about reached pre-USJ incident and want to try spacing stuff out

cloud hemlock
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add development for the other characters in between major events

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or do u mean the actual timing

fading drum
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actual timing, I wanna see if I can turn UA high school into UA academy that accepts you graduated once you’ve made it as a Pro-Hero (AKA get recognised)

fading drum
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like say after the USJ incident, Nezu takes it as a sign to say that Villains are stepping up so instead of acting like nothing happens, he tells the staff to dedicate a full years worth of training to better prepare other students for sudden attacks and as a result; 1A are disliked for having an already intense school schedule made worse by added drills, exercises and impromptu classes

cloud hemlock
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well if nezu locked down the school early then have to think about how the villains plans go without their interference

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like if they dont do sports fest then bakugo isnt kidnapped and afo doesnt learn about dekus existence, the nomu factory isnt destroyed, overhauls plan succeeds, etc

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ppl more or less agree it wouldve been better if the plot went for their whole 3 years of hs, but im not sure how long u want it to be with the academy thing

fading drum
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well, not so much locked down after UA but more of a “We’re gonna postpone the Sports festival by a year so you kids can start practicing how to be prepared for surprise Villain attacks”

During that year, I have plans for another group to start gaining traction on their own and vigilantes trying to muscle in on hero action

raven arch
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A question given that i'm new here

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Is this a place where i can yap about my MHA fic?

cloud hemlock
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yes

raven arch
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SWEEEETTT

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So, largest MHA server i know of, here i go!!!!

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Project: LEGACY is a VERY, VERY interesting prequel/sequel to the canon manga that doesn't take place in Mustafu, nor in JAPAN, for that matter

Instead, the story follows the trials and tribulations faced by the hero society of a fictional country known as LATORIA, or, to be more specific, an aspiring hero class belonging to the prestigous ROSANERA ACADEMY

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Before i begin talking about the fic itself, i'd like to ask a question to those who are listening:

Out of three possible topics which i will talk about regarding the fic, which one interests you the most:
The PLOT
The CHARACTERS
The SETTING

cloud hemlock
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characters ig

raven arch
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Alright, so

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Before i begin, i gotta inform you that the fic's still a heavy wip, so don't be surprised if a lot of characters don't have much to them

cloud hemlock
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templates in pins u can use

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and other resources

raven arch
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Also, the fic still isn't published yet

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Anyways

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Further dividing your selections, what GROUP of characters would you like to hear more about?:

  • Class D-1
  • Pro Heroes
  • Villains
cloud hemlock
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whoever the main is idk

raven arch
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That is the neat part

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Technically, PJ:L HAS no MC, and every member of the class will have at least some exposure in the spotlight

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And before you ask, the fic is planned to last for all four years of the in universe high school system, so i have enough time to do at least half of the class

cloud hemlock
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then whoever is most developed

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or ur fav

raven arch
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Or, alternatively

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Pick a number from 1-24, and i'll tell you the corresponding student's profile

cloud hemlock
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maybe u can just put them all on a google doc or smth and link that

raven arch
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Eh, i prefer explaining it personally

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Just doesn't have the right feel to it

cloud hemlock
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just wanto avoid making it too spammy

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when u reach lvl 5 u could create a thread for it here

raven arch
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Alright, if you wish, i could introduce the main cast to you in four "waves"

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So, in order to avoid spam, we'll be doing it like this: name six numbers from 1-24, and i'll tell you about their corresponding students

cloud hemlock
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i think his personality is decently compelling

cloud hemlock
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why put this here

void trench
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1k words

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Just moved for college so I might be a little slow since adjusting an alla that.

raven arch
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Oh yo congrats for successfully entering college

void trench
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Ty

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I am like 55 to 60 percent of the way through my longfic at the very least.

raven arch
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Aah lol awesome

lone plover
raven arch
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Anyways, reposting from above

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PROJECT: LEGACY is a very, VERY interesting BNHA fanfic that, unlike most of its ilk, doesn't take place in Mustafu, nor in JAPAN, for that matter

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Instead, the story, spread out over more than four in-universe years, follows the trials and tribulations faced by the hero society of a fictional country known as LATORIA, or to be more specific, a freshly admitted hero class in the prestigous ROSANERA ACADEMY

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To put it mildly, these 24 teenagers have what is quite possibly the most INSANE high school experience since the misadventures of Deku and co.

patent lava
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what else you got

raven arch
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Alright

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So

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What do you wanna hear about the project to start off with?

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The SETTING [which i reccomend to do first]
The PLOT
The CHARACTERS

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Do note that the fic is a wip, and not everything's gonna be very fleshed out

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Hello?

patent lava
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and then i wanna see the characters

raven arch
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Mhm, i will, just gotta afk to eat breakfest

patent lava
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my bad for the late response

patent lava
raven arch
patent lava
raven arch
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Anyways

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What would you like to hear about Latoria [as in, the country] first? There's A LOT of lore regarding it to the point where i can't even decide where to start

patent lava
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start with your fav thing about it

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or anything

raven arch
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Alright, guess i'll do it as if it were a wikipedia article

patent lava
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yeah

raven arch
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Latoria is a sovereign state located on the artificial landmass of the same name, which itself was built in the middle of the southern Pacific Ocean

The country has a population of more than 39 million souls, with a large percentage of them being immigrants due to the country's unique migration protocols and general isolationism from the rest of the world

It was formed in 2027 by a large group of people migrating from America with the intention of creating a "sanctuary" to hide from the chaos of the early Quirk era

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These are the most basic pieces of info regarding the country, and now i'll get into a bit more detail regarding everything

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The Latorian landmass is an artificial continent roughly the size of Australia that, as mentioned above, is located in the middle of the southern ocean [i just looked it up, and no, the southern ocean has nothing to do with the pacific so mb]

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It has no naturally occuring weather of its own, with the climate instead being artificially generated using a quartet of massive Quirk powered machinery known as the SHEETS, which are also responsible for keeping the landmass both invisible and intangible from the outside world

patent lava
raven arch
patent lava
patent lava
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Latoria is an EXTREMELY isolationist country that uses a unique set of DNA based identification cards to be tangible and visible to its citizens

patent lava
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A fucking unique set of dna based id, now why the FUCK is that so specific (keep going)

raven arch
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Actually wait

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I'm getting the lore mixed up

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If you wish to move to Latoria, you have to pass a very complicated evaluation process that lasts multiple YEARS in order to be given an identification card that allows you to access the country if it's scanned by a group of parameter drones on the border

patent lava
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It's way simpler than it seems, to put it bluntly

patent lava
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i see

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what else you made for this or is this all to it before switching to other stuff?

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yk the characters and shi

raven arch
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Oh, nonono

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I have a crapton of lore

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Wanna hear the full list of things i've developed?

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The country's government, economy, hero society, geographical regions, most important cities, legal system, immigration laws, military, electoral processes and a few other things

cloud hemlock
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again putting it all on a google doc would be good

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or reach lvl 5 and make a thread

patent lava
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we got politics in this thing😭

raven arch
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It should be noted that the fanfic was majorly remade from the ground up twice

patent lava
raven arch
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And that it will only be published as a collaborative effort with someone else

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Given that i SUCK at writing dialogue and such

patent lava
raven arch
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Wanna hear what i'm planning to do?

patent lava
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go on

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yes

raven arch
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I cook up a basic outline of the story, create a lot of worldbuilding, and then pitch it to a fanfic writer

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They'll do most of the cooking itself, while i explain my ideas regarding the story to them

patent lava
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but i see

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you got some nice stuff going on

raven arch
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Anyways, time to continue

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This time, i'll expand a bit more on Latoria's immigration protocols and WHY it's so appealing as a country

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But first, in order to properly understand both Latoria's harsh immigration policies and its isolationism, we gotta go back to the BEGINNING

patent lava
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Latoria as a country was founded on one single principal

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"DON'T LET THE WORLD BLEED ALL OVER YOU"

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The year was 2014, and the birth of the Glowing Baby heralded the public beginning of the Quirk phenomenon as well as the temporary downfall of society

patent lava
raven arch
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Governments, once mighty pillars of stability and order, became barely functioning wrecks locked in a constant fight with superpowered criminals and hostile vigilantes

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Countries that never saw the horrors of war descended into mindless anarchies where the strong ruled over the weak

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Countless people, both innocent and guilty, lost their families, homes and lives due to being given the power of gods

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The most corrupt of society, the ones who wished to destroy it, managed to cement themselves as nationally recognized symbols of terror

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And in the middle of all this mess was a certain PHEONIX NORTHWOOD

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Nix, as he commonly referred to himself as, was an average man living within the fallen USA who, to put it MILDLY, underwent the worst possible day in his ENTIRE LIFE

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His beloved daughter, Anastasia, had manifested a Meta Ability so powerful that she was kidnapped by a terrorist organization in order to be raised as a living weapon, all in the span of 6 hours

patent lava
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Okay that's actually foul as fuck why would you make him experience that

raven arch
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In retaliation for this, Nix had gathered every single one of his surviving family members to bring her back, all in the span of 6 hours

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Upon tracking the organization down, the Northwoods engaged in a brutal fight with the terrorists, which ended in the vast majority of their bloodline dying, all in the span of 6 hours

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And after crawling back to his house, Nix discovered that the terrorists had burnt it all down in retaliation for the men they've lost in the street fight, all in the span of 6 hours

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All in the span of 24 hours, Nix's life had been ruined

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He was forced to watch his own child being taken away by a hate group in order to be groomed into a killing machine

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He was forced to watch his family members perish one by one in a mindless crusade for vengance

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He was forced to watch his house, one which his late father built for him, burn into the ground as if it was nothing

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And, most damningly, he was forced to accept the fact that almost everyone and everything he had ever loved was GONE

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But, just like his namesake, the traumatic actions that occured on the fifth of May 2025 only made him STRONGER

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Instead of wallowing in misery over what happened, Nix swallowed an immensely hard pill and started wandering his ruined country as a vagabound

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And in his travels, he saw and met many people who had underwent experiences similar to his own

patent lava
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I swear if this isn't the mc i'll flame your ass got it

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cuz i've seen some shit like this on a side character

raven arch
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...PHEONIX DIED TWO HUNDRED YEARS AGO YOU DUMB DUMB-

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He isn't even mentioned in the main story that much, if at all

patent lava
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but still

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get out

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matter of fact hold on

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who is the mc

raven arch
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PJ:L has no proper MC and it really depends on the arc

patent lava
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Alright could be worse ig....

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keep going

raven arch
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However, instead of just moving on from them, Pheonix sought out to HELP them with their struggles, earning him many followers and genuine FRIENDS in the process

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Yes, it WAS difficult, yes, he had to sacrifice A LOT to achieve this, but in his heart, Pheonix had developed a dream after everything he went through and witnessed in his travels

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Ever since he was a child, Pheonix had grown up in a radically intense enviornment, where it was believed that every single thing you did mattered in the long term, and if you didn't do anything? You were fully responsible for any and all misfortunes that other people went through

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However, unlike most people his age, Pheonix DIDN'T want to get himself involved in the affairs of others, as he believed that some people will take advantage of that to use you for their own ends

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It was only when he grew up that he started to actively interfere when it came to other people, and only because of a wider, more complicated motivation

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By the end of his journey, Pheonix had gathered dozens of followers and accomplices to his side, and together, they sought to "escape" to a place where the horrors of the world around them will never need to bother them again

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A place where people can go to HEAL from the war torn communities which they ran away from

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A place that is hidden from the rest of the world

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A place without CONFLICT, a place without CRIME, a place without CORRUPTION

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A SANCTUARY for those who had lost everything in their lives

raven arch
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Anyways

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Given that even I'M starting to get bored of yapping about this, i'll speed stuff up from now on

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Pheonix, using the vast amount of influence he gained as a wanderer, started to travel the broken world in which he resided in so he could FIND this sanctuary

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And, after a bit of digging, he managed to get into contact with a struggling businessman who used his exceptionally versatile meta ability to create entire landmasses for various communities to settle in

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Pheonix and his followers used their life savings to pay the businessman to create an entire continent for them, which they slowly began colonizing as the birthplace of a nation

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The businessman, having joined this effort in order to save his skin from a bunch of people who wanted him dead, had begun hiring dozens of engineers, builders and scientists worldwide in order to create what we now know as the Sheets

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While Pheonix, his few remaining family members and his closest friends began forming the basis of a new country

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Fast forward a few years later, and Latoria is a partially recognized country with its own government, laws and economy

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After a LOT of growing pains that included a harsh enviornment [both geographical and geopolitical], a rising crime rate and an unstable economy, Latoria was fully recognized by the UN after the age of anarchy had officially ended

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And, in the present day, the country, while having an extremely high crime rate for a first world nation, is thriving

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Pheonix's dream and the centre of the Latorian constitution essentially amounts to "ensure that this land and its people are NEVER exposed to whatever awful things are happening in the outside world in order to prevent anyone from undergoing the same things we did "

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"Latoria is a place for people to live without the fear of war or losing everything"

patent lava
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Peak performance just for a piece of land

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ignore the pfp change

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this is really well written props for your work

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Have a rose for respect

raven arch
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Okay

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So

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Wanna hear about the characters now? I sorta speedran the last part so we can get to them now

patent lava
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if you want to go on

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i wanna hear

raven arch
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Okay, here i go

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Before i begin, however, lemme set the stage for you

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In Latoria, high school, and by extension hero education, lasts four years instead of three like in Japan, with the exact timeframe being from 9th to 12th grade

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Students are 14-15 when they start school, and 18 when they graduate [as Latoria's cutoff date is the 31st of May]

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Out of the [at LEAST] dozen hero schools operating across the country, the most prestigous and recognized one is ROSANERA ACADEMY

raven arch
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Located within Latoria's capital: Ivoris, this boarding school quickly became famous for producing some of the most well-known and powerful heroes in Latorian history, including the vast majority of the so-called FINEST GENERATION

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The school is unique in that it is a COMPLETELY hero orientated school, with recent governmental changes cementing this fact: Rosanera has four classes of 24 students each per year [96 students per year, 384 students in the school overall], with the main characters of our story being the new CLASS D-1

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Rosanera, in order to save money for training equipment, practices homerooms, with each class having a member of the staff as their head teacher

raven arch
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[Also, before i continue, i'd like to add that Latoria's multicultural in terms of populations, you can find almost anyone of any race there]

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Class D-1's homeroom teacher is the #40 hero of Latoria: HYPER GUNNER, and his class consists of:

Charlie Adler: HIVE MIND!
Salima Alsaadi: REMEDY!
Isabel Alvarez: RED REFLECT!
Levi Baruch: QUESTIONNAIRE!
Aspen Byrd: FRIDGE MAN!
Amber Clemente: HONEYCOMB!
Vincent Cornelius Jr: WALL KING!
Ravenna Esposito: LEONARDA!
Loirel Floquent: AUROMA!
Dominique Fontaine: BELLETTE!
Ivy Fontaine: GUARDNER!
Kuro Furukawa: MECHATARO!
Osama Huang: BUGABOO!
Ekval King: MOTHMAN!
Vukan Lebedev: RADIOHEAD!
Jorinde Nachtnebel: CANDY QUEEN!
Penny D. Northwood: CROSS OF JUDGEMENT!
Carlo Prince: CARBIDE!
Aiman Rafia: THUNDER SHARK!
Shogi Uhara: DULLAHAN!
Leon Vasillou: SOLAR CHAMPION!
Danielle Washington: PYROTHYST!
Calypso Xydis: STARSTRIKER!
Touji Yukiharu: SLICE!

raven arch
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Pick one of them, and i'll tell you some stuff regarding them

cyan fossil
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Does he have a radio for his head

raven arch
cyan fossil
raven arch
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His Quirk, Radiohead, is a mutant type that replaces his head with a metallic construct similar to a speaker, he can emit immensely powerful sonic screeches, connect himself to audio waves via built in bluetooth and play any video that's downloaded into him

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However, the alterations done to his vocal chords distort his voice so much that he's essentially mute

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Oh, also, he can use himself as an instrumental amplifier if one's plugged into him

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In fact, Class D-1 has a rock band, and he acts as Shogi's amplifier [he offered to help Penny too, she responded by slamming him into a wall]

void trench
raven arch
void trench
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Rivalry

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?

raven arch
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V.K's M.O is that he enjoys getting on people's nerves

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He'll find a way to troll Jiro

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If it fails, he'll try and be chill with her

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If it succeeds, he'll keep on doing it until she just stops reacting

raven arch
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anyways.

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anyone else interested in hearing about one of the D-1 students?

raven arch
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alright, so

fading breach
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Okay im hee

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here

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lord LOL

raven arch
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the character IS related to Project: LEGACY (my BNHA fanfic), but won't be that important of a character, at least for now

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i'm still mapping out where exactly they are going to be, whether i'll be using them in a sequel series or not, and so on

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But that's not the real reason i'm interested in talking with a person that has DID

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so, given that you're a system and all, what would you like to know about the character?

fading breach
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Ask away you wont offend me, I don't mind good faith questions.

Well DID usualyl forms in early childhood. So that's something that you'll want to stick to if you want to keep it accurate

raven arch
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yep

fading breach
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It forms because of something (often long term somethings) that happen before the brain has fully solidified the personality of the person

raven arch
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his DID formed when he was a toddler, and after one REALLY horrible experience

fading breach
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That's accurate! 🙂

raven arch
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long story short, he had to watch his own father get burned to death, and almost died himself, with him having to undertake extremely complicated surgery that lasted for DAYS

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not months

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DAYS

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DAYS

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aargh

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would that be enough of a traumatic experience to faciliate the formation of alters?

fading breach
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yep, yep, okay

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however, due to various psychic Quirks, the dozens of alters he begun developing were caught on quickly, and as a result of this, he has spent the vast majority of his life in therapy in an attempt to fuse his various personalities into more cohesive states

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and, by the present day, he has a grand total of three alters, two of which are at the front, and one which is dormant

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also

fading breach
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yep

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he definitely pushed for fusion as the system was REALLY unstable

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at LEAST a dozen initial alters, even more split up by triggers related to fire

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now, out of these three alters, which one would you like to hear first:

  • COOL, the STATE OF BEING
  • MIGHTY, the STATE OF PASSION
  • AEGIS, the STATE OF PROTECTION
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these are my nicknames for them

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and the whole "state of" thing is supposed to represent their role in the system

fading breach
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Just hit me with all of them LOL

raven arch
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alright, since they're still WIPs i'll simply rapid fire them

fading breach
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Sounds good 🙂

raven arch
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Cool is a laid back, somewhat timid alter who is essentially the OC's default state of being, essentially someone who takes the wheel most of the time, but isn't well suited for stuff that the other two alters can handle

void trench
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Theme song for Eijiro's quirk awakening

raven arch
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He often tends to be the voice of reason for the other two alters, and overall would have a fairly positive relationship with both of them

void trench
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Cool is capable of fully "talking" with Mighty, and is capable of hearing Aegis's inner thoughts

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Iirc alters recognize each other differently

fading breach
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Yeah so once you reach a state of fusion, it's likely that through therapy communication barriers will have been broken so they can talk to one another

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that's what has to happen it's common to not be able to at first. We had to work at it to be able to communicate.

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That's what I mean when I say functional multiplicity

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we've learned to communicate and work together

raven arch
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the main reason Aegis isn't as loud as the other two is because of his function in the system

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just gotta add that

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Cool, as mentioned above, is capable of "feeling" some of his thoughts, while Mighty is only capable of interacting with him when he's about to take the wheel

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afk leave your thoughts here

fading breach
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Different systems vary too so that could be a natural variation, too.

Not all of us will be the same. Some alters communicate better than others.

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Ping me when you get back :3

raven arch
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@fading breach

fading breach
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yep Im here :3

south iron
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Oh hi

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This channel active :o

raven arch
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alright, so

fading breach
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Mighty, to contrast with the more logical purpose that Cool fulfils, is a lot more...eccentric, to put it mildly

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his voice echoes with utter gusto, he behaves a lot more mannish than his go-with-the-flow counterpart, and he isn't afraid to show his true feelings towards something

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combine this with an array of weird mannerisms that he has, and you've got yourself the main EMOTIONAL aspect of the system, someone who can process and handle more intense emotional experiences, but isn't THE best person for day to day life

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interesting fact regarding this one specifically

fading breach
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That does happen, it is very common for certain alters to be emotional and unstable- it just depends. I'd say I am one of those, Bakugo definitely is. Aizawa is a caretaker and much more logical.

raven arch
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Mighty is also a very unique fictive

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with his personality being based off of a large variety of cartoon characters and pro heroes that the system saw as a small child

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including a video of ALL-MIGHT, of all people

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He initially didn't start off this way, as he's in fact the result of several different alters fusing into one

fading breach
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Haha I know several systems with Allmight alters. Aizawa's dating the one in our partner system.

That makes sense. It isn't unusual for someone that a person looks up to (like a hero) to become an alter especially a protector alter similar to what you describe.

raven arch
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yep

fading breach
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You could argue that's why our protectors are who they are (Alucard and Dabi) because they are both very powerful.

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and the brain said "this guy will keep us safe"

raven arch
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before Aegis properly formed, the alter who became Mighty was the system's main protective personality

fading breach
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Makes sense

raven arch
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in the present day, Mighty is awoken when the system feels immense emotions of any sort: joy, sadness, anger, you name it

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and, when he DOES take the wheel, it often takes at least a week or two for Cool to reemerge

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It just sort of happens naturally

fading breach
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Yeah thats how switches tend to be

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we can't control them

raven arch
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Though, given that the two can communicate with each other pretty well, schoolwork is a non issue for the system as a whole

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So, when Cool DOES reawaken

fading breach
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that makes sense since they have fused and worked in therapy. they've broken the amnesia and communication barriers down most likely

raven arch
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he often has a general idea of what exactly happened while Mighty was in charge

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however, given that Mighty's...honestly a bit overdramatic, he MIGHT be exaggerating

fading breach
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hahha yeah, that can happen. jusy like with "regular' people we're all different. Some are a little dramatic

raven arch
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as for the third and final alter, Aegis, he's...VERY, VERY interesting

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Aegis, compared to both Cool and Mighty (who were the products of large-scale fusions between the system's alters) has been relatively unchanged since he first split off

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this is primarily due to his function within the system, which is to protect himself from the traumatic memories that are caused by several notable triggers (fire, extremely bright lights while laying down, and a handful of other things)

fading breach
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he's a protector alter then. Makes sense.

raven arch
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compared to the friendly, somewhat snarky Cool, and the oddball that is Mighty, Aegis is much more serious and to the point

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and could even be described as somewhat of a jerk, to say the least

fading breach
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We have a few like that too LOL

A lot of the time protectors and persecutors can be a bit spicy but they're that way for a reason

raven arch
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he is much less considerate of what people around him think, tends to get ROYALLY pissed if you say something that triggers him, and is known to engage in questionable habits (such as drinking) in order to make the system feel better as a whole

fading breach
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yeah that's understandable

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and also common

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You did your research it sounds like

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you did a good job on this character :3

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...i actually didn't

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LOL

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well you did a good job anyway LOL

raven arch
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anyways, yeah

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Aegis is also a huge cynic, and has been noted to go on bitter rants about both himself and his fellow alters when talking to someone particularly close to him

fading breach
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he may be a persecutor too. worth looking that up if you think he could have a secondary role lol

raven arch
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yep, i'd definitely describe him as that

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he's the mind's attempt at calming the other two personalities until they can continue fronting the system

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the exact TIME he's manifested often depends on how triggering the event that forced him to awaken was, and if he remains active for particularly long, you could get a nice glimpse at his soft side

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the OC (i'm planning to potentially merge the concept with one of my older characters) is a pro hero, and when he's sent on very specific missions (such as fire emergencies or fire based Villains), Aegis is almost always on standby and ready to emerge in case Mighty (who does most of the hero work to begin with) gets triggered by the enviornment or the Villain

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ahh that makes sense 🙂

I think this character is a really cool idea

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void trench
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I have an idea that I think I need to run by other people first.

Jiro had a stalker in middle school. Reason she doesn't like perverts and is slightly abrasive.

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Nothing written yet but I wanna make sure this an alright idea to build on.

raven arch
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mhmmmm, interesting

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Project: LEGACY QnA

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i've officially made a thread for this!!!!

fading breach
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Sweet :3

fading drum
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I think I have an idea regarding some of the time skips for my fic

Basically he awakens not just the Immortality aspect after getting beaten to death by the USJ Nomu

After he wakes back up and sees a slightly clearer version of OFA’s vestiges, he pushes his powers into overdrive by healing as fast as the Nomu injures him until he finally uses a Smash for the first time…Eventually driving him into a coma due to his Quirk burning him out

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# void trench I have an idea that I think I need to run by other people first. Jiro had a st...

I mean, wdym by "alright"? It's a perfectly logical one, I think - there are a couple of sticking points, like the bit in canon where she gets upset that she's not considered super good-looking by her pervy classmates, but there's workarounds to that anyway (people can be complicated, much to say about Horikoshi's handling of those topics anyway, simply throw canon out of a window, etc.).
If you're moreso thinking about treating the topic with respect, the most common sticking points are probably people explicitly or implicitly blaming the stalking victim for the stalking itself, or the trauma that results. But it's not like it's a topic that only certain people should write about, or something, and compared to some other things it's actually not horribly touchy, either.

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@jaunty coral just read the strangest ~~ yet for some reason, funniest~~ mha crossover fanfic I’ve ever read

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wary harness
# wary harness <@637048142944272384> just read the strangest ~~ yet for some reason, funniest~~...

To sum up.

  • E102 Gamma enters the world of mha during Overhaul Arc.
  • Eri builds a nice and friendly relationship with the Gamma.
  • Gamma fucking murders Overhaul turning him into “Swiss Cheeze”, protects her, and takes her to McDonald’s while giving her a nice coat
  • The heroes and public committee loses their minds on how to stop Gamma (which is so damn funny to me)
  • Hawks gets roasted by robot dialogue
main junco
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are quirks regionally based? like fire quirks more common in places and stuff? i recall reading about this somewhere.

cloud hemlock
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never stated

main junco
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I was sure it was?

cloud hemlock
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fanmade worldbuilding i assume

raw flicker
frank rose
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wait i've seen fics where jason runs a jason todd hate acc what about dabi running a touya hate acc (and an endeavor hate acc ofc)

raven arch
blissful urchin
wanton python
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Okay take two. I was going to put the google doc in here but I haven’t finished it so here’s the next best thing: the doc on AO3!

It involves Hawks and one of my MHA OCs. I hope you can see it, let me know if there’s any issues.

If you could, please let me know if Hawks’ personality is in line with his canon personality, I’d really appreciate it! It might not be exactly the same but I haven’t seen the entire anime.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/68723376/chapters/177976261

Fallen Angel - Chapter 1 - FieryNix12 - 僕のヒーローアカデ...

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

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My quirk: Oblivion
Ability: allows the user to touch and think about what they want to turn into nothing

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In other words my quirk is basically nothingness

cloud hemlock
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limitations or drawbacks?

wary hound
fading drum
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Dang, y'all just gotta love people with the comments
Starts out with "I love this with what you're referencing."
To
"Romance isn't easy to write before it comes off a completely cheesy and unrealistic. And that's without taking Harem bs into consideration. So my suggestion is to keep any harem tropes out of this fic and either use them for another fanfiction in the future or wait until you're more experienced as a writer. All, he's 14 years old. The complete lack of his parents thus far is a little concerning. So be sure to remember that. Especially as he has to update his quirk registry in Japan."

And then just peaced out because I made this comment during the entrance exam
Iida: "You need to respect the other applicants because they work hard and you distract them."
MC: Aren't you technically distracting people more since you're standing up and making a scene?"

cloud hemlock
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is the harem romance in the room with us right now

fading drum
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Not even close tbf, at most it was Melissa pulling a "I know I kissed you, but can we forget about it and go back to being friends?"

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bond could be interesting, ruin is kinda just decay but weaker

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Do you guys like my Yeti Quirk

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analog violet
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Totally original btw

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Do not steal

digital crypt
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wow

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shi's handling of those topics anyway, simply throw canon out of a window, etc.).
If you're moreso thinking about treating the to

cloud hemlock
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what

olive dew
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guys i have a question

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Is copying lines from the manga as they are illegal?

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I would change them up, but they're just soo perfect and make my heart ache in a special way that I don't want to change them.

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But obviously if it's illegal then I'll have to change it up

cloud hemlock
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quoting lines is fine

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as long as u arent just ripping it for commercial gain or whatever

olive dew
wary harness
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From a year ago or two

hallow wraith
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Have you guys made any OC’s for ‘the number one hero’ of different countries? Like we’ve seen Japan’s number one hero (all might) and Americas number one (stars). Have you guys made any original ideas for a number one from a certain location?

cloud hemlock
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russian number 1 hero, hammer and sickle

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no development beyond the name to play off star and stripe

fading drum
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Is it bad that for a guy who becomes the immortal hero, it ends like the Incredible Hulk since I accidentally made fridge horror

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Imagine it; an Immortality Quirk that keeps someone alive even after everyone has been and gone until eventually you are left with this

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i mean thats one of the classic downsides of immortality

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inability to form meaningful relations since youll outlive them all

cloud hemlock
scarlet pollen
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Multiple immortals but there can be only one

fading drum
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I just imagine Nighteye using his Quirk to see into this kid's future and telling him that his future was going to be that, though that also hints in with Nighteye's visions not being 100% accurate as demonstrated with Deku

scarlet pollen
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Already knowing what the future is changes the future

drowsy kettle
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IIII HAVE A QUIRK IDEA

Quirk; "sleep deprivation"
The more sleep the user looses the more the area around them gets sluggish and adds tired debuffs
So like
Its somethjng like a debuff AOE quirk (???) But like
Its affecfed by no sleep
If user has 8 hrs of sleeps and has a stable sleep schedule everything around them will be ok
But the more they loose sleep the more everyone else feels sluggish, slow, and more fatigue

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Idk i dont do much ocs just needed to drop this

cloud hemlock
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p neat

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like sloshed but fatigue instead of drunkenness

drowsy kettle
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YEA THAT

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idk i think itd work well w a MLA oc

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Its meta right

cloud hemlock
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what

drowsy kettle
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I mean like

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Would it pair good with a oc thats in the mla..

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Yk...

cloud hemlock
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the indiscriminate aoe limits it a lot, but ig u could say it pairs with trumpet bc maybe the fatigue makes the ppl on their side more susceptible to incite while debuffing the enemy

heavy forum
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Now that I am looking back at this....I kinda like this quirk

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wasn't a half-bad idea

onyx hull
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I got a quirk idea. But it'd basicly just the venom fruit from one piece, but as a quirk. So the user can turn into venom and can create venom whenever they want

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I also got another quirk idea

idle hinge
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This guy was cool

onyx hull
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Turtle- user user can turn into a turtle, or they can just have a shell on their back like a shield for defense. When they see a turtle, they are stuck walking, swimming slowly and they have a giant defense buff. But when their human with a shell on their back, they get a small defense buff. The moves they have is where they can defend themself, launch smaller turtle shells at the enemy

onyx hull
# idle hinge This guy was cool

Yeah he was. He got fired after the impel down sec cause he let over 100 prisoners break our and escape I'm pretty sure. And Hannibal took the job of being the warden

idle hinge
onyx hull
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I'm honestly not sure. It might of been, but idk. I haven't read the manga in like a year

idle hinge
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I’mma wait till egghead wraps up in the anime before reading the manga ngl

onyx hull
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Alr

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I started reading the manga all the way up to like about the close to the end of dressrosa arc, then I just kinda forget to keep checking out the next volumes in my town and I just ended up forgetting what volume and chapter I left off on💀

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Once I figure out where I left off at, that's when I'm prob gonna try to read the manga again

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I feel like an untapped well of fanfic potential just has to be rise of the teenage mutant Ninja turtles. Not only do the turtles in general fit in the universe, finally having a chance to walk out on the surface without being seen as freaks, but specifically the 2018 rise of teenage mutant Ninja turtles version have mystic Powers as well as feats of speed, strength, and durabilities that would prove to be incredible forces within the MHA universe

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Not only that, but I've had a theory lately that perhaps shigraki's quirk wouldn't be able to decay hard light barriers, which happens to be Raph's power

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Not to mention the crank are absolutely terrifying. Did you know they can just straight up make anyone into a nomu?

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analog violet
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I like how the first few parts read like an OVA

fading oar
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Haha thank you

ember light
cloud hemlock
bold obsidian
deep sparrow
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Woah hello! I'm kind of new to this server. Learnt this is where we could talk about fan fiction ideas while posting ours.

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/60987157/chapters/162491077

After the incident a week prior, Class 1-A plans to stay out of trouble as much as possible or do something that counts as reckless. Unfortunately, Fate had other plans for them.

Underground Pro Hero Eraserhead, aka Aizawa Shouta, the homeroom teacher of students in Class 1-A at U.A. He's seen a lot of strange things in life. However, nothing could prepare him for what he walked into the 1-A heights alliance. Out of all the events that could have happened today, His students had to appear as furry brown rodents. With the Hero gala coming up soon and the first years presenting, things are not looking good.

Chipmunks Assemble! - Chapter 1 - Rhut2024 - 僕のヒーローア...

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

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@fading oar Thanks!

analog violet
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Struggling with writing something original

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It's either you have the skill for it or you don't

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But I know I have it I just haven't tapped into it yet

stray radish
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You know I just came up with a good quirk idea but I need literally anyone who wants to help me develop moves a d make it more animated accurate

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what is it

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Its called multi crossbow

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this is a emitter type quirk that allows the user to pick up any said item in the left hand and turn said item into a cross bow of the same material while the right hand will turn said item into a cross bow bolt that can be fired from said crossbow.

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I wrote this down earlier

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Basically anything held in the left hand say they hold dynamite it can be turned into a crossbow and anything fired from said crossbow will be shot with explosive force of dynamite

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But the right hand makes crossbow bolts outta any material say dynamite again the bow will explode on impact

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The limitation or drawback of the quirk is that your not immune to the material you use so if it's a dynamite crossbow it will explode and hurt the user

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That's all

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i get the idea of turning stuff into projectiles for various functions but what advantage is there to having the crossbow itself be made of other stuff

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imo u could just have it be turning things into special projectile bolts or whatever, and separately they wield a crossbow designed to launch them

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The material would take form and function of a crossbow no matter how flimsy it is

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Obviously paper wouldn't do anything

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But steel would and so on

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Say a idk let's get wild a lighter as a crossbow and a firework as a bolt the cross bow would ignite the fire work then launch it

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Plus the enemy could never really take your weapon

cloud hemlock
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u could just have a lot of that be adjustable on the crossbow, and even if the opponent takes it they cant use it since its built for nonstandard projectiles

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Maybe the left hand can change the type of crossbow

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Instead of material

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You could go from a hunting crossbow to a wristbow

cloud hemlock
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or let that be a drawback they have to be aware of, damaging the crossbow

stray radish
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Yhen there quirk would be useless

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You can't have constant crossbows on hand

cloud hemlock
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no it just requires them to strategize

stray radish
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I plan for the character to be flashy and dangerous

cloud hemlock
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makes it interesting

stray radish
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Also a villian

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stray radish
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Honestly a wrist bow might be the best option since they wouldn't have to hold it

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3 types on them a lancebow which is a large crossbow that you have to pull with both hands to load

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A hunting crossbow which is the basic one

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Then the wrist bow

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The small strap on bow that goes to your wrist

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Those could be tailored to be lighter material but stronger aswell

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Honestly a crossbow based quirk would fit well with most other quirks that can move fast

stray radish
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nah

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Alright

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ive p much said all i was thinking anyway

stray radish
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This but more simple

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And honestly there should be a quiver but maybe it has rods of various materials

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fervent bone
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Hii

deep sparrow
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Hello

cloud hemlock
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new writing event u should all take part !!

untold thorn
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Maybe this will be the one I finally submit

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Or try

scarlet pollen
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Self insert fic huh

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Sacrificing my dignity for that W smh

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http://wbnv.in/a/41jBxdb
http://wbnv.in/a/6cj7TtD
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/120103/catalyst-cross-lesio/chapter/2547224/ch-26-battle-of-truths-i
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/117329/ashtrim-directionless/chapter/2558509/ch-46-castle-of-origins-i

Webnovel.com
Ashtrim: Directionless

“The world’s a mystery. Always has been,” says a wanderer.He’s crossed cities, braved kingdoms, and chased the edge of maps—all to reach the places known only in whispers: the Willfall.But he’s not just chasing a myth. He’s chasing a question too.What gives people direction?Plagued by indecision, driven by wonder, the...

Royal Road
Ch. 26: Battle of Truths I - Catalyst Cross Lesio

His laugh echoed across the crossroad.
Silence renegaded from people’s peace within their self.
Anaphol’s hand rested atop the severed neck of Bulwark. His laughter was not contagious. Rather threatening. (...)

Royal Road
Ch. 46: Castle of Origins I - Ashtrim: Directionless

Feeling the cool shade caressing him, the wanderer looked up. The only thing he saw was a crystal black sky. Leagues upon leagues wide.
“Maybe it’s in leti-leagues,” he wondered aloud.
As if in agreement, (...)

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alrighty we're starting it

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wraith heron
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MinaThink do I want to do a self-insert writing

tropic cloud
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Does anyone know how long the piece of writing is supposed to be?

cloud hemlock
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2-30 pages

noble vigil
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Also, is it ok to use platforms such as ao3 or Wattpad to upload the fic? Bc with the Google docs ai policy I don't really want to write it there TogaBooo

scarlet pollen
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Me writing 30 pages worth of an elaborate rube goldberg ass plot that ends in Deku getting shot into space never to return

noble vigil
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LMAO

untold thorn
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As a self insert is there any guidelines to how crazy it can be? Or should it be more realistic like if you legitimately were in mha world?

ocean crown
ocean crown
untold thorn
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Aw man
That’s so boring

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I’d be deku type nerd with no one for all

ocean crown
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For the fanfic, how long does it have to be because I am halfway to the 2v2 villain versus hero fight

nimble otter
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For the self insert do I have to stay to the canon or can I like add non-canon ships and like not follow the storyline completely

ocean crown
nimble otter
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Is this good like I’m using they/them pronouns but I’m also using they for their parents so does it read alright

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I’m still working on the quirk where the user can excite their electrons just to figure out what it is capable of beyond light emission

noble vigil
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nimble otter
ornate zodiac
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What do you think would be better for a main character who happens to be a chaos gremlin? Personal gravitational pull shift, or electron excitation?

noble vigil
ocean crown
cloud hemlock
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if u want ig but it comes down to whether the team will finish reading it

drowsy kettle
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Quirk idea!!!

Engine
But the mufflers are placed on the back/spine
So like.. while tensei has engines on his arms and iida has engines on legs
This type of engine grants the user engines on their back

marsh wyvern
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so what will be the outcome if i tried for the event and for the rank on its own, what will that do for my writing project?

cloud hemlock
heavy forum
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Hm, what should I do for a quirk that has a similar concept to Giratina

cloud hemlock
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smth like phantom force pocket dimension idk

heavy forum
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Hm, welp I think i got a few ideals now

scarlet pollen
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Or something related to the distortion world

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Up becomes down. Down becomes up. 2 + 2 is 5. Beyond what we think we knew and yet works

cloud hemlock
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pocket dimension with non euclidean geometry

fading drum
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If Izuku decided to have a Vigilante arc in Hosu City during Stain's shenanigans, what point do you think that they would make the jump from Well-intentioned anti-Hero follower to just straight up villain

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Honestly, I'm not sure. In my own, I just handed him a gun and decided he's a villain now.

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Cause it wasn't that serious

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Unless there's an extreme circumstance, Deku's inhumane level of kindness makes it hard to just turn him full villain

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And yes, that level of kindness is inhumane

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Well, this is the synopsis without going into too much detail since it'd be a word wall

  1. Izuku and Middle School friend both get bullied by Bakugo
  2. Friend ends up in the hospital because of Bakugo taking his latest power play too far
  3. Friend ends up jumping in to save Bakugo alongside Izuku but the difference is that friend ends up awakening powers even though he knows he is quirkless
  4. All-Might notices this and decides to take friend under his wing to help him control his powers but reiterates to Izuku that being a Hero is more dangerous than he realises it to be and he can't in all good conscience let Izuku carry that thought when he can't fight back against villains with good intentions alone
  5. Izuku already has a budding resentment because he thinks that the friend lied to him or just was a friend out of pity for him and as a result, the culminated lashing out was to both All-Might and the friend
cloud hemlock
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could do smth like injustice superman type paragon villain, but most ppl just use it for power fantasy wish fulfillment

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this is currently how I've planned it out
Izuku in this version has the fused quirk of both his mom and dad which I basically made into a Dragonslayer (By taking Inko's attraction Quirk and Hizashi's Firebreathing Quirk, he can both breath fire and suck it up to eat), the idea is that Izuku comes across Stain and decides to follow Spinner's example and make an actual stand instead of just sulking

He forms a group with other people who have been rejected to make a gang/group to take on criminals

The Group gets noticed by Giran and get commissioned for taking on criminals (In actuality, Giran's using them to basically weed out welchers and competition) and eventually get the notice of All for One, the conversation then goes like this.

"I heard you hate Heroes, so how about I give you guys a little boost and in return, you do some jobs for me."

This then ties in to Overhaul and helping Shigaraki

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oh wait the darkness guy

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heavy forum
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Would the distortion world be a full on dimension or a pocket dimension?

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hmmmm...

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I mean if the quirk user can use their distortion right....they could probably manipulate energy and maybe gravity?

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Quirk Name: Distortion

Quirk Type: Emitter

Quirk Description: The quirk user of Distortion is granted a personal Pocket Dimension then can access at any time they wish as long as they are alive and conscious. The World of the pocket dimension seems to be distorted where all the laws of physics seems to not to apply, the quirk users body is also ever so slightly changed from the distortion caused by the quirk causing their sclera to be pitch black and have dark highlights in their hair

Quirk Drawback: one of the few drawbacks to distortion is that if the quirk user overuses their quirk they will be sucked into their dimensional plane, and be stuck there for a full hour while recovering from their body glitching

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I'll work on it more tomarrow

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Nice

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I have this idea in my head of an isekai mc who had a more postive view of the mha when living in the mha world understands the problems. life shattering event happens that changes his veiw and pushes him to be a villian in the league of villians , who hate all heroes and whose goal to rewire soceity entirely and have the league rule as shadow overlords . He is 16yr or 17yr and toga is a possible love intrest

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I am not fluent in english so I did have to use chatgpt to translate since google would not translate my whole thing

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Name: Shishigami
Hero Name: Radiant Fang
Quirk: Gamma Core (Emitter/Mutant Hybrid)

Appearance: Shishigami has a lean, broad-shouldered frame with faintly luminescent veins that glow greenish-violet when his quirk is active. His hair is jet-black streaked with neon accents near the tips, and his irises shimmer faintly like charged glass. His hero costume is a reinforced, sleek black suit with vented panels to release controlled gamma bursts and a lead-lined mantle to limit radiation leakage in civilian zones.

Quirk Description: Gamma Core allows Shishigami to generate and manipulate controlled gamma radiation from within his body. He can release this energy as focused beams capable of stunning or scorching opponents, or as concussive pulses that destabilize terrain and scatter enemies. By venting bursts of gamma energy beneath him, he achieves short-range flight, rapid dashes, or hovering for rescue operations and combat maneuvers.

Applications:

Gamma Blasts: High-intensity beams or rapid bursts to disable targets.

Radiokinetic Flight: Controlled propulsion for high-speed movement or evasive maneuvers.

Irradiated Field: Creates a localized gamma zone to deter enemies and disrupt electronics.

Radiant Surge: A concentrated pulse that knocks back all nearby foes, used as a last-resort technique.

Limitations: Prolonged emission causes cellular fatigue, nausea, and temporary quirk instability. His gamma output must be carefully managed to avoid collateral damage—hence his reliance on a regulated suit. Long-range output is limited, and his flight consumes the same energy reserve as his offensive blasts, forcing him to choose between mobility and power in extended engagements.

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cloud hemlock
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if it were shooting actual gamma radiation it would be more like the cancer ray

scarlet pollen
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The more sentences I write for the self insert event, the more I hate myself.

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Should I even bother with an OC self insert when I could just put myself into the story

cloud hemlock
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u can do that

scarlet pollen
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aight thanks

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powerscaling wiki 🤮

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Quirk Name: Distortion

Quirk Type: Emitter

Quirk Description: The quirk user of Distortion is granted a personal Pocket Dimension then can access at any time they wish as long as they are alive and conscious. The World of the pocket dimension seems to be distorted where all the laws of physics seems to not to apply, the quirk users body is also ever so slightly changed from the distortion caused by the quirk causing their sclera to be pitch black and have dark highlights in their hair, another side-effect from the distortion is the anti-energy coursing through the quirk users body, if trained enough they might be able to make anti-matter itself

Quirk Drawback: one of the few drawbacks to distortion is that if the quirk user overuses their quirk they will be sucked into their dimensional plane, and be stuck there for a full hour while recovering from their body glitching

heavy forum
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but seriously why is Garintina overpowered?

cloud hemlock
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bc lore wise its basically a deity

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I am wondering WHY arceus creating an anti-matter pokemon

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# charred violet You seem to be here a lot so I'll ask you, would telekensis be a cool quirk?

Depends on how you wanna implement it, afaik there are different ways you can make a telekinetic Quirk right now

I’ve done one that has Vectors (aka the invisible hands from Elfen Lied) which technically count as telekinesis but you also need to have costs to it

https://powerlisting.fandom.com/wiki/Telekinesis

Superpower Wiki
Telekinesis

The power to move, manipulate or otherwise interact with matter/energy without physical means. Sub-power of Psionics and Telekinesis Manipulation. Not to be confused with Vector Manipulation or...

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PFT, hilarious

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For reference to what I was talking about

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toaru accelerator is a better example of vector manipulation i think

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Vector is just the Quirk name, I basically just have the MC call it a telekinesis quirk

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One of the best animated fights I've watched

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I LOVE Glitchtale

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Not the creator

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Betty is my goat

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Gaster is my goat for the series

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well gaster, sans and frisk(kinda)

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Some of the worst maths I’ve seen on that site

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They’ll turn a punch that destroyed a house to actually be a multi-continental feat

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Or scale someone in a hypersonic verse to actually be 1472x MTFTL

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powerscaling logic
rock beats scissors
paper beats rock
therefore paper beats scissors

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Feats > Statements

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So in basic terms

Vector can make two pairs of invisible arms that can extend up to 15m initially and depending on the frequency they are, they get stronger:

  • Low: can go through objects without causing physical interference
  • Medium: lift and throw objects, disrupt blood vessels
  • High: slash through most material of low density, physical enough to carry liquid on surface
  • Extremely high: visible, a punch is enough to match one Bakugo Exploding palm

Drawbacks:
The higher the frequency means that the shorter that the range is
Exertion and overuse (Including lifting objects bigger than they are) will result in a nosebleed and eventually make them pass out due to the Quirk squeezing on their brain
A well timed hit to the head will cause the Quirk to spasm the arms or render them inert

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So far in the story, he's pulled Uraraka out of the rubble during the Entrance exam and teamed up with Hagakure to win against Todoroki

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Plus the fact that it's pretty damn entertaining if you just shut your brain off for a bit

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Okay I just have a couple more questions about the self insert, 1. can I have swearing and a couple mentions of @bus3 or no, 2. this wasn't really answered am I allowed to have non-canon ships in it , and 3. am I allowed to have friends help me just with Grammer and stuff like proper format cause I suck at that (I feel like I'm forgetting something so I might ask another question later)

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Tell me what yall think!

Quirk: BoneForge
Explanation: the user has the ability to manipulate there own bones within there body creating sharp constructs or stronger denser bones and can even break them to use as weapon but the downfall is this damages the user causing nerve damage and scars and muscle tears

(Would be powerful if teamed with a really good healing quirk and dangerous to people who can copy quirks)

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Tell me what yall think!

Quirk: Dustpyre
Explanation: the user can manipulate dust and or any form from very fine dirt and metal powder to anything ground down to fine dust this allows the user to weaponize it or use it for restraint agaisnt a enemy but the power and effectiveness depends on the type of dust used.

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Something non mha related (dw i’ll write that one down soon) that i want y’alls opinions on how it’s written so far

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Yeah uh

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Being legally blind has its downsides

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😭

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"Sigh starts crying"

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I can't help it

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That's how I see when you put the emoji down

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"You're like a @idle hinge, because * you * bring relief."

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linking a google doc is always preferred over textwall

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Quirk – Scourgeform

When he’s not transformed his canines are sharp peaking out just a bit whenever he talks.
Haurto’s quirk allows his body to undergo a brutal transformation, encasing him in a segmented black exoshell. His skin hardens into volcanic armor, his arms and hands now pincers sharper than a knife, jagged tail sprouts, ending in a crystalline stinger. In this form, he becomes a living fortress—immune to most physical harm and designed for sheer interception.
• Shell Armor: Deflects blades, bullets, and most elemental attacks.
• Pincers: Crush weapons, limbs, or restrain multiple foes.
• Tail: Pierces nearly any material and delivers crushing kinetic blows and paralyzing anything it comes into contact with
• Vision: Fractured, compound-like sight gives him 270° awareness.
• Finisher – Shellbreaker Drive: A full-body charge that drills through defenses, leaving shockwaves and craters.

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Burrow Instinct – (Base Form Ability while still human and not transformed)

Even without transforming, Haurto is built for underground traversal. His ridged hands, reinforced shoulders, and subsonic hearing and sight let him tunnel through packed earth within seconds. He can ambush from below, rescue allies in collapses, or silently trail beneath the prince. He often uses this to appear where no guard could reach in time.

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Appearance :

Haurto is an average height muscular man with razor sharp teeth, and unnervingly sharp, slit-pupiled eyes that glow a yellow-green like an insect’s.He has brown curly hair . His hands are broad and calloused, built for digging, with thick nails like natural blades. When he activates his Scourgeform, his body hardens into a segmented obsidian shell, his eyes fracturing into multi-faceted panes, mandible-like ridges framing his armored face, massive pincers erupt from his shoulders, and a spiked tail coils behind him—turning him into a living, insectoid fortress.

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Tell me what you guys think

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This was inspired a little bit from all might how he can go from scrawny man to basically Superman in 2 seconds

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# dense needle (I had to do it in a Doc cause it’s so long. I screenshotted it though so it’s e...

(Here’s the link to the Doc, I edited it some so it looks better/easier to read :] )
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10YIjvqKhc6OmcaT-0hSGSn0ezE5LGCTjqQ_EWTnU_-4/edit?usp=drivesdk

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Cinder Takami [Lore Writing - BackStory & Synopsis] (MHA)

Backstory (Early Stages - Young Child) along the outskirts of Fukuoka, Japan back on February 14th 20XX (22 years prior to the events before Chapter 430/431). a rather small mutated RedTailed Hawk had hatched from an egg that was laid in the forest nearby a home that seemed to be not well-kept, ...

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How would you guys fix Stars and Stripes quirk?
I feel like the limitations of her powers are really messy. Like her giving herself super strength, she says she can’t make herself as strong as all might but why? Couldn’t she just say ‘I am as strong as all might’ she knows her name better than anything else so there should be nothing limiting the strength of her effect. Her ability is reality warping but apparently she can’t make herself as strong as him and if the reason is something like her body needs to be naturally more tougher to grant that level of strength then couldn’t she just use the second commandment to reinforce her body then become as strong as him.
Could she not say ‘I am indestructible’ she can straight up erase air so it’s not just altering reality it’s defying physics.
I think Hori made her too OP without really thinking about it because he probably wrote her in the story just to kill her off so wasn’t thinking about needing actual tangible or understandable limitations to her power. Like even the name limitation part of her power is a bit iffy and had been shown to have ways around it.
But yeah if this power were to be kept in the story what would you do to make it on pair with all mights without being too OP.
Like the limits on how she can warp reality and maybe fixing up the knowing somethings name limit too.

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and make its effect more specific instead of 'whatever the hell i want' with arbitrary outcome strength, eg making herself strong but cant be stronger than allmight because reasons

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Does this Quirk feel like he read JJK one day and thought "What if I just incorporated this into the story?"

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This is probably the only Quirk that stood out in a bad way imo

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Actually I was watching jojo’s part 6 and felt some inspiration from pucci a bit. Specifically when he threw a frog at a guard and gave it the commandment to explode after flying 10 meters. Also because before that moment there was a fight talking about the effects of a removed atmosphere (and Stars and Stripes removed the atmosphere in her fight).

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I forget how fun writing OCs can be when you're not taking it seriously

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Just came up with the idea of a MHA Villain, who's referred as the Phantom Menace (Star Wars ref) and that his whole thing is that he's like a ghost from urban legend, where he is the result of hero failure

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It's obviously a guy with a paranormal themed Quirk but people who do believe in ghosts think he is one

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i wanna come up with a villain oc and i usually come up with a quirk first and go from there

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i dont have any quirk ideas tho

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Usually I base off MHA OCs on comics but I was watching Scooby Doo last night and thought "Wait, what if I just wrote a Scooby Doo monster in MHA"

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So the Phantom Menace is just a crook in a suit /ref

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yea fair