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which is actually really useful knowledge as an anime fan
Apparently
I also like swords
like this sword
Thats a nice one
Ye
oh fun fact about katanas :)
they're also illegal in japan outside of specific restrictions
Flat pommels a bit meh
huh alright
But its better than nothin
Like the fancier ones?
Well you typically want your pommel to be rounded
Ah
It's more surface area to hit with and it also tends to better balance out the blade
yeah iirc you cannot use them as actual weapons or props, they're generally allowed for historical value tho (again iirc)
The reason why some swords are too handed is because the blade makes the sword top-heavy
Love me a claymore
For something like a broadsword, that's where your pommel comes in
I too am murica
we are all murica
Intriguing
scythes are cool
Ehhhh
Scythes are cool aesthetically yess
Harvest scythes or war scythes
very very poor weapon
Ehhhh
all aura points
It’s an opinion
subjective
I dont care for scythes
all you
I've personally never seen the appeal
thats cool
big blade
ivy and i do tho
Greatswords have that too
main oc has a scythe, don’t use it much outside his main world
one of my favorite game characters uses a scythe
Being
everyone gets a weapon familiar on my main world, so he has a scythe
sorry to disappoint but irl war scythes looked much sadder than reaper scythes
yeahhh no reaper all the way
Elegant and funky axe
Rita from HI3
Ah
Genshin
Shoulda figured
They have a 3?
... they have like 12 games
When did Star Rail finish?
they ruined the war scythe by making it viable lmfao
Honkai Impact 3rd is their main game and first major game
12?!
also cool, the khopesh
HSR has Welt from HI3
You know what random weapon that I actually like that something made use of
That's what that's stupid thing is called
hey :(
I HATE FIGHTING TÝR WHEN HE USES THAT
don’t be rude to it
IT IS SO ANNOYING
Don't dish the khopesh bro
Ohh i'm not dissing the weapon
Khopeshs are awesome
why do you think people use it
I'm dissing the user
its name is khopesh and its my favorite short sword
as it should be
Not that
My personal favorite are those flamed ones
So, how Týr fights you when using those is, he inflicts the whole map with blindness effect, and you have to find the one tiny circle of light to be able to see anywhere
THIS IS GOD OF WAR
THE GAME WHERE ALL OF YOUR ATTACKS MOVE YOU
I think my favorite weapon OAT is either the bow or polearm
YOU HAVE A TWO FOOT RADIUS OF NO BLINDNESS TO FIGHT IN
Main 4 OCs weapons
Scythe
Broadsword
Staff
Revolver
DO YOU KNOW HOW ANNOYING IT IS TO DEAL WITH THAT
Bows are so elegant
IN THE WARS PART IS, HE USES IT AGAINST ME.ALL THE DANG TIME, EVEN THOUGH HE HAS FOUR WEAPONS HE CAN PICK FROM
Sureeee
Thats why I gave Chiyoko one
They also take insane upper body strength despite popular belief
The jump from staff to revolver is crazy
Bows are absolute beasts of a weapon 
It takes an incredible amount of strength for any of the big ones
lmao that’s the point :3
It annoys me when all the bow bois are lean and scraggly
Lean yes
scraggly? no
especially if they're constantly training
the revolver guy didn’t have his powers at birth, he had to integrate and let his body learn how to handle the magic
…and then he got his familiar! A gun.
...but...but Chi-Chi cute...
She a tall smol
you can be lean and strong so i have no issues with lean archers, unless it's an insanely heavy draw
I like the new image in my head that I have where she looks cute and adorable until she draws the bow and all her muscles become All Might shaded
This is Chiyoko (not 100% done)
Pretty good form there afaik too
cuz lean is just low body fat percentage (which is actually pretty common with archers iirc), but skinny is just low body weight
Yea I kinda used the wrong word
honestly i think you want a lean archer more than a big burly buff one LOL
muscles that are too big could be a hinderance just as much as not having any at all
when you want to just be your main oc
why?
For reference, Chiyoko is 6 ft tall (182.88 cm), 105lbs (48kg)
to human i mean
that’s very light
I figured but I can also answer lmfao
She's malnourished
Like assuming a decent draw weight that is so difficult to hold
thst girl is underweight af
Backstory shtuffs
im 5'7 and i weigh 118ish? and im malnourished
it's not so much it's hard to hold, it's more so they're calculating usually
Definitely more nourished than her
she should be way skinnier in that pic if shes 6 ft and 105
I mean it is pretty hard to hold a high weight and strenuous on your muscles
like skin and bones
I gave him too much aura I want that aura ffhahahdhfhhhh I need to cosplay hhhiikmmmhh
no muscle
Thats what he looks like??
Shit I was way off
goodnight
F, bye Ivy
…what was your guess?
Not that
or not
given he’s… also my pfp
that is true
but
usually archers train to be able to do that for the most part
THATS THE SAME GUY?
Fair
THATS WHAT I SAID
but yes
if you cant hold the draw weight you prolly shouldn't be fighting with that bow
his eyes are green under the mask
Also fair
two very different designs, one was for smth undertale related
Aight I can see it now
but not different enough as to be a separate character
Ive been told I need to turn down the trauma
I feel kinda ashamed to say idk how without ruining it
and never mind holding a bow actually...
uhh
ow
can we normalize researching body weights and what malnourishment does when creating a character 💀
Yeah I tried to do that for one character to specifically make her slightly underweight
I will admit, I was very half asleep and too locked in on the concept to focus on research
I… don’t know how to do body weights.
This too
I feel like the tail would also add a lot of weight would it not
Can… I maybe send my current measurements and get some suggestions?
I think I have, like… a lot.
I'd put her at 120 if you still want her to be underweight but strong enough to use a bow and get around without having severe health problems
Very simple, you search up "average body weight for X year old gender"
Would that still fit in with her backstory
a 6ft woman should be around 140-180ish for healthy weight
given that she gets fed over time assumedly
During her time with Toshinori, yeh
takes a couple searches man
yes, considering she's been fed a healthy amount once found
so
Noted, thx
she can be 105 early on, but as soon as she's given a proper diet and meal plan, that weight is gonna shoot up
male, male, female (moth, different body structure), male, NB but male body, female, female, female, female
I mean they look good to me
yeah they look more or less good to me as well
quirk: Steelsplit
Could I get the same for mine as well?
Basically metalbending
sure
Toph as displayed by the fire nation play
HAH
TOO TRUE
They saw her go Iron Man and straight pissed they pants
metalbending but platinum’s fair game fr
(I just know that specific part of the lore, I haven’t seen ATLA
yeah what makes platinum different from anything else anyway
Like, I think the only real issues that come up when you don't check weights and heights is more so what malnourishment or overnourishment can do to the body and what that can physically look like on different heights
if you're just trying to go for average weight or slightly above or below you won't run into problems usually
It’s purer than most metals, leading to no chunks of rock/earth that can be bent within the metal
how tho
how to what part?
Because they're not actually bending the metal
We see it when toph invents metalbending
She found a giant chunks of rock inside the metal and bent the rocks
they bend the earth inside the metal, and platinum’s got nearly no uh… what’s the word?…
With platinum
imperfections?
The bits were too small
why wouldn't any pure metal work tho is what I'm saying
IMPURITIES
if it's purified
If you're trying to resist metalbending, yes
oh no, purified metal would work
The purer the material the better
But it needs to have the impurities for them to be able to bend
It needs to have those chunks of rock in it for them to bend it
platinum specifically because screw you we said so
That's also why wood is a good thing to use against earthbenders
Amorphous rock substance
Unless they know how to lava bend, they can't do shi
this guy is a bit underweight for his height (about 11 pounds), is he on the skinnier side/doesn't eat as much?
or do you want him to be more average weight or even on the heavier side?
Average
He did a little training with Setsuko when she was a kid, but fell off as his job took precedence and she kept growing
ok, i'd prolly put him somewhere between 155-180, which is the average for 5'11 japanese males
you could keep him at the 155-160 range if you want him on the lower end of the range
I only just noticed the Frieren pfp for some reason
for a more athletic build, apparently 160-180 is the more common range
the other two look fine tho imo
lol
i actually need to change it soon
gonna swap to fern and stark
the hubs has himmel atm
i am now on a laptop
So am I...just not on discord
F
yall got laptops?
ye
Aye
oh wait
i forgot yall are students
nah this is just my laptop
I been graduated
eh close enough
so like
FYM CLOSE ENOUGH
why do only 2 characters have armor in this show
No shii
we talk about quite a few shows
and for all i know human was watching a show on the side lol
Cuz making quirk resistant armor is very inconsistent
ye
anyways
even so
Touche
anything is better than nothing
armor isn't really needed for superhuman society
most armor is gonna be that bullet proof crap police and military have access to
ima be real
i think getting punched in armor is still better than getting punched normally
so armor for heroes is an aesthetic choice more than a use case
There's also an athletics part of it
yeah
fair
Try moving like catra in full plated armor
running and jumping in armor is difficult
Actually scratch that
if you arent iida and his brother
It is also fair to assume that metallurgy has significantly improved though
and the ingenium suits are specialized armor too
stronger and lighter metals
And what of quirks that affect metal
yeah but most heroes don't want that
fair
Put my man Tenya against a metalbender, and you'll get orange juice in soda can out of it
characters like denki and shoto would probably die from their armor (shoto's fire would cook him like a chicken, his ice would give him hypothermia incredibly fast, and denki would probably also be cooked)
wheras characters like Momo and Ashido need exposed skin to have their quirks work optimally
and characters like Kaminari and Sato would just get inured from the metal or worse break the armor entirely
Well, Bakugo has knee guards
fair
Setsuko, as shown in the pic I sent, has plated armor
idk if ive seen the pic yet can you point me to it
Aoyama's quirk is pretty useless in most cases, so having armor is good for him, but he's still a special case for the most part
This, but she dudnt have the helmet
this i can get behind
my centaur girl has horse armor for the aura farm aspect
give my girl ura like a breastplate or something tho
Here's the male and female version side-by-side
she doesn't need it lol
she gonna be working in rubble a lot of the time
Setsuko uses the male version
I love it
helmet yes
but armor or padding isn't super common even in rubble areas?
and she has a quirk that can float pretty much anything
so she's actually the safest lol
idk i think it'd look cool
Oh, wait, gimme a sec
and then there's space in there for an airbag incase she drops midair
oh she would actually be better suited with one of those motorcyle suits
but also kinda why no padding
they have suits specialized with airbags for bike racing
ooo i need a picture
also i love this
Me tooo
movement, it's way harder to move when you have heavier padding on your body, it would have to be kinda dense to absorb more impact i believe
let me find one
ah i see
Got pic?
not really, but im sure i could find smt that would work
nicee
Relatable
i think that kind of suit would work better for ochaco than actual padding
Prolly
part of this is just like
im concerned that we're sending teenagers into life and death situations with a leather jacket and a pat on the back
Yea, Nezu is a war criminal
He's damn lucky they killed the worst super terrorist in history
(link to post I found this on https://www.instagram.com/p/DPzHxuUD8Bo/?utm_source=ig_web_button_share_sheet)
it would prolly look something like this, or perhaps more covering, not too sure
Would she get embarrassed or angry about her horse side being exposed?
Or does she have custom clothes or something
there's quite a lot of horse armor out there so im not sure if i want to go full western/european style or if i want to go more fantasy or perhaps another regional armor
eh im not sure yet
the final boss of horse girls
but she'd have custom clothing since she's very tall and much more of a bulkier/muscular build than a lot of people
plus antlers
public transport is worse
Oh god
UA would have made accomodations for her, so dorms aren't a problem
Chiyoko is very slow in comparison, but has a much easier time
horses are dang fast just transport yourself atp
plus she's part of the big 3's year, so there's a lot more room to play with in terms of worldbuilding around it
You try running thirty miles to school and back every single day
While possibly having two stomachs to fill
she a horse
not as fast as a bullet train to several cities away for an internship or work study
And?
Ah
horses get tired too 😭
aight hold on
20 to 30 miles
hero training, back and forth to school and home, etc
aight fair enough
plus they're not running full speed all the time
yea
A whaa
oh dang
horse bodybuilder equivalent
a very strong and heavy category of horse breeds
yup
20 mph max usually
so she has about
Yyyea, 20 mph all day across the city does a number on one's stamina
yeah esp since draft horses arent really built much for running
she does have more stamina than a standard draft horse
but even so
i apologize for my statement miss horse character
girly weighs around 1.5k, so she's not running fast for super long times
1.5 THOUSAND?!?!?!
she's actually supposed to be one of the biggest draft horse breeds too
horses be h e a v y
how does one acquire this level of specificity in your quirk
i don't think Tsu got the memo
a touch of the 'tism (joke)
nah i just meant in in-world genetics
OH LOL
Idk tbh
I imagine it's just a bit like human races are in general
location and genetic history 
I honestly just really liked the idea of a draft horse and a deer mixed so she's got antlers and a draft horse body XD
I felt like I was pretty creative with the relation between Junpei, Lise, and Setsuko’s quirks
specifically their tail differences
her mother is a deer quirk user and her father is a draft horse quirk user
so it's mostly from his side ig
since it's supposed to be the Shire as the biggest horse, and that's prolly what im going with, ig he has english heritage on his side
Very similar to what I did
Lise, who has the skunk quirk, got a defective gene from her mom, which caused her tail to be small (18 inches) and not as...uhm, voluminous?, I guess is the word
Junpei, who has a Fox quirk (like a kitsune, just no spirit shii), has a decently long tail (20 ¾ inches) with very well kempt fur
Setsuko got a combo of Junpei’s and Lise’s dad tail genes, which caused her tail to be extremely long (40 inches) and very voluminous
luminous tail
That means a shiny tail
But anyways
Thats why Setsuko uses her tail as a weapon, but hates the care for it
Also comes in hand as a pillow or just something soft and warm to hold when need/want be
mina would love it probably
Oh believe me she tries
She learns the hard way several times that not only does Setsuko have better hearing, but also that she can smack people with said tail
ojiro but mean
ojiro but fluffier
oh wait this makes me think of that scene where Mina's trying to sneak a christmas costume onto Bakugo
what do you guys think about a character whose quirk is creating giant flashbangs but he’s too dumb to use it properly so he just flashbangs himself all the time
similar to the guy from ova2
original video animation, episodes that went to digital release without airing on tv first
ah
Yea, difference this time being she actually gets hit
WHY IS MY GUY A TRANSFORMER BRO
common bones anime original design L
he looks mildly concerned all the time
which surprisingly most anime now would technically be OVA thanks to sites like crunchyroll XD
but now OVAs are like smaller side eps or pilot type episodes
One Vor All
how do i locate these ovas
if you have crunchyroll it should have them
why cant crunchyroll be free again
greed
i get it for free bc one of my friends shares theirs with me
Also data breach
crunchyroll has from ova4 onwards i believe
1 and 2 were bluray extras and 3 is a trailer for movie1
LOL
Trying to figure out a quirk for Momo and Ochako’s daughter.
Some sort of gravimetric creation and control.
Make her a sci fi geek and call it Dovin Basal.
I’m doing a short story and a print because Colleen and Luci love content of Momo and Ochako.
So I’m working on a daughter for them and I’m like… what would come from combining Zero Gravity and Creation?
welp sure why not
Have you seen Murder Drones
No. I’m mostly doing Frieren and G-Witch these days in my free time. I work 60 hours a week.
And Killing Slimes. Lol
except only with objects that originate from you
basically create an object, then gain control over its direction, momentum, properties
DA SLEEPY CYUUUUUUUUUUTE
ig basically the same as creation but the things have no mass
or creation but it uses body weight as fuel instead of lipids
o7
chapter 4’s gonna be long
DA CYUUUUUUUUUUTE
https://archiveofourown.org/works/84112591/chapters/222121301
In a nutshell: Toshio Midoriya time travel to the past because an alien empire destroyed the mankind
@sick magnet
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
all that FOR ONE CHAPTER EPIC
thinking of focusing on this oc again for a bit 🤔
I think her focus as a hero would be towards rescue, especially in natural disaster situations involving a lot of heavy rubble
I guess I should get to work on my file submission
w
I procrastinated to hell and back on this 😭
I changed the oc i was going to use like six times too 💀
my submission was meant to be a joke but i spent way too long characterising his personality and mindset
I still don't know which OC to use 
loll it happens
I think I'm probably going to create an American hero for this 
Time to make a crap ton of fake US ID documents and an FBI-esque file on this character ig XD
Since mha has like
no worldbuilding for the US' hero system (despite showing it in the series), I'm headcanoning that the Hero program in the US is a branch of the military that works similarly to the US National Guard and works in unison with local and state authorities and can be deployed across the country as needed or requested, but cannot be used as actual military personnel in wars or skirmishes
so hero licenses are similar to military IDs and they still need civilian IDs just like actual military personnel
why are profiles the worst thing ever to write for ocs 😭
ikr
and im doing worldbuilding in it too 
I circumvented the issue by starting a big chunk of the writing earlier
then i procrastinated and finished it just now ✨
very fair
its for the event 😭
oooh nice
im fairly happy with it
noice thats good
i decided i wanted mine to be an american hero
which means now i get to do worldbuilding
but that also means i have to do worldbuilding
Very fair
it's a dilemma
yay i get to make shit up
but also
boo i have to make shit up 😭
Do what I did and make vague references to things to suggest more depth without needing to go fully into it
too late
F
american heroes are now military national guard equivilants and ive already made the id
ive spent like the last 2 hours making documents based off the actual ones out there 
nice
which was really taking samples off the internet and editing them to have the info i want XD
i mean what else do you do
exactly
the noodle incident trope
i regret much 
apparently
there's an official way created by the military to write a biography on yourself or another member of the military
oof
and ofc
i feel the need to do it that way
what i've got so far for her hero profile 
too lazy to come up with fictional cities and counties so well known city and county it is 
just remembered my incredibles style template existed, wouldve been way easier to use that instead
I love realizing more efficient methods after already doing stuff the harder way
Uh oh
She has the same Hero name as Setsuko
Just spelled different
Yeah, ik
I've pointed it out several times lol
And I spelled it wrong by accident 💀💀 lol
Well, that saves from conflict of name, yea?
Does it matter???
It's a Norse warrior that is incredibly popular and the name is used quite a bit in the MHA fandom
Okay so I need a bit of a help with a quirk of my ocs ^^'
I'll copy paste the quirk definition rq
So it's called bubble manipulation,
[ Bubble Manipulation provides Hamari with the ability to produce bubbles from her skin, any part of her body, as long as it’s not blocked by clothes.She can manipulate and control everything about the bubbles she creates, their strength, sharpness, speed, and shape. The bigger and harder/stronger the bubble the more energy it takes from her, she can end up passing out, she can't spawn the bubbles just anywhere, they have to be produced on her body, like her palms or feet, or shoulders etc. she can float them wherever as long as it's in her field of vision though, she can trap people and objects in her bubbles and move them around. when she creates bubbles she has to concentrate on them or they will pop.It is possible for others to pop her bubbles, although it would be a battle against her consciousness; any hit to her bubbles would be a pushback against her focus. As long as she can stand and take that, the bubbles won’t be popped. ]
I need help developing a part of that quirk.
when she would trap something/someone in a bubble, would that something or someone just become weightless, or also take from her energy? Or what's more realistic option
not weightless but could use the bubble to physically lift and move them with effort
tho im not sure how she could get things inside if they can only be formed out of her skin
also not sure wym by the bubbles sharpness, are they not round?
or is it like green lantern and they can be any shape
add something that if someone marks her bubble, some glue may fall out of this fairy tale.
I'm actually still deciding that part it's either she will be able to manipulate the shape completely Orr just be able to make her bubbles super thin/flat and then sharpen them to use as weapons
KAZUHO BIRFDAYYYYY
I SENT THE FREAKING MESSAGE IN FINISHED WORKS AND FORGOT TO ATTACH THE DOCUMENT
I'M SUCH A MORON
THANK YOU @lone plover

this took my way too long to pose, but i made a model for my Valkyrie
She's practicing her salute XD
which was the worst thing to pose
Hi Eden
ello
How did your procrastination go last night
i went to sleep at 4am 
I discovered thanks to Pochi this morning that I sent the submission post without attaching the document to it
Thank goodness I'm currently unemployed or else I'd be dead on my feet at work lol
oof
did you add it to the thread?
I just edited it in
Waffle am I disqualified if I forgot to attach the document initially and then also tagged the post wrong before I edited it
lol i doubt it
it's got all the info now and the event page said it could be resubbed if needed as long as its before the deadline
yaey
Anyone can help me with the backstory for my oc
You got seven hours
free shit fr
Wsp
(im not gonna do that)
I'm here thinking how a friendship between Setsuna and my oc Minga would be like hmm
Wait oc event?
HPSC
It's not explicitly an OC contest
u can do canon characters too
oh whoops
Waffle really isekai'd TF2 man into MHA 
What’s the event I don’t get it
done in less than seven hours anyway it's fine
Can u explain I wanna join
Oh I see is there a format?
Not really
I think you're good however you feel like it as long as you hit all the requirements
made my main oc’s relationship chart
how does she not know Todoroki
its less not knowing more like not interacting
Ah fair enough
why did i have to make this OC military 
now im working on an evaluation sheet to serve as her personality description
Getting somewhere with Chapter 2 / 10 so that's nice and if I want to I could finish the rewrite tonight
oh, that's why it's slow.
i check wattpad and remember i left off on a part where i should really finish naming and designing the class
and i still have TEN TO GO.
great.
hinoken renka as a name tho
that one feels good
almost as good as kikumi kaiki
i have 2 alliterative k names?
kurosu kudon too?
DA CYUUUUUUUUUUTE
tru
Also
I HAVE FINALLY FINISHED CHAPTER 3
@thorn bolt @sonic reef @cinder berry
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rQSgnuVOxWnZk1plk7zhYF8oj5lEOzU_2Dp0jBHiN7s/edit?usp=drivesdk
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LrX01-e5nCrCAd9CGOPZvRmriYM1PThxVnOX5YKNYRM/edit?usp=drivesdk
Chapter 3: The Journey The party reached the border town of Heanth after another week. The town, despite common belief, was extremely lively, and bustling. Children were laughing and playing, people were walking, travelers were planning their next adventures, and there was a painter taking commis...
TADAAAAAA
very nice!
I have a terrible incorrect quote thing
Hm?
It came from a picture
?
My idea for an incorrect quote
Care to elaborate
Saw this and was like SHOTO??
The words being something Endeavor says directly to him
Would be fun to make as a mini comic
i think i finally got the perfect MHA name.
for one of my characters
Dan Tobidan.
i mean, from the series that brought you Tetsutetsu Tetsutetsu, that fits right in
name kinda just means bounce fly bounce
his quirk is Ricochet
i finally finished my character file
an hour and 24 i think
too much time
its 8:30 rn for me, it ends at 10 pm my time i believe
loll
Anyone got any thoughts?
sorry been locked writing names
O mb
-# im so sorry i warned you i'm a spotty reader T^T
-# sometimes i only skim at best T ^ T
Same
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z4tOtAoWmnEEGXtOCQUSSaOUPt1Q7IoQJHHJPTyWz8E/edit?usp=sharing
Gonna post this here too in case anyone wants to take a look at it
Let me post it in Art Corner because I rushed so bad
hi written works chatters it is completely okay if you submit past the deadline for the hpsc event idm 😛 i stalk this chat but never talk here...
i did nawt know i had an emoji
ok im #back
hi waffle my dear waffle
but yes just lmk if u submit like hella past the deadline so i dont miss it fr
am I disqualified if I first of all sent the message too early and then edited like four times, still misspelled the tag and then still somehow also forgot to actually link the document for nine hours
no this is actually so funny
just plz make sure to tag it right... i hope ppl arent thinking its like hspsdocvjdkcn nmxcx
LOL am i
ya ya
i woulda thought it would be waff XD
Yeah I've been spelling it HSPC this whole time and never noticed until I tried to search it up in finished works
it's okay i lowkey did the same like 8 seperate times
even though i was actively looking at the event post while trying to do the search
u and waffle are co-bosses
but ur like the big boss bc ik waffle a little more (not really)
yes i feel so bad im gonna see the variations of hpsspciisoosos just in case someone mistagged
loll
i think when i tried looking it up, i tried like all the variations possible
HSCP, HCPS, HSPC, HPCS
I just finished ch 3
Me am happy
but when i tried adding the 26 at the end of the third one i somehow mixed up letters anyways so it still wouldnt show 😭
noice
youre the goat imma steal
debating if i want to write more ocs
or expand upon my US heroes = US military headcanon/worldbuilding
forgot to add an age to Amelia 
she's got an age now tho lol
Where do y'all keep y'all ideas
Do y'all write them down or do y'all keep them on the dome
i have a spreadsheet
Spreadsheet
@sweet nymph your message has been deleted since it contained sensitive topics. please put it on spoiler tags and add trigger warnings if you post again ty
Most on the dome, some on the doc
lowk wanna start a google spreadsheet of my word counts when i write
good luck on the cronch
good luckk!!!
Trying to plan out chapter seven.
I have a good idea of what will be in it, but trying to understand where it will go is what the issue is.
Anybody wanna preview my chapter 4?
I really want some feedback bc it's my favorite character so far
i could in a few minutes
sure
Chapter 4: Swallow This chapter contains death, abuse, slight adult themes, and graphic depictions of violence. Read at your own risk. Several years ago, a couple brought a set of twin girls into the world. It hadn’t been their first time, as they had a son beforehand. But twins were a whole new ...
Could I get some feedback on this quirk idea for one of my OCs? (I think this is the right place..) Idk if it feels balanced and stuff 
“Shooting Star” - Constellations show in the user's hair which show their power level. They can use these constellations as different things depending on which it shows! (E.G. Gemini lets them create clones, Cancer lets their nails become really sharp like pincers, Orion lets them form the constellation into a bow and arrow, etc.)
Drawback: Power levels only increase when the stars are visible, and it's super random what will happen in a battle because each constellation is RNG
typo i noticed
loving it so far tho
yay more star based ones
I love stars :D
There's a few of these actually
I don't see it
Aiko twice instead of Kijo
Aiko saying about hoping Aiko doesn't find out
Sounds really cool !! It sounds like a very hard quirk to use, and has high highs and low lows since they have to know how to utilize all sorts of different quirks depending on which constellation is visible. User's mastery of the quirk would be very crucial 
Yeah I did that a lot
Sometimes I caught myself sometimes I didn't
This is really nice
still trying to think of a story idea for my submission for the new order role
Thank you! Yeah, I wanted to have a tricky one because I felt that all the ones I had before were kinda nothing burger with the risks! I also thought it'd be a perfect opportunity to because of the themes (the stars) and also because this OC is a pro hero so I thought she could handle it! 
Thank you!
Np
aight that's sick man
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chapter
Oh thanks
i wanna base around my oc Hanae Fujioka
just the few points where aiko and kijo were mixed up
wanted to write some dry comedy now bc I thought I've been only writing traumatizing stuff these days 💀
😭
write some trauma dump for Hanae /j
maybe some slice of life episode would fit her well
she's like a stylish, memorable, light hearted MHA student rather than a full-on trauma literary hazard (to my interpretation at least)
ay peak !!
she is frfr
🙂↕️
her relationship chart @noble gale
LOL
They're in #finished-works too
im gonna write anyways.
I love procrastination
I didn’t end up doing much T^T I added a slight amount of character details to the spreadsheet and moved on to playing GD
Procrastiception
tbh thats more than what i've written today XD
Surprisingly I did write a thing today
lil folklore story thing for worldbuilding in a world I'm making
ooh nice
no access
I added height and weight of one character.
I love Momo like 'the frick is up with you'
p f f
Momo catching strays
her popular girl reputation
true
poor yaomomo
DA CYUUUUUUUUUUTE
I was re-reading Toriko. The powercreep is insane.
I wonder if a MHA sequel will have insane powercreep since Quirks keep getting stronger and stronger.
the base show has power creep
hi waffle
why does hawks have to make the wing quirk so iconic
it feels wrong to give an OC a wing quirk
The episode one kid was the original, never forget
i love giving ocs wing quirks
i have 1 oc with wings and 1 who just grows feathers
i have 2 with wings
one with a hawk-inspired quirk
and the other is a Hawks relative with 6 wings
the one with wings is an actual talking bird
should have known lol
Long Time No See
I would’ve liked to have lived longer
But that’s okay, because now I’ll get to
Do bad karaoke with you till our throats hurt
We’ll soften the pain with booze and
We won’t have to worry, because
Heaven will foot the billI can tell you all of the things
That you could only see from the sidelines
And you’ll laugh, say “that’s nuts” and maybe it is.
Maybe I’ll laugh too.We could cry together, laugh, all those things
We could never do before your blue hair turned crimson
But since I now lie dying I realise
The could could become a will.My good friend, I’m sure I’ll be seeing you soon.
A poem about Kayama as she dies
