#avatar-ideas
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@scenic dust cute idea but u must not contain outlines on your outfit 
Yeah i know..
Just sent it with outlines because i haven't done shadings yet and it looked weird๐
Will fix it tho
Mmm
Ibis paint x
@pure rivet here
yes make this part same as each other
and it'll be good if her eyes dont have that round line too, it's outlined
it's really cute but mask confuses me, i dont think bubble should cover her face but like come out of it
also why the crab is floating? btw it reminds me of this front item in game
@pure rivet
Yeah..i sent the design with outlines cuz i didn't do shading yet but i got you
yes make this part same as each other
and it'll be good if her eyes dont have that round line too, it's outlined
@pure rivet
@sturdy jewel about the mask i didn't realize that, ty for your advice ๐ i make the crab floating cuz my idea kinda like the crab is swimming (? sorry for my bad English) and i havent seen that fg in game omg sorry im dumb..๐(is it okay cuz mine is bg) btw i have suggested this already lol, if i can i'll fix it asap ^^
ty again 
@pure rivet I love it
Omg so cute!!!!!!
sorry for the bad pic
but is the hair and eyes ok?
still gonna fix
mouth is just there for orientation and clothes are from another skin idea ๐ญ
this look very cool ! this hair shading is nice but i think the hair could be more round
im in love with those eyes tho
I agree
i also made this! im open for fb
I spent my gems on blouses and don't regret it, The next collection should be animal-inspired, like the hippo is gray, the sleeve of the blouse must be gray, so we can make stylish animal ^^
Hello, I want to know how can I Create your Avatar...
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@smoky mulch
Eyes
The eyeliner is too thick and the eyebrows does not really fit the expression that she makes.
Lipstick
The lips could be highlighted in simple way because the three dots are just random.
Wigs
The only problem of the hair for me is the shade. Few shades are too thin and it is not visible if it shranks in the actual game. Highlights line can be improved.
Dress
Creative idea! I like the shape of it. Problem is it could be placed higher and the chest can be shaded to create a bigger chest. Some the wings would be nice if it was more simple and remain a transparent color with few small shapes on.
Mask ||makeup||
It can be done better and shaped evenly.
Colours
The colors you chose is dull and it is better to create or find a palette that would fit go great together.
@mortal geyser 
I look approachable now?
oh.. this feedback.. just really slapped me on the face.. but well, thx ill try to do something better, this one was just some practicing, i wont really apply to #dev-vote
thank god i didnt merge the shading layer to hair
@smoky mulch never merge

Where can I get templates?
Pinned messages
Thanks
Np :)
Looks good
@pale oar is she supposed to be cross eyed?
Looking forward for your avatar. Im sure it will be amazing @stoic moat
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Where i can find a discord avatar???
@pale oar the eyes look better now gj
@pale oar add some highlights to the hair, but don't make them too obvious like before
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Owwwhhh tyโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Is there a 1700's theme already ig?
The eyes are too bright they're not even visible
I prefer the previous ones
The hair is great!
Didn't you save the last ones?
Yeah ur right...idk why did i change it ._.
Just save all the versions to change whenever you want
Yeah its good
Ty
All what i need now its background and grave
Owh shit...
Its take 13 hour's...
Ah don't worry
It's not unusual for it to take a lot if you're not used to make designs xd
The highlights on the eyes are mirrored tho
@pale oar I think it would look better if that highlight wasn't there
Or maybe if it were on the bottom of the iris
Maybe
im not sure about those eyes
Arms are too broad.. And what are these brown spots for@drifting warren
@smoky mulch the eyes are too small
Arms are too broad.. And what are these brown spots for@drifting warren
@scenic dust bloods
how is it
@drifting warren what did you use to draw?
@drifting warren not looking like blood tho
@drifting warren what did you use to draw?
@mortal geyser medibang paint
And 8-bit painter
but about the rest ?
@smoky mulch the shading on the shirt lookes more of an outline and maybe make the highlights look more like hair
@drifting warren you modified/redrew the template?
And 8-bit painter
@drifting warren pixelated stuff is not really in WWO Style
The background is pixelated
Ok i will fix that too
@drifting warren do you need a template?
Idk but you need to fix this.. Maybe use new template and don't draw on the same layer as it
@drifting warren
I think they redrew the template
Going to fixing her avt""
Ok i will fix tomorrow
Looks too symmetrical imo
It has improved a lot though
What imo mean ._.
In my opinion
@pale oar hello ๐ lovely hairs and turtle neck. Though I would lower lips and make irises further from each other because she looks like she has crossed eyes. Btw did you change inside of ears, because it looks too big? Also I think highlights on bangs are lighter then those on buns
And this shadow between lips could be more red than black, it looks like lineart, idk
idk what am i doing here xD
im not finished with the t shirt but i have no idea what to make it look like help :c
@pale oar i never use a black line as a separation between lips, but i make upper lip darker. Maybe try that? Upper lip also seems to big
You need to use this to make character face its well make its looks better
I use it
The size of my avatar face its perfect
/:
it is not a must to use ๐
Pls do not spam
@queen sparrow, Seems like you're spamming the chat. Please cool down a bit. ๐ง
@queen sparrow Stop.
Good choice
@pale oar I ment irises not whole eyes. Something like this
what is the hair ๐
chives, szczypiur xd
who is she xD
excuse me but, what was the theme of your character?
the top line of eye & eyebrow direction donโt really make sense imo
like id expect the eyebrow to follow that angry shape
lol interesting
@next talon oh wait, its not angry expression, she is crying because of onion
Then Iโd change the top shape of eye bc that look angry
@next talon how? any tip?
One sec
i would make the tears a bit less, for me they're a bit too much not sure about how to explain that 
eyebrowns, as sheen said
the rest is good 
mhm, looks weird without some eyelashes btw xD
Just to show the shape ^^
@slender cradle I wont change tears, like the way they are
ok, but here's my try to explain it better:
tears are just too big in my opinion and shading makes them look bigger than i imagine tears, still no good explanation
@slender cradle you know, you can show me
i'm on phone rn, but i will try to do it
The Mouth look invisible
yeah, she also seems like she has no lips
@tame moon i tried my best on phone, sth like that maybe
what should i do about that ? make it darker or add lips ?
the tears look like she has some kind of bubbly infection
@pale oar help
What ๐
what should i do about that ? make it darker or add lips ?
@smoky mulch
add lips
ok
Yeah
And lower the mouth
@tame moon or maybe less bubbly, maybe sth like that?!
@smoky mulch left
@smoky mulch oky, I love hairs shadows and highlights, but bangs make hair a bit square, if this is what you wanted then ok. Imo using hightlights next to shadows looks weird, they are not overlapping they are just next to. Also irises are too far from each other. Eyebrows could be thicker at the beggining and thinner at the end. Shadows, stripes and cloth is shaky, did you use stabilizer? Snake looks really good. Imo you shouldn't see further eye
thx @mortal geyser ill trust on an experienced person !
I'm not really experienced xd
how should i do curved bangs aaaaa
@slender cradle ok, I see your point. I will use some of this ๐ Btw really lovely lines
@slender cradle ok, I see your point. I will use some of this ๐ Btw really lovely lines
first, i'm happy that you got what i'm trying to explain
second, pls stop, i didn't draw these eyes
hmm
@slender cradle ohhhh xD my bad. Still appreciate feedback โค๏ธ
@smoky mulch sorry but i have to... what's the theme?
uwu snake
what about putting snake as fg and do a terrarium as bg
add a snake tongue thing in the mouth
where should i put the snake ?
btw not sure if "terrarium" is the right english word
like in what position ?
@smoky mulch I was just giving example. The one u just changed looks similar to the example in game I gave ๐ u could also do this
im not even sure how is that in my language hehe, but i understand ur point
@pseudo nymph im not sure if that is cool.. what if the up tooth and down tooth were separated?
I use ur same mouth u drew earlier
thatโs ur original picture u sent
I only put color in the white part ๐
im not even sure how is that in my language hehe, but i understand ur point
- the glass cages for reptiles
- you asked me about position of snake in fg? if it is like that pls send an image of the snake without the character so i can look at the full snake
i didnt draw the full snake, actually
oh
about those bangs you asked. You can do hightlights helping yourself with circles so they are not in straight line or kinda straight line. They are more curly right? Btw I changed irises at one picture
ok ! got it ! thx for feedbacks !
@tame moon wow ! u certainly know how to shade hair XD
@smoky mulch naaaah, I only try my best 3:
soo i this idea @slender cradle i still need to correct some things
fg bg combination? looks like an interesting idea
Feedback on what I've done so far for the male version?
at least i meant one object, consits of fg and bg, so you have to equip both that it makes sense and not fg and bg as one object
at least i meant one object, consits of fg and bg, so you have to equip both that it makes sense and not fg and bg as one object
that's acutally more confusing than i wanted it to be
hm..
it can just be part of the shirt like that, the snake
cute๐
glossy snak
snek
nek
@next talon snekini
Make opacity on hair and snake a bit lower ig
wdym
Lower it an bit on hair shading and snake shading
whole*
Nono
oop
Xd
btw did u make like 5 designs in 2 days or 
btw did u make like 5 designs in 2 days or
@next talon well.. i draw fast but i draw bad ๐คทโโ๏ธ
donโt worry about it, we all start somewhere and iโm already seeing great improvement
keep up the good work
there no such thing as bad drawings
heheh this still gives me nightmares
how do i make a terrarium
i see but they give your character a special "touch"
It's beautiful both ways, but I prefer with wings
we cant use black for mouth right?
Why not?
btw sheen, would the wings be bg?
Yeah
and the skulls too?
Jup
i see
ibisPaintX is hard
Learning drawing apps always takes time, but you will get used to it^^
idk probably a shield
Does anyone have front item ideas for me:GWcmeisterPeepoE:
not yet but when you take wings as bg you could use the skulls as fg?!
It covers my favourite part of her shirt ๐ฅบ
Ignore the missing part of wing but is this placement better?
i would say yes, it's better
Thanks for help 
glad i could help you 
@next talon Your skin is literally just so perfect ! You are just so perfect ! wow im impressed, this skin just look so smooth ! so wild ! So realistic yet so cartoony !!
help help !! i just got procreate pocked but i dont know how to mirror the drawing
you have to turn on assisted drawing
and then choose symmetry tool & then tap layer and turn on assisted drawing
could u show pic ? my app is in another language
ah okii
I don't know how you all are so good at drawing
how to submit
it does hurt my eyes. my prescription this time must have raised

idk
you ping or DM ur final design to a minimod/mod
wait where is that
? u mean where is the mod?
yea
to ur right screen is a list of online members. Im seeing a mini mod online rn
Is the hair line to hye?
High
And should I make a hood like the left picture?
Hat
I cal it a hat
Okay... to make a hat like that I hard๐๐
Is
Feedbacks?
Cant edit the ears like that cause skin color
good
Looks good enough
I'm where to get my discord dress
have critics for my creation?
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@wild rose do "?discord shirt" without brackets on #bot-commands
okey ty
Go to #bot-commands and type ?discord shirt and/or ?tester hat. Please make sure to check your direct messages!

Kris someone have answered it 
might aswell tester hat 
have critism?
The eyes kinda good
@formal salmon #avatar-catwalk for postinf your avatars
Hiii
Bon matin!
imo maybe make smoler
I just wanna do a speech, I've noticed that there are soo many new designers trying to design an outfit and I'm really proud of you because the outfits rock
don't give up guys and keep up the good work you all
pin dis

who wants to be the person to ping Hyde or Nexo to pin this?
||not me, me scared||
Tewka cute 
Yesh
@rotund carbon
Thanks Nexo ๐
OwO
Btw Mini Mods can pin lel
I saw no mini mod 
sad trial noises

terka cutie
@terse wraith How can I improve the shirt?
@umbral wave add highlights to the hair, and shades on shirt
Is it better now ?
I think itโs great
@umbral wave you might want to pick a different background image since your design kinda dissapears.
@umbral wave bigger highlights and more shading on the shirt (for example ripples and folds)
yoo how "disturbing" can an avatar be? Cuz im like making some kind of balloom girl at the fair and i had the idea to make the front ballons look like heads that have a pinkish liquid flow out of their eyes to match the overall colours ๐
ha only ugly pen sketches
Iโd like to make a bee avatar is this good ? (Btw this is my first design)
There's already a bee avatar in game
naww its cute i like the eyes
Itโs more a bear/honey avatar
Oh and no gradients allowed (so no tools like: airbrush, blur and smudge)
Itโs more a bear/honey avatar
Well, true
Ok ty
@umbral wave it's cute! Maybe add more shading to the shirt, and the highlights on the hair are a bit too thin
Also is there gradient on the eyes?
@umbral wave it's cute! Maybe add more shading to the shirt, and the highlights on the hair are a bit too thin
@quick harbor i agree with this but maybe even make highlight lighter since I'm not sure if they are too thin or just blend with the hair
@quick harbor Where can I add shading? And I haven't gradient
On the shirt
I gave feedback earlier
@umbral wave bigger highlights and more shading on the shirt (for example ripples and folds)
@umbral wave find a reference for short hair and see where there's lighting, make it a bit brighter and thicker
@umbral wave could use some shading on the shirt as it looks plain rn
anyone have idea for this pls
i havent done shadings yet
@pure rivet I wouldn't add much more tbh
Only shading ofc but enough items look nice
I see it too
Make the shading in the dark part of the hair darker tho
@mortal geyser I don't really see where I can add more shading ...
I don't really see where I can add more shading ...
@umbral wave I have recommended to make the shirt have more folds and ripples
anyone have idea for this pls :GWunuWakaOK:
i havent done shadings yet
@pure rivet Head Garments
@umbral wave the hair highlights still look random
Shirt looks good now.
@umbral wave can u add more shadings on that rip kiwi? it looks a bit flat 
Lol I'm back
Hi @worthy urchin, you need to work on the eyes, make them cleaner and add more shading
Yeah I'm not good at eyes
Which earrings?
I prefer the first ones
which eye looks better, left or right? Or maybe change something?
I think left, but how you have it now looks to cool ๐
@stoic moat you mean two different eyes? btw are tears visible? my computer is lying about colors xD
Yeah there visible
@tame moon the tears are visible, but not the shading on them
Is this weird or no?
I don't understand what's going on with the hair
@quick harbor oh man, havent I already told you? They are chives, its onion theme
@worthy urchin it's not clean enough, also the lighting on the eyes should be brighter
@tame moon oh I see
K
I have a little idea. A anine skin
Follow pinned message to create an avatar @distant swallow 
@distant swallow make sure to not create a specific anime character โ๏ธ
Goku is specific
So i will do an evil saiyan
Hi will be sรณlo
And his objective is to kill everyone
@distant swallow i think doing saiyan is still against copyright because its race from dragonball
I tried again, is this to detailed or no
The brown bit around the kiwis on the shirt is a bit messy
@distant swallow are you talking about a role in the game?
@worthy urchin sure just make it a circle ?
The whole eye or the pupil?
The pupil
Ok
And his objective is to kill everyone
@distant swallow that would be role related so it's better if you go on #role-ideas-readonly for that
Could count as a gradient, just simplify it a bit.
Apparently fake gradients aren't allowed anymore which sucks for me because it's all I'm good at.
Maybe make the green a solid colour since nobody is going to see the fading ig.
Okay
Hii hii
i made this one, ill still add a fg
Hii hii
@worthy urchin much better
Do you guys know where to get the role icons in line version
u just need to describe the icon, no need to draw
Which eye is better?
Do you guys know where to get the role icons in line version
Look in pinned massage
Aww ty, but I need to choose๐
I think the left one is better, because you see the green color more
@barren moss we don't have them here since this channel is avatar related
@barren moss we don't have them here since this channel is avatar related
@mortal geyser ahh okayy then. I think I should take screenshot in every game lol. I wanna trace them anyway to apply on my design
@barren moss where do you need them for?
Okayyy, will find it @quick harbor
Ahh keyy thanks @stoic moat
Np
@stoic moat the hair aret good ๐
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Itโs great but the eyes look like @hardy basin โs style
Oppsie like not in that meaning I meant if that avatar went ig
How i Can make a new avatar?
@ripe cobalt check pinned messages
@ripe cobalt you draw it yourself and all the info you need to get started is in pinned
No hate I loved it
Sorry I didnโt know
I made it myself, but I have some pictures for pre-existing skins, I kind of combined them. And made it yourself.
No worries๐
โบ๏ธ
I though all eyes should have a diff shape
@stoic moat sorry bout that I didnโt know it looks great doeโค๏ธ
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Nah as long as it's not very similar to one in game ur pretty good
Yay
Aww ty ๐
Hey
The hair takes ages ๐ฅต
So I am here And now I can not See That is can make a avatar
@quick harbor did you check the pinned messages of this channel yet?
how is it looking now ?
Oh no I do That @sharp notch
then you can find everything you need to design an avatar 
hey @sharp notch what do u think about this avatar ?
Yeah okayyy
wait let me check it, be aware that i write long feedbacks for avatars most of the time tho ๐
Aha Nederlands
๐
Ja dat heb ik dus gedaan maar hij opend hem niet
Even afsluiten
Is goed
Donโt talk dutch here please
If you want to talk dutch you can explain eachother in #dutch

@smoky mulch it is a snake theme right? it isnt the easiest to see, but if that is the goal then dont mind me
. anyays, sake concepts have been made before but not a simplistic one like this yet, it is a new take on that theme. anyways, this is what i saw that needs improvement:
-she is cross-eyed, her both eyes are looking respectively to the left and the right, try to make them face towards us instead
-there are a lot of rough edges in the design, i pointed a few out for you, check the screenshot for these examples that i could find with a quick look. this also results in the braid not looking connected to her hair. there are probably some more around on the design, so try to make them look cleaner
-did you shade using lines? because the shading looks pretty sloppy on most of the snake and the lamp. try using more shapes or atleast cleaner shapes
-the hair has been clearly copied and pasted on both sides, you can especially see this at where the blue circle is on the drawing. try putting it a bit off-set to the other side. like try to make some strings darker/lighter or longer/shorter. maybe change the shading etc.
-the shirt isnt properly connected to the collar, which makes it looks weird (see yellow circles)
-the background looks a but bland, especially due to the use of pure grey at the bottom, try to make it a little more interesting by using some more shading or add something to it

@grave bobcat b-b-b-but 
no u

New discord skins!
@swift hollow what?
Iโd like to make a bee avatar is this good ? (Btw this is my first design)
@lavish shale magnifique
beeutiful*
japanese white day
Okay, so i posted this accidentally on role ideas but...
The rockstar set:
Gradients and outlines are sadly not allowed
can anyone give fb to my skin ? i made with procreator
@stoic moat okay ty ill fix that
i made a few changes
I think if you mirrored that chocolote box it'll look better
ok !
i've been locked inside your heart shaped box for weeks
i liked her more without bangs
@smoky mulch what software do you use?
procreate pocked
Thanks
oh, u need to buy it
Its fine
@quick harbor iโd just recommend u to avoid gradient and outlines like the teeth
Okay
also, try using this on another layer so u have the correct placement of eyes and stuff
( i stole this from someone) hehehehe
๐
So I think my skin is done since no one gave me feedback
@stoic moat do u want to give me fb ?
I like it but I donโt have enough experience to give you any advices
if u see anything that annoys u about my skin u can simply say
it doesnt matter if ur experienced or not

@grave bobcat could u give fb to my skin ?
sure !
@smoky mulch okay here we go
Hair
Looks good overall but maybe make the ribbons not mirrored and lower the opacity of the hair shading.
Eyes
Imo the eyebrows look too thick, the hearts maybe need some shading/shadows.
Mouth
The small chocolate parts looks a bit like poop imo, maybe shade them a bit. The mouth looks a bit big tho.
FG
I like the idea but maybe make it less mirrored too.
Shirt
I like it, I donโt really see anything that can change on that.
So great job! Keep on going
finally ! i made a perfect shirt 
so shading and mirroring
i got it
no do hard
not so hard *
@stoic moat do u want to give me fb ?
@smoky mulch your skin looks create, but the 'hart presents' don't really look like harts. Self idk how to fix it, or you can to just leave it like that. But i think your skin looks great !
Great*
Idk, I like harts tho, maybe try circle or square yeah
@smoky mulch
Hair
The hair looks flat and the color paired with dead highlights makes it look dull.
Eyes
The eyes are placed high and the eyebrow is thick. Girls use thinner eyebrows.
Shirt
Some parts are just plain color and it should have shades. The shading you are using on some edges are too thin. It is not visible if it shranks ingame.
Front Item
The ribbon is red and the heart is red and together they are red. Use different colors to bring out the freshness of the item.
Mouth
Where did that chocolate came from? Tip is use highlights on the lips and try softer color for cute look.
Ribbon On the Hair
It could use highlights.
It's feedback
Yeah... ๐

But it is good fb
I know, but always say with fb something like, it looks great or cool. That makes it better i think๐
I do not think it should recieve praises because they think it is good enough and that is giving them false hope and no thoughts for their improvement.

ok ok enough, btw @night mason this skin was inspired in japanese white day thats where the chocolate came from
Feedback can be mean
ok ok enough, btw @night mason this skin was inspired in japanese white day thats where the chocolate came from
I do not know that
thank god i didnt really get this joke
What?
No more wise feedback for you 
Jasper i am going to redo your design to ease myself.

I know feedback makes you better, and it help to improve the skin. But some fb is to a opinion. And btw i always ready your fb John for outher people. Because it help me to๐
John gives good fb because he is experienced
Later on when you keep on trying you will give those feedbacks too
Everyoneโs feedback is good lol
@next talon Unstructured feedbacks arenโt tbh
I am no better than a newbie
@grave bobcat i saw that you are a disigner, what does that exactly means?
Itโs just up to the designer to decide what to listen to and what to ignore
Like not telling how you can fix it
@next talon Unstructured feedbacks arenโt tbh
@grave bobcat thatโs not feedbacks, thatโs opinions
@grave bobcat i saw that you are a disigner, what does that exactly means?
@stoic moat or you got 3 outfits in #dev-vote with 3:1 ratio. Or 1 collab/design in game
Thatโs how you obtain it
Okay ty
I feel like all feedback is helpful unless its intentionally rude or hurtful
^^
Yeah
You can choose to ignore it obviously but it usually pays to listen to what the people want
I am no better than a newbie
@night mason hi newbie
Ignoring fb most of the time isnโt the best thing to do
@night mason big ol noob
Aaaa
aprel is smol noob
Stefs and Johns fb are usually nitpicky 

i accept every single feedback, a l l o f t h e m
I am smol yes
This is what I always do: If 1 person says it imma look if itโs true. If not I ignore it but when more people starting to say it I will start to change it
@night mason hi newbie
@pseudo nymph hi newbie (2)
I usually listen to kween nagoo


helpful


I listen to nobody unless I agree with it

everyone has nitro
no 
Lmao
I ask feedbacks
I get praises
I leave
@night mason u remember this. dont ask why I wont be nice to u ever again ๐ฆ
@night mason u remember this. dont ask why I wont be nice to u ever again ๐ฆ
@pseudo nymph Spicy ๐ฅ
I listen to nobody unless I agree with it
@next talon bruh
Johnfordesigner
I'm going to start spamming john for fb
Spam me im ready

i did listen to u
@pseudo nymph
I listen to demon most of the time
๐
i do that too, pick feedbacks you feel that are correct
yeah
im usually lazy too
Who likes my awesome pfp by @indigo ore
Hawt isnโt it
Its r e a l art
Who is that
xd
lmfao

Money Heist avatar pls!
The eye is on wrong side tho
Copyright
Lmao
Aww
You're so talented
@smoky nacelle I know right!
Slow poke

Who has a meme page for ww ol?
go to #social-media-ideas or #wov-chat they can answer. @proud gulch
Okay thanks!
Hahaha
Hahahah

Wut
Tatooo
K
@fringe vine hairline is too high and some eye highlights are too small they're barely visible
There should be stars in the eyes. i will fix the hair.
The eye has also a very subtle fake gradient and I'm not sure if it's allowed like this
yea, the hairline is much too high
I love the background
do you have ideas for the front item?
@fringe vine Telescope
i have a bunch of freetime, ping me/dm me for feedback
yo, anybody any feedback?
@radiant totem if you offer this ๐ can you give me feedback?
Hair is weird shaped
@hardy basin yeah, probably because they are chives
btw, all people notice hairs are weird but noone notices that "hairs" start with some white onions. Why that...
๐ pressed send too early
yo, anybody any feedback?
Hair: looks like onions + hair, i have no problem with that, interesting idea
eyes: smaller tears now ... i like it like that
fg: obvious that it'll be one but no problem
bg: looking cool, although it's an onion
clothes: not quite sure about that
@slender cradle yeah, but I hate those tears. I cant change them freely in inkscape ๐ฆ what do you mean that fg will be one?
Hey! This looks great, though i'm not quite sure what the theme is
Eyes: I think they are amazing, but for the tears, it should be less cartoony shaped, searching up crying references helps a lot.
Hair: The hair is very oddly shaped, it would extremely help you if you searched up hair style references, I also think the hairline is too high.
Mouth: Not much to say, except for the fact that its a little low.
Shirt: The apron is nice, but instead of the undershirt being black, it should be dark grey so you could shade it
Background, the background looks very cool, im not sure if the onion is a front item or not. Onion bulbs are typically more yellowish.
Overall: The theme is confusing, and the hair brings down the quality of the piece a bit, though separately most of the items look fine. I suggest choosing a different shape for the hair, and referencing shading from #dev-vote
it was obvious that it will be an onion
@slender cradle hah, I was choosing between onion or cutting board xD
@radiant totem you say that theme is confusing but you recognise onion. This is confusing. Onion is exactly theme ๐ค Yeah tears are my problem, but shouldn't wwo style somehow cartoon? Ok, I will rise mouth. Single onion is front. Im not sure if its visible because of lower part of background. Yeah, mostly onion are yellowish from outside but I went for really white onions because its what I see when Im thinking of onion. And hairs are odly shaped because they are chives. Thank you for fb ๐
this hair brings so much confusion ;-;
@sturdy jewel yeah, I dont know how to change it without abandoning my idea...
What i mean by a confusing theme is that there is only one onion, surely if it were onion themed there would be more onion themed things
@radiant totem onion-hairs, onion in the back, onion in the front, apron because onions connects to kitchen, and she is crying because of onion. Maybe its not visible because for boy I will make cutting board and some knives
hmm alright
you could try drawing a normal hair, maybe white with some chives in it
one of the reasons for me to buy an outfit is versatility of the hair. I want to use that hair to mix with a lot more other outfit ideas
Maybe xD omg its so hard to throw away so many hours of work ;-; @sturdy jewel
or make a hat of current hair? idk
this hairstyle is a little too outfit specific? what is the word
cant mix with different sets
can u show which one that has similar hairstyle?
I dont know the exact word so I use outfit-specific 
can someone pls draw me a chocolate box ?
i canโt do anything cool
by similar I meant they use the veggies/food to be part of the hair. mostly what weโve seen are normal human hair with food/veggies as accessories on it. there is one hair only so far that is made of food in game: the ramen quest (guy has ramen hair and egg eyes). that hairstyle is pretty recognizable. If u wanna stick to made-of-onion hair, yea I agree with Velmonโs fb. the shading
I found two outfits with hairs that wont fit to every desing. Planet skin and caveman, also some have hairbands. You know, not everything needs to be the same. In pinned you can see that its good for outfits to be crazy, right? Maybe someone would buy this because of something else, not hairs, maybe it can go to quests because they can be more crazy than offers. Im trying to do my idea but noone can help me with hair-chives shadows so they look acceptable. Maybe I will change the hairs because of this obstacle @pseudo nymph
The planet skin, hair isnt made of earth, itโs like a hairstyle when we were little child like we wear a bowl up side down remember?
and in blue earth color. I dont know about the caveman so u got it. And yea nothing should be the same, otherwise idea steal issue. I was talking about versatility aspect of an item tho. If I were u Iโd take suggestion of Demonrose. Or I would make the whole head look like a big onion
not composed by little onions
i know its not white day XD but i fixed a few things
@pseudo nymph so is this hat or what? I know what you mean. Im not talking about copyright issues, why you even think like that. But there are many things not versatile. Imo forcing to do themed outfits makes many items of it not versatile. Im not discussing about my hairs now, but about your thinking
are u here for feedbacks? ๐
@pseudo nymph thats probably why Im asking here how I can improve my hair so they can be recognised as chives, ok? I really like this idea. I dont know how to achieve it but Im trying. If I lose all hope then I will change my desing. Why I would call you reliable or not and reliable on which matter?
And still, you can put my eyes somewhere else and it works, also apron
btw I showed up in here giving a point like a customer looking at skin, so I said I wouldnt buy skin with less versatility. but Idk from where u think I assume all customers would buy versatile outfits. Im giving u one option that existed
@pseudo nymph thats probably why Im asking here how I can improve my hair so they can be recognised as chives, ok? I really like this idea. I dont know how to achieve it but Im trying. If I lose all hope then I will change my desing. Why I would call you reliable or not and reliable on which matter?
@tame moon yes. I hope u do accordingly to what u said. cuz earlier Velmon gave feedback on confusing hair, u answered saying he recognizing the hair as onion is confusing ๐ ?? so I thought u already assumed this hair was recognizable enough. so I had my long argument on how it wasnt recognizable enough
if Im wrong then u can wait here for more fb from others to fix it. My fb was like earlier, Iโd talke Demon suggestion
ok, fb pls ?
@pseudo nymph no, I commented that theme shouldnt be confusing because of overall. In first feedback you said hairs should be versatile for you, not that you can't recognise it, but ok. From your comment I got that I shouldn't do anything not standard, like weird hairs. Its not along with pinned messages. Thats why I was trying to change your mind. Still I appreciate feedback
@smoky mulch what is white day 
asiatic holiday ! search for it
Oh like valentine's? Cute
imo the eyes and the hairline are a bit high but other thasn that its very cute
idk the grave suks
imo the eyes and the hairline are a bit high but other thasn that its very cute
@radiant totem hey.. how do i move the eyes layer on procreate lol
velmon was refering to my design xd dont worry
@radiant totem hey.. how do i move the eyes layer on procreate lol
@smoky mulch hmm, i dont use procreative so im not sure
i know i just reliased
heeeelp
i use ibis :/
@hearty falcon i think yours in nice but the hood & grave ar eoutlined
@next talon how do i move the eyes layer ?
hold layer and move down/up
ohh
go modify, then tap arrow to move complete layer, tap the thingy right to that to select part of layer, then arrow to move that selected area
yeah it takes time to learn all xd
@pseudo nymph no, I commented that theme shouldnt be confusing because of overall. In first feedback you said hairs should be versatile for you, not that you can't recognise it, but ok. From your comment I got that I shouldn't do anything not standard, like weird hairs. Its not along with pinned messages. Thats why I was trying to change your mind. Still I appreciate feedback
@tame moon my main problem with hair is that it doesnt look like hair... it basically onion on head and I think it would be better suited as hat.. and it kinda looks like there is a bug on his head
k
The ๆญป took me 10000 years to make
can i get feedback & front item/any item ideas?
anyone is qualified to give feedback
i really liked it, thats something i would wear ig
The eyes are great, the sweatshirt too. The hair I think needs some adjustments in the shade and shine. Anyway, it's beautiful ^^
but maybe if the eyesโ underline was a bit more light than black
alright, i'll apply the both of those
can i get feedback & front item/any item ideas?
@radiant totem what theme is that velmon?
young romance ๐ ๐
everything is okay but the places that i've marked seems a bit randomly, maybe try add shadings to this part of hair and move mouth lower a bit like i do in pic 
@radiant totem
i'll fix the two circles, but the small heart on the head is an ahoge, which is common in animes as a small and cute standing hair
yes ik but it's kinda small and something still wrong with it 
oh like love via handwritten envelops? she also looks like student. my front item idea is
still thinking 
same
yes ik but it's kinda small and something still wrong with it
@pure rivet alright, i'll play around with it until its right
first thought of book with love notes all over but then thereโd be too many heart icons
what do we do when we flirting with classmate?? ๐ณ
get caught by the teacher 

I can't think of a good front item suggestion :(
The only thing that comes to my mind are letters, books, and a gift
searches up cute gifts
hmm... boy holding a little carton board with letter I written on it. girl holding U carton board. the board better be decorated a bit (which isnt realistic, cuz in reality weโd just write on a piece/page of paper and hand up for the other to see) but wwo is barely realistic
grave is some item (? unknown) with โโค๏ธโ on it. connect all them in one background we have โI โค๏ธ Uโ
idk...
add gifts yea
no, we just woke urs up XD
hmm... boy holding a little carton board with letter I written on it. girl holding U carton board. the board better be decorated a bit (which isnt realistic, cuz in reality weโd just write on a piece/page of paper and hand up for the other to see) but wwo is barely realistic
grave is some item (? unknown) with โโค๏ธโ on it. connect all them in one background we have โI โค๏ธ Uโ
@pseudo nymph We have a beautiful concept here
and add some gifts in front items too that sounds perfect 
โ๏ธ โ๏ธ โ๏ธ
guys how do i draw a skull
guys how do i draw a skull
@hearty falcon good question... You can see an example and try to do something (Just don't copy/steal designs)
โ๏ธ โ๏ธ โ๏ธ
@radiant totemcan try this: boy prom sign with cute gift. girl (another sign?? idk, repetitive) and with cute gun shooting love emoticons
oh my god YES
how i wish my life was like ๐
@radiant totem that sweater is so cute!!! Good job 
@smoky mulch I am really bad with avatar feedback because I am not a designer. I would recommend asking one of the more design focused Staff.
who should i ask to ?
I would say the shading on the arms doesn't look 'clean' and more like an airbrush tool however
i'll fix the two circles, but the small heart on the head is an ahoge, which is common in animes as a small and cute standing hair
@radiant totem I kinda like that small heart too
@smoky mulch If you submit it to a Mini Mod however they will show it to other Staff and get feedback that way too
@smoky mulch Also see how it looks on other skin tones. From past experience with seeing submissions objects can somewhat disappear on darker or lighter tones
@smoky mulch I think itโs pretty cute
hey if u wanna submit it as clan quest, itโll have to have 6 items to start with
if the hearts are mask, then I think u have enough 6?
i already has 6 itens: hair ribbon, hair, eyes, mouth, fg, shirt
oh hat. cool 
i think i have to make the chocolate darker
i think i have to make the chocolate darker
@smoky mulch I think it's good
this chocolate ?
Yes
i think it matches only with lighter skin tones
@smoky mulch You can check other skin tones
yea i already checked
it looks like pimples on dark skins
they are mostly like this right ?
im am so tryhard lol 
prefer the old one ๐
heyo ๐
her face in total looks very cute tbh. the ribbon she has, is there other way to make it something else more interesting?
like fluffy ball things that i dont know how to say in english ?
and add a background. then it would stand out and might catch attention of the devs ^^
background?
back items 
just like valentines day
balloons
uwu
ยฏ_(ใ)_/ยฏ
normal or heart shape ?
Heart shape
just saying. but if ur happy for the current one, which is very cute already, u can try submitting?
itโs just Im adding competitive factor 
and what about the ribbon replacement?
You can improve the shape
k
thx !
if u guys have any other ideas please tell it
ill start to do it tomorrow i need to sleep
if u notice, a lot of skin in game now, the ribbon comes with hair as hair item together. not separate as hat. Iโd make that tiny ribbon/bow included in hair item
so now there is space for back item or hat, or grave. u can add either of these three items to make 6. Iโd do grave
back item then I must know about the theme/topic of skin. but u know more ^^
i just got too excited and did the whole thing today, im dying now bye
It so cute 
Looks so cute
U want fb?@rough glade














