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wind laurel
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This is how he looks irl btw🤞

heavy glacier
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if only there was this gif but it said just 953 petting

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😔

iron cloakBOT
humble bramble
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@heavy glacier Ask and you shall receive

heavy glacier
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yayyy

potent sorrel
potent sorrel
tough wedge
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@potent sorrel erm

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this is just the same thing that joe did long time ago

upbeat vortex
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fan rework!!

tough wedge
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oh wait

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im blind

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it said in the beninig

potent sorrel
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And according to him, joe himself helped him in making it

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But if i be honest some parts do look better

tough wedge
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joe just could do it then

upbeat vortex
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not a fan rework

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😭

potent sorrel
tough wedge
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oh okay

potent sorrel
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Oke i didnt know it was reuploaded

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I think i made this animation without proper Rig

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No higher samples, motion blur on, default camera settings

tough wedge
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why remaking some other animation

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whole channel is remaking animation from other people

potent sorrel
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Tbh i would let him be cuz he a newbie

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Maybe one day he gonna make original

tough wedge
potent sorrel
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Just for channel not to be dead aswell

tough wedge
potent sorrel
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Idk either what mysic to pick for teaser tbh

foggy aurora
potent sorrel
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3 weeks of break

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From work

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Thats my only chance to ATLEAST FINISH 70%

warped iron
potent sorrel
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Who should i put under chaos mask

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Dclass or just random ass high poly citizen

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When guard cracks riflemans visor

plucky hound
potent sorrel
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Man you're genius

plucky hound
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Yeah, yeah. I get it a lot 😎

foggy aurora
slate rune
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workin on materials for a light containment remake

tough wedge
upbeat vortex
heavy glacier
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is this heaven??

potent sorrel
glossy trench
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Scp john laboratory

wind laurel
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Still better than anything you’ve done

potent sorrel
wind laurel
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I’m still right though

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Black hole moon is at leat thrice better than ur shit

glossy trench
dusky crest
worthy totem
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trust me as someone who has been working with the current lcz textures; u rly want the wall textures to be as simple and repeatable as possible

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will save u a lot of time fucking with the uvs when a detail doesnt fit somewhere

vocal roost
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i think they are decals

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maybe within the wall trimsheet

glossy acorn
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unless you are talking about the stickers on the vent panel

worthy totem
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oh oki nvm then

glossy acorn
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yeah i was trying to figure out how to utilize the lcz assets in 2021, that was a nightmare because alot of the textures didnt make sense

worthy totem
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just getting vietnam flashbacks to working with them yh lol

glossy acorn
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aswell as the infamous unity red normals

worthy totem
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oh god yh the red normals

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thank god for seernix's rips

glossy acorn
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yeah lol

vocal roost
foggy aurora
sour horizon
sour horizon
glossy acorn
vocal roost
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they were painted directly onto the rooms

glossy acorn
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yes

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they werent made using a trim sheet

sour horizon
glossy acorn
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yes thats what i do aswell

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i do also use designer time to time

grave obsidian
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i’m not sure what causes it but sometimes depending on the export the normal maps are red instead of blue

glossy acorn
grave obsidian
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yeah

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was about to say

vocal roost
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lmao

glossy acorn
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oops i forgot you cant say that word anymore

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most stupid shit ive ever seen*

grave obsidian
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just not sure why some export tools do the red one

grave obsidian
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asset ripper even started exporting the red ones

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so i cant even upgrade

glossy acorn
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lmao no way

grave obsidian
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last i checked at least

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the newer builds have been really fucky for me

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so i haven’t been using them

glossy acorn
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chatgpt code 😭

grave obsidian
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le sigh

zealous flint
distant jacinth
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Wasn't it the same on both

zealous flint
zealous flint
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and the other

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and the girl who always dies to the tesla gate

dusky crest
heavy glacier
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also isnt this like ai reconstruction

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or

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when was this made i forgot

zealous flint
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these existed WAAAAAY before ai

heavy glacier
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either way i would date bro on god

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say wallahi

zealous flint
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most of SCP:CBs faces are from websites dedicated to providing textures for 3D models, the Badge version of D9341 I believe was a stock photo, no one is sure exactly where it originated at however

slate rune
worthy totem
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awesome

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might also be worth considering making some of them into their own props

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ive always thought the fan looks a little silly

slate rune
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True, true

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I'm generally trying to stay true to current lcz just with easier to use materials but some new props would be useful

hard spade
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@foggy aurora r u alright for me to use this as my pfp

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looks fire 💯

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if not its fine m8

hard spade
worthy totem
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cant wait to see what u make

vocal roost
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there’s already a socket model

slate rune
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im making it for taj mod and i dont know if that prop is used in the mod currently

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plus i think mine looks a lil better than the white sockets used in spots like ez

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just had the free space so im making the most out of it

vocal roost
slate rune
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the one on this trim is just a decal

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pretty sure the ones in SL are modeled but they're pretty simple

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the red ones used in lab spaces are cool though

grave obsidian
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in the lcz upstairs room

vocal roost
unique token
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@vocal roost where epic models

vocal roost
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chill bro i just finished a project

sour horizon
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bro

potent sorrel
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@grave obsidian do you perchance have any idea

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why tf

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my blender renders nothing

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like its done and shit but like

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blank render

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when rendering

grave obsidian
potent sorrel
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and i fucked up my posing after restarting

grave obsidian
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show your outliner

granite snow
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No words

surreal bison
noble lintel
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dude...

wind laurel
sinful cradle
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its obv ai like

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you see no errors

wind laurel
potent sorrel
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use sfm
complain
use blender
complain

potent sorrel
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Complaining just to complain

wind laurel
dusky crest
paper holly
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this makes me feel uneasy and i don't know why

surreal bison
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and also plenty of errors i’ve already spotted at least five cause i rushed this one since it was late at night

sinful cradle
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Calm

surreal bison
sinful cradle
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Where i said

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“Light has no mistake, too good to be ai”

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“And no strange pixel or fog”

surreal bison
granite snow
wind laurel
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Imma start doing some renders today🤞

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Trust

potent sorrel
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I was looking for a job then i found a job
🥀🥀🥀

potent sorrel
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Im gonna kms

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Then 3 week break

wind laurel
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Like order 5 chicken sandwiches

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Or something

potent sorrel
wind laurel
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Like billa worker?

potent sorrel
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I guess way better

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Atleast with technology

wind laurel
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Its just kids looking at pc’s without buying nun

potent sorrel
wind laurel
potent sorrel
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Im expecting elderly ppl to say shit like "can it cook by itself?" And theyre pointing towards Vr sets

potent sorrel
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"Bist eh neuling, wir geben dir mal was leichteres"

wind laurel
potent sorrel
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Low cortisol job ngl

wind laurel
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Thankfully i’m chilling before the exams rn

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In a week or two imma have to lock in

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And won’t be able to yap here

wind laurel
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Could’ve made a scnene but made rainbow lighting

potent sorrel
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Im thinking now of a chaos choking someone and the visor reflecting it

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Looks like custom map for roblox

maiden umbra
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I did this

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Is there anything anyone would be interested in me doing?

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I defo wont reimagine the CI and probably not the MTF as I like their designs

frigid epoch
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different scientist outfits/gear would be cool

maiden umbra
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Ill surely add that onto my list of concepts to do

frigid epoch
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if another concept art position at northwood opens up you should lowkey consider applying

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this is good stuff

maiden umbra
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I have a few concepts I can submit

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Want to see?

frigid epoch
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yea

maiden umbra
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Most recent I finished yesterday.

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A paint over of the Taschenratte tank for WoT

potent sorrel
maiden umbra
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A popoular mod maker said he will turn this into a mod skin for the game this weekend

maiden umbra
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I can assure you

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I made that

frigid epoch
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there’s a lot of depth here i’m a big fan

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it’s very detailed

maiden umbra
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I wont show everything frankly, theres too much

potent sorrel
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Dawg

maiden umbra
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Thanks, I would never have been able to tell

frigid epoch
maiden umbra
maiden umbra
maiden umbra
maiden umbra
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Overall, kinda new to this stuff so im not that good, but I am open to commissions ig. Tho I am kinda tryna build up a portfolio

pearl citrus
maiden umbra
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You guessed it

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It was only the presentation style that I took inspo from

pearl citrus
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I very much like the "public" version, as you called it. It's a pretty good mix between the tactical and more civil appearance.

maiden umbra
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Thanks

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I like that one a lot too

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What do you think of patrol vs combat difference? I didnt want to leave the guard defenceless incase shit goes down and he cant get to the armour but I want him to have something whereas combat just adds onto it

pearl citrus
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The SCP logos are a bit... prominent in my taste. I'd much rather have the group's insignia than the exposed foundation's logo

maiden umbra
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For the public one? Yeah defo..

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Coulda done

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insignia for uh

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IOTA 10

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I htink thats the undercover guys

pearl citrus
maiden umbra
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I dislike how facility guards were turned into mallcops, wanted to make them feel and look intimidating and being a pawn of the organisation

vocal roost
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so tacticool

maiden umbra
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tactisnore

pearl citrus
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That doesn't mean that all guard models should look like this.

maiden umbra
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So who would be guarding the rest of the facility?

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I mean if there were guards that spawned or at least in lore like assembled in Entrance after the breach to regroup

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I could understand and like different variants

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And in fact now that I think about it

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That would be a cool project

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EZ, HCZ, and LCZ variants of guards

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Ima add that to the list

frigid epoch
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the guards in entrance like check keycards and that’s it. they think even their smgs are overkill for their job

pearl citrus
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At the moment, I think it could generally be assumed that all the security officers guarding the HCZ have been killed (or at least, we don't see them in game)

maiden umbra
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Id want a guard like this to at least have some basic headset hat, I still stand by thinking current guard design is so unintimidating and everything

frigid epoch
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they’re over-equipped for their job but are woefully under-equipped for the situation they’re in

frigid epoch
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why would you want the dude letting you through a checkpoint to look like ghost from modern warfare or smth

pearl citrus
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^

maiden umbra
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Damn its just a personal rpoject-

frigid epoch
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again heavier equipment is fine for guards in other areas

maiden umbra
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It really isnt that deep guys

frigid epoch
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i just don’t think the guards we play as need changes is all

maiden umbra
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If I was working for NW I could understand all this criticism

pearl citrus
frigid epoch
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i’m not criticizing your designs or your art i’m just saying that the guard design in game is fine in my opinion

pearl citrus
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Some folks like the current design, others do not

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and that's fine

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I like what you did here, but some aspects could be corrected here

maiden umbra
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Welp maybe ill nail it more with Class d or nerd

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I already thought of idea where class D has his jumpsuit partially unzipped and tied around his waist, still revealing an orange undershirt but one without long sleeves

pearl citrus
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Sounds like a cool idea

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good luck!

tough wedge
potent sorrel
tough wedge
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stars

potent sorrel
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Its so peak

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Especially the flashback moment with kid at end

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They shouldve let more of that orchestral music play on background

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I dont care if the main character isnt Artyom anymore, im still playing it

distant jacinth
potent sorrel
maiden umbra
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Aight I decided on what I will do next

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I think the mood board says everything

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I might go

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For as much as like 4 variants

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Was thinking of default, janitor, "relaxed" and soemthing else

paper holly
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damn, double mr. beast scam event??

wind laurel
stark walrus
potent sorrel
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What if he was like

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What if like

potent sorrel
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I mean im still buying

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I assume they added gun jamming

wind laurel
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Mc won’t be silent all the time

potent sorrel
wind laurel
potent sorrel
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I guess

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Another scene scrapped

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Gonna redo the juggernaut ptsd part

warped iron
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Just redo the whole thing in blender

potent sorrel
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The first minute are kinda boring but im trynna add more action to it or atleast tension

warped iron
potent sorrel
wind laurel
glossy acorn
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CINEMA4D MENTIONED

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LETS GOOO

potent sorrel
wind laurel
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Who are you trying to fool

potent sorrel
potent sorrel
# wind laurel

Im gonna sue and destroy A4 Games cuz they stole my idea with PTSD flashbacks

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Cuz fire

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Yes im smart

wind laurel
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If anything you’re the one getting sued

potent sorrel
wind laurel
potent sorrel
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Distant relative

wind laurel
potent sorrel
wind laurel
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Keep dreaming chud

potent sorrel
stark walrus
plucky hound
pearl citrus
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Funny grenade launcher

sinful cradle
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i didn't think goated people in this server existed

wind laurel
sinful cradle
wind laurel
sinful cradle
wind laurel
tough wedge
potent sorrel
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anyone know what type of helmet do chaos use?

granite snow
potent sorrel
plucky hound
potent sorrel
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Ah yes i love it when my enemy has Altyn but i always spawn with either birdshot shotgun ammo, HP ammo, or just 9mm pistol

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i swear Tarkov has some generational curse on me, everytime i spawn with bad loot, every other player or bad scavs know my location but when im fully armored with good ammo, nobodys there

maiden umbra
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FIRST preliminary skech done in few minutes

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Each will have their own appearance quirks and one that ties him to his "title"

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The current idea behind each design

plucky hound
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(or loafers in this scenario I guess)

marble tulip
maiden umbra
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Make it more interesting

untold spear
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o

trim pine
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d class O'toole

sweet quail
granite snow
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70 or 60

haughty sonnet
potent sorrel
flint panther
dusky crest
dusky crest
delicate marten
trim pine
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Its not a render

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its just screenshoted

delicate marten
trim pine
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I wanna make it an animation

toxic merlin
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"If I am killed for simply living, let death be kinder than man."

maiden umbra
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Thank the lawd, photobashing doesnt include much painting cus these hoomans suck

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Ill give veteran some bette shoes

potent sorrel
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@heavy verge is fmg really thos fucking big?

heavy verge
flint panther
sour horizon
# flint panther

u should make him look at the camera bc this looks goofy with him looking a little to the left

flint panther
sour horizon
maiden umbra
potent sorrel
maiden umbra
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Idk the context

potent sorrel
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@dusky crest @flint panther @wind laurel they dont know..

maiden umbra
potent sorrel
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Since end of 2023 i keep hearing same sentence

maiden umbra
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what

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"Idk the context"?

wind laurel
potent sorrel
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Iron eclipse will release in2. Days trust

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Cuz look at the 40% done work

wind laurel
maiden umbra
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1/4 Done

fading cave
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It looks pretty cool but the hand holding the mop is funny looking

maiden umbra
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Yeah x3 I know

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I dont have a good reference for that

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Wait tbf I could jus have my mum take a pic of my hand

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Relying too much on photos for such shit when I can just create the photobashing image

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Ill redo that hand later tho

potent sorrel
heavy verge
maiden umbra
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@potent sorrel
Kevlar helmet? No problem stopping a dead-on hit to 44 Magnum.
If it is what appears to be just a steel helmet. Then not sure

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The angle of the camera skews how it looks, to me it looks like a dead-on side shot in which case no

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potent sorrel
maiden umbra
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I mean yeah helmets were meant to ricochet glancing shots, its just I cant actually tell if this is a glancing shot or not cus of the camera angle

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Ive got a French ww2 resistance helmet which what appears to be ricochet damage

potent sorrel
warped iron
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incredible gassy

potent sorrel
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Also

wind laurel
potent sorrel
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@azure glen use Jacob's Mw2019 gun ports

potent sorrel
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Theyre way better detailed and lighting impact is better

maiden umbra
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Actually having seen better angles of the shot

warped iron
potent sorrel
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Only thing killing this guy is Plot itself

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And guard is son of plot

potent sorrel
# maiden umbra

The guy wearing it had lot of luck for bullet to ricochet ngl

wind laurel
# maiden umbra

Its more likely to be just a dent from a meele hit or rubble

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They didn’t protect from shit back in the day

maiden umbra
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If objects could speak they'd tell us a lot

azure glen
warped iron
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green smokes have two meanings

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poison and fart

maiden umbra
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Safe to say metal helmets did protect from shit back in the day

glossy trench
potent sorrel
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Theyre better

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I think u used most common revolver from sfm workshop

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Mixing cartoony gun with better looking model is just not good

marsh heath
azure glen
# warped iron poison and fart

Didn't even cross my mind, I put green fog there because thats what i did for the other two things I made, as you can see here. But I understand what you mean

potent sorrel
# warped iron bro be moving like thrag

Also abt this
There will be a scene where jugg is chocking guard but he stabs his hand, still not flinching but throws him away out of annoyance
totally not exaggerating with his strenght

potent sorrel
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I thought the sfm porter did mistake but no it was blender model like that

azure glen
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I'll watch a video about finger posing , I only have 44 hours in sfm

potent sorrel
azure glen
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I read it the wrong way mb

potent sorrel
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It looks fine but also not fine

potent sorrel
granite snow
wind laurel
granite snow
wind laurel
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@potent sorrel you did one tarkov trailer now imma do another one

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Its lowk peak

dusky crest
potent sorrel
wind laurel
flint panther
potent sorrel
flint panther
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They should drive instead of walking?

potent sorrel
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I meant

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Without guns

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Forgor to add cuz im gym with friends

flint panther
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Two lies in the sentence

potent sorrel
flint panther
potent sorrel
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Smile and guppiere should come with

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We should atleast hop on something together

maiden umbra
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@pearl citrus Whadya think btw?

tough wedge
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@dusky crest plays as tutorial, are you getting banned?

distant jacinth
granite snow
maiden umbra
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3/4

dusky crest
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scp unity d

wind laurel
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@potent sorrel what gun should be here in this scene?

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cuz i'm not sure whether make it an ak or something else

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more suitable for ntf

potent sorrel
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For ntf I'd just go with maybe custome m4 or e11 with scope, laser and handle grip

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I think you would have to go with custom gun because he is pulling the chamber thingy from side while from e11 its all way back

pearl citrus
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more variations are always welcome.

maiden umbra
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Ill be haoppy to do concept art for yall 🤑

wind laurel
potent sorrel
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I mean yes making it sl accurate is good but lack of guns in sl is pain in ass

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Just add asval

wind laurel
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Alongside with ak

potent sorrel
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Totally did not pick russian guns because for some reason my head thinks chaos's are russians

wind laurel
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  • russian shit is hella cheap
potent sorrel
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So i automatically assume theyd use russian weaponry

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Asval itself is great and my beloved gun

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Once hated by me

wind laurel
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I’m currently struggling to find a good helicopter model with detailed interior

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And debating whether to use sl models or some other

potent sorrel
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Sl helicopter is terrible choice tbh😭

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And the car

wind laurel
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Ik

potent sorrel
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Thats why i use literal truck in animations cuz u cannot tell me 20 armored dudes fit in that clown ass car

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And for helicopter

wind laurel
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But all sketchfab models are ass

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I’m currently trying to export some from other games

potent sorrel
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Probably this helicopter as its interior seemed big to fit 10 ppl in it

wind laurel
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But like i have no clue where to seach for the warzone model

potent sorrel
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Port sfm model to blender and save it as fbx or some compatible model

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I think there are plenty of these shits in workshop

wind laurel
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So i wasted my time

potent sorrel
potent sorrel
wind laurel
potent sorrel
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Apache

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But nvm

wind laurel
potent sorrel
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Its only 2 seat

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Little bird would be ass too cuz only 6 humans capacity

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Idk just put 2 little birds depending on how many ntfs are there

wind laurel
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I mean it looks fine on the screenshots

potent sorrel
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Theyre mostly taken in gmod, gotta see in sfm

wind laurel
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I swear if i don’t find the good heli model by monday

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I will burn this planet down

potent sorrel
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Ask others maybe they do

wind laurel
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I will redo the cringy head

potent sorrel
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looks completely fine to me

maiden umbra
potent sorrel
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looks ok

wind laurel
wind laurel
maiden umbra
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Oh I thought it was a concept you made

wind laurel
potent sorrel
wind laurel
potent sorrel
wind laurel
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If i’ll replace chaos might as well do the same with mtf atp

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Just need to find good models

potent sorrel
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Sfm has good ones aswell

wind laurel
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From tarkov or other games

potent sorrel
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Almost forgot s2fm has tarkov shit too

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Im not sure whatever its vmdl or other model type

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Cant look it up rn aswell

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Only 4 guns sadly lmao

dusky crest
potent sorrel
wind laurel
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I have honestly no clue what to go with for ntf

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Need to seach further

potent sorrel
wind laurel
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It doesn’t fit for realistic theme

potent sorrel
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On many renders they look better than expected

wind laurel
potent sorrel
wind laurel
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I’m too lazy to do them in those numbers

potent sorrel
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Imma go sleep

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I still have the ptsd part to remaster and continue hardstuck part

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I should return to first idea of ptsd part with burning room

maiden umbra
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Class-D Reimagined

Fresh Fish: Fresh new uniform ⁽ᵒʳ ˢᵒ ʰᵉ ʷᵃˢ ᵗᵒˡᵈ⁾ a little piece of paper explaining his task, and off he goes! ᴴᵉ ʷⁱˡˡ ᵇᵉ ˡᵘᶜᵏʸ ᵗᵒ ᵐᵃᵏᵉ ⁱᵗ ᵗᵒ ᵗʰᵉ ᵉⁿᵈ ᵒᶠ ᵗʰᵉ ʷᵉᵉᵏ

__O.G.: __ Having survived a few weeks and some of the most dangerous experiments, he has proven him to be a useful asset that will be kept on board for, a little longer, or until he is ripped apart. ᴴⁱˢ ᶠᵃᵗᵉ ʳᵉˡⁱᵉˢ ᵒⁿ ᵐᵒʳᵉ ˡᵘᶜᵏ ᵗʰᵃⁿ ʰᵉ ᶜᵃʳᵉˢ ᵗᵒ ᵃᵈᵐⁱᵗ.

Rat: Stay low in every aspect of this place holding onto the naive hope that she can somehow get out of this. ᴬᶠᵗᵉʳ ᵃˡˡ, ʷʰʸ ʷᵒᵘˡᵈ ᵗʰᵉ ᴳᵘᵃʳᵈˢ ˡⁱᵉ?

Errand Boy: Complete suck up in every aspect to the Guards, hated by all, but he has it figured out and has made it even longer than most O.Gs. do. ᴴᵉ ʰᵃˢ ⁿᵒ ˢʰᵃᵐᵉ ⁱⁿ ʷʰᵃᵗ ʰᵉ ʰᵃˢ ᵗᵒ ᵈᵒ ˢᵒᵐᵉᵗⁱᵐᵉˢ ᵗᵒ ᵇᵉ ᵗᵃᵏᵉⁿ ᵒᶠᶠ ᵗʰᵉ ⁿᵉˣᵗ ˢᶜᴾ⁻⁰⁴⁹ ᵗᵉˢᵗⁱⁿᵍ ˡⁱˢᵗ.

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@pearl citrus

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I must say, I am getting very good at this photobashing

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At least, my benchmark I am setting for myself is the Ready or Not Concept Art

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I am curious, who is SL's concept artist. I am VERY curious as to what THEY think of this stuff

maiden umbra
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Ta

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I knwo someone suggested reimagined Scientist

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But also randomly thought of SCP-049, that would be cool

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Which one we thinking, nerd or birb

paper holly
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I thought that was gay mordecai and rigby for a second

marble tulip
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These are super cool

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You're pretty good at photo bashing

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You mind some critique?

maiden umbra
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Its the one thing no one ever offers :/

maiden umbra
marble tulip
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Kewl I'll be home in like an hour n a half I'll do some proper drawovers

maiden umbra
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Oh cool, can't wait to see that when I wake up

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Are you gonna critique the design itself or like

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The technical side of the thing

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Till then Foxy_Sleep

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Oh lemme show you this then also fine sir.

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That was my first human character photobash

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They're just to practice and as "fan art" but I am going to a 4 year uni course for concept art this year so getting all the practice one can get before that

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With a slim chance of hoping anyone finds deeper interest in this besides a like

marble tulip
# maiden umbra Ofc

Before i touch on the design, its worth to mention some anatomical and proportion issues, to note with the guard design, the head was a size or two too small, and the right hand was a bit tiny and flipped around the wrong way. On the class D, across them I found their legs were a bit short, and on the last one the hand was flipped around the wrong way. While anatomy and proportion isnt at the forefront when designing, its important to have a good and accurate foundation to build your design upon. it'll go a long way in making your work feel more professional

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in terms of design, I find you did a great job at building visual interest around the head on this one, lots of nice shapes between the shoulder pads and vest

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as for the design, i didnt change all that much! to note: for the ammo pouches, while repetition of shapes is a vital part of design to establish a good shape language and consistency, I find you dont really want to have more than 3 repeating elements next to eachother, it can lead to the design starting to feel kind of samey, so i replaced the second set of pouches with another bag

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around the waist, i beefed up the shapes of the bags to contriubute to a stronger silhouette, and moved the belt-line up a bit. Usually, its good to have to belt line a bit higher to eliminate the concept artists greatest enemy: the 50/50

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the human body is built in such a way that the legs and torso are about 50/50 usually, so whatever you can do to break that is going to make it a lot more interesting.

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for the grenades', i tilted them so they crossed that boundary between the torso and legs, breaking that hard defining line between them

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i also beefed up the armor on the shoulders and neck to contribute to the silhouette more

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this, is a small thing. But, i erased most of the foundation logos, mostly due to them being redundant, and also because its kind of overdone in the scp sphere.

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as for the d class, most of what ive done here is in effort to guide attention up to the head with visual interest. Generally speaking, with human characters the place you're gonna want the viewer looking is the head. I changed the shirt to white, and made it into a tank top to add more shifts in value

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also erased some of the high vis lines down on the knees and moved them down closer to the feet, more on that later..

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for this guy, i added the white undershirt in for the same reasons as before, the big changes come in with the high vis stripes. These are a great way to instantly make a design look more functional, though overusing them can segment your design in ways that you might not want. I removed the horizontal lines that created those hard separation between parts of the arms and legs, and added a repeating rectangle element on the chest and near the shoes

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generally speaking, you'll want your design elements and colors that you used to make interest in the upper half of the body to "reappear" down at the bottom of the design, around the shoes and boots really.

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you can see this in action here, on one of your mood board refrences

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the white that was used on the top repeates once more down on the boots,

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along with the black part reappearing again down near the ankles

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you can also see how the visual interest was guided up to the head, with those cloth tabs appearing around the shoulders and down the arms, but not on the legs

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also to add, I really like how with the D class sheet you had 4 seperate ideas for each guy. Really shows the though your putting behind these

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one more example

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black part the dominates the top part of the design shows up again at the boots

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this one is a whole playlist

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these videos are all great

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I think your goals are within reach. With just a bit of development I think youll be able to start shopping your work to people, and then with that itll turn into a proper gig. Keep pushing!! You're doing great so far

paper holly
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This is valuable advice for more than just this guy, gonna take some of it myself

mint girder
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Wowzers

low quarry
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good guy grongo shares great art advice

maiden umbra
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@marble tulip Well fuck me that's more critique than I've received in the past 3 years combined. I appreciate everything and it just being constructive instead of dogging on me <3. I mean wow that was nerdy shit and I love it

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I didn't really do a white undershirt cus I don't have any theory since I'm self taught and don't have education in this but I do know that I didn't want some situation where Class D from a glance or if his waist is hidden to look like a scientist but I did absolutely have the idea of a white undershirt

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But yeah my hands are shit since I know nothing about anatomy

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What would you rate the guard and class D out of 10 then?

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Cus ngl once I put my project in the "Finished" folder I am not the kind to go back to it but you make me want to actually go back and see if I can improve this somehow furrher

maiden umbra
flint panther
potent sorrel
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Mfs waking up to seeing an ACTUAL art discussion instead of gif discussion

maiden umbra
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Ikr.

trim pine
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WIP Thingy, first actually decent sculpted model

wind laurel
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@potent sorrel do you think this model fits for the mtf if i make it blue

potent sorrel
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I mean

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Tbh just make everything custom but also recognizable that its a ntf

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Or add emblem like pmcs do

marble tulip
marble tulip
# maiden umbra What would you rate the guard and class D out of 10 then?

I'm not gonna rate them like this, such ratings are kind of arbitrary I feel. If you're looking to take these designs further, with the guard I'd look into doing more with that chest rig thing and maybe make the design into a whole high techy military dude. It's a pretty cool little element, reminds me of the dead space RIG

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As for the class D it's hard to take a design like this further since... They really are just prisoners and there's not a whole lot you can do with an idea like that. However that's not saying you shouldn't try, I recommend looking around Pinterest or artstation to see if you can find some cool elements you may want to add

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Getting better at design has a lot to do with looking at references (I believe they call this "building your visual library")

marble tulip
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If you're looking for a next step after this, and I know this is a tired topic, id recommend really drilling your anatomy proportion and construction fundamentals

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Can't really understand how important good foundational skills like those are to your design work

maiden umbra
marble tulip
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Just feel like it would've been more of the same that I touched on on the other ones

marble tulip
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High vis works like this; reflective stripes reflect the light and some of that light then goes on to illuminate the neon colors of the shirts themselves

maiden umbra
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Cool

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Didn't know it's metal tho

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I'll try my best to incorporate this stuff

trim pine
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not necasserly metal

maiden umbra
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Also what about just getting a picture of myself in a pose and tracing that as a base?

maiden umbra
trim pine
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Well for maintenance personnell at site 02 I see them wearing jackets or hoodies, since the facility is probably quite cold

maiden umbra
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Yea

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But this is class dick, not as much luxury

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Aside from the errand boy who has fleece

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And we don't want d boys pulling jumpsuit down and make themselves less visible

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But that does make me interested in for the fun of it designing characters around all the classes that aren't in the game

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Containment engineer, 05, facility manager

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Etcc

trim pine
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Director Mayfair would be fun

maiden umbra
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The man in the flesh

wind laurel
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@potent sorrel i'm crine look at this

wind laurel
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i hated every single second of texturing this

delicate marten
wind laurel
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it's not a single piece

delicate marten
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holy 30 models and materials

wind laurel
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thats why i have exporting cod models to blender

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at least now i have my mtf model for animation

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also a hood alt

trim pine
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Now give him a sniper

wind laurel
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Cuz its like a facility

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And rhere’s no long distances

potent sorrel
wind laurel
potent sorrel
wind laurel
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Now i need to get chaos and that would be it

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I would lowkey like to give them semi modern equipment

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Like half is hella old and other half is modern

potent sorrel
maiden umbra
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Alt versions

void phoenix
maiden umbra
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Photobashed/Paintedover

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I guess you could say 50/50?

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You get loads of references, crop, warp, reshape until they get your desired shape, paint any missing details that are too niche to find references for

maiden umbra
# maiden umbra <@371746364520136706>

For OG I wanted to make more interesting shapes on his reflective stripes on his uniform on his lower half, I think triple stripes is quite interesting

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As for Errand Boy I redid his uniform to be less typical to the rest of the prisoners to show facility dont have such stuff on standby easily and its a bit more "anti-protocol" clothing like him having pockets to access, and having to sow on his ID number

heavy verge
tough wedge
dusky crest
glossy acorn
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this fellr

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(i dont liek how it looks)

wind laurel
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I'm not so sure for these rubber gloves

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i might keep them as an alt

wind laurel
potent sorrel
wind laurel
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but ts is chaos

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overall looks okay ig

potent sorrel
wind laurel
potent sorrel
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@dusky crest the gatling moment soon

maiden umbra
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It will remove dexterity and he will gain nothing

wind laurel
maiden umbra
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Yeah but that whole design has already been criticised to hell about how it makes no sense

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I think that post actually got deleted for some reason later down the line and idk if I have the image saved

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A few posts after the og got deleted

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But if my memory suits me correctly, their boots are completely outdated in how they are worn and such boots just wouldnt be worn now, gloves are pointless. Gasmask also makes no sense with random tubes

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The design sure does look cool and unique, but for some top facility that should be using top notch stuff, most of the stuff they have is just outdated or makes no sense

wind laurel
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it looks cool = works

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trust🤞

maiden umbra
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But this is also tacticool?

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Are we agreeing the design isnt good?

wind laurel
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its good

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because it's cool

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and distinctive

tough wedge
tough wedge
flint panther
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@tough wedge does it look like fortnite lighting

wind laurel
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you'd legit be dead if you did ts for more than 3 hours

maiden umbra
tough wedge
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Most of their stuff is outdated but if theres one thing they aren't cheaping out on, is the guns that do the speaking

tough wedge
maiden umbra
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Can we have SAS? Why we have SAS at home

tough wedge
flint panther
tough wedge
tough wedge
potent sorrel
tough wedge
flint panther
potent sorrel
tough wedge
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bro is just to

tough wedge
flint panther
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what you mean

tough wedge
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where are cockroaches

tough wedge
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why

tough wedge
tough wedge
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he was that hungry?

flint panther
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I told before that he is on drug trip and doing crazy shit

flint panther
tough wedge
flint panther
tough wedge
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because he doesn't look like some crazy guy

flint panther
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he looks like a guy who will slime you for absolutely no reason

tough wedge
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he looks like someone who is about to be slimed by guard in next frame

flint panther
tough wedge
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also how he will react when Chaos Insurgent will come out of that Scientist body?

flint panther
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he will not share his goods for sure

wind laurel
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@potent sorrel@maiden umbra now it better

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i'll keep the rubber gloves as an alt

maiden umbra
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I like that more

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Also why the hose for the filter so long

potent sorrel
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way better now

wind laurel
maiden umbra
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I dont recognise that model

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Oh its a PMG

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Yeah no that isn't how a PMG functions

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Thats one of Infinity Ward's blunders

wind laurel
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i know

maiden umbra
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Done right here tho

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Weird how they can get it right one time then next time D_PepeShitRocket

wind laurel
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it would swing

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now i can finally eat

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haven't ate anything today

maiden umbra
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Seems like a way to put the hose and whole system in danger, but hey, your stuff

wind laurel
maiden umbra
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Yeah but that hose filter is meant to be kept in a bag, letting it rest and not straining the parts

wind laurel
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now i need to buy a new one

maiden umbra
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I only bought a Polish MP4 gasmask for STALKER cosplay

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I woulda bought a PBF but sellers and pricing was unreliable and I dont trust the asbestos filters, nor did I have the time or money to buy 3D printed inserts to replace them

wind laurel
maiden umbra
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From ebay or?

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or weird 3rd party sites?

wind laurel
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which is the ukrainian ebay

maiden umbra
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Oh yeah that place

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I ordered some cheap af COBI from that

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Idk if it delivers outside of Poland/Ukraine

wind laurel
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but i just pick them up manually when i'm in there

maiden umbra
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Still dont know

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Should I now reimagine SCP-049

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Or Scientists next

wind laurel
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cuz now they look like walmart guards

maiden umbra
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I already did guards

wind laurel
maiden umbra
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Only things I wanna do rn is either Nerds of 049

wind laurel
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this looks unironically 2x better then now tbh

maiden umbra
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Yeah thats cool af

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Maybe just tiny bit tone down on the armour

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I think ill do 049 cus I need something smaller to break the habit

flint panther
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JOHN SCP SL, IF YOU HEAR ME, THIS IS SOO PEAK

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thank you

wind laurel
wind laurel
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Bro actually believed

flint panther
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Current one genuinely looks like 106

flint panther
wind laurel
flint panther
wind laurel
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One thing stopping him (that was successfuly evaded) is 80 years old grandma with dementia

flint panther
wind laurel
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And constantly stole watermelons

flint panther
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You ve seen this

wind laurel
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Yeah

wind laurel
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Only i can post tzk

granite snow
wind laurel
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Your tzk-pass

granite snow
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Thank you!legendarychest

flint panther
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But I wasn’t participating

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Just looking

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Watching

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Taking notes