Bass / Techno Beat

[smoky kiln]

I am realtivly new to FL, I made this beat with, Producer edition Trail Fl studio, Serum 2, Kicks, Fills & some Stock Effects. I just want the all the feedback possible I have updated it a bit but as I am using the Trail edition I cannot edit it cause I made it yesterday. I hope you could help me because I am NEW to FL

[quasi river]

The rythm of the base is very repetetive. I would try mixing it up a little

[smoky kiln]

I am new to Fl studio, So ALL Tips are needed and Crucial.

[slender bramble]

drums are Clean

[cosmic meteor]

hey i would reccomend you to equalize and get out the "parasyte" sounds to have a better kick mix

[limpid nest]

Very repetitive. I'd suggest adding more variations in the base, perhaps adding some sparkle of bright clear sounds to contrast the dark bass. I think a vox or two wouldn't go wrong either. It's pretty good for a beginner though!!

[bitter surge]

Nice

[plain flower]

Change the clap cuz the one u used doesn't fit at all. And also it sounds like something is out of key, I think the last note

[smoky kiln]

Maybe it is.

[smoky kiln]

Thz

Thx