feedback for demo for a song im makin

[meager sedge]

im looking for feedback for a song that's the climax of the story

this is just the demo, i'll change some things in the future

and the main violin acts as the main vocal, and the flutes as the backup vocals

[dark ember]

Is this a song for a game?

[meager sedge]

yea

[dark ember]

then it's not bad, sounds like it's for some kind of indie game

[glacial cliff]

I think its great, you should add an underlying square

[brittle pilot]

sounds great, i think it needs more bass though

[river vine]

I like it a lot. sounds really good in my opinion

[plush mirage]

RPG ending type beat, love the melodies and the progression

the instruments could work better with a little more reverb sprinkled on them and more panning so you have a wider stereo mix

[chilly umbra]

I like it, my only suggestion would be revisiting the drums you made at the beginning. After 0:22 they're great in my opinion

[alpine oracle]

i think if its the climax of a story then you should add some louder bass bro ngl

[little sphinx]

what kind of game?

[meager sedge]

i'll keep that in mind

[atomic sundial]

what if you layer the intro strings with a piano playing the same melody but on a lower octave??

OOh and maybe, instead of starting with the melody, you could start the song with a beautiful arpeggiated chord

OOh and on the chorus from 0:21 you could layer the strings with the flute you used before, I feel like they need a little bit of body right

[wintry flame]

freedom motif would be fire there

jokes aside add bass

[meager sedge]

there is bass in the song but it's just really quiet, i make sure to turn it up later on

[little sphinx]

some twinkle sounds would sound nice

[unique furnace]

i love this so much it sounds so beautiful, the thing i would try is to make the lead a chord too climax even harder, i dont know if it will be too much but it can make it better maybe. anyway really well made!

[wintry flame]

square wave would be cool here

square melody