guys.. my does this sound so bad to me?

[grand walrus]

i could tell you what i think about it

i couldn't tell you why you think it sounds bad though

[steady kestrel]

pls do what you think about it

[grand walrus]

cool sounds, cool rhythmic motif with the bass going on, honestly just continue it, could touch the mix up a bit though but, maybe worry about that later

[barren orbit]

when the melody kicks in, it doesn't stand out from the rest of the mix

have you applied the distort effect to the master?

or the the melody synth itself?

perhaps the melodie synth shouldn't have distortion

[steady kestrel]

oh ok

alr

[barren orbit]

i don't recommend this

if you have done this perhaps you should undo this and instead apply the effect to the bass only

[rich creek]

its actually kinda cool

kinda reminds me of the amalgam theme