What do you think?
Maybe it need a few more layers
#Trying new things
lost halo
ivory swallow
What do you think?
Maybe it need a few more layers
ooh i like it, maybe slightly more variation in instruments could do some good, apart from that sounds good to me
fiery wave
What do you think?
Maybe it need a few more layers
It's actually really good. But I'd take out a few frequencies from the clap and, as has already been mentioned, add a few variations. Maybe also a part that isn't quite as “heavy.”
lusty creek
It's good. I'd add a slight reverb to the lead, and maybe just a touch of delay, to give it a fuller sound. Also a few more instrumental variations like has been said. Potentially a very light pluck arpeggio could work, but it's not necessary
devout coyote
idk how to explain it but it seems empty kinda bland in the drop add pitched up clipping 808s and get 2 slimey on this, other than that this hits 🔥
meager wasp
yeah and the drums are a bit to loud but its good
severe pasture
What do you think?
Maybe it need a few more layers
That clap/snare sounds pretty off.
The melody is decent but it feels like its using way too much high end and not enough mid range. Usually the plucks are mid range and lead is high range but that is switched out here.
I would personally try raising lead up an octave and dropping the plucks down one. If it doesn't sound good to you then dont keep it but that is what i would suggest.
Hit hats are also a little quiet.
Pretty decent tho i like the sound you are going for