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[candid otter]

Prob one of the best beats ive made

[candid otter]

something i just noticed maybe i could make the kicks louder

[south tusk]

I like it. No issues. Maybe the keys could fade a little bit earlier.

[mint girder]

Not bad bro 👊

[tulip cloud]

mayyybee but i think mellow beats r always nice if thats what ur going for but doesnt hurt to play around with it. so good tho!

[gloomy otter]

not bad, its actually good!

[hushed perch]

not many complaints, more variation would be nice though. the high pitched voice would be better if it played less so it becomes more special

[sharp dagger]

Might just be me but i would cut some of the high off that Ahhhh sound just a tiny tiny bit and make the kick a bit louder. Dose sound pretty good though

[brazen wind]

add some velocity to the hihat for variation! And makes it sound more human

[obsidian viper]

I think that a breackbeat would be great in the middle of the track. Like in the final verse of You Got Me - The Roots

[mild halo]

I think it could use a little bit of texture in the background, like a subtle pad that matches the chords of the song or a held note texture. The bass guitar sounds really good, and the keys are great too!

[gray rune]

maybe its just me but i think if the hihats were a TINY bit quieter the beat would be perfect
i love this tho

[tranquil flint]

My suggestions make the Rhodes have more lows you don’t have to eq tbh just get 1 one 2 of the notes and shift them down an octave for that chill sounding sound and make the choir a little quieter I like the panning of the Rhodes to also you should resolve the song instead of just stopping it right there this can be as simple as taking out some parts slowly or having a volume automation that turns down the entire song

Another suggestion is that you can slightly distort the kicks and make them a tiny bit Louder

Right now the kick feels too soft even for lofi

Overall 7/10 a little basic but it gets the job done of sounding decent