TRAP BEAT THAT IS VERY TUFF AND CAN I HAVE FEEDBACK PLEASE

[wild lance]

the bass is out of key with the chords/lead

[lavish copper]

are you sure i dont think it is

[wild lance]

I am pretty sure, and if it isnt it really sounds like it

might not be the notes themselves but the bass does not sound right

[lavish copper]

the bass in in tune with C and it follows the same notes, im not sure how i would fix this

[wild lance]

use a different bass then

doesnt sound good at all imo

or maybe dont follow the melody exactly

[lavish copper]

lmk if this sounds any better

[wild lance]

a little. imo just use a low 808 and dont follow the melody

[toxic ruin]

The 808 is following the melody 1:1 and its kinda boring and repetitive

You can try to use less 808 or change it pattern so its more interesting

[vague yew]

I think should apply a chorus instrument in low volume to get that full trap vibe

[upbeat crystal]

the 808s are hitting too often, try to use them less frequently to give variation between the melody and 808s

[untold kiln]

808s is repetitive, the bass feels a bit too off key, try making some different patterns for the 808.

[vague yew]

Yep Sounds SO much better

[true tendon]

the 808 needs to hit like half as much and there's too much variation imo, stick to like to a few bass notes and have small variation, 808 is extremely melodic when it should be more rythmic if that makes sense

[pastel plume]

make sure that your sub is playing the root notes of your chords, idk if it's just me but there seems to be a little dissonance between the sub and your chords.

[outer fiber]

Sounds better than the first one, but the 808 feels too distracting imo. It's doing a lot, and feels more like it's trying to be a lead than a nice rhythmic 808.

[shadow tree]

it's a little repetitive and the drums are a little loud, but i think you're all set if you fix that

or maybe not

idk

[lavish copper]

how we feelin now?

[toxic ruin]

That 808 pattern is not it bro

Try some other combinations

[odd perch]

change the bass

[queen surge]

i think the bass is still out of key gng

[upbeat crystal]

the bass is still hitting too often and I believe it's out of key

[mint peak]

Hey, this is pretty cool, I like the lead a lot & the way the song is constructed.

Although, the bass pattern & sound don't fit at all, try out a different bass & play with the pattern as well since the bass is pretty high & changing the octave to 1 below is going to make it sound pretty bad at its current state.

Another key thing I noticed but might not matter that much in trap, is the repetitiveness, a small switch up/variation would go long way, but take that with a grain salt.

Overall, pretty good, just fix up the bass & if you want to, try creating some variation so it's not so repetitive, cheers bro, you got this

[stone ridge]

this is so gassy it may be even incredibly gassy
you need to add the tr 808 cowbell somewhere and some clavs maybe
best part: the intro