#Cool thing I made

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earnest holly
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Sounds cool right
id like to extend it a tad but idk how lol
feedback needed

loud anvil
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I really like the piano used in the piece as it has some great groove and notes! To extend it, maybe remove elements to focus on something specific like the lead synth or piano to give focus and maybe even add a new variation or sound. The little digital glitch at 0:07 FX at the beginning was also nice. I also thought that maybe the synth carrying the lead could have a wider sound to enhance it or maybe add some bass to the track. Overall, a great track. Curious as to what genre you're aiming for?

earnest holly
polar turtle
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Maybe add a slicer with the amen break, and add variation, it's really good tho, it sounds like a mix beetwen deltarune thingy and some ultra kill, but I'd say it's like some sort of breakcore, it's really cool, maybe at the start u could use a low tempo, so when the amen break hits, it's like rough and cool, it's just my opinion though, keep going !

lunar shuttle
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I think the drums should be louder

young flint
pastel citrusBOT
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clear reef
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overall, the rythm and melody is pretty nice, but i dont really like the blowing sounds used. They feel a bit out of place. The drums should also be louder, and the ending is abrupt.