Start of creative process

[fathom whale]

I like it so far. Ill be adding more sounds and such.
Give me feedback/opinions please on thanks
Just trying to get better.

[night vessel]

at like 14 1/2 seconds, that new sound comes in, it's very sharp, too pixely i think

very good tho, nice song

also chord at 40 second is off i think

[fathom whale]

Im not sure what you mean about the bass sound at 14 second. how ever i think i see what your talking about with the key being off i did try other keys to see what sounds better. I tried others but it sounds best to me still mgiht change it in time. Thankyou for the feedback though

[night vessel]

no worries, i could be off tbf, im not that great at music so im prolly just waffling

[fathom whale]

Lol its all good im not that great also. Still learning and messin with it

and im hearing impaird so im sure that makes things a bit eh for me

[neat flower]

Summsss

[grand ocean]

I like the bass sound and the melody, the kick sounds without power, good sound bro

[fathom whale]

What’s summsss?

[night vessel]

I dont even eat cottage cheese

nah but same here, idek what that means

[fathom whale]

Cottage chesse ? What?

[deep lagoon]

I don’t know what kind of music or listen to this type of music, but i don’t think you need any more sounds, it’s structured ok to me

[fickle raven]

Impressive work tbh. Need to mix it well though. And like already said, I think it already sounds pretty good. Don't force to add more stuff.