Tried a little bit different with the mixing

[fossil tusk]

Broooo the melo is sooo nice, that guitar💥💥. I would just go a bit crazier with the drums that's it

[rigid plover]

mix is good this time

and maches with the grene

[teal meadow]

Ty

I knew what was wrong I was Js doubting myself for a while ig

[lunar kayak]

MELODY SOUNDS RANDOMLY GENERATED AND UNMEMORABLE. THE CLAP IS WAY TOO DAMN LOUD

[teal meadow]

Ts is like the most basic melody

[lunar kayak]

the melody is this:

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[celest gale]

detroit drums?

[teal meadow]

I gotta learn more with drums tbh I was actually js watching videos

I think imma remake drums from some of my favorite songs tho to learn

[teal meadow]

The guitar is deadass just 4 chords and a top line

[celest gale]

ye for me is the best way 2 improve

[lethal hound]

Good work on this

[remote nymph]

Change the VST imo bro. The clap is kinda loud, maybe have it the same level as the opening hi hat?

As far as the vst, you need to find one that can still highlight all the melodies

[teal meadow]

This is ample guitar what do u recommend

Also bro I ALWAYS put the clap loud because my headphones make them seem quiet for some reason

It’s so annoying

[remote nymph]

Honestly id personally try looking through plucks on nexus m

[teal meadow]

I don’t have nexus I usually use omnisphere or ample

Idk I like it personally ngl

[remote nymph]

It just sounds very stock , I wouldn't be shocked if you only had an eq on that bad boy. No reverb or any effects. It needs something if you're gonna stick with that sound, imo

[teal meadow]

i BELIEVE I had eq and reverb like most of the time