Looking for feedback:) (will be adding a sax for a melody)

[simple nymph]

Looking for feedback:) (will be adding a sax for a melody)

[potent gull]

Sounds nice, try shortening and muting some of the guitar chord stabs, for more groove, and add some filler notes ^_^

[unreal oracle]

nice work, i feel like its missing something in the background though.

[simple nymph]

hmm what do you mean by that?