honest feedback

[austere field]

just need honest feedback something that i mightve catched is that drums sound a bit weird i tried to add variation but it didnt work too well

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[austere field]

i might just lower the violin a bit too

[surreal warren]

the strings at the start sound a little bit non-human (i.e. a consistent wave when the note is held for long enough) and that puts me off a little bit. Other than that the rest of the song seems good but maybe try a little bit more mixing on the drums as they sound "dry."

[sour cloud]

Well that's just vibrato and is what most players do for held notes, but I do agree that you could try to find a non-vibrato violin for this

[polar fractal]

since you want honesty... the moment i clicked play my hopes went down 99%

• sound selection sounds like general midi
• i liked the drums for the most part until like 0:56 where it started falling out of its own rhythm ifyk what i mean (you are overcomplicating these)
• the whole vibe is good i think i know what youre going for
• a lot of low end but you lack mid and highs imo (instrument-wise), for this i would transpose something like the piano or a synth up an octave
• the track isnt necessarilly boring for this style

overall not that bad, but we are lacking still

[waxen peak]

the violin at the start is zenology if i had to guest and i'd say add some slight muffle to the violin and some reverb to it aswell

[austere field]

thanks for the honest feedback

[hollow junco]

you can stand to do a little rearranging but for the most part everything sounds good i like the concept