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frosty solstice
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Hello everyone, i have been producing for a few months and made this track. Do not really know how to upgrade it. Does anyone have some ideas or tips for me? Maybe switch up the drum pattern or something. Appreciate it.

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prime moth
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You're doing a simple 2 step hi hat which is fine, but if you changed up the pattern, added some more hi hats in between i think it'd spice it up a bit. It sounded like you were gonna add an open hat and a clap at the end, I'd continue that as it sounds good. You also have no bassline. You can add one seperate or pick an 808 that works with the track.

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I think the melody is pretty good however i can definetly tell when the loop is ending

frosty solstice
dim surge
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In my opinion, you’ve got a solid foundation here. I would, however, make the “melody” a bit louder. The hi-hats are otherwise a bit too dominant in my opinion. But overall, you’ve done a really solid job here.

tribal furnace
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this would go hard with some good lyrics