#does this rnb song sound even semi-professional?

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thin raven
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made this over the course of like 2 days after school, i just wanted some fresh ears on it and i would like the most blunt feedback about anything, whether that be the lyrics, mix, beat (self-prod), my voice, etc. So far i’ve already decided on re-recording a couple questionable vocal takes but please lmk what else you think

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sour lion
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I wish I knew vocal mixing but it sounds pretty good ngl id put the adlibs panned farther back or sum and add delay or something for texture

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Other than that nice voice bro

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The drums are pretty good too

thin raven
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anyone else have any thoughts?

pliant edge
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i dont make rnb but vocal a bit too loud? turn down maybe 1-3 db trust.
also idk if rnb has bass but consider adding them i guess for groove/rhythm or melody

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honestly just reference ur fav rnb tracks and from there adjust your volumes if u want

high marlin
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lowk sound like steve lacy a little ts tuff asl, maybe lower vocals and at some parts it sounds like your mumbling a little but it also sounds intentional