Song Update (FNF)

[boreal goblet]

The song is a work in progress, but I wanted feedback on my tuning and mixing. Also i feel like my transitions are bad so help there would be nice as well. I posted the instrumental just in case.

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[low isle]

i dont know how to put this lightly
this is just kind of a clusterf--- of patterns with no real correlation.
i suggest trying to stick with a progression (verse -> chorus -> verse 2 -> bridge -> chorus, or something like that)
also the vocals are brutally off key from the instrumental, which sounds a little more like you know what you are doing up until like 0:40 then its chaos again
just try to stay consistent really
(i know this might come off as rude but i am trying to help while being honest)

[boreal goblet]

I don’t find it rude, but thanks. I always didn’t know how to continue a idea or make things sound good without adding a lot of instruments

[low isle]

if thats the case, try to restrict the amount of instruments (unless you layer for sound design purposes)
also try to make just about 3 to 4 parts of the song but they have to have some sort of thing in common, would that be chords, rhythm, melody, just similiar enough so it feels like 1 song but different enough for people to tell that we are moving on in the song
i personally struggle with this too (the idea continuation thing), so i understand you

also maybe move on from FNF as that game is just about dead

[boreal goblet]

Fnf isn’t dead and I’ll try to delete unnecessary instrument and make the main melody’s sound better so I can extend them. Does that sound good?

[low isle]

are we negotiating? :D

i suggest just start a new project, that seems to work from me

you can always recycle parts of failed projects since they are YOUR ideas (i hope)

[boreal goblet]

That would suck to start over but it shouldn’t be too bad since I can recycle like you said