remix i made, idk if its missing sometin

[celest coyote]

made this and i feel like its missing or may need changing something but not sure

also mixing advice would be appreciated i suck at mixing

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[jaunty iron]

mn ta duro esooo

[gritty kayak]

i would layer the piano with more high frequency sounds and add simple stuff like delay especially in the intro as it feels a little empty and add a little more reverb on the vocals. otherwise quite nice song

[celest coyote]

thanks alot for feedback, any suggestion on what to layer the piano with? I also added reverb on the vocals after, and made some cleanups regarding voluems and fade ins.

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[gritty kayak]

simple would be some bells but you could just try enything with it

[shrewd terrace]

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[high rose]

yo this got me emotional and shi its beautiful

[proper reef]

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[celest coyote]

I changed out the bass to it works along with the flow of the song more, and is prominent, compressed kicks, added more reverb & delay onto vocal and made the mix a bit brighter and saturated

[celest coyote]

thx alot

[sturdy nymph]

i feel like its missing low end

[high rose]

nah it aint missing nothing

[sinful adder]

One thing I immediately noticed is that the vocals are out of tune.
Try playing with the pitch of it by going a semitone up or down until it sounds right.
Hope this helps!