#help with feedback on my SECOND project. (I forced myself to finish this one the best i could)

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harsh socket
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it starts, a little rough but i think the two drops are okay. I'm also kinda blind to what could be wrong with it after hearing the loop for so long lol.

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broken hornet
# harsh socket it starts, a little rough but i think the two drops are okay. I'm also kinda bli...

Yo the song creates atmosphere really well up to 1:13 and the muffled bass synth is actually so nice but after that it feels way too repetitive imo and the drops do not hit as hard as they can.

The beat itself is too quiet and theres no space for the song to make a head bopping drop, maybe turn down the lead synth a bit so the kick and snare can push through and give the drums more low end in general because it sounds clicky with zero punch.

Also to make it sound less repetitive you could turn down the lead saw wave and make that high flying synth the main focus because when you build up layers of melodies you anticipate a drop and then a change but when it keeps layering it just sounds super repetitive, maybe a quiet arpeggio could help to support the high synth too.