uh i need feedback bandlab mix

[flint dirge]

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[severe canyon]

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[real talon]

the clap and hats are kinda silent, try making the a bit louder, especially the clap

idk what to say about the vocals, i don't know vocal mix
but you could add distortion on the kick for a bit of saturation, it is a bit too weak

but otherwise nice

[subtle anvil]

You could increase the kick drum and 808 a bit (I barely listened to it). The vocals seem good, just increase the overall instrumental volume so it doesn't fall too far behind. Overall, not bad! I liked it. Nice melody!

[jaunty forge]

ay, for vocals, your chain is really nice bruh! Only thing I’d recommend is FEEL the beat. Kinda sounds like u just reading off ur phone. Some people get good at it, but if you memorize the words and mean them, it’s a game changer fr. And ai remove the producer tag bruv

[lunar kite]

sounds pretty cool
i really like it
i wouldn't change much
what is the language

[severe canyon]

russian