first shot at house, need some feedback guys

[snow dew]

https://soundcloud.com/sk1dee/sk1de-house

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[fickle grotto]

it's nice, however i'd put the vocals more on a back layer and bring forward the bass more, maybe enhance the low band a bit, and also pan the synths some more to create some stereo variation, but the melodies are nice. The switch-up at 2.07 is a bit iffy, maybe add a reversed cymbal or some riser effect to fill the space?

[woven ibex]

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[tough scaffold]

the transition from the vocals to the beat wasn't that interesting
add some risers and make a better drop with like drum fills
also I might be wrong but do u have any COMPRESSION on the drums??
also try using tr909 claps and kicks
they might work well

[woven ibex]

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[tough scaffold]

i don't like the clap and kick u used

other than that
this has great potential

[snow dew]

will try switching and add the things yall said

[outer yew]

love your song, try putting more vocals on the back layer

[woven ibex]

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[outer yew]

all things aside fire song

[sly trail]

feels like your master eq lowers mids too much, and its very noticable on the drums, i feel like your kick isnt punchy enough and (usually) you'd want your kick fully mono since u want it "in ur face" unless thats not what ur going for, however really good idea i like it. also try a compressor on the master for slight gluing

[woven ibex]

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[slim gorge]

Really cool for a first, love how the vocals are chopped