need opinion

[next bear]

raw honest opinions and feedback anyone 😭 ✌️

[sage thistle]

music theory please learn my mate atleast basics

[copper saddle]

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[fresh berry]

I would say it's repetitive. I would give it a bit of variation and maybe a melody along the chords.

[copper saddle]

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[next bear]

💔 this was me trying based off of a vid i watched preciate it tho

[next bear]

tried adding a melody but my ears untrained so idk if it’s good or na

[sage thistle]

soon u will be hear where u miss it, but thats good for now

just take care and spend a time for learning basics

[next bear]

ignore the name

[next bear]

ty man

[fresh berry]

After 0:20, the vocals you added starts to sound offkey. Maybe you should try atonals vocals or keep the vocals at the chords range.

[next bear]

oh is see thank you

[tacit stump]

i like the perspective you’re trying to go for, but just by listening, i could tell that this isn’t your true sound. id say produce something you would like to produce and give it your all.

[copper saddle]

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[tacit stump]

it’s also a bit repetitive. would be fine if it was edm but it’s not.

you don’t need extreme music theory but you need to learn the basics and how to layer and structure

[hasty pagoda]

not sure if this is the speed you were trying to go for? could be the sounds or the beat itself that’s throwing it off, perhaps maybe try to mess with it to get it to sync together

[copper saddle]

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[next bear]

i played around a bit and produced some other sounds i think i like

i think bouncy drums/beats suit me more

[hasty pagoda]

I like that nathan beat, instead of fading in/out the instrumental stem try maybe panning in/out idk just an idea I wanted to give you 😊

keep going!

[next bear]

thanks gang imma have a try in the morning

[tacit stump]

also the chords are nice, but add another layer with a different synth and rythym