the chorus feels a bit empty, does anyone know what i can add?

[old whale]

Honestly this is pretty cool! But I think the chorus could be chopped up a little. I think some grossbeat stops would sound fire. Like idk how to describe it, but like stutters if that makes sense? Sick!

[final island]

✅ Feedback approved by staff! (Originally marked by mrrpmrreow)

[fresh scroll]

try that pancake plugin for some widening (sparingly) with the guitar. I also really like the saw that comes in, I'd like it fatter. And yes, some stutter / grossbeat type moments would enhance it. so would some drop/slow things like isotopes vinyl plug has that slowdown mode.

[final island]

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[dry shadow]

i fixed some stuff, i am yet to add the grossbeat but this is where im at so far