Nemzzz type beat?

[wise pagoda]

i've been working on this for a lonnnng time and its my first ever beat lmao, also I said nemzzz cus thats what I had in my head while doing this but maybe could I get some suggestions on what accapella to try on this? ive been trying a couple nemzzz ones but none of them fit

[severe zinc]

I like it

[native smelt]

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[wise pagoda]

bros farming fp

[compact stratus]

i like the stutters on the sample and the change in the drum pattern halfway in there
i think you should have continued that part where you pitch shifted the sample for a lil longer
without the variations you added i think the melody would have gotten repetitive so you arranged it nicely
im not familiar with the dude youre talking about so idrk what you could try but i think the beat is rlly nice

[native smelt]

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[wise pagoda]

okay tysm !
I didn't continued the pitched part too long cuz since its really just the sample I was scared it was gonna be repetitive
and honestly ive been working on it for a long time ago just to make it less repetitive lol
heres some nemzzz songs btw if u wanna take a listen
https://open.spotify.com/intl-fr/track/0a66FPlQojQPT28qLEI952?si=b595975de87f42c0

https://open.spotify.com/intl-fr/track/3BA0m8IJZK2uJ4je3XCIrC?si=bdc2ae2bb7f142fd

https://open.spotify.com/intl-fr/track/0nmW4fvqTwUDjlz13MNpJU?si=7c8f08e79d684cf2

https://open.spotify.com/intl-fr/track/6XH5Uqo3d0cvBv0dv9Jwh8?si=e7bc4323320f4d23

[severe zinc]

na i wanted to check out how it works

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[severe zinc]

still good track honestly

[wise pagoda]

thanks brother

[tired narwhal]

i like the grossbeat at the end of the bar, it does get a tiny bit repetitive but all in all its a great song