how does this sound?

[bronze folio]

It's really good ! Maybe the voice is a little bit overproduced ! Is it a vocal sample or did you sing it ?

[past terrace]

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[jovial wagon]

vocals kinda loud

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[jovial wagon]

the song itself sounds fire tho

[thick fiber]

vocals are dying to have a de-esser in my opinion, really nice song though

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[winter gate]

Too much distortion against a very clean vocal. Kinda needs to be moved closer to each other. In general you’re killing it

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[opal relic]

sample

i will work on the things, i thought maybe the contrast of clean and disortion was nice kinda thats what i wanted to try but yea

[icy idol]

The highs, man, the highs are too sharp at the beginning. Make a high cut and cut everything up to 12 kHz, because it hurts your ears lol. If it sounds too muffled, I would lower it a bit in the 500–600 Hz range. Ultimately, these aren't fixed numbers; you have to see for yourself where it sounds best, but the lead synth is definitely too sharp!

I don't think the vocals are too loud. They're nicely present in the mix. Otherwise, I have nothing to complain about, it sounds good!

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[opal relic]

ok i adjusted the mix a bit now? is this better?

[icy idol]

hey, sry for my delay! Yes, it sounds really good right now! Amazing!

[frosty pumice]

realy like it

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[austere moth]

Big aespa vibes I like it
The vocals sound good but maybe in certain parts there can be some layering/backup vocals?