i made this beat pls feedbackk ✌️😔😔🥶🥶💔

[vale fractal]

HOLY PEAK

[odd spruce]

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[vale fractal]

IT FEELS LIKE I JUST WALKED INTO THE FANCIEST MODERN CAFE SHOP

🥹

[calm ice]

https://tenor.com/view/donny-donnysavage-white-suite-black-man-black-man-with-white-suite-gif-27689652

[regal belfry]

its nice melodically i fw it, the only thing id suggest is to make the snare a bit quieter and make the hi hats less repetitive by adding rolls and different patterns
otherwise its 🔥 tho

[odd spruce]

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[runic gate]

i feel like im in heaven right now

[odd spruce]

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[sweet drift]

Slapped buddy

[odd spruce]

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[harsh rose]

love the break at 0:44

[odd spruce]

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[calm ice]

thank u 😋😋😋🥰😋🥰😋

[somber ruin]

Good work on those horns, what vast or sampler did you use.????

[odd spruce]

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[somber ruin]

I mean VST

[naive obsidian]

this is goated

[odd spruce]

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[calm ice]

sample

[naive obsidian]

no critique brother you had an idea an executed bravo

[calm ice]

https://tenor.com/view/penguins-dancing-low-quality-goofy-3d-gif-1757942397157250458

[somber ruin]

They sit well in the mix,

[gritty swift]

i really love the vibe of everything. all i would say is to make the snare js a tad bit quiter but i love everything else abt this. good job

[odd spruce]

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[void ruin]

The mix feels clean and the energy sits well for a 130 BPM vibe. The low end is controlled, the atmosphere has a nice dark shimmer, and the overall flow feels intentional. It’s concise, consistent, and sonically confident. I like it 👍

[odd spruce]

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[pearl dew]

It's funky but I think it needs a little more bass and more variety with the hi hats

[odd spruce]

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[brittle matrix]

NOTHING SUCKS congrats
Very tasteful and balanced and well paced

[odd spruce]

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[brittle matrix]

I wanted to give you more praise about the arrangement, its well written but at the same time i dont know how all of these instruments were put together or if you wrote any of it yourself (not a roast.) I will say it all ends up fitting the same key and chord progression pretty well so i do think your ears are good

I feel like ive seen u post bangers in here before

[calm ice]

thank u 🥰🥰😋😋😋

[edgy marten]

bro the beat and arrangement is nice, but what about trying to replace the saxophone with a piano tbh, maybe its me but i feel like something different than a sax would be better maybe trumpet

[odd spruce]

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[calm ice]

idk it's a sample i don't have much control over it

[outer lion]

love the melody. Good stuff

[odd spruce]

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[supple harbor]

oh wow those instuments with drums are great

[odd spruce]

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[vague coral]

Elevator In Weddings Be Like: Nah This Sh-- Is Good 🔥👏🏻 It's Perfect So No Feedback

[odd spruce]

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[calm ice]

hmmm

[compact glen]

where is that sample from, its rlly pretty
btw i think the open hat is a lil loud compared to the other sounds so it gets kinda annoying
but this is rlly smooth

[odd spruce]

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[calm ice]

yeah i think I hear it
thanks

[cerulean crow]

I love it, I could easily hear someone cooking on it, the instruments give it a nice classy vibe

[odd spruce]

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[snow charm]

this a fire beat love the sax

[odd spruce]

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[thorny stone]

Ts peak

[odd spruce]

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[high timber]

thats fire i se nemzz on that one

[odd spruce]

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[hushed prairie]

bro this tuff the only thing i can really think of is the drums are a lil loud

[odd spruce]

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[glossy tendon]

heavenly ahh beat

sounds good