My previous songs... Need to know my mistakes that i should not repeat in my new song.

[grand warren]

So yeah please.

[trail cape]

i'll try to give a bit of feedback

i think the biggest improvement could be to add new melodys and switch up the intruments, you could get a synth and start a new melody that feels different from the previous one. i personally would also like to ask why the audio files are so freaking big, but idk i guess i wont lol.

im not too skilled of an artist, and im not also good at giving feedback, but i tried to give it my best shot here, so ye.

[open shell]

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[mellow quail]

dude Im not gonna lie, these two songs are rlly good and the only thing you actually need to hone on are the sound designs (ex: for bass house your bass could have variants, or layers, etc.).

[open shell]

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[mellow quail]

but at this point it's all about ur style and what u wanna make now

[grand warren]

Alright!

[grand warren]

Thanks, it's alright
The file is big because it's .wav format not mp3

[trail cape]

ah. ight. ok.

[red ermine]

I think both are great, personally I like the bass house better. Improvements I would say to do is to have some more variation. I think that the patterns themself and the sounds you chose are great but at times it can get repetitive. It doesn’t necessarily mean you have to create a whole new melody, but you can add some ear candy to spice it up a bit.

Overall I think it’s great, and if these are old songs then I can’t wait to hear new stuff

[open shell]

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[grand warren]

👍

[grand warren]

Thanks, the new song is 10 times better than those, I would release it the day after tomorrow

[boreal sphinx]

its nice but as of 2025 it sounds a bit ai-ish, maybe switch up some things? but its nice so

[open shell]

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