I wanna know what i can imporve on my song

[limpid roost]

I made a battle themed song thta lowkey kidna sounds like undertale, but idk what to improve on it. It just sounds like im msising a couple things. This is my secodn beat so idk alot about music theory and stuff thats why i just wanted to ask yall if you guys can share some knopwledge on what i can add delete or improve on

this is the song btw:

[crisp spruce]

Some advice from someone who didn't always listen to others’ advice:

• Focus on a maximum of three skills at a time
• Practice instead of spending hours on useless YouTube tutorials
• Take a reference song, analyze it, and try to recreate it

Do this and you'll get better faster than most producers.

Skills to focus on:
*- Sound selection

• Gain staging
• EQing
• Arrangement
• Music Theory*
  If you master these skills, your tracks will already sound about 80% correct, which is a massive improvement.

I mean this to help you improve faster, not to criticize.

Have a good one!