bunch of stuff that im making

[smoky tartan]

glup

i think i might change some notes here and there

[rough steeple]

this is awesome, kinda feels like it builds up to no drop tho

[civic oak]

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[smoky tartan]

im thinking of adding a big drop somewhere in the middle

[rough steeple]

since the beat is supposed to be "angry" i would put the drop much sooner, like pretty much after that heavy lead comes in

also i feel like the bass should be a lot heavier, its kinda drowned out by the instruments

[smoky tartan]

aight

[umbral beacon]

Hey Krayon, good night! I really like the direction of the song, I think you're doing a really good job generating that hype. I also like that uplifting dramatic chord progression, very intense haha. I know this is not finished, but I would try to bring more atmosphere to the intro, imo that piano feels a bit too dry, maybe a good reverb and more ear candies would work really well there! Keep the good job buddy :)

[civic oak]

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[opal igloo]

i suggest another piano for the beginning but its sound great the build up and the groove

[civic oak]

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[hot adder]

I reccomend using a chord pad as background air in the first part, it sounds too empty without anything else. But it sounds pretty good and catchy, live instruments in general would make it a lot better. Love the build up though it's very emotionally charged/almost furious

[civic oak]

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[smoky tartan]

the last part is still a wip

[dull zenith]

Turn up the drums/breakbeat a bunch. They should be the centre of attention with this style of music, also they sound left ear dominant in parts of the track? not sure if thats intended or not

[civic oak]

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[smoky tartan]

my stuff

i havent finished the other one cuz im lazy

but i made a lil side project

which is also not finished lol

[uneven thunder]

Ooo that piano at the beginning is ticking all my boxes. And the guitar that comes in? I admit the mixing in it is a bit unique but it’s growing on me. And the buildup feels a bit sudden but other than that I can easily see it as a semi drop. This has the potential to go MAD

[civic oak]

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[smoky tartan]

thx

btw theres a more finished version after that first one

not insanely different tho

[smoky tartan]

this one

[steep stream]

The beginning feels a bit like well just pingeling keys instead of a melody unless that's on purpose they are all a bit too spaced out

[civic oak]

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[bitter skiff]

fire

[civic oak]

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[glass flax]

i suggest to change that bass or make it lower

[civic oak]

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[glass flax]

the high notes sound weird kind of

outside of that it's pretty cool

[smoky tartan]

some more progress on the other song

i was listening to the risk of rain ost and i just really wanted to try and do something like that

[dull bloom]

banger

[civic oak]

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[smoky tartan]

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[frail pier]

Your bass needs some groove I think. Maybe add some sidechain or make it into a rythem so it dances with the drums a bit. It's a nice slow contrast compared to the drums, but it needs a bit of movement I think.

[civic oak]

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[shell obsidian]

Sounds dope but I feel like it starts out a little slow in the beginning

[civic oak]

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[smoky tartan]

bunch of stuff that im making

[native lotus]

you can do that by adding an fx riser as well

[civic oak]

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[smoky tartan]

elite ball knowledge melody at the end lol

as of rn is missing all the orchestral parts but ill add them later js wanted to focus on creating a melody first

and maybe ill change the instruments for some patterns later idk

its pretty barebones as of rn but i think theres potebtial tbh

[smoky tartan]

more chords

i gotta tweak the timing off that piano melody

[near shadow]

Should def have a drop in it and it feels like it never drops

[civic oak]

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[smoky tartan]

after like a month i finished the original one lmao

[smoky tartan]

oh yeah and i also made some more progress on ts yesterday

[analog maple]

i really like this sounds really dark until that lead comes in. Imo that lead doesnt rly fit the dark vibe in the beginning. However i like how u continued it at around 0:45