attempt at making distorted pop

[brittle sedge]

let me know if my mix is hot buns or if I'm just going deaf because I've been hearing the same beat for the past 5 hours

[night hinge]

I can definitely see why you would get ear fatigued with this. I think the mix is very nice actually. The hats are a bit distracting, maybe re-listen later today with fresh ears and decide if they need turned down just a bit. Im not overly familiar with this genre though so take that with a grain of salt, of course.

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[brittle sedge]

yeah i listened to it again and i realized the hihats are a bit distracting and clashing with the crashes. Thanks for the feedback!

[brittle sedge]

attempt at making distorted pop

the beat is finished, I would like some helpful criticism if there's any Needed. Also looking for someone who could possibly put vocals on this🙏

[marsh moss]

My liiiiiiiife goes down the hill

Siiiiiingging evry day for my heart to fill

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[brittle sedge]

so beautiful wow thank yoiu

ill build off that i got you

[tranquil spade]

im not that familiar with that genre but I think it sounds good, also at 0:55 it the volume drop was a bit off imo but I dont know if that icks just me tho
very nice beat though

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[marsh moss]

Gotta feeeeeeeling while searching for my child
gotta feeeeeeling a guy is chasing me behind
gotta feeeeeeeling he was hiding in my ceiliiiing

Im hiiiiding while searching for the hype
My life goes down the hiiiiiiil
every day siiiinging start my heart filling

tooo the leeevel then it was bafore
gaining back the energy from my past. that istn goin fast
running towards friends and family
going with them each year on tripp bringing with our ski
Havin some fun with my brothers bride, cheerfull childrens love when they hide
Starting each year over - turned into a tradition
spending the summer with my guys in the sea fishing.

Playin catch and tag was a better idea then gettin the plague
Gettin ill is like loosing the drill
Dyin away, running away lets falling you apart
like a the valueable urn falling down turning into shard

falling down gettin up, tryin to reach our family heart
lokking here, looking there, taking care of nearby lovers even if they fart

@brittle sedge

[brittle sedge]

thanks for the input i felt like it was a bit weird too