Chillwave

[astral merlin]

I'm not sure how good it is, I've gotten feedback on it and people told me its too short, so I made it longer, it was 2 minutes. I'm still new at music production tho so any feedback is good feedback. I honestly feel like the second half is rushed but maybe I am just overthinking it.

[merry basalt]

i would say the idea is nice but the structure of the song is pretty repetitive

you could make something more interesting by adding more or changing parts of sections in the song

like adding other chord progressions in certain parts, changes in percussion, new elements progressively, etc

it is a nice track but it feels very much like a blueprint for something bigger you could make with this!

[astral merlin]

Hm, I'll definitely take a look at maybe trying out new chord progressions or percussions, but I wouldn't really want to add more elements to it, as it would I feel like ruin it, my idea was to use the vocals to fill the "missing frequencies" and I felt like just adding more and more effects, or sounds etc would be too much, but now that you mention it yes it is repetitive thank you!

[merry basalt]

you're welcome!