#please give me feedback

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versed arch
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please give me feedback

white rock
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I think the melody is a little overpowering, its hard to hear thd rest of the song over it

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white rock
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You could also automate the background stuff to get louder

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young wigeon
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keep instruments that are background instruments

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IN the background

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as in;

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lower their volume

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make them a little distant, ergo distant enough

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and ditto on the lead

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and for the lead

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you use a lot of the same notes

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s in

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the same length of notes

versed arch
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i see

young wigeon
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if you switch up the size and rhythm a tad bit more it would be a lot more easy on ears

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and also put pauses between melodies when apropriate

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it gives time to consume

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it can go from like

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short pasuses to long ones

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young wigeon
versed arch
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at least in terms of mixing

young wigeon
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yes

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young wigeon
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no not really

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however the melody still needs work

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however

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(again)

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the drums

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just

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ok

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hold on

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so have you tried layering breaks

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young wigeon
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you take two breaks,
make sure they have corresponding rhythms, or at least rhythms that tie in with each other

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pan them on 2 sides of the left and right, within moderation

versed arch
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could you perhaps show me in vc?

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never really done breakcore before

young wigeon
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no
8:40
bedtimes coming up

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and no it’s not breakcore

versed arch
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ah

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young wigeon
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it’s really easy

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aw man

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anyway

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amen break ≠ breakcore

versed arch
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what is breakcore then?

young wigeon
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breakcore is a mess of a genre and doesn’t exist

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anyway the most im asking you to do is jungle

versed arch
young wigeon