I feel like its missing something but honestly idk what please help me smarter kinder people

[gaunt pelican]

help

[thorny aspen]

what a weird kick, seem a little weak. and the whole song have low bass. the resst seem good to me.

[gaunt pelican]

So a harder kick and a subbass

[thorny aspen]

yeah. the kick is in the right derection, but u could probably layer it with another one. and yeah it need a subbass

[gaunt pelican]

got it boss

[thorny aspen]

lets go champ

[thorny aspen]

i was listening to that

[gaunt pelican]

i didnt like that one

[thorny aspen]

thats is much better, the sub bass give more character and fullness. much better. But the piano make a strange bounce in the 46 second of the track

with the micro note

[gaunt pelican]

ill make the micro notes at a lower velocity so that it doesnt jump as much

[thorny aspen]

nice, and maybe the piano in mono is better, make all more full

[gaunt pelican]

i just tried it it makes the piano sound very dull actually its weird

wait nvm
Ill just do the opposite of that

[gaunt pelican]

im asking chatgpt what to do

[thorny aspen]

it's probably something u should just resolve with automation

for seem it more real

[gaunt pelican]

ChatGPT is telling me to add a counter melody and polyrhythms to my drums

[gaunt pelican]

Listen to the piano in the newest vs the last track i think it is a slight improvement

[thorny aspen]

the counter melody u already do it at the minute 2:05 (with the guitar). it's just very short in the track, and it probably should be earlyer.

[thorny aspen]

it's much better, all sound more full in mono, and the adjustment in the micro keys make all better

[gaunt pelican]

I made it mono it messed with the reverb a lot

and the general quality of the piano
its probably what piano im using

[thorny aspen]

if u want to make it sound better a bad digital piano, try using some automation, for making it more real. and keep moving the audio of every key

[gaunt pelican]

idk how to do that

[thorny aspen]

https://youtu.be/5MJ9tFDHiJw?si=GIZM6E49KGborQRT

this is with a violin, but it's the same

[gaunt pelican]

i may just use an event for ts gang

[thorny aspen]

idk, never use them

[gaunt pelican]

actually

nvm im NOT gonna do that it is too difficult for me
ill do it on the strings

Its difficult to do on a melody

[quaint dawn]

what is this bro

[gaunt pelican]

this is not helpful at all

[quaint dawn]

well what is that audio file tryna do for him?

u just posting ur music or what?

[gaunt pelican]

im (trying) to make the strings "realistic" with the youtube video he posted earlier

[quaint dawn]

mm alr

holy moly mb bro i thought this was someone elses post

😭

im slow my fault

but something i would look into is instead of trying to fix the sounds you have, maybe try getting entirely new sounds

theres tons of free plugins you can get out there that sound amazing

(vaults beta by crow hill company)

but if you wanna stay stock, try getting some drumkits (search r/drumkits on google) and the stock electric piano and rhodes sound real nice