feedback on a juice wrld type beat

[silver jacinth]

Id like to know if it fits to juice wrld + maybe some mixing and mastering feedback, if theres other stuff please point it out too as im rather a beginner :) I have no prior guitar / piano experience other than a few weeks of using fl's piano roll, also idk if theres something wrong with the 808 or not

[vestal leaf]

In my opinion, it's pretty good! The only 2 things I can suggest that might make it sound better would be to make the intro guitar and the one that starts at 1 minute the same as the one that starts at 20 seconds. Idk if my ears are playing tricks on me or something, but they sound different. The other thing is the timing of the kick at 1:10. It might just be me but it seems a little off. Other than that, it sounds awesome for a beginner!

[green orbit]

imo the progression is too fast

chord progression

[silver jacinth]

thanks for the feedback! <3 yeah I can do that I wasnt sure if that start guitar sounds good so I pitched it up with graillon and increased the high pass from 150Hz to 250Hz but if you say it sounds good then I can remove those two things

[silver jacinth]

im assuming you mean the guitar's progression and thank you for pointing it out I just realised ure right about it being a lil bit fast

[green orbit]

both the guitar and piano imo

now that im listening to it again though it sounds pretty good

[silver jacinth]

thank you :) would you still recommend slowing it down a bit?