Been dawdling around in fl and writing rhymes for over a year now but never a full lyrics song, this is my most complete vision so far, and its less than 50 seconds, but i need to know the vision has legs, as i listen more i grow less confident in the product as most do. Im looking for fine tuning, the drums the volume mixxing, and the vocal mixxing . I want to know what it would take to perfect it, or if im even up to snuff
#Fine tune or bust - real rap
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i oughta turn the vocals down little
pretty good flow
the beat isnt good though imo
like your flow saves this
its not that the beat is bad, it just needs tweaking
both

mainly the loop
drums are mostly fine
ive never been a fan of the drum off-beat drums but thats just preference
half the people you show will like it the other half wont
tbh the cymbols
are all right
yeah
alright
it just sounds like you picked a bunch of sounds you thought sounded cool
the loop kinda sounds off beat to me
get a 2nd opinion though
What's it called when a bass gets all flappy and wonky
whats ❌ up is that its true 😂
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no chance they filter swear words now
oh my ❌ god
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wow
No literally it’s so easy
Turn stretch on for the audio
And just like
Stretch it
sorry for not responding, its good